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Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI MADDOX APNI MOM KA BALIDAAN DETA HAI WAHIN VIKRAM AUR ASMODEUS PEHLI BAAR EK DUSRE SE BAAT KARTE HAIN....
AB AAGE:-





CHAPTER-2





( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )




UPDATE- 67





PLANET-VRIHAKH





PLACE- BATTLE GROUND




ye sab ek nashe ki tarah hai........jitna bhi kar lo,aur karne ka man karta hai.......



subah ka waqt hai.......AKSHAANT,SHAILA aur MOKALSAR yudh abhyas kar rahe hai...



actually ye kehna thik rahega ki teeno pichle 5 mahino se lagatar din bhar yudh abhyas kar rahe hain wo bhi bina break ke.....

jab se VIKRAM ne teeno ke gyan chakra ki gati ko badhaya hai,in teeno ke dimag me ladhne ke aur spells ko alag alag tarike se bolne aur use me laane ka fitoor sa chaa gaya hai...

aur iska kaaran hai har hunar ko seekhne ki gati.....teeno hi har daaw ko itni bakhubi se sikh kar apply kar rahe hain ki unka interest level lagatar badhta hi jaa raha hai.....

aur jaise jaise inka interest level badh raha hai,inka gyan chakra inke dimag me ladhne ke aur spells bolne ke naye naye ideas daal raha hai jisse ye aur josh se practice me laa rahe hain.....

abhi ka scene kuch aisa hai ki SHAILA aag ke andar paani ko milakar dono ki shakti jodne ke spell ko perfect karne me lagi hai....

haalaki ye karna kaafi kathin hai,kyunki aisa successfully karne ke liye mind ko ek hi waqt me do alag hisso me baatana padhtha hai..

ek hisse ko aag ki garmi ko control karna hota hai aur ussi waqt dimag ke dusre hisse ko paani ki thandak ko control karna hota hai...

par dhyaan chakra ke jaagrit hone ki wajah se SHAILA ne is hunar me 90 % tak kaamiyabi paa li thi aur bache 10% me mehnet kar rahi thi.....

wahin MOKALSAR ek haath me talwar aur bhaale dono ko aur ussi waqt dusre haath me dhanush baan ko ek saath chalane ki practice kar rahe the.....

MOKALSAR ke dono haath itni tezi se chal rahe the ki unki koi bhi kriya aur pratikriya dikhayi hi nahi de rahi thi........

aur sabse anokha abhyas is waqt AKSHAANT kar rahe the....AKSHAANT chote chote patharo me apne dono haath ki taakat ko mila kar unhe chattaon par fek rahe the..

anokhi aur chamatkarik baat ye thi ki wo chote chote patthar un bade bade chattano ko kaagaz ki tarah cheerte hue nikal jaa rahe the....



AKSHAANT- sach kaha SHAILA.......pehle toh mastishk me aise aise naye abhyas ke upaay aate hain jinhe sochkar lagta hai ki nahi ho paayega..

par jab unka abhyas aarambh karte hain toh sab kuch apne aap hota chala jaata hai...

jaise hi us naye abhyas me safalta milti hai,mastishk ek naya abhyas taiyar kar deta hai....

MOKALSAR- aur sabse ajeeb baat toh ye hai ki hamara sharir bhi kisi abhyas ko karne ke liye mana nahi karta....

hum peechle 5 maaha se lagatar bina ruke har din abhyas karte aa rahe hai,par hamare sharir par itne kathin parishram ka ek bhi chinha nahi dikhta....

SHAILA- haan.ye toh hai.....par mere paas ek sujhaav hai jisse hum apni seemaon ko chunouti de sakte hain......

MOKALSAR- matlab......kaisi chunouti?????

SHAILA- humara sharir isiliye nahi thak raha hai kyunki hamara mashtishk tarotaaza hai....

humne abhi tak jeetne bhi abhyas kiye hain,usse sochne ke liye aur hume sikhane ke liye hamare mastishk ko zyada zor nahi lagana pada hai.....

ab zor hi nahi lagega toh hamara mastishk thagega nahi aur mastishk thakega nahi toh sharir taro taaza hi rahega naa....

toh kyun naa hum apne abhyaas ke charan ko ek paaydaan upar le jaakar aur kathin bana den..........

AKSHAANT- kyun????tumhe acha nahi lag raha hai kya ki hum thak nahi rahe????

SHAILA- asaan chunoutiyon me kya maza????kuch naya,kuch aur kathin karte hai naa????

MOKALSAR- hmm...toh ye bhi lage haath bata do ki tumne socha kya hai?????

SHAILA- hum teeno jodi banakar teesre se yudh karenge......

mera matlab pehle mai aur AKSHAANT tum ek jodi bankar MOKALSAR se ladenge...

hum teeno ke hi gyaan chakra ek jitne hi khule hain....

hum dono jab ek saath MOKALSAR par humla karenge toh MOKALSAR ke mastishk ko hum dono ko harane ke liye khudko hum dono ke mastishk se bhi tez chalana hoga......

fir ek satr ke abhyas ke baad tum aur MOKALAR jodi ban jaana aur mere saath yudh abhyas karna....

fir agle satr me mai aur MOKALSAR jodi ban jaayenge aur tumse yudh karenge....

isse hum aur adhik sashakht aur saksaham ho jaayenge aur saath hi hume humare mashtishk ki seemaon ka bhi gyan ho jaayega.........

MOKALSAR- ek baar fir se soch lo,ye yojna jitni saarthak hai utni hi khatarnaak bhi hai...

kyunki humla karte waqt hamari gati itni tez hoti hai ki hum khud ko achanak rok nahi sakte.....

aur is yojna ke hisab se toh hum ek jodi bankar tessre akele se ladenge....

us waqt jo bhi akela hoga,usse akele hi dono ki gati ki barabari karni hogi jo bohot kathin hai.....

agar kahin koi chuk ho gayi toh jo akela lad raha hoga,usse gambhir chote bhi aa sakti hain........

SHAILA- yahi toh asli pariksha hai jisme hume uttirn hona hai.........kyunki baahar jo hamare dushman hai,wo bohot shaktishaali hain....

unka gala kaatne ke liye hamare paas unse zyada taakat,tezi aur anya bhi bohot se hunar ki aawashyakta padegi.......



AKSHAANT- tumhara ishara NISHKALIKA se hai naa.......



SHAILA- haan,aur jab tak mai uske ghamandi sir ko uske gardan se alag nahi kar deti,mere hriday ko chain nahi aayega.........



ABHI TAK PRATISHODH KI JWAALA TUMHARE BHITAR PRAJWALIT HAI SHAILA.....?????????



MUJHE LAGA HUMARI PICHLI MULAKAT KE BAAD MERI SHAKTI KO DEKH YE AAG THANDI PAD CHUKI HOGI...



PAR DEKH RAHI HUN KI MAI GALAT THI...TUMHE ABHI TAK YE GALATFEHMI HAI KI TUM MUJHE,MOUT KE DEVI NISHKALIKA KO MAAR SAKTI HO....



ye awaaz bhale hi MOKALSAR aur AKSHAANT nahi pehchaan paaye hon,par SHAILA is awaaz ke maalik ko ya yun kahun is awaaz ki maalkin ko bohot achi tarah pehchaan gayi thi........



SHAILA- NISHKALIKA...................



NISHKALIKA- haan,NISHKALIKA.......par tum mujhe apni mout bula sakti ho......

teeno ko bas NISHKALIKA ki awaaz hi sunayi de rahi thi......unhe wo dikh nahi rahi thi....



ki tabhi...............



SOOBHHHH.......



AKSHAANT-SHAILA.........



TANNNN...........



hua ye ki SHAILA ke peeth ki taraf se ek bhaala tez gati se uski taraf aaya jisse AKSHAANT ne jo ki halka tedha khada tha, usne dekh liya....

aur uske mooh se SHAILA naam ki cheekh nikal gayi.......

par SHAILA ye achi tarike se jaanti thi ki NISHKALIKA koi na koi waar zaroor karegi.....

aur jaise hi uske piche ki taraf se bhaala uski taraf aaya,SHAILA ki indriyon ne usse warning de di,aur agle hi pal SHAILA ke haathon me ek talwar chamki...

SHAILA ne tezi se piche ki taraf apni talwar ghumayi...talwaar bhaale ki nukile bhaag se takrayi aur jhitak ke door jaa giri........



ki tabhi....................



sabhi taraf se ek saath kayi saare hathiyar prakat hue aur teeno ki taraf tivr gati se badhe.......

ab tak AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR bhi sambhal chuke the.......dono ke hi haathon me alag alag hathiyar aa gaye....

aur jaise hi NISHKALIKA ke chhode gaye haithyar unke kareeb pahunche,dono ke haath double speed se ghumne lage,aur dekhte hi dekhte pas ek second me NISHKALIKA ke chhode gaye saare hathiyar yahan wahan pade hue the......

AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR dono ne ye kaam itni bakhubi se aur itni tezi se kiya tha ki SHAILA ko kuch bhi karne ki zaroorat hi nahi padi.......

aur agle hi pal teeno ke saamne NISHKALIKA prakat hui......

NISHKALIKA- adhbhudh......kya baat hai???maza aa gaya.........tum teeno ki yudh shaili tph kaafi nikhar gayi hai........

waise toh mai tum teeno ko maarne aayi thi,par tum teeno ke saamarthya ko dekh kar mai bohot khush hui hun aur isliye mai tumhe ek aur mouka deti hun....

meri sena me aa jao.mai tum teeno ko apna sena pramukh bana dungi...yash aur dhan ki varsha hogi tum teeno ke upar...

pura bramhaand tumhare aage jhukega.tumhe bas mere aur mere DEVIL LORD ke aage jhukna hoga.....

wahin NISHKALIKA ke saamne khade SHAILA,MOKALSAR aur AKSHAANT toh dusre hi khayalon me khoye hue the.....

unhe ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki NISHKALIKA ne unhe khoja kaise????

VIKRAM ki spell ki wajah se teeno apne sabhi dushmano ki nazar se bache hue the...par aaj NISHKALIKA ne unhe dhund liya tha jo ki unke liye kaafi ascharyajanak tha......

NISHKALIKA- itna soch kyun rahe ho????meri baat maanana tumhare liye bohot faayademand hoga.....mere sharan me aa jao aur jio...........

AKSHAANT- aisa kabhi bhi nahi hoga NISHKALIKA.......hum marna pasand karenge par tumhare aage jhukna nahi......

MOKALSAR- aur hume maarna tumhare liye itna aasan nahi hoga.abhi abhi tumne khud dekha hai ki humne kitni asaani se tumhare saare waaron ko kaat diya hai...

NISHKALIKA- hahahaha.........mere vaar ko tum kaatoge........!!!!!!!galatfehmi hai tumhari....

aur jin vaaron ki baat tum akr rahe ho,wo toh bas mere liye manoranjan tha.agar tumne meri baat nahi maani toh tumhe NISHKALIKA ke vaar kitne ghaatak hote hai,wo bhi dikh jaayega.........

in sab baaton ke beech SHAILA jo ki hamesha se hi aggresive nature ki rahi hai,wo chup khadi kuch soch rahi thi....

SHAILA- tumne hume dhunda kaise??????

yahi wo sawaal tha jiske baare me SHAILA apne dimag me kaafid er se ganit laga rahi thi.....




NISHKALIKA- RAHASYA SULJHAM..........

UNFOLD THE SECRET.........



ek aisa spell jo bol toh koi bhi sakta hai,par upyog sirf wahi kar sakta hai jo apne dushmano ko jinhe wo is spell ke zariye dhundna chaahta hai,unse adhik shaktishaali ho..........

NISHKALIKA ki baat sunkar teeno ko na sirf ye pata chala ki NISHKALIKA ne unhe kaise dhunda,balki saath me ye bhi pata chal gaya ki wo teeno milkar bhi abhi tak NISHKALIKA ka saamna nahi kar sakte............



ARRE YE KYA....HUM???????????



NISHKALIKA- hahahaha................tum gayab kyun nahi ho paa rahe ho,yahi puchna chahti ho naa?????



SHAILA ko jaise hi is baat ka ehsaas hua ki wo teeno milkar bhi NISHKALIKA ka saamna nahi kar paayenge,toh usne teeno ko antardhyan karne ki sochi...

par chaah kar bhi wo ho aisa kar nahi paayi....

NISHKALIKA- maine ye jagah baandh di hai.ab tum teeno koi bhi spell ka upyog nahi kar sakte......

tumne mera prastav ko thukrakar apni mout ko swayam aamantran diya hai...........toh ab marne ke liye taiyar ho jaao.......

NISHKALIKA ne aasman ki taraf dekha aur apne dono haath faila diye..

aakash me kaali baadal mandrane lage aur kuch hi palon me pura aakash bijliyon ke kadkadane se dahal utha......



par ye kya???????!!!!!!!!!!



aakash me aneko bijliyan utpann ho arhi thi...par koi bhi bijli neeche zamin ki taraf nahi gir rahi thi....

saari bijli wahin aakash ke beech me ek jagah par apni bijli se utpann urja ko gira rahe the.....

kuch hi der me itne saare bijiliyon ke samagam se bani urja ka size aur power bohot badh chuka tha....

us urja me itni shakti thi ki agar wo urja VIRAHAK grah me girti toh pura grah hi fat jaata.....

is baat ka andesha SHAILA ke saath saath AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR ko bhi ho gaya tha ki NISHKALIKA sirf un teeno ko hi nahi balki unke pure grah ko hi khatm kar dena chahti hai.......

SHAILA- NISHKALIKA,agar tum hum teeno ko maarna chahti ho toh beshak maar do,par hamare grah ne tumhara kya bigada hai jo tum isse bhi khatm karna chahti ho.....

tumhare is aakraman se hamare grah ke carodon bekasur log maare jaayenge....

NISHKALIKA- jis grah ne tum teeno ko chupaane ka dussahas kiya ho,usse saza milni hi chahiye...

is grah ke samooh vinash se pure bramhaand me ye sandesh jaayega ki NISHKALIKA ke saamne khade hone ki galti karne ka kya parinaam hota hai............

NISHKALIKA ne apne dono haath aakash ki taraf kiye jahan bijli ke dwara paida ki gayi urja ekatrit hui thi.....

NISHKALIKA ke apni taraf point karte hi wo urja LIGHT SPEED se AKSHAANT,SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ki taraf badhi....

teeno ne upar waale ko yaad kar apni aankhen band kar li....aisa nahi tha ki teeno ko apni mout ko khudse dekhne me dar lagta tha par wo apne saath saath apne grah ko khandit hote hue nahi dekh sakte the.....



aur agle hi pal........BOOMMMMMM................



par itne khatarnaak prahar ke baad jo dhamake ki awaaz aayi,wo itni bhi tivr nahi thi jitni honi chahiye thi....

par haan,us dhamake ki wajah se chaaron taraf dhuan zaroor faile gaya tha....



AREE YE KYA???????ASAMBHAV........



NISHKALIKA khadi upar akash ke beech khadi muskura rahi thi par uski ye muskurahat zyada der tak nahi tiki....

jaise hi dhuan chata toh jo nazara saamne aaya usse dekhkar NISHKALIKA ko bhi bijli ke jaisa hi jhatka laga......

grah toh door ki baat hai,jis BATTLE GROUND me SHAILA,AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR khade the,usse bhi kuch nahi hua tha..

aur rahi baat un teeno ki toh wo toh khade khade muskura rahe the....



NISHKALIKA- aisa kaise ho sakta hai?????



AWAAZ- JAAKO RAAKHE SAAIYAN,MAAR SAKE NA KOI..........

JISKI HIFAZAT KHUDA KARTE HAIN,USSE KOI NAHI MAAR SAKTA..........



awaaz ko sun NISHKALIKA ka dimag ghum gaya.....ye wahi awaaz thi jisne GLUTO me bhi in teeno ko bachaya tha...

NISHKALIKA- aakhir kaun ho tum?????.....kyun baar baar mere kaam me baadha daalte ho....???

AWAAZ- jisse tum baadha keh rahi ho,usse atyachar kehte hai..aur rahi baat ki mai kaun hun,toh jis tarah tumne in teeno ka pata lagaya,waise hi mujhe bhi dhund lo.....

NISHKALIKA spell bolne jaa hi rahi thi ki usse LORD OF DEVIL ki baat yaad aa gayi...



NISHKALIKA- man toh mera bhi bohot hai ki tujhe benakab kar khud apne haathon se maarun....par kya karun,majboor hun.......

AWAAZ- fikr mat kar.teri khwahish mai bohot jald puri karunga.....hamari mulakat me ab zyada waqt nahi hai.......



NISHKALIKA ne krodh bhari aankhon se ek baar neeche khade teeno ko dekha aur gayab ho gayi......

AWAAZ- SHAILA,bohot jald tumhari icha puri hogi,tab tak tum teeno apni aise hi abhyas karte raho....


iske baad wo awaaz aani bhi band ho gayi....

SHAILA- kab kya kar de,pata hi nahi chalta.......???????

MOKALSAR- LORD OF ANGEL hai,hamare soch se kahin upar uski nazar rehti hai.......

AKSHAANT- sahi baat hai..chalo,hum apna abhyas punah aarambh karte hain......

fir kya tha,teeno pure josh se abhyas me lag gaye......





PLANET- EARTH




PLACE- MAGIC DIMENSION


JAADUI AAYAM




bhai,aaj tujhe ho kya gaya hai?????aaj tu hamari puri tarike se lene pe tula hua hai????

FLOSANTO toh yaad hi honge aapko....!!!!!arre wahi jinhone MATI BHRAM maidan ki rachna ki thi....

jinhone mujhe bramhaand ke saare chakravyun todne aur khud naye vyuh rachna gadhne ka wardaan diya tha...

unhi ke aashirwaad se maine ek MAGICAL DIMENSION ka nirmaan kiya hai......

aur ye maine aaj nahi,balki tabhi kar liya tha jab RONIT aur ANJALI trained hokar laute the....

training mere dono doston ka aakhri abhyas nahi tha balki wo toh bas ek shuruat thi mere dono doston ki shaktiyon ki duniya me khud ko khojne ki....

mai lagatar kayi mahino se kabhi 6,toh kabhi 12 aur kabhi kabhi pure 24 ghante in dono ko alag alag training de raha hun...

ab meri baat se aapke dimag me ye sawaal aaya hoga ki agar ek din me itna zyada waqt hum training me bitate hain toh fir jo itne saari cheezen is douran hui hai,wo kaise hui?????

toh jaisa ki maine shuru me bataya tha ki is waqt hum MAGICAL DIMENSION me hain...

ek aisi jagah jo hamari duniya me hokar bhi nahi hai.....

jahan waqt ka koi kaam nahi hai......hamari asli duniya me abhi subah ke 5 baje hain.....

hume aaj DIMENSION WORLD me practice karte hue karib 12 ghante ho chuke hain..

jab mai in dono ko lekar is MAGICAL DIMENSION me aaya tha tab bhi asli duniya me 5 hi baje the....

in short iska ye matlab hai ki ye duniya waqt ke bandhano se aazad hai....

ek aisi duniya jahan ek pal me thand ho jaati hai aur dusre hi pal garmi.....

ek anthin lambi choudi si jagah jahan aap jo chaahe karo,uska asli duniya par koi asar nahi padta....

ek tarike se isse MATIBHRAM MAIDAN ka bada swaroop kaha jaa sakta hai.......

RONIT aur ANJALI ne abhi tak isme aise aise prashikshan kiye hain,jo shayad hi kisine pehle kabhi ki hogi...........

aap sabko yaad hoga ki maine apne MATIBHRAM MAIDAN ke ek test ke douran ek 3 headed saanp se ladhayi ki thi....

par RONIT aur ANJALI ne ab tak ek nahi do nahi balki teen teen baar 6 sir ke snake se ladha bhi hai aur usse har baar haraya bhi hai...

par aaj RONIT aur ANJALI ki haalat kharab hone ka kaaran hai mera un dono ko diya gaya new challange.....



TECHNIQUE CLONE COMBAT............



ye naam jitna mazedar hai,isme milne waali chunouti utni hi mushkil hai.....

aaj RONIT aur ANJALI khud se hi lad rahe hain....

matlab aaj maine dono ke saamne aise do maayavi insaano ki rachna ki hai jinke andar wo saare hunar,wo saari vidhya moujud hain jo RONIT aur ANJALI me hain...

RONIT aur ANJALI pichle 12 ghanton se koshish kar rahe hain un dono maayavi chaviyon ko harane ki,par abhi tak unhe zara si bhi kaamiyabi nahi mili hai.....



MAI- saale,sawal ko chhod ke agar tu jawab ki chinta karega tabhi tujhe kuch success milega samjha.....

RONIT- matlab........!!!!!!!!!!

MAI- tujhe ye pata hai ki tere opponents tere har daaw ko pehle se hi jaante hain,kyunki wo tum dono ka hi ek alag roop hain,toh aise me tujhe kya karna chahiye.....?????

RONIT- kya karna chahiye??????

MAI- wo tujhe sochna hai mujhe nahi....

ANJALI- yaar V.J...... aaj haalat kharab ho gayi hai...kal sochen kya?????aaj ke liye rehne dete hain.........

MAI- thik hai........par ek baad yaad rakho,ki abhi tum dono jis level par ho,agar isse paar nahi kar paaye toh mai tum dono ko kahin nahi le jaaunga........

RONIT- yaar ye toh galat hai?????

MAI- kuch galat nahi hai.....aur khaas kar tere liye.....

RONIT- matlab.....!!!!!!!!

fir maine RONIt ko apne kehne ka matlab samjhaya jisse sunkar RONIT ek andar firse josh aa gaya...

RONIT- kal nahi,hum aaj hi practice karenge...........

ANJALI ka mooh RONIT ki baat ko sunkar chota ho gaya tha....

MAI- nahi aaj nahi...ANJALI thak gayi hai...kal karte hain.....

ab baat agar G.f ki ho toh baat toh maanani padegi hi.....RONIT ne thik hai keh diya.....hum sab MAGICAL DIMENSION se baahar aakar garden me chale gaye...

kuch der wahan masti ki uske baad ghar nikal gaye...ab RONIT aur ANJALI GF,BF ho gaye the isiliye maine dono ko ek saath ek hi car ya bike me akele college jaane ke liye keh diya tha...

pehle toh dono hi meri baat nahi maan arhe the par mere samjhane par maan gaye...

aaj bhi maine un dono se college me direct milne ko kaha aur ghar aa gaya....

ghar aakar mai fresh hua,nanai naani,mom dad ka aashirwaad liya,breakfast kiya aur college ke liye nikal gaya jahan aaj mere saath kuch naya hone waala tha......




PLACE- COLLEGE




HEY GUYZZZZZ.WHATS UP??????????

FRNZZZ- hey V.J.......



mai college pahuncha aur sidhe canteen aa gaya.....

ab aap ko lagega ki bhai hero ko toh sabkuch pehle se hi pata chal jaata hai,LORD OF ANGELS jo hai......

isiliye pata chal gaya hoga ki classes off hongi ya fir teacher aaya nahi hoga isiliye sidhe canteen....

toh aapko bata dun ki aisa kuch nahi hai...haan ye sach hai ki classes off thi par iska reason teacher ka absence nahi tha balki kuch aur tha jo ki abhi kuch hi der me aap sabko pata chal jaayega....

RONIT- saale,tu late kaise ho gaya aur uske upar call laga raha hun toh uthata bhi nahi hai????

MAI- arre ye pichle teen din se jo VALENTINE'S WEEK ka chutiyapa chal raha hai,isme jaldi aakar koi faayda toh hona hai nahi.....

bechare taechers college toh aate hain par khaali claas ko kya khaak padhayenge isiliye claases bhi nahi lagti...

saare ladke ladkiyan ya toh yahan canteen me baithe apne apne partners set kar rahe hote hain ya fir corridors me ghum ghum kar VALENTINE'S party ke liye apna apna jugad lagate hue dikhte hain....

aur saale tera call bhi isiliye nahi uthaya kyunki mujhe pata tha ki mai kuch bhi bolun par tu sunega nahi aur jaldi se aane ki rat lagayega.......

RONIT- haan toh fir........yahan ye teeno apni girls talk me busy ho jaati hain aur mai akela pad jaata hun..

ANJALI- mere hote hue bhi tujhe akela mehsoos hota hai......

RONIT- arre nahi,wo toh mai,mere kehne ka matlab hai ki agar tum teeno ke beech mai bolunga toh thik nahi hoga naa,isiliye mai chup rehta hu par mujhe bhi toh company ki zaroorat padti hai naa.....

RONIT ke badle hue tone ko sun aur dekhkar hum sab ki hasi chhut gayi.........

RONIT- yaar mujhe toh bhook lag rahi hai...chal kuch lekar aate hain...

RONIT ko maalum tha ki ab mai usko chedunga isiliye usne pehle hi khisakne ki baat bhook ki aad me kar di....

MAI- chal fir.tum teeno ko kya kya chahiye....???

teeno girls ne bas coffee boli...mai aur RONIT counter ki taraf chal diye.......





HAMARE JAANE KE BAAD:-




HEY GUYZZZZZZZ..............

GIRLZZZZ- hey SHAIFALI............

tum dono ne ab tak apne partners ka naam nahi diya mujhe....

ye sawaal SHAIFALI ne AVANTIKA aur SHANAYA se pucha tha........

AVANTIKA- partners honge toh naam denge naa....maine toh pehle bhi kaha tha ki mujhe in sab me interest nahi hai.......

SHANAYA- mujhe bhi........

SHAIFALI- no no no no..........aisa bilkul nahi chalega...1st year ke students ko toh participate karna hi padega........

aur AVANTIKA tum toh MISS FRESHER bhi reh chuki ho...tumhare liye toh compulsary hai......

aur SHANAYA,mujhe koi bahana nahi sunana,u have to participate.....

mujhe kal tak any how tum dono ke partners ke naam chahiye..thats it....bye....



SHAIFALI bina dono ki koi baat sune nikal gayi......



toh doston,scene kuch aisa hai ki ST STEPHENS me har saal VALENTINES DAY ki shaam ek VALENTINES CONTEST ka prograame rakha jaata hai jisme saare students pair me participate karte hain..

best couple ko MR & MRS VALENTINE banaya jaata hai......

SHANAYA- yaar,ye SHAIFALI ne bhi kahan fasa diya.....yaar ANJALI, tera sahi hai...baitha bithaya B.F hai..tera toh koi tention hi nahi hai......

ANJALI- toh tu bhi koi banda dhund le naa.abhi tak kitne ladko ne tujhse puch liya hai,tu hi hai jo sabko tarkaaye jaa rahi hai...

SHANAYA- ab toh kisi na kisiko haan bolna hi padega...

idhar AVANTIKA kuch soche jaa rahi thi jisse ANJALI ne dekh liya......



ANJALI- AVANTIKA,ek baat puchun?????



AVANTIKA- tujhe kabse kuch puchne ke liye permission ki zaroorat pad gayi.....!!!!!????

ANJALI- dekh,tu is saal ki MISS FRESHER reh chuki hai.....ab tere saath jo MR FRESHER bana tha,wo toh ab raha nahi,toh tu contest me kiske saath participate karegi....!!!!!!

AVANTIKA- wahi toh soch rahi hun ki kiske saath jaaun...????

ANJALI- mai bataun????tu V.J ke saath chali jaa.......

ANJALI ki baat sunkar AVANTIKA ki aankhen ek pal ke liye chamak gayi par usne apne feelings ko turant control kar liya...

AVANTIKA- V.J ke saath?????

SHANAYA- u are absolutely right babes...dekh,V.J is college ka sabse handsome banda hai,aur tu sabse preety ladki hai..

mujhse bohot zyada nahi hai par chal,behen hai isliye ek point zyada deti hun.....



SHANAYA ki baat sunkar AVANTIKA aur ANJALI has diye.......

ANJALI- SHANAYA sahi keh rahi hai...tum dono ki jodi perfect hai........

ANJALI ki baat sunkar AVANTIKA ne shocked hokar ANJALI ki taraf dekha....

ANJALI- mera matlab contest ke liye.......toh mujhe lagta hai u should ask V.J....!!!!

AVANTIKA- mai kyun puchun???wo ladka hai,usse puchna chahiye!!!!!

ANJALI dheere se- oh,toh madam ko V.J ke puchne ka intazar hai.......

AVANTIKA- kya kaha tune??????

ANJALI- kuch bhi toh nahi...arre mai toh ye keh rahi thi ki wo puche ya tu,baat toh ek hi hai naa....

AVANTIKA- baat kaise ek hui???wo ladka hai,usse puchna chahiye......

SHANAYA- arre ab is baat se koi fark nahi padta ki pehle ladka puchega ya ladki...aur jab baat V.J jaise bande ki hona toh late nahi karni chahiye....isse pehle ki koi aur baazi maar le,puch le usse..

waise bhi maine ek udti udti khabar suni hai ki 1st year SCIENCE section ki ALISHA kaafi dino se V.J ko impress karne ki koshish kar rahi hai........

isse pehle ki wo ya aur koi V.J ko puche,tu mouke par chownka maar de...

ANJALI- dekh,V.J aa raha hai...yahi best mouka hai,jaldi se puch le.....



RONIT- saala aaj itni bheed thi order dene aane me kaafi time lag gaya.....

MAI- saale,itna saara order karega toh banane me time toh lagega hi naa....



AVANTIKA- V.J...........



RONIT aur mai abhi table par baithe hi the ki itne me AVANTIKA ne mera naam liya....

MAI- haan,kya hua,aur kuch chahiye...????

AVANTIKA- nahi wo actually,mai, wo,tum,matlab kya mai tum, hum dono....

RONIT- kya koi puzzle puch rahi ho!!!..agar aisa hai toh rehne do,isse sabka answer pata rehta hai.....

ANJALI- tu chup karega........

haan AVANTIKA,kya puch rahi thi tum V.J se??????

AVANTIKA- haan mai wo tumse ye..............



V...J,tujhe class me bula rahe hain.....??



abhi AVANTIKA aage kuch bolti usse pehle hi ek bande ne aakar mujhse kaha....

RONIT- kaun bula raha hai???

BOY- mujhe nahi pata..mujhe jo bola gaya tha maine wo bata diya.....

RONIT- abbe kisne kya bola tha,ye toh bata??arre sun toh........!!!!



par wo ladka apni baat bolkar nikal gaya...



RONIT- ajeeb chutiya character tha yaar.....

idhar mere chehre par us ladke ki baat sunkar ek muskurahat aa gayi....

maine ek baar AVANTIKA ki taraf dekha aur fir RONIT se kaha....

MAI- haan,ladka tha toh chutiya,par fir bhi kuch sikha gaya.......

RONIT- hain!!!!!!ab wo kya sikha gaya bhai????

MAI- yahi ki bhale ulti ,sidhi,nonsense se bhari, anbhujhi hi sahi,par har baat sahi waqt par keh deni chahiye warna der ho jaati hai......

RONIT- prabhu,aapke PARABLES mere dimag ko samajh nahi aate....

MAI- sab samajh jaayega..abhi chal,class se aate hain..aap sab yahi baithkar apni GIRLS TALK continue kijiye,hum aate hain....

ye bolkar mai aur RONIt class ki taraf nikal gaye...

abhi hume gaye kuch 2 minute hi hua tha ki wahi ladka jo mujhe class jaane ko bolne ke liye aaya tha,wo waapas hamari tables ke baaju ki table par aaya aur wahan baithe kuch students ko kuch batane laga....

uski baat sunkar meri teeno frnz ko jhatka laga.wo teeno ek jhatke me khadi huin aur hamari class ki taraf doudin...

aur jaise hi teeno class ke andar enter hui,teeno ke pair saamne chal rahe scene ko dekhkar jam gaye........



scene kuch aisa tha ki mere chaaron taraf students khade the,mere RIGHT me RONIT muskurata hua khada tha...

par ye teeno girls ko lagne waale jhatke ki wajah nahi thi....

jhatke ka reason mere saamne khada tha ya yun kahun KHADI thi.....

is waqt mere saamne wahi ladki khadi thi jiske baare me SHANAYA baat kar rahi thi....



ALISHA......



ALISHA - V.J.....WILL U BE MY VALENTINE.....
ye bolkar ALISHA ne apna haath mere aage badha diya.......



maine ek baar AVANTIKA ki taraf dekha......aur fir saamne jahan is waqt ALISHA ek ummid lagaye haath badhaye meri taraf dekh rahi thi.....




MAI- YES.............





AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI........




AAPKA APNA V...J........
Very nice update bhai
 

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CHAPTER-2








( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )







UPDATE-68







PLANET- MONSLICKEL






PLACE- ASMODEUS PALACE








HI HAIL FATHER..........



kaise ho BEELZEBUB???????...........



BEELZEBUB- thik hun ...........FATHER..............




chakra gaye na doston!!!!!ki ASMODEUS kab baap ban gaya................

aap me se bohoton ko lag raha hoga ki ye is kahani ki koi nayi entry hai par aisa hai nahi.......

BEELZEBUB ke baare me 7TH aur 14TH update me thoda bohot bataya gaya hai...

par BEELZEBUB ki puri asliyat aapko aaj pata chalegi jisse sunkar mujhe pura yakin hai aap sab ko jhatka lagne waala hai....

14TH update me maine bataya tha ki BEELZEBUB ASMODEUS ka sabse khatarnaak DEVIL hai.

iske andar har tarah ke black magic ki taaqat moujud hai...iski speed light ki speed se bhi zyada tez hai aur iske zyadatar SPELLS jaan leva hote hain........

haalaki 14th update me BEELZEBUB ASMODEUS ko HI HAIL DEVIL LORD kehkar bulata hai par wo isiliye kyunki mujhe is character ke asliat ko suspense me rakhna tha.....



toh kya hai BEELZEBUB ki asliyat.........



BEELZEBUB ASMODEUS aur ALESANDRA ka beta aur uska chupaya gaya dusra sabse bada RAAZ hai.........



KAISE????CHALIYE BATATA HUN........



A FLASHBACK NARRATION:-



ASMODEUS se pehli baar milkar jab ALESENDRA apne grah ISLA wapas louti toh unhone ASMODUEUS ke baare me jitna usse pata tha,utna bata diya.....

apni beti ki baaton ke piche chupe pyar ko uske pita KING SOLOMON bhaamp gaye...

wo kaafi khush hue ye jaankar ki unki beti ko pyar ho gaya hai...par unki khushi zyada der tak tik nahi paayi...

unhone apne beti ke dimag se ASMODEUS ki chavi nikali par jo chehra unke saamne aaya usse dekhkar unhe ek tez jhatka laga....

ALESENDRA ne toh duniya nahi dekhi thi par KING SOLOMON ko toh pure brahmaand ke sabhi badi cheezon ke baare me pata tha...

unki beti ne SHAITANO ke devta ko chuna hai ye jaankar unki aankhon ke aage andhera chaa gaya..

unhone jab apni beti ko iske baare me bataya toh ALESENDRA ko yakin nahi hua......

ALESENDRA sachhai jaanane ke liye ASMODEUS ki khoj me firse nikalne waali thi par tabhi ASMODEUS ALESENDRA,KING SOLOMON aur unki wife ke saamne prakat hua....

ASMODEUS ne ALESENDRA ko bataya ki jo kuch bhi uske pita ne uske baare me kaha hai,wo sach hai........

fir ASMODEUS ne KING SOLOMON ko kaha ki agar wo uski shaadi ALESENDRA se kara denge toh wo saare bure kaam chhod dega..



BURAYI keh rahi thi ki ab wo BURAYI nahi karegi.ye hona toh asambhav tha par putri prem me andhe KING SOLOMON ASMODEUS ki baat maan gaye......



Par unke maanane ki ek wajah aur bhi thi... KING SOLOMON ko ye pata tha ki SHAITANO ka DEVTA hone se pehle ASMODEUS GOD ka beta bhi hai toh shayad unki beti ke prem ki wajah se ASMODEUS ke andar ki achayi firse jaag gayi ho yahi sochkar unhone shaadi ke liye haan keh diya......



par KING SOLOMON ye nahi jaante the ki ASMODEUS ka unki grah me aane ka asli kaaran kuch aur hai.....



WORLD OF WARRIORS ke baad ASMODEUS ka plan ISLA grah jaane ka hi tha...



ASMODEUS ko ISLA grah me ek aseem urja ka aabhas ho gaya tha....aur jab ALESENDRA ko ASMODEUS ne pehli baar dekha tab hi wo jaan gaya tha tha ki ALESENDRA kaun hai....

aisa nahi tha ki ASMODEUS ko ALESENDRA achi nahi lagi thi,par uski shakti ki bhook ke aage uski mohobbat ki aag feeki pad gayi....

tabhi usne decide kar liya tha ki ALESENDRA se shaadi kar wo ISLA ki us shakti ke shroth ka dhundega..



ASMODEUS aur ALESENDRA ki shaadi ho gayi.......



aur kuch hi mahino me ALESENDRA pregnent bhi ho gayi........



is beech ASMODEUS ko ISLA ke us shakti shroth FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT ke baare me bhi pata chal gaya tha......

wahin ISLA grah jo ki white energy ke aadhin tha,ASMODEUS ke aane ki wajah se is grah ki neev dagmagane lagi...

ISLA ke log,jo hamesha tandarust rehte the,unke sharir me rogon ka vaas hone laga..

KING SOLOMON ko doubt ho gaya tha ki in sab ke peeche ASMODEUS ki upastithi hi wajah hai par wo directly kuch bol nahi sakte the..

unhe ye bhi lag gaya tha ASMODEUS ne unse jhooth bola hai...usne abhi tak kaali shaktiyon ka tyag nahi kiya hai.....

shak toh ALESENDRA ko bhi ho gaya tha par wo bhi chup hi rehti thi.......

ek din jab ASMODEUS KING SOLOMON aur ALESENDRA ke saath FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT ke saamne gaya toh uske pahunchne se pehle hi FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT gayab ho gayi......

FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT WHITE ENERGY ka pratik thi,uske gayab hone se KING SOLOMON aur ALESENDRA ko yakin ho gaya ki ye sab ASMODEUS ki wajah se hi hua hai....

wahin itne mahino se jisko paane ki khwahish liye wo is grah me rooka hua tha us FOUNTAIN ko gayab hua dekh ASMODEUS ko bhi ghussa aa gaya......

aur agle hi pal ASMODEUS apne asli roop me tha....sir se lekar pair tak andheri raat se bhi kaale kapde,chehra barf se bhi zyada safed.aakhon ki putliyan sweth ho chuki thi...

ASMODEUS ke asli roop ko dekh kar ALESENDRA aur KING SOLOMON ki haalat kharab ho gayi.......

ASMODEUS ki aankhon ki putilyon ka colour ek second ke liye badalkar laal ho gaya..aur agle hi pal pura ISLA GRAH aag se jal utha.....

KING SOLOMON ASMODEUS ke pairon me gir gaye aur apne grah ko nuksaan na pahunchane ki ASMODEUS ke aage bheek maangne lage......

ASMODEUS ne ek lambi saans chhodi jaise ki apne ghusse ko pi gaya ho.ASMODEUS ke aisa karte hi aag bhujh gayi.......

ASMODEUS ne bohot koshish ki FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT ke baare me pata lagane ki par nahi laga saka....

par ab ASMODEUS apne asli roop me aa chuka tha....uske sharir se paap ki tarange nikalkar pure ISLA grah me failne lagi...

ISLA ki bholi bhaali praja ke dil me bhi ab chal,kapat paap panapne laga.....

ye sab dekhkar KING SOLOMON kaafi dukhi rehne lage wahin ALESENDRA ke dil me bhi ASMODEUS ke liye nafrat palne lagi.......

ALESENDRA ko ek aur baat ka bhi dar tha ki kahin uska beta bhi ASMODEUS ki hi tarah na ho jaaye.....

kuch din baad ALESENDRA ne ASMODEUS ko ISLA grah ko chhod kar chale jaane ko kaha aur fir kabhi na lout kar aane ka vachan liya...



jisse sunkar ASMODEUS muskuraya.....



ASMODEUS ne ALESENDRA ki baat maan li par saath hi ek shart rakhi aur gayab ho gaya.......

tab jaakar kahin ALESENDRA aur pure ISLA grah ne chain ki saans thi....

ALESENDRA ne decide kiya ki wo apne bacche ko ache sanskar dekar ek acha insaan banayegi par wo ye nahi jaanti thi ki SAANP ka beta kabhi bhi HIRAN nahi hota....

aakhir wo din bhi aa gaya jis din ALESENDRA maa banane waali thi.....

is awasar par ISLA ke raaj guru aur DEFENDER bhi aaye hue the....

yahan mai ek baat bata dun ki WARRIORS WORLD ke DEFENDER ke saath jo kuch bhi hua uske baad GODS MESSENGER ne har grah ke DEFENDER ko ASMODEUS se naa ulajhne ke aadesh diye the.....

ASMODEUS ka bachha amavasya ki raat paida hua aur wo bhi us muhurt me jisse sab KAAL muhurt kehte the..

par baat yahin pe khatm nahi hui,ASMODEUS ka baccha bhi ASMODEUS ki hi tarah barf sa safed tha aur uski bhi aankhon ki putliyan gaayab thi.....

uske paida hote hi uske sharir ke upar ASMODUS ki hi tarah kaale kapde aa gaye the......

ALESENDRA aur uske maata pita ye sab dekhkar kaafi dar gaye the aur rahi sahi kasar RAJGURU ne puri kar di....

RAJGURU ne sabko bataya ki ye bacha aage jaakar ISLA ke liye khatarnaak saabit hoga...

iska is grah par rehna thik nahi hai......

RAJGURU ki baat sunkar ALESENDRA aur uske mata pita ka dimag ghum gaya...

kisiko bhi kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya kare.........

ki tabhi......mahal me tez hawayen chalne lagi..wo kaali andheri raat aur andheri ho gayi......aur ASMODEUS ka bachha hawa me uth gaya.....

abhi koi kuch samajhta usse pehle hi mahal me ASMODEUS ki awaaz gunj gayi....

ASMODEUS apne waade ke anusar ISLA nahi gaya tha par wo us bache ko apne paas rakhna chahta tha.....

usne ALESENDRA se apne bete ko maanga....

ALESENDRA ye chahti toh nahi thi par uske paas koi option bhi toh nahi tha isiliye usne ASMODEUS ko haan kehdi aur agle hi pal wo bacha gayab hokar ASMODEUS ke paas pahunch gaya..............




FLASHBACK ENDS:-




ASMODEUS- kuch pata chala?????

BEELZEBUB- nahi FATHER.....sab kuch waisa hi hai jaisa pehle tha........

ASMODEUS- par maine kuch mehsoos kiya tha????

BEELZEBUB- mehsoos toh maine bhi kiya tha par jab mai wahan pahuncha toh sab kuch pehle jaisa hi tha.......

ASMODEUS- koi baat nahi.tum bas nazar rakhe raho.kya tum tumhari maa se baat karte ho?????

BEELZEBUB- kya FATHER.....aap toh sab jaante hain,fir bhi...........

ASMODEUS- hmm...par kya tumhe kabhi icha nahi hoti usse batane ki ki tum use bete ho????

BEELZEBUB- nahi FATHER....aur waise bhi,wo achai ki, GOD ki puja karti hain aur mai aapki......

hum dono ke soch ki neev hi itni alag hai ki mujhe unme apnepan wala ehsaas hi kabhi nahi hota....

par haan,jab unhone apke bhai ko sharan di thi tab mujhe unpe bohot krodh aaya tha.man toh kiya tha ki unhe aur aapke bhai ko ek saath khatm kar dun,par majboor tha..

apke aise karne ke aadesh naa the.....

ASMODEUS- tum usse haani toh pahuncha sakte ho par maar nahi sakte..hum dono ki mrityu ek dusre ke haathon hi ho sakti hai,aur kisike nahi....



BEELZEBUB- ek baat puchun FATHER?????



ASMODEUS-pucho............!!!!?????



BEELZEBUB- aapke bhai ne aap se itni saari baatein kahin,aapko galat theharaya par aapne palat kar jawab nahi diya........aisa kyun????

ASMODEUS- jawab tumhare sawaal me hi hai....BHAI.......issi shabd ki wajah se usse bolne diya.........

chota bhai hai,choti choti cheezon me jeetkar khush hone do......aur waise bhi, wo ROSHNI ke jaisa hai....aur ROSHNI ko ROSHAN nahi kiya jaata........



zindagi ki haqiqat har kisike liye alag alag hoti hai,par jo apni haqiqat ko khoj ussi raaste par ek dridh nishchaye ke saath chalne lagta hai,jeet ussiki hoti hai....

BEELZEBUB- aapka ansh,aapka khoon hone ki wajah se maine naajane kitni hi shaktiyan haasil ki,kitni siddhiyan prapt ki par aaj tak aapki baaton ke piche chupe raaz ka pata nahi laga paaya....



ASMODEUS- hahahaha......kuch baaton ko samjha nahi jaata,unpar aankh band karke amal kiya jaata hai....

jis din tum un baaton ko amal me le aaoge,us baat ka matlab apneaap hi samajh jaaoge....

BEELZEBUB- kya aapke bhai bhi aapki hi tarah baatein karte hain.....!!!!

ASMODEUS- hmm,kuch kuch.........tujhe ek kaam karna hai......

ASMODEUS ke mooh se achanak kaam sunkar BEELZEBUB jo ab tak casually baat kar raha tha,wo satark ho gaya.....



BEELZEBUB- aadesh de FATHER.........



ASMODEUS ne BEELZEBUB ko uska kaam bataya......

BEELZEBUB- jo aagnya......

BEELZEBUB ne apna sir jhukaya aur gayab ho gaya...



ASMODEUS- dekhte hain BHAI,jab tera waqt aayega toh tu kya karega??????





PLANET- EARTH





PLACE- COLLEGE CANTEEN........




HEY GUYZZZZZ...................



hey V.J.abhi mere frns shayad aur bhi kuch kehte par mere saath ALISHA ko dekhkar wo sab shocked ho gaye isiliye chup ho gaye....



subah ka waqt hai..kal hi ki tarah aaj bhi classes nahi lagi thi......ANJALI aur RONIT ek saath aaj college aaye the.....



aur mai aaj bhi kal hi ki tarah thoda late aaya tha......

kal hue incident ke baad ANJALI aur SHANAYA ne mera dimag khaa diya tha.....

dono ne ek ghante tak meri ALISHA ko HAAN kehne ki baat ko alag alag tarike se verify kiya tha.

unhe yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ki mai kisiko itni aasani se HAAN keh sakta hun wo bhi uska VALENTINE partner banane ke liye...

is beech ek baar RONIT ke mooh se nikal gaya ki "toh kya hua yaar.ALISHA hai bhi toh kitni hot""......

RONIT ke mooh se ye baat nikalte hi ANJALI ne uski haalat kharab kar di thi.....

bohot mushkil se RONIT ne ANJALI ko manaya tha....

par uski class khatm hui nahi ki un dono ne ek baar firse meri class lene shuru kar di.......

is pure douran AVANTIKA chup hi rahi...uska chehra bilkul emotionless sa ho gaya tha...

idhar jab in dono ke mooh band nahi hui toh maine unse kaha ki kisike saath toh jaana hi tha toh ALISHA me kya burayi hai....

meri baat ka unke paas koi jawab nahi tha isiliye dono chup ho gaye..........



mai kabhi bhi kisi aur ke saath kabhi hang out karta nahi tha isiliye abhi mujhe ALISHA ke saath dekhkar sabhi firse shocked ho gaye the...

MAI-abbe,bhoot dekh liya kya tum teeno ne ??????

RONIT- bhoot hi dekh liya lag raha hai mujhe toh......aaj mera dost ek ladki ke saath aa raha hai.......

MAI- haan toh isme kya badi bat hai......mai ladki ke saath nahi aa sakta kya???sit ALISHA......

maine ALISHA ke liye ek chair piche ki.ALISHA baith gayi......

ALISHA- hi guys & sorry haan,meri wajah se hi aapka friend aaj late aaya hai.....



ANJALI- MATLAB!!!!!!!

ALISHA ki baat sunkar baaki sabko bhi ek jhatka laga....

MAI- tum sab ke manners kahan gaye....pehle uske HI ka toh jawab do.......!!!

SAB- hi...........



ALISHA- haan,ab batao....

ANJALI ki excitement dekhkar mai zor se has pada.....

ANJALI- daant dikhana band kar nahi toh tod dungi...haan,tumne bataya nahi,tumhari wajah se V.J kaise late hua????

ALISHA- haan wo actually aaj mai V.J ke saath hi aayi hun naa.toh isne pehle mujhe pick kiya fir hum aaye..is chakkar me thoda late ho gaye...

ALISHA ki baat sunkar sabke mooh khule ke khule reh gaye......

ANJALI- V.J ne tumhe pick kiya wo bhi tumhare ghar se.!!!!!!

ALISHA- haan toh!!!!isme itna surprise hone ki kya baat hai....!!!!!!

ronit- SURPRISE.......!!!!!!!!! ye toh CHAMATKAR waali baat hai........V.J ne hum dono ko chhodkar aajtak kisi ko bhi ghar jaakar pick nahi kiya.......

ALISHA- i guess i am lucky then.......

RONIT- lucky nahi bohot zyada lucky......bhai ek baat bata,ALISHA sirf VALENTINE PARTNER hai ya fir teri VALENTINE hai?????

ALISHA- abhi tak toh PARTNER hi hun..but..........future ka,who knows??????

RONIT- matlab ek taraf aag jal gayi hai....kyun????

ANJALI- chupkar...aur ALISHA,kuch apne baare me batao............????tumne kaafi late admission liya hai naa.infact,shayad 2 hi mahine hue hain tumhe college aate hue...

aur tum toh science me ho naa.usme mid term admission milna,quite tough haan!!!

ALISHA-haan,wo actually,dad GOVERNMENT job me hain....unka transfer yahan ho gaya..is college ke baare me maine bohot suna tha.......

mere marks ache the isiliye mujhe admission milne me koi dikkat nahi aayi.....

ANJALI- ohh........aur itne ladkon ke beech tumne V.J ko hi kyun chuna apne VALENTINE PARTNER?????tum toh ho bhi kaafi beautiful....tumhe toh koi bhi haan bol dega.

ALISHA- are you serious....tum puch rahi ho ki maine BEST ko kyun chuna????inke aage aur koi hai toh bata do,mai usse chun lungi........

AVANTIKA- ALISHA,pasand BEST dekhkar nahi kiya jaata..jisse pasand kiya jaata hai,wo hamare liye BEST ho jaata hai....

AVANTIKA ne ye baat mujhe dekhkar kahi...

ALISHA- jo har cheez me BEST ho,kya wo partner ke taur par bhi BEST nahi ho sakta!!!!!!!

RONIT- ye bhi sahi hai..waise SHANAYA,AVANTIKA...tum dono ko bhi ab apne apne partners dhoond lene chahiye.....

VALENTINES day ko bas do din hi bache hain......

SHANAYA- mera toh ho gaya........

RONIT- kya???kab??aur tune bataya bhi nahi?????

SHANAYA- ANJU ko toh bataya tha...mujhe laga wo tujhe bata degi.....

RONIT- ANJU....tune mujhe nahi bataya....

ANJALI- arre mere dimag se nikal gaya.aur waise bhi,usne VALENTINE contest me participate karne ke liye partner chuna hai,life partner banane ke liye nahi...

RONIT- waise hai kaun????

MAI- VINCENT PAUL........hamare hi class ka hai.....

abhi SHANAYA kuch kehti isse pehle maine bol diya....

SHANAYA- how do u know????maine toh kuch bhi nahi bataya....

RONIT- isse tu kuch bhi nahi chhupa sakti...isse sabke baare me sabkuch pata rehta hai.....



AVANTIKA dheere se- GHANTA pata rehta hai.........



MAI- kya kaha AVNI...............??????

AVANTIKA mere sawaal par hadabada gayi...

AVANTIKA- kuuchhh bhi toh nahi.........

MAI- tumhari awaaz kyun atak rahi hai????

AVANTIKA- wwwooo,kuch atak gaya tha.....

AVANTIKA paani peene lagi.....

MAI- wo tumhare gale ka GHANTA,i mean ghanti fas gayi hogi.......

meri baat sunkar AVANTIKA ke mooh me bhara paani baahar aa gaya.........

aur AVANTIKA khaasne lagi.........

SHANAYA- aaram se babes.........

AVANTIKA ne meri taraf dekha,par mujhe dekhte hi usse sharm aayi,usse pata jo chal gaya tha ki usne jo dheere se bola tha wo maine sun liya tha....

SHANAYA- waise kal AVNI ko bhi kaafi logon ne VALENTINE ke liye approach kiya tha...

ANJALI- toh isme kaun si nayi baat hai...madam ko toh 1 mahine se commerce,science,maths aur arts department ke bande bhi puch rahe hain....

par madam kisiko haan kahe toh naa!!!!!!

RONIT- haan yaar AVNI,ab toh waise bhi sirf do hi din baaki hai.......tune abhi tak kisiko final nahi kiya.aise me toh hamara group VALENTINE'S party me adhura reh jaayega.....

ANJALI- exactly..........bilkul bhi maza nahi aayega....bhale koi bhi jeete ,par agar hum sab participate karte toh kitna maza aata!!!!

ALISHA- ya babes........u have to say yes to someone.....

SHANAYA- arre meri puri baat toh suno.....

kal bhi hamesha ki hi tarah AVNI ne kaafi ladko ko reject kiya par last me ek banda aaya.usne bhi AVNI ko approch kiya...

banda kaafi smart tha par mujhe laga ki madam isse bhi mana kar dengi par..........

ANJALI- AVANTIKA maan gayi kya??????

SHANAYA- thodi thodi........

RONIT- ab ye kua logic hua ????

SHANAYA- matlab AVNI ne usse soch kar bataungi,aisa kaha hai........

ANJALI- ye tune bilkul theek kiya babes.....in ladko ko naa thoda tadpaakar hi haan bolna chahiye,warna inhe hamari kadar hi nahi rehti.....

ye baat ANJALI ne RONIT ko dekhkar kahi thi....

RONIT- lai,ab maine kya kiya????

ANJALI- kya kiya!!!!!VALENTINES week ko start hue aaj 5 din ho gaye hain.in 5 dino me tumne mujhe sirf ek hi gift diya hai..baaki ke 4 kahan hai?????

RONIT- arre tune hi toh kaha tha ki tujhe ye 7 din ke 7 gifts ka funda samajh nahi aata....

tujhe ye sab bas showoff lagta hai...isiliye maine 1st day ke baad tujhe kuch nahi diya...

ANJALI- maine bola aur tune man liya.tere paas apna dimag nahi hai kya?????

ANJALI ki baat sunkar jahan teeno ladkiyan has rahi thi,wahin RONIT bechara waala mooh banakar meri taraf dekhne laga....



MAI- yahi ishq hai BACCHE........
THANK GOD

hum single hi ACCHE........



meri baat sunkar sabhi has diye.......

ANJALI- waise us ladke ka naam kya hai????aur kaun se branch se hai????

SHANAYA- maths branch se hai....aur naam hai UTKARSH.............


ALISHA- kya naam bataya tumne.........?????



HI GUYZZZ,HI AVANTIKA............



abhi ALSIHA ke sawaal ka SHANAYA jawab deti usse pehle hi ye awaaz humare kaano me padi.....

humare saamne ek handsome sa banda khada tha....



AVANTIKA- hi UTKARSH............



ye wahi ladka hai doston jisne AVANTIKA ko approch kiya tha.......

UTKARSH- AVANTIKA,tumne kuch socha,jo maine kaha tha uske baare me....we u come with me to the VALENTINE'S party as my VALENTINE....

AVANTIKA ne ek baar muskurakar meri taraf dekha aur fir saamne UTKARSH ki taraf dekhne lagi jo ALISHA ki hi tarah ek ummid liye AVANTIKA ki taraf dekh raha tha........




AVANTIKA- yes................



CONGRATTTTSSSS............



aur fir kuch aisa hua ki mere saare dost including AVANTIKA shocked ho gaye.....

ye jo congratts shabd abhi abhi uccharit hua tha naa ye ALISHA ne kaha tha aur ye usne AVANTIKA se nahi balki UTKARSH se kaha tha...

par shock hone ka kaaran ye tha ki ye bolkar ALISHA UTKARSH ke gale lag gayiii jisse dekhkar mere friends shocked ho gaye......



SHANAYA- ALISHA tu UTKARSH ko jaanti hai kya???



RONIT- ye kaisa sawaal hai!!ofcourse jaanti hogi tabhi toh usse hug kiya hai...ye puch ki kaise jaanti hai????

ALISHA- kisiko kuch bhi puchne ki zaroorat nahi hai......mai batati hun ki mai isse kaise jaanti hun........



so guys,naam toh aap sab iska jaante hi ho.....UTKARSH aur mujhse zyada isse aur koi nahi jaanta kyunki ye mera

BHAI HAI.........






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.......





AAPKA APNA V..J....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI ASMODEUS APNE BETE BEELZEBUB KO KUCH KAAM DETA HAI WAHIN AVANTIKA KA VALANTINE PARTNER UTKARSH VIKRAM KI VALENTINE PARTNER ALISHA KA BHAI NIKALTA HAI....
AB AAGE:-





CHAPTER-2:-





( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )





UPDATE- 69





PLANET- MIRROR WORLD




PLACE- INFRONT OF THE THREE MIRRORS





MIRROR WORLD......!!!!!!!!!!!ye grah bhi ek anbhujhi peheli jaisi hi hai.....

FATHER se najane kitni baar puch chuka hun is grah ke baare me,par unke jawab toh sawal se bhi zyada uljhe hue hote hain....

ASMODEUS ne apne bete BEELZEBUB ko MIRROR WORLD hi bheja tha.....kyun!!!!kuch hi der me aapko pata chal jaayega....

BEELZEBUB-khair,kabhi na kabhi toh iske baare me jaan kar hi rahunga......

filhal FATHER ne jis kaam ke liye bheja hai,wo toh kar lun....par aaj kayi dino baad maza bohot aayega....

MIRRORS ke saamne ek mark tha jahan har aane waale ko khada hona padta tha.....



( MIRROR WORLD KE BAARE ME APKO KAHANI KE 3RD AUR LAST CHAPTER ME PATA CHALEGA ).....



par BEELZEBUB kisi bhi mark ke saamne khada nahi hua balki usne apne haath aage kar diye....

BEELZEBUB ke haathon se ek saath 3 bijliyon ki rays nikli aur teen MIRRORS par padi......



KRRRRRRRRRRRRR............



MIRRORS par rays takraate hi ek ajeeb si awaaz hui par ye kya!!!!!!!!!

teeno MIRRORS waise hi the.bijliyon ke takraane se unme koi fark nahi aaya par usse bhi ajeeb ye tha ki ye sab dekhkar bhi BEELZEBUB ke chehre par shock nahi,balki ek muskurahat thi...

jaise ki usse pata tha ki yahi hone waala hai.....



ki tabhi............



teeno mirrors ke beech ek tez prakash hua aur us prakash se ek electical rassi nikli aur BEELZEBUB ki taraf badhi....

us electical rassi ki speed kaafi tez thi par BEELZEBUB usse apni taraf aata hua aaram se dekh raha tha...

par uske chehre par ab bhi koi tention nahi dikh raha tha....wo apni jagah par apne kamar par haath tikaye khada tha....

us electrical rassi ne BEELZEBUB ko chaaron taraf se jakad liya aur agle hi pal MIRRORS ne BEELZEBUB ko apne andar kheench liya....

BEELZEBUB beech waale MIRROR ke andar se hota hua MIRROR WORLD ke andar daakhil ho gaya....

ab BEELZEBUB MIRROR WORLD ki duniya ke andar khada tha aur idhar udhar dekh raha tha maano kisi ka intazar kar raha ho....



ki tabhi..........



BEELZEBUB se thodi door ek tez bijli kadki aur zamin par giri....

zameen pe bijli ke girte hi wahan dhuan sa uth gaya aur jab wo dhua chatta toh wahan koi khada tha jisse dekhkar BEELZEBUB ki muskaan aur gehri ho gayi......

BEELZEBUB- aao AGRASENA aao......mai tumhara hi intazar kar raha hun......

wahin BEELZEBUB ke saamne khade AGRASENA ke chehre par krodh ke bhaav the........

BEELZEBUB- arre arre..........ye kya!!!!chehre par itna ghussa...!!!!!lagta hai tumhe mera yahan aana acha nahi laga......

par fir bhi ye galat baat hai,mehmaan pasand ho ya naa ho,par uska uchit swagat karna tumhara kartawya hai....

AGRASENA- kartavya ki baat tum na hi karo toh acha hoga BEELZEBUB............ASMODEUS ke gande khoon ka kabhi bhi kisi pavitra jagah par swagat nahi ho sakta....

apne pita ke baare me aisi baat sunkar ek pal ke liye BEELZEBUB ko ghussa aa gaya par agle hi pal usne khud ko shaant kar liya....

AGRASENA- maanana padega........abhi tak tumhe meri batayi hui baatein yaad hain.....

BEELZEBUB- kisi zamane me tum mere guru the......aur BEELZEBUB apne faayde me aane waali cheezon ko kabhi nahi bhulta......



JI HAAN DOSTON,KISI ZAMANE ME AGRASENA BEELZEBUB KA GURU THA..ISSI MIRROR WORLD ME BEELZUB KO EK NAHI BALKI 2 MIRRORS NE CHUNA THA....



AGRASENA- theek apne pitah ki tarah.......bas ek fark hai.....ASMODEUS jis cheez se faayda hota hai,wo naa sirf usse yaad rakhta hai,balki us cheez ke shroth ko paane ki bhi koshish karta hai........

BEELZEBUB- toh isme galat kya hai????SHAKTI HI JEEVAN HAI..............

AGRASENA- dusron ki khushi cheenkar jo zindagi milti hai usse JEEVAN nahi SHAAPIT JEEVAN kehte hain........

par tum ye nahi samjhoge............khair,tum apne aane ka kaaran batao........

BEELZEBUB- YUDH....mai aapse yudh karna chahta hun.......

BEELZEBUB ki baat sunkar ek pal ke liye AGRASENA chownk gaya par agle hi pal muskurate hue usne kaha.......

AGRASENA- kya mai iska kaaran jaan sakta hun??????

BEELZEBUB- bas man kar raha hai aapko chunouti dene ka...........

AGRSENA- tum bilkul apne baap ki tarah ho BEELZEBUB....kuch bhi bina kaaran ke nahi karte..

par mai ye bhi jaanta hun ki tum mujhe wo kaaran nahi bataoge.......

thik hai,mujhe tumhari chunouti manzoor hai.....par meri ek shart hai......!!!!!

BEELZEBUB- manzoor hai.......

AGRASENA- bina shart sune????

BEELZUBUB- aapki yahi shart hai naa ki agar aap jeete toh mai is grah par kabhi bhi dobara kadam na rakhun!!!!!

AGRASENA BEELZEBUB ki baat sunkar chownk gaya.....kyunki AGRASENA wahi kehne waala tha jo abhi abhi BEELZEBUB ne kaha tha.....

AGRASENA- tumhe kaise pata ki mai kya kehne waala tha????

BEELZEBUB- humari baaton me hi hamare sabhi sawaalon ke jawab chupe hote hain...

kya guruji,aap toh apni hi di hui shiksha bhul gaye.....

aap hi ne toh thodi der pehle kaha tha naa ki mai bilkul apne FATHER ki tarah hun...

jab unse kisi ke dil ki baat nahi chupti toh mujhse kaise chupegi.......

khair.mujhe aapki shart manzoor hai par.....

AGRASENA- tumhari bhi ek shart hai....KYUN????? yahi naa!!!!!!!!

AGRASENA ne BEELZEBUB ki aage ki baat puri ki par uski baat ko sunkar BEELZEBUB ke honthon par ek muskaan naach gayi.........

BEELZEBUB- mai kaun hota hun aapke saamne koi shart rakhne waala gurudev!!!!!

meri toh bas ek chota sa nivedan hai..agar aap maan le toh aapka upkaar hoga...

AGRASENA- pehle tum apni baat rakho phir mai bataunga ki tumhari baat maanani chahiye ya nahi....

BEELZEBUB- aap toh itne shaktishali hain.mai bas yahi chahta hun ki aap mujhse apni shaktiyon ke bal par laden.........!!!!!

AGRASENA- mai samjha nahi......

BEELZEBUB- aapke paas ye jo SWORD hai,mai chahata hun ki aap iski shakti ka prayog mere saath yudh me naa karen.....

warna aap jeet kar bhi vijeta nahi kehlaayenge kyunki wo jeet is SWORD ki aapko di gayi bheek hogi....

AGRASENA BEELZEBUB ki baat sun kar bhadak gaya.......

AGRASENA- tumhe lagta hai ki mujhe tumhe harane ke liye is SWORD ki zaroorat hai...

thik hai,mai tumhe vachan deta hun ki hamare beech jo yudh hoga,usme mai is SWORD ka upyog nahi karunga.....

ye bolkar AGRASENA ne apni miyaan apni peeth se nikali aur fek di......

par miyan niche zamin par nahi giri,balki hawa me hi jhul gayi............



AGRASENA- taiyar ho....

BEELZEBUB- hamesha.......

AGRASENA ne apni aakhen band ki.....



aur agle hi pal............



AGRASENA ke sharir ke andar se ek ke baad ek saikdon shastra nikle par ye kya......!!!!

wo shastra bas ek pal ke liye hi dikhe,agle pal wo sab gayab ho gaye.....

ye ek anokha jaadu tha.............



isme ek pal ke liye pratidwandi ko saare shastra apni taraf aate hue dikhte hain par agle hi pal saare shastra gayab hokar alag alag disha me bant gaye.....

saamne waale ko lagta hai ki saare shashtra aage se aa rahe hain aur uska saara dhyan saamne ki taraf hi rehta hai.......

par saare shashtra charon taraf se ek saath wapas ghum kar ussi pratidwandi ki taraf adrishya haalat me hi waapas aate hain....

AGRASENA ke pehle waar se BEELZEBUB ke chehre par ek halki si muskaan aa gayi maano usse pata ho ki AGRASENA ne kya chaal chali hai.......

BEELZEBUB ne apni aankhen band kar lin aur AGRASENA dwaara chhode gaye saare shashtron ko mehsoos karne laga....

saare shashtron ko apne chaaron taraf mehsoos kar BEELZEBUB ne apne right hand ki INDEX finger ko gol gol ghumaya....



MAAYA KHANDAMMMM.....

MAGIC BREAK.............



par ye ek maatr SPELL nahi tha jo BEELZEBUB ne bola tha....right hand ke fingure ko gol ghumane ke saath saath BEELZEBUB ne kuch aur bhi kuch kiya tha.....

BEELZUBUB ne apne dusre haath ko neeche rakhe hue left hand ke INDEX finger ko bhi gol gol ghumaya aur.............



KAAL PAASHAM........

DEVIL'S BONDAGE.........



pehle SPELL ke ucharit hote hi AGRASENA ke chhode gaye shashtra apni jagah par hi jal gaye........

AGRASENA ka saara dhyan BEELZEBUB ke right hand ki taraf tha.......

apne shashtron ko jalte dekh AGRASENA zyada shock nahi hua kyunki wo jaanta tha ki sirf ek hi waar se BEELZEBUB ko haraya nahi jaa sakta...

isiliye apne waar ko khali jaate dekh AGRASENA ne turant apni aakhen band kar dusra SPELL bolne ki koshish ki.......

koshish isiliye kyunki wo SPELL bolne me kamiyab nahi ho paaya......

kyunki BEELZEBUB ke bole hue dusre SPELL ne apna kaam kar diya tha.........



MMMMMMM...MMMMMMMMM.............



AGRASENA- tum apni harkaton se baaz nahi aaye,haina BEELZEBUB.........ladna tha toh bal se ladte,yun chhal karne ka kya matlab hai....??????

hua ye ki BEELZEBUB ke bole gaye dusre SPELL ke prabhav me aakar AGRASENA ek kaale ray ke bandhan me bandh gaye the...

jaisa ki maine bataya tha ki AGRASENA ka pura dhyan saamne ki taraf tha aur BEELZEBUB ne jaise hi apna dusra SPELL bola,ek kaala duan jo ki KAAL PAASH tha.....

AGRASENA ke piche prakat hua aur kisi AJGAR ki tarah AGRASENA ko apne ghere me lapetatha chala gaya........

BEELZEBUB- yudh me BAL se zyada ghaatak CHAL hota hai,isse hamesha satark rehna chahiye,ye shiksha bhi aap hi ki di gayi thi gurudev...

aur aaj aap khud hi ye sab bhul gaye aur uske upar mujhe DOSH de rahe hain....

is bramhaand ki sabsi kathin aur sarvoch shiksha mujhe mere FATHER ne di hai....

aur unke mutabik bhale kisi bhi tarah se kyun na mili ho,JEET,JEET hoti hai.......

AGRASENA- toh ab.......intazar kiska hai???maar do mujhe.....

BEELZEBUB- thik kaha aapne,mujhe aur vilamb nahi karna chahiye.....

BEELZEBUB ne haath aage kiya aur agle hi pal uske haath me ek SWROD aa gayi...

BEELZEBUB us SWORD ko haath me pakde chalte hue AGRASENA ke saamne khada ho gaya.....



aur SOOBH.............



BEELZEBUB ki talwar tezi se chali aur.........



arre ye kya!!!!!!!!



BEELZEBUB ne SWORD chalayi toh zaroor par usse AGRASENA ke gale ke paas laakar rok di......

BEELZEBUB- hahahahahahahaha.....

mujhe murkh samjha hai aapne gurudev....mujhe gyat hai ki mere talwar aapke garden ke aar paar karte hi kya hoga?????

apki ye jo SWORD is waqt hawa me latki hui hai,wo aapke haath me aa jaayegi aur aap punah jeevit ho uthenge....

aur kyunki maine aap par jaan lewa vaar kiya hoga isiliye aap mujhpe is SWORD se humla kar sakenge aur mujhe maar denge......

par aisa hoga nahi AGRASENA..........

mujhe pitaji ne yahan sabkuch bata kar bheja hai.unhone mujhe aapko is KAAL PAASH me baandhne ka aadesh diya tha,maarne ka nahi.........

maine apna aadha kaam toh kar diya hai.aadha baaki hai...

BEELZEBUB ka ab bhi koi kaam baaki hai ye sunkar AGRASENA shocked ho gaya....

BEELZEBUB- mai jaanta hun ki aap kya soch rahe hain par chinta mat kijiye,sab pata chal jaayega.....

ye jo talwar mere haathon me hai naa,isse maine aapko darane ke liye nahi rakha hai,balki mere dusre kaam ko anjaam dene ke liye rakha hai..........

BEELZEBUB ne jo talwar pakdi thi,usse hawa me latakti hui AGRASENA ki SWORD ki taraf fenk diya....

BEELZEBUB ki SWORD AGRASENA ki SWORD ke thik saamne hawa me rook gayi....

BEELZEBUB ki SWORD se ek roshni nikli aur AGRASENA ke sword ke upar jaakar ruki...

aur fir wo roshni AGRASENA ke SWORD ke upar se niche tak ghumne lagi maano usko scan kar rahi hai.....

aur pura scan karne ke baad wo roshni BEELZEBUB ke SWORD ke upar gayi aur ek chaadar ki taraf BEELZEBUB ke SWORD ko odhti chali gayi.............



aur agle pal..........



AGRASENA ki aankhen me shock aur chinta,dono bhaav naachne lage....

SHOCK isiliye kyunki ab BEELZEBUB ki SWORD hubahu AGRASENA ki SWORD jaisi dikh rahi thi..........

TENTION isiliye kyunki AGRASENA jaan gaye the ki aisa karne ke piche BEELZEBUB aur ASMODEUS ka zaroor koi khaas maksad hoga!!!

wahin BEELZEBUB ne fir kuch kiya......

BEELZEBUB ne ek mayavi DIWAL banayi aur dono SWORDS ussi DIWAL par tanga diya..

uske baad usne aur ek SPELL bola....

dono SWORDS ke saamne ek ek darwaza ban gaya par agle hi pal gayab bhi ho gaya.....

BEELZEBUB- ab mai chalta hun gurudev...par usse pehle ek aakhri kaam reh gaya hai,wo kar leta hun...

BEELZEBUB ne apne haath AGRASENA ki taraf apni ek ungli uthayi aur usse ek taraf point kar diya...........

jis KAAL PAASH se AGRASENA bandhe hue the,BEELZEBUB ke ishara karte hi wo PAASH AGRASENA ko liye ek jagah paahunche aur fir AGRASENA gayab ho agye.........

BEELZEBUB- chalo,FATHER dwara diya gaya kaam toh pura hua...ab chala jaaye....

BEELZUBAB adrishya ho gaya aur..............



BEELZEBUB- ARRE,MAI YAHAN KAISE PAHUNCH GAYA????????





PLANET- EARTH




PLACE- COLLEGE AUDITORIUM




yaar,sabhi ne saare dance forms choose kar liye hain.....ab hum kya karen??????

subah ka waqt hai.......mai aur mere saare frnz is waqt college ke auditoruim me hain...

kal ALISHA ne jab kaha ki UTKARSH uska bhai hai toh mere frnz shock ho gaye....

ye bhi un sabke liye ek ajeeb co incidence tha ki mere aur AVANTIKA ke VALENTINE PARTNER siblings nikle.........

khair,kuch der me hi UTKARSH humse ghul mil gaya....

AVANTIKA kaafi openly UTKARSH se baatein kar rahi thi....RONIT aur ANJALI ne is baat par zyada dhyan nahi diya par SHANAYA AVANTIKA ke aise bartaav se kaafi shocked thi....

kyunki AVANTIKA kaafi reserved type ki ladki hai aur suddenly kisi bande ke saath jisse wo bas kal hi mili hai,itna open ho jaana wakayi SHANAYA ke liye ye shocking baat thi....

par usne socha ki kyunki VALENTINE'S DAY ko sirf 2 din hi bache hai isiliye shayad AVANTIKA khudko UTKARSH ke saath comfortable feel karwane ke liye ye sab kar rahi hai....

khair aaj milne ka promise karke hum sab apne apne ghar nikal gaye..

aur aaj hum sabhi thoda jaldi hi college aa gaye.....

actually baat ye thi contest ko do levels pe divide kiya gaya tha......

jiska ek level toh humare liye surprise rakha gaya tha par final level pe humko apne partner ke saath ek dance performance dena hoga,ye bata diya gaya tha......

baad me pura AUDITORUIM students se occupy ho jaata hai isiliye hum sab aaj kuch jaldi aa gaye.........

aaj humara group ek saath hokar bhi alag alag tha..kyunki har koi apne partner ke saath tha isiliye hum sab ek saath hote hue bhi sirf apne partner se baat kar rahe the...

MAI- contemporary try karen........!!!!!VALENTINES DAY mesuit bhi karega.......

AVANTIKA- nahi nahi.....CONTEMPORARY hum kar rahe hain...tum log kuch aur try karo.....

isse pehle ki mere suggestion pe ALISHA kuch bolti AVANTIKA madam jo ki hamare side me hi khadi thi,unhone apni pratikriya de di......

UTKARSH- ye humne kab decide kiya?????

UTKARSH ki baat sunkar mujhe hasi aa gayi...



MAI- yaar AVNI,agar hum dono hi CONTEMPORARY kar len,toh isme problem hai kya?????

AVANTIKA- hum dono??????

MAI- hum matlab mai aur ALISHA abhi ke liye ek hi hue naa.....waise hi tum aur UTKARSH abhi as a couple dance kar rahe ho toh tum dono bhi ek hue.......

isiliye hum dono........

AVANTIKA dheere se- mujhe koi shouk nahi hai kisiko bhi khud se milakar EK bolne me...

MAI- kuch kaha?????

AVANTIKA- haa,kya???nahi toh........mai toh ye bol rahi hun ki hum contemporary kar rahe hain,tum kuch aur kar lo?????

ALISHA- par aur bacha kya???

MAI- ek kaam karte hain......hum SAALSA kar lete hain.........

meri baat sunkar AVANTIKA ka dimag ghum gaya.....kahan wo hume contemprory dance karne se rok rahi thi taaki mujhe aur ALISHA ko kuch bhi ROMANTIC steps karne ka mouka na mile.........

aur ab maine SAALSA keh diya tha jo ki ROMANCE ke saath saath SENSIOUSNESS aur SEDUCTION ke liye best maana jaata hai...

AVANTIKA- kya!!!!!SAALSA!!!!tumhe SAALSA ka S bhi aata hai kya????

mai AVANTIKA ki baat sunkar muskura diya....

MAI- koshish karen me kya harz hai????

RONIT- kya bola???koshish!!!!!AVNI,tum kya beech beech me bhul jaati ho ki kisse baat kar rahi ho.........

V.J is a gem in DANCING....aur uske upar HIPHOP,BREAK DANCE,CONTEMPRORY aur SALSA toh iske main FORTE hain..........

ALISHA- par mujhe toh sachmuch SAALSA ka S bhi nahi aata....

AVANTIKA- mai bhi ALISHA ke liye hi bol rahi thi.....V....J ke liye nahi...

MAI dheere se- paltu...........

AVANTIKA- kya kaha?????

MAI- mai keh toh raha tha par tumse nahi ALISHA se...yaar,tum tention mat karo,i'll help u out.......

aur waise bhi,hum easy steps hi karenge....

ANJALI- yaar ALISHA,tum sach me lucky ho........V.J ke sirf saath nahi,ab tum V.J ki baahon me rehkar ye VALENTINE manaogi.....

sahi maayno me kal tum dono hi couple lagoge........

idhar sab ANJALI ki baaton par has diye,bas do log aise the jinke chehre par alag expressions the...

1st ALISHA ke jo ANJALI ki baat sunkar sharma gayi thi.......

2ND AVANTIKA ke jo kaafi sad ho gayi thi par upar se muskura rahi thi..........

maine ek baar AVANTIKA ki taraf dekha jo mujhe hi dekh rahi thi par mere uske taraf dekhte hi usne nazaren ghuma li......

maine bhi ek lambi saans chhodi aur lag gaya apne kaam pe..matlab ALISHA ko steps samjhane me..........

par mujhe RONIT, ANJALI aur SHANAYA aur VINCENT ki jodi ko bhi beech beech me steps batane pad rahe the..

nahi batata toh saale mujhe bhi practice nahi karne dete..

wahin AVANTIKA aur UTKARSH khud hi apni practice kar rahe the..UTKARSH ko kaafi ache moves aate the,wo AVANTIKA ko steps batata jaa raha tha...

hum sab ne personal HEAD PHONES lagaye hue the taaki kisi bhi jodi ko dusre ke songs se disturbance naa ho.......

is pure practice time me AVANTIKA has has kar UTKARSH se baat karti rahi aur beech beech me mujhe dekhti rahi..

par jab bhi wo meri taraf dekhti toh sad ho jaati kyunki maine uski taraf ek baar bhi nahi dekha tha..

aisa usse lagta tha..par pagli ko kaun samjhaye ki.............



JISKI TASVIR DIL ME BASI HO USSE DEKHNE KE LIYE AANKHON KI ZAROORAT NAHI PADTI.............



khair,is logic ko AVANTIKA ke samajh me aane me abhi kaafi time hai..........

hum sabne practice khatm ki..ab AUDITORIUM me kaafi students aa chuke the.....

aur jaisa ki maine bataya tha ki aajkal classes nahi lag rahe the isiliye hum sab ne apne apne ghar jaane ka decide kiya.....

RONIT aur ANJALI aaj bike se aa gaye the toh wo apna nikla gaye....SHANAYA aur AVANTIKA apni car se ab bach gaya mai...

maine bhi car unlock ki aur andar baith gaya..



ki tabhi................



do logon ne meri car ke glass ko knock kiya...maine door unlock kar diya...

ek ne meri side open ki aur mere side waali seat par baith gayi aur dusre ne peeche waali door open ki aur peeche baith gaya....

ye dono aur koi nahi balki ALISHA aur UTKARSH the......



ALISHA- ek baat puchun????

MAI- hmm.......

ALISHA- koi bhi ladki V.J ki partner banane ke liye ready ho jaati fir mai hi kyun???

MAI- aur agar wo ladki mujhe pasand karne lagti toh???

mai apne faayde ke liye kisike dil se toh nahi khel sakta naa.

mere liye ALISHA hi thik hai aur yahi baat AVANTIKA pe bhi laagu hoti hai isiliye AVANTIKA ke liye UTKARSH hi thik hai.......

UTKARSH- kya wo hamari asliyat kabhi jaan paayegi......

MAI- bilkul jaanegi aur thanks meri help karne ke liye,




ST ALFRICK,



ST CECILIA..............





AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......





AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Very nice Update bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI BEELZEBUB AGRASENA KO KAID KAR LETA HAI AUR USKE SWORD KA BHI EK DUPLICATE BANA DETA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF YE PATA CHALTA HAI KI ALISHA AUR UTKARSH AUR KOI NAHI BALKI ST CECILIA AUR ST ALFRICK HAIN.
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CHAPTER-2





( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )




UPDATE- 70





PLANET- GLUTO





PLACE- PALACE GARDEN





GHOOR KYUN RAHI HO????



praatah kaal ek shaksh apni aankhen band kiye dhyan ki awastha me baitha hua hai.....

dhyan me baithne se aksar tejaswi logon ke sharir chamakne lagte hain.par is waqt jo shaksh dhyan awashta me baitha tha,uske sharir se kaale dhuen nikal aas paas ke sabhi ujwalit jagahon par apna asar dikha rahe the.....

wo sabhi jagah andhere me doob se gaye the....

subah subah tahalte hue NISHKALIKA us jagah pahunchi jahan is waqt wo vyakti DHYAN me baitha hua tha....

NISHKALIKA ki nazar apne saamne baithe shaksh par padi aur saath hi un kaal dhuon par,jo aas paas ki jagahon ko bhi apne rang me samet kar kaale kar rahe the....



NISHKALIKA- ANDHERE KI JAY HO........


NISHKALIKA chalte hue us shaksh ke saamne pahunchi...

usne apne haath aage kar diye....NISHKALIKA ke haathon se kuch kaali roshniyan nikli aur us shaksh ki taraf chal din....

par jo kaale dhuen is waqt us shaksh ke sharir se nikal rahe the,unhone un kaale rays ko us shaksh tak pahunchne se pehle hi khatm kar diya....

ab NISHKALIKA us shaksh ko dhyan se dekhne lagi....

us shaksh ko bhi dhyan awashtha me ye gyat ho gaya ki koi usse ghoor raha hai.usne jhat se apni aankhen khol di...



apne saamne NISHKALIKA ko khud ko ghurta dekh usne ye sawaal kiya tha........


NISHKALIKA- dekh rahi hun ki kaabiliyat toh hai tumeme....warna itne sashakt KAAL RAKSHAK ( kaale dhuen ) tumhare sharir me nahi baste...

waise kya naam bataya tha tumne apna???



UNKNOWN- MADDOX..................



ji haan doston,ASMODEUS ne MADDOX ko NISHKALIKA ke paas hi bheja tha..........

NISHKALIKA- haan,MADDOX............par ek baat batao,tumhare grah par sabke naam itne ajeeb kyun hote hain.......

MADDOX........!!!DIGVIJAY.............ye bhi bhala koi naam hua???????



MADDOX- hahahahahahaha................



NISHKALIKA ki baat sunkar MADDOX ko hasi aa gayi.........

par NISHKALIKA ko MADDOX ka yun hasna pasand nahi aaya.........

NISHKALIKA- maine kya koi mazak kiya hai jo tum has rahe ho........?????

MADDOX- mazak hi toh hai..hamare planet ke naamo par sawaal uthane se pehle tumne kabhi apne naam ke baare me socha hai.....

agar tum hamare planet me kisike saamne apna naam bologi toh unhe lagega ki tum koi naatak mandali ka kirdaar ho........

MADDOX ki baat ne NISHKALIKA ke ghusse par aag me ghee ka kaam kiya....

DIGVIJAY ke hisse ki power ko bhi paakar NIHKALIKA ka ghamand saatve aasman par pahunch chuka tha....

aise me kisika uske naam ka mazak udana usse bilkul pasand nahi aaya...

NISHKALIKA- apni zuban ko lagam do MADDOX..tumhe pata bhi hai ki tum kiske naam ka mazak uda rahe ho??????

MADDOX- yahi baat tum par bhi lagu hoti NISHKALIKA.mere aur mere bhai ke naam ka mazak udane se pehle tumhe bhi yahi sochna chahiye tha............

NISHKALIKA- hum NISHKALIKA hain.......kaali shaktiyon ki MALIKA....hum jisse chaahen,jo chaahe,wo bol sakte hain.....

MADDOX- galatfehmi hai tumhari...tum jis taakat ka ghamand kar rahi ho,uska aadha hissa mere bhai ki di hui tumhe bheek hai....

MADDOX ki baat sunkar NISHKALIKA ke sabr ka baandh ko jhakjhor diya tha....

par NISHKALIKA jaanti thi ki MADDOX uske paas DEVIL LORD ke kehne se aaya hai isiliye wo usse maar nahi sakti thi......

NISHKALIKA- bohot ghamand hai naa tujhe apni taakat par.....aur hoga bhi kyun nahi,DEVIL LORD ka sahara jo mila hai tujhe........

MADDOX- ek aur galatfehmi.......chalo,kamsekam tumhare is galatfehmi ko toh mai door kar hi sakta hun...

chalo,ek chota sa yudh karte hain.agar tumne mujhe hara diya toh mera sir tumhare aage jhuk jaayega par agar tum haari toh tumhe mere aage jhukna hoga.......

NISHKALIKA- manzoor hai...........

NISHKALIKA ne apna right hand ek baar gol ghumaya,jis garden me is waqt NISHKALIKA aur MADDOX khade the,uske chaaro taraf ek strong SHIELD ban gaya.......

NISHKALIKA- toh shuru karen????

MADDOX ne kuch kaha nahi bas apni aankhen band kar kuch budbudaya.......



BHUMIYEM KHANANAM KAROTI.....

LAND DIGGING..........



MADDOX ke mantra uchharit karte hi NISHKALIKA ke neeche ki zameen dono taraf se halki khisak gayi.......


par ye kya!!!!!!!????????



NISHKALIKA ke pair zamin ke khisakne se bilkul bhi nahi dagmagaye.......

wo wahin muskurati hui khadi rahi...

MADDOX ne jab NISHKALIKA ke pairon ki taraf dekha toh usse pata chala ki NISHKALIKA halki hawa me uthi hui hai..

jab pair hi zamin par nahi hain,toh zamin ke khisakne ka NISHKALIKA par asar kaise hota...............



BHUMIYEM SHAKTI SHASHTRA ROPANAHA.....

LANDS POWER ARMS LOOSE.............



ye SPELL MADDOX ne nahi NISHKALIKA ne budbudaye the................

NISHKALIKA ke SPELL bolte hi wo zameen jo dono taraf khisak gayi thi,uske andar se solid mitti ke badi badi parthen nikal kar MADDOX ki taraf gayi.......

par wo mitti ki saari parthen apne andar lohe ke nukile auzaron ko dhake hue thi.....

MADDOX ko ye pata chal gaya....

aur agle hi pal MADDOX hawa me uchla.......

jitni bhi mitti ki parten uski taraf aa rahi thi,MADDOX un sab ke upar chalta hua aage badhne laga.....

par saath saath MADDOX ne apne dono haathon ko baari baari se aage ki taraf chalana shuru kiya maano kuch fek raha ho.........

MADDOX ke dono hatheliyon se ussi tarah ke nukile auzar nikle jaise un mitti ke parthon me chupe hue the aur wo sab auzar ek ke baad ek NISHKALIKA ki taraf badhe.......



NISHKALIKA SHOCKED HO GAYI........



uske shocked hone ka kaaran ye nahi tha ki MADDOX ne uske waar ko kaat diya balki ye tha ki MADDOX ko pata chal gaya tha ki un mitti ki parthon ke aad me NISHKALIKA ne uspar kis cheez se waar kiya hai.....

aur unhi auzaron ke waar wo ab uspe kar raha tha.........



AVRODHA........

BLOCK...........



NISHKALIKA ke SPELL bolte hi jitne bhi auzar uski taraf aa rahe the wo ek adrishya lohe ki stopper se takrane lage aur neeche gir gaye....

NISHKALIKA aur MADDOX ne ek pal ke liye ek dusre ki aankhon me dekha maano ek dusre ki taakat ko naap rahe hon.....



AAVAPAYATI AGKURA............

CUT PLATES.........



ye SPELL NISHKALIKA ne bola tha.....SPELL ke uchharit hoti hi MADDOX ko apne kaano me kuch tez tez ghumne ka abhas hua.....

usne har taraf dekha par usse kuch bhi nazar nahi aaya......



PRAKATI KAROTI..........

UNFOLD...........



jab MADDOX ko kuch bhi dikhayi nahi diya toh usne ye SPELL bola.......

SPELL ke uccharit hote hi MADDOX ko apne chaaro taraf blades dikhne lage.....

jo gol gol ghumte hue uski taraf aa rahe the....

ye toh acha hua ki MADDOX ne UNFOLD SPELL right time me bol diya kyunki wo blades MADDOX ke kaafi paas aa chuke the....



AGKURA VICCHEDAKA

BLADE CUTTER



MADDOX ne turant is SPELL ko uccharit kiya....

aur TANNNNNNNNNNNNN...................



NISHKALIKA ke chhode gaye adrishya BLADES MADDOX se bas 1 feet hi door the..

MADDOX ke SPELL uccharit karte hi wo saare blades beech se katathe chale gaye..........

NISHKALIKA- bas,bohot hua.........



AVAPI DAYATI.........

SQUEEZE OUT.........



NISHKALIKA ne apne dono haathon ko aage kar taali bajate hue is SPELL ko bola tha,

SPELL ke bolte hi MADDOX ke dono taraf do kaale rays ki par solid lohe se bhi sakht diwal ban gayi aur NISHKALIKA ke taali bajate hi wo dono diwal tez gati se MADDOX ki taraf badhe maano usse beech me pichkana chahte hon......



KAAL CHAKRAM SVAVAHITA..........

BLACK SHADOWS ALERT..........



MADDOX ne apni aankhen band ki aur is SPELL ko uchharit kiya.......

SPELL ke uccharit hote hi MADDOX ko chaaron taraf se kaale dhuen ne gher liya maano koi chaadar khud ko kisipar odha rahi ho........

aur BOOM........................



wo kaali rays ki DIWAL MADDOX ke chaaron taraf faile kaali chadar se takrayi aur ek karn bhedi vishphot hua....

NISHKALIKA ke bichaye SHIELD ki wajah se is vishphot ki awaaz aur asar toh na hi kisi ko sunayi di,naa hi kisiko koi nuksaan pahuncha par SHIELD zaroor toot gayii......

MADDOX aur NISHKALIKA ek dusre ko aascharya chakit hokar dekh rahe the........



NISHKALIKA- adhbhoodh.........kaafi aulokik aur avismaraniya shaktiyon ke maalik ho tum....

MADDOX- maine bhi jitna socha tha,tum usse kayi guna zyada shaktishaali ho.......

NISHKALIKA- agar hum dono mil jaayen toh is bramhaand me raaj kar sakte hain.....

MADDOX- ye bramhaand toh LORD OF DEVILS ki milkiyat hai,mujhe toh bas apne bhai ke mout ka aur khud ka pratishodh lena hai......

NISHKALIKA- wo toh le hi lenge.....par tab tak tum mere mehman ho........



AUR MAI KYA HUN AAPKI????KABAHI HUME BHI TOH YAAD KAR LIYA KARO......



MADDOX ne awaaz ki disha me dekha.aur usse jo dikha,usse dekhkar uski nazar wahin theher gayi..........

NISHKALIKA aur MADDOX se kuch hi door ek beintehan khoobsurat ladki khadi thi....

jo apne gulab si pankhudiyon jaise honton par muskaan liye NISHKALIKA ki taraf aa rahi thi.....

NISHKALIKA ne bhi apni baahen khol di..dono ladkiyon ek dusre ke gale lagin.......



NISHKALIKA- MADDOX,isse milo.....

YE HAI ''BHUVIKA''........MERI BEHEN........








PLANET- EARTH




PLACE- COLLEGE HALL




OH...... MY......... GOD.........................




just look at him...............he is so so so handsome yaar..............

aaj VALENTINES day hai......actually abhi ke time ke hisab se ye VALENTINES evening hai....

jaisa ki maine bataya ki abhi shaam ka waqt hai jo apne swarup ko haule haule badlate hue raat ka roop le rahi hai.......

aur abhi abhi jo aapne taarifen suni.ye hamare college hall me moujud ladkiyon ke mooh se nikli hai...

WAJAH!!!!!!abhi abhi apke bhai ne hall me entry li hai.........jahan sabhi ladkon ne WESTERN OUTFIT pehna hua hai wahin unke complete opposite mai TRADITIONAL ETHNIC dress me hun.......

BLACK KURTE PAYJAAME ke upar GRAPHITE BLACK WAIST COAT......aur is dress me mai lag kaisa raha hun ye toh aapko abhi abhi girls ke reaction se pata chal hi gaya hoga....

waise mere saath ALISHA bhi thi jisne RED POLYESTER BODYCON dress pehni hui thi aur is dress me wo kisi ANGEL se kam nahi lag rahi thi.......

( WAISE THI TOH WO ANGEL HI )



saare ladke jinki nazar abhi tak apni gfs aur partner ke hote hue bhi 3 ladkiyon ko ghure jaa rahi thi,ab unka direction change hokar ALISHA pe aa gaya tha........

waise toh saare students jo is waqt is hall me moujud the,wo sab apne partner ke saath hi aaye hue the par filhaal ladke alag apne frnz ke saath khade hue the aur ladkiyan apne frnz ke saath....

par mera group intact tha.hum dono chalte hue unke paas chale gaye..........

MAI- hey guyzzzz,wuz up......??????

par mere greet ka jawab dena chhod sab saale mujhe aise ghure jaa rahe the maano pehli baar dekh rahe ho......

MAI- abbe ladkiyon ka toh thik hai,par tum teeno ladke hokar bhi mujhe ghur rahe ho....!!!

choices toh nahi badal gayi naa tumhari.....?????

VINCENT- kya bhai...tu bhi!!!!!waise kamal lag rahe ho..& ALISHA,u too are looking very beautiful......

ALISHA- thanks......

RONIT- saale,tu ETHNIC me aane waala tha toh mujhe kyun nahi bataya,mai bhi ETHNIC pehen leta.....

MAI- aur jo ANJALI ne tere liye dress kharida tha aaj ke liye,uska kya hota????

ANJALI- tujhe kaise!!!!!!!!

madam ka pata unke mooh me hi reh gaya kyunki unhe y aad aa gaya tha ki galat bande se galat sawal puch rahi thi wo.......

MAI- waise tum teeno ko bata dun,apne apne partners ko chupa kar rakho,saare ladko ki nazar inpar hi hai......

RONIT- kiski majaal hai jo inko kuch kar ke dikhaye?????

MAI- meri.....itni khoobsurti ek saath bulk me dekhkar mujhe toh chakkar aa rahe hain....

meri baat ka asar bas do ladkiyon par hi hua,kyunki teesri toh jab se mai aaya hun,bas bina palken jhapkaaye mujhe hi dekhe jaa rahi hai.....

ab aap toh samajh hi gaye honge ki mai kiski baat kar raha hun....

waise haal toh mera bhi AVANTIKA ko dekhkar bura ho raha tha..meri hi tarah usne bhi hamare DESH ke sabse khubsoorat paridhan ko pehna hua tha..SAARI......

AVANTIKA ne red colour ki saari pehni hui thi jisme wo us MENKA se kam nahi lag rahi thi jo mere jaise VISHVAMITRA ki tapasya ko bhang karne me lagi hui thi...

agar mere andaz me kahun toh.............



jab jab meri nigahen
tujhpe padti hai,

tab tab mera wajud
KHOTA hai.....

ek din tu meri hogi,
ye sochkar hi mujhe
apne kismat pe
RASK HOTA HAI......



meri nazar jaise hi AVANTIKA ki ghoorti hui nazar pe padi,usne apni nazarein ghuma li.....

tabhi uske paas khadi ANJALI ne uske kaan me kuch bola aur same messege AVANTIKA ne SHANAYA ko paas kiya.teeno ne hume excuse me bola aur kahin nikal gayi....

RONIT- ab ye sab kahan jaa rahi hain???

MAI- washroom..........

RONIT- bhai,susu toh mujhe bhi badi zor ki lag rahi hai...kabse control karke rakha hun..

MAI- chal fir...

maine ALISHA ko excuse me kaha aur RONIT ke saath chal pada...

girls lo aur boys loo aamne saamne hi tha..ladkyan toh girls loo me jaa chuki thi,RONIT bhi men's loo me ghus gaya aur mai bahar khada mobile kochakne laga.....



ki tabhi.............



TUM YAHAN.........



maine mobile se nazar hata kar saamne dekha jahan AVANTIKA khadi mujhe ghur rahi thi......

MAI- nahi,ye toh mera bhoot hai..mai toh abhi bhi hall me hi hun..........

AVANATIKA- tum naa,ekdum ajeeb ho..koi bhi sawaal ka sidha sa jawab nahi dete..

MAI- jab sawal hi tedha medha hoga toh jawab sidha kaise dun....dekh kar bhi puchti ki tum yahan????

AVANTIKA- tum naa,bohot badal gaye ho???

MAI- hmm.....

AVANTIKA ko laga ki mai usse kaise puchunga par maine hmm kaha toh usse shock laga....

AVANTIKA- kya hmm???matlab tumhe pata hai ki tum badal gaye ho!!!!!

MAI- nahi....

AVANTIKA- toh hmm kyun kaha????

MAI- kyunki tumhara sawaal hi galat hai.hum toh waise hi hai jaise the,shayad tumhare mujhe dekhne ka tarika badal gaya hai...

meri baat sunkar AVANTIKA hadbada gayi..

AVANTIKA- matlab????

MAI- khud se pucho...wahin se is sawaal ka better jawab milega.......

waise sawal puchne ke alawa tumhe aur kisi cheez me interest hai????



AVANTIKA dheere se- TUM ME......



MAI- maine sun liya......

AVANTIKA- kya,kya sun liya????

AVANTIKA meri baat sunkar dar gayi thi...


MAI- flush ki awaaz..lagta hai RONIT halka ho gaya hai.........

AVANTIKA- chiii...kuch bhi naa.......

par tabhi MENS loo aur GIRL'S loo.dono ka darwaaza ek saath khula aur mere saare frnz baahar aa gaye...

MAI- tum sabne decide kiya tha ki ek saath baahar aaoge........

RONIT- bakwaas band kar be......

ANJALI- apni partner ko akela chhodkar yahan kya kar raha hai tu..

ALISHA ki baat sunkar AVANTIKA firse sad ho gayi.....

MAI- tere b.f ki chowkidaari.......ab chalen...



hum sab hall ki taraf chal pade.par hamare hall me pahunchte hi hamare aaj ki shaam ki ANCHOR...MISS SHAIFALI bhi stage par aa chuki thi......



SHAIFALI- hello,everybodyyyyyyyyyy.....sabse pehle a very happy VALENTINES DAY to all of u.....

so aaj ka ye contest shuru karen?????

sab yes yes ki hooting karne lage.....

SHAIFALI- alright then....sabse pehle mai aapko bata dun ki aaj ke hamare contest ko judge COMMERCE ke final year ke kuch students karenge....

now coming back to the contest,aaj ke contest ko 3 ROUNDS me divide kiya gaya hai....

1st ROUND me aap sab ko apne partners ke saath stage par aakar ramp walk karna hoga..

aap sab me se best 4 couples ko chuna jaayega.....

aur uske baad..............



ab itni bhi kya jaldi hai..........pehle first round toh pura kar len....

COUPLES,what are u waiting 4........come up & set the stage on fire.........

hum sab apne apne partners ke saath ek ek karke ramp walk karne lage....

ANJALI aur RONIt ke ramp walk karte waqt kaafi hooting hui aur same shanaya aur VINCENT ke walk karne par bhi hua....

second last jodi AVANTIKA aur UTKARSH the.....AVANTIKA ne ek baar meri taraf dekha fir aage nikal gayi......

wo toh aage nikal gayi par mere dil aur dimag me us dard aur shikayat ko chhod gayi jo mujhe dekhte waqt uske aankhon me thi...

dard is baat ka ki mai uske saath nahi hun aur shikayat is baat ki ki mai kyun uske saath nahi hun......?????

tez HOOTINGS aur TAALIYAON se meri soch tooti...ye hooting AVANTIKA aur UTKARSH ke liye ho rahi thii.....ab tak ki sabse tez hooting.......

aur ab bas mai aur ALISHA bache the...

maine uska haath thaama aur hum stage par chadh gaye.hum jaise jaise aage jaa rahe the,hall students ke shor se gunje jaa raha tha...

shayad hi aisa koi us hall me moujud hoga jisne mere all ALISHA ke walk par shor nahi machaya hoga....

finally humari walk khatm hui aur hum sab apne frnz ke paas jakar khade ho gaye....

hum sabne ek dusre ko congrats kaha..AVANTIKA ab bhi reh reh kar mujhe dekhe jaa rahi thi....

mai dheere se chalte hue uske paas gaya..

MAI- udas ho....

AVANTIKA- nahi toh...

MAI- mai puch nahi raha,bata raha hun..par fikr mat karo,is contest ke khatm hote tak tuumhare chehre ki muskan laut aayegi.....

mai AVANTIKA ko bol lautkar apni jagah par khada ho gaya.......

wahin AVANTIKA toh meri baat ka matlab samajhne ki koshish kar rahi thi...

SHAIFALI- toh jaisa ki maine kaha tha ki aap me se best 4 ko chuna jaayega...toh mere paas best five ka naam aa chuka hai...aur wo naam hain.......



ANJALI & RONIT...........



SHANAYA & VINCENT........


AVANTIKA & UTKARSH.......


ALISHA & VIKRAM........



hum sab ke nam anounce hote samay hall ek baar fir se taaliyon ki gadgadahat se gunj utha............

SHAIFALI- toh doston..........ab hai time second round ka..............

par yahan ek twist hai.......humare paas ek bowl hai jisme humne pehle se hi in chaar jodiyon ka....oh sorry sorry in 8 students ka naam likh liya hai....

aap sab yahi soch rahe honge ki maine in sab ko 4 jodiyan na kehkar 8 students kyun kaha????

toh wo isiliye doston ki is ROUND me ek twist hai..waise toh ek twist aur bhi hai par uske baare me aa sab ko last me maalum padega...

filhal ke liye is round ke twist ke baare me baat karte hain.......

is round me ye sab yahan upar aayenge aur har couple me se ek bowl se ek chit nikalenge...jiske haath me jiske bhi naam ka chit hoga,usse ye dusra round uske saath hi pura karna hoga....

agar aapke chit me aapke partner ka hi naam hua toh fir toh aap lucky hai aur agar nahi toh jiska bhi naam hoga,wahi aapka is round ke liye partner hoga....



toh lets begin............



is round ek baare me sunkar jahan saare students khush ho gaye the wahin saare couples thode nervous.....

hum sab upar stage par aa gaye...hum sab ladkon ne girls ko chits utahne ke liye kaha

ANJALI ,SHANAYA, AVANTIKA aur ALISHA ne chit uthaye.....

ANJALI ke chit me VINCENT nikla...

SHANAYA ke chit me UTKARSH nikla....

ALISHA ke chit me me RONIT nikla.....

aur AVANTIKA ke chit me......ab bacha hi kaun mere alava......MAI hi nikla......

SHAIFALI- fantastic.....toh hamare paas hamre new fresh partners hain......toh game shuru karte hain.....

jahan mere baaki ke frnz ke mooh latak gaye the wahan ek chehra khil gaya tha....aap sab toh jaante hi ho ki kiski baat ho rahi hai....

SHAIFALI- toh task ke baare me bhi bata deti hun...........

kaafi simple hai...........aap sab me se ek apne baare me ek sawaal puchega aur uske partner ko jawab dena hoga....

sawaal kuch bhi ho sakta hai..apne fav.cheez ke baare me bhi ya fir apne hobbies ke ya fir apne nature,character ya fir ATTITUDE ke baare me bhi....

saamne waale ko uska jawab dena hai......total 5 sawaal puche jaayenge.jiske jawab sabse zyada right honge wo team jeet jaayegi.......

ye point jeetne waali team ki original jodiyon ko milegi.....



so guyz ready........



RONIT- ek minute...



RONIT uth kar mere paas aaya aur mere kaan me bola....

RONIT- saale tu,apne powers ka use nahi karega....sawal tu puchega ,jawab AVNI degi..thik hai......!!!!

MAI- tu wahin baithe baithe agar ye man me bhi soch leta na toh mujhe pata chal jaata.....

RONIT- arre haa yaar.chal chhod ....bas tu dhyan rakhiyo......

RONIT apni jagah par kaakar baith gaya aur fir hua hamara ye task.......

SHAIFALI sawal puchne waale se pehle se hi uske saare sawal aur uske answers likhwa kar apne paas rakh leti thi taaki baad me koi cheating naa ho......

par jaise ki sabko ummid thi,kisi ne bhi apne partner ke sawaalon ka sahi jawab nahi diya..

yahan mai aapko bata dun ki maine ST CECILA aur ST ALFRICK ko bhi apne power ko use karne ke liye mana kiya hua tha......

aur ab baari thi meri aur AVANTIKA ki...

SHAIFALI- toh jaisa ki hum sabne dekha hai ki abhi tak kisi bhi jodi ne ek bhi sahi jawab nahi diya hai.....

par ab hai humare saamne hamari last jodi...& guyz ye dono mere personal favs. bhi hai.SECRILLA adventure me in dono ne ek game me itna behetareen performance diya tha ki kya bataun....

ummid hai ki aaj bhi aisa hi kuch hoga..

so,sawaal kaun puch raha hai????



MAI- mai puchunga.....



meri baat sunkar AVANTIKA nervous ho gayi.........

AVANTIKA dheere se - but V.J,mujhe tumhare baare me kuch bhi nahi pata.....

MAI- mere sawaalon ko sunana mat,mehsoos karna..apni aakhen band kar jo bhi tumhe mehsoos ho,wo bol dena......

AVANTIKA ko meri baat thik se samajh toh nahi aayi par usne haan me mundi hiladi....

maine bhi baakiyon hi ki tarah apne sawaal aur unke jawab likhkar SHAIFALI ko de diye..

SHAIFALI- ok guys,shoot....

maine AVANTIKA ko apni aankh band karne ka ishara kiya,AVANTIKA ne apni aankhen band kar li......



MAI- mera fav COLOUR????



AVANTIKA jiski aankhen band thi,uske aankhon ke saamne RED colour aa gaya....

AVANTIKA-RED...........



MAI- mere INSPIRATION......

AVANTIKA ke saamne ek tasvir ubhri.....

AVANTIKA- tumhare DAD.......


MAI- SUCCESS aur DOSTON me se agar mujhe kisi ek ko chunana pade toh mai kisse chununga????

AVANTIKA- DOSTON ko........



AVANTIKA ke jawab ko sunkar mere dono doston ka dil bhar aaya tha par unhone apne emotions ko control kar liya.....



MAI- har insaan ko ek cheez hai jo mai barabar deta hun,wo kya hai????

AVANTIKA- IZZAT...........



MAI- sab kuch hai mere paas,fir bhi ek chiz kim kami hai,wo kya hai????

AVANTIKA-MOHOBBAT.........



SHAIFALI- OH,MY,GOD............saare answers sahi hain...i mean,how????????unbelievable.........hats off AVANTIKA........



guys,give the winners a big hand.....ek baar fir har taraf hooting aur clapping shuru ho gayi..........

humare doston ne bhi hume gale lag kar congrats kiya....

SHAIFALI- ab baari hai hamare last & final round ki....toh iske baare me toh sabko pehle se bata diya gaya tha,par jo bhi bataya gaya tha,wo aadhi baat thi....

aur naaki ki aadhi baat ye hai ki aap sab apne partners ke saath ek ek karke dance nahi karenge...

aap sab ke selected songs ki c.d ko humne merge karke ek song me convert kar diya hai.....aur saath hi aakhri me ek chota sa music beat humne apni taraf se bhi add kiya hai...

aap sabhi apne partners ke saath ek saath stage par aayenge..jab jab jiske bhi selected song ka music bajega,usse dance karna hoga..

aur aakhri music beat par aapko turant improvise karke dance karna hoga.......



toh shuru karen.....



hum charon couples stage par aa gaye.....


SURAJ HUA MADDHAM

CHAAND JALNE LAGA.....

AASMAAN YEH HAAYE

KYUN PIGHALNE LAGA.....



issi song ke saath ANJALI aur RONIT ne slow romatic dance shuru kiya........

dono ek steps itne ache nahi the,par dono ke beech ki chemistry aur feel itna natural tha ki sabke sab mantramugdh se hokar dono ko dekhne lage...

abhi unhe dance karte hue 2 minute bhi nahi hua tha ki song change ho gaya aur ab SHANAYA aur VINCENT ne PEHLI NAZAR ME KAISA JAADU KAR DIYA song par dance karne lage............

wo dono bhi mushkil se 2 min hi dance kar paaye the ki itne me third song baj utha aur ab AVANTIKA aur UTKARSH stage ke centre me the....



TERA HONE LAGA HUN.KHONE LAGA HUN.,song ko puri tarag se justify karte hue dono dance karne lage..



par zyadatar steps karte hue AVANTIKA ki nazar mujhpe hi thi jisse UTKARSH ne bhi dekh liya tha aur uske chehre par bhi muskurahat thi....

aur agle 2 minuton ke baad stage par mai aur ALISHA aa gaye...........



EK DIN TERI RAAHON ME

BAAHON ME PANAHON ME

AAUNGA.......

KHO JAAUNGA.....

EK DIN TERA

HO JAAUNGA.....



is epic gaane ko hum dono ke dance ne aur epic bana diya......

kyunki mai aur ALISHA saalsa kar rahe the,isiliye hamara har movement,har step bohot zyada sexy aur sensuous lag raha tha....

itni der se khush ho rahi AVANTIKA ka chehra ek baar fir se murjhane laga par tabhi.......


gaana change ho gaya.............


aur ab jo music baj raha tha wo toh is sadi ke sabse romatic track ka music tha..........



HUM TERE BIN ABHI REH NAHI SAKTE,

TERE BINA KYA WAJUD MERA......

TUJHSE JUDA GAR HO JAAYENGE

TOH KHUD SE HI HO JAAYENGE JUDA.....



gaana jitna bhi ROMANTIC kyun naa ho,steps toh aane hi chahiye na uspe groove karen ke liye..

ab ye koi shadi ka funtion toh tha nahi ki kisi bhi music par sapera dance shuru kar den..

mere saare frnz nervous ho gaye kyunki ye sab unke liye unexpected tha......

neeche se saare students jo abhi tak hum sab ko cheer kar rahe the ab BOO BOO karke hamara mazaak udane lage.............

ki tabhi achanak kuch aisa hua ki sab chup ho gaye..........sirf 1 awaaz aa rahi thi.....



MUSIC KI...



aur stage ke beech ek couple ek dusre ko thaame hue har second ek aisa romantic moov kar raha tha ki dekhne waalon ke dil hi dil me aah nikal jaa rahi thi.....



ye couple aur koi nahi MAI aur AVANTIKA the.............



hua ye mere doston ke nervous chehron ek beech bas ek chehra aisa tha jiske chehre par nervousness nahi balki maayusi dikh rahi thi...

ye chehra AVANTIKA ka tha jo meri taraf ek tak dekhe jaa rahi thi maano keh rahi ho ki agar tumne mujhe chuna hota toh yun beech me rukna na padta.......

uski aankhon me ek iltejaa thi jo keh rahi thi ki ab bhi der nahi hui hai.....ek baar,bas ek baar mujhe pukaron,mai tumhare aadhe likhin shaayri ko pura kar dungi.....

ek baar apna haath badhao,fir dekho,ye gaana apne shabdon ke zariye hamari kahani batayega........



aur ,maine AVANTIKA ki dil ki awaaz sun li aur apna haath aage kar diya aur AVANTIKA ne bhi bina der kiye mera haath thaam liya......

saare students ke liye ye bas ek khubsoorat sa dance tha,mere doston ki nazar me hum unki izzat bacha rahe the,par hum dono ke liye toh ye pal apne SAPNE ko apne HAQIQAT se milane ki shuruat thi.......



song kab khatm hua hume maalum hi nahi chala...ye toh students ka shor aur taaliyon ki gadgadahat thi jisse hum dono hosh me aaye..

humne sabko thanks kaha aur apne doston ek paas aa gaye............

humare dost hamare dance ki taarif kar rahe the,unka popat hone se bachane ke liye thanks keh rahe the,par najane kyun,mere aur AVANTIKA ke kaanon me ab tak ek dusre ki tez saanson ki awaaz gunj rahi thi.......

SHAIFALI- wow,what a performance.yaar sach sach batao,kahin se hamare prograame ke secrets leak toh nahi ho gaye naa.i mean,such a smooth dance act..

lag hi nahi raha tha ki abhi abhi improvise kiya hai.....

anyways,jaisa ki maine kaha tha ki abhi ek twist aur hai toh wo twist ab disclose hone waala hai......

twist ye tha ki aaj ke MR VALENTINE aur MISS VALENTINE ka selection second round ke task aur last round ke last song ko dekhkar kiya jaane waala tha.....

so guyz,mere paas is saal ke MR VALENTINE aur MISS VALENTINE ka naam aa chuka hai,,,,

aur wo hain........................



any guess guyzzzzzzzzzzzzz....



har taraf do naam gunjane lage.........



SHAIFALI- u all are absolutely right guyssss..........this year's MR & MISS VALENTINE ARE



VIKRAM & AVANTIKA ........



hum dono ka naam aate hi mere dost mere aur AVANTIKA par kood gaye.....

Unse free hokar mai aur AVANTIKA stage par gaye aur apni VALENTINES TROPY lene ke liye haath badhaya hi tha ki SHAIFALI ne apna trophy waala haath peeche khinch liya...



SHAIFALI- aise nahi..........pehle kuch ho jaaye.....



MAI- trophy dono ki hai,toh bolna bhi dono ko padega......



maine AVANTIKA ki taraf dekhte hue bola...



SHAIFALI- ye ki naa pate ki baat.......

then what are we waiting for???



SHAIFALI ne meri taraf mike kar diya.......

MAI- mai jo bhi line bolunga,tumhe usse puri karni hogi....



AVANTIKA ne bas apni palkon ko neeche kar haami bhar di...



MAI- JAB DIMAG SHAANT HO,
PAR DIL ME BECHAINI HO,

JAB SACH LAG RAHI SAARI
GALATFEHMI HO,




AVANTIKA- "HAAN,WAHI PYAR HAI"....



MAI-JAB TANHA KHAMOSH RAATEIN HON,
PAR KAANO ME EK SHOR MACH JAAYE,

AVANTIKA- JAB SAARI DUNIYE ME DHOOP KHILE,
BAS KHUDKE UPAR HI BAADAL GARAJ JAAYE,

MAI- JAB SIDHE CHALNE WAALE KADAM,
ACHANAK SE BEHEK JAAYE,

AVANTIKA- DHUL SE BHARE RAASTE,
UNKE EHSAAS ME,
KHUSBOO SE MEHAK JAAYE....


MAI- WO EHSAAS JO HOTA SIRF EK BAAR HAI,



AVANTIKA- " HAAN WAHI PYAR HAI"....



MAI- JAB DOSTON KI MEHFIL ME,
UNKE NAAM SE BIKNE LAGE....

AVANTIKA- TEHZIB KE RANG ME DHAL,
"UNKE" TAUR TARIKE SIKHNE LAGE.

MAI- JAB WAHI PURANA CHAAND KUCH,
ZYADA KHUBSURAT DIKHNE LAGE...

AVANTIKA- JAB KALAM HAATH PAKAD,
KHUD B KHUD GAZAL LIKHNE LAGE...


MAI- WO EHSAAS JO HOTA SIRF EK BAAR HAI,



AVANTIKA- " HAAN WAHI PYAR HAI "....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI........





AAPKA APNA V.J.......
Very nice Update bhai
 

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YE KAISA LADKA HAI?????DIN BHAR YA TOH YUDH KALA KA PRASHIKSHAN KARTA REHTA HAI YA FIR DHYAN ME BAITHA REHTA HAI...!!!

subah ka waqt hai......MADDOX NISHKALIKA ke mahal ke baahar bane garden me dhyan awastha me baitha hua hai........

subah subah BHUVIKA jab sair karne nikli thi toh usne MADDOX ko garden me hi talwar aur anya shashtron ka abhyas karte hue dekha tha..

aur pure 2 ghante baad jab wo lauti toh usne MADDOX ko dhyan ki awashta me baithe hue dekha.......



kahani ko aage badhane se pehle chaliye pehle hamare naye par FUTURE ke ek important character ke baare me jaan lete hain....



''BHUVIKA''.........jitna adhbhudh aur alag ye naam hai utni hi alag aur charming is naam ke adhipati ka vyaktitv bhi hai......

ye toh aap sab ko pata hi hai ki BHUVIKA NISHKALIKA ki choti behen hai........

par iska nature aur character NISHKALIKA ke bilkul opposite hai............



jahan NISHKALIKA kroor hai wahin BHUVIKA bohot komal hai.....

na toh koi chhal,nahi koi kapat,ek dum saaf suthri dil ki ladki..............waise toh NISHKALIKA khud kaali shaktiyon ka ek bohot bada shroth hai aur usse ache aur sacche logon se nafrat hai........



par wo apni behen jo ki ek nek dil ladki hai,uspar jaan chidakti hai..usne khud hi apni behen ko apni kaali shaktiyon ke prabhav se door rakha hai.......

NISHKALIKA toh apne grah ko chhod shakti ki talash me GLUTO aa gayi par BHUVIKA apne grah par hi rahi.....

NISHKALIKA ne GLUTO ki maharani banane ke baad bhi BHUVIKA ko khudse door hi rakha ye sochkar ki kahin uski behen uski sangat me rehkar ussi ki tarah KROOR naa ho jaaye......BHUVIKA beech beech me apni behen se milne GLUTO aaya karti hai....

aisa nahi tha ki BHUVIKA ko NISHKALIKA ki sacchayi pata nahi thi,BHUVIKA ko sab kuch pata tha,par wo apni behen se itna adhik prem karti thi ki usse zyada fark nahi padta tha........

un dono ke maa baap ke guzar jaane ke baad jis tarah NISHKALIKA ne uski puri zimmedari uthayi thi,usse uske dil me apni badi behen ke liye maa ka sthaan bana liya tha.....

waise toh BHUVIKA ek soft hearted chulbuli si sabko hasane waali ladki thi,par agar baat uski behen ki ho toh wo sab sahi galat bhul jaati thi......

uske liye uski behen hi sahi thi aur wo uske khilaf kuch bhi nahi sun sakti thi....



ab ye ATTITUDE kya rang laata hai,ye dekhna mazedar rahega.......



filhal ke liye kahani me wapas chalte hain...



BHUVIKA ne jo kaha tha,MADDOX ne usse DHYAAN awastha me hote hue bhi sun liya tha....

MADDOX ne apni aakhen khol di.......

MADDOX- apne lakshya ki prapti ke liye lagatar abhyas karna galat toh nahi hai.....???

BHUVIKA MADDOX ke yun achanak aankh kholne aur usse baat karne se hadbada gayi........

BHUVIKA- aap toh dhyan awashta me the naa,fir aapne meri baat kaise suni.didi toh kehti hain ki dhyan awashta me hamara sampark baahari duniya se toot jaata hai....

MADDOX- tumhari didi sahi kehti hain......par ek sach aur hai........jiske baare me shayad tumhari didi tumhe batana bhul gayin!!!!!

BHUVIKA- meri didi kabhi kuch nahi bhulti hai.....zaroor aapko hi dhyaan me baithna nahi aata hoga....

BHUVIKA ke apni didi ke baare me baat karte waqt MADDOX ne uski aankhon me ek zid dekhi,jisse wo samajh nahi paaya par KOI AUR THA JO SAMAJH GAYA THA..........



MADDOX- mai jab bhi dhyan me baiththa hun toh mere KAAL CHAKRA aas paas ki har gatividhi par dhyan dete hain....

aur tumhare aate hi mere KAAL CHAKRA ne mujhe bata diya tha ki tum mere saamne ho isiliye maine tumhari awaaz sun li......

BHUVIKA- haan toh wo aapne khud hi apni surakhsha ke liye kiya hai naa,isme bhoolne waali kaun si baat hai....

meri didi sabkuch jaanti hai par mujhe jitna batana chahiye ,wo utna hi batati hain....

NISHKALIKA- arre waah,aap toh kaafi samajhdaar ho gayi hain,lagta hai aapke vivah ka samay aa gaya hai......

BHUVIKA ne palat kar dekha,jahan uski didi uski taraf aa rahi thi.....

BHUVIKA- mai koi shaadi vaadi nahi karne waali,bata deti hun........

NISHKALIKA- aur wo bhala kyun????

BHUVIKA- 2 baatein hain.pehli toh ye ki mujhe abhi tak koi pasand nahi aaya hai......

NISHKALIKA- aur dusri??????

BHUVIKA- mai kisi aur ke ghar kabhi nahi jaaungi......mai aap ke paas hi rahungi.....

MADDOX- par shaadi ke baad toh pati ka ghar hi tumhara ghar hoga naa......!!!!!!!

abhi NISHKALIKA kuch kehti usse pehle hi MADDOX ne apni baat keh di..........

NISHKALIKA ko MADDOX ki aankhon me ye bolte waqt ek jigyasa dikhi thi jiska matlab wo achi tarike se samajhti thi.....

NISHKALIKA- kyun????shadi ek baad pati ka ghar ki ladki ka ghar kyun hoga????

MADDOX- arre.ye riwaz so sadiyon se chala aa raha hai?????

NISHKALIKA- chala nahi aa raha hai,tum mard zaat ye riwaz sadiyon se chalate chale aa rahe ho....

aur kyunki auroton me itni himmat nahi ki is dakiyanusi riwaz ke khilaf kuch bolen,isiliye ye bakwaas pratha aaj bhi kaayam hai.....

par BHUVIKA NISHKALIKA ki behen hai.kisi pratha ki,kisi mard ki itni aukad nahi jo NISHKALIKA ki behen ko apne hisab se chala sake......

jis bhi ladke ko hamari behen pasand karegi usse yahi hamare saath rehna hoga....aur wo bhi hamare behen ke hisab se......

MADDOX- koi bhi acha aur yogya ladka iske liye kabhi bhi nahi maanega....

NISHKALIKA- yogya???????apne purusharth ko prathamikta dena kaha se ek yogya purush ki nishani ho gayi.......

ye bas ek ghatiya soch hai jo sadiyon ke is rudi waadi mithya ko purush ke dimag ne satya ka roop de diya hai...

Par NISHKALIKA ki behen kisi bhi soch ke bandish me nahi aati..uski shaadi ussiki sharton ke hisab se hogi.....



BHUVIKA- didi.....aapse behter koi nahi.....



ye bolkar BHUVIKA NISHKALIKA ke gale lag gayi.....



didi,hume aapse kuch kehna hai!!!!!!!



BHUVIKA ki baat ko,actually jis tarike se BHUVIKA ne didi kaha tha,usse sunkar NISHKALIKA has padi........

BHUVIKA- aap has kyun rahi hain????

NISHKALIKA- kyunki hame pata hai ki tum is tarike se tabhi baat karti ho,jab tumhe kuch chahiye hota hai........bolo,kya chahiye????

BHUVIKA- pehle aap vachan dijiye ki hum jo bhi maanenge,aap mana nahi karenge.....

NISHKALIKA ne ek pal BHUVIKA ki aankhon me dekha aur agle hi pal NISHKALIKA ke haathon me ek talwar chamak uthi.....

NISHKALIKA- MADDOX,hamara ek kaam karoge?????

MADDOX toh NISHKALIKA ke haathon me talwar ko dekhkar hi chownk gaya tha...

wo soch raha tha ki apni jis behen se NISHKALIKA itna zyada pyar karne ka dawa karti hai,uski ek khwahish pe usse marne ke liye talwar nikal li.....

MADDOX- kaisa kaam??????

NISHKALIKA- jo bhi khwahish humari behen humare saamne rakhe,agar hum us khwahish ko maanene ya puri karne se mana kar den,toh is talwar se hamara sir kaat dena....

MADDOX NISHKALIKA ki baat sun kar shocked ho gaya...wo kya soch raha tha aur ho kya gaya......!!!!!!!

wahin BHUVIKA apni behen ki baat sunkar uske gale lag gayi.......

BHUVIKA- aap bhi naa di,choti si baat ko kitna bada kar deti ho........arre wo toh maine aise hi puch liya tha,mujhe pata hai ki aapke liye meri zid se upar kuch bhi nahi hai.....

NISHKALIKA- tune bataya nahi ki tujhe kya chahiye?????

BHUVIKA- hume apne liye kuch bhi nahi chahiye..wo daradsal hum jab ghumne gaye the toh humne dekha ki aapke sainik kuch logon ko ghar se nikal rahe the..

humne jab wajah puchi toh wo bole ki un logon ne 1 mahine ka kar nahi chukaya hai isiliye unke ghar par kabza kiya jaa raha hai...

toh mai chahti hun ki un logon ke kar ko maaf kar diya jaaye.....

NISHKALIKA ke chehre par apni behen ki baat ko sunkar ek muskaan aa gayi....

wahin un dono ke saamne khada MADDOX bhi ye dekhna chahta tha ki PAAP KI MURAT NISHKALIKA apni behen ki baat maan kar apne swaroop ko chunouti degi ki nahi.....!!!

NISHKALIKA ne ek sainik ko jo wahin unse thodi door par khada tha,usse awaaz di....

wo daudta hua aaya aur NISHKALIKA ke saamne sir jhukakar khada ho gaya......

NISHKALIKA ne BHUVIKA ke sir par haath rakha,BHUVIKA ke sir se kuch roshni nikli aur saamne hawa me rook gayi...

us roshni ne ek chalchitr ( film ) ka roop le liya aur usme wo log dikhne lage jinhe NISHKALIKA ke sainik ghar se nikaal rahe the...

NISHKALIKA- jao aur sainkon se kaho ki un logon ke kar ko zindagi bhar ke liye maaf kar diya gaya hai aur abhi tak un logon ko jitna bhi nuksaan hua hoga,usse bhi bhar diya jaaye...

SAINIK sir jhukaaye hi waapas chale gaya...

NISHKALIKA- ab khush.........

BHUVIKA-bohot khush.....aap is bramhaand ki sabse achi didi ho..........

NISHKALIKA- galat...tum is bramhaand ki sabse pyari ladki ho.ek aisi ladki jiski baat koi nahi taal sakta..........

BHUVIKA NE NISHKALIKA ke gaal ko hum liya aur uchalti koodati MEHEL ke andar hali gayi.......

NISHKALIKA- paagal...abhi tak iska bachpana nahi gaya......

NISHKALIKA jaise hi MADDOX ke taraf palti,usse hasin aa gayi kyunki MADDOX usse aankhen faade dekh raha tha.....

NISHKALIKA- pehli baar toh nahi dekh raho mujhe...phir tumhari aankhen kyun fati hui hai??????

MADDOX-tumhe naa sahi par tumhara ye roop toh pehli baar hi dekha hai naa.
tum itni dariyadil kabse ho gayi?????

MADDOX ki baat sunkar NISHKALIKA ke honthon pe ek muskaan naach gayi....

NISHKALIKA- pehle mere ek sawaal ka jawaab do???tum meri behen ko itna ghoor ghoor kar kyun dekh rahe the............????

MADDOX NISHKALIKA ki baat sunkar hadbada gaya...

MADDOX- mai,mai kahan ghoor raha tha....

NISHKALIKA- jhooth bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai MADDOX....aur ek baat kaan khol kar sun lo,meri behen ka khayal apne dimag se nikal do....

jaise mai tumhare bhai ke liye nahi bani thik waise hi meri behen bhi tumhare liye nahi bani hai.......

abhi MADDOX kuch kehta usse pehle hi NISHKALIKA ne ek naam budbudaya...

agle hi pal NISHKALIKA ke saamne ek BLACK SORCERER prakat hua....

NISHKALIKA ne kuch der pehle toh chal chitra chal rahi thi,usse fir se chala diya....

NISHKALIKA- in logon ko dhyaan se dekho.aaj raat tumhe in sab ko khatm kar ke jala dena hai..inke astitv tak ko raakh me mila do.....

wo sorcerer ne bhi NISHKALIKA ke aage apna sir jhukaya aur gayab ho gaya....

MADDOX jo ki apna paksh rakhne hi waala tha,NISHKALIKA ka ye roop dekar ek jhatka khaakar reh gaya....

MADDOX- jab unhe maarna hi tha toh unka kar maa kyun kiya???bas apni behen ke nazaron me acha dikhne ke liye.....

NISHKALIKA- meri behen ne unke kar ko maaf karne ke liye kaha tha,unhe zinda rakhne ke liye nahi....

jab wo mujhe kar hi nahi de sakte,toh jee kar kya karenge,isiliye unhe mout ki saza mili....

NISHKALIKA ne MADDOX ko ek zehrilli muskaan di aur nikal gayi...

MADDOX sochta reh gaya ki saali ye chiz kya hai.....???????





PLANET-EARTH




PLACE- DREAM LAND......




SCENE-1




ye toh galat log nahi hain.......fir inki aatma kaali kaise ho gayi hai????

arre.......maine abhi tak is matter ko samjha nahi hai.....arre kahan le jaa rahe ho..mujhe un logon se baat karni hai...unhe thik karna hai mujhe...



SCENE CHANGE




ab ye kya jagah hai...?????ye patthar kyun hil raha hai?????itni roshni kahan se aa rahi hai???jaa kar dekhta hun.....

ab ye kya bala hai???????





SCENE CHANGE:-




arre yaar.koi matter toh theek se samjhun....har baat ko puzzle bana kar chhodna zaroori hai kya????

ab ye kaun si jagah hai????arre ye toh........iska matlab ye wo jagah hai jahan??????par wo hai kahan??????



SCENE CHANGE




ab ye mai kahan aa gaya??????koi dusre yug me toh nahi pahunch gaya mai?????

ab ye kaun hai??????AAHHHHH.........fir wahi dard???par isse dekhkar kyun????kahin iske paas???nahi nahi,iske andar toh DARK ENERGY hai.......

aur mujhe toh WHITE ENERGY ki talash hai?????ek baar paas se dekhta hun????




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lo,ab ye firse shuru ho gaya......kuch bolna bhi bekar hai......ab ye kaisi jagah hai????ek min,ye toh GOD'S BARRIER hai....

par iske aage toh DEVIL'S BARRIER laga hai......saala ab ye kaisi paheli hai???

arre aap?????aap yahan kaise ????

nahiiiiiiiiiiii.......ye kaise....????iska matlab,nahi nahi,mai ye nahi kar sakta..............








SCENE CHANGE:-




yaar,wahan toh rook jaata....mai wo nahi hone de sakta??????nark waali feeling dekar swarg le aaya tu.........

TUM..............!!!!!!!!!!!!nahi nahi....ye nahi ho sakta........

ye kaisi jagah hai.....????aur ye mere saath kyun hai??????

arre nahi yaar,abhi nahi................arree arre,andhera kyun ho gaya....usse kahin kuch ho naa jaaye....

mujhe kamsekam ye toh dekhne de ki wo sahi salamat hai yaa nahi.........!!!!!

arre,haashhhhhhh....kamse kam wo toh thik hai...par uske,paas jaa raha hun,gayab mat kar dena!!!!arre ye toh,nahi nahi....aisa kaise!!!!!!!!!!

ye yahan!!!! arre ye kya aur kyun?????????

adbhudh.................




SCENE CHANGE:-




pehli baar........THANKS..............pura scene toh dikha..

par laaya kahan hai is baar???chalo,aage chalkar pata karta hun.....waise jagah darawani si hai........



TUM!!!!!!!!!



yahan bhi............iski kya zaroorat hai?????



ab ye kaun hai.................



arre!!!!!!iske gaal me ye ????????

arre firse!!!!!ye ho kya raha hai isse......

ab ye dard bhara shor kaisa????chal kar dekhta hun......

ye ladki mere aage aage kyun chal rahi hai????issike piche ho leta hun....

arre ye sab log......???inhe bhi...........

mere kaan baje ki mujhe sach me sunayi diya.....nahi nahi,mujhe sach me uska naam sunayi diya...... aur fir usne kuch bola.......

aur jaise mere dimag me uski boli hui baat gunji,meri neend toot gayi aur mai ek jhatke me uth kar baith gaya......



MAI- saala,aaj toh mere saath ajeeb chutiyapa hua......



OH SHIT............



hua ye ki maine time dekha toh mujhe jhatka laga....kyunki abhi subah ke 8 baj rahe hain..

ye mere life me first time tha jab mai itni der tak soya tha.....

maine apna mobile check kiya,ANJALI aur RONIT ke 5,5 miss calls the.......

MAI- kamal hai.....itni gehri neend ki mujhe mobile ki ring bhi sunayi nahi di!!!!!

aisa toh tab bhi nahi hua tha jab mere paas koi shakti nahi thi....

phir achanak mujhe apne sapne yaad aaye...

aisa kuch bhi mere saath pehli baar hua tha.......

kuch der tak mera dimag inhi sab baaton me uljha raha,par fir maine apna dimag jhatka kyunki mai already college ke liye late ho chuka tha...

mai turant bathroom me ghusa aur fresh hokar shower lene laga...

baaki ke hisse toh nahi,par mere dimag me mere sapne ka ek hissa bohot zyada ghum raha tha..

mai chaah kar bhi usse bhul nahi paa raha tha....

khair,mai fatafat ready hokar neeche aaya jahan meri family baithi hui thi.......

maine sabko baari baari GOOD MORNING greet kiya aur breakfast karne baith gaya...

par braekfast karte waqt bhi mera dimag mere sapne ke ussi hisse par atka hua tha...

mera breakfast kab khatm hua,mujhe pata hi nahi chala....

MAI- ok,bye every body..........

DAD- ek minute beta........

maine abhi baahar jaane ke liye kadam badhaye hi the ki dad ki awaaz sunkar mai rook gaya....

MAI- ya dad,whats up????

DAD- kuch baat karni hai.chalo,mai bhi tumhare saath bahar tak chalta hun.....

MOM- kya hua???kya baat karni hai aapko mere bete se jo yahan nahi kar sakte....!!!

DAD- business related baat hai MINU.......ab hamara beta commerce padhne laga hai toh maine socha ki usse kuch tips lelun.....

MOM- aap bhi naa.khud toh hamesha business me uljhe rehte hain aur ab mere bete ko bhi ussi me uljha rahe hain...

MAI- oh,common mom.....aakhir ye sab bussiness aage chalkar mujhe hi toh sambhalna hai..toh abhi se kuch kuch pata rahe toh acha rahega naa....

MOM- chup..dad ka chamcha.........

NANAJI- beta,wo galat thodi na bol raha hai.ulta tumhe toh khush hona chahiye ki mera pota abhi se apne dad ko aaram dene ke baare me soch raha hai....

MAI- exactly..thanks nanu...lets go dad...

mai aur dad bahar ki taraf nikal gaye...

waise mujhe pata tha ki dad ne mujhe kyun roka hai par main unke dimag ke saare vicharon ko padhne se khud ko rok diya tha..



bhale hi mai kuch bhi kyun na ban jaaun,pitah ki baaton me jo LOGIC hote hain,unhe MAGIC se samajhna,galat hota...



MAI- ji dad..boliye??

DAD- ma nahi tum bolo..what's teh problem???

MAI- problem!!!kaisi problem????mujhe toh koi problem nahi hai...

DAD meri baat sunkar kar muskura diye..

DAD- beta mai jaanta hun ki ab tum kaafi intelligent ho,ab bade bhi ho gaye ho,tumhari apni ek life hai,par in sab baaton se ye zaroori toh nahi hai naa ki tum har problem ko khud hi solve kar lo.....

kabhi kabhi apni problems bata dene se solution apne aap nikal aata hai.ya fir ab tum mujhe apna life line nahi maante...???

MAI- aisa kuch bhi nahi hai dad....aap hi mere life line the ,hain aur hamesha rahenge...

DAD- toh fir batao,aisa kaun si paheli hai jo mera super intelligent solve nahi kar paa raha hai..

MAI- kabhi kabhi zyada hoshiyar hona bhi galat hota hai dad....isse aapko saare jawab pata hote hain..



aur saare jawab pata hona hamesha acha nahi hota.....



par usse bhi bura hota hai jab aap sab jaante hain aur aapko pata hota hai ki jo bhi aap jante hain,wo theek nahi hai,fir bhi aap kuch nahi kar sakte,aise me kaisa lagta hai,ye imagine karna bhi mushkil hai.....



DAD- tumhe pata hai ki tumhare paida hote waqt kya hua tha????

MAI- haan,mom ne bataya tha ki unki jaan ko khatra tha.....

DAD- aaj ki taarikh me mai agar sabse zyada pyar karta hun toh wo tumse karta hun my son....

par pata hai,jab doctor ne mujhse bataya tha ki MINU ki delivery me complications hai aur maa aur bacche,dono me se kisi ek ko hi bachaya jaa sakta hai,toh maine tumhari maa ko chuna tha..

aur pata hai,tumhari mom ne mere faisle ko maanane se inkar kar diya tha..wo tumhe paida karna chahti thi....

uski bas itni si khwahish thi ki tumhe ek baar dekh sake.....

us din toh mujhe uske faisle par bohot ghussa aaya tha par dheere dheere mujhe ye ehsas hua ki wo apni jagah bilkul sahi thi...

hum har cheez ko jaan toh sakte hain par usse control nahi kar sakte....

hume bas khud kya karna hai,wahi tay karne ka hak hota hai,aur baaki sab waqt aur upar waale par chhod dena hota hai..

ho sakta hai ki jo result nikle wo hume acha na lage,par har cheez jo achi na lage,wo buri ho,ye zaroori nahi hota...



aaj ek baar fir saabit ho gaya tha ki bina taklif ki jad ko jaane agar koi rooh tak ko sukoon dila sakta hai toh aisa chamatkar sirf ek PITAH hi kar sakta hai.....



maine dad ko ek baar hug kiya aur college ke liye nikal gaya.....





IN COLLEGE:-





ANJALI- toh MISS VALENTINE,party kab de rahi hai????

AVANTIKA dheere se- MR VALENTINE ko toh aa jane de.....

ANJALI- kya kaha ???

AVANTIKA- kuch bhi toh nahi..waise ye V.J kahan reh gaya....

RONIT- pata nahi,aaj subah jogging karne bhi nahi aaya....aur phone bhi nahi utha raha....

AVANTIKA- ek aur baar try kar......

SHANAYA- uski zaroorat nahi hai..wo dekho,V.J aa raha hai..

V.J- hey guyzzz.sorry haan,mai thoda late ho gaya...

ANJALI- thoda.tu pure 2 lectures ke baad aa raha hai????

MAI- haan yaar,aaj neend hi nahi khuli....

meri baat sunkar ANJALI aur RONIT ko shock laga par dono chup hi rahe...

SHANAYA- matlab teh great V.J bhi perfect nahi hain.unse bhi chuk ho jaati hai...

SHANAYA ki baat sunkar sab has diye.

AVANTIKA man me- kal raat kitna acha mouka tha....mai apne dil ki baat V.J se keh sakti thi..

par jab bhi sochti hun ki isse apne dil ki baat kahungi,pata nahi aisa kyun lagta hai jaise mujhe andar hi andar koi rok raha hai aisa karne se......



MAI- abhi time nahi hua hai...........



ye baat maine AVANTIKA ki aankhon me dekhkar kahi thi jisse sunkar wo hadbada gayi.......

SHANAYA- kis cheez ka time??

MAI- arre mai puch raha hun ki third lecture ka time nahi hua hai kya????

SHANAYA- oh shit.....2 minute upar ho gaye..lets go guys......

ANJALI- hum aate hain,tum dono jaao...

AVANTIKA aur SHANAYA class ki taraf nikal gaye....

RONIT- chal bhai,shuru hoja.......

maine RONIT ko ghur kar dekha...

RONIT- tere ghurne se mai darne waala nahi hun..

ANJALI-sahi kaha.hume sach sach bata ki aisa kya hua tha ki tu aaj nahi aaya....

maine ek lambi saans chhodi aur maine jo bhi sapne dekhe the,wo sab kuch dono ko bata diya.....

RONIT- saala aadhi se zyadi baat toh samajh hi nahi aayi....

ANJALI- wo sab chhod...V.J,tune bataya ki tune sapne me 2 ladkiyan dekhi thi jisme se ek ka naam bhi tune suna tha....

aur usse kuch batate hue bhi tune suna tha jiske baare me tujhe kuch bhi nahi maalum...

MAI- haan par naam mai dono ladkiyon ke hi jaanta hun.........

DONO- what!!!iska matlab pehli waali ladki ka naam tu pehle bhi kabhi sun chuka hai!!!!

MAI- kabhi kya,har roz sunta hun..mai hi kya,tum dono bhi sunte ho....

DONO- hum bhi sunte hain????kaise,matlab kaun hai wo ladki..........?????


MAI- AVANTIKA........



is baar toh dono aise uchle jaise dono ke seat ke niche kisi ne spring laga diya ho........



ANJALI- apni AVANTIKA........



RONIT- par wo wahan kar kya rahi thi????

( maine dono ko sirf itna bataya tha ki maine apne sapne me AVANTIKA ko dekha tha,aur kuch nahi )



MAI- abbe maine bataya na ki jaise hi uska chehra aaya,scene change ho gaya....

RONIT- arre haan.........

ANJALI- aur dusri ladki!!!!???????



MAI- ANALIA.........



RONIT- ye wahi ladki hai naa jisne kuch aisa kaha tha jiske baare me tu bhi kuch nahi jaanta.......!!!!!

MAI- haan....

DONO- KYA????????



MAI- CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON.......






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI...........





AAPKA APNA V..J......
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AB AAGE:-






CHAPTER-2





( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )





MEGA UPDATE-73





PART-1





PLANET-EARTH.........





MAGICAL DIMENSION





WOW............WHAT A PLACE YAAR!!!!BUT HANG ON,MUJHE AISA KYUN LAG RAHA HAI KI MAINE IS JAGAH KO KAHIN DEKHA HAI...!!!!!!

subah ka waqt hai...har din ki tarah RONIT aur ANJALI aaj bhi MAGICAL DIMENSION me CLONE COMBAT ki TRAINING karne aaye hain.....

par aaj un dono ke saath ek additional pack bhi aaya hai,ya yun kahun ki aayi hai....

aur ye additional pack aur koi nahi hamari pyari AVANTIKA hai........


kal AVANTIKA ko apne saamne dekhne ke baad se ab tak kya kya hua tha,ye jaanene ke liye chaliye,thoda piche chalte hain....

A SMALL FLASHBACK NARRATION:-

kal AVANTIKA ne VIKRAM,ANJALI aur RONIT ko magic door se baahar aate hue dekh liya tha..

par VIKRAM ne pehle hi RONIT aur ANJALI ko ye baat bata diya tha ki aaj bahar jaate hi unka saamna AVANTIKA se hoga.

par RONIT,ANJALI aur VIKRAM ke CLONE ne AVANTIKA ke saamne shocked hone ka naatak kiya...

VIKRAM ne unhe usse kya kya batana hai,ye bhi bata diya tha......dono ne VIKRAM se iska reason bhi puch jisse VIKRAM ne baad me batane ka keh kar taal diya tha......

khair,AVANTIKA toh teeno ko yun ek jaaduyi darwaaze se baahar aate dekh kar shocked ho gayi thi...

thodi der baad jab wo apne shock se ubhri toh usne teeno ke upar apne sawaalon ki jhadi chhodna shuru kar diya.....

ANJALI ne usse sab kuch batane ka waada kiya par college me....

college me teeno first lecture ke waqt hi canteen me baith gaye kyunki ek yahi waqt tha jab SHANAYA unke saath nahi ho sakti thi.....

AVANTIKA ne sabse pehle VIKRAM (CLONE) se ye pucha ki kya usne hi usse DIGVIJAY se bachaya tha.......

tab VIKRAM ne usse bataya ki usse pehle se hi DIGVIJAY par shak tha ki wo koi sahi ladka nahi hai isiliye uski nazar shuru se hi uspar thi.....

fir jab us din AVANTIKA uske saath farm house gayi toh wo bhi uske piche piche wahan pahunch gaya aur mouka milte hi wo AVANTIKA ko lekar gayab ho gaya.....

par uske baad kya hua,DIGVIJAY ke farm house me aag kaise lagi,DIGVIJAY kaise maara gaya,ye usse bhi nahi maalum....

AVANTIKA ne jab teeno se pucha ki unke paas supernatural powers kaha se aayin toh RONIT ne usse ye bataya ki V.J ke paas shuru se hi super natural powers thi aur ussi se un dono ko bhi kuch supernatural gifts mile hain....

unhone AVANTIKA ko jab ye bataya ki wo daily ek jaaduyi jagah par jaakar har din training karte hain toh AVANTIKA ne bhi unke saath jaane ki zid ki jisse unhone maan liya........

par AVANTIKA ne RONIT aur ANJALI ko bhi ek jhatka de diya tha....

AVANTIKA ne RONIT aur ANJALI ko ye kaha ki usse VIKRAM kuch alag lag raha hai..usse aisa lag raha hai jaise uske saamne V.J nahi balki uska humshakal khada hai.......

RONIT aur ANJALI ne AVANTIKA se kuch kaha nahi bas has diye.AVANTIKA ne bhi zyada gour nahi kiya...

aaj MAGICAL DIMENSION me sirf AVANTIKA,RONIT aur ANJALI hi aaye the....

RONIT ne AVANTIKA ko bataya tha ki aaj unka koi test hai isiliye VIKRAM nahi aaya hai..

aur jaise hi teeno MAGICAL DIMENSION me pahunche,pehle toh AVANTIKA is jaaduyi jagah ko dekhkar khush ho gayi par fir usse aisa lagne laga jaise wo is jagah ko pehle bhi dekh chuki hai isiliye usne RONIT aur ANJALI se is jagah ko lekar sawaal kiya tha......

FLASHBACK NARRATION ENDS:-

RONIT- pehle bhi aa chuki ho....arre ye jagah asli nahi hai,kaalpanik hai jisse V.J ne hamare training ke liye banaya hai.....

ANJALI- exactly.....tumne koi sapna dekha hoga.......

ANJALI ki boli gayi baat se AVANTIKA ke dimag ka bulb jala......

AVANTIKA- sapna.....exactly...sapna....maine ye jagah apne sapne me dekhi hai.......aur wo bhi kal......

kal mere sapne me mai apne pitah ke saath aakhri me yahin toh aayi thi......

jahan is jagah ki asliyat jaankar AVANTIKA shocked ho gayi thi wahin RONIT aur ANJALI bhi kaafi ke chehre par bhi ajeeb se bhaav the...

dono ye toh samajh gaye the ki ye ab V.J ka kiya dhara hai par wo samajh nahi paa rahe the ki V.J ne aisa kyun kiya hai????

par wo dono ye bhi jaante the ki V.J koi bhi kaam bina wajah nahi karta hai......

ANJALI- arre tumne apne sapne me isse milti julti koi jagah dekhi hogi....

RONIT- exactly...aur aisa hona common hai..ab baaki ki baatein baad me karte hain,abhi fatafat training start karte hain.....

ANJALI- right...........

wahin AVANTIKA ka dimag ab bhi pura shant nahi hua tha par filhal ke liye usne bhi apne dimag ko jhatak diya......

RONIT- CLONE COMBAT TRAINING ke liye hum taiyar hain.......

RONIT ke aisa bolte hi unse thodi door par unke saamne un dono ke clones prakat hue....

jahan apne CLONES ko dekhkar ANJALI aur RONIT excited dikh rahe the,wahin AVANTIKA ka toh dimag hi fuse ho gaya tha...

ki tabhi ANJALI ki nazar AVANTIKA par gayi jo mooh faade unke CLONES ko dekh rahi thi.....

ANJALI- AVANTIKA,ye hamare clones hain.inhi ke saath hume CLONE COMBAT FIGHTING ki training karni hai.....

AVANTIKA- wow yaar...........bada maza aane waala hai....mai toh bohot excited hun ye dekhne ke liye ki tum dono kaise ladte ho!!!!

ANJALI- thik hai fir.....shuru karen......

RONIT ne haan me mundi hiladi aur agle hi pal dono ke haathon me ek ek talwar chamakne lagi....

aaj dono ki aankhon me ek alag hi confidence dikh raha tha.......dono ne ek dusre ki aankhon me dekh kar kuch ishara kiya aur agle hi pal RONIT ne ek unchi jump li......

RONIT ke jump lene ke agle hi pal ANJALI ne bhi thik ussi ki tarah ek jump li....

dono ne hi apne apne jumps me same force apply kiya tha....RONIT hawa me kalabaazi khaata hua apne CLONE se kuch 6 feet dur apne ghutno ke bal land hua.......

aur just uske agle hi second ANJALI bhi kalabaazi khaate hue theek RONIT ke peeth ke upar land hui......

par ye un dono ke pehle daav ka end nahi balki ek start tha.....

RONIT ke back pe ANJALI ke pair jamte hi RONIT ne apni body ko upar ki taraf ek jhatka diya aur ussi waqt ANJALI ne bhi apni shakti apne panjo me daal apne aap ko saamne ki taraf dhakel diya....

ANJALI ki body ek teer ki tarah saamne ki taraf badhi bas teer aur ANJALI me bas fark bas itna hi tha ki teer sidha jaata hai jabki ANJALI ka body tezi se gol gol ghumte hue aage jaa raha tha......

RONIT aur ANJALI ke CLONES ek saath hi khade the...ANJALI ne theek unke beech apni talwar kar di......

dono CLONES ek ek side ho gaye......

par tabhi........

ek saath do cheeze huin..........

ANJALI ne apne dono haathon se talwar ke mooth ko pakda aur beech se kheench diya...

ANJALI ke haath me ek talwar thi .ANJALI ke kheenchte hi wo do ho gayi aur ab ANJALI ke dono haathon me ek ek talwar thi...

ANJALI ne apne dono haathon ko apne daayen baayen ghumaya,aur

TANN.............

ANJALI ke jaise hi uske aur RONIT ke CLONES ke haathon me bhi ek ek talwar thi.ANJALI ke dono talwar un dono ke talwaaron se takraye....

par ye ek waar tha.......

abhi CLONES ne ek waar ko roka hi tha ki tabhi RONIT udta hua aaya aur apne CLONE ke haath ko nishana banakar apni talwar chala di............

aur bina ye dekhe ya jaane ki uske CLONE ne uske waar ko roka ya nahi RONIT ne apni jagah badal di..

wo dugni tezi se ANJALI ke CLONE ki taraf palta aur apni talwar chala di..thik ussi waqt ANJALI ne bhi apni jagah badli aur RONIT ke CLONE ke upar humla kar diya...

ye saari cheeze na toh RONIT soch raha tha aur naahi ANJALI....

bas ek apne flow me ek humla karta toh dusra ussi flow ko follow kar dusre par humla kar deta....

kyunki ye saare attacks bina soche samjhe ho rahe the,isisliye RONIT aur ANJALI ke CLONES ko in vaaron ko rokne me bohot mushkil ho rahi thi.........


ki tabhi...............ek nayi cheez hui.....


RONIT aur ANJALI apni jagah badal badal kar dono CLONES par bijli ki tezi se humla kar rahe the....

par achanak unhone apne attack ki kriya badal di...

dono apne apne CLONES par waar karne ke baad tezi se dusri taraf ghume zaroor par aadhe raaste se hi wo dubara ghum gaye aur wapas apne apne CLONES ke upar talwar chala di.....

ye sab second ke 100th hisse me hua tha.....


SAAYENNN..............



bas yahi aawaz aayi aur fir sab shaant....

ANJALI aur RONIT dono ke talwar apne apne CLONES ke aar paar ho gaye aur kal hi ki tarah aaj bhi dono CLONES dhuan bankar gaayab ho gaye.......

apna aakhri waar karne ke baad ANJALI aur RONIT khud shocked ho gaye the.unhe yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ki unhone CLONE COMBAT fight jeet li hai......

dono ne kas ke ek dusre ko hug kar liya....


ki tabhi...........



BOHOT BADHIYA................


dono ke kaano me ye awaaz gunj gayi.pehle toh awaaz sunkar dono hi shocked ho gaye par agle hi pal unke chehre par muskaan aa gayi....

DONO- V.J............

ye awaaz apne hero ki hi thi...ANJALI aur RONIT dono ye achi tarah jaante the ki bhale hi V.J unke saath nahi tha par uski nazar har waqt har jagah hoti hai.......

dono ne apne haath me pakdi talwar ko gayab kiya aur AVANTIKA ki taraf chal diye....

AVANTIKA toh aankhon me hairat aur khushi liye ab bhi dono ki taraf dekh rahi thi.....

AVANTIKA- unbelievable guyzzz...i mean,tum dono toh mujhe theek se dikh bhi nahi rahe the......

RONIT- haan,competition bhi toh tough tha....

ANJALI- mujhe toh ab bhi yakin nahi ho raha hai ki humne inhe finally hara diya hai...

RONIT- hum naajane kab se in dono ko harane ki koshish kar rahe the,aaj jaakar kaamiyab hue hue hain......

AVANTIKA- par guyz,tumne bilkul MAGIC use nahi kiya.......!!!!!

ANJALI- haan wo humne socha ki MAGIC se toh V.J ne hume kal CLONE COMBAT fight jeet kar dikhaya tha toh kyun na hum fight se inhe harane ki koshish karen.....

AVANTIKA- and u guys did it.........maza aa gaya...par ab kya?????

ANJALI- ab ghar........college me milte hain...

AVANTIKA- hamare tog kamsekam 3 lectures abhi tak khatm ho gaye honge...

ANJALI aur RONIT AVANATIKA ki baat sunkar muskura diye.......

RONIT- chalo,tumhe kuch dikhate hain......

RONIT ne ek magic door khol diya jisse hokar teeno baahar aa gaye....

ANJALI- ek baar time dekho.....

AVANTIKA ne apna mobile joki usne MAGICAL DIMENSION me aane se pehle band kar diya tha,usse on kiya aur jaise hi screen par time display hua,AVANTIKA shocked ho gayi.....

AVANTIKA- ye kaise ho sakta hai......!!!!hum 6.30 am ko MAGICAL DIMENSION me gaye the aur abhi 6.31 ho rahe hain...i mean,howz that possible.......

RONIT- wo isiliye ki MAGICAL DIMENSION me time rook jaata hai......

AVANTIKA- kya kya raaz chupe hue hain is world ke andar.......

ANJALI- world nahi universe ke andar.aur ab toh hum saath hain,sab kuch jaan jaaogi....

RONIT- haan,par wo sab baad me,filhal ke liye apne apne ghar jaate hain warna college ke liye late ho jaayenge......

AVANTIKA apni car se aayi thi.........wo RONIT aur ANJALI ko bye bolkar nikal gayi aur RONIT aur ANJALI apne ghar ki taraf nikal gaye.......







PLANET- WORLD OF THE WARRIORS....






PLACE-ODRIDGE MOUNTAIN......








UNIVERSE.....GOD ne itne saare khubsoorat WORLDS ki rachna ki,aur wo chize jo sirf chamakti hain,jinme koi jaan nahi hai,unhe bhi kitna manmohak aakar diya hai....

kya unhone kabhi socha hoga ki apne dil se unke banaye gaye is BRAMHAAND me bhi nuks nikal aayenge......

aur us nuks ko aur bada kar khud ka ek alag saamraajya banane waala aur koi nahi balki khud unka BETA hoga.....

pata hai DEFENDER,hamare grah me actually hamare country me ek kahawat bohot mashoor hai,DIYA TALE ANDHERA........

GOD aur unke bete ASMODEUS ko ye kahawat bohot suit karti hai......


scene ke start ki heading ko padhkar aap log samajh hi gaye honge ki is waqt hum ODRIDGE MOUNTAIN ke saamne khade hain.....

hum ka matlab hai mai aur is grah ka DEFENDER........

ODRIDGE MOUNTAIN.... un do kaaranon me se ek kaaran hai jiski wajah se mai yahan aaya hun......

sadiyon pehle mere BHAI ki shaktiyon ko paane ki talash issi MOUNTAIN se shuru hui thi...

aur aaj mujhe bhi apne safar ki shuruat ke liye yahin par aana pada.....

sabse pehle yahin par aane ka bhi ek kaaran hai jo aapko thodi der me pata chal jaayega.......

khair tab tak ke liye story me wapas chalte hain.........

DEFENDER- agar aap ijazat den toh kya mai aapse kuch puch sakta hun?????

maine DEFENDER ki taraf dekha jo mere uske taraf dekhte hi apne haath baandh kar aur sir jhuka kar khada ho gaya.....

MAI- aap dar ki wajah se mujhe itna samman de rahe hain ya fir samman ki wajah se itna dar rahe hain....????

DEFENDER- nahi wo mai!!!!!!!!!

MAI- mujhe dono hi chizen nahi chahiye.....na hi dar,naahi sammaan.......mai bas wahi kar raha hun jiski mujhe zimmedari di gayi hai...

aur us zimmedari ko nibhane ke liye ek ohda aur kuch shaktiyan.......aur bhaade me li hui chizon ka abhimaan karna mere BHAI ka kaam hai,mera nahi......

aap kuch puchna chaahte the naa,puchiye....

wahin meri baaton ko sunte hue DEFENDER soch raha tha ki ki ek si awaaz,ek sa vyaktiv,fir bhi lehja aur drishtikon kitna alag hai dono bhaiyon me.......

MAI- aksar jo dikhta hai waisa hota nahi DEFENDER...khair,aap apna sawaal puchiye...

meri awaaz se DEFENDER apni soch se baahar aa gaya.....

DEFENDER- ASMODEUS ko aap apna BHAI kehkar bulate hain jabki aap GOD ko GOD hi kehte hain jabki wo aapke FATHER hain.....

mai DEFENDER ki baat ko sun kar muskura diya.......

MAI- PITA ke banaye kanoon ki wajah se hi toh aaj do BETE ek dusre ke raste ko katne ki koshish me lage hain........

DEFENDER- par GOD toh........

MAI- janta hun,janta hun ki GOD sahin hai.....par taklif ye hai ki ASMODEUS bhi apni jagah sahi hai......

khair,ye sab baaton ka,unke baad nikle dusre tark ka koi ant nahi hai....

aur jahan tak baat mere GOD ko PITAH kehne ki baat ka hai,toh sahi waqt aane par wo bhi kahunga......

DEFENDER- ek baat aur hai.....

MAI- yahi naa ki koi nakaratmak shakti hamare aas paas hai.......

DEFENDER- ji.......

MAI- wo nakaratmak shakti abhi se nahi,balki jabse mai is grah me aaya hun,tabse hi mere aas paas hai......

DEFENDER- fir aapne kuch kiya kyun nahi....???

MAI- usse milne me abhi waqt hai..........

filhal ke liye jo karne aaye hain,wo kar len...

maine apne dono haath failaye aur......


GRAH ABHEDHYA KAWACH PRAKATAM.........

PLANET UNBREAKABLE SHIELD


maine ye SPELL zor se bola.......SPELL ke uccharit hote mere dono haathon se nili roshni nikli aur pure WARRIOR'S WORLD me failne lagi..........

aur kuch hi palon me pura PLANET mere kawach se dhak gaya......

MAI- tum chaaho toh jaa sakte ho DEFENDER.........tumhe ye karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai....

DEFENDER- anjaane me hi sahi,par mujhse apne hi grah ke logon ko KAAL DRAV pilane ka paap toh hua hai......

aur mere paapon ka prashcyit mujhe hone waala dard hi hai.....

MAI- isse tumhari jaan bhi jaa sakti hai DEFENDER.........

DEFENDER- par mere log toh bach jaayenge naa....mere liye yahi kaafi hai.........

maine ek lambi saans chhodi aur aage ki aur chal pada.....

mere piche piche DEFENDER aur DEFENDER se thodi doori banakar ek kaala saaya aane laga.....

jaise jaise mai us gufa ke karib jaa raha tha,us gufa me ek kampan si ho rahi thi...

aur ye kampan sirf us GUFA me hi nahi ho raha tha,balki mere seene ke beech bhi ho raha tha.....

mai apne dhadakte dil ke saath chalte hue us GUFA ke saamne pahunch gaya jo meri manzil thi......

mai aage badha aur us GUFA ke pehredaar ko matlab us pathar ko jisne us gufa ke muhane ko dhak rakha tha,uspe sir rakh kar naman kiya....


aur tabhi.......................



ek saath do chizen huin.............


1ST- mere sir se us patthar ko chute hi wo pathar gayab ho gaya.......pathar ke gayab hote hi us gufa ke andar se ek roshni nikli aur har taraf faile gayi.......

wo roshni surya ki roshni se bhi adhik tez thi.....

jahan wo roshni mere aankhon ko thandak pahuncha rahi thi,wahin DEFENDER ki aankhen us urja ko bardasht nahi kar paayin aur usse apni aankhen band kar lin....

2ND- wo kaala saaya jo hamare peeche peeche aa raha tha,us roshni ke bahar nikalte hi usse ek tez dard hua aur wo door jaakar gira........

ek saaya hone ke baawajud bhi wo behosh ho chuka tha.......

apni baahen khole us ROSHNI ke urja ko mehsoos karte hue mai us GUFA ke andar chala gaya.........



par tabhi.............


mere GUFA ke andar jaate hi wo roshni kam hone lagi aur dheere dheere baahar ka mahoul pehle jaisa ho gaya....

GUFA ke andar moujud safed patthar ye fir yun kahun ki ek patthar jispar ek safed chaadar si beechi hui thi,wo ab bhi chamak raha tha par ab uski roshni ki seema us GUFA tak hi thi.....

wahin baahar jaise hi sab normal hua,DEFENDER ne bhi apni aakhen khol li thi par ab bhi wo baahar hi khada tha.......

wahin andar jaise hi meri aakhon ne us safed chaadar se lipti patthar ko dekha,toh mere seene ke andar ki kampan aur badh gayi maano mere andar se koi baahar aana chahata ho.....



MAI- TUM BAAHAR AA SAKTE HO..........


bas mere bolne ki der thi..................


mere seene ke beech ek roshni ubhri aur us roshni ke beech se meri BOOK mere andar se baahar nikal aayi aur dono taraf se khul gayi.......



ki tabhi.............


ek naya chamatkar hua..............

book ke khulte hi uske saamne padi pathar ki safed chaadar ek baar firse chamakne lagi...par chamatkar ye nahi tha,chamatkaar ye tha ki ab mai kisi gufe ke andar nahi tha...

gufa chhodo,wo gufa jis ORDRIDGE MOUNTAIN ke andar thi,wo pahad bhi gayab ho gaya tha.........

ab mai ek khuli jagah par tha aur mujhse thodi hi door pe khada DEFENDER aankhen faade ye sab chamatkar hote hue dekh raha tha.......

DEFENDER- wo MOUNTAIN kahan gayi!!!!!!

ye baat DEFENDER ne apne man me boli thi par maine sun li...

MAI- wo MOUNTAIN sirf is gufa ko shield dene ke liye banaya gaya ek maaya jaal tha.ab is gufa ko kisi SHIELD ki zaroorat nahi hai isiliye wo MOUNTAIN gayab ho gaya...

yahan maine ek chamatkar se parda uthaya,wahan ek naya chamatkar shuru hone laga...

wo WHITE CHADAR jo us pathar par lipti hui thi,usne apni jagah chhod di.....aur dheere dhere aakash me uthne lagi....

jaise jaise wo safed chamakti hui chaadar hawa me upar uthta gaya,uska size bhi badhata gaya......

ye SIZE darasal wo power thi jisse us chaadar ne ab tak control aur simit karke rakha hua tha......

aur kuch hi palon me us chaadar ka size itna bada ho gaya ki usne WARRIORS WORLD ke vaayu mandal ko ghar liya.....

us chaadar se itni tez roshni nikal rahi thi ki pura WARRIORS WORLD chamak raha tha....


MAI- taiyar ho.................


ye baat maine DEFENDER se kahin thi jo aankhen faade aakash me is naye chamatkar ko dekh raha tha.....

meri awaaz sunkar wo hosh me aaya...DEFENDER ne mere aage haath jode aur kaha.......



DEFENDER- mai taiyar hun...........


DEFENDER chalte hue aage badha aur usne BOOK ko jo abhi bhi hawa me khuli hui tair si rahi thi,usse chu liya.........

aur tabhi...........

upar aakash me wo SAFED CHAADAR jo ek height par jaakar rooki hui thi,uske beech me se tez roshni nikalne lagi aur DEFENDER ke sharir ke beecho beech lagne lagi...........



AAHHHHHHHHHH......................

AAHHHHHHHHHHH..........................


DEFENDER ki aankhen dard ki adhikta se badi ho gayi...........wo ghutno ke bal baith gaya........

uska pura sharir dard se chatpatane laga....uske gale se lagatar nikal rahi cheekhen har taraf failne lagi...........

uska sharir jagah jagah se fatne laga.....par kyunki uske paas healing powers thi,isiliye uska sharir wapas theek bhi ho jaa raha tha...

par us roshni se nikalne waali urja DEFENDER ki healing powers se laakh guna zyada strong thi.....

kuch hi der me DEFENDER ka sharir thoda thoda galne sa laga tha....

ye sab mai apne saamne hota hua dekh raha tha.mujhe pata chal gaya tha ki agar aisa hi chalta raha toh DEFENDER bach nahi paayega.....

mai turant apnr ghutno par baith gaya.maine apne haath jode,aankhen band ki aur prayer karne laga.....

MAI- hey ISHWAR...........aaj aapke is bhakt ne mere hisse ke dard ko piya hai......agar maarna hi hai,toh mujhe maar de,par isse bachale..........


HAK SE MAANGO..................


ye awaaz mere andar se aayi thi.......

ek aisi awaaz jisse sunkar mujhe aisa laga jaise mai pura ho gaya hun.........


MAI- FATHER................


ye alfaz mere mooh se apne aap nikal gaye.......

aur mere FATHER bolte hi us CHAADAR se nikalne waali urja ka prabhav kam hone laga...

aur jaise hi aisa hua,DEFENDER ki healing power kaam karne lagi....dard toh usse ab bhi ho raha tha,par urja ke prabhav ke kam hone aur healing power ke active hone ki wajah se ab usse kam dard ho raha tha...

kuch minutes tak ye silsila chalta raha,aur fir dheere dheere us aakash numa chaadar se roshni nikalni band hone lagi.....

aur jaise hi roshni nikalna completely band hua,wo chaadar gol gol ghumte hue niche aane lagi.......

jaise jaise wo chaadar niche aati gayi,uska aakar bhi kam hone laga....aur us chaadar ne ek square shape le liya.........

aur aakhir me wo white chaadar kaafi choti ho gayi aur meri book ke upar aakar rook gayi......

mere books me jitne bhi pages the,wo sab chipak se gaye aur un sab pages ne judkar do mote se pages ki shakl le li........

aur jo safed chaadar mere book ke upar rooki hui thi,book ke pages ko do pages me badalne ke baad us chaadar ne bhi ek mote se page ka roop le liya aur mere book me fit ho gayi.......

Teeno pages ke fit hote hi meri BOOK band ho gayi......

sabse pehle maine DEFENDER ko uthaya jo ab tak puri tarike se thik toh ho chuka tha par ab bhi usme kamzori si thi.......

maine uske sir ke upar haath rakha...mere haathon se ek safed roshni nikli aur usme sama gayi....

aur agle hi pal DEFENDER fit & fine ho gaya tha....

mai usse lekar apni BOOK ke paas gaya jo ab bhi hawa me rooki hui thi....

aur jaise hi maine us BOOK ko khola,mai shocked reh gaya.....

kyunki jo teen pages abhi abhi mere BOOK me bani thi,uske pehle page me 2 gol se khaanche bane gaye the maano unme kuch rakhna ho aur dusre page par bhi ek waisa hi gol khaancha bana hua tha......teesre page par mere SPEAR ki taswir lagi hui thi....

MAI man me- ab ye kya raaz hai yaar...?????

DEFENDER- kya soch rahe hain aap????aur ye khaanche kaise???kya ab mai jaan sakta hun ki us gufa me kya tha aur usse mujhe itna dard kyun hua??????

maine meri BOOK ko band kar diya..book ke band hote hi wo firse ek roshni me badal mere andar sama gayi......

MAI- tumhare pehle sawaal ka jawaab toh filhal mere paas nahi hai ki ye khaanche kya hain aur kisliye hain,par haan tumhare dusre sawaal ka jawaab mai tumhe de deta hun....

ye jo book tum dekh rahe the,aur wo jo safed si chaadar gufa me thi,ye dono ek hi hain...aur ye bane hain GOD KE AANSUON se...

meri baat sunkar DEFENDER shocked ho gaya...par maine bolna jaari rakha.....

MAI- apne pehle putr ko HEAVEN se nikalne ke baad GOD ko bohot taklif hui thi....waise toh GOD ka koi asli roop nahi hain,wo khud ek URJA ek ROSHNI hain,par tab bhi jab unhe taklif hui thi toh unki urja ek pal ke liye asantulit ho gayi thi.....

aur ussi asantulit urja ke prabhav se ek paani ki bund nikli jisse hum insaan AANSU kehte hain.....

agar wo aansu bramhaand me kisi bhi jagah par sidhe girte toh bramhaand ka naash ho jaata,par kyunki GOD apne banaye bramhaand se bohot pyar karte the,isiliye unhone apne aansu ko girne se pehle hi uska roop badal diya....

par urja itni zyada thi ki kisi ek cheez me wo puri nahi samati isiliye us urja ne do roop le liye.......ek ne is KITAB ka roop liya...

aur kyunki us waqt WORLD OF THE WARRIORS is bramhaand ka sabse takatwar grah tha,is grah ke natural resources me itni taakat thi ki GOD ke urja ke ek part ko sambhal sake isiliye us urja ka,us aansun ka dusra bhaag yahan theher gaya .

usne is jagah ke sabse bade aur mazboot chattan ke upar chaadar ke roop me khud ko bicha liya..


DEFENDER- adbhudhhhh.........


isiliye us urja se mujhe itni taklif hui kyunki wo asal me GOD ki taklif thi jo ek roshni ka roop lekar mujhpe gir rahi thi........

MAI- hmm.aur mai tumhe tahe dil se shukriya karta hun jo tumne mere hisse ke dard ko apna liya.......

DEFENDER- ye dard hi mere paapon ka prashchit tha...........

MAI- hmm,par abhi sab kuch theek nahi hua hai.........abhi sabse zaroori kaam baaki hai..tumhare logon ko theek karna.....

DEFENDER- haan,wo toh hai..toh chalen!!!

MAI- chalte hain,par usse pehle taiyari toh kar len..

maine apna haath neeche kar zamin ko chua,apni aakhen band ki aur


SPARZANA SAGKRAMA....

CONTACT TRANSFER.....



ye ek khass kism ka SPELL tha jiske baare me aapko agle update me pata chalega.....

mantra bolne ke baad maine DEFENDER ko kuch cheeze batayi jisse sunkar wo vichlit ho gaya.....

DEFENDER kuch kehne hi waala tha ki maine usse rok diya...


MAI- ye zaroori hai DEFENDER.........



ab DEFENDER meri baat toh kaat nahi sakta tha,isiliye chup ho gaya.....

MAI- chalo,ye kaam toh ho gaya ab mere purane dost se toh mil len........

ye kehkar mai aage badh gaya aur DEFENDER mere piche ho liya...

mai chalte hue ussi kaale saaye ke paas pahuncha jo ab bhi behosh pada hua tha....

maine apna haath aage kiya aur agle hi pal wo saaya hosh me aa gaya...

mujhe apne saamne dekhkar wo saaya hadbada gaya aur usne gaayab hone ki koshish ki......

koshish isiliye kyunki wo kaamiyab nahi hua......

maine usse adrishya bandhan me baandh rakha tha.......

kuch der tak usne khud ko chhudane ki koshish ki fir jab usse laga ki wo kamiyab nahi ho paayega toh usne koshish chhod di aur apni mout ka intezaar karne laga.....

MAI- fikr mat kar........abhi tera waqt aane me thoda waqt hai.......

abhi ke liye tujhe aazad karta hun....

mere ye bolte hi uske bandhan khul gaye aur agle hi pal wo gayab ho gaya....


DEFENDER- kaun tha ye?????




MAI- VALEFOR URF BALBEER SINGH BAGGA...







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......






AAPKA APNA V.J.....
Very nice update bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI VIKRAM APNE BOOK KI POWER KO PAA LETA HAI...
AB AAGE:-









CHAPTER-2








( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )







MEGA UPDATE- 74







PART-2








PLANET- EARTH







PLACE- COLLEGE CANTEEN...







yaar aaj V.J college kyun nahi aaya???

RONIT- usse kuch kaam tha,toh wo ussi ko nipta raha hai???

AVANTIKA- kaisa kaam????

RONIT- wait karo,pata chal jaayega......

SHANAYA- V.J ka kuch kaam hai aur tum dono uske saath nahi ho,strange!!!!

ANJALI- isme ajeeb kya hai,hum har kaam ek saath thodi naa karte hain.....

AVANTIKA- haan wo bhi hai...waise ek baat batao,tum dono ne abhi tak kya kya kiya hai???

RONIT/ANJALI- matlab!!!!!

AVANTIKA- arre matlab,couple banane ke baad,tum dono ne kya kya ROMANTIC kiya hai..i mean,candle light dinner,long drives ya aisa kuch........

AVANTIKA ki baat sunkar ANJALI sharma gayi.....

SHANAYA- aaye haaye,sadhke jaawan tere is sharmo hayaa par........par babes,ye sab toh normal baatein hain naa,isse batane me kaisi sharm...RONIT yaar,tu hi bata.....

RONIT- haan guys,candle light dinners,long drives,gifts,sab kuch ho chuka hai ab tak...

AVANTIKA- aur hume pata tak nahi...

RONIT- arre yaar,privacy bhi koi cheez hai.....

SHANAYA- haan woh toh hai, par ab hume bhi kya pata ki kaun si cheez private rakhi jaati hai aur kaun si cheez batayi jaati hai..hum toh abhi bhi single hain....

ANJALI- toh tujhe roka kisne hai!!!bana le na koi B.F....

SHANAYA- kisi ko bhi bana lun kya???aur waise bhi,mujhe in sab me koi interest nahi hai...par mai ek baat soch soch kar bohot excited feel karti hun!!!!

SAB- kya????

SHANAYA- yahi ki jab V.J kisike saath relationship me aayega toh kya kya karega???

i mean jo banda bina kisi relationship me aaye,bina kisi ladki ko chaahe itni gehri gehri baatien karta hai,jab wo kisi ladki ko chaahega toh uske liye kya kya karega...!!!

mujhe toh lagta hai ki apni G.F ke liye V.J sab kuch claasy aur international hi karega....

LONDON me shopping,PARIS aur SWITZERLAND me holiday aur pata nahi kya kya!!!!!

SHANAYA ki baat sunkar ANJALI aur RONIT dono muskura diye........

SHANAYA- kyun,sahi kaha naa???!!!!!!

RONIT/ANJALI- galat..bilkul galat kaha tumne.......

AVANTIKA jo ki SHANAYA ke speculations sunke sad si ho gayi thi,RONIT aur ANJALI ke mooh se galat sunkar wo firse excited ho gayi thi......

SHANAYA- galat.....!!!!!!aur wo bhala kaise???

RONIT ne ek baar ANJALI ki taraf dekha fir bolna shuru kiya....

RONIT- tumhe pata hai naa ki V.J lagbhag har puzzle ko solve kar deta hai......

SHANAYA- haa toh,is baat ka meri baat se kya lena dena.....!!!

RONIT- puru baat toh sun lo...haan toh mere kehne ka ye matlab hai ki V.J khud itna bada puzzle hai ki baaki saare puzzle uske saamne easy lagte hain......

ANJALI- exactly...hum V.J ke saath bachpan se hain par wo aur uska ATTITUDE ab bhi hamare liye ek sawaal hi hai...

RONIT- par jitna humne usse samjha hai usse itna toh hume maalum hai ki use ye long drives,candle light dinners,expensive holidays,zyada pasand nahi hain.....

usse grounded aur simple cheezen hi pasand hai......usse choti choti cheezon me khushi dhundene ki aadat hai...

SHANAYA- aur agar uski G.F ko meri batayi cheezen pasand hui toh????

RONIT- aisi ladki ke saath V.J kabhi bhi relationship me padega hi nahi.......

RONIT aur ANJALI ki baat sunkar AVANTIKA andar hi andar bohot khush ho gayi kyunki wo bhi exactly V.J ki hi tarah sochti thi....

abhi RONIT aur bhi kuch kehna chaahta tha ki tabhi............


TUM DONO KE DIMAG ME MAI EK JAGAH KI TASVIR BHEJ RAHA HUN.....AVANTIKA KO LEKAR TURANT PAHUNCHO.........


ye awaaz RONIT aur ANJALI ke dimag me gunji thi jisse sunkar pehle toh dono chownk gaye par agle hi pal dono normal bhi ho gaye kyunki wo dono toh issi awaaz ka wait kar rahe the......

ANJALI-SHANAYA se koi bahana bana lo..hume kahin jaana hai...

ye baat ANJALI ne AVANTIKA ke dimag me kahi thi....

AVANTIKA bhi pehle chownki par fir usse bhi sab samajh aa gaya aur wo normal ho gayi....

ANJALI- RONIT,chal ghar chalen.tujhe dad ne bulaya tha yaad hai naa....

RONIT- oh shit..mai toh bhul hi gaya....chal chalte hain...

dono AVANTIKA aur SHANAYA ko bye bolkar parking ki taraf nikal gaye.....

SHANAYA- yaar,mujhe toh agla lecture attend karna hai.....mai already bohot piche hun....

AVANTIKA- tu kar le..mujhe bhi kuch kaam hai,mai wo nipta leti hun...

SHANAYA- ok then..ghar par milte hain.



SHANAYA class ki taraf nikal gayi aur AVANTIKA bhi tezi se chalte hue parking me pahunch gayi jahan RONIT aur ANJALI uska hi wait kar rahe the...

AVANTIKA- kya hua guyzzz. kaha jaana hai???

ANJALI- sab pata chal jaayega......tum apni car me hume follow karo...

RONIT aur ANJALI apni car me baith aage nikal gaye aur AVANTIKA apni car me unka piche piche nikal gayi....

RONIT ne ek sunsaan jagah par apni car rok di.AVANTIKA ne bhi RONIT ki side me hi apni car roki aur dono ke paas aa gayi.....

RONIT ne apna haath aage kiya aur gol gol ghumaya...

RONIT ke saamne hi ek WORLD DOOR khul gaya....

RONIT- chalo......

teeno usme se hote hue dusri taraf aa gaye...

unke dusri taraf aate hi WORLD DOOR gayab ho gaya....

AVANTIKA- ye kaun si jagah hai....aur ye mahal...kahin hum kisi dusre state me toh nahi aa gaye...

ANJALI- nahi......

AVANTIKA- toh kya ye koi dusri country hai!!!!!!

RONIT- ye dusri country nahi dusra PLANET hai...

AVANTIKA- what!!!!!?????

RONIT ki baat sunkar AVANTIKA ko ek tez jhatka laga........

ANJALI- hmm.aur hume yahan V.J ne bulaya hai.....

V.J ka naam sunkar AVANTIKA ka dimag ek second me shaant ho gaya........

AVANTIKA- is PLANET ka naam kya hai???



RONIT- WORLD OF THE WARRIORS...










PLACE- LORD CRUSEDAR PALACE....



haan sainik...bolo,jo jo maine kaha tha,wo ho gaya......

SAINIK- ji SENAPATIJI.....aapne jaisa jaisa kaha tha,wo sab ho chuka hai....

pure mahal ki suraksha aur kadi kar di hai....

aur hamare sainiko ki kul chaar tukdi banakar chaaro dishaon me bhej diya gaya hai.....

HEINSBERG- bohot ache...tum jaa sakte ho...

sainik ne ek baar HEINSBERG ke aage sir jhukaya aur chala gaya......

HEINSBERG man me- itna kuch ho gaya aur LORD CRUSEDER abhi tak apne kaksh se baahar nahi aaye.......jaakar dekhta hun....

HEINSBERG LORD CRUSEDER ke room ki taraf nikal gaya..


chaliye jab tak HEINSBERG LORD CRUSEDER ke paas pahunchte hain,aapko bata deta hun ki HEINSBERG sainik se aakhir kis chiz ke baare me baat kar raha tha....


jaise hi chattan ke upar bichi GOD'S TEAR ki power hawa me uth kar aakash me fail gayi,toh usse mahal me moujud sabhi ne dekha...

aur naa sirf dekha,balki jaise hi wo power unke upar mehel me chaayi,uski POWER se nikle WHITE ENERGY ki wajah se is mahal ke aur PLANET ke saare logon ke body me tez dard uthne laga....

ye unke sharir me moujud KAAL DRAV ki wajah se hua tha....

wo WHITE ENERGY se nikli urja ko bardasht nahi kar paa rahi thi isiliye wo WARRIORS WORLD ke logon ke andar garm hone lagi jisse yahan ke sabhi waasiyon ko aseem dard jhelna pad raha tha......

aur jaise hi GOD'S TEAR ki power wapas apne aadhe swaroop SUPRAGUPTA BOOK me samayi,wo sab thik ho gaye...

par thik hote hI HEINSBERG ne apne sainikon ko saare mahal ko gherne ke liye keh diya...

aur saath hi apni sena ke chaar pramukh tukdiyon ko chaaron dishaon me faile kar abhi jo bhi hua tha,uska satya jaanane ka aadesh de diya tha...


LORD CRUSEDAR- tum yahan kya kar rahe ho??bhul gaye humne kya aadesh diya tha???

HEINSBERG LORD ke kamre ke saamne
pahunch kaksh ke darwaaze ko khatkhatane hi waala tha ki itne me darwaza swayam hi khul gaya aur LORD CRUSEDAR baahar nikle...

HEINSBERG-shama karen maharaj,mujhe yaad hai ki aapne aapke kamre me kisi ka bhi aana nished kiya hua hai,kintu baat hi itni badi hai ki mujhe aana pada........

LORD CRUSEDAR- aisi kya baat ho gayi???

fir HEINSBERG ne LORD ko jo kuch bhi abhi abhi hua tha wo sabkuch bata diya....

LORD CRUSEDER- hmm.ye toh wakayi gambhir baat hai..tum mahal ki surakhsha kadi kar do...kisi bhi agyaat vyakti ko dekhte hi maarne ke liye keh do......

HEINSBERG- ye aadesh maine pehle hi de diya hai LORD...

LORD CRUSEDAR- bohot acche.hamare sabhi sipeh salahakaron ko turant sabha me upastithit hone ko kaho..

HEINSBERG- jo aangya LORD.

HEINSBERG apne LORD ke aadesh ka palan karne nikal gaya wahin LORD CRUSEDAR jo apne aap ko kab se control me kiye hue tha,wo apne chehre par wapas dar ki rekhaon ko liye sabha ki taraf nikal pada....



aur kuch hi der me sabha shuru ho chuki thi.....


LORD CRUSEDAR- aap sab bhali bhaati jaante hain ki ye sabha kyun bulayi gayi hai....

abhi kuch der pehle jo kuch bhi hua,wo koi choti moti baat nahi hai.hamare upar jo sankat ke baadal chaaye hue hain,agar kisike paas uska koi hal hai toh wo bol sakta hai......


DOST KO DUSHMAN SAMAJHNE KI GALTI NAA KAREN LORD CRUSEDAR......



abhi koi kuch kehta usse pehle hi ye awaaz PALACE HALL me gunj uthi.....

sab hakke bakke hokar idhar udhar dekhne lage.......

HEINSBERG- kaun hai???jo bhi hai,saamne aaye........

HEINSBERG ke bolte hi us hall ke beech ek tez roshni faile gayi.sabki aankhen kuch pal ke liye band ho gayi....

thodi der baad jab dheere dheere sabne aakhen kholi toh shocked reh gaye..

unke sabha ke beech ek jawan ladka apne dono haathon ko apni kamar par tikaye muskurata hua khada tha.....

aur thik uske peeche unke PLANET ka DEFENDER haath baandhe khada tha......


HEINSBERG- DEFENDER tum!!!....aur kaun hai...aur is tarah se bhari sabha ke beech me aane ki kya wajah hai???

MAI- mere naam VIKRAM hai...mai yahan aap logon ki madad karne aaya hun.....

meri baat sunkar HEINSBERG aur wahan baithe saare log has diye....

HEINSBERG- bacche...tu hamari madad karega????shukra mana ki itna bada dussahas karne ke baad bhi meri talwar abhi tak tere gardan ke paar nahi hui hai....

ye bolkar HEINSBERG ne apni miyan me se talwar ko halka sa bahar nikala....

MAI- chaliye,fulon se naa sahi,talwar se hi hamara swagat kar dijiye aap....

hum bhi toh dekhen ki aapki talwar bhi aapke zuban ki hi tarah tez hai ya nahi....

meri baat sunkar HEINSBERG ko ghussa aa gaya.....usne apni talwar nikali aur tezi se meri taraf aane laga...

wahin mere piche khada DEFENDER HEINSBERG ki harkat par has diya....

HEINSBERG theek mere saamne ruka,aur ek baar mujhe ghoor kar dekha...

mai abhi bhi muskura raha tha..

mere muskurane ne uske ghusse par ghee ka kaam kiya...usne tezi se apni talwar mere gardan ko nishana banakar ghuma di.....



SAAAYYYYY................


HEINSBERG ke talwar hghumate hi ye awaaz hui par sirf aadhi...kyunki talwar bas aadhi door hi talwar rahi...

mere gale tak pahunchte pahunchte talwar ne phoolon ka roop le liya tha....

ye karishma dekh HEINSBERG ke saath saath LORD CRUSEDAR aur wahana moujud sabhi mantri mandal apni jagah par ek jhatke me khade ho gaye......

MAI- apka swagat ho gaya ho toh kya ab mai jis kaam se aaya hun,wo kar lun....

LORD CRUSEDAR- kaun ho tum???aur kya chahte ho..???

MAI- mai kaun hun,ye jaanana aap sab ke liye zaroori nahi hai....aap bas itna jaan lijiye ki mai aap sab ko aapke andar moujud KAIWA naam ke zeher se nijat dilane ke liye aaya hun....

meri baat sunkar sab ek baar fir chownke...

LORD CRUSEDER- hume tumhari madad ki aawashaykta nahi hai....tum jaa sakte ho....

LORD CRUSEDER ke bolne ke baad unhi ki boli hui baat baaki sab sabhagan bhi bolne lage...

MAI- ye aap sab nahi,aapke andar moujud KAAL DRAV bol raha hai........

LORD CRUSEDER- isse tumhe koi matlab nahi hona chahiye......hum aise hi thik hain.tum abhi ke abhi yahan se chale jao warna bandi bana liye jaaoge.....

MAI- bina mera kaam khatm kiye mai toh nahi jaane waala.aap apni koshish kar lijiye........

LORD CRUSEDAR- sipahiyon,is ladke ko bandi bana liya jaaye......

maine apna haath upar kiya aur apni mutthi band kar di........

aur agle hi pal..............


LORD CRUSDER ko chhod kar wahan jitne bhi log moujud the,yahan tak ki bahar pehra dete sainik,sabhi ek saath niche gir pade..

wo sabhi behosh ho chuke the......

apne sabhi mantri gan aur sipahiyon ko behosh hota dekh LORD CRUSEDAR ka dimag ghum gaya....

unhone apni aakhen band ki aur antardhyan hone ki koshish ki par ye kaamiyab nahi ho paaye.....

MAI- jab tak mai nahi chahunga,tum gayab nahi ho sakte......

LORD CRUSEDER- ye tum thik nahi kar rahe ho......iske liye ummmmmmmmm............

iske aage LORD CRUSEDAR kuch bol nahi paaye,kyunki unke honthon sil gaye the....

MAI- teri bakwas sunane nahi aaya hun mai.......

DEFENDER- aapne sabko behosh kyun kiya??aisi haalat me inka ilaaj kaise hoga????

MAI- aisi haalat me hi inka ilaaj ho sakta hai..agar ye jaagte rahe toh mana karenge,us surat me mujhe inhe haani pahunchana hoga jo mai nahi chahta......

DEFENDER- toh ab????


MAI- DOCTOR ko toh aajaane do....

DEFENDER- DOCTOR????mai samjha nahi...


MAI- sab samajh jaaoge..kuch der wait karo......




WAHIN BAHAR:-




ANJALI- yaar,inhone toh pure mahal ko chaavni me badal diya hai......

WARRIORS WORLD me aane ke baad teeno ke saamne jo sabse pehla nazara aaya tha wo tha LORD CRUSEDAR ka palace........

teeno aage badhe hi the ki unhe lagatar kayi saare sainik mahal ko chaaron taraf se gherte hue dikhe.......

AVANTIKA- par V.J kahan hai???

ANJALI- palace ke andar.......

AVANTIKA- WHAT?????kahin usse kuch....

AVANTIKA ki baat puri hone se pehle hi RONIT aur ANJALI has diye......

RONIT- babes...ye pure planet ke log bhi mil jaaye naa,toh bhi V.J ka kuch nahi bigad sakta..tum relax raho aur mujhe sochne do ki hum andar kaise jaayen....


KUCH BHI SOCHNE KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI....SIDHE ANDAR AAJAO.........



ye awaaz RONIT aur ANJALI ke dimag me gunji thi.dono ne ek dusre ki taraf dekha aur muskura diye...

ANJALI- chalo.raasta clear hai.....

AVANTIKA- oye,kahan se rasta clear ho gaya..dekh nahi rahe ho kitne saare soldiers khade hain...

RONIT- trust us yaar....aur chalo andar....

ye bolkar RONIT aur ANJALI aage badh gaye.AVANTIKA toh andar hi andar bohot dar rahi thi par wo jaanti thi ki ANJALI aur RONIT kitne kushal yodha hain,isiliye unke bharose wo unke piche piche ho li......

par jaise hi teeno mahal ke paas pahunche,teeno ko ek jhatka laga....jahan agle hi pal ANJALI aur RONIT normal ho gaye,wahin AVANTIKA ki hairaani har pal ke saath badhti hi jaa rahi thi....

AVANTIKA- ye sab kya hai??ye sab log acahanak gir kaise gaye......

RONIT- kaha tha naa,kuch nahi hoga..ab jaldi chalo andar......

LORD CRUSEDER ka mahal bohot khubsurat tha....teeno usse dekh dekh kar aage badh rahe the.aise hi aage badhte badhte kab wo rajsabha me aa gaye,unhe pata hi nahi chala...


MAI- dekh lo,dekh lo.....sab taraf achi tarah se dekh lo.aur kahin kuch gandagi dikhi toh jhadu pocha bhi maar dena......



meri awaaz se teeno hosh me aaye.mujhpar nazar padte hi ANJALI aur RONIT bhaag kar aaye aur mere gale lag gaye......

AVANTIKA-V.JJJJJ............

mera naam AVANTIKA ne dar kar liya tha par agle hi pal jo hua usse dekhkar AVANTIKA ki aankhen hairat se badi ho gayi....

hua ye ki mujhe apne doston se gale lagta dekh LORD CRUSEDAR ne kuch nukile dhardhar auzaaron ka awahan kiya aur meri taraf chhod diya.....

aur ye sab AVANTIKA ne dekh liya......

aur isiliye uske mooh se mere naam ki cheekh nikal gayi.....

idhar wo saare auzaar mujhse 2 feet door hawa me hi rook gaye....isiliye AVANTIKA ki aankhen hairat se faile gayi....

MAI- ye bachkani harkat band kijiye LORD....

RONIT- iski toh mai,

RONIT aage badha hi tha ki maine usse rok kar kuch kaha jisse sunkar uski bhi aankhen badi ho gayi......

MAI- AVNI,aisa bohot kuch hai jo tum nahi jaanti par jaan jaaogi.aisi choti moti baaton par hairan hona band karo......

AVANTIKA ne kuch bhi nahi kaha aur mere paas aakar khadi ho gayi....

MAI- tum jaanana nahi chahogi ki maine tumhe yahan kyun bulaya hai!!!!

AVANTIKA ne is baar bhi kuch nahi kaha,bas apni mundi haan me hila di.....


MAI-RAKHT PHOOL........BLOOD FLOWER....mujhe uski zaroorat hai......


AVANTIKA meri baat sunkar shocked ho gayi wahin ANJALI aur RONIT ko toh kuch samajh bhi nahi aaya.....

RONIT- BLOOD FLOWER!!!!ab ye kya bala hai????

MAI- sab bata dunga.rook zara...

AVANTIKA- par tum uska kya karoge???

maine kuch kaha nahi,bas teeno ke aage haath ghuma diya...humse kuch door hi ek bada sa parda ban gaya jisme WARRIORS WORLD me kya kya hua hai,wo dikhne laga..

bas ASMODEUS ke chehre ko maine nahi dikhaya tha....

jaise jaise scenes aage badhte gaye,ANJALI,RONIT aur AVANTIKA ki aankhon se aansu girne lage....

sab kuch dikhane ke baad wo parda khud hi gayab ho gaya......

AVANTIKA ne apne aansun poche aur kaha...

AVANTIKA- par FLOWER toh ghar me hai....

MAI- jaanta hun aur wo yahan aa bhi jaayega...bas mai tumse ijazat lena chahta tha..

us FLOWER ko tumne dhunda tha,toh usse dene na dene ka hak bhi tumhara hi hai.....


AVANTIKA man me- itni taakat,itni shakti,fir bhi itni saadgi........SAMAJH NAHI AATA KI TERI CHEHRE ME DOOB JAAUN YA FIR TERI BAATON ME......


maine ye saari baat suni thi aur mera dil hi jaanta hai ki apne face ko normal rakhne ke liye mujhe kitni mehnat karni padi thi....

MAI- tumne jawab nahi diya AVNI.....???

AVANTIKA-arre wo flower issi kaam ke liye hi toh hai......le lo.........

maine apni ek ungli ko ek baar gol ghumaya..mere saamne ek chota sa WORLD DOOR khul gaya.....WORLD DOOR ke dusri taraf AVANTIKA ka kamra tha.....

meri ungli se ek neeli ray nikli aur WORLD DOOR se hote hue AVANTIKA ke kamre me chali gayi..aur kuch hi palon me us ray ne BLOOD FLOWER ko dhund liya........

wo usse hawa me tairati hui DOOR se hote hue mere haathon me de gayi.....


AVANTIKA toh aankhen faade ye sab hote hue dekh rahi thi....



MAI- maine kaha na AVNI ki zayada shocked mat ho..dheere dheere sab pata chal jaayega.....

ye batao ki ab kya karna hai???


LORD CRUSEDER-mmmm..mmmmm......



RONIT- ab is maamu ko kya hua????

MAI- kuch nahi,keh raha hai ki usse thik nahi hona.....

RONIT- abbe tu kya tere baap ko bhi thik hona padega..bina mmm kiye khade rah warna sach me teri zubaan kaat dunga....

AVANTIKA- ek problem hai...

MAI- kya????

AVANTIKA- ye flower pure planet ko theek nahi kar paayega.....uske liye kam se kam 10 BLOOD FLOWERS ki zaroorat hai,jo mujhe nahi lagta ki hume mil paayengi......

maine ek lambi saans chodi.....10 RAKHT PHOOL mil jaayenge...


TEENO- kaise????


MAI- AVNI,RAKHT PHOOL ka naam kaise pada,kya tum jaanti ho????


AVANTIKA- haan....kaha jaata hai ki ek DEVIL ne hazaaron ANGELS ko ek saath ek viraan PLANET me bandi banakar rakha hua tha aur fir unhe ek saath maar diya tha......

un saare ANGELS ka saara khoon ek jagah par ikatha hone laga..par us PLANET ki dharti ANGELS ke khoon ki garmi ko sehen nahi kar paayi aur fat gayi.......

us PLANET ke hazaaron tukde hue par kuch tukdo me ANGELS ka khoon laga hua tha...aur jahan jahan wo ANGELS ke khoon se sane tukde gire,wahan kuch saalon baad RAKHT PHOOL paida hue....

MAI- aur isiliye ye phool KAIWA ka aur KAAL DRAV ka jo ki DEVILS ke khoon se banta hai,uska kaat hai,kyunki is phool me ANGELS ka khoon hai.....



RONIT- haan toh isse...........ek second......kahin tu.......nahii...hargiz nahi.......mai tujhe aisa karne

mmmmm.......


isse aage RONIT kuch naa bol paaya kyunki maine uske honth bhi sil diye the aur uske baad yahi maine ANJALI ke saath bhi kiya kyunki wo bhi meri baat ka matlab samajh gayi thi....

aur saath saath maine un dono ke haath aur pair ek adrishta rassi se bhi baandh diye the...ab na toh dono bol sakte the,naahi hi kuch kar sakte the.....

ANJALI aur AVANTIKA ke paas khadi AVANTIKA ye sab dekh kar dar gayi thi...

AVANTIKA- RONIT,ANJALI,kya hua tumhe...???tumhare honth aapas me kaise chipak gaye...

aur ye tumhare haath pair sat kyun gaye hain...V.J dekho naa ye kya ho raha hai....???


MAI- ye maine hi kiya hai AVNI......


meri baat sunkar AVANTIKA shocked ho gayi...


AVANTIKA- tumne!!!!par kyun?????

mai chalte hue AVANTIKA ke paas gaya aur uske haathon ko thaam liya...

MAI- inki fikr mat karo.kuch hi der me ye dono theek ho jaayenge AVNI.

par mere ek sawaal ka jawab dogi sach sach......

ye sawal maine AVANTIKA ki aankhon me dekh kar pucha tha.....

AVANTIKA ne haan me sir hila diya...

MAI- mujhpe vishvas karti ho......


AVANTIKA- tumhe nahi pata....


AVANTIKA ne mere sawal par sawal kiya,par uska ye sawal uske jawab se kayi guna behtar tha....

MAI- bas toh fir,jo bhi ho jaaye,jaise bhi haalat hon,agle kuch minuton tak apna ye bharosa bina koi sawaal puche mujhpe rakh paaogi......aur mai jaisa kahun waisa kar paaogi?????

AVANTIKA jo mere aankhon me hi dekhe jaa rahi thi,usne fir se haan me sir hila diya...

MAI- aise nahi,mujhse waada karo....

ye kehkar maine apna haath aage badha diya jisse agle hi pal AVANTIKA ne thaam liya..



AVANTIKA- waada...


MAI- RONIT mere bhai,yakin maan,iske alawa mere paas aur koi chaara nahi hai....

sun,jab sahi waqt aayega toh tujhe ye karna hai.....


ye keh kar maine apna haath aage kar diya..mere haath me ek chit aa gayi jisme likha hua tha ki RONIT ko kya aur kaise karna hai.....

maine us chit ko fold karke wahin hawa me chhod diya.wo chit wahin hawa me hi rook gayi......

mai chalte hue teeno se thodi door aa gaya....mere dusre haath ko upar kiya jisme RAKHT PHOOL tha......

wo RAKHT PHOOL waise hi hawa me jhool gaya...

maine apna haath neeche ki taraf kiya..zamin par ek bada sa katora aa gaya....

ab wo waqt aa gaya tha jiske liye maine itna kuch kiya tha.......


mujhse thodi door khade RONIT aur ANJALI ki ansamjhi awaaz aur tez ho gayi thi wahin AVANTIKA chehre par dheron sawaal liye mere taraf dekh rahi thi.....

aur agle hi pal bina mere kuch kahe usse uske sawaalon ka jawab bhi mil gaya....


KHACHHHHH.........


AVANTIKA- nahiiiiiiiiii.........


aur is awaaz ke saath mere left haath ki nas kat gayi aur khoon ki tez dhaar bahar nikalne lagi...

maine mere haath me ye cut mere hi andar moujud SPEAR se ki thi..

kyunki mujhe kisi normal chaaku,talwaar,ya kisi aur auzaar se nuksaan nahi pahunchaya jaa sakta tha....

isiliye maine apne SPEAR ka awahan kiya aur jaise hi wo mere haath me aayi maine usse apni kalai par ghuma diya...

khoon mere kalai se bahar nikla...maine apne doosre haath se mere saare nikalte hue khoon ko us katore ki disha de di...

mere haathon se nikalte hue khoon ki speed kam ho gayi aur wo dheere dheere karke us katore me girne laga.....

wahin AVANTIKA bhaag kar mere paas aayi.uski aankhon me se is waqt utna hi paani nikal raha tha jitna mere kalayi se khoon.......

AVANTIKA- ye kya kar diya tumne.....ruko,mai kuch karti hun.....

par isse pehle ki wo koi jadibuti dhundne nikalti, maine uska haath pakad liya....

MAI- tumne waada kiya tha....


AVANTIKA- par ye.......


MAI- shhhhhhh......bharosa rakho..........aur kuch bhi ho jaaye,mere paas hi khadi rehna.....

wahin mere piche khade DEFENDER ke aankhon me is waqt vismay aur dard ke bhaav dono dikh rahe the....

ye sab toh andar ka haal tha.par baahar ka haal bohot hi khatarnaak ho chuka tha...

mere apne kalayi ko kaatathe hi pure WARRIORS WORLD me andhera chaa gaya....

sirf mahal ko chhodkar,kyunki wahan mai tha,baaki ki har jagah par reh reh kar bhukamp aa rahe the..

aisa lag raha tha maano ye grah khudkushi karne ko amada ho gayi thi.....

yahan maine AVANTIKA se sab kuch thik ho jaayega,aisa bol toh diya tha par ab mujhe chakkar aane lage the.......

kuch der tak mai khudko sambhalta raha,par fir mai jhoomte hue niche girne laga,par mere girne se pehle hi AVANTIKA ne mujhe sambhal liya aur apni godh me lita diya....

mera kaafi zyada khoon nikal chuka tha aur wo katora jisse maine apna khoon bharne ke liye kaha tha,wo bhi bhar chuka tha......

wahin mere behosh hote hi ANJALI aur RONIT ki pairon ki bediyan aur honth dono khul gaye...wo bhaagte hue mere paas aaye...

RONIT- ye kya kar diya mere bhai.......anjaan logon ke liye apni jaan khatre me daal di......

dekh,mai kuch nahi jaanta,abhi ke abhi uth jaa....nahi toh teri kasam,is duniya ke aakhri insaan tak ko maar daalunga mai.....

DEFENDER- shaant ho jaayiye aap...

RONIT- chup be....saale,AVNI ko toh is bewakuf ne kasam di thi,par tu toh isse rok sakta tha naa.

DEFENDER- unhone mujhe aadesh diye the ki mai aisa kuch na karun....

RONIT- aadesh...kamine ko bas order dena hi toh aata hai....saale ek baar thik hoja,fir batata hun tujhe...

arre koi toh kuch karo......

RONIT ye sab rote hue bol raha tha wahin ANJALI ko toh jaise kuch sudh hi nahi thi.wo mere kate hue kalayi ko ghoore jaa rahi thi......

RONIT-AVNI.....tum toh kuch karo yaar...tumhe toh medicine ka shouk hai naa....kuch bhi karke bacha lo mere bhai ko...

DEFENDER- koi faayda nahi.....ye koi sadharan vyakti nahi hain jinke upar sadharan aushadiyan kaam aayengi......

DEFENDER ki baat sunkar AVANTIKA ke aansu aur badh gaye wahin ANJALI mera wahi kate hue kalayi waala haath pakadkar rone lagi......


ki tabhi.........


RONIT ko kuch yaad aaya...

usne piche mud kar dekha.wo chit jo maine chhodi thi,wo abhi bhi wahin hawa me rooki hui thi...

RONIT jhat se gaya aur us chit ko khol padhne laga.

CHIT- JAB MERE KHOON SE KATORA BHAR JAAYE TOH RAKHT PHOOL KO USME DOOBONA AUR IS MANTRA KO UCCHARIT KARNA.....


PRATI RAKHT PHOOLAH VIBJUTI......

COPY BLOOD FLOWER POWER......


isse jo bhi bahar aayega usse firse mere khoon me dubokar is mantra ko fir dohrana..ye kaam kul das baar karna.......

aur sun,mujhe tum log thik nahi kar sakte.agar mujhe thik hona hoga toh mai ho jaaunga par agar tune mera kaha nahi maana toh mai tum logon ke paas wapas nahi aaunga.....

RONIT- saala firse order de gaya......teri toh mai........pehle jo bola hai wo kar leta hun.....

fir RONIT ne maine jaisa kaha tha,waise karne laga..usne RAKHT PHOOL ko mere khoon me dubaya aur mere dwara likha hua mantra uccharit kiya......


PRATI RAKHT PHOOLAH VIBJUTI........



mantra ke uccharit hote hi RAKHT PHOOL chamakne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte us FLOWER ke andar se ek aur BLOOD FLOWER nikla aur side me gir gaya....

ye dekhkar AVANTIKA aur ANJALI ke nam aankhon me vismay ke bhaav aa gaye...

uske baad RONIT ne lagatar aur 9 baar ye kriya dohrayi aur dekhte hi dekhte wahan 10 +1 AVANTIKA ka milakar 11 RAKHT PHOOL ho gaye...

RONIT- ab??????

DEFENDER- ab aapki baari hai AVANTIKA....

AVANTIKA- haan par ab bhi ek problem hai...RAKHT PHOOL se KAIWA aur KAAL DRAV ka kaat toh ban jaayega par pure grah ke logon ko pilaoge kaise...

RONIT- usme kya problem hai.....yahan ke main logon ko hum theek kar denge.fir wo sab is dawayi ko har jagah pahuncha denge...

AVANTIKA- wahi toh maine problem hai....is phool se jo tonic taiyar hoga usse 12 ghante ke andar pidit ko pilana hai.12 ghante ke baad isse bane tonic ka asar khatm ho jaayega.....

RONIT- yaar ye toh sabse pada panga hai...


ANJALI- toh kya V.J ki itni badi kurbaani bekaar jaayegi..ye bolte waqt ANJALI k agala rundh sa gaya tha.....

DEFENDER- nahi........unhone iska hal pehle hi nikal liya tha.....

SAB- matlab.......


SPARZANA SAGKRAMA....

CONTACT TRANSFER.....



DEFENDER- matlab VIKRAM ne is grah ke zamin ko yahan ke logon se jod diya hai....jo drav aap banayengi,usse hume bas yahan ki dharti se chuwana hai....

wo saara drav apne aap dharti se hota hua yahan ke har baashinde ke sharir me pahunch jaayega....

DEFENDER ki baat sunkar AVANTIKA fir shocked ho gayi....

AVANTIKA- aisa bhi hota hai!!!!!

RONIT- ye jahan hota hai wahan sabkuch hota hai par abhi wo sab chhodo...jaldi se is PHOOL ka ras nikalon.....

AVANTIKA ne 10 RAKHT PHOOL liye aur lag gayi uska ras nikalne....

RAKHT PHOOL hamesha gile hi rehte hain..aur har phool se kaafi zyada maatra me ras nikalta hai,isiliye AVANTIKA ke ek FLOWER ko ghiste hi turant ras nikalna shuru ho gaya...

DEFENDER ne ek aisa mantra bola jisse PHOOL ka saara ras hawa me hi theher jaa raha tha..

chaliye jab tak AVANTIKA RAKHT PHOOL se ras nikal rahi hai tab tak hum..........


USSI WAQT KISI DUSRE JAHAN ME:-


har taraf baadal hi baadal.yahan tak ki zamin bhi safed baadalon ki chaadar odhe hue thi....

ek saaya hawa me tairta sa ek taraf chala jaa raha tha ki tabhi uske kaano me ek madhur sangit ki awaaz gunji...wo ussi disha me udne laga...

jaise hi wo saaya us awaaz ke paas pahuncha toh usne dekha ki hazaron angles apne white poshakon me apne haath jode ussi ki taraf dekh rahe hain...

wo saaya jab unke paas gaya tab.......


AAJ HAMARA INTAZAR KHATM HUA LORD OF ANGELS......



ji haan doston,ye saaya aur koi nahi mai hi tha....


MAI- aap sab????


ANGEL1- hum sab wahi ANGELS hain jisse aapke bhai ASMODEUS ne sadiyon pehle maar diya tha....

humne marte waqt ye kasam li thi ki jab tak hum uske paapon ke ant karne waale ko nahi dekh lete,hum HEAVEN nahi loutenge...aur aaj hamari talash khatm hui......

par jaate jaate hum aapko kuch dena chahte hain.....

MAI- mujhe!!!!kya???

ANGEL2- aapki zindagi......

ye bolkar sabhi angels ne apne haath aage kar diye...unke haathon se white energies nikli aur mere ussi kalayi par padi jisse maine kaata tha....



aur agle hi pal mai tezi se piche ki taraf udne laga aur...............


AVANTIKA- ho gaya..........ab kya karna hai???


MAI BATAUN?????


isse pehle ki DEFENDER kuch kehta.......meri awaaz sabke kaano me gunji.....

mera sir is waqt ANJALI ke godh me tha.......

meri aankhen khuli dekh sabke sukh chuke aansun ek baar firse behne lage...

ANJALI ne mera maatha chum liya..


mai jhat se khada ho gaya aur


CHATAAKH

CHATAAKH

CHATAAKH


ye teen thappad teen haathon se mere gaalon par apne nishan banane ki naakam koshish karne lage.....

MAI- saalon..sequence me maar rahe ho...

RONIT- beta ek shabd bhi aur bola naa toh abki baar mukka khayega......

ANJALI- aur ab koi order de ke dekh......batati hun tujhe...

MAI- tumhe bhi kuch kehna hai??

maine AVANTIKA se kaha par wo kuch naa boli aur dusri taraf mooh karke subakne lagi......

MAI- yaar ek do thappad aur maar le,par plz ro mat.......

par AVANTIKA na kuch boli,na meri taraf palti....

manana toh mai usse chahta tha,par abhi yahan ka kaam adhura tha.....

maine apne haath aage kiye aur......

jaise hi mera haath niche aaya,wo pura RAKHT DRAV jo is waqt hawa me hi ruka hua tha,wo ek jhatke me zamin ki taraf gira...

par zamin me takraane ke bajaaye,wo drav zamin ke andar chala gaya......


aur agle hi pal.........


zameen se hota hua wo RAKHT DRAV is grah ke har vyakti ke pairon se hota hua uske saare sharir me faile gaya....

aur jaise hi ye hua,ek kaal dhuaan yahan ke har vyakti ke sharir se khinchaate hue baahar aane laga.....

ye kaala dhuan wo kaali shakti thi jo yahan ke baasindo ke andar thi.....

mahal ke sabhi logon ko toh maine behosh kar diya tha,par itna sab kuch ek saath hone ki wajah se is grah ke baaki ke saare baashinde khud ko sambhal nahi paaye aur wo sab bhi behosh ho gaye......


par tabhi.......

aahhhhhhhhhhhhhh...................


ye awaaz humare aamne se aa rahi thi.....baaki sab toh samajh nahi paaye bas mere chehre par saamne ka nazara dekhkar muskaan naach gayi......

RONIT-abbe isse kya hua hai.....???

MAI- isse kuch nahi hua hai,iske andar jo kaal saaya hai naa,usse RAKHT DRAV ki wajah se taklif ho rahi hai....

SAB- kaala saaya....!!!!

DEFENDER- toh kya yahi......!!!!!!!!

MAI- haan.........LORD CRUSEDER ke andar hi chupe baithe hai hamare priya VALEFOR urf BALBEER SINGH BAGGA......

meri baat sunkar AVANTIKA,ANJALI aur RONIT teeno ko jhatka laga....

RONIT- kya bol raha hai bhai????par wo toh mar gaya tha naa.....


MAI- haan bhi aur nahi bhi.......iske bete ne iske DEVIL sharir ko jala diya tha...par iski rooh azaad thi...

isse puri tarah marne ke liye iske maalik ke andar jaana padta.( ASMODEUS )....

par ASMODEUS ne iski rooh ko DIGVIJAY ko de diya.....

PAR DIGVIJAY ke marte hi iski rooh firse aazad ho gayi jisse iske maakik ne yahan bhej diya...jahan isne LORD CRUSEDER ke sharir par kabza kar liya....

RONIT- par kyun????

MAI- iske maalik ko pata tha ki is grah me aate hi mai is grah ko baandh dunga isiliye usne pehle se hi isse yahan bhej diya taaki jab ye LORD CRUSEDER ke sharir par kabza kare toh iske aankhon ke zariye wo yahan jo kuch bhi ho raha hai usse dekh sake....


DEFENDER- ADBHUDH.....toh ab???



MAI- ab!! ab picture khatm.....


aur issi ke saath mere haathon se ek tez safed roshni nikli aur VALEFOR ke saaye par padi.....

aur agle hi pal uski cheekh har taraf gunjane lagi aur kuch hi palon me ek kaale saaye ka samuh astitv khatm ho gaya.....


MAI- AVNI mai jaanta hun ki is waqt tumhare man me bohot se sawaal hain,par yakin maano,jab sahin waqt aayega,tumhe sab kuch apne aap pata chal jaayega.....

AVANTIKA mere baaton ka matlab toh nahi samajh paayi par fir bhi usne apni palken haan me jhuka di........

MAI- DEFENDER....mera yahan ka kaam khatm hua.....ab ye grah punah paap mukt hai.....aur isse pehle ki tarah sashakt banane ki zimmedari aapki.......


DEFENDER kuch bola nahi aur mere aage jhuk gaya......


maine usse uthaya aur gale laga liya....


MAI- ab hume challna chahiye......

DEFENDER- mai sabhi ko hosh me le aata hun....wo aapke ek baar darshan toh kar len..

MAI- nahi nahi....sadiyon baad paap mukt neend me hain ye sab...sone do.....mulakat fir kabhi ho jaayegi......

mai thoda peeche hata..mere sharir se ek roshni nikli aur mere doston par padi aur agle hi pal hum sab gayab ho chuke the......





KUCH HI DINO ME HAMARI MULAKAT HOGI


NISHKALIKA......







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....






AAPKA APNA V.J....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI KAAFI TAKLIF JHELNE KE BAAD AAKHIR ME VIKRAM APNE SAFAR KE PEHLE PADHAV KO PAAR KAR LETA HAI.
AB AAGE:-







CHAPTER-2




( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )




UPDATE- 75






PLANET- ISLA






PLACE- MOUNTAIN POINT......







kitna sundar nazara hai meri didi ke grah ka...har taraf hariyali aur unche unche pahad.......

arre waah..itna chota pahad..par sundar hai...aaj yahi jaaya jaaye......


subah ka waqt hai.....BHUVIKA har subah ki tarah aaj bhi sair par nikli hai........

har din BHUVIKA alag alag disha me,raston par ghumne nikalti thi....

aaj jis raaste par wo nikli thi,usse wahan se kuch hi door ek chota sa pahad dikha jiski aur wo nikal gayi.........

aur kuch hi door me wo pahad ki choti par thi.

BHUVIKA- waah...apratim...kitna sundar nazara hai............aisa lag raha hai jaise prakriti ne hari chaadar odh li hai....



arre ye yahan.....!!!!!!!


BHUVIKA jo ki ek disha me aage badh rahi thi,uski nazar achanak usse kuch hi door pahad ke side me bane ek bade se patthar par padi jispar dhyan ki mudra me MADDOX baitha hua tha.....

BHUVIKA uski taraf chal padi......

wahin dhyan ki awastha me baithe MADDOX ke KAAL CHAKRA ne usse bata diya tha ki BHUVIKA uske paas aa rahi hai...

aur ye jaankar MADDOX ke chehre par ek muskaan naach gayi......

MADDOX- ab toh mujhe lagta hai ki aap mera picha karti hain.........

BHUVIKA jo ki MADDOX ke aas paas faile KAAL CHAKRA ko gour se dekh rahi thi,MADDOX ki awaaz sun hadbada gayi....

BHUVIKA- kya matlab hai aapka???hum aapka koi peecha vicha nahi kar rahe hain aur naahi hume aisa karne ka koi shouk hai........hum toh...........

MADDOX- arre relax yaar....mai toh bus mazak kar raha tha.....

BHUVIKA- acha...par ek baat bataiye,aap sach me DHYAN me baithte hain ya aise hi aankh band kiye hote hain....

MADDOX- hahaha...mai toh dhyaan me hi baithta hun...par aapko jo sahin lage wo samajh lijiye.........

ab agar aap ki ijazat ho toh kya mai aapse kuch puch sakta hun???

BHUVIKA- puchiye?
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MADDOX- aap us din bol rahi thi naa ki abhi tak aapko apna manchaha ladka nahi mila...

toh aapko kaisa ladka pasand hai VIVAH ke liye.....
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BHUVIKA- aur ye aapko kyun jaanana hai?
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INHE SHOUK HAI DUSRO KI PASAND NAAPASAND JAANENE KA........



ye awaaz MADDOX aur BHUVIKA ke peeche ki taraf se aayi thi.....awaaz sunte hi dono peeche ghum gaye.....

jahan apne peeche khade shaksh ko dekhkar BHUVIKA khush ho gayi wahan MADDOX ka mooh ban gaya......

BHUVIKA- arre waah didi..aap aaj subah subah yahan...!!!!!!

NISHKALIKA- haan,aaj maine bhi socha ki apni gudiya ki hi tarah thodi sair kar lun....

BHUVIKA- bohot acha socha aapne.par sair par aana hi tha toh mujhe kyun nahi bataya aapne..mai thodi der rook jaati,fir hum dono ek saath aate.....

NISHKALIKA- mai tumhare kaksh gayi thi par tum nikal chuki thi..toh mai tumhare peeche peeche aa gayi......

BHUVIKA- chaliye fir,thoda aage se ghum kar aate hain......

NISHKALIKA- aap chaliye,mai zara MADDOX se kuch baat kar ke aati hun.....

BHUVIKA- toh unhe bhi apne saath le chalte hain naa........

BHUVIKA ki baat sun MADDOX khush ho gaya tha par isse pehle ki wo kuch kehta NISHKALIKA bol uthi......

NISHKALIKA- MADDOX ko abhi kuch kaam se jaana hoga BHUVIKA.....wahi toh mujhe unhe samjhana hai..tum aage chalo,mai aati hun...

BHUVIKA- theek hai,par jaldi aana......

ye bolkar BHUVIKA aage nikal gayi.....

wahin un dono ke saamne khada MADDOX andar hi andar NISHKALIKA se kudh raha tha par wo kar bhi kya sakta tha.....

NISHKALIKA- bohot ghussa aa raha hoga na tumhe mujhpar........

MADDOX NISHKALIKA ke sawaal par hadbada gaya......

MADDOX- nahhi ttoh.........mujhe bhala kyun ghussa aane laga tumpe......

NISHKALIKA- mere aane se meri behen ki pasand jo naa jaan paaye tum...

MADDOX- nahi wo toh mai............

NISHKALIKA- maine pehle hi kaha tha MADDOX ki meri behen se door raho...mai tumhari gustakhiyan sirf DEVIL LORD ki wajah se jhel rahi hun.....

warna tum NISHKALIKA ke keher se bach nahi sakte.........

MADDOX- apna ye ghamand apne paas rakho NISHKALIKA..mat bhoolo ki agar tumhare andar aloukik shaktiyan hai toh mere andar bhi hain......

ek baar toh aazma chuki ho,agar dil nahi bhara toh dobara koshish kar lo.....

NISHKALIKA- apne taakat ko ucchit waqt ke liye bacha kar rakho MADDOX.apne bhai ke mout ke badle ke baare me socho,meri behen ke baare me nahi.....

MADDOX- ho gaya tumhara.......

ye bol kar MADDOX jaane laga....

NISHKALIKA- ab yahan ho toh kuch kaam bhi kar lo.yaa fir sirf ek bojh ki tarah pade rahoge....

NISHKALIKA ki baat sunkar MADDOX ka dimag kharab ho gaya.........

MADDOX- tune mujhe samjha kya hai???mai yahan DEVIL LORD ki wajah se aaya hun....

warna teri shakl dekhne ka mujhe koi shouk nahi..........

ek baar,bas ek baar aur taana maar ke dekh..tere guroor aur tere is grah ko tabah na kar diya toh mera bhi naam MADDOX nahi..

ye saari baatein MADDOX ne bohot ghusse me kahi thi,uske kaal chakra uske sharir se nikal kar aas paas failne lage..

us MOUNTAIN ke aas paas ke saare ped poude un kaal chakra ke chapet me aakar kaale padne lage....

NISHKALIKA ko bhi ehsaas ho gaya ki usne kuch zyada hi bol diya hai...wo chahti toh MADDOX se lad sakti thi par wo aisa karna nahi chahti thi...

ek toh usse DEVIL LORD se aisa karne ki ijazat nahi mili thi aur dusra usse pata tha ki uski aur MADDOX ki ladhai me sabse zyada nuksan uske PLANET ko pahunchega.....

NISHKALIKA- in ped aur poudhon ko apna krodh dikhakar kya faayda MADDOX.....maine pehle bhi kaha hai ki apne saare ghusse ko bacha kar rakho apne dushman ke liye...

aur agar fir bhi tumhara dil nahi maan raha hai toh mai tumse yudh karne ko taiyar hun,par soch lo,isse tum DEVIL LORD ki nazaron me gunehgaar kehlaaoge.....

DEVIL LORD ka naam sunte hi MADDOX ka ghussa shant padne laga......

aur jaise jaise uska ghussa shant hone laga,uske kaal chakra wapas uske sharir ke andar wapas chala gaya.....

NISHKALIKA- har saal ki tarah is saal bhi hamare grah me YUDH PRATIYOGITA ka aayojan hone waala hai.hum chaahte hain ki is pratiyogita ki taiyari tum dekho......

MADDOX- mai kyun?
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NISHKALIKA- taaki is pratiyogita ka star aur badhaya jaa sake........

MADDOX ne kuch bhi nahi bola aur gayab ho gaya......

NISHKALIKA- ek baar tumhara kaam ho jaaye,DEVIL LORD ka aadesh pura ho jaaye,fir tumhe bataungi ki NISHKALIKA kya cheez hai.....

NISHKALIKA ne ye baat apne man me boli aur uski behen ke paas jaane ke liye gaayab ho gayi.....






PLANET- MONSLICKEL







PLACE-ASMODEUS PALACE







sadiyon ke baad aapke chehre par is tarah ki muskan dekh raha hun FATHER.....

ye baat BEELZEBUB ne apne pita ASMODEUS ko dekhkar kahin thi jiske chehre par is waqt ek gehri muskan thi.....

ASMODEUS- is tarah ki muskaan se tumhara kya matlab hai BEELZEBUB........
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BEELZEBUB- aisi muskaan jisme naa toh koi maksad hai,naa koi aur baat.aisi muskaan jisme sirf khushi jhalakti hai.....

ASMODEUS- hmm.baat toh tumhari sach hai.aaj kaafi waqt ke baad mai sach me khush hun.....

BEELZEBUB- kya mai iska kaaran jaan sakta hun....

ASMODEUS- jis tarah ka parakram kal mere BHAI ne dikhaya,wo wakayi kaabile taarif hai....

aise johar ko dekh kar khush hona laazmi hai....

BEELZEBUB ko apne PITA dwara VIKRAM ki taarif karna pasand nahi aaya.....

BEELZEBUB- khush!!!!aapko ghussa nahi aa raha ki aapke bhai ne apka tilism tod diya...

usne WARRIORS WORLD ke jadon se paap ko khatm kar diya...

WARRIORS WORLD is bramhaand ka sabse shaktishali grah hai,usse aapki kaali takaton me har pal atyadhik maatra me nikhar aata tha jo ab nahi aa paayega...

aur ye sab aapke bhai ki wajah se hua hai....


ASMODEUS- surya ka kaam hota hai prakash dena..


uski garmi kisiko achi lagti hai toh kisi ko buri par kisi ki mahatvakaanksha ke anusar wo chamakna toh nahi chhod sakta naa.

ye uska kaam hai jo usse nirantarta se karna hai..thik waise hi raat ka kaam hai andhera failana....

wo andhera jo surya ke itne tej ke baawajud naa sirf apna samrajya sthapit karta hai balki use lagatar badhata bhi jaata hai.....

mera bhai SURYA ki tarah hai aur mai ANDHERE ki tarah.uska apna kaam hai aur mera apna.....

usse apna kaam karne se mai rok nahi sakta aur naa hi usme itna saamarthya hai ki wo mere kaam ko rok sake.....samjhe.....


BEELZEBUB- kuch kuch....par mai.......


ASMODEUS- ijazat hai....par apni seema mat laanghna...


isse pehle ki BEELZUZUB apni baat apne FATHER ke saamne rakhta,ASMODEUS ne apni baat kehdi....

BEELZUBUB ek baar apne pitah ke aage jhuka aur gayab ho gaya......








PLANET- EARTH.....






PLACE- COLLEGE.....






hey guyz..........kya baat hai???aaj sab saath hi pahunche.....


SHANAYA-hey V.J.......

ANJALI-hey V.J........


RONIT-haan yaar....aaj toh sabki timing match kar gayi.....


mai just college pahuncha tha..mai jab parking me pahuncha toh AVANTIKA aur SHANAYA bhi apni car park kar rahe the...

mujhe dekh kar wo meri taraf aane lage....

aur mere bike stand karte hi mere baazu me ek aur bike rooki jisme RONIT aur ANJALI the........

meri hi ka jawab sabhi ne diya tha siwaye AVANTIKA ke....

kal WARRIORS WORLD se lautne ke baad se hi AVANTIKA ne mujhse baat nahi ki thi...

kal hame waapas aate aate kaafi late ho gaya tha...RONIT & PARTY ke WARRIORS WORLD aate hi maine meri hi tarah un teeno ke bhi CLONES bana diye the isiliye hamare gharon me sab kuch normal hi tha.......

AVANTIKA mere kal ke faisle ke baad se hi mujhse naaraz thi aur uski narazgi ab tak kaayam thi.....

par abhi mai usse kuch bol nahi sakta tha kyunki SHANAYA bhi humare saath thi.....

SHANAYA- han,toh fir kaha chalen,class ya canteen....!!!!!

ANJALI- class hi chalte hain.first lecture start hone hi waala hai......

RONIT- chalo fir.......

MAI- aaj kal tu ANJALI ki kuch zyada hi baat nahi maanane lag gaya hai....

RONIT- abbe,isme baat maanane waali kya baat hai...class ka time ho gaya hai,toh pehle class hi jaayenge naa.....

MAI- kaisa b.f hai tu..ANJALI ko pyas lag rahi hai,aur tune dhyan bhi nahi diya..

wo canteen jaana chahti thi bas tere liye hi wo pehle class jaana chahti hai kyunki usse pata hai ki tu ECONOMICS me thoda weak hai........

meri baat sunkar RONIT turant ANJALI ki taraf palta....

ANJALI kuch bolne hi waali thi par RONIT uske kuch kehne se pehle hi shuru ho gaya...

RONIT- ANJU,tumhe pyas lagi thi aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahi....chalo jaldi canteen,class baad me hoti rahegi....

ANJALI- arre meri baat........

RONIT- jo bhi kehna hai paani peene ke baad kehna.....

ANJLAI- arre mujhe koi pyas nahi lagi hai...

RONIT- kya!!!!lekin V.J toh.......

idhar mai aur SHANAYA aur mai hase jaa rahe the.hasi toh AVANTIKA ko bhi aa rahi thi par usne khudko control kiya hua tha....

aur jaise hi RONIT ne meri taraf dekha,usse sab samajh me aa gaya...

MAI- kyun beta,ab class ke liye late nahi ho rahi hai tujhe......

RONIT- teri toh mai...........

par isse pehle ki RONIT mujh tak pahunchta,mai class ki taraf bhaag gaya....

aur mere piche piche RONIT bhi bhagne laga. girls hamare piche haste hue aane lagi..

ab tak AVANTIKA ne jo apni hasi daba kar rakhi thi,mere jaate hi wo bhi khulkar hasne lagi.......

first 3 lectures humne without break attend kiye......

aur third lecture ke baad hum paanchon ki mandli ne canteen me dera daala....

RONIT - yaar,aaj toh saare lectures bohot boring the....

MAI- abbe,tujhe kis din lectures ache lagte hain.......

RONIT- dekhna beta a+ aayega mera.....

MAI- haan,3,4 saal lagatar first year me mehnat kar,A+ zaroor aayega.....

meri baat sunkar sab has diye siwaay ..........

khair,issi tarah hum kuch der tak ek dusre ki taang khichte rahe.is douran AVANTIKA ne mujhse ek baar bhi baat nahi ki thi aur na hi mere jokes par usne koi reaction diya tha...aur is baat ko ANJALI aur RONIT ne bhi note kiya tha...

SHANAYA- guyz,mai kya kehti hun,bohot dino se bahar dinner nahi kiya hai??toh aaj raat kisi resturant me chalen kya?
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ANJALI- good idea babes....chalte hain...what say guyz....
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MAI- thik hai chalte hain,par resturant me nahi,dhaabe par......

SHANAYA- dhaabe par.....par wahan ka khaana hyginic nahi hota....

RONIT- arre kuch nahi hota.......balki resturant se 100 times zyada maza dhaabe me aata hai.....

hum teeno toh zyadatar dhaabe me hi khaana khaate hain.....

SHANAYA- ok then.dhaabe par hi chalte hain.....

AVANTIKA- guys,mai nahi aaungi.....

SHANAYA- kyun???

AVANTIKA- aise hi,man nahi hai......

SHANAYA- tera man nahi hai...!!!par tujhe toh dhaabe ka khana bohot pasand hai naa....

AVANTIKA- hai toh bas aaj mood nahi hai...

RONIT- toh kaun sa hame abhi jaana hai..raat ko jaana hai tab tak tumhara mood bhi ban jaayega....

par AVANTIKA mana karti rahi aur mere baaki ke dost usse manate rahe....

MAI- guyz guyz,ab usse nahi jaana hai toh usse force mat karo.aur yaar,dhaabe pe toh hume raat ko jaana hai,par filhal toh kuch pet puja yahin par ho jaaye....

RONIT- haan yaar,bhook toh lagi hai....bolo sab,kya kya khaoge???

maine RONIT aur ANJALI ko dekhkar kuch ishara kiya jisse wo dono samajh gaye....

ANJALI- tujhe kuch order karne nahi aata...chal mai bhi chalti hun.SHANAYA,tu bhi chal na...

ANJALI SHANAYA aur RONIT teeno nikal gaye food court ki taraf.......

MAI- kya hua AVNI....
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AVANTIKA ne meri taraf ghoor kar dekha..

AVANTIKA- tumhe nahi pata?
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MAI- maine jo bhi kiya uske liye mujhe bilkul bhi afsos nahi hai AVNI.......kisi ek nirdosh ke liye bhi mai jaan ki baazi laga sakta hun fir wahan toh baat pure PLANET ke logon ki thi...

tumhe toh khush hona chahiye ki maine apne liye nahi balki itne saare logon ke liye risk liya tha....

khud ke liye toh jaanwar bhi jeete hain,agar hum bhi apne baare me hi sochen toh humme aur jaanwaro me kya fark???

maine jo bhi kaha,usse ek baar thande dimag se sochna AVNI.aur agar meri baat sahi lage toh aaj dinner par aane ke liye haan keh dena....

iske baad hamare beech koi baat nahi hui.kuch der baad hamare dost aa gaye...

SHANAYA- waise kaun sa dhaaba jaayenge....

RONIT- NIRMAL DHABA...... south mumbai ka famous dhaaba hai....wahin jaayenge...

hum teeno 8 baje aa jayenge tumhare ghar..tum dono ready rehna......

SHANAYA- dono kahan,ye toh jaa hi nahi rahi..babes,chal naa yaar..tere bina maza nahi aayega...

AVANTIKA- thik hai,mai aaungi....

ye AVANTIKA ne mujhe dekhkar kaha tha..

aur uske haan kehne ke baad RONIT aur ANJALI bhi mujhe dekhkar muskuraye...

SHANAYA- ye hui naa baat...toh fir thik hai...hum 8 baje tak ready ho jaayenge....

iske baad kuch khaas nahi hua...hum sab ne 2 lectures aur attend kiye aur fir apne apne ghar nikal gaye....






AT NIGHT:-





AVANTIKA/SHANAYA-hey guyzz.........

HUM- hey......

ANJALI- wow yaar,u both are looking so pretty.....

SHANAYA- same 2 u darling..u too are looking gorgeus.....

dinner me jaane ke liye maine dad se unki SUV maang li thi aur ussi me hum teeno sharp 8 baje AVANTIKA ke ghar ke baahar pahunch gaye the.....

AVANTIKA aur SHANAYA gate par hi khade the...

kyunki hum dhaabe par jaa rahe the,isliye teeno ne hi long outfit pehne the....aur in dresses me teeno ladkiyan keher dhaa rahi thi.....

AVANTIKA aur SHANAYA,dono ANJALI ke saath piche baith gaye....

maine gaadi bhaga di aur kuch hi der me hum dhaabe ke saamne the....

ye dhaba thoda baahari ilake me tha.yahan par har kism ke log aate the....

aur aaj bhi dhaabe ke baahar khatiye par kaafi saare bande bandiyan baithe hue the...

maine car park ki aur hum sab utar kar dhaabe me pahunch gaye....

jitne bhi bande wahan baithe the,sabki nazar hamari teeno girls par theher gayi thi....

koi taarif ki nazar se dekh raha tha,toh koi hawas ke.....

unhi hawas bhari nazaron me se kuch nazar ek 4 ladkon ke group ka bhi tha jo humse kuch hi door par baithe hue the aur lagatar hamari girls ko check out kar rahe the....

SHANAYA- ye jagah toh full hai.....hum kahan baithenge...
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abhi SHANAYA ne bola hi tha ki 2 ladke 2 khatiya liye hamare saamne aaye aur khatiya laga gaye....

SHANAYA- arre ye kaise???

RONIT- arre bola toh tha naa ki hum yahan aate rehte hain....

yahan ka saara staaf hame ache se jaanta hai......

SHANAYA - tabhi......

hum sab dono khatiya par baith gaye.....

wahin humse kuch hi door me jo 4 ladkon ka group baitha tha,wo abhi bhi hamari taraf hi dekh raha tha....

humare baithethe hi un ladkon me baat chit shuru ho gayi....


1ST LADKA- yaar kya totte hain naa.....

2ND- haan yaar..ek dum rabdi hain rabdi.....

3ND- saali aaj ki daaru ne bhi abhi tak apna asar nahi dikhaya par inhe dekhte hi suroor sa chaa gaya hai.....

4TH- mera toh man kar raha hai ki abhi utha lun dono ko.....

1ST- toh roka kisne hai???chal utha lete hain....

2ND- abbe bakwas band kar.dekh nahi raha kya unke saath do hatte katte bodyguards bhi hain....

3RD- haan yaar par kuch karo yaaron.mujhse toh sabar hi nahi ho raha....

4TH- ek kaam karte hain.....!!!!

fir usne baaki teeno ko kuch kaha jisse sunkar unhone haan me apni mundi hilayi....

idhar humne khaane ka order de diya tha.....

SHANAYA- yaar pehle hand wash waigairah toh kar len.....

yahan par wash rooms kis taraf hain???....

ANJALI- uski zaroorat nahi hai..

ye bolkar ANJALI ne apne purse me se hand sanitizer nikal kar SHANAYA ki taraf badha diya.....

SHANAYA- ye toh thik hai par fir bhi washroom toh jaana hi padega..

ye kehkar SHANAYA ne ANJALI ke kaan me bathroom lagne ki baat kahi...

ANJALI- wo dekho,us taraf girls ka hai.ANJALI ne ek taraf point kar diya.....

ANJALI ne jis taraf point kiya tha,wo dhaabe ke side se hote hue thoda peeche ki aur tha...

AVANTIKA- chal mai bhi chalti hun......

dono uth kar wash room ki taraf nikal gaye...

aur unke peeche peeche hi wo chaaron ladke bhi ek ke baad ek uthkar chal pade....

par kuch hi der me...........



AHHH........

AHHHHHH........

AHHHHHHHHH..........

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH............


abhi SHANAYA aur AVANTIKA ko washroom ki taraf gaye hue kuch hi time hua hoga ki hamare kaano me ye dard bhari awaaz padii...

ye awaaz ladkon ki thi jisse sirf humne hi nahi wahan baithe sabhi ne suni thi....

abhi koi us taraf jaakar maamle ka pata lagata ki tabhi wo chaar ladke jo SHANAYA aur AVNATIKA ke piche gaye the,wo fati tooti haalat me langdate par phir bhi thoda tez bhagte hue aaye...

wo chaaron ruke nahi aur side dhaabe ke bahar ki taraf bhaage aur apni car me baith bhaag nikle.....

un chaaron ke peeche peeche hi SHANAYA aur AVANTIKA bhi nikle par wo dono akele nahi the..unke saath me ek ladka bhi tha....

ANJALI- kya hua babes...tum dono se just pehle 4 ladke nikle the jinki haalat theek nahi thi aur ye kaun hai???

AVANTIKA- arre wo ladke jo abhi bhaage hain,humare washroom se nikalte hi unhone hume gher liya tha....

wo hamare saath battamizi karne ki koshish kar rahe the......

hume toh samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki hum kya karen par tabhi ye wahan pahunch gaye aur inhone hi unhe maar maar kar bhaga diya.....

RONIT- un saalon ki toh.....thanks bhai,aapne hamari frnz ki help ki...

UNKNOWN- arre nahi bhai,ye toh mera farz tha.......

RONIT- by the way,i'm RONIT....she is ANJALI aur ye hai VIKRAM.......

UNKNOWN- hey guyzz...i'm AKSHAY.....

AKSHAY ne hum sabse baari baari haath milaya...

MAI- kamaal hai...naam bhi AKSHAY hai aur kaam bhi AKSHAY KUMAR waale hi karte ho....

meri baat par hum sab has diye....

jab usne hame bataya ki wo akela hi hai toh humne usse join karne ke liye kaha jisse usne maan liya....

baaton hi baaton me usne bataya ki wo manali se hai........

aur jab humara khaana aaya tab..........

AKSHAY- guyzzz..humari pehli mulakat ko aur khaas banane ke liye mere paas kuch hai...!!!

wait ek sec......

ye kehkar wo utha aur kahin chala gaya aur jab louta toh uske haathon me ek bottle thi....

usne wo bottle hamare saamne rakh di.....

RONIT- ye kya hai?
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AKSHAY- ye hamari taraf milne waala ek khaas kism ka drink hai....aur isse khaas moukon par hi piya jaata hai......

AKSHAY ki baat sunkar mere frnz ek dusre ki taraf dekhne lage....

AKSHAY- kya hua??any problem...!!!

ANJALI- actually,humme se koi bhi drink nahi karta.....

AKSHAY- drink matlab???oh,i see.....u mean ALCOHOL?
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arre yaar,ye koi hard drink nahi hai,soft drink hai...

hamare yahan ek KALOT naam ka fruit hota hai,ussise bana hai.....

RONIT- oh aisa hai,fir toh zaroor piyenge....

MAI- dikhao toh zara......

maine AKSHAY ke haathon se wo bottle hi aur usse dekhne laga...

bottle dekhne ke baad maine wo bottle saamne rakh di....

humne kuch glass mangwaaye,jisme us drink ko serve kiya gaya...

RONIT- arre waah,iska taste toh bada sahi hai.....

RONIT ki baat par sabne haami bhari........

kuch hi der me hum sabne milkar wo puri bottle khatm kar di.......

uske baad hum sabne khaana khaaya.is douran kuch khaas nahi hua....

AKSHAY- ok guyss,kaafi late ho gaya hai..mai chalta hun ab..kabhi manali aao,toh milenge....

apna khaana khatm karne ke baad AKSHAY ne ye baat kahi....

waise khaana toh sabhi ka khatm ho gaya tha bas RONIT bhai sahab abhi bhi khaa rahe the..

sabne AKSHAY se haath milakar bye kaha...

MAI- chalo,mai tumhe bahar tak chhod kar aata hun......

AKSHAY- iski kya zaroorat hai...

MAI- bilkul zaroorat hai......tumne hamare frnz ki madad ki,itni achi drink pilayi,itna toh banta hi hai...

RONIT- yaar,thodi der rook jaa na,mai khaalun,fir mai bhi saath chalta hun...

MAI- rehne de..tu khaa,mai chhod kar aata hun.....

mai aur AKSHAY parking ki taraf chal diye...

AKSHAY- thanks buddy...ab mai chalta hun...

ye kehkar AKSHAY ne meri taraf haath badha diya jisse maine thaam liya....

par jab usne haath wapas kheenchne ki koshish ki toh nahi kar paaya kyunki maine uska haath chhoda nahi tha.....

AKSHAY- kya hua yaar.haath toh chhodo....

MAI- pehle apni cheez toh wapas lete jao...

AKSHAY- meri cheez?
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MAI- hmm....aur ye bolkar maine apna dusra haath aage kar diya aur uske agle hi pal mere haath me jo aaya usse dekhkar AKSHAY chownk gaya....



MAI- kya hua,lo.........


AKSHAY ne meri taraf hairat se dekhte hue mere dusre haath me jo chiz thi,wo le li....

AKSHAY- par isse toh abhi kuch der pehle...!!!!!

MAI- nahi piya tha.....

isse toh maine haath me pakadte hi gayab kar diya tha.....


WAPAS AA JAO...........



meri baat sun AKSHAY kuch bole ya kare,isse pehle hi uske kaano me ye awaaz gunj gayi...

AKSHAY aakhon me hairat liye hue hi gaayab ho gaya......

MAI- ye kya hai BHAI,itni jadli wapas bula liya usse..

khair mai jaanta hun ki tu ab bhi mujhe sun raha hoga,toh sun aur apni hairat se baahar aa....

humne jo piya,wo sach me manali ki ek khaas drink thi,KAAL DRAV nahi mere natkhat bhatije BEELZEBUB.........







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....






APKA APNA V..J....
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CHAPTER-2



( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )




UPDATE- 76




PLANET- ISLA




PLACE- KINGS PALACE




aapka swagat hai LORD CRUSEDAR..........

ye kehkar KING SOLOMON LORD CRUSEDAR ke gale lag gaye.......

LORD CRUSEDAR- itne lambe antaral ke baad hume bhi aapse milkar jis khushi ki anubhuti ho rahi hai,usse hum shabdo me nahi bata sakte KING SOLOMON......

VIKRAM ke WARRIORS WORLD ke sabhi logon ko theek karke jaane ke kuch hi samay baad wahan ke saare logon ki chetna lout aayi thi....

WARRIORS WORLD ke logon ki sirf chetna hi nahi louti thi,balki unke andar ki dab chuki acchayi bhi lout aayi thi.....

KAIWA ke ras aur KAAL DRAV ke asar me un logon ne kya kya galti ki thi,wo sab bhi unhe yaad aa gaya tha....

apne saamne DEFENDER ko khada dekh LORD CRUSEDAR aur unke sabhasad apne ghutno par aagaye....

unke sir sirf izzat se nahi balki sharm se bhi jhuke hue the..sabko yaad jo aa gaya tha ki un sab ne DEFENDER ke saath kis tarah ka vyavahar kiya tha...

DEFENDER ne unhe khud ko doshi na maanane ke liye kaha....

DEFENDER ne naa sirf sabko ye bataya ki sab ki jaan kisne bachayi hai balki saath me RAKHT PHOOL ke baare me bhi bataya..

RAKHT PHOOL ne naa sirf un sab ko theek kiya tha,balki usne unke paapon ko bhi dhokar unka pehle ki hi tarah swach bana diya tha,ye jaankar sab bahut khush hue....

LORD CRUSEDAR ne DEFENDER se unke jeevendaata ( VIKRAM ) se milne ki request ki jispe DEFENDER ne unse kaha ki jab sahi waqt aayega,toh LORD OF ANGELS khud u unke saamne aayenge......

ISLA se WARRIORS WORLD ka purana gatbandhan tha jo ki unke andar aaye badlaw ke aane se khatm ho gaya tha...

LORD CRUSEDAR ussi sandhi ko fir se sthapit karne ke liye hi ISLA aaye hue the.....


LORD CRUSEDAR- QUEEN , PRINCESS ALESANDRA,aap bhi hamara abhivaadan swikar karen....

QUEEN aur ALESENDRA jo apne pitah ke baaju me hi khade the,dono ne apna sir halka sa jhukakar LORD CRUSEDAR ka abhivaadan swikar kiya....

KING SOLOMON- aayiye andar chalte hain....

KING SOLOMON unki patni beti,LORD CRUSEDAR aur unke saath jo kuch khaas log aaye hue the,wo sab palace ke sabha ki taraf chal pade.....

KING SOLOMON ne LORD CRUSEDAR ko aur unke saath aaye logon ko samman puravak mehmaano ke sthaan me baithaya...

KING SOLOMON- haan toh batayiye LORD CRUSEDAR,sandhi pehle jaisi hi hogi ya usme kuch fer badal karna chahte hain aap????

LORD CRUSEDAR- nahi KING SOLOMON.hum koi bhi fer badal nahi karna chahte par haan,humara ek sujhav hai aur uske saath hi hum aapse kuch nivedan bhi karna chahte hain...

KING SOLOMON ka LORD CRUSEDAR dwara yun nivedan shabd ka istamal karna acha nahi laga par wo ye bhi jaante the ki LORD CRUSEDAR is tarah kyun baat kar rahe hain.

LORD CRUSEDAR abhi tak apne aap ko chota aur galat hi maan rahe the.....

KING SOLOMON- mitrata me nivedan shabd ke liye koi jagah nahi hoti LORD CRUSEDAR...

hum jaante hain ki aap aaj bhi apne aap ko galat maan rahe hain aur yahi ek mahan insaan ki nishani hoti hai....

jo hua usse bhulkar ek nayi shuruat kijiye LORD.....aur apna sujhaav aur saath me aapke dil me jo bhi baat hai,usse dil khol kar bataiye....

ALESENDRA- ye raaj nitik baatein baad me...sabse pehle chalkar bhojan grahan kijiye....

abhi LORD CRUSEDAR kuch kehte usse pehle hi ALESENDRA wahan aa gayi jiski baat sunkar LORD CRUSEDAR muskura diye...

KING SOLOMON- par beti.....??????

LORD CRUSEDAR- maaf kijiyega KING SOLOMON....par na hum hamari beti ki baat kaat sakte hain aur naahi hum aapko aisa kuch karne denge...

agar ALESENDRA ne kaha hai ki pehle bhojan hoga,toh ab hum aage ki baatein bhojan ke baad hi karenge....

LORD CRUSEDAR hamesha se hi ALESENDRA ko apni beti hi maante aaye hain....

isiliye unhone KING SOLOMON ki baat ka kaatethe hue apni baat kahi......

KING SOLOMON- ab ye jataya naa aapne mitrata waala hak....chaliye,pehle bhojan hi kar liya jaaye.....

KING SOLOMON aur ALESENDRA ke saath saath LORD CRUSEDAR aur unke saath aaye log bhojan grah me pahunch gaye..

bhojan grah me sabke baithne ki jagah pehle hi saja di gayi thi....

sabhi apne apne sthaan par baith gaye....

aur jab bhojan parosa gaya toh sabne aankh band kar pehle ishwar ko yaad kiya par LORD CRUSEDAR ne ishwar ke saath saath VIKRAM ko bhi yaad kar bhojan grahan karna shuru kiya.......

bhojan samapt kar LORD CRUSEDAR apne logon aur KING SOLOMON ke saath wapas sabha me aakar baith gaye....

KING SOLOMON- haan toh ab batayiye KING CRUSEDAR,kya sujhav hai aapka.....???

LORD CRUSEDAR- hamara sujhav ye hai ki kyun naa ISLA aur WARRIOR'S WORLD ko ek GRAH SETU se baandh diya jaaye.....

isse dono grah ke log jab chaahen ek dusre ke grah me aa jaa sakenge....isse vyaapar aur anya len den me aasani aur vividhata aayegi.....

aur saath hi dono grah ke sainya bal ki shamta bhi kayi guna badh jaayegi....

LORD CRUSEDAR ki baat sunkar KING SOLOMON khush ho gaye par agle hi pal soch me bhi pad gaye....

LORD CRUSEDAR- kya hua KING SOLOMON???kya aapko hamara sujhav pasand nahi aaya????

KING SOLOMON- hume aapka sujhav bohot pasand aaya hai par jo aap keh rahe hain,wo koi choti moti baat nahi hai.....

GRAH SETU banane ke liye jo shakti chahiye,wo na hamare paas hai aur naahi hi hamare kisi grah waasi ke paas hai...

LORD CRUSEDAR- aisi shakti toh hamare paas bhi nahi hai par hum isme hamare grah ke DEFENDER ki madad le sakte hain....

KING SOLOMON- arre haan,ye hum kaise bhul gaye.....DEFENDER toh ye kar hi sakte hain....

uske baad LORD CRUSEDAR ne apne DEFENDER ka awahan kiya aur agle hi pal sabha ke beech ek tez bijli ke gadgadahat ke beech DEFENDER prakat hue...

LORD CRUSEDAR,KING SOLOMON aur wahan moujud sabhi DEFENDER ke samman me jhuk gaye....

fir LORD CRUSEDAR ne DEFENDER ke saamne apni baat rakhi jisse sunkar DEFENDER bhi khush ho gaye par agle hi pal unke chehre par maayusi chaa gayi....

DEFENDER- aap sab ki soch bohot achi hai kintu mai isme aapki sahayata karne me asamarth hun.....

hamara grah abhi abhi paap mukt hua hai isiliye abhi hamara grah kamzor hai..

aur aap sab ko toh ye pata hi hoga ki kisi bhi DEFENDER ki shaktiyan uske grah ke taakat ke saath hi judi hoti hai....

isiliye mere grah ke saath saath hi meri bhi shakti abhi kaafi seemit hai.....

GRAH SETU banane ke liye jitni shakti chahiye,utni abhi mere andar nahi hai.....

DEFENDER ki baat sunkar sabhi maayus ho gaye........



ki tabhi..................


DEFENDER jahan khade the,thik uske upar se ek tez roshni ki ray paida hui aur DEFENDER ke seene ke bicho beech aakar padne lagi...

ye sab itna achanak hua tha ki kisiko kuch bhi karne ka mouka hi nahi mila.....

jahan sabhi hairan pareshan se dikh rahe the,wahin DEFENDER ki aankhen band ho chuki thi aur wo hawa me sidha leta hua tha.....

wo roshni kuch der tak DEFENDER par padti rahi fir jaise aayi thi,thik waise hi achanak gaayab ho gayi.....

roshni ke gaayab hote hi DEFENDER k sharir bhi dheere dheere zamin par aa gaya...

DEFENDER zamin par toh aa gaya tha par abhi bhi uski aankhen band thi aur saath hi uski saansen bhi phuli hui thi....

dheere dheere DEFENDER ki saansen bhi control me aane lagin aur jaise hi wo normal hua,DEFENDER ne apni aankhen khol di....

ab DEFENDER ka pura sharir glow kar raha tha aur uske chehre par asimit khushi dikhayi de rahi thi.....

LORD CRUSEDAR- aap thik toh hain naa DEFENDER???aur ye sab kya tha???

jo roshni abhi abhi DEFENDER ke upar padi thi,uski chamak itni tez thi ki pura raajmahal usse ujwalit ho gaya tha...

isiliye ALESENDRA aur uski mata bhi daudti hui sabha me aa gayi thi.unhone bhi DEENDER ke saath jo bhi hua tha,wo dekha tha aur iske peeche ka reason jaanane ke liye excited the.....

DEFENDER- mujhe meri saari shaktiyan wapas mil gayi......

ye bolte waqt DEFENDER ke chehre ki khushi aur badh gayi thi....

wahin DEFENDER ki baat sunkar LORD CRUSEDAR aur wahan moujud sabhi log shocked ho gaye the....

kisiko bhi ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye chamatkar kaise hua???

par isse pehle ki LORD CRUSDAR ya aur koi DEFENDER se iske baare me kuch puchta,DEFENDER ke mooh se unke sawalon ka jawaab,ya yun kahun NAAM nikal gaya....

DEFENDER apne ghutno ke bal haath jode baith gaya.....

DEFENDER-hey LORD OF ANGELS......tera laakh laakh dhanyawaad jo tune mujhe punah shaktishali bana diya....

apne logon ki madad naa kar paane ke kaaran mai apne aap ko bohot laachar aur chota mehsoos kar raha tha par tere is upkar ki wajah se ab mai firse apna daayitv theek se nibha paaunga......


MAI- IS BRAMHAAND ME KOI BHI CHEEZ MUFT ME NAHI MILTI HAI DEFENDER....

HAR CHEEZ KI KEEMAT HOTI HAI AUR TUMNE APNE SHAKTI KO PAANE KI KEEMAT MERE HISSE KE DARD KO KHUD JHELKAR PEHLE HI CHUKA DI HAI......

ISILIYE AISA SOCHNA BAND KARO KI MAINE TUMPE KOI EHSAAN,KOI UPKAAR KIYA HAI.....

meri ye awaaz DEFENDER ke dimag me gunji thi.meri baat sunkar DEFENDER ki khushi doguni ho gayi.....

meri awaaz ke khatm hote hi DEFENDER khada ho gaya.....

LORD CRUSEDAR- DEFENDER,agar aapki ijazat ho toh kya mai aapse kuch puch sakta hun???

DEFENDER- puchiye....

LORD CRUSEDAR- abhi aap LORD OF ANGELS se hi baat kar rahe the na???

DEFENDER-baat nahi kar raha tha,unki prabhavshaali baatein sun raha tha....

DEFENDER ki baat sunkar LORD CRUSEDAR udaas ho gaye...

DEFENDER- kya hua???aap itne udaas kyun ho gaye???

LORD CRUSEDAR- meri bhi teevr icha hai ki ek baar LORD OF ANGELS ke darshan kar sakun....unki awaaz sun sakun....

KING SOLOMON- ye icha toh meri bhi hai....najaane wo din kab aayega jab hum unhe saamne se dekh paayenge....???

DEFENDER- bohot jald.......ab mai chalta hun..maana ki mere paas ab ek GRAH SETU ko banane jitni shakti aa gayi hai,fir bhi isme kaafi waqt lagega.....

ye kehkar DEFENDER gayab ho gaya.....

DEFENDER ke gayab hone ke baad LORD CRUSEDAR aur KING SOLOMON wapas apni apni jagah par baith gaye...

KING SOLOMON- chaliye,GRAH SETU ki pareshani toh door hui..

LORD CRUSEDAR- haan,par mera ek nivedan aur hai......

KING SOLOMON- LORD CRUSEDAR,maine pehle hi kaha hai ki mitrata me nivedan nahi hote..aap bejhijhak apni baat kahen.....

LORD CRUSEDAR- jaisa ki aap jaante hain ki hum firse apni sena ko taiyar kar arhe hain...

par iske liye hamare paas sirf HEINSBERG hi hain....hum aapse aapke kuch kushal yodha chahte hain jo humare sainkon ko prashikshan den.....

KING SOLOMON- baat toh aapki thik hai par abhi humare grah ke sabhi ache yodha kahin gaye hue hain....

LORD CRUSEDAR- gaye hue hain,kahan???

KING SOLOMON- ek yudh spradha me bhaag lene ke liye....aur hum bhi kal us spradha ko dekhne ke liye jaa rahe hain....

arre haan,aap ek kaam kijiye,aap bhi humare saath chaliye.us spradha me bohot se grahon ke bohot se shurvir apna yudh koushal dikhane aate hain....

aap un yodhaon me se jo bhi aapko uchit aur saksham dikhe,usse apne sainikon ko nipun banane ke liye rakh lijiyega....

LORD CRUSDAR- arre waah,ye toh aur bhi acha ho gaya.isse hum zyada se zyada yodhaon ko niyukt kar paayenge.....

waise ye yudh spradha kis grah me aayojit hone waala hai....


KING SOLOMON- GLUTO................




PLANET- EARTH.....



PLACE- MAGICAL DIMENSION.....



yaar,ab toh humne saare levels paar kar liye hain.....ab kis cheez ka wait kar rahe hain hum.....chalte hain naa.....

heading padh kar aap sab samajh hi gaye honge ki is waqt hum kahan hain????

WARRIORS WORLD se wapas aane ke baad RONIT kuch zyada hi excited ho gaya tha.....

aur jo waada maine usse kiya tha,usse pura karne ke liye baar baar keh raha tha......

MAI- abhi tum dono ne levels paar kiye hain,tests nahi diye????

ek baar tumhare tests ho jaayen,unme tum dono paas ho jaao,fir chalte hain.....

RONIT- tests!!!yaar abhi 2 din pehle hi toh CLONE COMBAT FIGHT ka test diya tha....ab aur kya test dena baaki hai????!!!!!

MAI- wo test nahi tumhare training ka abhi ke liye final level tha......

tests toh tumhe ab dene hain????

RONIT- theek hai bhai,bata kya test dena padega....!!!!

ANJALI- test nahi,V.J ne tests kaha hai...matlab hume ek se zyada test dene hain...

MAI- bohot khub ANJU........ tumhe kul teen tests dene the,jinme se ek ho chuka hai jisme ANJU tu paas aur RONIT tu fail ho chuka hai.....

meri baat sunkar dono shocked ho gaye...

RONIT- kaun sa test???aur mai fail kaise hua????

MAI-SAMAJH....... yahi tha tum dono ka pehla test...har baat ke andar ek baat hoti hai jisse samajhna bohot zaroori hota hai....

ANJU meri baaton ko dhyan se sun rahi thi isiliye usne SAMAJH liya ki test ek nahi.ek se zyada honge..

jabki tu apni hi tel tal raha tha....RONIT,ladhai hamesha talwar aur SPELLS se nahi ladi jaati,dimag ki ladhai sabse badi ladhayi hoti hai...

hume hamesha apne dimag aur kaan,dono ko khula rakhna chahiye....

kyunki ek taakatwar dushman se ladhne se kayi guna mushkil hai ek buddhimaan dushman se ladhna.....

is baar RONIT meri baaton ko dhyan se sun bhi raha tha aur SAMAJH bhi raha tha....

MAI- khair,tum dono ke do test hone hain jo aaj se hi shuru honge....

agar aaj ke test me tum sab ne thik kiya toh fir agla test kal hoga....

usme bhi tumne thik perform kiya toh mai apna waada pura kar dunga.....

RONIT- ek second,tune abhi kaha sab log...ye SAB kaun hain????

RONIT ki baat sunkar mere chehre par ek garv se bhari smile aa gayi....

kyunki is baar usne meri baaton ko naa sirf suna tha,balki samjha bhi tha.....

MAI- bohot ache....ANJALI ke saath saath tu bhi first test me paas ho gaya....

aur sab se mera matlab hai.......

iske aage maine kuch kaha nahi...

mere baaju me hi ek WORLD DOOR khul gaya aur usse jo log bahar nikle unhe dekhkar RONIT aur ANJALI khush ho gaye.....

ye teeno aur koi nahi balki AKSHAANT,MOKALSAR aur SHAILA the....

haalaki RONIT aur ANJALI ko sikhane ke baad teeno hi unke bhi friends ban gaye the par fir bhi jaise hi wo teeno RONIT aur SHAILA ke saamne aaye,wo dono ek baar un teeno ke aage jhuke phir doston ki tarah baari baari se sab gale mile.....

waise kaayde se wo teeno mere bhi guru the,par meri position ab aisi ho gayi thi ki un teeno ko mera unke aage jhukna bura lagta tha,isiliye maine bhi teeno ko baari baari hug kiya.....

SHAILA- yaar,tum dono kitne lucky ho jo VIKRAM tumhe training deta hai....

MAI- meri training toh tumhe bhi milti hai....

ANJALI- ek second,tu inhe kab training dene chala gaya.....????

RONIT- aur hume bataya tak nahi????

MOKALSAR-arre VIKRAM khud hume training dene nahi gaya.jo bhi training tum yahan karte ho,wo hume apne grah par dikhayi dete hain....

wahi dekh dekh kar hum bhi sikhte hain...

tumhari hi tarah humne bhi CLONE COMBAT FIGHT ki training li hai......

ANJALI- matlab aaj hum sab milkar TEST denge...tab toh maza aa jayega....

MAI- tum sab test toh doge,par milkar nahi balki ek dusre ke opponent banke....


SAB- KYAAA!!!!

meri baat sunkar paanchon hi chownk gaye the...

MAI- haan.tum sabhi ne ek si training li hai....ab mujhe ye dekhna hai ki kaun kitni achi tarike se apne tecnique me perfect hua hai!!!

MAI- aur haa,tum me se koi bhi SPELLS ka use nahi karega...

SHASHTRA YUDH...........bas yahi karna hai tumhe aaj.....

paanchon kuch der tak ek dusre ka chehra dekhte rahe,ya yun kahun apne aap ko is test ke liye ready karte rahe,fir ek dusre se kuch door khade ho gaye....

ab ye paanchon ek round angle bana kar khade the....

kyunki ye SHASHTRA FIGHT thi,isiliye apne apne jagah par pahunchte hi sabke haath me ek ek talwaar aa gayi thi.....

sab kuch der tak ek dusre ko dekhte rahe,maano ek dusre ki taakat ko naap rahe hon,

aur agle hi pal.......

tez taraar,aandhi ki tarah ek sharir apne jagah se uchla yaa ye kahun,ucchli aur apne right waale bande ki taaraf ud chali....

ye aur koi nahi ANJALI thi jisne is yudh ki shuruat ek anokhe aur naye daav ke saath kar di thi.....

aur jis par ANJALI ne pehle humla kiya tha wo aur koi nahi AKSHAANT tha...

par ANJALI ke sharir ko ek teer ki shakl le kar apne paas aate hue dekhte hi AKSHAANT ne apni jagah se chalaang laga di......

aur agle hi pal wo ANJALI ki pehli waali jagah par khada tha...

apne waar ko khaali jaata dekhkar bhi ANJALI rooki nahi aur usne hawa me hi apni talwar ko zamin par rakha ya ye kahun ki zamin par apne talwar se pressure banate hue apni jagah se halka turn lete hue apne dusre opponent jo ki uska B.F hi tha,uski taraf badh chali......

par AKSHAANT ki hi tarah RONIT bhi chownkana tha...usne bhi AKSHAANT ki hi tarah apne jagah se chalaang lagayi aur agle hi pal wo AKSHAANT ki jagah par khada tha...

par RONIT ne jagah badalte hi AKSHAANT ki taraf chalang lagayi aur


TANNNNNNNN....


AKSHANT aur RONIT ki talwaar aapas me takraye......

wahin ANJALI ek ke baad ek apni talwar ko zamin me gadate hue apni jagah badalte hue pura round ghum chuki thi.....

MOKALSAR ne bhi ANJALI ke paas aate hi jagah badal di thi par ANJALI ka sharir jaise hi SHAILA ke paas pahuncha,toh SHAILA ne apni jagah nahi badli balki usne khud bhi ek teer ka aakaar le saamne chalang laga di....


TANNNNNNNN.......NNNNNNNNNNN..............


ye do awaaze ek ke baad ek hui...........

hua ye ki SHAILA aur ANJALI ke talwar ki nok ek dusre ke saath takraaye aur agle hi pal dono talware beech se hi kat gaye....

ek dusre ke talwaron ko kaatethe hue dono ne hawa me hi ek dusre ke haathon ko thaam liya aur opposite pressure ka use karte hue dono ne apne aap ko piche pull kiya.......

agle hi pal dono ek dusre se kuch door apne paaon me khade the.....

wahin AKSHAANT aur RONIT ke talwaaron ke beech se SAAYENNN...... ki awaaz ke beech se ek talwar nikli....

dono ne apne right ki taraf dekha jahan MOKALSAR apne kamar par haath rakhe khada tha.....

MOKALSAR- mujhe bhul gaye doston.....

aur issi ke saath MOKALSAR ne ek chalaang lagayi....

hawa me hi uske haathon me do talwar aa gayi...

wahan ANJALI aur SHAILA ne bhi talwar baazi shuru kar di thi...dono ke haath itni tezi se chal rahe the ki dekhne par unka jo waar ek baar dikh raha tha wo asal me unka 10wa vaar hota tha....

wahin dusri taraf MOKALSAR AKSHAANT aur RONIT ke upar apne dono haathon me pakdi talwar chalane laga.....

ye usne kuch der hi kiya tha kyunki kuch hi der me team badal gayi...ab AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR saath milkar RONIT ke saath yudh kar rahe the aur issi tarah firse team badal gayi......

pure MAGICAL DIMENSION me is waqt bas ye paanchon hi lad rahe the par inki speed itni zyaada thi ki door se dekhne par aisa lag raha tha maano hazaaron logon ki sena lad rahi ho......

in paanchon ke beech ka yudh lagatar kayi ghanton tak chalta raha par koi bhi natija nahi nikla.....



ROOK JAAO.............


pure MAGICAL DIMENSION me meri awaaz gunj gayi aur issi ke saath mere paanchon doston ki talwaaren bhi apne ap gayab ho gayi......

ab tak hawa se tez gati se ladhne waale mere dost rukte hi zor zor se haafne lage.....

wahin mai chalta hua unke paas pahuncha....

kuch waqt laga par fir sabhi normal ho gaye...

RONIT- yaar,abhi tak hum me se koi haara nahi hai fir roka kyun???

MAI- maine ye kab kaha tha ki tumhe ek dusre se jeetna hai!!!!

maine toh bas tum sab ko ek dusre ke saath yudh ladne ko kaha tha jo tum sabne ladh liya......

SHAILA- par natija!!!!!!!!

MAI- natije jeet ya haar hi nikle,ye kisne kaha???

tum sab apne pure saamarthya se lade aur mujhe ye dekhkar bohot khushi hui ki tum sab ki yudh shamata ek dusre ke barabar hi hai...

agar tumme se koi ek bhi haar jaata toh uske saath saath tum sab haar jaate....par kyunki aisa nahi hua isiliye tum sab apne pehle test me paas ho gaye ho.....

meri baat sunkar sabhi ke chehre par khushi ki leher doud gayi...

RONIT apni aadat ke anusar kuch zyada hi excited ho gaya tha......

MAI- bhai,abhi se itna excited hone ki zaroorat nahi hai...abhi tum sab ka ek aur test baaki hai.....

RONIT-ek baat bata,agle test me bhi hum sab ko toh ek saath nahi ladna hai naa.....

MAI- nahi.......

RONIT- toh fir aane de bhai......jo bhi hoga,nipat lenge usse hum sab......

SHAILA- aur nahi toh kya????waise agle test me bhi fight hi karna hai naa???

MAI- haan......

SHAILA- mujhe laga koi dimag waala kaam hoga...fight hi karna hai toh fir koi tention nahi hai.....

RONIT- aur agar hum wo fight jeet gaye matlab hum sab test me paas naa...

MAI- haan,bilkul......

ANJALI- EK MINUTE RONIT....HUME KISSE LADHNA HOGA V.J.....????



MAI- MUJHSE.........




AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....




AAPKA APNA V..J.....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI DEFENDER KO USKI SHAKTI WAPAS MIL JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIKRAM PAANCHON KE SAAMNE 2 TESTS RAKHTA HAI JISME SE FISRT TEST ME SAB PAAS HO JAATE HAIN...
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PLANET- GLUTO......








PLACE- NISHKALIKA'S PALACE.....









kya baat hai gudiya???aaj tu badi khush dikh rahi hai......

BHUVIKA- khushi ki hi toh baat hai naa didi....mai najaane kabse aapke grah ke vaarshik yudh spradha ko dekhna chahti thi...

aur aakhir wo samay aa hi gaya jab meri ye khwahish puri hone waali hai.....

ye kehkar BHUVIKA phir se uchalne lagi....


subah ka waqt hai....aaj GLUTO ke vaarshik yudh pratiyogita ki taiyariyon ko shuru hue ek hafta ho chuka tha.....

waise toh GLUTO me zyadatar taiyariyan MAGIC se hi hoti hain par kyunki is pratiyogita me bhaag lene ke liye bohot se grahon ke raajgharon se bhi log aate hain,isiliye unke swaagat ke liye vishesh taiyariyan ki jaati hai....

GLUTOSTAV.........jis waqt NISHKALIKA ne pehli baar is pratispradha me bhaag liya tha,tab is spradha ka yahi naam hua karta tha....

par jabse NISHKALIKA ne is spraddha ko jeetkar GLUTO me shaashan karna shuru kiya hai,tabse is spraddha ka naam badal kar NISHKALIKA UTSAV rakh diya gaya hai...

is pratiyogita me jitne bhi paratispadhi acha performance dete hain,unhe NISHKALIKA achi keemat dekar apni hi sena me rakh leti hai....

NISHKALIKA ka janm WARRIORS WORLD ki tabahi ke kaafi baad hua tha....

aur ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki ek waqt par jo rutba WARRIORS WORLD ki sainya taakat ka tha,aaj ki taarikh me waisa hi rutba NISHKALIKA ki sainya bal ka hai....

jaisa ki maine bataya ki pratiyogita ke baad har acha yodha NISHKALIKA ke sainya bal ka sadasya ban jaata hai,isiliye agar kisi grah ke raaj gharaon ko unme se koi yodha pasand aa jaata hai aur wo usse apne saath le jaana chahte ho toh iski unhe NISHKALIKA ko ek bohot bhaari keemat deni hoti hai....

toh yahi hai NISHKALIKA UTSAV ki kahani aur sach.....aur jaise hi BHUVIKA ko is spraddha ke aayojit hone ki khabar mili,wo bohot excited ho gayi......


NISHKALIKA- ek baat toh bata..tujhe toh maar kaat,ladhayi,jhagda bilkul bhi pasand nahi....fir yudh spraddha ke liye tu itni utawali kyun hai???

BHUVIKA- arre toh ye kaun si asli ladhai hai....ye toh bas ek spraddha hai....aur spraddha waali yudh dekhne me kya burayi...

NISHKALIKA- hmm...toh fir tu yahan kya kar rahi hai....maidan me abhi bohot se pratiyogi apna naam likhane ke liye aaye honge....jaa,jaakar wahan ke mahoul ka lutf utha.....

BHUVIKA- arre haan,ye toh mai bhul hi gayi thi..thik hai didi..mai maidan jaati hun...

ye bolkar BHUVIKA waise hi uchhalte kudte hue bahar nikal gayi....


MAHARANI NISHKALIKA KI JAY HO.....


abhi NISHKALIKA apne kaksh me jaane ke liye uthi hi thi ki itne me wahan dwarpaal aa gaya....

NISHKALIKA- bolo dwarpaal,kya samachar laaye ho.....????

DWARPAAL- aapse bhet karne ke liye WARRIORS WORLD aur ISLA ke maharaaj apne parivaar ke saath aaye hue hain....

NISHKALIKA- sammaan purvak andar le aao....

DWARPAAL ne ek baar apna sir jhukayaa aur wapas chala gaya...

aur thodi hi der baad NISHKALIKA ke sabha bhawan ke andar LORD CRUSEDAR aur ISLA ke maharaj KING SOLOMON apni family ke saath upasthith hue.....

NISHKALIKA- aapko aur aapke pure pariwar ko punah dekhkar bohot acha laga KING SOLOMON.....asha karti hun ki har baar ki tarah is baar bhi aap yodhaon par boli avashya lagayenge....

NISHKALIKA UTSAV me hone waale yudh spraddha ko dekhne aane waale bohot se log yodhaon par paise lagate the jisme se ek naam KING SOLOMON ka bhi tha....

isse GLUTO ke aaya me bohot vriddhi hoti thi....

KING SOLOMON- wo toh hum lagayenge hi maharani NISHKALIKA aur saath hi apne saath is saal ke spraddha me acha pradarshan karne waale kuch yodhhaon ko bhi saath le jaayenge.....

NISHKALIKA- awashya.....

KING SOLOMON- par hamara abhi aapse milne aane ka mukhya kaaran hai aapko inse milana...ye hain WARRIORS WORLD ke KING LORD CRUSEDAR.....

NISHKALIKA- aapka swagat hai LORD CRUSEDAR GLUTO me.....

NISHKALIKA ke abhivaadan ka jawab LORD CRUSEDAR ne halki si apne sir ko jumbish dekar ki...

LORD CRUSEDAR ko NISHKALIKA ke andar ek bohot hi strong negetive energy feel ho rahi thi...

wo yahan rehna nahi chaahte the par majboori vash rooke hue the....

KING SOLOMON- maharani NISHKALIKA,LORD CRUSEDAR bhi hamari hi tarah yahan se kuch yodha apne grah me lejaana chahte hain....

NISHKALIKA- ye toh bohot achi baat hai...hume bhi inki maang puri karne me bohot khushi hogi kintu........

NISHKALIKA ke kintu pe atakne se KING SOLOMON aur LORD CRUSEDAR chownk gaye...

KING SOLOMON- kintu!!!

NISHKALIKA- kintu is baar yodhaon ka mulyankan karna thoda mushkil hoga...

KING SOLOMON- hum samjhe nahi.....

NISHKALIKA- is baar har yodha ke chunaaw ki shuruati boli 1 lakh sikke honge........

SAB-KYA....!!!!!!!!

ALESENDRA- par itne adhik kyun????har saal toh shuruati boli 10 hazar sikke hua karte the...ek saath 10 guna tak mulya badha dena,ye toh anuchit hai....

NISHKALIKA- toh fir aap boli me bhaag mat lijiyega....

NISHKALIKA ne ek laalchi muskaan ke saath short me apni baat bol di.....

NISHKALIKA ke jawab ko sunkar LORD CRUSEDAR aur KING SOLOMON ko ghussa toh bohot aaya par wo jaante the ki is waqt wo NISHKALIKA ke grah par hain...

aur uske upar zaroorat bhi unhi ki hai isiliye dono shaant hi rahe.....

NISHKALIKA- aap sab hamare khaas mehmaano me se hain....

aaj ka din hamare is sundar grah aur hamari mehmaan nawaazi ka lutf uthayiye aur kal se shuru hone waali spraddha ka aanand lijiye...

hume apne mahautsav ke taiyaariyon ke niriskhshan hetu jaana padega....baad me mulakat hogi.....

ye bolkar NISHKALIKA bina kisi ki taraf dekhe ya abhivaadan kiye baahar nikal gayi...



KING SOLOMON- 1 lakh sone ke sikke..wo bhi shuruati boli!!!!!hume nahi lagta ki ye souda kahin se bhi uchit hai....

LORD CRUSEDAR- par hamare paas aur koi upaay bhi toh nahi hai.....

hume ache yodhaon ki atti awashaykta hai...

ALESENDRA- upay kaise nahi hai....DEFENDER.....aur ab toh unke paas unki shaktiyan bhi lout aayin hain.....hum unse madad le lenge....

LORD CRUSEDAR- nahi putri..ye sab rajnitik masle hain..aisi pareshaniyon ke liye hum DEFENDER ki madad nahi lete...

aur waise bhi is waqt wo GRAH SETU jaise mahatvapurn kaarya me uljhe hue hain...aise me unse aur kuch maangna anuchit hoga...

ALESENDRA- toh kya hum NISHKALIKA ki maangon ko maan len.....

LORD CRUSEDAR-hum aur kar bhi kya sakte hain....????

KING SOLOMON- aap kabse itne nakaratmak ho gaye LORD CRUSEDAR....aap bhul rahe hain ki aapne apne dum par WARRIORS WORLD ko is bramhaand ka sabse taakatwar grah banaya tha....

agar aap ek baar ye kaam kar sakte hain,toh dobara bhi kar sakte hain....

LORD CRUSEDAR- par usme kaafi waqt lag jaayega....aap toh jaante hain ki aisi bohot si BLACK ENERGIES waale grah hain,jo kabhi bhi WHITE ENERGIES waale grahon par aakraman kar dete hain...

agar abhi ya nikat bhavishya me un grahon me se kisi grah ne humpe akraman kar diya,toh hum haar jaayenge....

KING SOLOMON- aisa kuch nahi hoga.....aur aisa kuch hua toh uske liye hamare paas DEFENDER toh hain hi naa....

chalo,yahan se chalte hain....ab hum yahan se koi bhi yodha nahi le jayenge...

LORD CRUSEDAR ko KING SOLOMON ki baat thik lagi aur unhone bhi wapas jaane ka nirnay liya...

abhi sabhi ne apne kadam aage badhaye hi the ki.......


KAHIN JAANE KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI...WAHIN RAHO....JO BHI TUMHE CHAHIYE,WO MIL JAAYEGA......

ye awaaz ALESENDRA ke kaano me gunji thi jisse sunkar ek pal ke liye toh ALESENDRA chownk gayi par jaise hi usse is awaaz ke maalik ke baare me yaad aaya uska chehra khil utha.....


ALESENDRA man me- VIKRAMMMM.......

ALESNEDRA- hume kahin jaane ki zaroorat nahi hai....

ALESENDRA sabse piche chal rahi thi..ALESENDRA ki awaaz aur baat sun sab chownk gaye aur ek saath piche patlte....

KING SOLOMON- kya hua putri....???aur jaane ki zaroorat kyun nahi hai????

ALESENDRA- wo aapko kal pata chal jaayega....filhal ke liye itna bata deti hun ki kal aap sab ki 2 khwahishen puri ho jaayengi...

ALESENDRA ki baat ka matlab kisiko bhi samajh nahi aaya....

LORD CRUSEDAR- kaun si do khwahishen putri???

ALESENDRA- wo aapko kal pata chal jaayega...abhi ke liye mujhpe vishwas kijiye aur jaisa us NISHKALIKA ne kaha,yahan ki sukh suvidhaon ka aanand uthayiye...

sabne ALESENDRA se kuch aur der tak uski baaton ka matlab pucha par usne kal ka bol kar sabko taal diya...

aakhir me ALESENDRA ki baat maante hue sabne rookne ka faisla kar liya aur apne mehmaankhaano ki taraf nikal pade...







PLANET-EARTH







PLACE- MAGICAL DIMENSION







TOH TUM SAB TAIYAR HO.......?????




meri is baat par sab jawab dena chhod ek dusre ki taraf dekhne lage.....

jahan ye sab ek saath milkar bhi mujhse yudh karne me ghabra rahe the wahin AVANTIKA ye soch kar ghabra rahi thi ki mai akela itne saare logon se kaise ladunga....

ji haan doston,AAJ mere doston ke final test ko dekhne ke liye AVANTIKA madam bhi aayi hui hai....

jaisa ki aap sab ko maalum hai ki aaj mere doston ka final test hai....aur wo test hai mere saath yudh.....

AVANTIKA ko kal college me jab ANJALI aur RONOT ne kal ke training ke baare me bataya toh wo humse kaafi naaraz hui..

iski ye wajah thi ki maine usse kal rest karne ke liye kaha tha...

ANJALI aur RONIT to ab normal nahi rahe par AVANTIKA ki body toh normal hi thi...

WARRIORS WORLD ke adventure aur jhatko se ubharne ke liye AVANTIKA ko time chahiye tha isiliye maine usse kal aane se roka tha..

par usne aaj aane ki zid ki jiske liye main maan gaya..

yahan aakar usne jab SHAILA MOKALSAR aur AKSHAANT ko dekha aur ye jaana ki wo bhi dusre grah se hain toh usse fir jhatka laga..

aur jab usse ye pata chala ki aaj test me mai akela un paanchon se ladunga toh wo ghabra gayi kyunki usne ANJALI aur RONIT ko ladte hue dekha tha aur RONIT ne usse ye bhi bata diya tha ki baaki ke teen bhi unhi ke jitne hi powerful hain....

MAI- guyzz,mai jaanta hun ki tum sab kya soch rahe ho...par tum sabko tention lene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai kyunki mai waise hi ladunga jaisa apni training ke waqt ladta tha...

jahan AVANTIKA ko meri baat ka matlab samajh nahi aa raha tha aur wo puch bhi nahi sakti thi kyunki maine usse kaha tha ki jab waqt aayega toh usse sabkuch apne aap hi pata chal jaayega....

wahin meri baat ko sunkkar mere frnz khush ho gaye....

RONIT- toh aisa bol naa bhai...chal thik hai,apni zindagi me pehli baar haarne ke liye taiyar hojaa....

mai RONIT ki baat sunkar muskura diya....

MAI- tum sabko mujhe harana nahi hai...bas mujhpe safaltapurvak 1 waar karna hai....

meri baat sunkar sab fir shocked ho gaye...

ANJALI- are u sure.....

MAI- damn sure babes...chalo fir,shuru karte hain.....

paanchon ne mujhe ek round shape lekar gher liya.....

abhi tak mere haathon me koi bhi hathiyar nahi aaya tha jabki un sab ke haathon me talwar thi.....


aur agle hi pal..........



SAAYENNNN......

SAAYEENNNNN........


mujhpar do humle ek saath hue.....aur ye dono humle SHAILA aur ANJALI ne kiye the.....

pehle humle me unhone apne apne talwar meri taraf feke........

dono ki hi talwaare ek jaisi speed ke saath meri taraf badhi aur uske agle hi pal unhone apna dusra humla mujhpe kiya....

is humle me unhone khud ko hi hathiyar bana liya tha...

apni talwar ke hi shape me dono apni jagah se meri taraf kude.....

jaise hi dono talwar mere pass pahunche,maine apne sir ko halka sa peeche kar liya aur........

TANNNNNNNN............

mere just aankhon ke saamne mujhse 3 inch door dono hi talwaro ki nok aapas me takraaye.....

dono talwaaron ke nok se takraate hi maine apni ek ungli ko saamne jhatka sa diya..

meri ungli dono talwaron ke nok se takrayi aur aisa hote hi talwaar ghum gaye aur mere dono haathon me dono talwaar ki mooth aa gayi.....


aur agle hi pal.........

ek saath do cheeze huin......

mera sharir apni hi jagah par hawa me uchal gaya.... maine apne dono pairon ko full strech kar diya....

ANJALI aur SHAILA jo apne ek ek haath ko mutthi ki shakl dekar udte hue mere taraf aa rahe the,dono ki mutthi mere strech ho chuke pairon ke peeche ke hisse se takraaye....

aur theek ussi waqt maine apne dono haathon me pakdi talwar ko saamne aur peeche tezi se ghumaya jisse hawa me itni zyada energy paida hui ki saamne aur peeche se udte hue aa rahe MOKLASAR aur AKSHAANT ke sharir ussi energy ke prabhav me aakar wahin gir gaye....

par abhi humle hone khatm nahi hue the...

mera bhai RONIT abhi baaki tha jo front flips maarta hua tezi se meri taraf aa raha tha...

aur jaise hi mere talwaaron ke dwaara paida hui shakti se MOKALSAR aur AKSHAANT, aur mere pairon se takrakar ANJALI aur SHAILA gire,tab tak RONIT mere paas pahunch chuka tha.....

par jaise hi uske pair mere sir ke paas pahunche,mai halka side hat gaya aur wapas ghumne se pehle hi maine uske pair ko apne pairon ke beech jakad liya....

wahin girne ke baad baaki chaaron turant apni jagah par khade ho gaye the aur meri taraf badh rahe the..

maine apne dono haath zamin par tikaye aur maine RONIT ko uske pairon ke zariye jisse maine jakad rakha tha,tezi se gol ghumana shuru kiya...

aur kuch spins ke baad maine RONIT ko AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR ki taraf ucchal diya aur agle hi pal mai apne dono haath ko jo ki zamin ko pakde se hue the,unhe jhatka diya jisse agle hi pal mai ANJALI aur SHAILA ke saamne khada tha....

ye sab second ke 10ve hisse me hua tha jiski wajah se ANJALI aur SHAILA ko kuch samajh nahi aaya...

aur jab tak dono sambhalte,maine dono ke baazu ko pakad peeche dhakka diya....

mere piche MOKALSAR AKSHAANT aur RONIT jo ek dusre se ulajh kar gir gaye the,wo ab tak khade bhi ho gaye the aur meri taraf badh bhi agye the....

kyunki meri peeth unki taraf thi,isiliye wo teeno thode careless the....

maine dono ladkiyon ke baazuon ko pakad kar jaise hi dhakka diya,dono ke sharir tez gati se piche ki taraf gaye...

wahin teeno ladke apni taraf yun achanak ladkiyon ko aate dekh hadbada gaye...

SHAILA AKSHAANT ke upar giri wahin ANJALI RONIT ke upar...

par insab ke saath saath MOKALSAR bhi hadbada gaya tha aur uske sambhalne ke pehle hi mai uske saamne tha...

usne mere chehre ko nishana banakar apna haath ghumaya par maine uska haath beech me hi pakad liya aur saath hi uske biscep ke neeche waale hisse par ek punch kiya....

isse uska haath pura sunn padh gaya..usne apna dusra haath ghumaya par maine usse bhi ek punch maarkar sunn kar diya...

wahin dusri taraf baaki chaar bhi ab tak uth chuke the aur sabhi ek saath mere taraf lapke...

par mera sharir unse 10 guna tezi se chaaron ki taraf ghuma aur maine un sab ke wo parts jinme se nas halki baahar nikalkar dikhti hai,usse dabata chala gaya...

isse un sab ki puri body me ek jhunjhuni si paida ho gayi aur wo sab gir gaye..

mujhe pata tha ki un sab ko recover hone me thoda waqt lagega...maine peeche palat kar dekha toh mujhe hasi aa gayi...

AVANTIKA mujhe fati aankhon se dekh rahi thi.maine usse ishare se kya hua pucha??


AVANTIKA- AAKHIR KAUN HO TUM ??????


mai uske sawaal par bas has diya....

MAI- common guys...jaldi utho..real fight me itna time nahi milta....

par meri baaton ka kisipe bhi koi asar nahi hua,wo sab apne sharir ki jhunjhuni ko kam karne me lage hue the...

MAI- theek hai fir...bhul jaao ki mai tum sab ko ab kahin lekar jaane waala hun...aur SHAILA,tum bhi apna badla bhul jaao.....

yahan meri baat khatm hui,wahan do log uth gaye...

ek tha RONIT aur dusri thi SHAILA........

aur un dono ke piche piche hi baaki sab bhi khade ho gaye....

aur is baar un logon ne jo mujhpe humla kiya,wo pehle se 10 guna zyada tez aur shakti se kiya tha...

waise toh mai un sab ke har waar ko aasani se rok raha tha,par uska kaaran ye tha ki bhale hi mai un sab se normally lad raha tha par meri shaktiyon ki wajah se meri speed,movement aur skill un sab se saikdon guna aage thi....

unsab ke waar karne ke tarike ko dekhkar mai andar hi andar bohot khush ho raha tha kyunki unki speed aur taakat ka shayad hi koi yodha saamna kar sakta tha.....

par in paanchon me bhi RONIT aur SHAILA ki speed aur sabse upar unka jazba kaabile taarif thi....

un dono ke har waar lagatar aur ghatak hote jaa rahe the...

hume ladte hue kaafi der ho gaya tha...un paanchon ke chehre par thakan ke bhaav dikhne lage the par RONIT aur SHAILA hi aise the,jinke waar ki speed aur usme istemaal hone waali shakti me zara si bhi girawat nahi aayi thi......

aur jab mujhe laga ki ab hume rukna chahiye,toh maine apni raftar ko 100 guna tak badhate hue ek hi jhatke me un chaaron ke kalayi ko pakad kar jhatak diya...

paanchon peeche ki taraf gir gaye...

MAI- bohot ache doston...tum sab wakayi bohot acche yodha ban chuke ho...

par meri baat ko sunkar bhi paanchon ke chehre utre hue hi the...aur wo isiliye kyunki unhe lag raha tha ki wo apni chunouti par khare nahi utar paaye the...


MAI- doston,tum sab apne test me paas ho gaye....

meri baat sunkar paanchon ek jhatke me khade ho gaye....

SAB- KYA!!!!!!

SHAILA- par kaise??humne toh ek bhi waar thik se nahi kiya???

MAI- kisne kaha??maine kaha tha ki tum sab ko mujhpar safaltapurvak ek humla karna hai,maine tum sab ko mujhe ghayal karne ke liye nahi kaha tha...

tum sab ki speed itni zyada hai ki shayad hi koi yodha tumhare waaron ko rok paaye....

aur muhe yahi dekhna tha..tum sabki gati.....
khaas karke RONIT aur SHAILA tum dono ki gati bohot zyada nikhri hai.....

meri baat sunkar un sab ke murjhaaye chehre firse khil gaye.....

SHAILA- toh ab??????

SHAILA ke sawaal par sab meri taraf utsuk nazaron se dekhne lage.....

MAI-ab waqt aa gaya hai apne purane doston se milne ka....!!!

RONIT- dost!!!!kaun????




MAI- MADDOX aur NISHKALIKA







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....





AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Very nice Update bhai
 
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