Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

[Naina]

Aap ya koi bhi reader kya chahte hain,is hisab se maine ye story nahi likhi.iske har character aur uska role kahani shuru hone se pehle se maine tay kiya tha..

Aur aap us kahani ke jo ki ek supernatural story hai,uspe sawal kar rahi hain..jabki reality me isse laakh guna galat haalat hain...

abhi haal hi me srilanka me ek middli class family ek affordable tour par gayi thi..

Par ab us family me bas ek hi banda bacha...uski biwi aur dono bacche aatankwaadi ke chapet me aa gaye...

Un bekasuro ki kya galti thi..fir bhi maare gaye naa.yahi life hai..jaisa socho waisa hi ho toh Fir kya kehne...

aapki hi tarah har reader ka ek fav character hai par us wajah se mai apni soch nahi ghuma sakta....

Aur mere paas personal request bhi aate rahe hain,kisi character ko zyada lime light karne ke liye.....

Jaisa maine socha hai,waise hi hoga.....suit urself...

Haan.... Main janti arre re main sure thi, yehi reply milegi apse... par ek bar, bas ek Bari ek reader ke view se dekhiye... bohat hi ummda.. with great writing skill ke shath story likh rahe hai aur to aur it's 100% true, aj tak usi hisap se story likhte aye hai .... par kya anjali ko marna joruri tha... ITNI BRILLIANT STORY ME, MERI HI FAVORITE CHARACTER, ANJALI KO MARWANA DIYA... Aur ha jab bhi is story padhti hu na jane kyu.. anjali ki hi yaad ati hai.. sayed log pagli bolenge mujhe.. but that's true..

 

[vj4u]

Haan.... Main janti arre re main sure thi, yehi reply milegi apse... par ek bar, bas ek Bari ek reader ke view se dekhiye... bohat hi ummda.. with great writing skill ke shath story likh rahe hai aur to aur it's 100% true, aj tak usi hisap se story likhte aye hai .... par kya anjali ko marna joruri tha... ITNI BRILLIANT STORY ME, MERI HI FAVORITE CHARACTER, ANJALI KO MARWANA DIYA... Aur ha jab bhi is story padhti hu na jane kyu.. anjali ki hi yaad ati hai.. sayed log pagli bolenge mujhe.. but that's true..

Ek reader ke view point se hi maine ye kahani shuru ki thi...par har reader ki soch alag alag hoti hai..

itne saare log story ko read kar rahe hain,har kisi ka koi na koi fav hai... par mai in sab baaton ke hisab se story nahi likh sakta..

Ek taraf aap kehti hain ki aap story shuru se padh rahi hain,dusri taraf aap kehti hain ki agar ANJALI nahi toh AVANTIKA ko bhi mar jaana chahiye..

I mean seriously... is kahani me ANJALI ka bas ek side role hai jabhi AVANTIKA lead..agar aap ki tarah kuch readers ko ANJALI pasand hai,toh majority ko AVANTIKA...agar uske saath kuch ho jaata toh kya reaction hote readers ka...mai kisi bhi reader ke logics aur khwahsih ke hisab se story aage nahi badha sakta..

Stort lagatar padhne ke baad bhi ek baat aap clearly nahi samajhi ki AVANTIKA se VIKRAM hai aur VIKRAM se AVANTIKA... AVANTIKA ko kuch tabhi ho sakta hai jab VIKRAM mar jaaye aur VIKRAM mar gaya toh kahani hi khatm...

Yahi logics hain jo maine shuru se hi clear rakha hai...

RONIT, ANJALI ya koi aur tab tak hi important hain jab tak unke saamne VIKRAM AVANTIKA ya ASMODEUS nahi aa jaate...

Aakhir me bas itna samajh lijiye ki jo bhi ho raha hai uske piche hamesha ki hi tarah koi reason hai....agar dil kare toh saath bane rahiye.....

 

[23n24]

Ek reader ke view point se hi maine ye kahani shuru ki thi...par har reader ki soch alag alag hoti hai..

itne saare log story ko read kar rahe hain,har kisi ka koi na koi fav hai... par mai in sab baaton ke hisab se story nahi likh sakta..

Ek taraf aap kehti hain ki aap story shuru se padh rahi hain,dusri taraf aap kehti hain ki agar ANJALI nahi toh AVANTIKA ko bhi mar jaana chahiye..

I mean seriously... is kahani me ANJALI ka bas ek side role hai jabhi AVANTIKA lead..agar aap ki tarah kuch readers ko ANJALI pasand hai,toh majority ko AVANTIKA...agar uske saath kuch ho jaata toh kya reaction hote readers ka...mai kisi bhi reader ke logics aur khwahsih ke hisab se story aage nahi badha sakta..

Stort lagatar padhne ke baad bhi ek baat aap clearly nahi samajhi ki AVANTIKA se VIKRAM hai aur VIKRAM se AVANTIKA... AVANTIKA ko kuch tabhi ho sakta hai jab VIKRAM mar jaaye aur VIKRAM mar gaya toh kahani hi khatm...

Yahi logics hain jo maine shuru se hi clear rakha hai...

RONIT, ANJALI ya koi aur tab tak hi important hain jab tak unke saamne VIKRAM AVANTIKA ya ASMODEUS nahi aa jaate...

Aakhir me bas itna samajh lijiye ki jo bhi ho raha hai uske piche hamesha ki hi tarah koi reason hai....agar dil kare toh saath bane rahiye.....

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[Naina]

Ek reader ke view point se hi maine ye kahani shuru ki thi...par har reader ki soch alag alag hoti hai..

itne saare log story ko read kar rahe hain,har kisi ka koi na koi fav hai... par mai in sab baaton ke hisab se story nahi likh sakta..

Ek taraf aap kehti hain ki aap story shuru se padh rahi hain,dusri taraf aap kehti hain ki agar ANJALI nahi toh AVANTIKA ko bhi mar jaana chahiye..

I mean seriously... is kahani me ANJALI ka bas ek side role hai jabhi AVANTIKA lead..agar aap ki tarah kuch readers ko ANJALI pasand hai,toh majority ko AVANTIKA...agar uske saath kuch ho jaata toh kya reaction hote readers ka...mai kisi bhi reader ke logics aur khwahsih ke hisab se story aage nahi badha sakta..

Stort lagatar padhne ke baad bhi ek baat aap clearly nahi samajhi ki AVANTIKA se VIKRAM hai aur VIKRAM se AVANTIKA... AVANTIKA ko kuch tabhi ho sakta hai jab VIKRAM mar jaaye aur VIKRAM mar gaya toh kahani hi khatm...

Yahi logics hain jo maine shuru se hi clear rakha hai...

RONIT, ANJALI ya koi aur tab tak hi important hain jab tak unke saamne VIKRAM AVANTIKA ya ASMODEUS nahi aa jaate...

Aakhir me bas itna samajh lijiye ki jo bhi ho raha hai uske piche hamesha ki hi tarah koi reason hai....agar dil kare toh saath bane rahiye.....

Chalo writer shahab, no argument OK... Ek gana hi yaad a rahi o kya thi..... Hah
Tujhse naraj jindgi, hairan hu main....ho paresan hu main

 

[Rahat200]

Bhai next update kb tk

 

[Rahul]

shandaar update bhai chunaotiyan badh rahi dhere dhere sabki dekhte hain ab aage kya hota hai

 

[CG]

VJ hatsoff man.....

Avni ka shield bhi hatt gaya, wo pinjare mein kaid bhi ho gayi.... VJ bhi shayad ab khud se ladega.....dekhte hain bade bhai ka Maayajaal chhota bhai kaise todtaa hai

waiting for next update

 

[Naina]

Waiting....... Waiting........... Waiting

 

[King Aryan]

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[Fighter]

Masttt & Gajab update bro


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