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Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)
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Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.Update - 105
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Kahani Ab Tak -
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Shaitan ke bete Keela ke kehne par uski sena ne
Rajkumari Anjalika or Parilok ke senapati ko
bandi bana liya or apne sath le jane lage ...
Keela - Aaj pitaji mujhpar prasann honge.... (Tez awaaz me apne senapati se) parilok par shaitanon ka jhanda lehra do...
Ab ye rajye or lok hamara hai....
Or agli baari hai Jinnlok ki
Hahahahahahahahhaha
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Ab Aage -
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Uski awaaz or hasi jaise sare asman me goonj rahi thi,
Or wo avaaz maine bhi suni, main sunte hi awaaz ki disha me udne laga,
or unke paas jakar ek jagah chhipkar sab samajhne ki koshish karne laga....
Ki aakhir yahan chal kya raha hai,
jaise hi meri nazar bandi bani anjalika par padi
mere sab kuchh samajh aa gaya....
Maine Man me TP me guruji se sampark sadha ....
Main (TP)- Guruji yahan par lakhon ki tadaad me
sena hai or sath me shaitan ka beta keela bhi hai....
Main in sabko kis tarhan se hara sakta hun...
Guruji (TP)- Putra tumhare paas prakriti ki shakti hai
or parilok or jinnlok ki shaktiyan bhi hain....
In tino shaktiyon ki mila kar ek talvar ka nirman karo...
Usse tum sabhi ko asani se maar paoge....
Main - par gurudev ye sankhya me bahut zyada hain....
Guruji - ye chahe kitne bhi hon, par tumhari talvar se
chhute hi bhasm ho jayenge ...
Maine guruji ki aagyanusar tino shaktiyon ke dwara
ek sword ka nirman kiya
vo mere hathon me aane ke baad itni zyada
chamak rahi thi ki aam insan khuli aakhon se use
dekh bhi nahin pata....
Keela or uski sena abhi jane hi lage the
ki main talwar hath me lekar uski sena ke aage
khada ho gaya....
Main - (Chillate hue)- keela tera akhri wakht aa gaya hai...
Apne kuldevta ko akhri baar yaad kar le....
Keela (haste hue) - Hahahahhaa abe ye dekho...
Sale jinn or pariyan mera kuchh nahin bigaad paye
or ye piddi sa insan aakar keh raha hai ki vo mujhe
maar dega Hahahhahaaha
Keela ka senapati mujhe kab se ghoor raha tha -
wo apna ghoda chalate hue keela ke paas aaya or
usse dheere se bola -
Maharaj ye koi mamuli insan nahin hai ye vahi hai
jo apke pitaji ka sabse bada dushman hai...
Ye sunkar keela or zyada khush ho gaya....
Keela - Ye hui na baat ....
Aaj iska sar pitaji ko tohfe me dunga ...
Jiske badle me main pure brammnd ka raja ban jaunga ....
Hahahahaha
shikar khud chalte hue shikari ke paas aaya hai....
Main - abe thodi der me pata chal jayega ki kon shikari hai
Or kon bhikari.......
Keela - tere liye meri sena ke kuchh javaan hi kaafi hain...
(Keela - zor se ) mout ke sodagaron ki tukdi aage aaye,
Usme se ek tukdi jinke haathon me lambe lambe bhale the
or uske upar kuchh shaktiyan pravahit ho rahi thi...
Vo kareeb 10,000 ki tukdi aage aa gayi....
Udhar jaise hi Anju ne mujhe dekha uski aankhon se
aansu nikalne lage ...
Anjalika - (hafte hue)- Sagar ye bohot takatwar hai...
Tum yahan se lout jao....
Tumhen meri kasam apni jaan bachao..
meri chinta mat karo...
Main - Anju, aaj mujhe koi kasam ya vasta nahin rok sakta ....
Vaise bhi main apne mom - dad ki mout ka badla
lene aaya hun....
Tum beech me na pado to hi behtar hai...
Tumse main baad me baat karunga...
Keela - abe salo khade - khade inki ashiqi dekh rahe ho...
Hamla.....Karo.....
Uske itna bolte hi vo sabhi ek sath ajeeb si awaaz nikalte hue meri taraf badhne lage....
Hohohohihohohoho
Maine ek baar apni swoed hawa me lehrai or unki taraf tezi se bhagne laga....
Or kisi machine ki tarhan unhen katne laga...
Jiske shareer ko meri talvar chhu leti wo vahin bhasm ho jata ....
Or main unhen maarta hua aage badne laga...
Tabhi ek sipahi ke bhale ki nok mere kandhe se chu gayi... Or mujhe itna tez current laga ki main door jakar gira...
Keela apne ghode par baithkar muskurate hue show enjoy kar raha tha ..
Keela (apne senapati se)- senapati iska maas bahut swadisht hoga, bhoon ke kheyenge... khoon tu pi lena
Iske marte hi iski shaktiyan bhi mujhe mil jayengi....
Phir ham devtaon ko hara kar unse amrit chen lenge ...
Keela sharaab ka piba khali karte hue bola...
Senapati ki aakhen bhi chamak rahi thin...
Main phir utha or unhen maarne laga. ....
Ye ladai isi tarhan chalti rahi or mujhe kai baar shock lage ....
Par maine aaj soch liya tha ki aaj shaitaan ko aisi chot dunga jiska zakham bhar hi na paye...
Or vo uske bete ki mout hi hoga...
Man hi man yahi sochta hua main uski sena ko
kaat raha tha ..
Jab wo puri tukdi saaf ho gayi tabh keela ke ishare par
ghudsavaar sipahi lambi talvaron ke sath aage aaye .... Unki takvaaren kaale rang ki thin....
Or chamak rahi thin...
Phir se ek baar yudh shuru hua unko ghodon par baithne ka fayda mil raha tha. ...
Or vo apni lambi talvaaron se mujhe aasani se zakhmi kar rahe the...
Mere zakham vaise to bhar jate the par khun gir raha tha ...
Maine apni talvaar ek baar hawa me lehrai or guruji ka bataya hua mantra padhne laga...
Jisse meri talvar 12 feet lambi ho gayi or uska vazan bhi takriban 150 kg ka ho gaya...
Or usme se nikalne vala tej itna zyada tha ki un ghudsavaron ki aakhen bhi chondhiyane lagin....
Vo kareeb kareeb 50,000 sainik the. ...
Ab main unpar bhari padne laga...
Keela meri har ek activity ko dhiyan se dekh raha tha...
Jab maine uske 20,000 sainik maar dale to keela apne Senapati se bola ... -
Ye jo iske hath me talvar hai ye kis tarhan ki hai ?
K Senapati - Maharaj, iske paas kai divye shaktiyan hain,
or sath me jinnlok or parilok ki shaktiyan bhi hain...
Lagta hai isne unhi sab ko mila kar is divye talvar ka
nirman kiya hai.
Keela (haste hue) - khelne do bavhche ko ....
Iski mout to mere hi hathon likhi hui hai...
Or vo vapas se sharab ka ek or piba muh se laga kar
show enjoy karne laga...
Idhar main uske lagbhag sare ghudsavar sena ko
khatam kar chuka tha ...
Or mujhe ab thodi thkaan bhi mehsoos hone lagi thi...
Kyonki mujhe ladte hue puri ek raat or adha din
nikal chuka tha....
To.... Be..... Continue...
Bahut khoob superb.
Bahut hi behtareen action scene darshaya h aapne.
Bahut achhe yaara.
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.Update - 106To Be Continue .....
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Kahani Ab Tak -
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Idhar main uske lagbhag sare ghudsavar sena ko
khatam kar chuka tha ...
Or mujhe ab thodi thkaan bhi mehsoos hone lagi thi...
Kyonki mujhe ladte hue puri ek raat or adha din
nikal chuka tha....
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Ab Aage -
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Ghudsavaron ke marte hi usne phir se apni sena ko
ishara kiya is baar teer kamaan sadhe hue sena ki tukdi
aage aayi... Yani ki archers
Unke dhanush kuchh ajeeeb se chamak rahe the ..
or teeron me se kaale rang ki roshni nikal rahi thi....
Jisse mujhe bahut zyada
nakaratmak prabhav (Nagetive energy)
mehsus ho raha tha....
Isse pehle ki main kuch soch pata unhone ek sath
teer sadhe or meri taraf chala diye ....
Or sabhi teer ek ke baad ke mere shareer ko chhalni karne lage ....
Vahan par khun ki nadi si beh gayi....
Main kuchh soch nahin pa raha tha ki iska javab kaise dun...
Tabhi guruji ki avaaz mere kano me gunji ...
Putra jaise tumne is talvar ka nirman kiya tha vaise hi
dhanush or teeron ka nirman karo...
Or is talvar ko mantar padhkar apni dhaal bana lo...
Maine turant vaisa hi kiya....
Jaise hi maine mantar padha talvaar ek bhari se metal me badal gayi ...
Jo mere hi size ka tha....
Or usne mujhe charon taraf se cover kar liya...
Wo ek shakti punj ki bhati lag raha tha ..
or iski chamak aprampaar thi....
K Senapati - Wah! Adhbut...
Keela ne uski or ghurte hue dekha ...
Wo ekdam se sar jhuka kar chup ho gaya....
Idhar -
Anjalika bhi aakhen paade hue mujhe hi dekh rahi thi...
Ek tez light ke bich hath me dhanush or kamar par tanga tarkash lekar main kisi devta ki bhati lag raha tha ..
Mere chehre par bas gussa tha ...
Jo mere tej ko or zyada badha raha tha ...
Meri tarksh me keval 3 teer the.
Apki baaar jo shaitani sena ne teer chhode
wo mere ek bhi nahin laga...
Main muskura diya ....
Maine apne tarkash se teer nikala
or mantra jaap karte hue unki disha me chala diya...
Us teer se ek tez safed roshni nikal rahi thi....
Or jaise - jaise vo aage badhta ja raha tha
usme se hazaron ki tadaad me teer nikal kar
bahar aa rahe the ...
Matlab maine ek teer chhoda tha...
Par uski sena ke paas pahuchte - pahuchte
wo hazaron ho chuke the....
Or jis jisko vo lagte gaye vo dhua ban kar
udta chala gaya..
Maine aise hi ek ke baad ke 2 teer or chhode or uske sabhi archers mare gaye.... Mujhe sirf 3 hi teer mile the...
Jo kharch ho chuke the ...
Ab mujhe bohot kamzori feel ho rahi thi....
Ek to meri itni power loss hui thi...
Or upar se khun bhi baha tha ...
Par main himmat harne ko tayyar na tha ..
kyonki main jaanta tha ..
ki agar aaj ye bach gaya to
agli baar ye mujhe nahin chhodega ......
Shaitan se or zyada shaktiyan prapt karke
ye vapas aayega ...
Isse behtar hai ki iska kaam aaj hi
tamaam kar diya jaye...
Kair udhar jab keela ne dekha ki maine uske
archers ko bhi maar dala hai...
To usne apni akhiri tukdi jo talvarbazon ki thi...
Unko ishare se mujhpar hamla karne aage bheja...
Dekhne me vo sale koi mil gaya ke jadu jaise the ..
par higth me kareeb 12 foot lambe the ....
Unke ek hath me dhaal or dusre hath me
talvaren thin....
Unke dhaal se kisi laal rang ki roshni si nikal rahi thi...
Jabki talvaren kale rang me chamak rahi thin...
Or uski takvaron se kale rang ka dhua sa nikal raha tha ..
Salon ke jute bhi kisi matel se bane hue the ...
Chalne par dham ki aisi avaaz aa rahi thi ki jaise koi
lohe ke drum peet raha ho....
Vo bhagte hue meri taraf hi aa rahe the ...
Tabhi guruji ki avaaz mere man me gunji....
Putra apni talvar vapas hathon me lekar
agni mantara ka jaap karo....
Or inse mukabla karo....
Maine guruji ke kahe anusar vaisa hi kiya or
dekhte hi dekhte meri talvar vapas
mere hath me aa gayi...
Or mere mantra jaap karte hi usme se aag nikalne lagi....
Main takvaar lehrate hue unpar toot pada ....
Par vo bhi pura mukabla kar rahe the ...
Ab vo insan to the nahin ki jo sirf chhati par hi vaar karen...
Sale peeth pichhe bhi war kar rahe the ..
jo mujhe bahut zyada zakham de raha tha....
Unhone zakhmi karke mujhe niche gira diya...
Or apni takvaron ki nok se mere sine ko chhalni karne lage.
Maine apne shareer ki sari shakti ikattha ki
or ek jhatke ke sath phir se khada ho gaya.....
Maine ek mantra budbudaya or
mere left hand me ek farsa aa gaya...
Jisse green colour ki roshni nikal rahi thi...
Jo is baaat ka prateek tha ki vo sabze zyada
zehrila shastra hai...
Main apne dono hath ghumate hue
unse mukabla karne laga...
Mujhe mukabla karte hue 2 raaten or 1 din
beet chuka tha...
Meri haddiyan me bahut pida ho rahi thi,
Mera pura shareer dard or thakaan ke mare
Dukh raha tha.
Phor bhi main paglon ki tarhan se unhen kaat
raha tha,
Keela ne jab dekha ki ab kuchh hi sainik bache hain,
To usne ishara karke apne senapti ko mujhe marne
ka order diya ....
K senapati ne kuchh mantra padhe or uski aakhen
laal ho gayin, or uske hath me ek talvar aa gayi...
Uski talvar ne nikalne vali nakaratmak urja itni yez thi
ki main itna door hone ke baad bhi use saaf
mehsus kar sakta tha.
Jaise hi maine akhiri sainik ko mara vo bhagta hua,
Meri or lapka or palak jhapakte hi
mere samne khada ho gaya.
Main (hafte hue) is shatraj ke khel me maine tumhare raja
Ke sabhi pyade or hathi - ghode maar dale.
Or ab vazeer shaheed hone ke liye aaya hai...
Wo mere baat ke javab me sirf muskura diya ...
Uski talvaar se nikli urja mere dimagh par bahut zyada
Prabhav daal rahi thi... Mera shareer ke sath - sath
dimagh bhi dard karne laga tha...
Usne apni talvar ek baar hava me lehtai
or mujhpar hamla kar diya.....
Uski or meri talvar apas me takra rahi thin...
Jisse ek alag hi electricity generat ho rahi thi...
Uska har ek vaar bhayanak tha...
Main jaise taise karke khud ko bacha raha tha....
Keela - abe tu mujhse ladna chah raha tha na ...
Pehle mere senapti ko to hara ke dikha ....
Lagta hai bachcha tak gaya hai...
Abe koi ise doodh pilao be...
Are rajkumari tu hi pila de apna doodh ...
Kya pata tera dush pikar hi isme takat aa jaye
(Keela bade hi chaw se shrab gatakte hue bola)
Uski baaton se mera dimaag kharaab ho raha tha...
Or ushar vo K senapati lagatar vaar kiye ja raha tha ..
Usne mujhe jagah jagah se zakhmi kar diya tha...
Jise dekhkar keela khushi mana raha tha...
Keela - maine to socha tha ki tera mujhse
mukabla hoga
Par tu to mere senapati se hi haar jayega ...
Haye! Dil ke arman aansuo me beh gaye....
Senapati mujhe iska sar chahiye ..
Badle me ye Parilok tera hua ....
Tujhe yahan ka raja bana dunga ....Hahahahhaha
Keela ki baton ka senapati par turant asar hua or usne
Sidha meri gardan par war kar diya ....
Jisse meri gardan
Hawa me ud kar door ja giri...
Anjalika ki yez chikh nikli .... Or wo phut kar rone lagi...
Keela - Wah! Mere sher dil khish kar diya tune ...
Senapati bhi keela ki taraf chalne laga...
Keela - senapti ki peeth thap - thapate hue -
Shabash mere sher .... Ab hoga sab lokon ka vinash
Hahahahahahahha
Shuruaat aaj se hi kar dete hai....
Or ek baat ka hamesha malaal rahega ki ye sala
Mere hathon se kyon nahin mara....
K Senapati bhi haaf raha tha -
maharaj sala mar to gaya
Par mujhe bhi laga nahin tha ki ye itni
asani se mar jayega.
Anjalika to jaise mar hi gayi thi .. uski to mano duniya
hi lut gayi thi ..
Tabhi aasamn se ek tez roshni mere kate hue
dhad par giri Or mera dhad vapas khada ho gaya
Or yahan - vahan hathon se apna sar dhundhne laga.
Senapati or keela to chalne ki tayyari kar rahe the..
Vo ye sab dekhkar shock ho gaye....
Or anjalika me to jaise nayi jaan aa gayi thi....
Uski aakhon se phir se aansu girne lage ...
Par abki baar ye aansu khishi ke the...
Kuchh hi der me mujhe mera sar mil gaya,
jo maine vapas apne kate hue dhad par laga liya.
Ab mujhe bilkul bhi thakaan mehsus nahin ho rahi thi.
Balki apne anadar nayi shaktiyon ka sanchar hota hua mehsoos ho raha tha
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Bahut khoob superb.
Fight jordar rahi.
Bahut achhe yaara.