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Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.Update - 107
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Kahani Ab Tak -
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Kuchh hi der me mujhe mera sar mil gaya,
jo maine vapas apne kate hue dhad par laga liya.
Ab mujhe bilkul bhi thakaan mehsus nahin ho rahi thi.
Balki apne anadar nayi shaktiyon ka sanchar hota hua mehsoos ho raha tha.
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Ab Aage -
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Or dhire - dhire meri body me badlav aane lage ....
Charon taraf havaen tez - tez chalne lagin
or samuche parilok ki zameen or tite hue mahal se roshni nikaln kar
mere andar jaane lagi.
Mere pankh nikalne lage ...
Or aakhon ka colour badal kar neela ho gaya jo bahut tez chamak rahi thin....
Or mere hathon se thunder power nikal rahi thi.
Jab wo prakash dhire - dhire kam hua to main kuchh aisa lag raha tha.
Jo bhi vahan par moujood the vo sab mujhe muh khol kar dekhne lage .....
Kyonki aisa pehli baar hua tha ki kisi ne samuche parilok ki
Shaktiyan apne andar sammahit kar lin thin.
Varna itni zyada urja se shareer ke chhitde ud jayen...
Ye shayad un shaktiyon ka kamaal tha jo sagar ko
bhagwan se uphar me mili thin.
Keela ne ek baar phir Senapati ko ishara kiya
Or uske ishara karte hi K senapati tezi se talvar lekar meri or doudne laga....
Jab wo mujh se 100 meter ki duri par reh gaya to mujhe pata chal gaya ki ye mere dayre me aa chuka hai.
Maine ek hath hava me upar uthaya ....
Mere aisa karte hi Aasman me bijliya kadakne lagin
or mere hath ke zariye mere shareer me jane lagin.
Bahut sari matra me thunder power ko ikattha karke
Maine paas aa chuke K Senapati par puri takat se
sabhi jama ki hui bijli ka upyog
Ek sath kar diya.....
Mere hathon se kadakti hui bijliyan bhayanak roop me uske upar girne lagin.
Or tabh tak karta raha jab tak uska shareer koyla na ban gaya...
Phir maine usme ek laat mari or uske shareer ke chhote chhote tukde pure vatavan me raakh bankar ud gaye....
Keela ne aage aane me koi jaldbazi nahin ki vo keval muskura diya.
Main uske expression dekhkar thoda confuse ho gaya.
Kyonki wo ab akela bacha tha. ..
wo apni sabhi sena or senapti ko kho chuka tha...
Phir bhi wo ek dam sehej dikh raha tha... Kaise? Maine apne man me socha.
Keela - Ham gulamo ko isi liye palte hain taki vo hamare
liye jaan de den ..... Or dushman ki shaktiyon ki sahi pehchan apne malikon ko de den....
Mujhe mere senapati ko khone ka afsos nahin hai...
Balki khushi hai ki usne mujhe tumhari shaktiyon se
parichit kar diya hai.
Or main tumhen markar unhen hasil karunga.
Hahahahhahahaa
Ye bolkar us shaitaan ke bete ne haste hue
ek angdai li Or ghode se utar gaya ....
Wo kuchh mantar budbudane laga ...
Or dekhte hi dekhte uske samuche shareer se
aag nikalne lagi. Or uske dono hathon me aag ke
gole the jis ke andar se bade bade shole nikal rahe the.
Wo kuchh mahakal ki tarhan lag raha tha
Keela (zor zor se haste hue) - jaanta hai ye "Hell Fire" hai.
Iske aage teri thunder power bekaar hai ....
Agar yakin na ho to azma le ....
Uski baat sunkar maine apne dono hath upar kiye,
Or jitne thunder power main aasman se kheech sakta tha maine apne andar kheech li... Or ek hi jhatke se puri takar ke sath thunder power ka war keela par kiya.
Itni thunder power ek dath use karne se vahan par toofan sa aa gaya tha... Maine turant Anju par ek suraksha kavach bana diya
taki uske upar is tufan ya power ka kuchh asar na ho sake ....
Mere itni takat ke war se Keela sirf kuchh hi kadam pichhe ko khiska tha... Wo abhi bhi hase ja raha tha ...
Uspar ek kharoch bhi nahin aayi thi....
Wo haste hue ruk gaya or bola - ab meri baari ....
Usne apne dono hath meri taraf aage kar diye ....
Or usme se aag ka ek sailaab sa meri taraf aane laga..
Main turant ek lambi chhalang lekar side me kood gaya..
Mere itna tezi ke baad bhi wo aag mere shareer ke kuchh hisso ko jhulsa gayi... Jisse mujhe bahut peeda hui...
Tabhi guruji ki awaaz mere man me gunjhi..
Guruji (TP) - beta iski nabhi me hi iski samuchi shakti ka srot hai.. yadi tum uski nabhi par war karte ho to wo
Shaktiheen ho jayega .. or phir tum use asani se maar sakte ho....
Udhar keela mujhpar ek ke baad ek lagataar aag se hamle kiye ja raha tha...
Or main apna bachav karte hue guruji se bhi baaten bhi kar raha tha.
Main (TP) - parantu, guruji iski takat mujhse kahin
zyada hai, main ise rok nahin pa raha hun....
Guruji - (haste hue) hahahaha beta tumhare paas power isse kahin zyada hai bas tumhen sahi samay par uska upyog karna aana chahiye ...
Ab apni adhyatmik (man ki shakti) shaktiyon ko ikattha karo
Or usse ek lambi talvar ka nirman karo..
Maine turant aakhen band karke dhiyan lagate hue samuchi adhyatmik shaktiyon ko ikattha kiya or agke hi pal
Mere hath me ek kaantedar talwar aa gayi...
Jo lagbab 4 meter lambi thi.
Guruji - ab iske andar parilok ki shaktiyan inject karo...
Maine guruji ki baaton ko turant palan kiya...
Or us talwar se ab bijliyan kadkadate hue bahar nikal rahi thin...
Guruji - ab apni jinnlok ki shaktiyon ko bhi apne anadar jagrit karo or puri takat se iski nabhi ko nishana banate hue
War karo.
Maine mere upar aate hue aag ke golon ko apni talvar se katte hue phir se kuchh palo ke liye apni aakhen band kar lin.
Oe jinnlok ki shaktiyan bhi jagrit kar lin...
Phir se mere shareer ka akaar (shape) badalne laga..
Meri aakhon ka colour red ho gaya .... Or sar par do seeng ug aaye. ... . Meri body ka colour badalkar neele rang ka ho gaya...
Or meri takvar thodi choudi bhi ho gayi....
Ab usme se thunder power ke sath sath aag bhi nikal rahi thi....
Mujhe dekhkar keela ek pal ke liye ruka par phir se mere upar hamla shuru kar diya .....
Main tezi se uski or bhagne laga usne or zyada force ke sath mere upar aag chhodni shuru kar di ...
Mera samucha shareer jhulasne laga...
Mujhese dard sehen nahin ho raha tha ..
Maine apni talvar uske aage kar di...
Jisse uski aag ke beech se ek rasta sa banta hua chala ja raha tha...
Maiene talvar ko dono hathon me puri takat se thaam rakha tha ...
Or bina koi pal gavae maine apni talvar uski nabhi me utaar di .... Jisse uski zordaar cheekh nikli..
Jo itni bhayava thi ji mere kano se bhi khoon ki kuchh bunden nikal kar niche girne lagin....
To kya hoga ab aage - kya is war se Keela ki mout ho jayegi
Ya wo phir se ladne ke liye tayyar ho jayega ..
Akhir kya hua tha anjalika ke sath ... Jo vo sirf akeli hi reh gayi hai... Kahan gaya uska pariwar.
Kya sagar sab kuchh theek jar payega ...
Kya wo keela ko jaan se maar oane me kamyab ho payega
Jaane ke liye intzar kijiye agle update ka.
To Be Continue ........
Bahut khoob superb.
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Good start
Update -- 2
EX --
Isi tarhan mazak masti ke sath bteakfast khatam hota hai...
Phir rocky apne room me jakar kapde change karta hai college jane ke liye.
NEXT --
Black Shirt , Black Pant , Or sath me Black Blazer or hath me Black watch pairo me Black Shoes.
Bole to ek dum "ALL BLACK"
Kapde change karke neeche aata hai aaj Rocky kuchh zyada hi smart lag raha tha...
ek to 18 ka dola or 6 pack abs or oopar se fitting ke kapde.
Mansi (Seeti bajate hue)- Aaj to ladkiyan gayin kaam se.
Jisse apna hero blush karne laga.
Mom ander se kajal ki dibbi lati hain or rockey ke kan ke peeche ek teeka lagati hain
Mom - Nazar na lage mere bete ko
Dad - Beta aaj college ja to raha hai sath me bahu mat le aana
Sabhi hasne lagte hain or rocky blush karne lagta hai...
Ye baat sunkar mansi thodi mayus si ho gayi thi par usne zahir nahin hone diya
Ab ye kyon hua ye to vo hi jane..
Or rockey or mansi sabko bye karke chal dete hain apne school/ college
Or papa apne Office apni car se
Manu apni scooty se or Rocky apni Bullet se
Abhi Rocky thodi door hi pohocha tha ki
Uske phone ki ghanti bajti hai...
Rocky bike side me laga kar
Phone pick kiya
Hans - Hello bhai kahan par hai
Rocky- Bhai college ke liye nikal gaya hun raste me hun
Hans - Theek hai .. college ki parking me mil ham dono bhi aa rahe hain.
Rocky - Ok ... phone rakh kar chal deta hai college ki taraf
Charecter intro - Hans
(हंस)
Age - 19
rocky ke sath hi 10th & 12th kiya tha
Or ab bhi sath me hi padhta hai
good looking or mastmola banda hai ... apne dost par jaan bhi dene ko tayyar rehta hai
( Hans or Raju ka ghar paas me hi hai isliye dono shuru se college sath hi jaate hain... or Rocky ka ghar inse 2-3 km door hai...)
Rocky college ki parking me apni Bullet park karta hai or double stand laga kar uske oopar baithkar apne dono doston (Hans & Raju) ka intzaar karne lagta hai...
Kuchh hi der me dono dost bhi parking me pohochte hain..
Raju & Hans - Hii Rocky
(Rocky dono se gale milke) - Hii
Rocky- kaise hain dono kameene
Dono - Mastt hain bhai tu suna
Rocky - Mastt.. .. chalo chalte hain college ke andar...
(Or teeno chal dete hain college ke andar)
Charecter intro-
Raju
(राजू)
(Rocky ka bachpan ka dost or best friend hai
Or nursery se college tak sath hi hain
Rocky or raju ke papa dost hain isliye Dono ki family bhi aapas me milti rehti hain har wedding party me... ya kisi bhi sukh dukh me
Teeno be college Gate se hero ki tarhan entry maari..)
Sabhi inki taraf dekhne lage ladkiyan to sirf Rocky ko dekhe ja rahi thin...
Or apna boyfriend banane ke khuwab dekh rahi thin..
Ladki 1 - Abe Kon hai ye handsome.
Ladki 2 - pata nahin yarr Fresher lagta hai... agar ye haan bol de to main iski GF ban jaaun...
Ladki 3 - Kya pata iski pehle se Girlfriend ho.. dekha nahin kitna hot hai
Ladki 1 - Pata karna padega...
Ye Teeno dost seedha pohochte hain Registrar office or vahan se apne I'D collect karte hain...
(I'D - colege card hota hai jisme name mention hota hai with photo & address or Library ka username bhi hota hai jisse koi bhi student Library se book issue karva sakta hai).
Raju - chal bhai class chalte hain
Hans- nahin yarr pehle apni favourite jagah chalte hain CANTEEN
Rocky (haste hue) chalo salo pehle canteen hi chalte hain...waise bhi abhi class shuru hone me 25 minute hain.
Or teeno chal dete hain canteen...
{Jahan ek musibat inka intzaar kar rahi thi}
Jaise hi canteen me ghuste hain vahan kuchh seniors freshers ki ragging le rahe the.
Un seniors me 2 ladkiyan or 3 ladke the.
Jo ek khoobsurat si ladki ki ragging le rahe the or ek ladke ko tablet par murga banaya hua tha...
Or ek senior us ladki se badtameezi kar raha tha..
(Senior ladke ko SL or senior girl ko SG likhunga)
SL 1- E ladki chal mujhe kiss kar
Wo ladki (rote hue) - plzz mujhe jane do.
SL 3- are aise kaise jane den.
SG 1 (Haste hue) - ye ladki mujhe lasbi lagti hai isi liye ladke ko kiss karne se mana kar rahi hai...
{Is baat par pacho seniors hasne lagte hain}
Tabhi SL2 ki nazar teeno doston par padi jo kuchh hi duri par khade hue gusse me ye tamasha dekh rahe the.
SL2 ne Apne sathiyo ko hamari taraf ishara kiya.
Tabhi sab hamari or dekhne lage
Unme se ek bola FRESHER.
Raju - yes.
SG2 - to teeno idhar aao or apna naam batao
(Dono Senior girls Rocky ko dekhkar kaafi impressed thin)
Teeno aage badhe or un ke paas jakar khade ho gaye or apna intro. diya.
SG2- (SG1 ke kaan me) is ki aakhen dekh blue eyes vala gana to is par hi shoot karta hai.
SG1- (Sg2 ke kaan me)- Abe aakhen chhod body dekh ...
SL2 (zor se) ye tum dono kya khusar-phusar kar rahi ho... inki ragging lo...
SG1 (Hosh me aate hue)- hmmm (Rocky se) apni shirt utaro.
Teeno dost ek doosre ki shakal dekhne lage.
SL2 - suna nahin kya kaha... apni shirt utaro...
Rocky ne pehle apna blazer utara fir apni shirt utaar di...
Wahan baitha har shaks rocky ko aise dekhne laga jaise koi ajooba dekh liya ho...
18 ka dola, chaudi chhati, six pack abbs with masoom sa chehra..
(Jis ladki ki ragging li ja rahi thi uske aasu ruk gaye or vo kabhi Rocky ki body kabhi uske masoom chehre ko dekhne lagi).
Or dono senier ladko ki gaand hi phat ke chaar ho gayi...
SL1 (Apne aap ko sambhalte hue) O.k o.k ab tum ja sakte ho or apne doston ko bhi le jaao.
Rocky (Apne kapde pehente hue) - Aise kaise chale jaaen.. jin frashers ki tum log ragging le rahe ho usko bhi chhod do ... ragging is a crime in India.
To... Be... Continued
