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Itntezar rahega, vaise tumhara ye system wala idea bahut pasand aaya, ek dum bilkul naya, lekin iske peeche bhi kuch suspense to hai hi vo kab khulta hai aur kaise ye dekhna chahunga.Next update kaafi interesting rahega. Kahani naye gear par chadh jaegi. Thanks a lot!
1. Veer coolie bann ke jaega? 100 ka intelligence hai uske paas. Ju kam se kam 50 ka toh rakho.1. Kis role mein Veer ja raha hey Egypt, as a coolie or as an archaeologist or as a security guard? Tourist to banega nahi. He has to spend maximum time with his mother. Coolie may the best option. Other option can be as a boyfriend of her daughter, but then he can not spend more time with his mother.
2. Who has helped him for this journey to Egypt? Balhaar, Karan, Kayra or Suman?
P.S ~ Mein bhi wese ju ke comments seriously nahi leta.Yeh line mein bas apke ke liye likha tha. (I don't take Ashwathama seriously)
Boht jald!!!Update mast tha
Par asli maza dono maa bete ke milne ke baad hi ayega.....
Sab dore daal rahe ekmaatr nayi female reader par.मेरा ले भी न पाओगे आप वत्स .
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वैसे यहाँ ये शख्त बंदा भी पिघल गया.....
हे NupurSharma@1994 जी, ये सब आपकी ही माया है
Million nahi brother. 1.3k pages. Thanks btw!!!For completed 1.3M pages on your story thread...
Yes!!! Abhi 5 months left hai, Nidhi waala mision expire hone me.1 saal Kya dobara se dipavali aa gyi, are nhi abhi to march chal rha hai kal hi to Holi kheli thi veer ne...
Thanks man!Fantastic update....
Ragini ki pendent deke veer ne ek step complete kr diya....
Ab dkhna hai veer ka Asli Maa ka sach or uski sis ki behavior......
Aabha wese hi side character hai. She's not as influencial as Suman. Same goes for Sonali.Kya yaar ... holi ki raat pr parda daal diya ... Abha jeeti jaagti aurat na hokar ... ek gadda ban kar reh gayi hai ...
Yes! That's the reason why Suhana this time didn't take any risk.So our man is going to Egypt ... to see and approach his mother as a stranger ... and will try to get close to her without revealing his identity ... waise suna hai Egypt ke prisons me khatirdaari acchi hoti hai ... kagaz pakke hone chahiyen ...
Things will happen, once Veer gets back. But in parallel, some other things will also happen.Anyway, when he gets back, will Ragini be able to hold herself ... ab to gale me haar bhi pehna diya hai ... agar unke milan ko shortchange kia ... then you would have chosen voilence ... keh deta houn ... sab readers ki tarf se ... phir mat bolna ki pehale nahi bataya ...
Uske liye pehle lover hona bhi toh chahiye... Par Veer aur Pari dono hi ek baat nahi jaante the. Jis Bhavna ne aaj tak apni beti tak ko sach nahi bataaya, wo ek stranger ke saath apni baatein kese share kar sakti thi? ..."
- true, par .... apne lover ke saath to share kar sakti hai ... specially after he's rocked her world ...
Veer is not a hunk. He has a lean body with subtle cuts and six packs. It will get more shredded as he will increase his stats..... arre bhai ... why not ... bande ke stats 100 percent hai ... ab unjaan banke milega ... charm karega ... dosti bhadayega ... will win her confidence ... exotic location hai ... desert night skies are the best ... a hunk and a MILF ... on a starlit night ... on a arabian magic carpet on the cold desert sands ... ab
kabhi kabhi to mujhe lagta hai ki mere comments hi iss thread ke debauched contents hain ...
Thanks! Pari ke secrets dheere dheere khulte jaenge. For example, recent me Veer ne ek secret khola ki Pari ki personality harr level up hone par badal jaati hai. He will unfold more secrets as he raises his stats. Keep reading.Itntezar rahega, vaise tumhara ye system wala idea bahut pasand aaya, ek dum bilkul naya, lekin iske peeche bhi kuch suspense to hai hi vo kab khulta hai aur kaise ye dekhna chahunga.
Nikal lvdeWerewolf agar bada revo chahiye to jaldi update dena aaj
Tab tarsengi usse dekhne ke liye.Bahut he pyara update but suhana alag he har baar ke natak hota h but veer ki sari pariyo ko pata lagega tab kya hoga ki wo Egypt gaya h.......
Aiyla... Ye toh spoiler ho jaega mein bataunga toh. Iss baare me koi answer nahi de paunga. Wese Pari ke baare ek boht bada rehesya already given hai. Ab kis update me hai. Ye aap dhundh lijiye ho sake toh.Spoiler Ahead:
क्या ऐसा मुमकिन है कि भावना का हाथ हो system में। आखिर वो एक archeologist है और उसे ये किसी खोज के समय मिला हो।
Writer साहब पुष्टि करे।
Thanks man!Excellent dia;og, pari ki nok-jhok majedar hai
Dhadalle se cheezein nahi hoengi. Things will take turns gradually..was expecting some midnight dewar-bhabhi wet holi, white coloured. hopefully it will come later as flashback. except for little innocent spanking with kavya and some erotism with suman, this indecent holi looked to be very decent. opening up of kaera and his initiative of playing with karan was very touching.
You'll see something tonight!you have excellent way of keeping the pace of the story by narrating happenings at two-three places simultaneously, this pace is again restored. very eager to visit egypt, what happens there. pranjal is silent for quite some time, what is happening there.
Ohh thanks man!Boss, aapki story se interest ek second ke liye bhi nahi hatata, yahi sochte rehte hain ab kya hoga. keep it up.
Bilkul! Yadi usne kaha hai toh kuch soch samajh ke hi kaha hoga.Bhai Pari ka khna ekdum shi h yr aaise thodi hota h ki jao or sidha khdo maana maa hain vo or apne bachhe k pass aate hi unko pta chal jata h pr Veer ko b unke baare me phle thodi jankari jutani chahiye or sath me thodi thodi unse najdikiya badhani chahiye fir jaake unko sach btana chahiye
She has gotten attached to him. Jab Veer Slogan se bhidne gaya tha last time tab bhi gun dete waqt. She sadi be safe to him. Wo nahi chaahti ki Veer ko kuch hoye. Pyaar nahi hua hai usse Veer se. But yes, she does have a soft spot for him in her heart.Mujhe to sir Pari ka idea hi best lga
Vaise ye aachanak Veer ko kon aaisa mil gya jisne uski help ki es matter me khi SUHANA hi ne to help nhi ki h mujhe to vhi lagti h ek jo aaise mamle me help kr skti ho vo chahe jaisi b ho uska past jaisa b rha ho pr vo b Veer ko dukhi to nhi dekh skti h
Then soon, he might be hearing weird noises from that crystal ball.doosra step - mangalsutr.
That old man Manorath is the only sensible guy in this story I tell you ... abhi bhi Ragini ko apne pote ki vadhu maanta hai ... crystal ball hai uske paas ...
Ohh! Thanks man!I am loving your story. Read all of it in just 1 to 2 days. Fan bana liya yar ap ne apna. Keep doing the good work and plz update jalde dein intezar nae ho raha
Abhi bina padhe hi bol diye ki lamba khichne waala hai!?Ab ye bht lamba khichne wala hai ye mostly story me aise ku krte hai ki apni hi mom dad ke sath rhke ni batate ki hm apke bche hai i knw story ko exited bnana hota hai bt fir b chlo koi ni
Kahani ke ant me boht bada surprise milega. Boht bada. You guys are not ready. Heck you guys are not even ready for the final villain.Jarur. Likh ke le lo. Jitna hum Werewolf ko jante hein, Veer kuch kasar nehi chodega. But at the end of it you will ask for more also.
Spam bas na ho. Reviews are welcomed.Pehli baar dekh raha hun ki koi writer bol raha hey comment mat dalo, jyada comments ho rahe hein. Otherwise writers generally yeh forum mein comments ke liye taraste hein.
Waah re!!! Sab pata hai tere ko toh...1 .
Waiting for that
Kitne update lagenge lagbhag uske liye
Ans: Within next 100 updates
2.
where we'll see him in his full glory.
Ans: At the end of the story
Us time kya hoga
Ans: Story end ho jayega.
Thanks bhai! Keep reading!Zabardast update bhai...veer na sahi socha hai isi tarah usse apni maa sa milna chaiya akhir use bhi pata chale ki kyu voh usee chood kar chali gai thi
Jii haan!!वीर को सुहाना के माध्यम से आखिरकार अपनी सगी बहन और माँ के बारे मे उचित जानकारी मिल ही गयी, अब देखना ये है की वीर अपनी माँ और बहन से किस रूप मे मिलता है, आखिर उसे अपनी माँ की वो मजबूरी जो जाननी है जिसके कारण एक माँ ने अपने बेटे को अपनी आंचल से दूर रखा, एक बहन को उसके भाई से दूर रखा गया.... इन सभी सबालो के जबाब तो वीर की माँ ही दे सकती है, ... जो की अभी वापस अपने काम पर मिश्र मे चली गयी है....
Haha~ Usse kya pata tha ki aage uske saath kya hone waala hai.बेचारा करण अपने दोस्त को नल्ला समझ रहा था, उसे क्या पता की जिसे वो नल्ला समझ रहा है ... उसकी दीवानी उसकी बहन kaera और उसकी बहन के बचपन की दोस्त Soniya भी हो चुकी है....
खैर करण यहाँ अपनी बहन को होली मनाते देख बहुत खुश हुआ, आखिर आज kaera ने अपने भाई को भी रंग लगाई थी...
Thanks man!!! Harr character apne aap me unique hai.Ragini" ... ... ...इनके बारे मे क्या लिखूँ, मेरे शब्द कम हो रहे है, ... मैंने रागिनी मे एक ऐसी औरत को देखा है जो अपनी हद मे ही रहकर, बिना कोई गैरसमाजिक और बिना कोई हवश के धीरे धीरे वीर के बहोत करीब जा रही है, या फिर ये भी कहना गलत नही होगा की बहोत करीब आ चुकी है......
और वीर को भी अपने करीब लाने मे सफल दिख रही है......
Mind blowing character...
Abhi limit break nahi kii hai. Uske liye 2000 points lagaane honge. Tab break hoegi.परी ने तो एक और झटका दे दिया वीर को, ... साला दिन प्रतिदिन उसके stats के लिए जरूरी पॉइंट्स की कीमत बहोत कम होती जारही है, ..... खैर आजिब सी बात है, अब वीर अपने stats के 100 पॉइंट्स के लिमिट को क्रॉस कर चुका है तो उसे अब और आगे बढ़ने मे और मेहनत करना होगा और ज्यादा से ज्यादा पॉइंट्स gain करनी होगी .....
बेहद ही उमदा update भाई ❤
Suhana married hai. Wo Veer se pyaar nahi karti hai. But she does have a soft spot for him.𝘉𝘩𝘢𝘪 𝘬𝘶𝘤𝘩 𝘵𝘰 𝘭𝘰𝘤𝘩𝘢 𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘭 𝘳𝘩𝘢 𝘩𝘢𝘪 𝘬𝘺𝘶𝘯𝘬𝘪 𝘫𝘢𝘣 𝘴𝘢𝘣𝘬𝘪 𝘫𝘢𝘭𝘪 𝘷𝘦𝘦𝘳 𝘬𝘪 𝘬𝘶𝘣𝘴𝘶𝘳𝘢𝘳𝘵𝘪 𝘥𝘦𝘬𝘩 𝘬𝘳 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘶𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘢 𝘬𝘢𝘪𝘴𝘦 𝘣𝘢𝘤𝘩 𝘨𝘢𝘺𝘪 𝘰
Last time Veer jhep gaya tha. Isliye iss baar sirf gaal pe hi kiss kiya Ragini ne. Firse aage bold move dikhaegi woh koi.𝘰𝘳 𝘮𝘢𝘢 𝘰𝘳 𝘣𝘦𝘩𝘢𝘯 𝘬𝘢 𝘱𝘵𝘢 𝘣𝘩𝘪 𝘭𝘨𝘢 𝘭𝘪𝘺𝘢 𝘨𝘢𝘯𝘨 𝘣𝘩𝘪 𝘴𝘦𝘵 𝘶𝘱 𝘬𝘳 𝘭𝘪𝘺𝘢 𝘰𝘳 𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘪𝘯𝘪 𝘯𝘦 𝘫𝘢𝘣 𝘭𝘢𝘴𝘵 𝘤𝘩𝘶𝘮𝘢 𝘩𝘰𝘯𝘵𝘩𝘰 𝘱𝘦 𝘥𝘪𝘺𝘢 𝘷𝘦𝘦𝘳 𝘬𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘪𝘴 𝘣𝘢𝘢𝘳 𝘺𝘦 𝘤𝘩𝘰𝘵𝘪 𝘤 𝘱𝘶𝘤𝘩𝘪 𝘰𝘳 𝘣𝘩𝘪 𝘨𝘢𝘢𝘭 𝘱𝘦 𝘬𝘺𝘶 𝘥𝘪
Yes! Rewards bade ho rahe hai toh kharcha bhi toh badhega na? It will be bard to grind now.𝘰𝘳 𝘱𝘢𝘳𝘪 𝘯𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘷𝘦𝘦𝘳 𝘬𝘦 𝘭𝘨𝘢 𝘋𝘢𝘭𝘦 2𝘬 𝘱𝘰𝘪𝘯𝘵𝘴 𝘦𝘹𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘰𝘳𝘥𝘪𝘯𝘢𝘳𝘺 𝘩𝘶𝘮𝘢𝘯 𝘣𝘢𝘯𝘯𝘦 𝘬𝘦 𝘭𝘪𝘺𝘦 𝘸𝘰 𝘣𝘩𝘪 𝘫𝘶𝘴𝘵 1 𝘱𝘢𝘳𝘵 10𝘬 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘧𝘶𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘶𝘱𝘨𝘳𝘢𝘥𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 10 𝘱𝘰𝘪𝘯𝘵𝘴 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘣𝘦 𝘤𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘴 1 𝘴𝘺𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘮 𝘪𝘴 𝘴𝘶𝘤𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘪𝘵 𝘪𝘯𝘤𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘦 𝘳𝘦𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘥 𝘱𝘰𝘪𝘯𝘵𝘴 𝘢𝘮𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘵 𝘢𝘭𝘴𝘰 𝘢𝘴 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘺𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘪𝘴 𝘨𝘰𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘮𝘰𝘳𝘦 𝘣𝘪𝘨 𝘭𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘮𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘢𝘴𝘬𝘴 𝘱𝘰𝘪𝘯𝘵𝘴 𝘦𝘹𝘵𝘦𝘯𝘥𝘦𝘥 𝘴𝘬𝘪𝘭𝘭𝘴 𝘱𝘳𝘰𝘥𝘶𝘤𝘵𝘴 𝘪𝘯 𝘴𝘩𝘰𝘱 𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘺𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨
Tonight!!!Bhai next update kab doge