Horror Arjun - The Devgadh Mystery

[RED Ashoka]

STATUS : Update 6 Posted ---- I will show you what is the real Thriller Suspense' part 2'. Upcoming update 7--Mystery or Reveal !

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[RED Ashoka]

Update 6 : Andheri Raat ka Rahasya

(Recap : Arjuuun… Darwaza khol do, beta… Main tumhari maa hoon…"
Arjun ka dil ek pal ke liye ruk gaya. Maa? Lekin Maa toh yahaan hai?!

Phir bahaar kaun tha

ha…?)

Rajeshwari mantra bolti rahi aur phir bahar se awaj aana bhi band ho gayi lekin mantr Bolte Bolte achanak thakan se behosh ho gayi

Aur andar wahi khauf aur sannata tha

Ab aage

Arjun ke mann me hazaaron sawaal ghoom rahe the. Maa abhi bhi behosh thi. Bahar kaun tha? Aur agar woh asli maa nahi thi, toh kya woh kisi atma ka dhoka tha?

Dadaji, Bhadra nath, ek kone me chupchaap baith kar mala japa rahe the. Unke chehre par chinta ki gheri lakeeren saf dikh rahi thi. Arjun ne dheere se poocha—

"Dadaji… Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?"

Bhadra nath ne apni aankhen kholi. Unka chehra thanda par ek ajeeb si gehrayi liye hue tha.

"Beta… Har sawal ka jawab milna zaroori nahi hota. Jo cheezein dikh rahi hain, unse zyada jo nahi dikh rahi, wahi asli dar hota hai."

Arjun ghabra gaya. Yeh shabdon ka jaal uske mann me aur bhi zyada bechaini bhar raha tha.

"Par dadaji, agar yeh sab kuch sach hai, toh mujhe bataiye. Sach kya hai? Maa kyun aise react kar rahi thi?"

Bhadranath ne ek gehri saans li. Fir dheere se bole—

"Tere baap ki maut ek aag thi. Ab woh aag tujhe bula rahi hai."

Arjun ka sharir ek pal ke liye sun ho gaya. Yeh kya keh rahe hain dadaji? Usne sun rakha tha ki uske pita ek bimari se mare the. Lekin yahaan koi aur hi kahani chal rahi thi!

"Dadaji, mujhe sach bataiye!" Arjun cheekh pada.

Bhadranath ne ek pal ke liye uski aankhon me dekha. Fir bola—

"Agar sach janna hai, toh tujhe purane mandir ke paas jaana hoga. Wahan tujhe tujhe tere jawab milenge."

Arjun ke dil me ajeeb si ghabrahat thi. Purana mandir… Woh mandir jo Devghar ke sabse dare hue kone me tha!

Andheri Raat:

Raat aur bhi gehri hoti ja rahi thi. Shanti Devi ab thodi behtar lag rahi thi, par abhi bhi unki aankhon me dar tha.

Arjun apne kamre me aaya, lekin uska dimaag shant nahi ho raha tha. Mandir jaana chahiye ya nahi?Aur ye dadaji kis raj ki baat kr rhe hai ,ye sab kya ho raha hai......

Tabhi, usse mehsoos hua jaise koi uske paas khada hai. Thandi hawa ka ek jhoka… Aur ek ajeeb mehak!


Uske dil ki dhadkane tez ho gayi. Dheere se usne peeche dekha. Ek saya… Ek aurat ka saya!

Usne dheere se kaha, “Arjun…”

Arjun ka dil ek pal ke liye ruk gaya. Woh awaz madhur thi, lekin usme ek ajeeb si kashish thi.

Ek thanda haath uske gale ke paas aaya… Uski saansein tez ho gayi. Yeh kaun hai? Yeh koi sapna hai ya haqeeqat?

"Tumhe bula rahi hai… Wahan mat jao…" Us awaaz me ek ajeeb si vyakulta thi.

Arjun ka dimaag sun ho gaya. Yeh kaun thi? Ya fir koi aur shakti jo usse rok rahi thi?

Next Update Me:

Kya Arjun purane mandir jayega?
Aur yeh ajnabi sparsh kiska tha?
Agle update me milega jawab!


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Update 6 : Andheri Raat ka Rahasya

(Recap : Arjuuun… Darwaza khol do, beta… Main tumhari maa hoon…"
Arjun ka dil ek pal ke liye ruk gaya. Maa? Lekin Maa toh yahaan hai?!

Phir bahaar kaun tha

ha…?)

Rajeshwari mantra bolti rahi aur phir bahar se awaj aana bhi band ho gayi lekin mantr Bolte Bolte achanak thakan se behosh ho gayi

Aur andar wahi khauf aur sannata tha

Ab aage

Arjun ke mann me hazaaron sawaal ghoom rahe the. Maa abhi bhi behosh thi. Bahar kaun tha? Aur agar woh asli maa nahi thi, toh kya woh kisi atma ka dhoka tha?

Dadaji, Bhadra nath, ek kone me chupchaap baith kar mala japa rahe the. Unke chehre par chinta ki gheri lakeeren saf dikh rahi thi. Arjun ne dheere se poocha—

"Dadaji… Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?"

Bhadra nath ne apni aankhen kholi. Unka chehra thanda par ek ajeeb si gehrayi liye hue tha.

"Beta… Har sawal ka jawab milna zaroori nahi hota. Jo cheezein dikh rahi hain, unse zyada jo nahi dikh rahi, wahi asli dar hota hai."

Arjun ghabra gaya. Yeh shabdon ka jaal uske mann me aur bhi zyada bechaini bhar raha tha.

"Par dadaji, agar yeh sab kuch sach hai, toh mujhe bataiye. Sach kya hai? Maa kyun aise react kar rahi thi?"

Bhadranath ne ek gehri saans li. Fir dheere se bole—

"Tere baap ki maut ek aag thi. Ab woh aag tujhe bula rahi hai."

Arjun ka sharir ek pal ke liye sun ho gaya. Yeh kya keh rahe hain dadaji? Usne sun rakha tha ki uske pita ek bimari se mare the. Lekin yahaan koi aur hi kahani chal rahi thi!

"Dadaji, mujhe sach bataiye!" Arjun cheekh pada.

Bhadranath ne ek pal ke liye uski aankhon me dekha. Fir bola—

"Agar sach janna hai, toh tujhe purane mandir ke paas jaana hoga. Wahan tujhe tujhe tere jawab milenge."

Arjun ke dil me ajeeb si ghabrahat thi. Purana mandir… Woh mandir jo Devghar ke sabse dare hue kone me tha!

Andheri Raat:

Raat aur bhi gehri hoti ja rahi thi. Shanti Devi ab thodi behtar lag rahi thi, par abhi bhi unki aankhon me dar tha.

Arjun apne kamre me aaya, lekin uska dimaag shant nahi ho raha tha. Mandir jaana chahiye ya nahi?Aur ye dadaji kis raj ki baat kr rhe hai ,ye sab kya ho raha hai......

Tabhi, usse mehsoos hua jaise koi uske paas khada hai. Thandi hawa ka ek jhoka… Aur ek ajeeb mehak!


Uske dil ki dhadkane tez ho gayi. Dheere se usne peeche dekha. Ek saya… Ek aurat ka saya!

Usne dheere se kaha, “Arjun…”

Arjun ka dil ek pal ke liye ruk gaya. Woh awaz madhur thi, lekin usme ek ajeeb si kashish thi.

Ek thanda haath uske gale ke paas aaya… Uski saansein tez ho gayi. Yeh kaun hai? Yeh koi sapna hai ya haqeeqat?

"Tumhe bula rahi hai… Wahan mat jao…" Us awaaz me ek ajeeb si vyakulta thi.

Arjun ka dimaag sun ho gaya. Yeh kaun thi? Ya fir koi aur shakti jo usse rok rahi thi?

Next Update Me:

Kya Arjun purane mandir jayega?
Aur yeh ajnabi sparsh kiska tha?
Agle update me milega jawab!


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Ye related to hai iske pita ki maut se matlab.
Par ek aatma jo ghar per nahi aa sakti hai...
Wahi ye dusri aatma jo iske ghar pe iske room mein aake isko bata rahi hai.
Interesting.

 

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Ye related to hai iske pita ki maut se matlab.
Par ek aatma jo ghar per nahi aa sakti hai...
Wahi ye dusri aatma jo iske ghar pe iske room mein aake isko bata rahi hai.
Interesting.

Bohot interesting observation hai! Yeh sawaal khud Arjun ke dimaag mein bhi aayega. Jo sach hai, woh dheere-dheere saamne aayega. Lekin ek cheez toh pakki hai—jo kuch bhi ho raha hai, woh Arjun ke pita ki maut se directly connected ho bhi sakta aur nahi bhi.! ..

 

[RED Ashoka]

Ye related to hai iske pita ki maut se matlab.
Par ek aatma jo ghar per nahi aa sakti hai...
Wahi ye dusri aatma jo iske ghar pe iske room mein aake isko bata rahi hai.

Haha...... Suspense suspense suspense ....
You are right But Who knows the future...... ..
Aise hi story ka tag thriller aur suspense thodi hai .har cheeze clear hogi aage update ke sath and jitni cheeze clear hongi usse jyada usse jyada aur bate horrorness and thrill badhta jayegai

Interesting.

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Banaye rakhe aur apne review de

 

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[Naik]

Update 4: Raat Ki Aahat

(Recap:
ghantiyan ekdum zor se bajne lagi, bina kisi hawa ke. Rajeswari Devi ne palat kar dekha, unki aankhon me ek ajeeb si chinta dikh rahi thi.

Arjun ne mehsoos kiya, Devghar ke har kone me ek rahasya chhupa hai… aur wo in sabme ghus chuka hai.)

Present time

(Scene: Devghar ka hawa bhari mahal, shaam dhal chuki hai, aur ghar ke andar thodi chandni aur diye ki halke roshni phail rahi hai.)

Arjun din bhar ke baatein soch raha tha. Uski maa, RajeswariDevi, ne Tulsi puja ke baad sabko nashta karwaya tha. Ghar ka mahaul shant tha, lekin ek ajeeb si ghabrahat bhi mehsoos ho rahi Thi.



Bade Papa, Shyamlal, aur Arjun ne aangan mein baith kar khana khaya. Maa, dadi, aur Chhoti bhi saath thi. Khane ke dauraan kisi ne koi ajeeb baat nahi ki, lekin sabke chehre pe ek asar tha—jaise koi chhupi hui baat sabke zehan me chal rahi ho.


Arjun (andar hi andar): Yeh sab mujhe kuch bata kyun nahi rahe? Yeh Devghar waqai ajeeb hai…

Khana khane baki sab apne kam pe nikal gaye aur Arjun in sab cheezo ke bare me soch rha tha

Raat ho chuki thi. Sab apne-apne kamron me chale gaye. Arjun bhi apne kamre me aakar lete gaya. Usne aankhein band ki hi thi ki…



Dhaddd… Dhaddd… (Ek tez awaz se darwaza hil gaya!)


Arjun ne jhat se aankhein kholi. Raat ka samay, aur yeh awaaz? Uska dil tez dhadakne laga.


Tabhi ek aur awaaz aayi… "Mat kholna darwaza, beta!!"


Rajeswari Devi ki cheekhti hui awaaz! Arjun sitti-pitti gum ho gayi. Maa itni ghabrahat me kyun hai?

Kya darwaza kholna ek badi galti hogi?

To Be Continued…
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Aage ane wala update 5 will be mega update
Ek bharpur horror aur suspense ke sath, update 5 will bhi dhamaka

Badhiya shaandar update
Kon aa gaya Jo darwaja peet raha h or ooper se maa Keh Rahi h darwaja na kholna aisa kia h Jo woh mana ker Rahi h

 

[Naik]

Mega Update 5 – Arjun: The Mystery Devghar


(Reacp : Darwaza Mat Kholna! – The Terror Continues)


"DARBAAZA MAT KHOLNA, BETA!!"


Rajeswari Devi ki cheekhti awaaz ab bhi kaanon mein goonj rahi thi. Arjun sitti-pitti gum ho gayi. Maa itni ghabrahat mein kyun hai?

Kamra thoda andhera ho chuka tha, sirf ek mombatti ki dhak-dhak karti roshni bach rahi thi. Arjun ne ghabrakar pucha,


"Maa! Kya ho raha hai!!??"


Lekin Rajeswari Devi bas ek hi cheez keh rahi thi, "Darwaza mat kholo… nahi toh sab barbaad ho jayega!"........

Bahaar hawa ek ajeeb si bhayanak seeti bajane lagi thi. Jaise koi chhupkar dheere se hans raha ho…..

Arjun ne dheere se darwaza ki taraf dekha. Koi uspar hath rakh raha tha—
thap....-thap.....-thap.................!!

Lekin andar se sirf ek sannaata tha.

Rajeswari ne ek patla dhaaga uthaya aur darwaze ke paas rakh diya. Uske chehre par chhati hui ghabrahat ab bhi barkarar thi.

Arjun ne dheere se kaha, "Maa, yeh sab kya hai?"




Lekin uske kehne se pehle hi ek aur awaaz aayi

"HISSSSSSS…"

Jaise koi zameen ke neeche se fufkar raha ho… jaise ek saanp lekin insaan ki tarah kuch bolne ki koshish kar raha ho.

Arjun ki ridhayein tez ho gayi. Usne dekha, maa ne aankh bandh karke mantr bolne shuru kar diye.

…

Tabhi Bahar se aur awaj tez hone lagi thi . "Arjun.... Arjunnnn.,....

Kisi ki awaaz use bula rahi thi, jaise koi use apne paas bulana chahta ho… jaise koi bahut dino se uska intezaar kar raha ho!


Tabhi ek aur awaaz aayi


"Mat chhoona us darwaze ko, beta!!!"


Arjun ne dekha ki Dadaji—Bhadranath—tez kadam uthate hue andar aaye. Unka chehra gusse se bhar gaya tha. "Rajeswari, tumne ise ab tak nahi bataya?!"

Rajeswari Devi chup rahi, par unki aankhon me dukh tha.

Arjun ek second ke liye ruk gaya. Kya chhupa rahe hai ye log?


............Dadaji ne kaha, "Agar ye darwaza khul gaya, toh sirf ek jaan nahi jayegi, ek pura Yug jal jayega!"...

Arjun ab aur nahi rukh sakta tha. Usne zor se kaha, "Mujhe sach batao! Yeh sab kya hai?"

Rajeswari Devi ne dheere se aankh uthayi, aur bas ek hi baat boli—

"Wapas aagaya hai…"

Arjun ne poocha, "Kaun?"

Aur tabhi… ek tez awaz aayi!


"THAAAD!"


Darwaze par zor se kisi ne haath maara. Ek bhayanak chhaya darwaze ke neeche se dikh rahi thi!

Arjun ne aage badhne ki koshish ki, lekin Bhadranath ne uska haath pakad liya. "Agar tune darwaza khola, toh tujhe sirf maut nahi milegi, tujhe apni aatma bhi bechni padegi!"

Aur tabhi ek aur awaaz aayi—


Arjuuun… Darwaza khol do, beta… Main tumhari maa hoon…"




Arjun ka dil ek pal ke

liye ruk gaya. Maa? Lekin Maa toh yahaan hai?!

Phir bahaar kaun tha…?
Aur AGR maa bahar hai to mai jinke sath andar hu wo kon... Arjun ki dhadkan ekdum sunn pad gayi thi ye sun ke

To be Continued..........
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Ab yeh kia locha h maa tow Ander h tow yeh baher kon h Jo khud ko Arjun ki maa Bata Rahi h
Kia Arjun ki asli maa nahi h iss Dunia me ya fir bahaer sirf ek chalawa h Jo Arjun ko kisi tarah baher bulana chahti h
Or dada ji kia Keh rehe ki Arjun ko abhi kuch bataya nahi kia
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Zabardast shaandar update

 

[Naik]

Update 6 : Andheri Raat ka Rahasya

(Recap : Arjuuun… Darwaza khol do, beta… Main tumhari maa hoon…"
Arjun ka dil ek pal ke liye ruk gaya. Maa? Lekin Maa toh yahaan hai?!

Phir bahaar kaun tha

ha…?)

Rajeshwari mantra bolti rahi aur phir bahar se awaj aana bhi band ho gayi lekin mantr Bolte Bolte achanak thakan se behosh ho gayi

Aur andar wahi khauf aur sannata tha

Ab aage

Arjun ke mann me hazaaron sawaal ghoom rahe the. Maa abhi bhi behosh thi. Bahar kaun tha? Aur agar woh asli maa nahi thi, toh kya woh kisi atma ka dhoka tha?

Dadaji, Bhadra nath, ek kone me chupchaap baith kar mala japa rahe the. Unke chehre par chinta ki gheri lakeeren saf dikh rahi thi. Arjun ne dheere se poocha—

"Dadaji… Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?"

Bhadra nath ne apni aankhen kholi. Unka chehra thanda par ek ajeeb si gehrayi liye hue tha.

"Beta… Har sawal ka jawab milna zaroori nahi hota. Jo cheezein dikh rahi hain, unse zyada jo nahi dikh rahi, wahi asli dar hota hai."

Arjun ghabra gaya. Yeh shabdon ka jaal uske mann me aur bhi zyada bechaini bhar raha tha.

"Par dadaji, agar yeh sab kuch sach hai, toh mujhe bataiye. Sach kya hai? Maa kyun aise react kar rahi thi?"

Bhadranath ne ek gehri saans li. Fir dheere se bole—

"Tere baap ki maut ek aag thi. Ab woh aag tujhe bula rahi hai."

Arjun ka sharir ek pal ke liye sun ho gaya. Yeh kya keh rahe hain dadaji? Usne sun rakha tha ki uske pita ek bimari se mare the. Lekin yahaan koi aur hi kahani chal rahi thi!

"Dadaji, mujhe sach bataiye!" Arjun cheekh pada.

Bhadranath ne ek pal ke liye uski aankhon me dekha. Fir bola—

"Agar sach janna hai, toh tujhe purane mandir ke paas jaana hoga. Wahan tujhe tujhe tere jawab milenge."

Arjun ke dil me ajeeb si ghabrahat thi. Purana mandir… Woh mandir jo Devghar ke sabse dare hue kone me tha!

Andheri Raat:

Raat aur bhi gehri hoti ja rahi thi. Shanti Devi ab thodi behtar lag rahi thi, par abhi bhi unki aankhon me dar tha.

Arjun apne kamre me aaya, lekin uska dimaag shant nahi ho raha tha. Mandir jaana chahiye ya nahi?Aur ye dadaji kis raj ki baat kr rhe hai ,ye sab kya ho raha hai......

Tabhi, usse mehsoos hua jaise koi uske paas khada hai. Thandi hawa ka ek jhoka… Aur ek ajeeb mehak!


Uske dil ki dhadkane tez ho gayi. Dheere se usne peeche dekha. Ek saya… Ek aurat ka saya!

Usne dheere se kaha, “Arjun…”

Arjun ka dil ek pal ke liye ruk gaya. Woh awaz madhur thi, lekin usme ek ajeeb si kashish thi.

Ek thanda haath uske gale ke paas aaya… Uski saansein tez ho gayi. Yeh kaun hai? Yeh koi sapna hai ya haqeeqat?

"Tumhe bula rahi hai… Wahan mat jao…" Us awaaz me ek ajeeb si vyakulta thi.

Arjun ka dimaag sun ho gaya. Yeh kaun thi? Ya fir koi aur shakti jo usse rok rahi thi?

Next Update Me:

Kya Arjun purane mandir jayega?
Aur yeh ajnabi sparsh kiska tha?
Agle update me milega jawab!


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Ab kia chakker h Arjun ke baap ki maut ek aag thi yeh kia tha samajh nahi aaya
Or dada ke mutabik agaer Arjun ko Sach jaan na h tow purani mandir jao tow kia waha saare sawalo ke jawab mil jayege or bhala sawalo ke jawab kon dega bhala
Ab yeh kon si atma h Jo Arjun rok Rahi h
Ek atma h Jo bula Rahi or doosri atma rok Rahi h
Dekhte h ab Arjun kia kerta h
Badhiya shaandar update