Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI BABA VISHAKHT VIKRAM KE CLONE,AKSHAANT,SHAILA AUR MOKALSAR KE SAATH NANAJI KE KE GHAR JAATE HAIN WAHIN VIKRAM NE DONO HOLY SPIRITS KO AZAAD KAR DIYA HAI AUR FINALLY WO APNI MANZIL DHAWALI JHEEL KE SAAMNE KHADA HAI.....
AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1




( DEVIL'S ENCHANTMENT & THE HOLY SPIRIT )




LAST UPDATE:-




FINAL SCENES:-




SHAILA- ye sab kya hai gurudev!!!!!!

BABA VISHAKHT- tum me dhiraj bilkul nahi hai putri.....us yudh me tumhare haarne ka ye bhi ek kaaran tha.......

BABA VISHAKHT ki baat sun SHAILA ne apna sir jhuka liya......

BABA VISHAKHT- sharminda hone ki awashyakta nahi hai putri.......bas apni adheerta ko vash me karna sikho.....

agar tumhare saamne koi prashn khade ho jaaye,toh uske uttar ko dhundne ki pehli siddi sayyam hi hai.sayyam se bhara dimag kisi bhi prashn ka uttar khoj leta hai.....

aur rahi baat ki mai kya kar raha hun,wo toh mere karne ke baad tumhe apne aap hi pata chal jaayega.....

is waqt BABA VISHAKHT,MOKALSAR,AKSHAANT aur SHAILA DHAWALGARH ke sabse unche aur ghane pahad ke beech khade the....

BABA VISHAKHT ne apni potli me se wo safed kapda nikala jo jisme VIKRAM ke saare gharwaalon ke baal the,aur usse neeche zamin par bicha,uske saamne baith gaye....

BABA VISHAKHT apne haath me bhi ek kapda baandh liya jiske ungliyon waala bhaag nukila tha....BABA VISHAKHT ne saare baalon ko ek ek kar ke uthaya.

phir baba ne apni aankhen band ki aur ek mantra kaha........


TATVIKA VISHMAPANA



( REAL ILLUSION )


BABA VISHAKHT ke mantra kehte wo saare baal chamakne lage...BABA ne un baalon ko apne saamne hawa me uchaal diya...

wo saare baal hawa me tairte hue neeche zameen ki taraf aane lage aur jaise hi wo saare baal zamin se takraye,ek tez roshni hui aur jab wo roshni ghati toh AKSHAANT SHAILA aur MOKALSAR shocked ho gaye...

MOKALSAR- gurudev.ye sab!!!! isse toh aap **************************

BABA VISHAKHT- iska jawab tumhe swayam VIKRAM dega......AKSHAANT tumhe ek kaaam karna hoga....

AKSHAANT- aadesh de gurudev...

BABA VIHSAKHT-mai abhi dhyan me baithne waala hun.tumhe adrishya awashta me VIKRAM ke ghar ke paas rehna hai....wahan pahunchkar tumhe apne divya drishti se mujhe dekhte rehna hai........

jaise hi mere mookh se ABHI nikle,tumhe VIKRAM ke ****************** karna hai.....tum jaante ho iske liye tumhe kis mantra ka prayog karna hai.......

teeno me se kisiko bhi baba dwara diye gaye nirdesh ka matlab aur kaaran samajh nahi aaya,par wo jaante the ki guruji koi bhi kaam bina kisi khaas udeshya ke nahi karte...

AKSHAANT ne baba ko naman kiya aur gayab hokar ussi adrishya haalat me VIKRAM ke nanaji ke ghar ke saamne khada ho gaya.usne apni divya drishti ko jagaya aur BABA pe focus kiya.

AKSHAANT ko baba dikhne lage.....BABA VISHKAHT ko bhi pata chal gaya ki AKSHAANT unhe dekh raha hai isiliye unke chehre par santushti bhari smile aa gayi....

BABA VISHAKHT ne SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ko kuch nirdesh diye aur khud dhyaan me baith gaye.....


DHAWALI DRISHTI DARSHANAM KAROTI.....


dhyan me baithe BABA VISHAKHT ne jaise hi ye mantra bola,unhe VIKRAM aur JHEEL dikhne lagi....

BABA VISHAKHT ke chehre par khushi aur ghabrahat dono hi bhaav ek saath dikhne lage...

khushi isiliye kyunki bab samajh gaye ki VIKRAM ne shuruati sabhi chunoutiyon ko safalta purvak paar kar liya hai.....

ghabrahat isiliye kyunki BABA VISHAKHT ye jaan gaye ki ab VIKRAM ka saamna SPEAR se hone waala hai.........




WAHIN DUSRI TARAF:-



DADDDDDDDD........

awaaz sun jaise hi BALBEER peeche palta,apne saamne apne dusre bete DIGVIJAY ko dekh jaldi se utha aur DIGVIJAY ke gale lag gaya.......

kuch der tak gale lagne ke baad jab dono baap bete alag hue,toh DIGVIJAY ko ek jhatka laga......

kyun uske baap ke aankhon me aansu the....kyunki VALEFOR ek devil tha,uske aansu kaale colour ke the.....

DIGVIJAY- kya hua dad.....mujhe pehle hi kuch galat hone ka andesha ho gaya tha,isiliye mai yahan aaya...maine pehli baar aapke aankh me aansu dekhe hain,kahin mom ko toh!!!!

BALBEER- nahi bete.teri mom bilkul thik hai.par !!!!!!!

DIGVIJAY- par kya dad!!!!!

fir BALBEER ne DIGVIJAY ko jo kuch bhi hua tha,wo bataya.....ye jaankar ki uska koi bhai bhi hai,DIGVIJAY bohot khush hogay.

par jab usse pata chala ki uske bhai ke saath kya kya hua hai,DIGVIJAY ka dimag ghum gaya......

DIGVIJAY- mai us saale aur uske pariwar ko aisi mout dunga jo kisine sochi bhi nahi hogi......

ye bolkar jaise hi DIGVIJAY uthne ko hua,BALBEER ne uska haath pakad usse wapas baitha diya...

BALBEER- jaldbaazi me kiya gaya kaam nuksaan pahunchata hai bete.....ye baat maine tumhare bhai ko bhi samjhayi thi par wo nahi maana......tum ye galti mat dohrana...

DIGVIJAY- dad,mujhe kuch nahi hoga...aap nahi jaante ki mere andar ab kitni shakti hai.......mai us VIKRAM ko chutki me masal dunga......

BALBEER- beta,shakti tumhare bhai me bhi kam nahi thi..uske andar hum chaaron pramukh DEVIL'S ka khoon tha,phir bhi wo us VIKRAM ka kuch bigad na paya......

DIGVIJAY- par dad,mere shakti ka shroth alag hai aur zyada taakatwar bhi...bhai ne VIKRAM ko barabar ki takkar di thi,iska matab wo mere saamne zyada der tik nahi paayega.....

BALBEER- uska bhi ek kaaran hai putra....VIKRAM ne kuch der ke liye apne suraksha kawach ko khud hi hata diya tha,warna uspar ek bhi waar nahi kiya jaa sakta....

ruko,mai tumhe dikhata hun ki mai tumhe kyun rok raha hun....

BALBEER ne apna haath saamne kar ek baar ghumaya,dono ke saamne hawa me hi ek screen ban gayi jisme us din ka drishya dikh raha tha jab BALBEER ne VIKRAM ke upar pranghati mantra se waar kiya tha...

jaise jaise wo drishya aage badh raha tha,DIGVIJAY ki aankhen hairat se failti chali jaa rahi thiu...aur jaise hi wo drishya aaya jisme BALBEER ka mantra VIKRAM ke suraksha kawach se takrakar ek jhatke me toot gaya aur jiske wajah se BALBEER behosh ho gaya,DIGVIJAY ko ek tez jhatka laga..

DIGVIJAY- ye kaise ho sakta hai?

koi bhi surakhsha kawach itna shaktishali kaise ho sakta hai!!!!!

BALBEER- itne dino se mai bhi yahi soch raha hun aur maine us suraksha kawach ka shroth pata lagane ki bhi koshish ki par nakam raha......

aur rahi baat tumhari taakat ki,toh tumhari apaar shakti ko maine bhi mehsoos kiya hai,par fir bhi us ladke par abhi humla karna theek nahi hoga...

DIGVIJAY- ek koshish karne me kya jaata hai dad......aur waise bhi,mai jo bhi karunga,yahin se karunga......

BALBEER- matlab!!!!!tu kehna kya chahta hai?

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DIGVIJAY ne kuch kaha nahi aur apni aakhen band kar kuch mantra kaha,DIGVIJAY ke haath me ek red gola dikhne laga...

DIGVIJAY- dad,aap is gole me aapka vidhwansi mantra mila dijiye..

BALBEER ne apni aankhen band ki aur apne haath aage kiye....BALBEER ke haathon se kaali roshni nikli aur DIGVIJAY ke haath ke upar rakhe red gole me ghus gayi.....

DIGVIJAY ne apni aankhen band ki aur VIKRAM ko khojne laga......par ue VIKRAM kahin nahi dikha.....

DIGVIJAY chownk gaya aur usne apni aakhen khol di...

DIGVIJAY- dad,wo VIKRAM nazar kyun nahi aa raha..

BALBEER- yahi toh main gutthi hai bete..meri nazar uspe har waqt rehti thi,par beech beech me wo dikhna band ho jaata tha.jitnei bhi koshish karo,pata hi nahi chalta tha ki wo kahan gaya..

kahin ye uski koi nayi chaal toh nahi,ye sochkar maine uspe nazar rakhna band kar diya.....

DIGVIJAY- kabhi na kabhi toh sab pata chal hi jaayega...filhal ke liye,wo nahi toh uski family hi sahi..

DIGVIJAY ne fir aankh band kiye,usse VIKRAM ki family dikhne lagi jisse dekhkar DIGVIJAY ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi..

DIGVIJAY- ab kahan chupega......apni family ko marta dekh toh zaroor saamne aayega.

DIGVIJAY ne apne haath me rakhe gole ko chhod diya.wo red & black gola tezi se DHAWALGARH ki taraf aane laga par ye kya.........!!!!!!

DIGVIJAY aur BALBEER ki aankhen shock se faile gayi....

hua ye ki jaise hi wo gola DHAWALGARH ki sarhad tak pahuncha,wo rook gaya aur ek jhatke ke saath nasht ho gaya...........

DIGVIJAY- impossible.......ye kaise ho sakta hai...!!!!!!

BALBEER- maine kaha tha na,ye guthi jitni dikhti hai,usse zyada uljhi hui hai......beta,hame josh ne nahi hosh se kaam lena padega....jo bhi karna hai,soch samajh kar thande dimag se karo......

DIGVIJAY ne BALBEER se kuch kaha jisse sunkar BALBEER ne pehle kuch kaha par phir DIGVIJAY ko lekar ek taraf chal diya par kuch hi der me dono baap bete wapas aa gaye.dono ke hi chehre par udaasi thi.....

BALBEER- beta,tum ek kaam karo,kuch din ke liye kahin gfhum aao......tumhara mind bhi fresh ho jaayega,uske baad sochenge ki aage kya karna hai.....

DIGVIJAY- thik hai dad..mai thoda bahar se aata hun,2 saal ho gaye apne doston se mile hue.....sabse milta hun aur fir unhi ke saath milkar kuch paln banata hun ki kahan ghumne jaaya jaaye....

BALBEER- thik hai....

DIGVIJAY apne doston se milne nikal gaya....

( issi ke saath DIGVIJAY ka roll 1st CHAPTER ke liye khatm hua...ab aapki inse mulakat 2nd chapter me hogi,aur wo bhi kuch is andaz me jo aapne socha na hoga..... )




IN HEAVEN:-




ST CECILIA- aapka anuman sahi nikla....agar aap samay rehte DHAWALGARH ki seema ko nahi baandhte toh anarth ho jaata....

ST SEBASTIAN- aisa kuch hoga,ye anumaan mera nahi tha.....

ST CECILIA- toh fir.....!!!!!

ST SEBASTIAN- ye LORD OF ANGELS ka yakin tha ki aisa kuch ho sakta hai.GURU VISHAKHT ko nirdesh dene ke baad unhone mujhe bhi kuch nirdesh diye the.....

ST CECILIA- waah.LORD ka prediction power kaafi badh gaya hai...

ST CECILIA- haan,par abhi ye dekhna baaki hai ki BABA VISHAKHT ko jis prediction ki wajah se LORD ne kaam soumpa hai,kya wo bhi sach hota hai.....

ST ALFRICK- haan,mai bhi yeh sab dekhne ke liye atti utsuk bhi hun aur chintit bhi.......najaane aage kya hoga!!!

ST SEBASTIAN- kuch hi der me is ka jawab hum sab ko mil jaayega.......




BACK TO HERO:-




AAAHHHHHHHHHHHH....UMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM......

mai paani ki satah ke upar pada dard se chatpata raha tha....

Kya hua bache????bas,itne me hi dum nikal gaya......

MAI man me- saala,ek toh ye dard,upar se ye nautanki....aur kya keh raha hai,bache,saala.itna bhi nahi pata ki mujhe bacha bol ye khudko bhi wahi bol raha hai...

Darasal jo mere saamne khada tha,wo mai hi tha....samajh nahi aaya na,chaliye aapko samajhata hun.....

Jaisa ki aap sab ko pata hai ki mai is waqt DHAWALI JHEEL ke asli swaroop ke saamne khada hun....

JHEEL ke beecho beech mujhe kuch chamakta hua sa dikha,jo ki asal me meri MANZIL thi, SPEAR.........

ab mai magic ka use toh kar hi sakta tha...

Maine apne dono haath failaye aur hawa me uth gaya....par jaise jaise mai paani ke upar se aage badh raha tha,mere sharir me dard badhta jaa raha tha....par lagbahg 2 saalon se PIDA AVLOKYATI.....mantra padhne ki wajah se mai us dard ko seh paa raha tha....

Kuch hi palon me mai SPEAR ke saamne tha..

MAI- saala,ye kis angle se SPEAR dikh raha hai....!!!!!ye toh talwar se bhi bada hai......

Mere saamne jo SPEAR tha,wo kareeb 4 feet bada tha...golden colour yaane ki sone ke parat me dhaka hua ek khoobsurat sa SPEAR...

SPEAR ko dekh kar ye koi bhi nahi keh sakta tha ki wo carodon saal purana hai..aisa lag raha tha jaise usse abhi abhi banaya gaya hai........aur ek ajeeb baat thi,us SPEAR me ek naam likha hua tha jo samajh me nahi aa raha tha...

Ye baat mere liye kaafi chowkaane waali thi,kyunki mujhe is bramhand me use kiye gaye sabhi language aate the..par ye language unme se nahi tha....

Khair,jaise hi maine us SPEAR ko chune ke liye apna haath aage badhaya,SPEAR me se ek tez bijli nikal kar mujpar padi,mai udta hua paani me jaa gira,

AHHHH

aap soch rahe honge ki paani me girne se dard kyun,wo isiliye kyunki mai paani me dooba nahi,balki uski satah se takrakar paani ke upar hi reh gaya.paani ki satah patthar jaisi mazboit thi...ek toh SPEAR dwara diya gaya dard,uske upar mai kaafi zor se us satah par gira tha,dard toh hoga naa.....

Mai latte patte khada hua aur wapas dard ko control karne ka mantra bolne laga.......

Kaise ho VIKRAM!!!!!!

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abhi mai normal hua hi tha ki awaaz sun jaise hi maine saamne dekha,mujhe ek naya jhatka laga.....mere saamne jo khada tha wo aur koi nahi mai hi tha....

Isiliye maine kaha tha ki mujhe bacha bol ye khudko bhi wahi bol raha hai....

(Saamne waale ko behroopiya likhunga)

BEHROOPIYA- itne hairan kyun ho?

??tumne khud hi mujhe janm diya hai?

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MAI- toh naam kyun le raha hai?

?papa bol naa......aur papa se yaad aaya,teri maa kaun hai.....

BEHROOPIYA- SPEAR......

MAI- matlab kuch bhi naa......

BEHROOPIYA- jaise hi tumne SPEAR ko chua,usne tumhare aks ko,tumhari taakat ko copy kar liya,aur ussise mera janm hua...mujhme bhi wahi sab taakatein hain,jo tumme hai....

MAI-toh ab!!!!!!

BEHROOPIYA ne bina kuch bole mere upqr electric rays chhode jisse maine apna haath aage kar rok diya..par tabhi usne kuch naya sa kiya...usne apne haath ko jisse rays nikal rahe the,usse ghumane laga...uske haath ghumaate hi rays bhi gol ghumte hue mere saare sharir se lipatati chali gayi.....mujhe asahaniya dard hone laga

Tabhi wo BEHROOPIYA tezi se aage badha,aur usne mere chehre par 3,4 punch jad diye....mera dard double ho gaya...

Usne apni ungli ulti ghumayi,dekhte hi dekhte mere sharir se lipti saari electric rays nikal gayi,rays ke nikalre hi usne mere pet pe lagatar 2 punches maare,mai dard se dohrata hua neeche gir gaya.....

BEHROOPIYA- Kya hua bache????bas,itne me hi dum nikal gaya......

(First scene)

Saale se ladhna wakayi mushkil tha,kyunki SPEAR ne usse meri hi kaabiliyat de di thi...

Par tabhi mujhe kuch yaad aaya jo meri BOOK hamesha mujhe kaha karti thi....

BOOK- apne dimag ko apne dil se jodo....tumhe har pareshani se nikalne ki yukti mil jaayegi...

Mujhe yakin tha ki SPEAR mere dimag ko,unme chupi kaabiliyat ko toh padh sakti hai,par mere dil ko nahi,kyunki mera dil mere book ka ghar hai jahan SPEAR nahi pahunch sakti........

Maine apni aankhen band ki aur dhyan lagaya...mujhe mere dil ki dhakane sunayi dene lagi aur agle hi pal mere dhadkano ki awaaz ka thikana badal gaya....ab ye awaaz mere dimag se aa rahi thi...

Maine apni aankhen kholi....dard toh mujhe ab bhi kaafi ho raha tha,par mere chehre par muskaan thi.mujhe uskurata dekh BEHROOPIYE ki muskaan gayab ho gayi......

PIDA PRARABHAM...........

aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..........................nahiiiiii.nahiii................

Ye cheekh meri nahi mere BEHROOPIYA ki thi, wo apna sir pakad kar baith gaya.......darasal jo mantra maine abhi bola tha,wo book ke dwara batate gaye mantra ka kaat tha........PIDA AVLOKYATI mantra mere dimag par asar kar raha tha..aur jo BEHROOPIYA mere saamne khada tha,usme bhi mera hi dimag tha..

mere mantra palatne se mere dimag ka dard uske dimag ne mehsoos karna shuru kar diya.....aur raha mera sawaal,toh mera dimag toh mere dil se jud chuka tha,isiliye mujhe kuch khaas fark nahi pada......

BEHROOPIYA ka dard itna badh gaya ki wo behosh ho gaya.....abhi mai khush ho hi raha tha ki tabhi........

SPEAR me se ek kaali gaadhi roshni nikli aur us BEHROOPIYA me sama gayi.........kuch hi palon me us BEHROOPIYE ka colour badalkar kaala ho gaya.....

BEHROOPIYA ek jhatke me khada ho gaya.....

us behroopiye ka roop toh mera hi tha,par un kaale rays ki wajah se uska roop bhi kaala ho gaya.....

MAI- thanks bol be ehsaan faramosh........mere roop ki wajah se kaala daamar hone ke baad bhi tu handsome dikh raha hai........

par wo BEHROOPIYA kuch bola nahi bas dehekti aankhon se mujhe ghurta gaya...

usne apne haath uthaye....mere dono taraf ka paani hawa me uth gaya......BEHROOPIYE ne paani ki taraf haath kar kuch mantra kaha aur fir apne haath meri taraf kar diye...paani tezi se meri aur badhi aur mujhe apne andar sama le gayii......

jab meri jagah se paani hati toh mai wahan nahi tha,jisse dekhkar BEHROOPIYA hasne laga ki tabhi........

IDHAR DEKH OYE........

BEHROOPIYE ne jab awaaz ki taraf dekha toh shocked ho gaya..usse kuch hi door mai paani ke bane mat ke upar khada tha....

BEHROOPIYE ne apne dono haath se paani ko chu liya...............pure paani me bukamp aane laga.har jagah go gol bhawar banane laga.mai hawa me jahan khada tha,BEHROOPIYE ne thik ussi jagah ke neeche apne haath kiye aur kuch mantra bola....

SOOBH ki awaaz se thik mere neeche se tezi se meri taraf paani se bane TRISHUL aane lage.....ye ek do tarfa humla tha...agar mai khada rehta toh trishul mujhe lagta....aur agar kudata toh bhawar ki chapet me aa jaata.....

maine ek lambi saans li aur kood gaya...

mujhe girta dekh BEHROOPIYE ke kaale chehre ke beech safed daath chamakne lage.....par ye khushi sirf ek pal ki thi....BEHROOPIYE ke khushi waale chehre par ab shocking expressions the....

hua ye ki neech girte waqt maine apne haath tezi se ghumaane shuru kar diye,jisse paani ke thik upar hawa uthne lagi,jisne bhawar ko apne andar sametkar barf bana diya....mai thik us barf ke bade se gole ke upar spin karte hue gira aur khada ho gaya....

MAI- bas bohot hua.......

AB SAMAYA THA BOOK SE SIKHAYE GAYE SABSE KHATARNAAK MANTRO ME SE KUCH KE ISTEMAAL KARNE KA....

maine apne haath aage kiye



PRAJWALAYATI


(SET ON FIRE)



mere mantra bolne se pure paani me aag lag gayi.....aag lagne se BEHROOPIYE ke tale jal gaye,wo turant hawa me uth gaya.....



SHYANDANA VIZASATI....



( AIR DESTROY )



mere ye mantra bolte hi BEHROOPIYE ke aas paas moujud hawa zehrili ho gayi......jab is baat ka ehsaas BEHROOPIYE ko hua toh usne naak band kar li par tab tak wo zehrili hawa uske andar jaa chuki thi....



VAJRAHATA



( STRIKING OF A THUNDERBOLT )



aasmaan kaale pad gaye,aur har taraf se bijli nikalkar BEHROOPIYE ke upar padne lagi......kuch hi palon me BEHROOPIYE ka sharir raakh ho gaya....

maine abhi chain ki saans bhi nahi li thi ki ek nayi chiz hui....SPEAR me se tez roshni nikli aur har taraf faile gayi..kuch hi palon me mera kiya har jaadu khatm ho gaya...

mera jaadu khatm kar SPEAR ek baar fir chamki,par mere chehre par bhi halki smile aa gayi...mujhe pata tha ki ab kya hone waala hai....

SPEAR ki roshni se 4 BEHROOPIYE baahar aaye aur mere saamne aakar khade ho gaye.......wo chaaron ek tak mujhe dekhne lage.......

jo maine socha tha,wo toh hone hi waala tha,par saath me kuch aur bhi hua jo maine socha nahi tha.......

ek BEHROOPIYE ne baaki teeno ko kuch ishara kiya,teeno gaayab ho gaye.....



WAHIN DUSRI TARAF:-




ABHI..............



BABA VISHAKHT dhyan awastha me DHAWALI JHEEL ka scene dekh rahe the..wahan us BEHROOPIYE ne apne teeno saathiyon ko jaane ka ishara kiya,yahan BABA VISHAKHT ke mooh se ABHI nikla jo AKSHAANT ne sun liya aur apna turant ek mantra padha aur gayab hokar wapas BABA VISHAKHT ke paas pahunch gaya....

BABA VISHAKHT ki aankh khul gayi....

BABA VISHAKHT ne kuch mantra bola..unke saamne ek bangla ban gaya..

BABA VISHAKHT- jaldi se inko lekar andar jao aur taiyar rehna...

TEENO- jee gurudev....

teeno kuch logon ko lekar us bangle ke andar chale gaye.....




BACK 2 HERO:-



teeno BEHROOPIYON ke gayab hote hi SPEAR ek baar fir se chamki aur usse ek bijli se bani rassi nikli aur mujhe lapetathi chali gayiiiiii.........

AAAHHHHHHHHH.................

tabhi ek aur cheez hui....mere andar se kitab nikli aur gayab ho gayi.........mera dard isiliye hi control me tha kyunki wo kitab mere dil se connected thi..uske jaate hi mere dil ka connection mere dimag se toot gaya aur mujhe asahaniya dard hone laga...

BEHROOPIYA- waah,tera aakhri waqt aate hi wo book ne bhi tera saath chhod diya......
ab yahan tu marega aur wahan tera PARIWAR......chal tere marte marte tujhe tere pariwar ki mout bhi dikhata hun...

BEHROOPIYE ne apne haath ghumaye,saamne hawa me ek badi si screen ban gayi....




WAHIN DUSRI TARAF:-



meri kitab gayab hokar ek jagah pahunchi........us jagah par koi soya hua tha. book se ek roshni nikli aur saamne waale par padi..book aur wo saksh gayab ho gaye....




BACK TO HERO:-

BEHROOPIYA- kyun,maza aa raha hai!!!arre tujhe kaise maza aayega....tu toh khud marne waala hai...haaaahaaaahaaaa..

mere saamne screen par mere teeno GURU,MOKALSAR,SHAILA aur AKSHAANT teeno BEHROOPIYON se lad rahe the......

kuch der tak mere teeno guru un sab ka saamna karte rahe par wo BEHRUPIYE zyada taakatwar the..unhone mere teeno guruon ke shastra gira diye..

shashtra girte hi mere teeno guru gayab ho gaye.......

BEHROOPIYA- arre yaar,tere gharwaalon ke body guards toh bohot phattu nikle..khair,apni jaan kisko pyaari nahi hoti....tu aakhri baar apne apno ko dekh le..

un teeno BEHROOPIYON ne mere saare pariwaar waalon ko ek jhatke me maar diya tha......unka kaam khatm ho chuka tha.wo wapas gayab hokar SPEAR me sama gaye...

isse aage mai dekh nahi paaya aur behosh ho gaya.....

BEHROOPIYA dheere dheere chalte hue mere paas aa raha tha


KI TABHI:-


ek tez roshni hui.jaise hi roshni BEHROOPIYE par padi wo udte hui peeche jaakar gira...

us ROSHNI ke beech me se meri kitab nikli par wo akeli nahi thi uske saath koi tha...

KITAB jisse laayi thi usse thik mere baaju me lita diya.book se ek aur baar roshni nikli,us shakhsh ka haath apne aap hi mere haathon k upar aa gaya....

jaise hi hum dono ke haath mile,mere sharir ko tez jhatke lagne lage..wo bijli ki rassi jo mere sharir ko baandhe hue thi,ek jhatke me toot gayi.....

kuch der tak meri bdy jhatke khaati rahi,fir shaant pad gayi........

BEHROOPIYA jahan jaakar gira tha,wahin se aankh faade ye sab dekh raha tha....jaise hi wo rassi tuti aur mere sharir ko jhatke lagne band hue,wo uthkar mere paas aaya,aur jaise hi usne mere saath waale ka chehra dekha,usse mujhse bhi zyada bada jhatka laga....



BEHROOPIYA- AVANTIKAAAAAAAA...........



ji haan doston,BOOK aur kisi ko nahi AVANTIKA ko lekar aayi thi...

jaisa ki maine bataya tha ki BEHROOPIYE ne mera dimag padha tha,isiliye meri life me aaye har shaksh ko jaanta tha...

BEHROOPIYA- ye kaise ho sakta hai...!!!!ek maamuli si ladki ye sab kaise kar sakti hai...

BOOK- mai batati hu..ye ladki aur koi nahi VIKRAM yaani LORD OF ANGELS ki shakti hai..iske rehte koi bhi unka kuch nahi bigad sakta......

isse pehle ki BEHROOPIYA kuch kehta,BOOK AVANTIKA ko lekar gayab ho gayi.....

BEHROOPIYA- isse yahin khatm kar deta hun.......kissa hi khatm...

mai abhi bhi behosh hi pada tha.BEHROOPIYE ne apna haath aage kiya,uske haath me ek talwar aa gayi.....wo aage badah aur usne mere gardan ko nishana banakar talwar chala di...

aahhhhhhhhhh........

ye awaaz BEHROOPIYE ki thi....hua ye ki jaise hi BEHROOPIYE ne apna haath upar uthaya,mujhe hosh aa gaya.maine bhi turant ek talwar ka awahan kiya,aur isse pehle ki BEHROOPIYA talwar chalaye,maine apni talwar usske pet me ghusa di....

aur jaise hi wo dard se tadapta hua aage jhuka,maine ek jhatke me uske pet se talwar nikali,aur uski gardan uda di....

mai tezi se utha aur SPEAR ki taraf chal diya.......mujhe aage badhne me kaafi pareshani ho rahi thi.aisa lag raha tha jaise koi mujhe peeche kheench raha hai par mai rooka nahi aur aage badhta raha..

wahin jaise jaise mai SPEAR ke kareeb jaa raha tha,SPEAR tez chamakne lagi thi.....

aur fir achanak..........

MERE SHARIR PAR ANGELS WAALE WHITE KAPDE AA GAYE THE..MAI HAWA ME UTHNE LAGA THA.....AUR MERE ANDAR SE KAI ROOHEN EK EK BAAD EK BAAHAR AANE LAGI THI........

hua ye ki mai jab SPEAR aur mere beech bas kuch metres ka faasla bhar bacha tha,toh wo SPEAR ek jhatke me aayi aur mere andar sama gayi....ab mai apne LORD OF ANGEL ke get up me zaroor tha,par mujhe bohot zyada dard ho raha tha......

ki tabhi mere saamne ek aur roshni hui aur meri book mere saamne prakat hui.....book ke saamne aate hi wo SPEAR mere andar se baahar aa gayi...

maine us SPEAR ko pakda aur usse dekhne laga.uspe jo naam likha tha,wo mit chuka tha,aur ab uspe ek naya naam likha raha tha...........VIKRAM............

par purane naam ke mitne se pehle maine usse padh liya tha.ab wo naam saaf ENGLISH me likha tha...................ASMODEUS.....................

mujhe is naam ke maalik ke baare me bhi pata chal chuka tha...

MAI (man me )- BOHOT JALDI MULAKAT HOGI MERE BHAI............

wahin mere saamne meri book apne aap khul gayi aur wo SPEAR uske andar ek taswir ke roop me chhap gayi.....

BOOK- kya mujhe aapke andar samane ki ijazat hai...!!!!

SPEAR ki taswir chhapte hi book se aawaz aayi....

MAI- ijazat hai.......

mere haan bolte hi wo book ek jhatke me mere andar sama gayi.....mera pura sharir glow karne laga..meri aankhen bhi puri safed ho gayiiii.......maine upar dekha,teeno GOD'S MESSENGER HEAVEN'S GATE par haath jode khade the....

mai dheere dheere neeche aane laga..jab mai neeche aaya toh mere saamne 1000 HOLY SPIRITS the.. jinhe maine mukt karaya tha,wo bhi mere saamne khade the...

mere unke saamne aate hi wo sab apne ghutno par jhuk gaye.......

MAI- khade ho jaiye...

IST HOLY SPIRIT-hame mukti dilane ke liye apka koyi koti dhanyawaad...aur shama kariyega,hum aapko apni taakat nahi de paayenge....

MAI- kya mai iski wajah jaan sakta hun!!!!

2ND HOLY SPIRIT- hamare bandi bante hi humne apni taakat ko dusre grah par chupa diya tha......par badkismati se hamai taakat bhi dushit ho gayi hai,isiliye hum usse wapas bahi bula sakte....

MAI- kaun se grah par aapki shaktiyan hai aur wo dushit kaise ho gayin...

1ST HOLY SPIRIT- hamari shaktiyan GLUTO grah ke gufa me DIAMONDS ke roop me hain par do kaali shaktiyon ke bhakton ne un diamonds se shakti haasil kar usse bhi dushit kar diya hai....

MAI- aap fikr na karen,mai khud jaakar un shaktiyon ko punah shudh kar prapt karunga..ab aap sab kya karenge!!!!

1ST HOLY SPIRIT- humari aatma ab kahin aur nahi reh sakti.hum sab wapas GOD ke sharan me chale jaayenge.....

MAI- thik hai..bas 1 minute rukiye.....
BABA VISHAKHT prakat ho.....

mere awaaz dete hi BABA VISHAKHT AKSHAANT,MOKALSAR aur SHAILA ke saath prakat hue......

MAI- guruji,mai aapko is duniya ke mayajaal se mukt karta hun...ab aap GOD ke sharan me jaa sakte hain.......

maine apna haath aage kiya,mere haathon se safed roshni nikli aur baba pe padi,unka sharir parchai me badal gaya.....

maine upar dekha,ST SEBASTIAN ne HEAVEN ka darwaza khol diya.....saare HOLY SPIRITS ek ke baad ek hawa me uthkar HEAVEN me jaane lage....

BABA VISHAKHT- tumhara guru hona,yahi mere liye mokhsh se kam nahi tha putra..

AKSHAANT,tum teeno ke man me jo bhi sawaal hai,wo VIKRAM se puch lena...mere jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai.....

BABA VISHAKHT bhi HOLY SPIRITS ke saath hawa me uth HEAVEN chale gaye......

guruji ko jaate dekh meri aankh se do bund aansu nikal kar gir gaye aakhir GURUJI mere pita tulya tha...par mai khush tha ki wo jo chahte the,wo unhe mil gaya....

mai teeno ko le gayab ho apne ghar ke peeche waale jungle me pahuncha...jo mayavi bungla guruji ne banaya tha,wo gayab ho chuka tha...

kuch der tak hamare beech shanti rahi..sabhi ko guruji ke jaane ka dukh tha..

MAI- kaafi thand hai yahan!!!!

Is waqt subah ke 7.45 ho rahe the...DHAWALGARH pahadi ilake me basa sheher tha...aur uske upar hum pahad me the....yahan thand kuch zyada hi thi....mai toh is kadakti thand me bhi normal hi tha,par baat shuru karne ke liye kuch toh kehna hi tha....

SHAILA- hamare grah me yoh pure saal isse zyada thand rehti hai....

MOKALSAR- sahi kaha....yahan ka mousam toh hamare liye normal hai...

Ab mahoul kuch normal tha,toh mai sidhe mudde par aa gaya.

MAI- hmm.toh kya sawal hain aap sab ke....!!!

AKSHAANT- yahi ki aapki family ke clones ka bhram paida karne ke liye unke baalon ki kya awashyakta thi....wo toh sirf spell bolke hi kiya jaa sakta tha..

Ji haan doston, un BEHROOPIYON ne jinko maara tha,wo mere pariwaar ke clones the...

MAI- ye mat bhuliye ki mera saamna kisse hua tha....mere pariwaar waalon ke baal ki wajah se jo clone banaye gaye the wo unke originals se kam asli nahi the.agar maine ya guruji ne aise hi clone bana diye hote toh SPEAR dwara bheje gaye BEHROOPIYE unhe pehchaan jaate....

MOKALSAR- ab hamare liye kya aadesh hai...!!!!


MAI- aadesh nahi nivedan hai.wo bhi mai tab hi bataunga jab aap teeno mukhse pehle jaisa bartav karenge.....aap teeno ki di hui shiksha se hi mai ye chunouti paar kar paaya hun...

SHAILA- bolo fir..tumhare liye toh hum jaan bhi de denge...

Mai- aisa kabhi nahi hoga.mai bas aapse ye chahta hun ki *********************
AKSHAANT- bas itni si baat....ho jaayega.

MAI- toh ghar chalen!!!!!

Teeno ne jaise hi haan kaha,wo chownk gaye...

Kyunki unke mundi haan me hilate hi hamari jagah badal gayi.hum mere room me the.....



IM MY ROOM:-




RONIT- yaar tu kaisa clone hai.....tujhe pata hi nahi ki V.J thik hai bhi ya nahi....

Par jawab me mera clone bas muskuraya aur gayab ho gaya...

RONIT- ab ye kahan gaya?

ANJALI- kahin V.J koi musibat me toh nahi hai...!!!

MAI- tumhare jaise doston ke hote V.J ko kuch nahi ho sakta......

Awaaz sun jab dono palte,mujhe saamne dekh dono turant bed se kude aur mere gale lag gaye.....

RONIT- bhai tu thik toh hai naa....!!!

MAI- tere saamne hun dekh le...

ANJALI- yaar hum dono itne tention me the.....

Hum teeno ki kuch der tak yunhi emotional baatein hoti rahi...

MAI- baaki baatein 2 mahine ke baad....

ANJALI- 2 mahine matlab...tu fir kahin jaa raha hai...!!

MAI- mai nahi tum dono jaa rahe ho.......

DONO- matlab!!!!!

MAI- maine tum dono ko kaha tha na ki wo tonic mai kisi khaas wajah se tum dono ko pilata tha...

DONO- haan....

MAI- wo tonic mai tum dono ko issi din ke liye pilata tha..

Us tonic ki wajah se tum dono ke body ke cells badal gaye hain....ab tumhare body ki banavat alag hai....tum dono ke andar 100 insaano se zyaada talat hai....par itna kaafi nahi hai..tumhe aur shaktishali hona padega....

Uske liye tum dono ko in teeno ke saath inke grah jaana higa...wahan tumhari training hogi......

RONIT- ye zaroori hai kya!!!

MAI- agar meri aage ki chunoutiyon me tum dono mere saath rehna chahte ho toh fir ye training zaroori hai...

RONIT- gharwaalon ko kya kahenge!!!!!

MAI- wo mai sambhal lunga.....

ANJALI- tu bhi saath chal naa...

MAI- fir tum dono thik se concentrate nahi kar paoge.....

Ab aur koi sawal nahi.......

Chalo sab baahar.....

Saare gharwaale bahar hi baithe the.......

MAI- hello everyone....

SAB- hello bacho..

MOM- nashta lagaun!!!!!

MAI- abhi nahi.abhi mujhe aap sab se kuch important baat karni hai...

SAB- haan bolo.....

MAI- RONIT aur ANJALI ko 2 months ke liye meri jaisi training lene ke liye jaaana hoga, wo bhi abhi.....

Meri baat sun shocked ho gaye....isse pehle ki koi kuch kehta..

Mai- ye GURUJI ke orders hain....wo toh kisi urgent kaam se gaye hain,unhone mujhe aap sab ko batane ko kaha hai.aur ye bhi kaha hai ki agar on dono ne training nahi li,toh inke saath kuch galat ho sakta hai...(jhooth)
Meri baat sun sabhi chownk gaye..mom dad dono jaannte the ki BABA VISHAKHT ki baat galat nahi ho sakti...

Mom dad ne ye baat jaise hi sabko batayi,sabhi khatre ki baat sun dar gaye aur dono ke jaane ke liye haan keh diya...

Aur 1 ghante me RONIT aur ANJALI bags pack kar nikal gaye..........




AT NIGHT IN MY BEDROOM:-



mujhe ASMODEUS ke baare me kaafi kuch pata chal gaya tha....kamsekam itna ki wo kya tha aur DEVIL kaise ban gaya.....mujhe ye bhi pata chal gaya tha ki meri SUPRAGUPTA BOOK GOD ke aansuon se kaise bani..

ASMODEUS ki galat harkaton ki wajah se GOD nebusse khud se door toh kar diya par tha toh wo bhi unka ansh,unka bachha hi..ussi gum me GOD ke aankhon se aansun mikle,aur aansu nikalte waqt jo bhi gyan GOD ke dimag me ghum raha tha,wo sab bhi aansu me badal gaya..un aansuon ne ek book ka roop le liya aur sadiyon se apne uttaradhikaari ka intazar kar rahi thi......

Mere roop me uska intazar khatm hua.....

Par ek baat meri samajh me nahi aa rahi thi...wo ye ki bhale hi ASMODEUS negative tha,par shakti toh usme bhi us waqt mere jitni hi thi...phir wo SPEAR uski kyun naa ho saki.....aur is SPEAR ne mujhe kyun chuna...aakhir mujhme aur ASMODEUS me kya fark tha....

jaise hi ye khayal mere man me aaya,mere andar se mere book ki aawaz aayi...



AAPME aur ASMODEUS ME SIRG EK HI FARK HAI....


MAI- WO KYA!!!!!!

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BOOK - NAZARIYA, ATTITUDE........













FIRST CHAPTER KE LIYE ITNA HI......







AAPKA APNA V.J.....

Behtreen bhai mohini sa asar kar gayi aapki story mantarmugadh kar dia. Ab avantikaa ka dekhna hoga aur sath me balbeer and sons ka kia banta hain

 

[KOHINOOR]

Marvelous update
Dil khush ho gya bhai

 

[23n24]

Maindblowing fantastic update.

 

[Raguhalkal]

Hahahaha........hota hai brother...apne aap ko chota mat samjhiye..is kahani ka koi bhi reader ye nahi bata sakta ki aage kya twist aane waale hain... toh aap kaise kisise piche hue.infact aap ek behtareen reader hai kyunki aap is kahani ke ganit ko samajhne ki koshish nahi karte balki bas updates enjoy karte hain...

Ye best tarike ka story padhne ka...aage bhi saath bane rahiye

Bilkul

 

[luv4sale696969]

Bhai story wo hi bhadiya hoti hai jo writer apni pasand aur khushi ke liye likhata hai.
Jab writer ko apni hi story ya cherecters se pyar nahi hoga to dusro ko kaise hoga.
Is story ka yahi thrill hai ki ab aage kya hoga.
Pahle mai bhi sujhaw deta tha ya guess katra tha aage kya hoga per ab maine band kar diya hai.
Jab ham anischitatao me jite hai aur vartman ko jo ki saamane hai enjoy karte hai tab hi khush aur utsahit rah pate hai.
Jab pata ho aage kya hona hai to fir life ho ya story koi thrill nahi.
Bas ek request hai ki jab bhi story complete ho to phir uske baad iske saare cherecters ki timeline ek baar jarur batana.
Agar beelzebub vj se hajaaron ya sakdon saal bada hai. To usme wo maturity kyon nahi hai wo itne saalon ka anubhav ka kya hua.
Aisa hi dusare kirdaron ke saath bhi hai.

What a comment... I agree with you in toto...

 

[A Vampire]

Faadu update bhai....

 

[Acme]

Excellent update bhai... thrilling adventure.... keep writing...

 

[RAAZ]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI KING SOLOMON AUR UNKI WIFE KO BHAVISHYAVAANI KE BAARE ME PATA CHALTA HAI WAHIN DIGVIJAY VIKRAM SE AVANTIKA KO APNI G.F BATAKAR INTRODUCE KARATA HAI....
AB AAGE.......









CHAPTER-2:-







( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )








UPDATE - 53:-







PLANET- EARTH








PLACE- BALBEER MANSION.....






kya hua dad?????aap kuch pareshan dikh rahe hain!!!!!

morning ka waqt hai.DIGVIJAY ready hokar jaise hi apne room se baahar aaya,saamne hall me apne dad ko akele baith kar kuch sochte paaya...

BALBEER ke chehre par pareshani saaf dikh rahi thi jisse DIGVIJAY ne bhaamp liya.....

lambi saans chhodte hue.......

BALBEER- haan beta,pareshan toh mai hun.....

DIGVIJAY- dad,aap us VIKRAM ki tention chhod dijiye.mai usse handle kar lunga....aur ye tention bhi chhod dijiye ki bhai ki tarah mai bhi josh me aakar kuch galat kadam utha lunga....

mai jo bhi kar raha hun aur aage jo bhi karunga,soch samajh kar karunga.............

BALBEER- mai jaanta hun beta,tu sab sambhaal lega...

DIGVIJAY- than,whats the problem dad????

BALBEER- mujhe tere shakti ki fikr ho rahi hai.........

DIGVIJAY- matlab!!!!!

BALBEER- tune jo shakti praapt ki hai,usse tere andar pahunchkar kaali shakti me badal jaani chahiye thi.....aisa hua bhi hai,par puri tarike se nahi....

tu is bramhaand ka pehla aisa DEVIL hai jiske andar black ke saath WHITE ENERGY ke bhi lakshan hain.........


PEHLA NAHI DUSRA.................


awaaz sun kar dono baap bete chownk gaye..par unke chownkne ki wajah ek nahi do thi......

1ST- BALBEER bohot ache se jaanta tha ki ye awaaz kisiki hai.wo bina saamne dekhe hi fauran apne ghutno par baith gaya....

par DIGVIJAY pehli baar apne saamne khade shaksh ko dekh raha tha....wo apni jagah par khada apne saamne khade shaksh ko dekhta raha....

haan ek baat thi,DIGVIJAY apne saamne khade shaksh ki pernanality se kaafi impress hua tha...

2ND-balbeer aur DIGVIJAY ab apne ghar par nahi the.jaise hi unke kaano me awaaz padi,unki jagah bhi badal gayi.....jagah kya planet hi badal gaya..




PLANET- MONSLICKEL




PLACE- ASMODEUS PALACE




DIGVIJAY- kaun ho tum?????aur hum yahan kaise aa gaye!!!!

DIGVIJAY ne roubdaar awaaz ke saath bola..........

CHATAAKKKHHHHHHHHHH......................

ye thappad ASMODEUS ne DIGVIJAY ko nahi maari thi,balki BALBEER ne maari thi......

BALBEER- gustaakh...tu jaanta bhi hai ki tu kiske saamne unchi awaaz me baat kar raha hai......ye hamare DEVIL LORD hain......inse hi hum saare DEVIL'S ka astitva hai.......

mahamahim.....ye abhi bacha hai...please isse maaf kar dijiye.......

BALBEER ne wapas apne ghutno pe baith haath jod ye baat kahi.........

ASMODEUS ne BALBEER ko haath se ishara kar khade hone ko kaha...

wahin DIGVIJAY ko BALBEER ka usse maarna bardasht nahi ho raha tha......bhale hi BALBEER uska baap tha,par ye thappad usse khudka apmaan lag raha tha......

ye parivartan DIGVIJAY ke andar moujud white aur black energies ke lagatar aapas me takraane ki wajah se aa raha tha......is takraav se DIGVIJAY ka ehem,uska ghamand uske rishton par bhaari pad raha tha......

ASMODEUS- apmaan,mrityu se bada SHRAAP hota hai DIGVIJAY..........

abhi DIGVIJAY apne gusse ko kaabu me karne ki koshish kar hi raha tha ki ASMODEUS ki baat ne uske ghusse ki aag ko hawa de di....

wahin DIGVIJAY ke baaju me khada BALBEER ASMODEUS ki baat ka matlab samajhne me laga hua tha.....

AAAAHHHHHHHHH.YEEEEE.........KYAAAAA.................KAR..............DIYA..........MAI T....E.....R.....AAAA..............BA......A.......P..... HU.........N...........AAAHHHHHHHHHHH........

isse pehle ki BALBEER ASMODEUS ki baat ka matlab usse puch paata,DIGVIJAY ke haathon me ek aag ka gola dikhne laga,jisse usne apne pita ke upar fek diya......

DIGVIJAY ke andar ab apaar shakti thi....uske dwara kiya gaya koi bhi humla, koi bhi vaar pehle se ab 1000 guna zyada shaktishaali tha........

BALBEER fati aankhon me aasharya aur dard liye jal gaya....uske jalte hi uske sharir se ek kaali rooh nikli aur ASMODEUS ki taraf chal di par ASMODEUS ne us rooh ko haath dikha kar rookne ka aadesh diya...rooh wahin rook gayi.........

ASMODEUS- mere paas aao DIGVIJAY.....

ASMODEUS ke bulane par jaise jaise DIGVIJAY aage badhne laga,usse aisa laga jaise wo kisi shakti ke samandar ke paas jaa raha hai...

DIGVIJAY is waqt ASMODEUS se kuch 4o feet ki doori par tha....abhi DIGVIJAY ne kuch 20 feet ka faasla hi tay kiya tha,ki wo thakne laga aur agle 10 feet tak aage chalne ke baad toh uske sharir me taakat hi nahi bachi..wo wahin baith gaya aur zor zor se haafne laga.....

ASMODEUS khada hua aur chalte hue DIGVIJAY ke paas pahunch gaya.......

ASMODEUS- nadi kitni bhi badi kyun na ho jaaye,usse ye nahi bhoona chahiye ki uska astitva samandar se hi hai......

DIGVIJAY ko ASMODEUS ki baat ka matlab pata chal gaya tha,aur in kuch hi palon me usse ASMODEUS ki aseem shaktiyon ka bhi abhaas ho gaya tha......

aur pehli baar DIGVIJAY ka sir ASMODEUS ke saamne samman me jhuk gaya.....

ASMODEUS ne DIGVIJAY ko khade hone ko kaha..DIGVIJAY khada toh ho gaya par ab bhi uska sir neeche hi tha....

ASMODEUS ne DIGVIJAY ke sir par haath rakha.....ASMODEUS ko GLUTO ke gufa me kya kya hua,wo sab dikhne laga jisse dekhkar ASMODEUS ko shock laga...

ASMODEUS ko shock lagna koi chhoti baat nahi thi......bohot kam aisi cheeze hongi jo ASMODEUS nahi jaanta tha......

ASMODEUS ne DIGVIJAY ke sir par haath yunhi nahi rakha tha...iske peeche ki wajah thi ab se kuch lamhe pehle DIGVIJAY dwara prakat ki hui agni.....

nahi samjhe naa,chaliye samjhata hun......

jaisa ki aapko pata hai ki DEVILS ki ennery balck energy kehlaati hai....DEVILS jo bhi spells bolte hain,ya soch kar istemaal me laate hain,us spell se nikli koi bhi cheez,bhale wo paani ho,ya aag sab ke andar ek black dhuan hota hai jo har koi nahi dekh sakta...

par ASMODEUS ki baat alag thi...jaise hi DIGVIJAY ke haath me mout ki agni aayi,us agni ke andar bhi black dhuan tha,par sirf aadha..us black dhuen ko ek white dhuan ne jo ki white energy ka pratik hai,apne me lapeta hua tha......

issi wajah se BALBEER ka sharir kuch zyada hi jaldi jal gaya....ye baat ASMODEUS ne dekh li thi,isiliye usne iska raaz jaanane ke liye DIGVIJAY ke sir par haath rakha tha...

ASMODEUS ( man me )- itni badi shakti mere nazaron se kaise chhup gayi......

ASMODEUS ne phir se apni aankhen band ki,par agle hi pal uski aankhen naa sirf khuli balki aur faile gayin....

ASMODEUS ( man me )- ye sab ho kya raha hai!!! na toh mujhe un diamonds ke shakti shroth ka pata chal raha hai aur na hi mai un diamonds ko dekh paa raha hun......

ASMODEUS ne apne dimag ko jhatka aur apne man me 3 naam liye....

agle hi pal ASMODEUS ke saamne baaki ke teeno devils sir jhukaye prakat hue....

ASMODEUS- ABRAXAS,CECILA,ABBADON...aaj se tum teeno ka master DIGVIJAY hai.......

teeno DIGVIJAY ke saamne apne ghutno ke bal baith gaye...

DIGVIJAY ASMODEUS se ye honour paake khush ho gaya.....

ASMODEUS ne apne haath aage kiye,BALBEER ki rooh jisme uski puri shakti thi,wo aage badhi aur DIGVIJAY ke andar sama gayi....

DIGVIJAY ki aankhen ek pal ke liye black ho gayi but than black to normal......ab usse apne andar aur zyada shakti mehsoos ho rahi thi....

DIGVIJAY- DEVIL LORD,itne samman ke diye shukriya...mai koshish karunga ki aapne jo samman aur sthaan mujhe diya hai,mai uske laayak ban sakun.....

ASMODEUS- bas apne upar insaano waali kamzori,BHAWANA, mat aane dena......tumhari shakti badhti jaayegi........

aur ek baat,tum jisse badla lena chaahte hon,usse sidhe takraane ki bhool mat karna.....

jis raaste ko tumne chuna hai,sayyam rakh ussi pe aage badhte jao.......ho sakta hai tum kaamiyab ho jaao......

DIGVIJAY- jaisa aap kahen DEVIL LORD.......

DIGVIJAY ne apna sir jhukar ye baat kahi,par jaise hi DIGVIJAY ne apna sir uthaya,wo fir chownk gaya......kyunki wo wapas apne ghar ke hall me khada tha.....

usne ghadi dekhi,wo college ke liye 1.30 ghanta late ho chuka tha...uska mobile saamne table par pada tha.usne jab apna mobile dekha toh usme AVANTIKA ke 4 miss calls the.......

DIGVIJAY ( man me )- yaar mujhe toh AVNI ko pick karne jaana tha.....ab tak toh college ke aadhe lectures khatm hone waale honge...kya karun!!!!jaaun ki nahi.....chala jaata hun.....

aaj mera bhi first day hai aur uska bhi....pehle din apne sabse pyaare dushman se ek mulakat toh banti hi hai naa......

DIGVIJAY muskurata hua college ke liye nikal gaya....




WAHIN DUSRI TARAF:-




PLANET- GLUTO




PLACE- BATTLE FIELD..




TIKSNA DEHA BHAVATI..............

( IRON BODY )


tannnn,tannnn,tannnnn...............teeno yodha kuch der tak prahar karte rahe,par saamne waale par kuch asar na hote dekh teeno peeche hat gaye......

asar hota bhi kaise,saamne waale ne apne sharir ko lohe me jo badal liya tha.....

is waqt GLUTO ke battle field me jahan competition hota tha,wahan yudh spraddha ka finals chal raha tha....

chaar yodha jo ki finals me pahunche the,unme se ek ne baaki teeno ko ek saath chunouti di thi....

shuruat me wahan moujud crowd un teeno ko jo ek taraf se lad rahe the,un teeno ko hi cheer up kar rahi thi......

jisne teeno ko chunouti di thi,usse bas us battle field ke ek chhor me khade 2 bande hi cheer up kar rahe the.....

par jaise jaise charon ka yudh aage badhta gaya,darshako ka fav bhi badal gaya.ab har taraf bas us akele ke liye hi cheer up ho raha tha...

wo teeno kuch der tak kuch plan banate rahe,fir teeno ek dusre se alag ho gaye.teeno ne us akele ko teen taraf se gher liya tha........


DALANA YANTRAM.....

( CRUSHING MACHINE )

VEDHANA YANTRAM.....

( HOLE DRILLING MACHINE )

VAHALA KULIKAM.....

( HUNTER OF CURRENT )



teeno ne apne apne mantra bole...ek ke haath me lohe ko crush karne ka yantra aa gaya,dusre ke haath me lohe ko hole karne ka aur teesre ke haath me ek chaabuk aa gaya jisse current nikal raha tha....

teeno apne apne yantra liye aage badhe.....

us akele ne apne haath aage kar talwar ka awahan kiya.agle hi pal uske haathon me ek talwar chamakne lagi......

us shaksh ne jo do yodha uske saamne aur right taraf se aa rahe the,unke saamne tezi se alag alag angles me flip maarni shuru kar di.........

uski tezi wakayi kaafi zyada thi....wo dono yoddha ye dekh hadbada gaye...dono apni jagah bhulkar ek saath ho gaye....

SOOOBHHHHH......... AHHHHHHHHH......

wo dono kuch samajh paate usse pehle hi us shaksh ne tezi se dono ke kalai ko nishana bana kar apni talwar do baar chala di.....

un dono ke yantra unki kalai sahit zamin par gir gaye.......

ki tabhi left side ke yodha ne jo ki kuch paas aa chuka tha,usne us shaksh ke upar apna hunter ghuma diya....

AAHHHHHHHHH...............

ye aawaz us hunter waale bande ke mooh se hi nikli thi..hua ye ki jaise hi us hunter waale yodha ne apna hunter ghumaya,saamne waale shaksh ne JAL PRAKATAM ka mantra bol diya....

us shaksh ke saamne paani ki ek diwal ban gayi.wo current waala hunter sidha us diwal se takraya aur jaise ki hum sab jaante hain ki
water is a good conducter of heat and electricity,yahan bhi wahi hua,hunter ke paani chhute hi us yoddha ko ek zor ka jhatka laga aur wo door feka gaya.....

do toh pehle hi gir chuke the...teeno ne ek saath apni haar kobool kar li.

ki tabhi................

waah,bohot khub,bohot achche......lagta hai pichli baar ki haar se sabak lekar tumne kaafi abhyas kiya hai......tumhare yudh kala me kaafi nikhaar aa gaya hai.....hum ye dekh kar bohot khush hue SHAILA......

ji haan doston,ye aur koi nahi hamari SHAILA hi thi..aur jo do log usse support kar rahe the wo AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR the...

darasal hua yun ki VIKRAM ke dwara teeno ke shakti chakra ko badhane ke baad jab wo apne grah pahunche,teeno ko apne andar kaafi furti mehsoss ho rahi thi...

toh teeno ne sabse pehle abhyas kiya...aur pehle hi abhyaas satra me teeno ne apne yudh kala ko teen guna tak nikhar liya....

SHAILA itna kuch achanak hote dekh kaafi excited ho gayi aur usne AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR ko yahan matlab GLUTO chalne ko kaha....

dono SHAILA ki baat taal nahi paaye aur yahan aa gaye....

wahin NISHKALIKA ussi maidan ke upar hawa me khadi thi aur wahan moujud sabhi uske samman me jhuke hue the......

SHAILA- kaisi ho NISHKALIKA.....

apna naam yun sun NISHKALIKA ko ghussa toh bohot aaya par usne khudko control kar liya....

NISHKALIKA- hum tumhare is naye avtar se bohot khush hue SHAILA...hum tumhe apni sena me senapati banana chahte hain.....

SHAILA- par riwaz toh kuch aur hai naa.jo bhi is pratiyogita ko jeetata hai,usse toh tumse chunouti milti hai naa...

NISHKALIKA- tum humse ladhna chahti ho!!!!

SHAILA- sirf ladungi hi nahi,haraungi bhi...

NISHKALIKA- hahahahaha.....toh isiliye wapas aayi ho tum.pichli baar ki haar aur uske baad hue apmaan ka badla lene....

hume pata hai,ki samjhane se toh tum samjhogi nahi.....par tumse ladhkar hum apne star ko girana nahi chaahte.

chalo,hum tumhe mouka dete hai...karlo waar humpe.hum bhi toh dekhen,tum kitna sikh kar aayi ho.....

NISHKALIKA ke ye sab bolte hi SHAILA ne kuch bhaalon aur khadag ka awahan kiya aur apne haath aage kar diye......

khadag aur bhaale tezi se NISHKALIKA ki taraf badh gaye.......

par NISHKALIKA yunhi bina hile dule khadi rahi.....

par ye kya,jaise hi bhaale aur khadag NISHKALIKA ke paas pahunche SHAILA,MOKALSAR aur AKSHAANT ke mooh khul gaye..

darasal NISHKALIKA ke paas pahunchte hi saare shatra phool ban gaye aur NISHKALIKA ke upar phoolon ki baarish si ho gayi....

aap sab ye toh samajh hi agye honge ki ye sab un diamonds ki shakti ki wajah se hua hai...

par is wajah ke peeche bhi ek wajah hai aur wo ye hai ki is BRAMHAAND ke kisi bhi grah me bane koi bhi hathiyaar jis bhi dhaatu se bane hain,unme DHAWALI jheel ki mitti ki parat bhi chaddi hui hai,joki HOLY SPIRITS ke parikrama karne ki wajah se unki energies ke saath saath har grah me pahunchi hai.....

NISHKALIKA- tum dono iske saathi ho naa..tum dono bhi koshish karke dekh lo.....

AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR ne bhi alag alag shashtra NISHKALIKA ki taraf feke par sab beasar.....

NISHKALIKA- arre kitna ladoge,thak jaoge....

SHAILA- hum tumhe maar kar hi yahan se jaayenge NISHKALIKA......

NISHKALIKA ne bina kuch bole apne dono haathon ki mutthi banayi aur unhe halka halka masalna shuru kiya....

AAAHHHHHHHHH.........

NISHKALIKA ke aisa karte hi MOKALSAR aur AKSHAANT dono ko aisa lagne laga jaise koi unki body nichod raha hai....dono ke mooh se dard bhari aah nikal gayi....

AAAHHHH.....chhodo mujhe...........

abhi SHAILA kuch samajh paati usse pehle hi NISHKALIKA ne usse hawa me utha liya....

NISHKALIKA- gustaakh ladki.......mere grah me aakar mujhe hi dhamki dekar tune apni mout ko pakka kar liya hai...

aur kya keh rahi thi tu..hame maaregi!!!bewakuf ladki,NISHKALIKA ko maarna asambhav hai....NISHKALIKA ajay hai, amar hai....

ZINDAGI JEENE KE LIYE EK GALAT FEHMI ZAROORI HAI NISHKALIKA......TUMHARE PAAS KUCH HI WAQT KI ZINDAGI AUR BACHI HAI,TAB TAK YE GALAT FEHMI PAALE RAKHO.......

ye awaaz ek bhavishyavaani ki tarah thi jisse wahan moujud sabhi ne suna tha....awaaz ke aate hi do chizen hui

1ST- NISHKALIKA ke spells ne kaam karna band kar diya...SHAILA zameen par aa gayi aur MOKALSAR aur AKSHAANT ke sharir me badh raha dard bhi khatm ho gaya....

2ND- NISHKALIKA jo khud bhi hawa me khadi thi,wo bhi zameen par aa gayi....

wahan moujud sabhi shocked the par sabse zyada AKSHAANT,SHAILA aur MOKALSAR chownke the...kyunki wo is awaaz ke maalik ko jaante the....

TEENO ( MAN ME )- VIKRAMMMMMM..........

MAI- haan mai hi hun.....SHAILA,guruji ne tumhe adhirta ke baare me kya bataya tha....kuch shaktiyan mili nahi ki tumne apna dheeraj kho diya.....

ye baat mai unke dimag se jud bas teeno se kar raha tha.....

teeno ne apna sir jhuka liya....

SHAILA- hume maaf kar do.....

MAI- koi baat nahi.....par dobara aisa mat karna.....

wahin usri taraf NISHKALIKA ka dimag ghum gaya tha.......

NISHKALIKA- kaun hai...himmat hai toh saamne aao.....

SHAILA- aisa mat bol NISHKALIKA..agar is awaaz ka maalik saamne aa gaya na toh jo tujhe kuch aur din jeene ki mohollat mili hai,wo bhi chin jaayegi....

NISHKALIKA- teri itni himmat....

NISHKALIKA ne ek haath aage kar diya.uske haath se saikdon teer nikle aur SHAILA,MOKALSAR aur AKSHAANT ki taraf aane lage.......

par isse pehle ki wo teer teeno ko chhute,teeno gayab hokar apne grah pahunch gaye......

NISHKALIKA- NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIII..............




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PLANET- EARTH



PLACE- COLLEGE CANTEEN:-




SAINT STEPHENS.......INDIA ka sabse bada management college......yaha sirf super talented ya fir super rich bacche hi padhte hain...aur hamare teeno doston ke paas toh ye dono hi gifts hain......

RONIT- abbe kal se dekh raha hun,tu soch kya raha hai...!!!!

ANJALI- haan,koi problem hai kya!!dekh,ab toh hum bhi trained hain.kuch baat hai toh bata,shayad hum kuch kaam aa jaayen....

MAI- problem nahi hai yaar,bas mai kisike baare me soch raha hun

RONIT- kiske baare me????

MAI- AVANTIKA aur DIGVIJAY ke baare me.....

ANJALI- unke baare me kya soch raha hai????

MAI- yahi ki AVANTIKA jaisi ladki DIGVIJAY jaise ladke ke saath kaise!!!! i mean.....

RONIT- abbe toh hume kya lena dena.chhod naa....

MAI- abbe aise kaise.....!!!!AVANTIKA ab hamari dost hai...itna sochna toh banta hai naa..

jee haan doston,darasal kal DIGVIJAY ne hume AVANTIKA se milaya hi tha ki usse uske doston ne bula liya.DIGVIJAY jaanta tha ki hum sab school me bhi saath padh chuke hain toh usne AVANTIKA ko hamare paas chhod apne doston ke paas chala gaya....

uske jaane ke baad AVANTIKA ne humse apne pehle ke bartaav ke liye firse sorry kaha jo humne firse accept kar liya.....

AVANTIKA ne hum teeno ke aage dosti ka haath badhaya.kyunki is baar ladki genuine thi,maine accept kar liya aur mere baad in dono ne bhi uski friendship accept kar li....

ANJALI- V.J is right......par mujhe toh DIGVIJAY bhi kal sudhra hua hi laga...humse kitni decently baat ki usne.....

RONIT- haan,aur agar kuch galat hota,toh tujhe toh sab kuch automatically maalum pad jaata hai naa......

ab mai inhe kya batata...!!!!!yahi toh main problem thi ki mai un dono ko hi padh nahi paa raha tha.....

DIGVIJAY ko dekhte hi mai ye samajh gaya tha ki wo ek DEVIL hai....par kal raat FRESHERS PARTY me usne jaise hi mujhse haath milaya,mujhe uske pure sharir me BLACK ke saath saath WHITE ENERGY bhi doudti mehsoos hui..

Aur jaise hi maine uske andar jhaankne ki koshish ki, us white energy ne DIGVIJAY ke andar ek diwal ka roop le liya,jaise mujhe uske andar dekhne se rok rahi ho....

Aur sabse badi baat ye thi ki ye sab DIGVIJAY nahi kar raha tha,balki ye sab apne aap ho raha tha.....usse toh kuch pata hi nahi tha ki uske andar kya chal raha hai....

Aur rahi baat AVANTIKA ki,toh wo toh meri liye SPEAR ki paheli se bhi badi paheli ban chuki hai......

Mai usse pehle se jaanta hun.....par kal raat pehli baar mujhe aisa laga jaise wo mujhse judi hui hai...kaise,ye saala samajh nahi aa raha...maine jab uske andar jhaankne ki koshish ki,toh mujhe bas ek roshni aur kawach dikhi..wo kavach mujhe apna sa laga......mujhe apna dharir thanda sa mehsoos hua....

Bas,aur kuch pata nahi laga paaya mai.....toh dimag toh ghumega hi naa.....

HI FRNZZZZ......

abhi mai kuch kehta,usse pehle hi is awaaz ne hum teeno ka dhyan apni taraf khinch liya.....ye aur koi nahi AVANTIKA thi.......

ANJALI- hey AVANTIKA, aao,baitho......

ANJALI ke baad RONIT aur maine bhi AVANTIKA ko greet kiya......

ANJALI- yaar,aaj tumne first lecture miss ki thi naa.

AVANTIKA- Haan yaar....sab DIGVIJAY ki wajah se..duffur kahin ka.....

ANJALI- kyun,kya hua?????

AVANTIKA- arre usne hi mujhe kaha tha ki wo mujhe ghar se pic karega..mai ek ghante tak uska wait karti rahi,par janab ka kuch ata pata hi nahi....isiliye mai akeli hi aa gayi,par late ho gaya....

So sorry jaan...........

Abhi koi kuch kehta,usse pehle hi DIGVIJAY sir aa gaye..unhone AVANTIKA ko peeche se hug kar sorry kaha....

AVANTIKA- what sorry yaar!!!!!......maine tumhe 4 baar call kiya..agar nahi aa sakte the,toh kamsekam call karke bata dete naa.tumhare chakkar me mere first day ka first lecture hi miss ho gaya.......

DIGVIJAY- so sorry yaar.mai toh time se hi tumhare ghar ki taraf nikal gaya tha,par raaste me ek buddhi aurat giri hui thi....koi bhi unki madad karne ke liye nahi aa raha tha.

Maine unhe uthaya aur hospital le gaya aur ilaj karwaya..mobile car me hi chhut gaya tha isiliye mai tumhara call utha nahi paaya..i am so sorry.........

AVANTIKA- I'm sorry baby.......mai bina asli baat jaane hi tumpe naaraz ho rahi thi..... tumne jo kiya,uske liye i'm so proud of u.....

ANJALI- sach me DIGVIJAY....tumne bohot accha kaam kiya hai......

MAI man me- waah,kya noutanki hai.....ye jhooth bole jaa raha hai,aur ye log uski baaton me aa bhi gaye..aur ye AVANTIKA, isse topper kisne bana diya......ek number ki gadhi hai......

DIGVIJAY- yaar ANJALI, ab toh hum frnz hai naa,aur mere frnz mujhe DIGI bulaate hai....

MAI- DOGGY bulaate hain!!!!!!

meri baat pe sabki hasi chhut gayi,yahan tak ki AVANTIKA ki bhi.......

Meri baat aur iske baad sabhi ke reaction ko dekh DIGVIJAY ki sulag gayi,par bhai sahab ne khudko control kar liya.....

ANJALI- kya bol raha hai V.J......DOGGY nahi DIGI.......

MAI- oh sorry sorry......wo maine galat sun liya tha....

AVANTIKA- its ok yaar.ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi.....

RONIT- ye sab chhodo yaar. AVANTIKA tum dono ki love story ke baare me batao kuch..i mean tum dono mile kaise,aur fir relationship me kaise aaye.....!!!!???

MAI man me- chalo,pehli baar iski mooh fat panti kuch kaam aayi.....

ANJALI- RONITTTT........ye unka private matter hai yaar....

AVANTIKA- no,no,its ok.....

RONIT- aur nahi toh kya!!!! Waise bhi,ab toh hum dost hain naa...aur doston me kaisa secret!!!!!

AVANTIKA- sahi baat hai.....toh frns,hum dono ki kahani waise toh choti si hai,par hai fultoo filmy.......

ANJALI- woww....kaise?????

AVANTIKA-mai garmiyon ke vacations me london gayi hui thi......DIGVIJAY se meri mulakat wahin hui....ek raat mai pub se apne hotel jaa rahi thi ki tabhi cab kharabho gayi...raat ka waqt tha,aur wo area bhi sunsaan tha...

Tabhi wahan kuch local street boys aa gaye aur mere saath battamizi karne lage......mai kaafi dar gayi thi....

Par tabhi wahan ek car aakar ruki aur usme se DIGVIJAY nikla...isne unsab ladkon ko akele hi maar bhagaya...

Tabhi se humari dosti shuru hui....DIGVIJAY bhi london vacations me hi gaya hua tha...hum regular milne lage...fir hamare tour ke last din hi DIGVIJAY ne mujhe propose kar diya and i said yes......simple.........

RONIT- sahi bola tha tumne.........tum dono ki kahani fullon filmy hai.......

DIGVIJAY- haan hello.....ok,mai pahunchta hun....

Abhi koi aur kuch kehta usse pehle hi DIGVIJAY sir ka mobile baj utha.....

DIGVIJAY- guyz,mujhe ek urgent kaam se jaana hoga... AVNI tum classes attend karogi ya mai drop kar dun.....!!!

AVANTIKA- classes hain hi kahan jo attend karun mai...aaj ke baaki ke lectures toh off hain.....

DIGVIJAY- great then....chalo,mai tumhe drop kar deta hun....

AVANTIKA- nahi,mai apni car laayi hun.waise bhi mujhe SHANAYA ko lene airport jaana hi hai..toh tum jao,mai airport nikalti hun......

AVANTIKA aur DIGVIJAY hume aur ek dusre ko bye bol nikal gaye.......


RONIT- kar diya naa tera kaam!!!!

ANJALI- kaisa kaam????

RONIT- V.J jaanana chahta tha in dono ki story,isiliye toh maine AVANTIKA se wo sab pucha.....

ANJALI- tujhe kaise pata???? V.J ne toh kuch kaha bhi nahi.....

RONIT- iski tarah sabke man ki baatein nahi padh sakta toh kya hua,dost hai mera,kamsekam iske dil ka haal toh jaan hi sakta hun.....

Maine RONIT ko hug kiya.....saale ne emotional kar diya tha....

ANJALI- par ye sab kisliye?????






MAI- ek ka husn,khuda ka KEHER hai......

Aur dusre ka ISHQ fareb hai,

meetha ZEHER hai....












AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI



AAPKA APNA V....J....

Diggi beta ne to sahi game khel diya hai yaha par seedha dil pe attack magar shayad inhi cheezo se sekh lekar hi shayad apna hero aur nikharta hain.