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Chester room ke andar hi mara gya?
Am i right?
Boht boht dhanyavaad mitr!!Werewolf भाई इस अंक के लिए क्या उपमा दूँ
रहस्यमय और रोमांचक
पर आती सुंदर लिखूँ या अति भयंकर
बहुत ही उत्तम प्रस्तुति
सुहाना का दिव्या को हड़काना वीर के लिए और निक का वीर के प्रति असहनशीलता के चलते वीर को मौत के चंगुल में भेजना
अंत में एक हॉरर की अनुभूति करना
वाकई बहुत ही उच्चकोटि की प्रस्तुति
साधुवाद
Thanks man!Gajab ka update thril se bharpur ab dekhna hai kon Nightwalker hai
May be"Nik" Divya's husband
Waiting for next
Next update bhi dhamakedaar hi hai.Ye definitely 100 Update ke layaka tha.Lakin mujhe pakka yakin hai aur mai kah skta hu bahut se log kahenge ki aapne ye scene pura nahi kiya. Aur isme utna dhmaka nahi hua.
Lakin in ab un sub ko kon samjhaye ki in sub ka karan ye hai bhai Quki aapne is ek Update me itne dhmake ek sath kar diye ki in logo ke ye sb normal lag raha hoga.
Bilkul! Kaafi cheezein bachi hui hai. Agla update dimaag hila ke rakh dega.Is ek Update me hi aapne do murder dikha diye . Ek baar nightwalker ka samna karwa diya veer se. Usne zoel ki jaan bhi bacha li. Nd do clues pari ne CRACK kiye. Sath me kai main question aapne chor diya panting se related, aur ye night walker lime limit me Attack kaise kar skta hai kisi par. Kahi aisa to koi hidden rule nahi hai ki jo time gold find karne ka hai us time me agar koi room me rahega to us par bhi nightwalker Attack karta hai. Aur agar aisa hai to wo ander gaya kaise room ke. Aur agar such me aisa hai to usne Zoel aur emma par is liye Attack to nahi kiya Wiki wo do log room me thi. Bahut se swal hai bhai.
Nd shuhana ko such me apne veer ki bahut jyada care hai nd jaisa ki mai starting se sochta aa raha tha bhai ki favour to alsi me veer ne hi kiya hai shuhana ne nahi. Aur aaj shuhana ne ye baat accept bhi ki hai.
Aur in divya Madam ka lagta hai ye case solve hone tak divorce ho jayega.
beshaq!!!!Aur agar aisa na bhi hua to shuhana ab nick ko jarur bahut ache se sabak sikhayegi. Sayad is baar na lakin agli baar fir se usne aisa kuch kiya to definitely wo aisa kuch karegi. Aakhir wo bhi kisi chote family se belong nahi karti hai.
Thanks a lot bhai! Bane rehne ka.At the end bahut hi awsm update bhai. Wakyi ek no. Itne day jo wait Krna padta hai un sb ki kasar puri ho jati hai aapke ek Update se.
bhai poora ka poora plot iss se juda hua hai. Yadi ye nahi toh kahani nahi. Sab kuch interlinked hai. Kuch bhi faaltu nahi hai. Baaki ye reader ke upar hai ki usse read karna hai ya nahi. Kahani toh apni raftaar se plot ka raasta tay karti jaegi.भाई यह पार्ट जल्द खत्म करें । मैं ऐसा नही बोल रहा हु कि कहानी अच्छी नही है बस जबसे वीर अमेरिका में जाकर जासूसी कर रहा है उसका कोई भी मतलब कहानी में जोड़ने को समझ में नही आ रहा है बाकी कहानी आपकी है इसलिए अगर बुरा लगा हो तो माफ़ कर देना
Thanks man!Ye wala update previous update se bahut achchha tha man next update me macha diyo man pura xforum hi hila dena to next update Monday ko expect to kar hi sakta hoo kyu. Werewolf bhai?
Thanks man!Behad hi shaandar update Werewolf bhai poora horror movie ka feel de diya hai....
Waqt batayega.Ding veer ko mission milna he tha ab Night Walker ki band kaise bajti hai
Thanks man! Yes! Next update me all cleared up.Awesome update bhai or Nightwalker or veer ki puri fight shayad next update me aayegi waiting for next update
Thanks a lot! Keep supporting as usual!Wooh Aag laga di sir har second thrill , abhi nightWalker ka bhed nahi khula may be 1 update aur lagega. Nice update sir dil khus ho gya aur aapne mehnat ki saaf dikh raha hai loved it!!!!!
Thanks man! Thanks a lot!superb fantastic update bhai ekdum jabardust bhai likhna to bahot hai lekin aap jo apne hisab se story likh rahe ho wo best hai aap ne bahot suspence bana diye hi suhana ki shadi bhi sayad uski marji ke khilaf huyi hai aur chaester lagta hai pahle bhi yaha aaya hua hai dekhte hai aage kya hoga lage raho bhai aur aise hi update dete raho
Ye raaz next update me...Lajawab update bhai
Bhai gold zameen ke undr nhi na gada huwa hai
Once in a lifetime waali cheez thi wohpura Granth hi likh diya tumne to.....
Thanks man!Bahut hi fadu update hai bhai maza aa gaya
Waiting for the next update
4k words nahi bhai. Above 7k words tha ye update. Thanks btw! Keep supporting!Zabardast update Bhai. Congrats for 100 updates. Aur sab se acchi baat hain aap kisi bhi update ko best nahi kah saktey coz har ek doosre se acchi hain. Bohat unique concept is forum per plus regular timely update aur usme bhi 4k plus words joki badey acche tareeqe se pesh kiye gaye hain lagta hain ek ek pushp chun kar yah mala bana kar parosi gayi hain.
Thanks a lot man!Thriller update yaar sach me aap great ho suspense dalne main sach main aatish ka jlsa ho ya slogan ki mirror gallery but is mention ke aage sab fail hai kya update tha bro maza aagya
Horrible? Horrible shabd aap aage kayi baar use karenge.Sach main update 100 ko 100/100 grad deta hu yaar kya bolu this is so much horrible deaths jecob and Ronnie and maybe Chester
Thoda toh Veer bhi afraid hai.Bhai apne veer bhai ne to nightwalker ko khullam khulla challenge de diya maza ayega agle update ka to besabri se intezaar hai
Kaun ek nahi hai ye pata chalega baad me.Or ye divya iski gaand main kam hawa nahi hai bhai sach me ye night walker is very interesting killer but they are not one
Nahi! Hoise of the killers arc vegas me hi khatam ho jaega. China town arc alag hai. Aur haan! Veer desh videsh me kayi jagah ghoomne wala hai. Sirf Mumbai me rehke uska vikaas kese ho sakta hai bhala?Bro aapne ye kaha ki house of killers china toun main finish hoga to mera sawaal hai kya veer vegas or china ke alawa bhi koi or country jasakta hai meybe more killer??????
Boht boht dhanyavaad bhai!Baki dhasu dhamakedar outstanding update yaara
Aur nahi toh kya... Yahi toh gutthi ka ek aur hissa hai.Awesome fantastic superb mind blowing update bhai...
Per ek baat he jab last half hour veer logo ka gold find karne ka tha 3 to 3:30 A:M wala this is the first time jab Nightwalker un logo ke time pe kisiko marne nikla tha uske phele wale me wo apne time pe hi kisiko mara he...
What??? Na bhai! Nightwalker ko ye sab faaltu kaam karne ki zaroorat nahi. Koi gareeb aadmi thodi hai woh. Usse kya lena dena unki boats se!? Boats ka masla bhi khulega. Thanks btw!Or baaki sab ka boat se ana or jab Veer log aye tab sare boat gayab hona ek sochne wali baat he kya ye log alag alag logo ko bulate he taki wo log boat Leke aye or ye log apna saman un boat se ek jagah se dusri jagah supply kar sake taki police ho ya koye or wo log esi boat check nahi karenge ya or kuch bhi ho sakta he per mujhe Esa lagta he or ye paintings ka bhi kuch to raaz he lekin veer ka samaj nahi aa raha he veer ko ek hint ki jarurat he bas upper se veer ko mission bhi mila he catch the Nightwalker before 6:00 A:M matlab is bar veer Nightwalker ke time pe room se niklega or usko pakadne ki koshish
Thanks man!Superb update bhai thrilling experience tha ekdum next update me maza ayngi waiting for it
मुझे लगा मै कोई update पढ़ रहा हूँ...Update 100 ko lekr boleto apan ekich baat bolega ki ye century abhi tk ki sabse best update ko laa kr hamare saamne apke dwara pesh ki gayi hai...... gajab man ju ke writing pr apan ko kuch n bolna chata kyunki sab jaante hai apke writing skill ek alag hi level pe chalti hai........
Ye divya to apne chutiye kam gaandu husband ke bachao me jyada lagi hai sorry insult nhi dekha ja raha usse .....suhaana bohot jyada hi pareshan hai veer ko lekr jo lajmi hai hona bhi chahiye aakhir wo ussse lekr aayi hai yaha pr aur wo bhi indirectly divya ke kaaran,aur rahi baat nik ki to wo gaandu ki to gaand me kiwde chal rahe hai bhosdika.........Khair suhana ki bhi baat sahi hai ki ye sab sirf nik ke kaaran hua matlab veer ko sirf ussi ke kahne pr bheja gaya jo bohot galat tha lekin still suhana bohot jyada pareshan ho rakhi hai veer ko lekr aur veer ke prati wo jyada hi emotionally attach si ho rahi hai yaa ho bhi gayi hai jo spast roop se hmare saamne dikh bhi raha hai........ab batao iss divya ko isse matlab iss situation me bhi muh chodi sugh gayi batao matlab suru krdi ussne aur usse bahak kr suhana ne bhi apne husband ka izzat ka balatkar n dekha gaya
Khair ab aate apan log aage ke scene pe jo hai island ka boleto mansion ka,ab idhar Emaa piche gayi Jacob ke aur ye chutiya socho jara apne aap ko ye mahashay
race 3 movie ke salman khan smjh rahe the bc jaa to aise rahe the ki killer unka langotiya yaar ho, bahenchod iski to literally gaand hi ahemm-ahemm sorry haa to mai bol raha tha ki uski mundi ko hi football bana diya bc wo scene jab uske aankho me shocked wala reaction aur uske Kate hue hisse se jab wo khun riss rahe the aur uski andhruni nase woh....ho ho...ho.....kya hi scene tha it's fucking from that scene that I just loves it to see and imagine..... uss bloody wape scene ko imagine kr ke jo ek alag hi horror scene wali feeling aayi n wo mast tha mai sach kahu to bhai ye scene aur jo aage ke scene hue n dono ke murder ke to blood lust wali jo feeling aayi n gajab ki thi fucking great Hatt's off man ju ko and realy I am waiting for even more dangerous and bloody scenes.......but ...but but........ye scenes mughe sach kahu to utna bloody feeling n de payi lekin still mai jaanta hu Werewolf bhaya ki ye jo scenes the ye to abhi bas shuruwat thi iss story me abhi to asli jo scenes aaane wale hai wo alag hi level pr hongi, I just want to say man ki mai unn arcs ka besabri se intezar me rahunga lekin apka koi bharosa nhi kahi issi arc me wo scenes laa do aap
Khair mai kaha se kaha chala gaya apan log aate review pr sorry mai ata review pr
Emma ki to kya hi haalat ho gayi uski jaan hii nikal gayi thi mano jab wo apne hosh me aayi aur wo bhhagne lagi NIGHTWALKER se bach ke tab uski jo buri haalat huyi jitna uss katti hui mundi ko dekh kr n huyi thi kyunki piche uske wo NIGHTWALKER pada huua tha wo bhi hassiya liye hue literally ek aisa scene mind me ubhar ke aayi hogi n sab reader ke dimag me ki unke bhi raungtey khade ho gaye honge......aur jo uski chikh nikli thi wo dar aur khauf bayan kr rahi thi jo maine saaf notice kiya bhale ju log ne na kiya ho pr maine kiya jo uske uss chikh me jhalak rahi thi maut ka dar.....
Aur jab veer aur baaki sab apne kamre se nikal kr uss halway me aaye to unhe fir se chikh sunayi di jo kaafi pass se aayi thi aur agle hi pal Emma bhagti hui aakr veer se lag gayi.....gale yaar....haa to usne bas yahi bola ki usne dekha use aur uski baat sun oahlee to nhi smjh paaye lekin jab unhe pata chala to unki halak sukh gayi.....wo Tommy ne suggest kiya ki uske room me chalte hai jo manne hazam ho gaya lekin jab ander Emma ne puri scene ko bataya to unn sabki to fatt ke kya unki to rooh bhi kuch samay ke liye ghumne chali gayi hogi......and Emma jo veer se chipki padi thi kya kahu mere khyaal se Zoey laundiya jal bhun rahi thi sorry ye bakchodi-bakchodi me pel di.....
Haa to ab aate uss mahol me jab sab dare sahme khade the unke dare sahme jism me khauf aur badha diya uss grjarahat ne jo badal ke garjne ki awazz thi aur Emma to fir se lipat padi dar ke maare veer se jo Zoey ne bhaap liya ki uske just bagal me wo bhi hai lekin wo usse chorr veer pr kud rahi hai.......
And tab kiya veer ne ek sawal jo bohot jaaruri tha aur kyun tha mai aage batata......veer ka sawal ki tum log yaha kaise pahuche jiska sabne jawab diya bas Emma ko chor kr lekin ye baat Ronnie launde ko n bhayi aur wo Emma pr shak ki disha se apne bhav rakha jo sahi bhi tha aur hoi bhi kyun n lekin still veer apna gentle man Emma ki jimedari matlab apne sr pe li ki ye mere saath rahegi agar mai mara to ispar shakk kya pura hakk hi jayega katl ka lekin agar mughe kuch n hua to ye innocent prove ho jayegi jo sun to Emma ko bhagwan hi dikh gaye honge veer ke roop me......
And ab aate veer ke uss sawal pr jab veer ne bola ki jab ham aaye matlab veer aur Mike jab waha aye copter se to uss island ke pass kahi bhi unhe koi jetski yaa koi boat wagera n dikhi jo sun to unke ander jo dar ka bamm tyaar ho raha tha n wo phatt gaya wo bhi booommmm.....unnsabki to gandiya fatt gayi and ek baat bata du mai ki ye ssawal jaruri bhi hai ek baat ko clear krne ke liye ki uss NIGHTWALKER ne pahle se hi ye sab plan kr rakha tha yaa jitne bhi log waha aaye pade hai wo sab NIGHTWALKER ke dwara hi laye gaye hai lekin choro aage agar maine 2-3aur koi possibility likh di to lekhak mahoday meko gaali bakenge.......lekin ye to ssocho jara wo boats aur jet ski gaye kaha ye to issi traf indicate kr raha hai wo hai plan ki tarf matlab ye sab plan tha matlab insabko yaha laya gaya tha naki wo khud aaye the........
Ab Mike bhaya n kah daala indirectly ki apan ko investigation mangta hai jo sunke to unki aur fatti lekin still unhone apne timing ke hisab se maan liya ki khazana bhi to chahiye unhe aur iss chis ke lalach me pade Chester,Tommy aur Ronnie jo bohot bura bhi hua ek ke liye because lalach wo chis hai jisske piche agar tum pad gaye to tum aise loote jaoge ki tumhara kuch n bachega khas kar tumhari jaan bhi wo mang leti hai ye lalach itni burri bhavna hai n ki ye tumse khud jitna maangegi wo uske liye kam hai, ye khud me hi khud ko niharti hai ye lalach khud ko hi khud se bayan kr deti hai .......
And jab Chester aur Tommie dono launde jab waha kalti maar liye Mike ko chorkr to wo unke greed ko saaf indicate kr raha tha
Aur rahi baat veer,Emma,Zoey,Ronnie ki to wo to basement me entry le li thi lekin unki to halak hi sukh gaya utne bade aur sequence type basement dekh kr aur lekin still mai ek baat bolna bhul gaya bhaya ki ju ne images ek dum perfecto daale hai jo har scenes ko ek alag hi imagination pr laakr chor deti hai.......Khair uss bbasement me bohot se se side way nikle hue the,wo logo ke kuch dur jaate hi Ronnie waha se ek side mud gaya jaha usse ek box millaa jise kholte hi uski khushi ka thikana hi nhi raha usse to laga ki matlab literally tum jara imagine kro ki tumhe ek box wo bhi gold biscuits se bhara pada mil jaaye to tumhara kya haal hoga tum to pagla jaoge and yaha to usse wahi mila jo dekh yaa paakr uski khushi charam sima pr thi leekin usse lalach ne daboch liya aur ussne ye baat veer aur Emma,Zoey ko n batayi jo uske liye bohot buri hone wali thi......jab Ronnie uss box ko wahi chorkr unke paas aakr unhe bahana bana kr baat ko Rafa dafa kiya lekin still wo uss lalach me doob chuka tha usse sirf wo gold biscuits hi chahiye the issliye to jab veer aur unnsabko kuch n mila uss basement me to wo wapas aagaye
Wahi baat kre apne Mike pe to wo kya hi kahe uska bhi haal behal tha Jacob ke body dekh lekin still usne jyada body ke saath cher chaar nhi kiya bas normally investigate kiya lekin usse itna to pata chal gaya investigation kr ke ki NIGHTWALKER kisi sharp weapons ka use kr raha hai lekin utna sharp nhi hai wo weapon......aur wo bhi laut aaya wapas
Aur idhar apne veer ne sabkee status check kr liya tha lekin usse kuch nhi mila yaha tk ki ussne Mike ko bhi check krliya tha lekin still nothing is there but bhaya ek baat batao ye aaj tumne mistake kr diya likhne me aapne Mike ko muke likh diya koi n bhaya ho jata hai apan aisa waisa kuch n bola.......and one thing also bhaya ki veer ne uss door ko bhi Check krliya lekin still kuch hath nhi aaya.......
Ab aate hai basement side jaha apne jony sorry Ronnie bhi nikal chuka tha apne saath ek bag lete hue and uske piche Zoey bhi kyunki wo apne room side aayi thi paani ke chalte kyunki usse lagi thi bhayankar pyaas aur wo nikli water bottle le kr bahar lekin usse dikhha Ronnie to hogayi wo uske piche, to wo jab aage ki wor gayi to Ronnie uske aankho se wojhal ho chuka tha lekin udhar Ronnie ke side to tandav chalu hogaya tha khauf ka bbc ki gandiya fatty gayi thi jab usne bag me gold biscuits bhar kr jaane laga aur piche se usse do pairo ki aur awazz sunayi jab wo piche muda to uske haath se wo bag hi chutt kr niche gir pada jisme se wo gold biscuits bahar ki wor gir gaye aur NIGHTWALKER jo uske saamne kisi bhootiye look ke saath khada tha
Thode der baad jab Zoey phonne ki light jala kr aage badhi aur kuch der me hi jab usse ek kata sar waha dikha to usse ulti si aagayi lekin usne control kiya aur bhagne ko hui to usse dikha wo NIGHTWALKER jiske mask ki wo do aankhe darane ke liye hi kaffi thi wo jor see chikhti hui bahar ki wor bhagi aur uske piche bhaga hasiya chalata hua. NIGHTWALKER jo bohot hi horror look de raha tha......aur jab wo halway side pohochi to wwo gir padi gile floor ke karan aur uskke saamne NIGHTWALKER khada tha uska sar dhad se alag krne ke liye jiske hasiya chalate hi uske aur hasiya ke bich koi lohe ki rod liye khada tha jo veer tha uski wo entry Zoey ne kabhi expect nhi ki thi lekin entry dhakar thi bhaya.....and Emma ki awazz piche se sunn Zoey uth kr uski. Wor gayi bhag kr jo hath me ek lakdi liye khadi thi lekin uski bhi fatti padi thi......
Wahi NIGHTWALKER ne veer ke chhest pr attack kiya jisse wo dodge kiya veer ne aur ye dekh kr NIGHTWALKER Emma aur Zoey ki traf bhaga hasiya liye aur idhar veer nee apne bewolf blessings ko on kiya aur uski traf tezzi se bhaga jo NIGHTWALKER ne bhi sense krliya aur wo thoda side ki traf bhaga lekin still wo achambhe me tha veer ki speed dekh aur wo Zoey aur Emma ke bagal se niklte hue unke piche lohe ke poles jo aksar kaam lagte hai tents ke wo the jisse NIGHTWALKER ne hasiye se ek jhatka diya aur bhag gaya aur idhar wo poles girne lagi lekin veer ne bacha liya EMMA aur Zoey ko kyunki usko kuch nhi hoga unn poles sse lekin Zoey aur Emma ko to hoga issliye ussne unhe bachana thik smjha aur pari ne kitni baar pucha bhi ki bone reaper oon kru lekin ussne usse mana krdiya lekin veer ko bhi takleef ho rahi thi thodi si aur Zoey aur Emma ki aankhe namm thi kyunki koi aur hota to bachata bhi nhi lekin veer !!
Aur jab wo waha se bach gaye to wo uss basement side gaye aur uss bag ko dekha jisme se gire wo gold biscuits colour chor rahi thi bhigte hue pani se and they are fake,and Ronnie to bekar hi me mara gaya isiliye maine kaha tha pichle review me ki agar greedygiri karoge to maut tumhe khud yaha bulayegi........
unhe pata chal gaya ki ye itna asan nhi hoga lekin jab wo kamre me aaye to veer pari se bato me laga tha jo usse NIGHTWALKER ke murder krne ke sequence smjha rahi thi wahi Chester dhundne nikal chuka tha god bars ko lekin usse mila NIGHTWALKER hasiya liye hue lekin usse still koi dar n laga aur wo khuleyaam bhagta hua kamre me aa chupa lekin wo yaha n ruka ussne chidhayya NIGHTWALKER ko jo usse bilkul acha n llaga hoga bilkul n iske liye wo natija bhugatna Hoga hi
Thodi der baad jab sab ikatha hua to unhe Chester kahi nhi dikha to unhone uske kamre ke door knock kiye lekin ussne nhi khola na hi awazz di it's means mughe kaise pata hoga but I guess that ki wo tapk gaya lekin awazze to n aayi ab bologe ki ander se soundproof hoga to may be lekin bahar ki awazze to,
Khair choro aage dekh lenge update me matlab padh lenge
Bhaya kuch chutt gaya hoga mere mind se to uspe jyada mind mt Krna bhaya kyunki ye review bohot jaldi likha hai maine biswas n kroge 10 minute pe pel daala ye review bhaya to kuch chutte to maaf krdena
Take care........
abhi ju ne asli review kya hote hai ye dekha kaha hai,iss review me maine bohot kuch miss kr diya likhna jaldibaaji me !!मुझे लगा मै कोई update पढ़ रहा हूँ...
क्या ये सच मे मात्र एक रिव्यू है?
Accha? par mujhe ye zyada pasand h... Ye frame me ekdum sahi fit hoti h...Koi bhi lag len aaap Rihanna Ji.. wo to perfect hi hogi.. par first ki baat hi alag thi.. ye bhi kamm nahi hai parr pehle wali zayada better thi
agar pehle wali perfect na hoti to aap usay kabhi lagati hi nahiAccha? par mujhe ye zyada pasand h... Ye frame me ekdum sahi fit hoti h...
Ye baat to h ...agar pehle wali perfect na hoti to aap usay kabhi lagati hi nahi