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Dhanyavaad yaara!सबसे पहले भाई बहत शानदार अनुच्छेद। चलिये आज का अनुच्छेद पूरा रागिनीजी के नाम रखा जाए। क्या लिखे है भाई। बेचारा वीर। खैर लगता है की रागिनी अब दिलसे और जिस्मानी तौर पर वीर की होना चाहती है बस एक अनुरोध है की जब दोनों का घनिष्ठतम प्रेम होगी वह एक अलग अनुच्छेद कामुकता भरी होगी।वो पढ़ने लायक होगी पर क्या झेलने लायक होगी। यह अनुच्छेद मे अगर एक तरफ रागिनीजी है तो दूसरे तरफ के प्रतिभागी इस प्रकार है: केरा बनाम सोनिया बनाम काव्य। प्यार मे क्या हाल होता है केरा आज सीधा सीधा दिखा ही दिया। वीर तो आज मार खाते खाते बच गया। आप ठीक लिखे है की आज वीर को जरूर समझ मे आया होगा की सोनिया और केरा एक साथ मिलेगा तो क्या क्या हो सकता है। अभी तो काव्य और आरोही के भाब जानना बाकी है। लगता है की वीर की पांचों उंगली घी मे जरूर है लेकिन दिक्कत येही होगा की कोन उंगली पहले मुह मे जाए और मुह मे जाने मे और क्या क्या दिक्कते आएंगे लेकिन बकरी के अम्मा कई दिन खैर मनाएगी ? हा हा हा हा हा।लगता है अंत में सुहाना ने होली त्योहार वीर को दे ही दी। इस अनुच्छेद का शीर्षक था” indecent holi”। रागिनीजी का घटना छोड़ और तो कुछ भी indecent या अबांछित नहीं था। लेकिन एक बात जरूर है की रागिनीजी के मन मे जरूर
“मुझे जीने दो” चित्रपट के यह गाना चल रहा होगा:
Jo pehla move rakhega, wo hi Veer ko pehle leke jaegi. Dhanyavaad bhai! Bane rahiyega!रात भी है कुछ भीगी भीगी चाँद भी है कुछ मध्यम मध्यम
तुम आओ तो आंखे खोले सोयी हुए पायल की छम छम”
भले ही वीर चारों ओर औरते से घिरे हुए है लेकिन इसी त्योहार के रात मे कोन उसको उड़ा के ले जाएगी देखने लायक होगा। आगे महोदय आपकी जैसी मन हो।धन्यबाद।
What!? Kaahe ka stupid hai!? Obviously Veer peeche hi hatega, jab Ragini usse kiss karegi toh. Lund se nahi sochna chahiye harr waqt.Update bout sunder tha holi khelna bhi acha tha but Ragni kee Kiss wali move pay Veer kaa reaction so stupid hee know she love him and still he play like fool let see
Pari ka satya dheere dheere khulega... Ladki kaun thi clifff par wo spoiler hai. Wo aage ujaagar hoga.Update 76 - pehle laga ki slogan mara bhi hai ya nahi, lekin jab system ne point diye aur upgrade ho gaya, tab koi doubt nahi rahai. chalo uska chapter samapt ho gaya. 'It's been quite a bit time... Master!!!?' pari ke ye shabd kis ke liye the; slogan ki talash se uske marne tak ya phir wo apni aur veer ki journey ki baat ker rahi hai - level 1 se level 6 tak ki. aur wo ladki kaun - kya pari thi jo system upgrade se human form le sakti hai. waise bhi level 4 se usne ladkiyon jaise behave karna shuru ker diya tha, kuch jealousy, kuch veer per hak. ya pari koi ladki hai jo system ko control ker rahi hai. kritika aur slogan vali ladki ka bhi kuch pata nahi.
Dhanyavaad!Update 77 - khub acchi tarah se dikhaya hai holi ke din ki tayaryon ko.
Kaera aur Sonia ke beech duriya kam hoengi. Par uss se pehle Kaera ka waapas pehle jese hona zaroori hai.Update 78 - kis khoobi se aapne veer ko sab ladkiyon ko handle kerte dikhaya hai, maza aa gaya. lekin lagta hai uski ab bajne wali hai. jab sonia ne veer ki jhappi li thi, to wo paas me khadi kaera ko bhi samet leta, wo dono bhi ek dusre ko rang laga deti, to maza aa jata. lekin shyad abhi un dono ki purani dosti ko judne me time hai. itni jaldi nahi.
Yes!!!sex ki jagah erotisim me jyada maza aata hai, arohi ka sharmana, ragini ka ek jhappi me sara gussa rafuchakar ho jana, padhne me maza aaya. khair, ab lagta hai veer ki ma aur behan bhi story me jyada dikhne wali hain, shuruyat to ho gayi hai, suhana ne letter jo diya hai, unhi ke baare me hoga.
Ye sab spoilers hai.do point - veer ka khanadan jiske baare me suman keh rahi hai, aur kaun veer ki khabar slogan ko bata raha hai, bilkul bhi hint nahi mila. dekhte hain aage chal ker kab clear hoga.
Thanks man!jahan tak story ki baat hai, to jab aap baar-baar raat ko uth ker dekhte hain ki update aaya ki nahi, 'editing' ka message padh ker aapke raungte khade ho jaate hain, aap her thodi der me browser ko refresh kerte hain, isase pata chal jata hai ki story kitni acchi hai aur kis khoobi se likhi hai.
Thanks man!!!Completely outstanding update bro kya hi tareef kru bhai sayad nhi hain bhai mere pass tareef krne k liye
Thanks man! Yes! Veer ne saari bullets use kar lii thi. Warna dikkat ho jaati. Juhi toh ek aad ka murder hi kar deti.Wow super amazing update Bhai maza aa gaya Sach Mai yarr veer ki halat dekhne layak ho gyi thi jab Ghar Mai hi itni garam mahaol ban gaya holi ke din bhi Sab ki Sab diwanyian hui padi hai veer ki kya arohi, kavya, ragini, 3 slaves ( just for name) itna kam nhi tha to kaera bhi aa dhamki Or usko abhi hazam bhi nhi kr payeya tha veer ki Sonia or suhana bhi tapak padi Or jagda Sonia or kaera ka beech Mai pis gaya veer bechara or to or suhana ne lga dali thi uski or nanhi juhiii ne mamuu ki gand se dhua hi nikal diya jab pistol lekar bhag kr bahar jakar goli chalane ki try kry to wo to baghwan ka shukar tha ki veer Sab golyian use kr chuka tha inta bas nhi tha jo suhana ne uski ankh Mai ungli maar di or ragini Bhabhi ne kiss deker uske tan badan Mai aag lagane ke sath sath usko age badhne ka green signal bhi de dala ab dekhna hoga veer is opportunity ka kaise faayda uthata hai or kaera, Sonia or suhana ki kaise sulgegi jab veer ka 100 wala charm dekegi or suhana veer ko uski maa ka asli pata de gayi uska bhi dekhna hoga kya hota hai
Thanks man! Yes! Usme wahi tha.Awesome update bhai or ye jo last me suhana ne jo kaagaz ka packet diya he usme shayad veer ke maa or bahan ke bare me information hogi waiting for next update
Thanks yaara!Mind blowing speechless update bhai koi shock dena to aapse sikhe...
तो Werewolf को "वीर" का किरदार निभाना पड़ेगा। जैसा भूल भुलैया में शाइनी आहूजा ने राजा विभूति का निभाया था।
Thanks!Ab Romance bhi add ho gaya...maza aayega aage..carry on and seriously waiting for next update
Suman is a lethal weapon for Veer. Jald hi dekhne ko milega aapko uske baare me.kya hi gajab ka update likhe ho wolfi vro ! sacch kehta hu, ab tak ka sabse best update lga mujhe... romance mera fav. theme rha hai.... har ek female cheracter ke sath dikhaya gya seen mann ko lubhane vala tha khaskar juhi our kavya ka seen... abhi tak ke lagbhag 75%+ update thrill hi the, ummid hai 100% upadte ye ratio 50:50 ka ho jaye .... well mujhe lagta hai ki Suhana ko veer ne jo kamm sompa tha apni mom ko dhundne ka vo sayad pura ho gya hai ... vaise mujhe Suman ka cherectar kucch jccha nhi... mano use bs veer ke sath intimate hone ke liye creat kiya ho !!
khair...
Hmm...!! System urf Pari ke baare me... Dheere dheere secrets khulenge. Aur ye saare Veer aur Pari ke convo ke through hi hume pata lagta jaega. Veer hi hai, jo mostly uske secrets kholega. You'll have to wait.btw mann me pari/ system ko lekar kuch uljhan hai ... darasal abhi tak ye samajh nhi aya ki ye ye pari/system hai kya bla ? ... eski history geography kya hai ? kya eska pratham dharak veer hi hai ya esse pehle kisi our ki body me tha ? eske stracture ka kuch to past rha hoga ? btw mujhe to ye bhi samajh me nhi aya ki ye pari veer ki body me aii kaise aya ? kahi ye PENDANT ka kamal to nhi jo Veer ma ne uske gale me pehnaya ho ? ... i think meri trah VEER bhi es Pari ke kankhajure/system se aanbhagya hai ... der saver kahi ye pari drishya rup me veer ke samne na aa jaye ??
Work bhai work... Samay ki paabandi... Mujhe majboor kar deti hai, late night update dene par. Par pichla waala 12 pe de diya tha mene.btw bahut baar jaldi update dene ka bolkar ek baar bhi aisa nhi kiya... update bhle hi 2-3 din deley ho jaye but 11-12 PM se pehle aa jaye to sone pe suhaga + swacch mastisk ke liye comapsory nind mil jaye... utsuktavash aaj aye update ki kal bhi nhi paddh sakte.... intezaar hai agle update ka
Yes!!! Kavya ne ye bilkul bhi expect nahi kiya tha. It was a surprise for her.Veer ki achhi se halat kharab ho gayi iss Holi pe. Sab ne apni apni tarah se veer ki vaat lagayi he. Badi baat to ragini wali he .
To veer sahab aaram kar rahe he Par unke naseeb me abhi aaram kaha likha he. Kavya bethi he uspe. Ab veer ne uth ke kavya ko wo de diya jiska usse to koi andaja nahi tha. Spanking mili he apne bade bhai se. Veer bhi pata nahi kis mood me tha jo 2-3 baar esa kar gaya. Kavya ke aankh me aasu aa gaye ye jaan ke. But kya usse bura laga he mann se ya bas ek unexpected behaviour tha veer ka wo soch rahi he wo. Par wo ye sab leke rone nahi wali. Poora enjoy kiya usne veer ke sath ka samay.
Yes!!! Only Nidhi and maybe even Suhana can compete with Ragini in saree. Bhavna hasn't shown up yet so we'll skip her for now.Ragini, suman apne jalwe dikha rahi he saree me. Saree me ragini ko Nidhi ki takkar de sakti he abhi tak ki kahani me. Aage bhavna bhi hogi to teeno jalwa dikhayegi. Sab ke sab veer ke charm me kho chuke he nashte pe. Ragini ke mann me alag hi laddu foot rahe honge. Suman ab pyaar karti he to usko bhi ab khayal ye hoga ki wo apni taraf se sab kare jisse veer khush rahe.
Bilkul!Kavya bhi saree me jalwe dikha rahi he. Wahi Nidhi Shreya aur juhi bhi aa gaye. Yaha rang na laga hota veer pe to Shreya aur Nidhi bhi veer me kho jati. Par next time dekh lenge.
Are you sure about this? What will happen once the old Kaera gets back?Asli majha tab aaya jab teeno devi aayi. Kaera to puri taiyar hoke aayi he. Usse nahi pata detail me Holi ke bare me. Par achha laga yaha usko khush dekh ke. Ek bomb jarur foda Sonia pe usne. Par veer ne sambhal hi liya. Sonia aur kaera aapas me lage hue he veer unke sath he wahi baki sab veer ko death look de rahi he. Sonali janti he kaera ko. Ragini ko bhi jalan he thodi par uski asli rival Nidhi he kaera, Sonia nahi. Wahi kavya ki ye baat badi achhi he ki wo apne emotion jahir kar
Exactly!!!!Wahi kavya ki ye baat badi achhi he ki wo apne emotion jahir kar deti he chahe kuch bhi ho. Yaha bhi jealous dikhi wo. Aur aarohi to ese laga jese iss sab ke baad veer ki achhi khabar legi. Wo abhi to shant he par sabse jyada uncomfortable bhi wahi he veer ko dusri ladkiya ke sath dekh
Yes! Imagine Juhi actually saying, "Papa" to Veer! The feels...Aarohi ne badi baad keh di he yaha ki she was glad that veer took her first kiss. Ab ye badi baat he kyuki isse aarohi ke khayal bhi pata lagte he. Aarohi veer ke sath khush he aur aage bhi moments aayenge. Suman aur aabha ki bajne wali he vese. Suman to har waqt ready rahegi apne Malik ko khush karne me.
Ye gun agar kisi tarah Nidhi ke hath lag jati juhi ke hath se to veer ke gaal laal ho jate fir se. Wo Vese to veer se door reh rahi he par uska dil kuch aur chahta he. Ab uske liye kya plan kiya he veer ne kya pata ?? Par jo plan he usse Nidhi ko ehsaas ho jana chahiye. Kab tak khud ko rokegi. Wo bhi deserve karti he uske jiwan me usko ek pyaar karne wala ho, uski parwah kare, uski responsibility baante. Aur baat juhi ki bhi mayne rakhti he. Juhi ko wo khud hi bolegi ki "beta abse apne mamu ko akele me papa kehna" .
Hmm! Veer thoda uljhega Ragini ki iss approach se. Par wo nidhi jesa ziddi nahi hai. He will accept eventually.Holi pe sabse badi baaji ragini ne mari he. Ese sidha honth hi mila diye. Ragini ne ek tarah se khud ko sounp diya he veer ko. Aur keh bhi diya ki ab ragini pe uska haq he. Ab ragini aur jyada biwi wale role me aayegi. Good morning kiss se leke good night kiss bhi legi. Veer ke liye Achha hoga ki ragini ko samjhe wo. Veer ko har haal me support karegi wo. Veer bhi alpha male he to piche to na hatega.
Aur lagta he suhana ne kuch info di he veer ko uski maa ki. Ya kuch business me help kari hogi. Dekhte he aage.
Waiting for next update.
Bhag saale...Werewolf agar bada revo chahiye to jaldi update dena aaj
Yes! This segment will be interesting in itself.Story has taken the next big leap forward let's see where it lands and how it ends.
Nice update.
Jii haan! The long awaited matter of Veer and his Mom has begun. Thanks!Nice update brother to veer ki maa ka matter finally start ho hi gaya waiting for next update
HmmVeer : ek aisa ladka jiske sar pr MA ka saya tha hi nhi jaha tk use yaad hai or suhana ke info dene pr uska yu utavle pan ko darsana vajib hai pr yha pari ne use samjhaya or sahi salah di...
Veer jab jab society me apni pehchaan banaega. Badi pehchaan... Fame badhta jaega. Aur jab jab uski image par laanchan lagega... Fame ghatata jaega. This is how it works.Suhana se madad bhi mangi pr suhana is mamle me apni asmarthta darshati hai uski baat bhi sahi hai yah matter Bharat se bahar ka hai Jisme galti ki gunjaish nhi honi chahiye isliye, veer bhi samajh gya or vha se nikal balhar ke pass gya slogan ke headout me vha uska limbo thik kiya aur balhar ka boss ban gya Jisse Fame unlock Hui...
Nahi!!! Mein samjhaata hu. Abhi veer ne apne stats 100 ke paar nahi kiye hai. Kyuki wo kar hi nahi sakta. Limit cross nahi kar sakta wo abhi. Ussi limit ko cross karne ke liye Veer ko 2000 points stats me lagaane honge. For example, yadi wo strength 100 ke upar chaahta hai. Toh pehle 2000 ka jurmaana dena hoga usse.Pari ne veer ko average person or genius person me sambandh bhi btaya or fame ka mtlb bhi...
Pari ne veer ko shock bhi diye apne status ko genius level me le Jane ka rasta bhi btaya jo ki Bahut hi mahga hai Kimat 2000 points per status Yani 10000 total of 1 Status point bdhane ke liye ab 10 points invest karne padenge it's too costly bhaya...
Kya hua in 4 din me kaise manage kiya veer ne forgen ka trip... Yha bhabhi ko bta diya apne Jane ka or ma ke bare me bhi thoda Bahut or bhabhi ko ek pendent bhi pahnaya apne hatho se jisko dekh bhabhi fooli na smai or ek chumma chhap diya veer ki gaal me, sukar hai honth me nhi diya Varna veer to sab bhool yhi baith jata
Pari ka raaz khulte jaega samay ke saath.To trip suru ho rhi hai misra ki Dekhte hai vha kya kya sikhne ko milta hai veer ko or kya hota hai uske sath vha...
Ek chij to bhool hi rha tha pari ne kaha ki uski other identity to Iska mtlb :- jaise suhana ko multiple personality disorder hai kya aisa hi pari ke sath bhi hoyega har baar ya uski sari personality Kabhi ek hokar mature system ka roop lega in future...?...
Karan ka Jo veer ke yha Itni sari ladkiyo ko dekh reaction tha or kaera ko dekh jo khushi ka varnan tha Vo Bahut pasand aaya mujhe...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab update adventure begins...
Aisa sachmein hoga kya!?Yes! Imagine Juhi actually saying, "Papa" to Veer! The feels...