Horror Arjun - The Devgadh Mystery

[RED Ashoka]

STATUS : Update 9 posted.. guys

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Update 1	Update 2	Update 3	Update 4
Update 5	Update 6	Update 7	Update 8
Update 9	Update 10	Update 11	Update 12
Update 13	Update 14	Update 15	Update 16

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More updates will be added as the story progresses


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[RED Ashoka]

Badhiya shaandar update
Kon aa gaya Jo darwaja peet raha h or ooper se maa Keh Rahi h darwaja na kholna aisa kia h Jo woh mana ker Rahi h

Thanks you bro

 

[RED Ashoka]

Ab yeh kia locha h maa tow Ander h tow yeh baher kon h Jo khud ko Arjun ki maa Bata Rahi h
Kia Arjun ki asli maa nahi h iss Dunia me ya fir bahaer sirf ek chalawa h Jo Arjun ko kisi tarah baher bulana chahti h
Or dada ji kia Keh rehe ki Arjun ko abhi kuch bataya nahi kia
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Zabardast shaandar update

Suspense suspense suspense suspense bro...

 

[RED Ashoka]

Ab kia chakker h Arjun ke baap ki maut ek aag thi yeh kia tha samajh nahi aaya
Or dada ke mutabik agaer Arjun ko Sach jaan na h tow purani mandir jao tow kia waha saare sawalo ke jawab

Hmm .... bilkul

mil jayege or bhala sawalo ke jawab kon dega bhala

Ye to aapane wale updates me pata chalega

Ab yeh kon si atma h Jo Arjun rok Rahi h
Ek atma h Jo bula Rahi or doosri atma rok Rahi h

Hmm.. enjoy the thriller bro

Dekhte h ab Arjun kia kerta h
Badhiya shaandar update

Thank you bro
Aapke sabhi doubt aane wale upadte me thode clear honge and kuch naya bhi pata chalega
Bus aise hi support banaye rakho
Just wait for upcoming updates...
And again thank you

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Update 6 : Andheri Raat ka Rahasya

(Recap : Arjuuun… Darwaza khol do, beta… Main tumhari maa hoon…"
Arjun ka dil ek pal ke liye ruk gaya. Maa? Lekin Maa toh yahaan hai?!

Phir bahaar kaun tha

ha…?)

Rajeshwari mantra bolti rahi aur phir bahar se awaj aana bhi band ho gayi lekin mantr Bolte Bolte achanak thakan se behosh ho gayi

Aur andar wahi khauf aur sannata tha

Ab aage

Arjun ke mann me hazaaron sawaal ghoom rahe the. Maa abhi bhi behosh thi. Bahar kaun tha? Aur agar woh asli maa nahi thi, toh kya woh kisi atma ka dhoka tha?

Dadaji, Bhadra nath, ek kone me chupchaap baith kar mala japa rahe the. Unke chehre par chinta ki gheri lakeeren saf dikh rahi thi. Arjun ne dheere se poocha—

"Dadaji… Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?"

Bhadra nath ne apni aankhen kholi. Unka chehra thanda par ek ajeeb si gehrayi liye hue tha.

"Beta… Har sawal ka jawab milna zaroori nahi hota. Jo cheezein dikh rahi hain, unse zyada jo nahi dikh rahi, wahi asli dar hota hai."

Arjun ghabra gaya. Yeh shabdon ka jaal uske mann me aur bhi zyada bechaini bhar raha tha.

"Par dadaji, agar yeh sab kuch sach hai, toh mujhe bataiye. Sach kya hai? Maa kyun aise react kar rahi thi?"

Bhadranath ne ek gehri saans li. Fir dheere se bole—

"Tere baap ki maut ek aag thi. Ab woh aag tujhe bula rahi hai."

Arjun ka sharir ek pal ke liye sun ho gaya. Yeh kya keh rahe hain dadaji? Usne sun rakha tha ki uske pita ek bimari se mare the. Lekin yahaan koi aur hi kahani chal rahi thi!

"Dadaji, mujhe sach bataiye!" Arjun cheekh pada.

Bhadranath ne ek pal ke liye uski aankhon me dekha. Fir bola—

"Agar sach janna hai, toh tujhe purane mandir ke paas jaana hoga. Wahan tujhe tujhe tere jawab milenge."

Arjun ke dil me ajeeb si ghabrahat thi. Purana mandir… Woh mandir jo Devghar ke sabse dare hue kone me tha!

Andheri Raat:

Raat aur bhi gehri hoti ja rahi thi. Shanti Devi ab thodi behtar lag rahi thi, par abhi bhi unki aankhon me dar tha.

Arjun apne kamre me aaya, lekin uska dimaag shant nahi ho raha tha. Mandir jaana chahiye ya nahi?Aur ye dadaji kis raj ki baat kr rhe hai ,ye sab kya ho raha hai......

Tabhi, usse mehsoos hua jaise koi uske paas khada hai. Thandi hawa ka ek jhoka… Aur ek ajeeb mehak!


Uske dil ki dhadkane tez ho gayi. Dheere se usne peeche dekha. Ek saya… Ek aurat ka saya!

Usne dheere se kaha, “Arjun…”

Arjun ka dil ek pal ke liye ruk gaya. Woh awaz madhur thi, lekin usme ek ajeeb si kashish thi.

Ek thanda haath uske gale ke paas aaya… Uski saansein tez ho gayi. Yeh kaun hai? Yeh koi sapna hai ya haqeeqat?

"Tumhe bula rahi hai… Wahan mat jao…" Us awaaz me ek ajeeb si vyakulta thi.

Arjun ka dimaag sun ho gaya. Yeh kaun thi? Ya fir koi aur shakti jo usse rok rahi thi?

Next Update Me:

Kya Arjun purane mandir jayega?
Aur yeh ajnabi sparsh kiska tha?
Agle update me milega jawab!


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Arjun ki halat patli ho gayi maa ko andar bahar dekh kar aur upar se dadaji ki baate bechare ki halat aur buri kar rahe h...ye toh confirm h devgarh ke purane mandir filhal jane se raaz khulne se jayda ulaj jayenge...ya toh arjun jo jaanna chahta h uski jhalak milegi ya fir aur musibat mai pad jayega...
Suspence toh bahut creat ho gaya h ..update shandaar raha...readers ko padhne par majbur karne ke liye aur next update ka wait karne par majboor kar dega

 

[RED Ashoka]

Very Thank you bro

Arjun ki halat patli ho gayi maa ko andar bahar dekh kar aur upar se dadaji ki baate bechare ki halat aur buri kar rahe h.

Bilkul....use to shock pe shock lage hai

..ye toh confirm h devgarh ke purane mandir filhal jane se raaz khulne se jayda ulaj jayenge.

Hmm .. baat me dam hai

..ya toh arjun jo jaanna chahta h uski jhalak milegi ya fir aur musibat mai pad jayega...

Aage updates me pata chalega ye to

Suspence toh bahut creat ho gaya h ..update shandaar raha...readers ko padhne par majbur karne ke liye aur next update ka wait karne par majboor kar dega

Again Thanks bro ,
Aapka review dene ke liye .. acha laga ki aapko pasand aaya
Next update jald hi aayega

 

[RED Ashoka]

Update 7: Gaon ka safar


Subah ka suraj abhi thoda hi ugha tha ki haveli ke aangan mein ek ajeeb si sannata tha. Arjun aangan mein aaya, toh dekha ki Dadaji (Bhadranath) tulsi pujan kar rahe the, aur Shanti Devi unke paas khadi thi—par unka chehra thoda utre hua tha.


Arjun ne ma ke kareeb jaakar pucha,"Maa, kal raat... woh sab kya tha? Tum itni ghabrahat me kyun thi?

Rajeshwari devi ne thoda jhijhak ke kaha,"Beta, kabhi kabhi... raaton mein purani yaadein aa jati hain. Sab kuch theek hai."


Dadaji ne ek gehri nazar Arjun par dali aur bola,"Beta, kuch cheezein jitni jaldi bhool jao, utna achha hota hai."

Par Arjun ke mann mein yeh baat aur gehri baith gayi. Kya ye koi purana raaz jo hawaon mein ghoom raha tha?

Aaj Arjun ne socha ki gaon ke andar ghoomkar thodi purani yaadein taaza karega. Bahut saal baad aaya tha yahaan, par jaise hi bazaar ki taraf kadam badhaya, uske andar ek ajeeb sa ahsaas jaaga.

Gaon ke log usse dekh rahe the—kuch shanka bhari nazar se, toh kuch bechaini se.


Ek budhiya jo sadak ke kinare beedi bech rahi thi, usne Arjun ko dekha aur dheere se bola,"Beta, tumhe yahaan nahi aana chahiye tha..."

Arjun ne chokkar kaha,"Kyu? Yeh toh mera hi gaon hai!"

Budhiya ne sirf ek baat boli,"Yeh wahi gaon hai jo tha, par ab waisa nahi raha..."

Uski baatein adhoori thi, jaise koi ankahee kahani ka ek tukda.
Jab Arjun wapas lautne laga,

" toh mandir ke paas ek ladki khadi thi."
Uske baal hawaa mein ud rahe the,
aur uski aankhein seedha Arjun par tikki thi—gehri, samajhne layak nahi... jaise kisi raaz ko chhupa rahi ho.

Jaise hi Arjun uske kareeb aaya, us ladki ne dheere se kaha,"Tum Devghar ke ho na?"

Arjun ne haan mein sir hila diya.


Ladki ne ek pal ke liye chup rehkar kaha,"Fir bhi tum zinda ho?"


Arjun ka dil ek pal ke liye tez dhadak gaya. Yeh kaisi baat thi? Yeh ladki kaun thi? Aur iske kehne ka matlab kya tha?

Andhera Badhta Ja Ra tha-----

Arjun abhi bhi us ladki ki baat ko lekar uljhan mein tha,
ki achanak mandir ke peeche se hawa ka ek teekha jhonka aaya.
Ghantiyaan zor se bajne lagi.



Us ladki ki aankhon mein ek alag si chamak thi. Usne dheere se Arjun ki taraf kadam badhaye aur bola,

"Tumhe sach nahi pata... par sach jald hi khud tumhare samne aayega...

Arjun ke mann mein ab sirf ek sawaal ghoom raha tha—yeh ladki kaun hai? Kya yeh kisi bade raaz ki shuruaat hai?

Jaise hi Arjun peeche mudne laga, ek door se aati aawaaz ne use rok diya…
"Arjuuun.... mat jaa..."

Arjun ne tez se peechhe dekha—par wahan koi nahi tha!

Suspense Continue ........

Yeh ladki kaun thi? Kya yeh Devghar ke bhootaha raaz ka hissa hai?
Gaon wale Arjun ke lautne se itne bechain kyun hai?
Aur sabse badi baat—jo awaaz Arjun ne suni, woh kiski thi?

To be continued....


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[Ristrcted]

Update 7: Gaon ka safar


Subah ka suraj abhi thoda hi ugha tha ki haveli ke aangan mein ek ajeeb si sannata tha. Arjun aangan mein aaya, toh dekha ki Dadaji (Bhadranath) tulsi pujan kar rahe the, aur Shanti Devi unke paas khadi thi—par unka chehra thoda utre hua tha.


Arjun ne ma ke kareeb jaakar pucha,"Maa, kal raat... woh sab kya tha? Tum itni ghabrahat me kyun thi?

Rajeshwari devi ne thoda jhijhak ke kaha,"Beta, kabhi kabhi... raaton mein purani yaadein aa jati hain. Sab kuch theek hai."


Dadaji ne ek gehri nazar Arjun par dali aur bola,"Beta, kuch cheezein jitni jaldi bhool jao, utna achha hota hai."

Par Arjun ke mann mein yeh baat aur gehri baith gayi. Kya ye koi purana raaz jo hawaon mein ghoom raha tha?

Aaj Arjun ne socha ki gaon ke andar ghoomkar thodi purani yaadein taaza karega. Bahut saal baad aaya tha yahaan, par jaise hi bazaar ki taraf kadam badhaya, uske andar ek ajeeb sa ahsaas jaaga.

Gaon ke log usse dekh rahe the—kuch shanka bhari nazar se, toh kuch bechaini se.


Ek budhiya jo sadak ke kinare beedi bech rahi thi, usne Arjun ko dekha aur dheere se bola,"Beta, tumhe yahaan nahi aana chahiye tha..."

Arjun ne chokkar kaha,"Kyu? Yeh toh mera hi gaon hai!"

Budhiya ne sirf ek baat boli,"Yeh wahi gaon hai jo tha, par ab waisa nahi raha..."

Uski baatein adhoori thi, jaise koi ankahee kahani ka ek tukda.
Jab Arjun wapas lautne laga,

" toh mandir ke paas ek ladki khadi thi."
Uske baal hawaa mein ud rahe the,
aur uski aankhein seedha Arjun par tikki thi—gehri, samajhne layak nahi... jaise kisi raaz ko chhupa rahi ho.

Jaise hi Arjun uske kareeb aaya, us ladki ne dheere se kaha,"Tum Devghar ke ho na?"

Arjun ne haan mein sir hila diya.


Ladki ne ek pal ke liye chup rehkar kaha,"Fir bhi tum zinda ho?"


Arjun ka dil ek pal ke liye tez dhadak gaya. Yeh kaisi baat thi? Yeh ladki kaun thi? Aur iske kehne ka matlab kya tha?

Andhera Badhta Ja Ra tha-----

Arjun abhi bhi us ladki ki baat ko lekar uljhan mein tha,
ki achanak mandir ke peeche se hawa ka ek teekha jhonka aaya.
Ghantiyaan zor se bajne lagi.



Us ladki ki aankhon mein ek alag si chamak thi. Usne dheere se Arjun ki taraf kadam badhaye aur bola,

"Tumhe sach nahi pata... par sach jald hi khud tumhare samne aayega...

Arjun ke mann mein ab sirf ek sawaal ghoom raha tha—yeh ladki kaun hai? Kya yeh kisi bade raaz ki shuruaat hai?

Jaise hi Arjun peeche mudne laga, ek door se aati aawaaz ne use rok diya…
"Arjuuun.... mat jaa..."

Arjun ne tez se peechhe dekha—par wahan koi nahi tha!

Suspense Continue ........

Yeh ladki kaun thi? Kya yeh Devghar ke bhootaha raaz ka hissa hai?
Gaon wale Arjun ke lautne se itne bechain kyun hai?
Aur sabse badi baat—jo awaaz Arjun ne suni, woh kiski thi?

To be continued....


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Nice update
kya saare gaon wale mare hue hai, aatmaon ke gaaon mein ye kya ?

 

[RED Ashoka]

Nice update

Thank you

kya saare gaon wale mare hue hai, aatmaon ke gaaon mein ye kya ?

........ Lgta to aisa hi hai.
shayad unhone kuch aisa dekha ho ya wo aisa jante ho .. ya aur kuch... jaisa aapne kaha....
kya pata.....!.. aage pata chlega .. enjoy the suspense....

 

[Ashish120]

Superb update bhai

 

[RED Ashoka]

Superb update bhai

Thank you bhai