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Aaj pata chal jaega. Veer 4-5 updates me vegas se waapas aa jaega. Thanks! Keep supporting!Pitcher akhri shikar lagta hai veer ka uske baad to veer ko india a jana chahiye.
Awesome update
Arre bro, ab jab dhundh leta hu, toh fir unhe post karna toh banta hi hai. Warna dhundne me jo time waste hua uska kya fir? Dhanyavaad Anyways!Bhai aap pic ke bina bi update de do to chalega
Hmm to aava ko bhi mout ka bulava aaya par she is intelligent one usne sahi kiya jo divya ko et list khabar to kardi
And now time for the third member of house of killers dekhte hai is wale killer main kitni haivaniyat hai
Aise hi detective thodi bann gayi bhai.And iam surprised ka divya ka sahi samay par matha thanka or usne ek minute main pata lagaliya ki ye hona ho house of killers gang ka hi member hai
Aisa ho jaaye toh duniya me apraadh hi na band ho jaaye.Or ye house of killer wale bhosadi walo ko kya maza aata hai bure kaam karne main Sala itna paisa haa ki mehendi se mahengi waine kharid rahe hai to shanti jiyo na kyu dusro ki gaand main ungli karte hai
Or bhai mystic touch ka to jawab nahi chalo isi ke hone se hi veer ko divya jesi sundari ke hothon ka ras pine ko mila or mujhe lagta hai ki ab divya bhi khud ko rok nahi payegi mujhe to lagta hai bro aap ek baar divya ki or veer ki palang tod chudai karva hi do
Uske baad nik sounds like aa '' bosdiwala nokri or chokri dono legya '' hahahaha
Nik bolega accha sila diya tune mere pyaar ka yaar ne hi lute liya ghar yaar kaaa hahahahaha
Sorry ha bro par mujhe is samay nik ka haal imagein kar ke hasi aa rahi hahhahahaha
Koi na man. Apun bhi reply karne me late gota hi hai. Haatho me dherro kaam rehte hai.Wese bro sorry kyu ki pichle update ka revo nahi de paya jab ki mene read kiya tha but time nahi mila busy seduile ke chalte sorry bro
Baki ye wala update dhansu tha maza aagya
Thanks a lot man!
Aapke har ek update - sabr ka fal ek shaandaar dhaansu update hota hai - ye realize karwata hai
1. Deadly combo of minute details and matched pics -
Diveer! Ohhh! Noice!Behad tiring ,par , apka hardwork seedha humare diloon tak utarta
- hotel entrance se lekar seat taking tak
- lovely moments of Diveer
jese sab aankho k samne chal raha
Do ka past toh dekh hi chuke hai hum. Ava ka baaki hai.2. trio (sonu, kaera, Nat) inki alag mystery dikhti
Parents bhi nahi. Only parent. Since her dad is no more. Ava Sunn'na usse pasand nahi shayad.a) Sonu, Kaera ki pareshaani to writer ji ne kaafi had tak disclose kardi
bachi Nat ,
@ What changed you so much?' Mann me Suhana ne khud se sawaal kiya.
@ Nat! I prefer Nat!!! - ava se kya dushmani h bhai - ava yani ateet-
@ bio - ye bhi kaera ke mafiq par usse kam isolated hi h duniya se, iski duniya bas parents k irdgid hi lag rhi
dekhte kya takleef h inko 
She has confidence. Maybe jab tak woh apni security ke paas hai tab tak usse koi haani nahi pohucha sakta.b) teeno hi aam manav nahi h
Nat - death threat mili h phir bhi nidar... pehle concert, aur meeting me bhi - pehle pet pooja fir kaam duja - matlab koi tention, anxiety hi nahi
Sonu is innocent and a very kind girl man. Usme chhal kapat nahi hai.Sonu bhi accident k dauran khud ke khatre ka na soch kar ajnabi veer ka soch rahi thi
Kaera to h hi khali bina emotions ki
3. Nat ek ubharta sitara h...to killer house kyu eclipse ban raha hai - kya connection h bawa..
Wahin Killer ghar ke pillars bhi tagde - drugs- killings - wines- aage pata nhi kya kya milega
Suhana Divya ke ghar pe teddy patak rahi hogi.4. Suhana to baukhla hi gayi hogi -
@ veer - Nat ki chemistry,
@ You Bitcccchhhhhhhh!!!!"
Suhana zorr se bagal se chillaayi
- divya ka haye paisa
Don't let her eat you up!!!"
- Diveer ka yun akela jana
Aur Rahi sahi kasar werewolf bhai ne poori kardi teddy bear ko naa dekar
Hmm! Pari aur Veer ke beech communication tezz ho gaya hai. Aur Mystic Touch Pari nahi trigger karti. It gets triggered by its own. Woh self activating scroll hai. Kabhi bhi trigger ho sakta hai bhai.5. Pari (system) bhi tezi se bache se jawan ho raha
@ * Ding* Basic Enemy Tracker is in use...]
@ *Ding* [Intimidating Presence has been equipped.]
Kya kamaal ka sync develop ho gya dono k beech
Par jahan jawan ka josh veer ko maje de raha - @ Ding* [Mystic Touch has been triggered] [Enjoy! Hahaha~]-
to uski le bhi raha ache se
@ Ah!!! Shittttt!!! Here wo go again!!!!'
Double KLPD ho gayi ek to Diveer time par mission naamak najar lag gyi dusra mission ka time bhi beowolf ke liye half ho gya upar se Mystic Touch bhi daav par lag gaya
@ ek duwidha zaroor thi.
Kya pata intimidating Presence kaisa asar karega pitcher par
Hope so in sab k baad bhi mission smoothly complete ho
Dhanyavaad! Bhai! Thanks for such a lovely review. Keep supporting!6. Kuch funny ... kuch Comedy... Sath hi Sundariyoon ki jealousy maza aya
Aur waah, naa kaam (detective) bada na Suhaniya (dost) , sabse bada rupaiya
@ Divya : Done then! It's a deal!!!
You are half right.Very nice, I could be wrong but mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki system Veer ko socially, physically aur internal system ko interconnecting tareek se upgrade kar raha hai. Veer socially respected yaa strong logo se milta hai fir unse related missions solve karta hai un mission ke prize se uska system upgrade hota hai aur iss tarah ye interconnected cycle chalti rahti hai.
Ab dekhna hai ki Divya ne deal to karli hai magar kya wo akele kuch bhi kar payegi wahi Veer ko mission mil chuka hai to naa chahte hue bhi usko to involve hona hi hai. Magar abhi to Intimidating Presence aur Mystic Touch active hai to Divya to gayi aaj kaam se par kahin Suhana bhi naa aa jaye iss lapete mein.
Pitcher ka connection song pitch se? Dekhte hai.Ye Nat kaa attitude sirf dikhane waala hai yaa waakai mein wo change ho gayi hai superstar ban kar? Aur ab ye Picther kon hai kya iska relation singing pitch se hai jiski wajah se ye singers ko invite karta hai kisi type ke competition ke liye aur haarne waale ko maar diya jaata hai yaa marne par mazboor kar diya jata hai?
Harr update rahega. Sabr banaye rakhiye! Dhanyavaad bhai! Bane rahiyega!As usual kuch interesting jawaabo aur kuch intimidating sawaali se bhara ek majedaar aur romanchak update from the production house of Werewolf bhai. Aur ye jo update ek dum aise mod par khatam kiya jaata hai naa ki ye hi baat nikalti hai ki "Shit yaar, ab fir 3-4 din tak wait karo ki aage kya hoga, kaash ke update Roz aata"
Magar ye bhi pata hai ki jis shiddat se update likha jaata hai with so much detailing 2-3 din ka wait to justified bhi hai. Par phir bhi "dil ki ye aarzoo hai ki update roz mile".
Romance ki maatra badhegi bhai.Gajab update bhaya. Veer ki presence kmal kar gaii teeno babes sahem gaii.or finally finally finally at least ak romantic
Aise hi thodi ghar aur car khareed lii.secen dekhny ko mil hi gaya veer ki touching skill NY TU Divi ki halat kharab kr dii .VEER,DIVIYA ahh! Ab or inezaar ni hoga kab Inka inemate hoga . Or ye Divi to chalak lomdi nikli ak deal bhi kr li or apny department ko bhi chakma deny ka plan bna Liya . Or suhii ka behavior bhi veer KY
Dhanyavaad bhai! Nidhi ki behan ka naam Shreya hai. Ye Rajni kaun hai? Kahi ju Ragini ki baat toh nahi kar rahe?LIt Thoda badly sa gaya hai lagta hai adat pad gaii veer ki .
and most importantly the third killer THE PITCHER is now on .
or wolf bhaya Thoda bhut Bombay ka bhi scene dekha du PRNJAL , VEER KI MAA uski BEHEN or Ghar BAHENIN RAJNI ( HAYEE YE AOURAT GAJAB HAI MAST TOTA AK DAM ) NIDHI ma'am unki behen ( SALA NAM HI YAAD NI ARAHA US KA TU bechari YouTube streaming KY sapny dekh Rahi thi uska TU role hi vilopt hogaya timeline Sy ) unhain bhi.
at the end update was mind blowing.
let's see agy Kiya hota hai .
smash .
Kaha ka off topic dikh raha tujhe? Veer ke character ko leke hi baat ho rahi hai. Uske liye ab alag se thread kholu mein? :cringe:Off topic and unnecessary chit chat on story threads is not allowed.
Please Itne page naa bhare dusre logo ko dikkat hosakti hai
बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब अपडेट भाईUpdate - 94 ~ Here it comes.Ab tak...
Suhana (sighs) : Mein tumse do din me baat karti hu. I have to think. Mera mind kaam karna band ho gaya tumhaare kaaran...
Divya : Do din keval... I don't have much time Suhana... I can only wait for 4 days at max. Par do din ke andar mujhe tumhara answer chaahiye hi chahiye. No... Yadi tum nahi aayi toh mein tumhe lene aa jaungi.
Suhana : I... I'll think!!!
Divya : You have to come!!!!
*Call ends*
Aur call cut ho gaya. Suhana!!! Gehre chintan me doob gayi.
Iss nayi khabar ne... Usse poora duwidha me daal diya tha. Something... Must be done!
Ab aage...
*Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*
*Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*
Derr raat me, kamre me aati bas ek madhyam sii night bulb ki roshni me, Veer neend ki waadiyo me tha. Harr raat ki tarah Pari sleep mode me thi. Aur pratyek ratri ke jese hi uske kamre ka darwaaza aaj bhi khula hua tha.
Tabhi uske kamre me ek aahat hui.
*Chhhhammmmm* *Chhhhammmmm*
Aabhushno ki khanak hui.
Aur uss halke se ujaale me ek saaya umad ke aaya jiske agle shan hi...
*Click*
Veer ke room ka door andar se lock ho gaya. Veer apne aas paas ho rahi gatividhiyo se anjaan bas mast maula hoke so raha tha. Wo saaya dheere dheere ek aurat ke akaar me aakriti spasht hote hue aage badhi aur, Veer ke bistar par uske bagal se aa kar baith gayi.
Ek komal sa sparsh Veer ke gaal par hua, narm laal hontho ki chhuvan, uske baalo par ek haath thama aur usse sehlaane laga.
"Aaj nahi toh kal... Mein bhi tumhaare dil me ek sthir sthaan bana hi lungi. Tum dekhna! Tumhari saari naraazgi dur kar dungi mein, mere bacche...!!!"
Jii haan, Ye Shweta hi thi. Jo aksar Veer ke kamre me raat ko usse dulaar karne ke liye aa jaaya karti thi. Veer ke jaagte hue toh woh uss se baat bhi nahi kar sakti thi, keval yahi upaay tha uske paas Veer ko qareeb se nihaarne ka.
Par ho na ho, uss din ke baad se Shweta ka mann bada hi vichlit rehta tha. Wahi din, jab Veer ki nazre anayaas hi uske stano par theher gayi thi. Shweta aaye din uss ghatna ko yaad karti aur khud se sawaal jawaab karti. Ki akhir kyu Veer ne uske thano par nazre gadaayi thi?
Badhti umr me aurto ke prati aakarshan toh ek swabhaavik sii baat thi. Lekin, jo sawaal usse sabse zyaada sataa raha tha wo ye tha ki...
Ghar me itni aurato me, Veer ki nigaahein keval uske hi urozo par kyu gayi?? Wo bhi ek nahi, do baar. Jab woh kitchen me thi tab bhi toh...!!! Veer ne usse ghoor ke dekha tha. Pehli baar ka toh ek durghatna maan sakte hai par dusri baar? Wo jaanti thi ki dusri baar woh keval ek sanyog nahi tha. Veer ne waqai marzi se usse dekha tha. Aur yahi soch soch ke Shweta ki raat ki neendein udti jaa rahi thi. Harr raat uski bechaini me guzar rahi thi.
Wo abhi bhi Veer ko nihaarte hue uske bagal se lait issi soch me doobi hui thi jab ek hila dene wala vichaar uske mann se hote hue guzra. Jiske baare me sochte hi uski aankhein hairaani ke maare fel gayi. Aur uska muh achaanak hi khula ka khula reh gaya. Wo tezz awaaz me zorr se hairat bhari aah bharne hi waali thi ki usne apne dono haatho se apne khule muh ko dhak liya. Kahi koi jaag jaata toh musibat ho jaati.
Thar tharaate haatho ke kampan ko thaam woh Veer ko dekhi aur uske naino se aasuo ki boonde chhalak uthi.
'Toh kya ye baat thi mere bacche? Haan?'
Aasuo ki ek dhaara uske gaal se hote hue Veer ke takiye par girne lagi. Jese Shweta ko uska jawaab mil gaya tha. Uss sawaal ka jawaab jo usse itne dino se bechain kar raha tha.
"Ohhhh Mera baccchaaa~~ !!!!"
Aur agle hi pal usne Veer ke sarr ko thaam apne urojo me dhassa liya. Nirantar woh uske chehre ko chumne lagi.
*Chu~* *Puch* *Puchhh~* *Muuaaahhh*
Apna poora pyaar barsaane lagi.
"Mein ye baat kese bhul gayi??? Kese?????"
Usne aur kass ke Veer ko apne aaghosh me bhar liya. Veer ka chehra uske blouse me qaid adhnange thano par tika hua tha. Shweta bhali bhaati uss twacha se twacha ke sparsh ko mehsoos kar paa rahi thi.
"Mein kitni bewakoof hu. Hai na? Jo samajh hi na paayi thi ab tak. Anjaan banti rahi. Agyaani ekdum. Jabki ek Maa hone ke naate mujhe pehle hi samajh jaana chahiye tha. Fir bhi mein..."
Usne Veer ke chehre ko apne chehre ke paas kiya,
"Mein ye kese bhul gayi ki jab tum keval ek saal ke the tab hi tumhaari asli Maa tumhe chorr ke chali gayi thi. Nahi!!! Woh tumhari asli Maa ho hi nahi sakti. Yadi woh tumhari asli Maa hoti toh tumhe aise akela chorr ke nahi jaati. Hargiz nahi! Woh bhi aise parivaar me. Uss din bhi, Kavya ki party me tumhaare pita Brijesh mujhe mana rahe the. Par ab mein waapas nahi jaane waali. Woh aurat kese tumhe iss haalat me chorr ke jaa sakti hai? Mene apni Bhumi ke liye poori zindagi guzaar dii. Aur fir bhi mujhe uski itni chinta rehti hai. Toh fir woh aurat kese tumhe...!!?? Haan! Wo tumhari Maa nahi. MEIN!!! Mein tumhari Maa hu Veer. Shayad Bhagwaan bhi yahi chaahte the. Tabhi mujhe koi beta na mila. Aur fir mujhe ab tum mile ho. Aur tabhi shayad woh aurat tumse vanchit hai. Haan!! Yahi baat hai."
"Tum dekhna mere laal. Mein tumhe itna pyaar dungi, ki kabhi tumhe ek Maa ki kami ab se khalne hi nahi dungi. Dherr saara, Khoob saara pyaar dungi apne bacche ko."
"Mein nadaan ye samajh rahi thi ki tum aakarshan ke chalte mere stano ko dekh rahe the. Aur ho bhi sakta hai ki ye ek kaaran raha ho. Par... Par ek aur kaaran tha, hai na mere bacche? Hai na? Mein sahi hu na? Tumne maatr ek saal tak hi apni Maa ka doodh piya hai. Aur isliye tum mere stano ko dekh rahe the na? Hai na mere bete? Mein bewakoof ab tak ye samajh na paayi ki mera baccha isliye meri chhaathi ghoor raha tha. Of course! Tabhi toh tumne mujhe dekha. Na Ragini ko, na Suman ko, Na Aabha ko, na uss Sonali ko. Sirf mujhe!!! Kyuki khoon ke rishte se mein tumhari ek Maa na sahi, par ek stepmom toh hu hi na? Aur tumhare andar ka nanha baccha ek Maa ke dugdh ki maang kar raha tha. Jiske liye wo hamesha se tadapta aaya hai. Aur ussi ke chalte tumhari nazre apne aap hi meri upar chali gayi, hai na?"
"Yahi baat hai na Veer??? Haaayeee~ Mein ek abhaagan. Kaash mein uss samay maujood hoti. Tumhe apne doodh se stanpaan karwa paati. Mera bacchaaa~!!!"
*Muuuuaaaahhhh*
"Jee bhar ke mein apne bacche ko doodh ki tripti karwa paati. Iss se bada sukh mere liye aur kya ho sakta tha?"
Wo gham me soch soch kar Veer ko chumti rahi. Jab iss baar anayaas hi uske mastishq me ek bhuchaal fela dene waala vichaar aaya. Woh sannn sii hoke reh gayi, ekdum sthir.
Uska ek haath kaanpte hue apne aap hi Veer ke sarr ke peeche gaya. Aur dusra uske laal rang ke blouse pe. Ahista se uska blouse uske haath se neeche sarka aur ek safed bra ka cup ubhar ke saamne aaya jisme uske ek vishaal dugdh ki thaili qaid thi. Uska seena tezz saaso ke chalte zorro se upar neeche ho raha tha. Veer ke sarr par maujood haath se usne Veer ko dhakel ke apne stano ki orr kiya aur...
Jese hi Veer ke chehra uski bra me band uske doodh se takraaya, Shweta ke antar mann me se ek tezz awaaz aayi,
SHWETA!!!!! YE TUM KYA KAR RAHI HO?????
"Ahhhhh!!???"
Aur usne jhatke se Veer ko apne stan se alag kar diya. Wo ghabraati hui ekdum se waha se uthi aur apni haalat ko sahi karne me lag gayi. Poori paseene se bheeg chuki thi woh.
'Hey bhagwaan!!! Ye mein kya karne jaa rahi thi??? Mera Veer ab koi baccha nahi hai. Woh bada ho chuka hai. Ye mein kya karne waali thi? Veer ko apna stanpaan karwaane ka samay beet chuka hai. Mein uss samay me maujood nahi thi. Ohhhh nooooooooooo~ Ye mein sach me... Kya karne jaa rahi thi? Jese Veer ke andar ka baccha dugdh ki talaash me tha, kahi mere andar ka baccha bhi... Usse stanpaan karwaane ki talaash me toh nahi? Nahi!! Ye ab mumkin nahi.'
Ek aah bharte hue woh uthi aur jaane se pehle ek baar fir Veer ko dekhi. Uska haath apne aap hi uske ek doodh par chala gaya. Aur usne haule se usse masal diya,
"Ab toh inme doodh bhi nahi. Mein bhi na... Kya kya sochne lagi thi."
Ek antim baar Veer ke sarr par haath ferr aur usse choomte hue woh waha se nikal gayi.
***
Subah hui. Roz ki tarah aalam aaj bhi wahi tha. Dining table par sabhi maujood the, Veer aur Sonali aapas me food truck ke vishay me baat cheet kar rahe the. Toh wahi Aabha aur Bhumika khaane me lagi hui thi, aur baaki teeno mahilaaye andar kitchen me vyast thi.
Sonali : Toh itni thi pichle do hafto ki kamaayi. Kul milaake sab accha hi chal raha hai.
Veer : Hmm! Tum abhi aise hi chalne do. Baaki jo trucks hai unke workers ko bhi inform karna ki abhi hume lagan ke saath keval quality aur fame par hi focus karna hai kuch hafte.
Sonali : Thik hai! Fir uske baad?
Veer : Uske baad mein tumhe nayi dish dunga. Aisi jo kahi bhi nahi milegi. Wo hamaari signature dish rahegi.
Sonali : Kyaaaa??? Tumhe aati hai? Kese seekhi tumne? Ek minute!! Iska kya matlab ki ye dish kahi bhi nahi milegi?
Veer : Hahahaha! Tum bas aam khao, guthliya mat gino.
Sonali (khuspusaate hue) : Itni hi chinta hai truck ki toh khud kyu nahi chalaate?
Veer (smiles) : Kuch kaha tumne?
Sonali : K-Kuch nahi!!
Veer ne sharaarti dhang se usse dekha jese bataana chaah raha tha ki usne sab sunn liya hai. Aur Sonali ye jaante hi muh fula ke neeche sarr jhuka ke khaane me lag gayi.
Veer ki nigaahe fir apne daayi orr gayi jaha Aabha baithi hui thi. Par, woh kuch udaas sii lag rahi thi.
Veer : Kya hua?
Aabha : ....
Veer : Aabha???
Aabha (hichakte hue): H-Huh????
Veer : Kya hua? Kuch baat hai kya?
Aabha : N-Nahi!! Kuch bhi toh nahi!
Veer : Jhooth mat bolo, mein jaanta hu kuch baat hai. Kaho!!! Mujhse kaho!!
Aabha ek shan ke liye usse dekhi par fir apne aas paas Bhumika aur Sonali ko dekh woh chup reh gayi. Veer ne uski pareshaani samajhte hi khud ko uski orr jhukaaya aur apne kaan ko uske muh ki orr laate hue woh theher gaya. Ishaara samajhte hue wo Veer ke kaan ki orr jhuki aur boli,
Aabha : Baat aisi hi hai Veer jii! Kuch khaas nahi!
Veer : Wo mein decide karunga ki baat faaltu hai ya nahi. Tum mujhe sach sach batao sab. Kya baat hai?
Aur fir dono hi ekdum dheemi awaaz me ek dusre se baat karne lage,
Aabha : Darasal...
Veer : Kaho!
Aabha : Mujhe aisa lagta hai ki mein... Mein kisi kaam ki nahi.
Veer : Huh???
Bhumika : Hmm? Kya baatein ho rahi hai? Aapas me?
Sonali : !!!!???
Veer : Woh... Humaare beech ki baat hai, it's a bit personal.
Bhumika : Ohhh! O-Okay!!
Veer (Aabha se) : Kaho ab!!
Aabha (khuspusaate hue) : Maa ji NSS ki sadasya bann gayi hai. Bol chaal me kitni aage hai woh. Sonali aapka business acchi tarah sambhaal rahi hai. Aapki Tai jii aur Didi kitni badi hotel ko sambhaalti hai. Ragini jii, ghar ka poora dhyaan rakhti hai. Aur woh kitni qaabil hai ye hume bataane ki zaroorat nahi. Par mein... Keval mein hi... Mujhse accha khaana yaha sabhi bana leti hai... Wo jo karti hai, woh mein kar hi nahi sakti. Aur isliye, mein jaanti hu ki... M-Mein... Mein kisi kaam ki nahi.
Aabha ki baat sunn Veer ko ek nayi jaankaari mili. Wo iss baat se kese anjaan reh gaya.
[Inferior Complex Masterrr~]
'T-That's...!!!'
[Maaasteerrrr~ Aabha sahi hai. Potentially dekha jaaye toh woh kuch nahi kar rahi hai. Aise me uske andar ye bhavnaaye aaengi hi.]
'Hmm~ Come to think of it. Mene jab Aabha ko pehli baar check kiya tha toh... Kya dekha tha? Usse ghoomne firrne ka shauk hai na?'
[Yes!! Master! System me stored information me yahi baat hai.]
'Hmm~'
Veer : Tum chinta mat karo! Tumhari ye pareshaani jald hi dur ho jaegi. Mera vaada hai ye. Aur ab iss tarah se sochna band kar do. Theek hai?
Aabha : H-Hmm!
Aabha Veer ki saantvna lete hue shaant ho gayi. Lekin, baat toh sach thi. Veer ko iss massle par bhi dhyaan dena hoga aage chal ke.
Woh sabhi bhi baithe hi thi ki itne me anadar se saari mahilaaye nikal ke baahar aa gayi. Suman muskuraati hui aayi aur usne Veer ki plate me ek aur bread roll rakh diya,
Veer : Arre mera ho gaya hai already.
Suman : *smiles*
Wo bas smile pass karte hue uske paani ke glass me paani bhari aur uske saamne Bhumika ke bagal se baith gayi.
Wahi Ragini bhi aayi aur table ki main chair par baith woh apni aur Suman aur Shweta ki plate lagaane lagi. Shweta Ragini ke saamne waali dusre chorr par maujood chair par baith gayi. Toh khamoshi ko todte hue Bhumika ne baat shuru kii,
Bhumika : Mom~ Kal bhi aap hotel se jaldi laut aayi. Kya baat hai?
Shweta (Veer ko dekhte hue) : Mene kuch decide kiya hai beta.
Bhumika : Kya mom??
Veer ko chorr ke sabhi ki nazre Shweta ke upar thi, toh wahi bechaari Shweta Veer ko sabhi ki nazro se bach ke chori chori dekh rahi thi.
Shweta : Yahi ki mein hotel ki dekh rekh ab chorr rahi hu.
Bhumika : Whhhhaaaattttt????
Aur iss baar na keval woh sabhi, balki Veer ka muh bhi bread roll ko chabaate chabaate rukk gaya.
Bhumika : K-Kya matlab hai aapka?
Shweta : Wahi jo tumne suna beta.
Bhumika : Nahiiiiiii!!! Par ye achanak se aap..!!
Shweta (Veer ko dekhte hue) : Meri kuch aur bhi zimmedaari hai, jisse mein hamesha se nazar-andaaz karti aayi hu. Aur isliye, ab mein poora ka poora dhyaan uss par dena chaahti hu.
Waha maujood sabhi hsohiyaar the. Shweta ne ye baat kisse dekh ke kiske liye kahi thi woh sabhi samajh chuke the. Aur wo khamosh hi rahe. Keval Veer hi tha jo sarr jhukaaye khaane me laga hua tha.
Bhumika : I... I understand Mom!!
Shweta : Hmm~
Aur kuch iss tarah unka aaj ka breakfast hua.
Jab Veer car nikaalte hue kahi jaane ke liye baahar porch me aaya toh Ragini tezz qadmo ke saath baahar aake darwaaze ki dehleez par khadi ho gayi.
Ragini : Aaj kidhar jaa rahe ho?
Veer : Wahi! Kaam se thoda.
Ragini : Aisa kya kaam rehta hai Veer tumhara...!!?
Wo tik kar khade hote hue puchi,
Veer : Zaroori kaam hai Bhabhi aaj. Business se related hi hai.
Ragini : Mujhse bhi zaroori...!?
Veer, jo car ka door kholne hi jaa raha tha woh acahanak Ragini ke iss tarah ke sawaal par peeche mud usse hairat me dekhne laga,
Veer : I...
Ragini (smiles) : Kab tak aaoge??
Veer : Jaldi aane ki koshish karunga.
Ragini muskaan bhare uske nazdeek aayi aur...
*Chu~*
Uske gaal par harr roz ki tarah wahi ek meethi pyaari sii kiss usse dedi. Aur uske baad usne apna gaal aage kar diya. Wo makhmali twacha, wo gora gora gaal aur wo halke paseene se bheege kitchen me kaam karne ki wajah se uski kalam ke aas paas chipke hue baal.
Veer ne ek mauka nahi gawaaya aur usne Ragini ke gaal ko apne hontho se choom liya.
Uski shirt ki collor vyavasthit kar Ragini ne usse rawaana kiya, aur Veer car ko reverse lene laga. Tab reverse lete time hi uski nazre upar terrace par chali gayi jaha Suman khadi hui thi. Haatho me uske chhat par sukhaane ke liye kapde the, aur wo ajeeb sii muskaan hontho par sajaaye Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Ragini ke ghar ki terrace aisi thi ki waha se porch, parking area poora nazar aata tha.
'Fuuuucckkkk!!! Ohh Thank God!! Suman hai....'
Pal bhar ke liye Veer ki gaand hi fatt gayi thi. Yadi aur koi hota toh na jaane kya hota.
*Vrrrrooooooooooommmmm*
Aur woh waha se raahat ki ek saans lete hue rawaana ho gaya.
***
Vatsala Steel Industries
Evening ~ 4:38 PM
Veer maujood tha iss waqt iss badi company ki main branch ke baahar. Woh akela nahi tha, saath me Karan bhi tha uske.
Karan : Sab ho gaya. Par meri samajh me nahi aaya Veer. Mene tumhe baaki 2 companies ke bhi shares ke offers dilwaaye. Woh toh iss se bhi badi thi. Fir tumne ye kyu chuni? Look! Mere paas report bhi taiyaar hai Veer. Vatsala Steel Industries pichle kayi mahino se loss me chal rahi hai. Aise me apna paisa iske shares me lagaana... Umm... Aur ye ek choti company hai yadi hum baaki do companies se compare kare toh...
Veer (smiles) : Tumhe pata lag jaega jald hi ki kyu mene Vatsala par invest kiya.
Karan : Huh???
Of course!! Karan nahi jaanta tha, ki Veer ke paas kya tha.
STOCK MASTER!!!
Woh skill jo usne pehli baar use kii thi. Bhale hi usme 100% success rate nahi tha. Par kam se kam 70% toh tha. Aur isliye Veer ne 3 badi companies me se sabse choti waali ko apna pehla target chuna. Yadi loss bhi hoye toh utna nahi.
Karan : Well! Anyways! Ahhh! Din bhar ki bhaag daud me thakaan ho gayi. How about some coffee?
Veer (smiles) : Mein chai waala banda hu...
Karan (smiles) : You know coffee is better than Chai...
Veer : Ab iss behes pe mein raat bhar bol sakta hu.
Karan : Hahahahaha~ Lets's go!!
Woh dono car me baithe hi the ki Veer ka phone baj utha.
*Ring* *Ring*
Caller Kavya thi,
Veer : Hello? Bol Kavya!
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaaa~ Aap kaha ho???
Veer : Umm... Mein thoda abhi...
Kavya : Mein, Arohi dii aur Kritika City mall me hai apne. I know aap kahi baahar hi hoge, toh aap yaha aa rahe ho. Okay? Bye bye!!!! Muaaaahhhh~
Veer : Wh-Whaaaattttttt???
*Call ends*
Aur ek jhatke me Kavya ne apni baat bol phone cut kar diya.
Veer : Ye ladki bhi na...
Karan : Kya hua?
Veer : Coffee nahi peena? Chalo City mall laga lo gaadi.
Karan : Whaaatttttt? Veer maana ki mein rich family se belong karta hu par iska matlab ye nahi ki mein mall me coffee peeyunga. Tumhe itna sab karne ki zaroorat nahi...
Veer : You idiot!!
Karan : H-Huh???
Veer : Kavya ka phone tha. Usne kaha hai ki woh, Arohi dii, aur uski friend Kritika waha par hai toh usne mujhe bulaaya hai. Toh chalo ab, jo bhi peena hai ab bhi wahi piyenge.
Karan : Ohhh!!! I see!!! Right!! Mujhe yaad aaya, mein Kavya ki b'day party par nahi aa paaya tha. Uss se sorry kehna please. Mein baahar tha.
Veer : Chal toh rahe hai abhi, tum khud hi kehna ye uss se.
Karan : Arre yaar! Usse manaana boht mushqil hai.
Veer : Toh aise kaam hi kyu karte ho?
Karan : Ughhh!!! Fine! Fine! I'll try to convince her.
Veer : Wese... Miss Kaera kya laut aayi?
Karan : Huh?? Tum toh aise puch rahe ho jese tum se zyaada baat meri unse hoti hai.
Veer : No really, pichle past ke 3-4 dino se mujhe unka koi bhi message nahi aaya hai.
Karan : Ohhhh! Well! Yeah! Wo busy thi. Aaj raat ko aaengi woh waapas.
Veer : I see! And what about Miss Sonia?
Karan : Huh? What? How would I know about her? Tumhe unki badi behan se puchna chahiye.
Veer : Miss Suhana?
Suhana ke baare me sochte hi Veer ko Suhana ki teddy bear ko zorr zorr se maar kar haivaano waali woh hassi ki chhavi yaad aa gayi.
Veer : No! Ahem! I think directly puchna hi sahi rahega.
Karan : Hmm~ Wese... Tumne kya bataaya? Kritika bhi hai waha mall me?
Veer : Hmm? Yeah!!!
Karan : Ohhh! Ahem... Toh hume unhe zyaada derr wait nahi karwaana chahiye. Nikalna chahiye.
Veer : Hmm??
Veer ne apni nazar paini kar Karan ko dekha jo apna chehra chhupaane ki koshish kar raha tha.
'Ohhhhh I see~'
[Yesssss Maaasssttteerrr! Something fishy is going on. Ehehehe~ I can smell it. Something is cooking around here. Hehe~]
'Bilkul Pari! I agree Hahahaha~ '
[Wahahahahahahahaha~ ]
Karan : Wh-What??? Man you look scary... What happened!!?
Veer : Nothing!!!
Aur Karan ne Veer ki ajeeb sii muskaan ko ignore kar gaadi aage badha dii.
***
City Mall
Evening ~ 5:12 PM
Veer aur Karan jab saath me pohuche toh mall me jidhar se bhi wo guzarte, ladkiyo ki nazre unn dono par jaati. Veer pehle se kayi guna handsome jo tha. 100 ka appearance tha uske paas. Wahi Karan, jo ameer khandaan me pal badh ke paida hua. Janm se hi royalty ka aura tha uske ird gird. Bilkul apni behan ki tarah. Halaki, Kaera me ye sab gunn kuch zyaada hi koot koot kar bhare the par looks aur ettiquetes me woh bhi boht aage tha.
Kavya ko firse phone kar pata chala ki saari ladkiya log upar food zone me baithi hui thi.
Aur jese hi Veer aur Karan ko unn teeno ne aate hue dekha toh apni chairs se woh teeno hi haath dikha ke unhe bulaane lagi.
Kavya toh seedhe uthi aur daudate hue wo Veer ki taraf aayi. Veer ne apne aap ko attack ke liye prepare kar liya tha.
Woh hawa ke jhoke ki tarah tezz raftaar me aayi aur zorr se koodate hue Veer ki chaathi me ghuss gayi.
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaaa~~~
Ek baar fir, uske aam Veer ki chaathi par apna ubhra ubhra ehsaas chorr gaye.
Aas paas ke sabhi log unhe iss tarah ghoor ke dekh rahe the, par akhir Kavya ko apne bhaiya ke prati pyaar dikhaane me kaha sharm aane waali thi? Uss din park me bhi nahi aayi thi. Aur aaj bhi nahi.
Kavya : Aa gaye aap eehehe~
Veer : Hmm! Yaha dekho kaun aaya hai.
Karan : Ahahahaha~ Hey Kavya! Hello~ Kaisi ho?
Kavya : Hmph~ Bhaiya ye kaun hai?
Karan (mann me) : Fuckkkk!!
Veer : Ye wahi bhaiya hai jo tumhare b'day me nahi aaye the.
Kavya : Haan toh inse keh do ki yaha aane ki ab koi zaroorat nahi hai.
Karan : Arre behan!! Kyu taang kheech rahi hai? I'm sorry na!!!
Kavya : Hmph~ Let's go Bhaiya!
Karan samajh chuka tha ki Kavya ko manaane ke liye usse aur mehnat ki zaroorat thi.
Aur yaha se nikla, Woh teeno apni table par aake baithe.
Veer (smiles) : Hey diii~
Arohi (smiles) : Heyyyy~
Kritika : Ahh!! H-Hello~~
Veer : Hi there!
Karan : H-Hello Kritika!
Veer Arohi ke bagal se baith gaya toh wahi Kavya Veer ke bagal se. Kritika jo uske saamne baithi thi uske bagal se Karan viraajmaan ho gaya.
Karan : Hello dii~
Arohi : Hello~
Kavya : Dii! Aap gande logo se baat mat karo.
Karan : Ughhh!
Kavya ki baat par sabhi hassne lage. Kritika bhi. Fir jab usne bagal me Karan ka murjhaaya hua muh dekha toh woh uske kaan me jhukte hue boli,
Kritika : You will have to give her a gift!
Karan : Ahhhh!!!
Kritika : Yes!
Karan (khuspusaate hue) : Tumhe pata hai? Will you help me?
Kritika : Umm... Okay!!! Sure!!!
Karan waha se jab bahana bana ke utha toh wahi Kritika bhi washroom ke bahaane uth gayi aur dono hi wahi mall me Kavya ke liye gift dhundhne lage. Aur idhar Veer mann hi mann Karan ko shabaashi de raha tha.
'Launda toh tezz nikla. Kya baat hai!!'
Tabhi...
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaa~ Aapko pata hai? hehehe~
Veer : Hmm???
Kavya : Arohi dii... Look at her!!
Kehte hue usne Arohi ke peeche jaa kar achanak hi uske baalo ko peeche kar diya, jis kaaran se uske kaan jo pehle dhake hue the woh nazar aa gaye. Aur unn kaano me...
Veer ki dii hui baaliya thi.
Veer : !!!???
Kavya : Dii pe kitni jach rahi hai na? Look! Mene pendant bhi pehna hai aapka.
Veer : Ohhhhh~
Kavya : Aur aapko pata hai? Dii ne bachpan se apne kaan nahi chhidwaaye the. She hated piercings. Darr tha bachpan ka unko hahaha~ And you know... aap ki baali ke liye she even... Mmmppphhhhh~~???
Arohi ne peeche palat ke agle hi pal Kavya ka muh apne haatho se band kar diya. Uske gaal gulaabi the...
Arohi (blushes) : Y-You.... Kavya... Tumne kyu...!!??
Veer (smiles) : It really looks good on you.
Arohi : Ahhhh!~
Kavya : mmphhh~ Haahhh!! Dekha? Mene kaha tha na hahaha~
Bechari Arohi sharm ke maare apna muh ferr lii. Kuch hi derr me Karan aur Kritika bhi laut aaye aur jab Karan ne Kavya ko gift diya toh hona kya tha? Apna Harry potter ka poora set dekhte hi Kavya ne ek pal me Karan ko maaf kar diya.
Sab hassi mazaak hi chal raha tha jab achanak hi...
*Ring* *Ring*
Veer ke phone ki ghanti baji.
'Miss Suhana!!?'
Veer : Hello?
Suhana : Kaha ho tum?
Veer : Mein abhi mall me tha. Kyu kya...
Suhana : Come fast!
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : Baithe mat raho waha, utho aur niklo waha se jaldi. Come asap!!! Meet me at my office. It's urgent!!!
Veer : O-Okay!!!
*Call ends*
Kavya : Kya hua bhaiya?
Veer : Mujhe nikalna hoga. Emergency hai!! Karan! Tum inhe drop kar dena. Please!!! I have to go!
Karan : O-Okay but hey...!??
Par Veer ne kuch nahi suna aur woh waha se nikal gaya.
Woh jese hi Suhana ke cabin me pohucha toh Suhana apna angutha daanto tale dabaaye kisi chinta me window ke nazdeek khadi hui thi.
Veer : What happened?
Suhana : Do you remember?
Veer : Remember what?
Suhana : Yahi ki mene tum pe 3 favours kiye the. You have to pay back right?
Veer : Yes! I remember!
Suhana : Then get ready...
[Ohh no~ Here it comes!!!!]
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : You and me!!!!! We are going...
Veer : Whaaatttt??? K-Kaha????
Suhana kuch derr tak shaant rahi. Uske baad woh Veer ki taraf dekhte hue boli,
Suhana : Las Vegas!!!!
Veer : WHAAAAAAAATTTTT?????
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!
Ye update kaafi mehnat se samay deke likha hai. Around 4.5k words ka hai. Toh likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Also, iske agle update se beginning hoegi House of the Killers arc ki. Par uske pehle, mein yaha ab ek break lunga.
Story me updates around 1 week tak band rahenge. Mene kam se kam break hi liya hai. Fir milte hai naye arc me naye dhamaake ke saath. Dhanyavaad!!!
Bahut hi acha update tha ye. Maja aa gaya. To yaha aaye to ye log kisi aur kaam ke liye the. Lakin wo connect inke hi kaam se ho gaya sahi hai. Ab jb ki 3rd villain ka pata chl chuka hai ki wo kaha milega to ab dekhte hai. Veer kaise use pakdta hai. Sath me is baar uska bahut kuch daaw par laga hai.Update - 105 ~ The Pitcher (1)Ab tak...
Kuch derr ke intezaar ke baad hi unhe andar jaane ke kiye allowed kar diya gaya.
Aur jese hi woh andar pohuche...
Natalia wahi baithi hui thi. Ek table ke paas ek seat par. Dinner yahi hona tha.
Usne teeno ko aate hue dekha aur bas ek halki sii muskaan ke saath boli,
"Welcome!!! Have a seat!!!"
Ab aage...
Golden Nugget Hotel & Casino,
Downtown, Las Vegas.
Night ~ 11:38 PM
Ye thi Downtown ki kaafi mashoor hotel me se ek, Golden Nugget Hotel.
Jidhar casinos ka bhi prabandh tha. Andar ka nazaara bhi ekdum khubsoorat tha. Hotel cheekh cheekh ke ye batlaa rahi thi ki kitna paisa laga hua tha usme.
Aur issi aalishaan hotel ke VIP area me, food court me baithi hui thi Natalia. Concert ke baad dinner ka plan tha jo ki usne Divya ke sang rakha hua tha. Downtown me hi uska concert hua tha. Aur udhar par hi ye hotel bhi maujood thi. Toh samay ki bachat aur nazdeeki ke liye Natalia ne apna reservation iss hotel me karwa liya tha.
Divya, Suhana aur Veer ko jab baahar se permission mili tab jaa kar woh andar VIP area me pravesh kiye.
Aur andar aate hi, Natalia ne unhe baithne ke liye kaha. Uski nazre saamne khade teeno log par gadi hui thi.
"Welcome! Have a seat!"
Ek halki muskaan ke saath woh boli. Par apni jagah se woh tass se mass nahi hui. Suhana ki bauhe upar chadh uthi Natalia ke iss ravaiyye ko dekh. Toh uska andaaza sahi tha matlab.
Natalia uss muqaam par aa chuki thi jaha ab woh Suhana aur baaki sab ke liye khade hokar unka swaagat bhi nahi karne waali thi.
'What changed you so much?' Mann me Suhana ne khud se sawaal kiya.
Parantu, usne kuch bola nahi. Teeno Natalia ke saamne maujood chairs par virajmaan ho gaye.
Divya : So? What's the matter?
Divya ne seedhe seedhe hi puch liya. Akhir aisi kya baat ho gayi thi jo itni badi star Natalia ne khud usse call kar ke usse bulaaya? Saaf tha ki kisi investigation se sambandhit hi kaam tha. Par kya?
Natalia : Let's have our dinner first. You guys must be starving too. Order anything you want.
Divya : Ohhh!
Natalia ne pehle dinner karne ka faisla liya. Aur waqai iss baat se Divya bhi sehmat thi. Concert me baithe baithe bhook toh unn sabhi ko lag aayi thi. Pehle pait pooja fir kaam dooja waali baat unhe sahi lagi.
Aur sabhi waha lazeez khaane par toot pade.
Natalia khaate samay kisi se baat nahi kar rahi thi. Uska poora dhyaan apne khaane par tha. Jis kaaran se Divya aur Suhana ne bhi apni bolti band kar lii. Wahi Veer pal pal apni nazre utha ke Natalia ko dekhta. Paas se toh aur bhi qayamat lag rahi thi woh. Natalia ne bas ek hi nazar daali thi Veer pe, uske baad se usne Veer ko nahi dekha jese maano woh usme ekdum uninterested thi.
Toh wahi Suhana bhi pal do pal Natalia ko chori chhipe dekhti, mann me uske dherr saare sawaal uth rahe the. Natalia uske saath aisa behave kyu kar rahi thi? Kahi aisa toh nahi ki woh usse bhul gayi ho? Suhana ek bhaari chinta me doobi hui thi.
Aur ant me akhir waali kursi par Divya ke maathe par bhi silvatein chhayi hui thi. Khaana toh woh kha rahi thi, par uska dhyaan khaane par kam aur Natalia ne usse kyu bulaaya uss par zyada tha.
Natalia aur Divya ek dusre ko jaante the. Natalia jaanti thi ki Divya Suhana ki dost hai aur ek private detective hai Vegas me. Balki, Sonia aur Kaera bhi ye baat jaanti thi. Yaha tak ki bachpan me hi woh sabhi Divya se mili chuki thi. Akhir Divya aur Suhana school, college se hi ek saath the.
Jab sabhi ka khaana peena ho gaya toh Divya se aur raha na gaya.
Apne baalo ke bun ko khol, usne hawa me apni kaali zulfe lehraayi aur kursi par adab ke saath baithate hue boli,
Divya : Dinner is done. What's the deal now?
Suhana : Right? Such a big celebrity Miss Natalia Martin. Why did you call us poor souls here?
Suhana ne ek taunt maara. Bhala hum jese gareeb logo ki kya zaroorat pad gayi inn maharani sahiba ko? Woh nakli muskaan ke saath Natalia ko chidhaane ke liye boli.
Natalia : Call me Nat!
Suhana : Ohhh! I thought 'Ava' would be much preferred by you!? Hmm?
Uske muh se 'Ava' shabd nikalte hi Natalia ke maathe par lakeerein chhaa gayi aur uski aankhein Suhana ko ghoor kar dekhne lagi.
Natalia : Nat! I prefer Nat!!! Your mood is off! Looks like you didn't enjoy my show.
Aur iss baar ek waar yaha se Natalia ne kiya. Uska kehna tha ki Suhana ne lagta hai uska show enjoy nahi kiya isliye kaafi bekaar mood me thi.
Suhana : Huh?
Iske pehle ki dono ke beech koi yuddh shuru hota...
Veer : Ahem...!
Veer ke beech me awaaz karte hi sabhi ki nazre uss par tik gayi. Aur Divya ko tabhi dhyaan aaya,
Woh Veer ke daayi orr baithi hui thi. Veer ke kandhe par haath rakh Natalia ko samjhaate hue woh boli,
Divya : Right! This is Veer. Veer! She's Natalia. Sonia's childhood friend.
Veer ne nod karte hue haath aage badhaaya toh Natalia ne bhi haath aage kar uska haath thaama aur handshake kiya.
Haath aapas me sparsh hote hi...
'Soft...!'
[Hehe~ ]
Natalia : Nice to meet you!
Veer : It's a pleasure!
Divya : Also... You know what?
Natalia : Hmm?
Divya (smiles) : He's a mutual friend of Sonia and Kaera.
*Silence*
Divya ki baat sunte hi Nat ki aankho me pal bhar ke liye jese ek chamak sii aayi. Usne Veer ko punaah ghoora aur ek halki muskaan uske hontho par sajj gayi.
Veer : Umm... About concert. The way you started...
Natalia (smiles) : Hindi aati hai mujhe! Hum Hindi me baat kar sakte hai. Just because I'm half white doesn't mean I have forgotten my native language. In fact, I prefer Hindi more than English.
Veer : Ah!! I see!
Veer ye nahi bhul sakta tha. Thodi derr pehle hi usne Nat ko check kiya tha. Concert ke dauraan. Tab usne dekha tha...
*Ding*
[Name : Ava Martin
Stage/Alias Name : Natalia Martin
Age : 26
Status : Singer/ Businesswoman/ Celebrity
Bio : Ava Martin! Jayesh aur Grace Martin ki eklauti beti. Aur Sonia, Kaera ki childhood friend. Pita hindustani the. Par dedh saal pehle hi unka dehaant ho gaya. Grace Martin head injury ke chalte coma me hai. Maa ke prati Ava ka sabse zyaada jhukaav raha hai. Aur isliye woh apna naam apni maa ke surname ke saath poora karti hai. Unhi ke liye woh gaati hai, Grace hi uska sab kuch hai ab. Pita ki maut ke baad usne singing ki duniya me qadam rakha. Aur dedh saal me hi usne khud ka label 'Blue' records khada kar liya hai.
Favourability : 7
Relationship : Strangers.]
Veer ye jaanta tha ki Ava ka janm India me hi hua tha. Yadi woh bachpan me India me thi aur uske pita India me hi kaam karte the toh zaahir hai ki woh India me hi paida hui thi. Ek anumaan toh laga hi sakte the.
Shayad yahi ek kaaran tha jo usse Hindi, English dono hi badi acche se aati thi.
Veer taajub tha ye jaan ke ki baahar jaane ke bawajood, Ava apni native language bhooli nahi thi.
Veer : Toh... Aapke show ki starting ke kuch pal... Jab aapne bina kisi instruments ke woh chand panktiya gaayi thi. Khaas kar antim panktiya... And letting go, I no longer need that vile past. Jis tarah aapne dheere dheere shabdo ko uthaa ke high notes par pohchaaya. Woh mera sabse favourite part tha.
Veer ne dil se muskuraate hue kaha. Nat ne usse jab iss tarah dekha toh woh jese kuch kehna hi bhool gayi. Shan bhar ke liye Veer ko dekhi aur fir usne giggle karte hue Veer par se nazre ferr lii,
Nat (giggles) : Ohkay! Thank you...!
Idhar Suhana aur Divya kabhi Nat ko dekhti toh kabhi Veer ko. Unhe aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jese woh faaltu me yaha baithi hui thi. Haan bhai. Aapas me hi mauj kar lo. Hum toh jese chutiye hai yaha. Kuch aise hi thoughts unke mann me aa rahe the.
Nat : You have a keen perception!
Veer : No! Not as much as yours.
Nat (stares) : Ohh! *smiles*
Par tabhi...
Veer : Fuuucccckkkkkkk!!!!
Nat : ??
Veer ko jaangh me ek halka dard mehsoos hua. Usne nazre neeche kar dekha toh uski baayi jaangh par... Suhana chikoti kaat rahi thi.
'Huh?'
Suhana usse table ki neeche se zorr se chimti kaatne me lagi hui thi aur uski aankhein? Uski aankhein jese Veer ko khaa jaane waali nazro se dekh rahi thi.
Boht flirting soojh rahi hai haan? Ye le ab!
Mann me yahi soch rahi thi woh.
'Shiiitttt!'
Divya : Ahem!!! So? Introductions ho gaye! Kya ab hum jaan sakte hai? Kya matter hai?
Divya ne main topic ko firse uthaaya. Uske bagal se Veer aur Suhana khuspusaate hue ek dusre se jhagad rahe the par Divya ne Nat ki orr focus rakhna chaaha.
Nat : Right!
Ek haami bhar Nat ne apne aas paas baithe staff ko waha se baahar jaane ka ishaara kiya. Aur ab waha par keval wahi 4 log maujood the.
Ek lambi saans lete hue Nat ne unn teeno ko dekha aur fir boli,
Nat : I need your help!
Divya : Hmm? Woh toh main samajh gayi thi jab tumne call kiya tha. Say openly.
Nat (fir ek lambi saas lete hue) : I'm being threatened.
Veer : Huh?
Divya : Kya?
Suhana : ....!!!?
Nat : Yes!!! I'm being threatened.
Kehte hue usne ek card table par haatho se sarkaate hue aage kar diya.
Divya ne usse thaamte hue padha,
Divya : Hmm? You are being invited to the Royal Klink? Toh isme bura kya hai? Ye toh invitation hai.
Nat : Invitation hai. Par maut ka.
Veer : Kya matlab?
Nat : Matlab ye ki... Look! You guys must have heard about Charlotte?
Divya : Charlotte? Wait! Ye toh wahi emerging pop singer hai na? Jiski abhi recent me death ho gayi? Suicide kar liya tha usne?
Nat : Yes and no!
Suhana : What do you mean?
Nat : Charlotte aur mein contact me the. Wo ek emerging singer zaroor thi. And a very promising one at that. Par usne suicide nahi kiya tha. Jitna mein usse jaanti hu. Woh aisa kabhi kar hi nahi sakti. Never! Usne khud mujhe message kiya tha ki woh ek new album release karne wali hai. Par uske pehle hi woh...
Divya : So you are suggesting ki ye ek murder hai? Ek conspiracy?
Nat : Yes!!!
Suhana : How? Tum itni yakeen ke saath kese keh sakti ho? Mene article padha tha newspaper me Charlotte ka. Investigation hui thi uski suicide ko lekar. Lekin forensic reports me saaf saaf saamne aaya tha ki usne poison leke suicide kiya hai. Toxins se hi uski maut hui hai.
Nat : Aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai ki kisi ne usse poison diya ho? Woh kabhi aisa nahi kar sakti. I believe ki police ne uske case ko death by suicide ka naam deke band kar diya hai.
Veer taajub me sab kuch dekh sunn raha tha. Hairaan woh isliye tha ki Suhana ko inn sab baato ki bhi khabar thi. Flight ke dauraan toh woh magazine padhne me lagi hui thi. Ye sab padhne ka samay kab mila usse?
Toh wahi woh Nat ki baato se bhi achambhav me tha. Shayad maamla gambheer aur boht hi uljha hua tha.
Divya : Woh sab chorro. Ava... I mean Nat! Mujhe ye batao ki ye invitation tumhe kese mila aur tum ye kyu keh rahi ho ki ye maut ka invitation hai? Kya matlab hai tumhara iss baat se?
Nat : It's just as it sounds. Do you want to know why?
Divya : ???
Nat : Kyuki death ke pehle... Charlotte ko bhi ye invitation aaya tha.
Suhana : Huh? How did you kn--!?
Nat : Because she showed me a photo. Usse bhi same invitation aaya tha.
Suhana : So what? Iss se ye prove nahi hota ki Charlotte ki maut se iska koi connection hai. Right?
Suhana ki baat par Nat ek mazaakiya muskaan me usse dekhte hue sarr hilaayi jese maano Suhana ki investigation skills ki khilli udaa rahi ho.
Suhana : Wh-Whaaatttt? Y-You think mein bakwaas kar rahi hu? Huhhh? I can read gestures well okay? Are you mocking me? Huhh?
Iss se pehle ki woh aur bhadakti, achanak hi usse apni daayi jaangh par ek haath ka sparsh hua.
'????'
Dekha toh paaya ki Veer ka haath tha. Jese woh console kar raha tha usse shaant rehne ke liye. Hairaani ki baat ye thi ki ye tareeqa kaam bhi kar gaya. Suhana ekdum shaant ho gayi. Kahi na kahi, usse ye ehsaas accha lag raha tha. Veer ka usse aise support karna. Woh khush thi ki Nat jesi khubsoorat ladki ko dekhne ke baad bhi Veer ne apni team nahi badli thi. Woh abhi bhi uski team me tha. Nahi toh aksar aise mauke par ladke palti maar ke sundar ladkiyo ki chaatne lag jaate hai.
Par Veer alag tha.
Woh bagal se Veer ke chehre ko nihaarne lagi.
Aur idhar Veer ki nigaahein tiki zaroor Nat par thi par andar hi andar woh mann me,
'Pari!!!'
[Got it!]
*Ding*
[Basic Enemy Tracker is in use...]
[Tracking...]
*Ding*
[No enemies were found.]
'Hmmm!!! I see!'
Divya : Abhi bhi dots ko connect karne me mujhe problem ho rahi hai. Tum kehna kya chaahti ho?
Nat : What I mean to say is... Charlotte ko ye invitation aaya tha. She took a photo of it and then sent me. Lekin uske next din hi uski death ho gayi. Police searched for the details. But end me ek suicide case bana ke usse end kar diya. Ab same invitation mujhe aaya hai.
Divya : Toh tumhara matlab hai ki ye ek death trap hai?
Nat : Exactly!!!!
Suhana : Bakwaas! Hmph~ I'm sorry to say. But tumhari baato ka koi sense nahi bann raha hai.
Divya (frowns) : Kya tum iss Royal Klink ke baare me aur bata sakti ho kuch?
Nat : Mene jaan'ne ki koshish kii. I have some connections too. Par mujhe bas ek hi detail mil paayi hai.
Divya : I'm all ears. Fill me up!
Nat : Ek tarah ki party hoti hai. Usse hi Royal Klink ka naam diya gaya hai. You know? Wine glasses ko aapas me cheers karte hue... That kind of party... Log masks pehente hai idhar. Apni identity hide karne ke liye. That's it. Bas itna hi mujhe pata hai.
Divya : Hmm!!! Wine party... Royal... Huh!???? Wait!!!! Kya kaha tumne??
Nat : ???
Divya : Wine party???
Divya achanak hi hadbadaate hue Veer ko dekhi. Aur beshaq, Veer ki aankhein bhi hairaani ke maare feli hui thi.
Divya : V-Veeerrrr!!!!! Kya tum bhi wahi soch rahe ho jo mein soch rahi hu?
Veer (nods) : The thir-
Divya : Yessssssss!!!! The third one!!!! The third one!!!! Veeeerrrrr!!!!
Suhana : Huh? Ye tum dono...!?
Divya : Third criminal Suhana!!!! Third fucking criminal....!!! Jim, Nightwalker and now this.... Fuckkkk!!!
Suhana : Ahhh!!!?
Divya ne jese kuch bhaanp liya tha. Aur uska andaaza galat nahi tha. Kyuki Veer ne bhi ye bhaanp liya tha.
Wine!!! Royal!!! Inn do shabdo se hi Veer ko ek andaaza lag gaya tha.
Nightwalker kya karta tha? Drugs bech ke mehngi mehngi wines ka business. Aur woh wines woh kisi aur jagah bhejta tha.
Mehngi wines... Aur ab ye Royal Klink...
Kuch na kuch connection toh zaroor tha. Shayad paheli ki do dots ka yahi judaav tha.
Lekin tabhi,
Divya : No no no no noooooo!!! Noooooo!!!!
Divya sarr hilaate hue tension me aa gayi.
Nat : What is it?
Divya : Agar aisa hai toh... Shitttt!!!! Iska matlab ye seedha house of the killers se juda hua hai.
Nat : Wha-!? House of the killers?
Divya : Haan!!! Damn ittt!!! Fir ab ye ek private case nahi raha. Nat!! Hum pehle se hi ek boht badi gang of serial killers ke peeche investigation me lage hue hai. Aur jis hisaab se tumne details dii hai. I'm pretty sure ye house of the killers ka koi third member hi hai. What do you think Veer?
Veer (nods) : Hmm! I agree! Nightwalker wines kisi ko sell karta tha. Not to mention ki unme sabse mehngi se mehngi wines maujood thi. Aur royal klink ke naam se toh yahi maalum pad raha hai ki... Third member idhar se ho sakta hai.
Divya : That's right!!!! Nat! Ab ye case private nahi raha. Public ho chuka hai. So, you'll have to co-operate wi--
Nat : Not at all!!!!
Divya : Huh?
Nat : Mujhe apna naam criminal cases me nahi laana hai. That's the whole reason why I called you. Warna mein cops ko hi inform nahi kar deti seedha? I called you so that you could deal with it in private.
Divya : B-But... This matter is huge Nat... Aise me...
Nat : I can give you a hefty amount!
Nat ne ek taq jawaab diya. Amount shabd sunte hi Divya bhi chup reh gayi.
Divya : How much?
Nat : An amount which won't disappoint you!
*Silence*
Aur ek minute tak bas sannaata saa chha gaya.
Nat : Just don't involve my name in any of it. That's the only condition. So? Deal or not?
Suhana Divya ko hi ghoor ke dekh rahi thi. Idhar Divya ne ek lambi saans lii aur boli,
Divya : Done then! It's a deal!!!
Aur usne itna bola hi tha ki...
"You Bitcccchhhhhhhh!!!!"
Suhana zorr se bagal se chillaayi,
Divya : Wh-What???
Suhana : Fayda dikha nahi ki...
Divya : Shut up Suhana! Hmph! Dekho toh kaun bol raha hai? Khud toh harr samay profit hote hi apni gaa-- I mean... Apni jebo me thoos leti ho paise. Aur ab mujhe keh rahi ho? Hmph!
Suhana : Y-Youuuu!!!! Kya kaha tumne?? M-Mein iss tarah kisi ke kehne par...
Divya : What? Ab mirchi lag gayi haan?
Suhana : Fuck off bitchhhh!!!
Divya : Ohh shut the fuck up...!!!
Inn dono ki behas jese hi shuru hui toh Veer dono ke beech baithe jese chakki me gehu ki tarah pis raha tha. Usne ek lambi aah chorri,
'Pari!!!'
*Ding*
[Intimidating Presence has been equipped.]
Aur ye equip hote hi,
Veer : THAT'S ENOUGH!!!!!!!
Veer ne zorr se buland awaaz me kaha.
*Silence*
Ek ghanghor khamoshi chhaa gayi. Dono Suhana aur Divya sann hoke reh gayi. Intimidating Presence! Jesa naam wesa kaam. Veer ki Presence aisi ho gayi thi jese maano woh sabhi ek Raja ke saamne baithe ho.
Aankho me tej, baithne ka dhang, uske chehre ke bhaav, buland awaaz aur uska aura.
Sab jese unhe hairat me daal diya. Uska courage, wisdom, willpower, aur confidence sab 200% badh chuka tha.
Suhana : I... I...
Suhana ke muh se kuch nikal hi na paaya. Woh ekdum bakri ki tarah seedhi bann ke baith gayi.
Veer : Agar sab kuch ho gaya hai toh hume ab chalna chahiye.
Divya : R-Right!!!
Divya bhi thodi sehmi hui haan me gardan hilaayi aur Nat se deal final kar woh sabhi waha se uth ke baahar ke liye jaane lage.
Nat khud hairat me sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Ye hua kya tha abhi abhi?
Kherr! Jo bhi tha, bada hi vichitr tha.
Teeno hotel ke baahar aa chuke the. Aur Suhana Divya dono hi Veer ko chori chhipe dekh rahi thi baar baar.
Unhe andar se aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jese Veer me achanak hi koi naya shaks ghus aaya tha. Jese koi ek Raja ka... Ya ek badhshah ka... Ek supreme king ki personality jese...
Par harr fayde ke saath saath uske nuksaan bhi the.
Intimidating Presence Off nahi ho sakta tha. Ek baar lagaya toh iska effect poore samay rehta tha. Aur saath hi ab Veer 24 ghante ke liye Beowulf's Blessings equip nahi kar sakta tha. Ye ek duwidha zaroor thi.
Veer : What now?
Divya : R-Right!!! Nat ne invitation card mujhe diya hai. Address diya hua hai yaha. Mujhe abhi hi ek kaam karna padega.
Suhana : Ab kya??
Divya : Kisi se milne jaana hai. You can leave if you want. Take my car.
Suhana : Fine then!!! Main jaa rahi hu ghar. Mujhe wese hi neend aa rahi hai. It was too tiring for me. I'm leaving...!
Divya : Hmm! Ye lo keys! Veer!! Come with me! Hume ek jagah aur chalna hai.
Suhana : K-Kyaaa??? V-Veer?? Veer ko kyu? Kaha jaa rahi ho tum.
Divya : Kya hua? Mene kaha na ek kaam hai. Usse abhi hi karna hai.
Suhana : Haan! P-Par Veer ko kyu...!?
Divya : Arre? Veer rahega saath me toh accha rahega na. Wese bhi... A young hot woman... Strolling alone in Las Vegas... Yadi mujhe kuch ho gaya toh? Haan? Kaun jawaab daar rahega?
Suhana : Y-Youuuu!!!! Bitch...!!!!
Divya : Hmph! Go away now bitch! Nik bhi department se laut hi raha hoga. Ghar par koi rehna chahiye darwaza kholne ke liye. C'mon! Let's go veer!
Kehte hue Divya apni gaand matkaate hue mud ke chali gayi. Aur idhar Suhana apna muh fula ke usse bas gusse me dekhti reh gayi.
Jab usne Veer ko dekha toh bas uske nazdeek aayi aur uske kaano me dheere se boli,
"Don't let her eat you up!!!"
Aur bas, itna bol woh Divya ki car leke waha se ravaana ho gayi.
Veer muskuraate hue waha se mud Divya ke paas aaya aur dono cab kar kisi jagah chal diye.
Veer : So?
Divya : Kya?
Veer : Aapne Miss Natalia ki deal accept kar lii hai. Toh ab Investigation department se inn baato ko kese chhipaogi aap?
Divya : Mujhe karna kya hai? I can say anything! Keh dungi ki mujhe third criminal ke baare me pata lag gaya hai. Aur mene action bhi lena shuru kar diya hai.
Veer : Agar woh puche kese aur kaha se pata laga toh?
Divya : Keh dungi ki mujhe kisi ne bataaya tha. Gawaahi dene ke liye mere paas boht se log hai. Tum aur Suhana bhi toh ho unme se. Haha~
Veer : You...!!
Divya : Ab tum bhi uss nakchidi Suhana ki tarah bitch bolne waale the kya mujhe?
Veer : No!!! I was just... Surprised a bit.
Divya (smiles) : Mujhe bas department me itna hi batana hai ki third criminal ki khabar mil chuki hai. Detectives investigation me lag jayenge. Mere paas unhe ghumaane ke liye kayi tareeqe hai. At the same time, hum Natalia ki problem bhi solve kar denge. Mujhe mera fayda bhi ho jayega. Department ki taraf se fir alag paisa. That's what we call hitting two birds with one stone.
Veer uski harr baat sunn bas muskura raha tha. Toh aise inn mohtarma ne itna bada ghar banaaya tha. Waqai! Dimaag toh tha Divya me boht.
*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*
Gaadi ruki, aur dono Veer aur Divya baahar nikle.
Ek bar tha ye. Koi zyaada bada nahi tha. Lekin slot machines ek ke baad ek lagi hui thi. Aur kuch log abhi bhi lottery nikaalne me lage hue the.
Divya : Tum yaha mera intezar karo. Mein abhi aati hu.
Veer : You sure you don't want me in there?
Divya (winks) : I do want you inside! Hahaha~
Veer ko cherrte hue woh andar chali gayi. Double meaning jokes toh koi Divya se karwa le.
Andar jaate hi Divya ki nazar ek ladke par padi. Kareeb 28-29 ki umr ka prateet ho raha tha.
Divya uske sameep gayi aur usne uske kandhe par thap thapaate hue usse uthaaya. Shayad thodi beer pee rakhi thi usne.
Woh ladka utha aur Divya ko saamne dekh woh muskuraaya,
"Ohhh!!! Look who's here? Hahahaha!!! M-My dear Divi!!! Hehehe~"
Divya : Don't fuck with me Fred!!! I have a job for you! Are you interested or not?
Fred : Interested? Of course!! O-Of course I'm interested! Heh~
Usne Divya ko upar se neeche taulti hui nazro se dekha. Divya ki bauhe sikudi, par woh boli kuch nahi.
Uske baad Divya ne poori baatein bataayi aur pucha,
Divya : Now tell me? Can you do it?
Fred : How much Divi? Hehehe~ You know I charge a lot!!!
Divya : Much better than the last time. Now say?
Fred (surprised) : Ohhhh!!! Alright! You got me! Hehe~
Divya : Good!
Abhi wo palatne hi waali thi ki tabhi Fred ne uske gore gore kandhe par apne haath rakh diye.
Divya : What are you doiiinnnggg????
Fred : Heh~ Let's have some fun baby!
Divya : YOU FUCKER!!!! GET AWAY YOU BASTARD!!!! *kicks*
Fred : Arrghh!
Aur ek taang Fred ke perr par maar woh waha se palat ke baahar nikal aayi.
Divya : Fucking Moron... Bastard...!!! Dickhead...!!! Hmph!!!
Woh badbadaate hue baahar nikli toh Veer usse sawaliya nazro se dekha,
Veer : Kya hua?
Divya : Umm... N-Nothing!
Dono tahalte hue cab ka wait karne lage. Aur chalte chalte hi,
Divya achanak hi apni peeth Veer ke aage kar khadi hui,
Divya : Can you... Can you fix this?
Uski gori makhmali peeth Veer ke saamne thi. Woh apne gale me pehni hui chain ko fix karne ki baat kar rahi thi.
Veer ne apne haath aage badhaaye. Par jese hi uske haath Divya ki peeth se sparsh hue,
*Ding*
[Mystic Touch has been triggered.]
'Ehhh!?'
"Nnnnhhhhhhhggghhhh!!!!"
Ek loud moan Divya ke muh se nikli.
"Ahhhh!!!!" Ekdum bhauchakii sii hote hue usne apne muh par dono haath rakh apni awaaz roki. Par Veer ne sab kuch sunn liya tha.
'Ohhh!!! Fuckkk!!! Mystic touch? Iss samay? Fuuuckkkk!!! Why now?'
[Enjoy! Hahaha~ ]
Iss baar Divya ke gaal surkh laal ho rakhe the. Upar se Veer ne Intimidating Presence bhi equip kar rakha tha.
Woh Veer se alag hone ke liye palti, par usse dhakelte samay jese hi uska haath Veer ke seene par pada...
"Nnnnghhhhhh!!!!!"
Seene ki garmaahat usse madhosh kar baithi. Uska haath Veer ke seene se alag hi na hua.
Divya : What's... What's happening to me?
Uski aankhein ekdum nasheeli ho rakhi thi. Aur woh jhukte jhukte Veer ke chehre ke qareeb aati jaa rahi thi.
Divya : N-Nooo! I... I can't... I can't let this happen... V-Veeeerrr!!!
Woh uske gaal se lag gayi.
Aur agle hi pal,
"Mmmmmphhhhhhhhh!!!!!!?!!"
Divya ke gulaabi raseele honth Veer ke hontho se jaa lage. Labo ka labo se sparsh hote hi Divya ka poora jism thitur utha.
Veer ne bhi fir ek pal na gawaaya, uski patli kamar ko apne haatho me jakad usne Divya ko poori tarah se apni baaho me jakad liya.
*Slurp* *slllurrrrppppp*
"Mmmmmmm~ Nnnnghhhh!!!! Aaaaaahhhhhhh!!! Ssssssss~"
Aur dono iss meethe aur thode geele chumban me kho gaye. Haath me jab Divya jesi maal aa rahi ho toh Veer kese peeche reh sakta tha?
Uske haath bhi Divya ke badan ki mashoor jagaho ko khojne me nikal pade.
Par tabhi,
*Ding*
[Mission : Assassinate the Pitcher.
Rewards : 1) ???? points.
2) ??? Fame Points.
3) 1 Random scroll.
Time Limit : 2 days.
Mission Failure Penalty : 1) ??? Points deduction.
2) Mystic Touch will be removed.]
Aur Veer ke mann se bas yahi nikla,
'Ah!!! Shittttt!!! Here wo go again!!!!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Apna apna kaam karne ke jaane ka men. Likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Aur saath bane rehne ka.
Dhanyavaad!
Dekhte hai bhai kya hota hai.Kya mast update tha bhai bole to ekdm zakaassss
Veer kaira aur soniya ka common friend hey ye janke nat ke dimag mey kuch to aa gaya hey ya tino friend ek sath dekhna chahti hey lagata hey aisa meko
Pari ne Mystic Touch trigger nahi kiya bhai. Isme Pari ka koi role nahi hai. Mystic Touch apne aap trigger hota hai. Jab chaahe ho jaaye.Ek tisra H Killer kaha ho skta hey ye bhi pata chala ye ek achi bat hey
Aur suchna ne jate vakt kaha tha veer se ke use apne apko uske smne parso mat ye nhi kaha tha ki kudh mat kaho , sala ye pari bhi achank hi kuch acha kar deti heyyy hayyy touch sala divya bhi pighal gayi
Kayi moments aaenge bhai.Kya ohh moment Tha To hot
Kya ohh kissss
Mast moment Tha ohh bhai
Last mey aur ke misson mil gaya our Sab moment Ki...... Laga diyi
Thanks man! Keep supporting!Ab dekhte hey age kya hota hey
But kuch bhi bolo wolfy bhau kese itna soch lete ho konsi dimag chalne vali goli khate ho
pranjsl ... ragini bhabhi ... bhawna ... suhana ... sonia .. kiara .... lesbo manager... bht kuch chal raha hai veer ki life main
Pehle hi anumaan laga liya? Aage toh padhiye.Khairr shreya ke bare me janta tha yahi hoga jyada hoshiyar ban rhi thi. Washroom me jo 2 ldkiyon ke sath ek aurat kr rhi thi wahi shreya ke sath hua hoga.
Ye aapki galat fehmi hai bhaaya. Ragini ne divorce diya iska matlab ye nahi tha ki Veer ke alawa usse koi nahi milne waala tha. Ragini ko halke me na lijiye. Divorcee hone ke bawajood yadi woh chaahe toh uske peeche Veer se above laundo ki line lag jaengi. But still, she chose Veer. Isse hi pacchtaawa kaha jaata hai bhaaya. Ragini pacchtaayi, tabhi toh uski aankhein khuli.Ragini ne divorce diya qki dusra option samne tha mauzud veer ke roop me.
C'mon yaar. Veer ke accident me hum Shweta ko kese dosh de sakte hai? Woh toh ek durghatna thi. Aab aise toh mein sadak ko dosh de du ki bhai waha par sadak thi isliye Veer chal raha tha waha pe aur isliye woh bhida. Sadak na hoti toh woh bhidta hi nahi. Nahi man! Veer dazed state me tha aur Sonia ki car speed me. Nateeja? Ek accident.Dekha jaye to apartyaksh roop se veer ka accident me uska(shweta) Kya uske baap (brijesh) ka bhi hath tha pranjal or vivek ke sath -2 ,
Ye toh behad acchi baat hai bhai ki aap kahani ko jeete hai. Par aap ek choti si baat kese nazar-andaaz kar gaye? Jis kahani ko aap jee rahe hai, usse mein bana raha hu. Bhala Veer ke saath kese anyaay hone de sakta hu? Bharosa rakhiye aur aage padhte jaiye mitr!Hahahaha maaf krna bade Bhai or death King bhaiya ap bhi bura mat Manna bss jab Story pdhta hu to usme pura Involve Ho jata hu aisa lgta hai jese iss Story ko main jee rha hu main hi veer hu. Shayad isliye aise betuke sawaal agye honge or shayad apko paresan bhi kr rha hu aise bachkani harkaton se isliye bura mat manna agey se dhyan rkhunga jo jesa chal rha hai chalne dunga qki ant me wahi hoga maafi or maafi
True indeed.What makes Rahul a standout guy is his maturity as well as his understanding of relations & things. Jab wo Neha ka flashback aaya tha story mein, tab bhi humne dekha ki Rahul was doing certain things on his laptop regarding his father's job. Tab shayad wo College start bhi kiya tha ya nahin, I don't remember but still he knew he had to live for his family.
Veer on the other hand was a timid guy. Undoubtedly, he's well on his way to become a Baadshah, but in true sense Pari has instilled in him the belief that he can become a Baadshah. That hospital bed scene, we knew it there only that Pari has already done her job, it was all about awakening the nearly dead boy, who was not having a clear path to move forward. But on the other hand, Rahul was always clear with what he wanted to do.
We can say that Veer was having none of his family by his side, and that's true. But if we look at Rahul, the person he loved the most, hates him the most from her side... Rahul gives vibes of calmness.
Plus, I don't think that Pari's role is a phenomenal one in Veer's success, as I said I only give the credit of that awakening to Pari. But later on Veer has done all the things himself, yes he has been helped a lot by the system, but we have seen him grow in confidence and will - power during his journey. What we cannot forget is that Veer still has a lot to do & lot to face. Who knows what he might face on the path of love..?
Hence, there's not much to differ between the two except that awakening. Rahul was by birth like this, whereas Veer required a force like Pari for that.
But my personal bias will always remain with Rahul...
He doesn't need one though right?what if Rahul had Pari ???
Dhanyavaad bhai! Aaj kaafi kuch baatein saamne aa jaengi, par saath hi naye sawaal khade ho jaenge. Baaki saath bane rehna.Bahut hi acha update tha ye. Maja aa gaya. To yaha aaye to ye log kisi aur kaam ke liye the. Lakin wo connect inke hi kaam se ho gaya sahi hai. Ab jb ki 3rd villain ka pata chl chuka hai ki wo kaha milega to ab dekhte hai. Veer kaise use pakdta hai. Sath me is baar uska bahut kuch daaw par laga hai.
1. Mystic Touch chla jayega.
2. Point ki to baat na hi kare.
3. Nataliya ki life daw par hai.
4. Yaha hare to aage ka case bhi stop ho jayega.
To dekhte hai ab apna veer kaise aur kya kya karke us 3rd criminal ko pakdta hai. Lakin jo bhi hoga itna to pata hai bs hum sub readers ke liye moj hi moh hone wali hai. Aur ye Divya ka to haal bura ho gaya ab dekhte hai ki abhi aur kitna time lagta hai usko apne hero ke bed par aane me. Aur suhana jal to bahut rahi hai. Lakin ye jalan kaha tak jayegi. Ye dekhne wali baat hai. Aur Nataliya bhi ab apne veer me thodi to interest to ho hi gayi hai. Wiki use pata jo chal gaya hai wo kayra aur soniya dono ka akluta common frnd hai. Dekhte hai uska kya scene hota hai veer ke sath.
Chlo Dekhte hai aaj ke Update me story kaha tak aage jati hai.
लाजवाब अपडेट भाईMega Update
Update - 95 ~ Las Vegas ~ It Begins.
Ab tak...
Suhana : Then get ready...
[Ohh no~ Here it comes!!!!]
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : You and me!!!!! We are going...
Veer : Whaaatttt??? K-Kaha????
Suhana kuch derr tak shaant rahi. Uske baad woh Veer ki taraf dekhte hue boli,
Suhana : Las Vegas!!!!
Veer : WHAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTT??????
Ab aage...
“Ladies and gentlemen, the Captain has turned on the Fasten Seat Belt sign. If you haven’t already done so, please stow your carry-on luggage underneath the seat in front of you or in an overhead bin."
"Please take your seat and fasten your seat belt. And also make sure your seat back and folding trays are in their full upright position."
"If you are seated next to an emergency exit, please read..."
Blah Blah Blah...
Instructions samjhaane waali ye thi ek flight attendant, jo apna kaam kar logo ko flight ke niyam samjhaane me lagi hui thi. Aur dekhte hi dekhte...
*Whoooooooooooossshhhhh*
Flight take off kar gayi. Iss flight ki hi ek window seat par ek behad handsome naujavaan bhi baitha hua tha. Beshaq!! Veer!!!
Hawa me uthata airplane, jab zameen se kaafi upar aa gaya toh Veer window ke baahar neele akaash aur safed baadlo ko aur qareeb se dekh apne vichaaro me kho gaya.
Wo Mumbai chorr nikal chuka tha, Las Vegas ki orr. Kese woh sab kuch achanak aur jaldbaazi me chorr ke aaya tha. Usse kayi baate sata rahi thi.
Akhir uski kya zaroorat thi Las Vegas me? Kahi ye system ki hi chali gayi koi chaal toh nahi thi? Kya usko aur missions milne waale the? Kesa rahega ye safar? Kya woh kahi kisi musibat me toh nahi fass jaega? Aneko sawaal the.
Woh yeh sab soch hi raha tha jab,
"Getting bored already!?"
Ek pyaari madhur awaaz uske bagal se aayi jisse sunn Veer ne apna chehra uss orr kiya. Uske bagal me Suhana baithi hui thi.
Veer : Boriyat ko side me rakhe toh, mujhe abhi bhi ye samajh nahi aa raha ki aapke itne chote se suitcase me kya hi samaan aaya hoga? Not to mention ki aap hi thi jisne kaha tha ki tour lamba bhi ho sakta hai.
Wo sarcasm me bola.
Baat sach thi. Suhana ne Veer ko pehle hi ye kehke inform kar diya tha ki tour lamba bhi ho sakta hai toh woh apni poori preparing ke sath chale. Par yaha jab Veer airport pohucha toh usne dekha ki Suhana maatr ek chote se red suitcase ke sang aayi hui thi. Aur kuch bhi nahi tha, bas uska purse.
Suhana : Hmm? What do you mean by chote se suitcase? Aur kya leke chalu? I have my purse and suitcase. What else do I need?
Wo usse sawaaliya nazro se dekhte hue puchi.
Wo ek black colour ki long dress me thi. Kandho par bas patli sii doriya jo uski poori dress ke bhaar ko sambhaal rahi thi. Aur wo khud selfie lene me busy thi.
Aur iss qadar paas se Suhana ko dekh Veer shaant pad gaya. Suhana waqai khubsoorat thi. Uski khubsoorti thodi alag thi. Sonia aur Kaera jesi nahi. Usme uska alag ek charm tha. Kuch alag baat toh zaroor thi usme.
Veer : Toh bas inse aapka kaam chal jaega?
Suhana : Why not? Mujhe rakhna hi kya hai? Just my essentials. Aur suitcase? Usme bas ek jodi kapde and some other essentials.
Veer : Ek jodi kapde? Really? Ek jodi kapdo me kya hoga?
Suhana : Huh?? Mujhe waha jaake bas wahi toh pehen'na hai then I will buy new ones.
Usne badi hi saralta se uttar de diya. Aur Veer ko fir khayaal aaya.
'Fuuuccckkkk!!! I almost forgot!! Miss Suhana! Well, of course she's rich.'
[Don't worry Maaaassteeerrr~ We will be rich too!!! Very soon!! I'm here for you~ You know I love you right?]
'Yeah I know Pari~ I know!!'
Veer ne ek aah chorr raahat ki saans lii. Usko iss level par pohuchne ke liye kaafi kuch karna baaki tha.
Wo ye kese bhul sakta tha ki Suhana ek rich family se belong karti thi. Paisa uske haath ka mel tha. Woh keval ek jodi hi kapde leke aayi thi kyuki woh waha jaake naye kapde khareedne waali thi.
Suhana : It's called smart thinking Veer. It saves a lot of time. Jitna samay tumne bag pack karne me lagaaya hoga, utne samay me I earned crores.
Veer khamosh tha. Suhana ek behad smart aurat thi. Par Veer ne bhi ab financially grow karna shuru kar diya tha. Aur bhi bade pemaane par ab. Na keval woh food truck balki ab shares par bhi woh dhyaan de raha tha.
Suhana : Safar lamba hai toh araam karo jitna karna hai.
Veer : Kitna samay bataaya tha aapne flight duration ka?
Suhana : Around 30 hours.
Veer : Fuckkkk!!!
Suhana : Hmm~ I know it sucks. Par kya kare? Vegas dur hai kaafi. First stop hamara Abu dhabi hai aur uske baad New York, then at last Las Vegas.
Usne flight ki details usse samjhaate hue kaha.
Veer : Wow~
Suhana toh fashion magazines me kuch padhne lag gayi par idhar Veer ko unme koi interest nahi tha. Woh dekh raha tha apne bagal me baithi iss jawaan aurat ko jo dikhne me ek cultured lady prateet ho rahi thi.
Par keval Veer hi jaanta tha ki Suhana apne andar kin do tarah ki personalities ko chhupaaye hue thi. Ek jo normal dikhaayi padti thi, jo ki abhi maujood thi. Aur dusri jisme aate hi woh paagalo ki tarah hassne lagti thi aur teddy ko pakad, usse maar maar ke uska bharta banaane par aa jaati thi. Bhayaanak ekdum!!
Veer ne notice kiya ki Suhana sach me kaafi modern thi. Uska fashion sense bhi boht accha tha. Shayad Sonia ke saath reh reh ke aisa hua ho? Ya Sonia thi jo Suhana se influenced thi? Kuch kaha nahi jaa sakta tha.
Usne ek akhiri sawaal pucha,
Veer : Ummm... So this is business class? It sure is luxurious. Hum dono ki tickets ke around kitne lage honge?
Suhana : Hmm??? Somewhere around 5 lakhs.
Amount sunte hi Veer ko andaaza lag chuka tha,
'Fuccckkkkk!!! 5 Lakhs? Just like that...? She spent that much on tickets?'
Aur kyu nahi hoega shocked Veer? Baat hi alag thi business class ki.
Luxury seats, badi sii screen movies dekhne ke liye, swaadisht khaana, aur kya kuch nahi tha. Andar ka nazaara hi alag tha. Toh Veer samajh chuka tha.
[Master, this is nothing. 5 Lakh is nothing. Hume boht aage jaana hai Master. Don't worry, we will climb the stairs of success together. I will be with you. Always~]
'Thanks Pari~ Motivation ke liye. You are the best.'
[Ehehehe~ Of course I'm the best.]
Veer muskura ke baahar dekh ek baar fir apne ateet me kho gaya. Uski ungliya apne aap hi apne hontho par chali gayi. Kal kuch hua tha. Kuch naya... Kuch alag... Kuch aisa jisse Veer rok na paaya... Kal...
Jese hi usne ghar par ye khabar dii thi ki woh Las Vegas jaa raha hai kuch dino ke liye. Ragini ne uss par sawaalo ke hamle shuru kar diye the,
"Kyu jaana hai tumhe Veer? Kyuuuuu!!?? Tum kyu sheher se baahar jaate rehte ho? Pichli baar tum bina bataaye gaye the. Par tum apni asal Maa se mile the. Iss baar? Iss baar kaha jaa rahe ho Veer? Kya firse kahi unhi se milne...?"
"Nahi Bhabhi!! Suhana jii ne mujh par 3 favours kiye the. Jab mein musibat me tha. She told me she will ask for the repayment in the future. Aur woh din aaj aa hi gaya. Apne pehle favour ke badle me unhone mujhe apne saath Las Vegas chalne ko kaha hai. Kuch zaroori kaam hai shayad. Aur aap jaanti hi ho na Bhabhi? Mein apni zubaan se peeche nahi hatata..."
"P-Par..."
"Bhabhi...!!! Mana mat kijiye. Aur balki unke saath shayad mujhe business se related kayi saari baatein seekhne ko mil jaaye?"
Ragini kuch derr tak shaant rahi par fir usne ek aah bhari aur Veer ko dekh boli,
"Thik hai Veer. Tum jaa sakte ho. Mein tumhe mana nahi karungi."
"K-Kya? Haha~ Sach me? Aap iske khilaaf nahi ho na!?"
"Nahi! Par meri ek shart hai."
"Kaisi shart?"
"Tum mujhe aaj shopping par leke jaoge. Aur abhi issi samay se raat tak tum mere saath rahoge. Bolo manzoor hai?"
Ragini ke bol ne Veer ko asmanjas me daal diya tha. Uski Bhabhi ye kesi demand kar rahi thi? Shopping par jaana koi galat baat nahi thi. Lekin Veer ko jo baat sata rahi thi woh thi Ragini ka ye kehna ki woh uske saath raat tak rahegi.
"Mein..."
Woh kuch bol paata ki iss se pehle hi Ragini waha se palat kar andar apne kamre ki orr jaane lagi, "Decision tumhara hai Veer. Mein taiyaar hone jaa rahi hu. Yadi mein baahar aayi aur tum mujhe ready nahi mile toh mein samajh jaungi tum mere saath jaana nahi chaahte."
Kehte hue woh andar chali gayi.
'Shitttttt!!!!' Veer ab phass chuka tha. Usse Nidhi ma'am, Shreya, Karan, Balhaar se bhi toh milne jaana tha. Lekin ab ye possible nahi tha.
'Mein kal subah jaldi uth ke unn sab se mil aaunga.'
[Yes master. Yahi sahi rahega. Aur aapko ab Ragini ko ignore nahi karna chahiye. I think she has reached a certain point.]
'Hmm...!'
Aur kuch samay ke baad hi, Veer ready tha. Naye kapdo me woh behad hi handsome lag raha tha. Usne ek black shirt aur neeche blue jeans pehni hui thi. Ragini khud ek hot college student ki tarah prateet ho rahi thi. Usne ek dashing sa fashionable white top aur ek black jeans daali hui thi. Saath hi white sneakers. Koi keh sakta tha ki woh ek married aur divorced lady thi? Bilkul bhi nahi.
Jab woh iss qadar Veer ke saamne aayi toh shan bhar ke liye Veer ki bolti hi band ho gayi. Hontho pe wo ek light pink colour ki glossy lipstick jo shayad kisi flavour ki thi. Ye toh uske hontho ko choomne ke baad hi pata lagaaya jaa sakta tha.
Idhar Veer ka muh khula dekh Ragini mann hi mann khil khila uthi aur apne youvan ko saraahne lagi. Usse fakr ho raha tha apni khubsoorti par aaj.
"Kaisi lag rahi hu mein?" Woh gol ghoomte hue khud ke figure ko dikhaate hue puchi.
"Boht khubsoorat!!!" Veer ke muh se apne aap hi nikal aaya.
Ragini ke gaal ye sunte hi halke laal ho chale, "Good! Now you know how to compliment a woman."
Veer khamosh tha. Usse chup dekh Ragini uska haath pakdi aur room ke baahar hall me le aayi.
Par hall me aate hi usne Veer ka haath chorr diya. Saamne do log maujood the. Aabha aur Shweta.
Suman NSS ki ab ek sadasya thi toh wo ghar par nahi rehti thi. Usse apna yogdaan dene jana padta hi tha. Sonali food truck me lagi hui thi. Wo bhi ghar par nahi thi. Aur Bhumika hotel ke liye ravaana ho chuki thi.
Isliye Shweta aur Aabha hi bas thi.
"Tai jii! Mein Veer ke saath thodi shopping par jaa rahi hu. Aur waha se ek friend ke yaha bhi jaana hai. Veer aur mujhe aate aate raat ho jaegi."
Usne bataate hue kaha. Par Shweta ke toh hosh ude hue the, Ragini ko iss tarah se dekh ke. Usne aaj se iss se pehle kabhi bhi Ragini ko top aur jeans me nahi dekha tha. Kabhi nahi. Aur aaj Ragini top aur jeans me thi? Wo bhi Veer ke saath jaane ke liye? Wo bhi dono ekdum akele?
Shweta ki chhati indri turant kaam me lag gayi. Aur usse baar baar kuch sanket dene lagi.
'Hey Bhagwaan! Ye Ragini... Ye Ragini mere bacche ke saath iss tarah inn kapdo me kese jaa sakti hai? Kahi kuch gadbad hai kya? Kahi Ragini mere bete ke peeche toh...'
Wo mann me sochne lagi. Aur thodi derr baad usne apna muh khola,
"Ragini! T-Tum... Aise... Veer ke saath?"
"Hmm? Jii!! Mene iss tarah ke kapde kaafi samay se nahi pehne the isliye aaj mann hua. Kyu? Koi dikkat hai kya?"
Ragini Shweta ki nigaahein parakh chuki thi.
'Aap ya koi bhi ho. Kitna hi mujhe kyu na rok le. Aaj mein Veer ke saath apna samay guzaar ke hi rahungi. Mere aur uske beech koi nahi aa sakta...'
Wo mann me thaan pehle se hi taiyaar khadi thi.
"N-Nahiii!!! Kuch nahi! Jaldi aa jaana beta."
"Jii! Chalo Veer."
"H-Hmm~"
Aur dono Ragini aur Veer ghar se baahar nikal gaye. Baahar aate hi Veer ne ek raahat ki saans lii. Andar ka mahaul kuch garam sa hone laga tha. Aisa lag raha tha do billiyaa aapas me jhapat kar ladne waali thi.
Veer jab car ka door kholne laga toh Ragini ne usse fir tok diya, "Car nahi Veer. Bike! Bike nikaalo."
"Ugh... Okay!"
Veer ke sang bike par sawaar woh peeche baith gayi. Aur Ragini ne ek bhi mauka nahi gawaaya. Baithate saath hi usne apni sudol chaathi Veer ki peeth par poori tika dii. Apne urojo ko Veer ki peeth par masal ke wo usse kass ke pakad ke baith gayi.
'God damn it...!!!' Aur uska asar seedhe Veer ke lund par hua.
Dono hi shopping mall pohuche aur jee bhar ke Ragini ne shopping kii. Woh kabhi apne liye kuch khareedti toh kahi Veer ke liye. Toh kahi ghar ki zaroorat mando ka samaan leti.
Dono ek couple ke jese prateet ho rahe the. Kahi dono food zone me snacks khaate toh kahi ice cream, aur bas ek dusre ke saath issi tarah pal guzaarne lage.
Ragini harr wo prayaas kar rahi thi jo ek ladki karti hai ek ladke ko apni taraf aakarshit karne ke liye. Aur ye kehna galat nahi tha ki Veer uss aakarshan me phassta jaa raha tha.
Jab raat hone ka samay hone laga toh dono kuch derr ke liye ek behad hi khubsoorat se spot ke paas bike ko rok ke wahi agal bagal baithe hue the.
Sooraj dhal raha tha, akaash me pakshiyo ka jhund idhar se udhar udta jaa raha tha. Mand mand thandi hawaayein chal rahi thi. Vataavaran me ek shaanti thi.
Veer aur Ragini bhi khamosh the. Par unke dil ki dhadkane nahi. Ragini jitna chaahti thi ki woh apni desires ko control me rakhe wo utni hi zorr se baahar aane ka prayaas karti.
Aur fir usne shuruaat kii, "Veer!"
"H-Hmm?"
"Kya tumne jawaab ke baare me socha?"
Veer jaanta tha Ragini kis jawaab ki baat kar rahi thi. Apne pyaar ka izhaar wo kar chuki thi. Aur ab usse Jawaab chaahiye tha.
"Bhabhi mein..."
"Mein kya Veer!?"
"Mujhe shayad thode din aur..."
"Shut up!"
"Huh?"
"I had enough Veer. Boht bardaasht kar liya mene. Ab aur nahi."
Wo mud ke Veer ki orr dekhi. Aisa lag raha tha jese usne Veer ki aankho me kuch gira diya tha aur ab uski aankho me usse dhundne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Uski saasein boht tezz ho chuki thi. Seena zorro se upar neeche ho raha tha.
Wo aage badhi aur usne apne dono haatho se uske chehre ko thaam liya.
"Just how much more time it will take for you to kiss these damn lips? Huh!??", Wo madhoshi me usse dekh uchi awaaz me boli.
"W-Whattt?" Veer bhauchakka reh gaya. Kya usne abhi abhi sahi suna tha?
Ragini ki garam garam saasein uske chehre aur hontho par pad rahi thi.
"Tumhe jab apne jawaab dena hai tab dena. But I won't stop now."
Aur bas itna bol, usne Veer ko apni orr ek jhatke me kheecha aur apne gulaabi glossy honth ko Veer ke hontho se chipka diya. Veer ki aankhein hairaani ke maare phatati chali gayi. Aur Ragini uske hontho ko ek behad hi bekaraar aurat ke bhaati choosne aur chabaane me lag gayi.
*Sluuuurrrrpppppp* *schliiiicckkkkkk*
*Mmmmmmm~*
Ragini ke badan me ek bijli daud gayi Veer ko choomte hi. Dono ke hontho ka sangam akhir ho hi gaya. Na jaane kabse Ragini iss lamhe ka intezaar kar rahi thi. Ki ek din Veer uske hontho ko apne hontho ki giraft me zorr se lega. Par ant me uss se ab aur sabr na hua. Usne khud hi Veer ke muh ko apne muh se laga liya. Aur thook ka mel milaap shuru ho gaya.
Bhale hi aasmaan saaf tha par Veer ko aisa laga jese aasmaan me aatishbaazi ho rahi thi. Aisa laga ek bomb uske andar bhi phatt chuka tha.
Usne kayi ladkiyo ko kiss kiya hua tha. Par ye... Ye kiss alag thi. Isme ek sharaarti bhaav tha. Ek melapann tha. Jo usse uksaa raha tha. Wo tha...
Apne bade bhai ki talaak shuda biwi ke hontho ko choomna... Usse galat dhang se bheechna aur masalna...
Sochte hi uska lund ek baar fir jhatka maar diya.
Ragini ke honth, itne naram, itne komal, wo Veer ke nichle honth ko kheechne me lage hue the. Uski makhmali sii jeebh Veer ke andhruni muh ko tatol tatol ke khoj rahi thi. Jese ek andheri gufa me ek raahi raasta khojta hai.
Uske badan se aati woh madak khushboo Veer ko nashe me daalne ke liye kaafi thi.
Veer toh kuch pal ke liye wahi baraf ki silli ki tarah jamm ke baitha hua tha. Jo kuch bhi kar rahi thi, woh Ragini hi kar rahi thi.
Aur fir ant me Veer haar gaya. Usne Ragini ko pakad zorr se usse choomna shuru kar diya. Bas waha dono ki choomne ki awaazein hi aane lagi...
Aur ab... Veer ko uss lipstick ka flavour pata chal chuka tha.
'Ohh God... It tastes like... It is... Vanilla... Damnnnn!!!!!!'
9 se 10 minute guzar chuke the dono ko. Aur uske baad hi jaake Ragini uske hontho se alag hui. Wo bhi sirf saans lene ke liye.
*Huff* *Huff*
Uski aankho me poori tarah se khumaari chhayi hui thi. Hawas bhi thi kahi kahi.
"Now you won't stop me Veer. Na jaane kitni raatein mene tadap tadap ke guzaari hai. *Huff* *huff* keval tumhare baare me soch soch ke..." Wo haafte hue boli, "Sirf tumhe soch soch ke mein raat me masturbate karti thi Veer. Imagining you taking me in your arms."
"!!!??" Veer stabdh reh gaya. Ragini apni baate aaj khul ke bata rahi thi.
"I will eat you to my heart's content."
Aur iss baar Veer ke badan me ek kampan fel gaya ye sunte hi. Ragini ek bhooke janvar ki tarah Veer ke hontho par toot padi.
Iss baar jab Veer ne usse zorr se pakda toh kuch hua...
*Ding*
[Mystic touch has been applied.]
'Ohhh Fuccckkkk noooooo!! Abhi nahi...!!!!'
Wo mann me chillaaya. Baat hi aisi thi.
Veer ne Fame Points se Scroll Hunt me Scroll khareeda tha. Aur jo usse waha se mila tha wo tha...
*Ding*
[Scroll ~ Mystic Touch.
Description ~ A technique to make your female partner sway just by your touch. A touch that will leave your women all flustered. It will only be applied by its own during romantic situations. It cannot be turned ON or OFF.
Do you want to consume the scroll?
Yes or No?
Warning : If you don't consume it within 24 hours, the scroll will disappear.]
Majbooran, Veer ko scroll consume karna hi pada. Warna scroll 24 ghanto ke andar gaayab ho jaata. Aur ab uske paas ye Mystic Touch Technique thi, jo apne aap hi romantic situations me active hoti thi.
Nateeja? Nateeja khud hi dekh lo aap...
Veer ke haath Mystic Touch activate hote hi jese hi Ragini ke kamar par gaye. Ragini pagal ho uthi. Wo macchli ki tarah machal uthi. Uski siskiya zorr se waha goonjne lagi.
Veer ke haatho ka harr ek touch usse alag hi charam sukh pohucha raha tha. Aur jab uska haath galti se Ragini ke thano par gaya toh Ragini ki chut ne apna paani chorr diya. Keval itne se touch se hi...
Wo nasheeli aankho se usse haafte hue dekhi, " Tumhaare hatho me jadu hai kya Veer? *huff* You want them. Right? Tumhe mere doodh chaahiye na Veer. Kaho?"
Achanak hi Ragini ne apne upar se woh safed top nikaal ke alag kar diya.
"Bhabhi... Ye aap...!???" Veer kuch keh paata ki iss se pehle hi Ragini ne apne haatho ko peeche le jaake apne badan se woh safed bra bhi alag kar dii.
Veer ke saamne ab behad hi kamaal ke sudol than maujood the. Aur jis tarah se Veer unhe ghoor raha tha, Ragini ka mann khilta hi jaa raha tha.
"Keval dekho nahi inhe Veer... *huff* *huff* Chooso... Chooso inhe... They are all yours. Come suck on them my baby..."
Aur Veer ko baalo se kheech usne apne than uske chehre me ghused diye. Ya yu kahe ki uska chehra apne thano me ghused diya.
"Ohhh Goddddd!!! Veeeerrrr!!!! My baby.... I wanted this for so long... Suck on my titties Veer... Claim them... Chooso... Yesss dear!!!!"
"Aahhhhhhnnn~ Chooso apni bhabhi ke doodh... Spank them... Masal do inhe Uffffff~ Kisss meee... Suck my lips Veeer..... Ohhh gooooddd... *slurp* Ohhhhh yessss darling... "
Ragini pe khumaar chadh chuka tha. Woh bekaabu ho chuki thi.
"Yesssss I love you... Darling.... Suck me... I love you soooo muchhhhh.... Mmmmm~ Give me hickeys Veerrrr... Suck my neck... My tits... My lips.... Nishaan chorr do Veeer.... Aahhhnnnnn~ Yessss baby... Just like that..."
"Ohhhh goddddd Veeerrr... Your touch... I came twice already... Kya hai inn haatho me? Claim me Veeerrrr!!! Claim me from your elder brother....!!!! Ahhhnnnn~ Yesssss!!! Dikhao apne uss haram khor Vivek bhaiya ko kese uski talak shuda patni ko pyaar dete hai Veeerrr... Aahhnnn maaaaa~"
Veer aur Ragini ke beech ye silsila kareeb 35 minute tak chala. Jab raat ka andhera aur ghana hone laga tab dono ko hosh aaya. Ragini pehle se ab kahi behtar thi. Aur hosh me thi. Ab jaake usse samajh aa raha tha usne kya kiya Veer ke saath aur bechaari ke gaal ab surkh laal the.
Par glaani zara bhi nahi. Woh khush thi usne jo bhi Veer ke saath kiya tha.
'Ohh God!!! Ye mene kesa behave kar diya? I... *blushes* God kya kya keh gayi mein Veer se. But it's not entirely my fault. His touch just... lightened my body up... It was so surreal. I hope Veer mujhe kisi hawas ki bhooki aurat ki tarah nahi samjhega.'
Wo mann me soch sharmaayi jaa rahi thi.
Aaj se unke beech ek nayi shuruaat ho chuki thi. Veer ko jab jawaab dena ho de... Par Ragini toh ab Veer se issi tarah se pyaar karne waali thi. Aaj uske andar ek nayi cheez ne janm le liya tha, Veer ko choomne ke baad. Aisi anubhooti usse pehle kabhi nahi hui thi.
Aur bas, issi tarah Veer aur uske beech ek naya rishta bana. Halaki iske baad unke beech filhaal kuch nahi hua. Veer ko kal Vegas jaana tha jis kaaran wo packing me lag gaya. Aur subah wo Nidhi, Shreya Juhi se milke aaya toh wahi Balhaar se kuch baatein kar ke.
Inhi sab me samay guzar chuka tha. Usse Karan se milne ka koi mauka nahi mila. Na hi Kaera aur Sonia se. Sonia toh wese bhi abhi baahar hi thi.
Aur agle din Veer Vegas ke liye nikal gaya.
"Hey~" Fir ek awaaz usse hosh me laayi.
Apne dhyaan se jab wo baahar aaya toh usne dekha ki bagal me Suhana sone ki taiyaari kar rahi thi.
Usse dhyaan aaya ki woh kal ki hui ghatnao ke baare me soch kho gaya tha. Khaaskar, Ragini ke baare me soch ke.
Ek smile uske hontho par sajj gayi usse yaad karte hi.
Suhana : Hey. Mein sone jaa rahi hu thodi derr. Tumhe kuch bhi chaahiye ho air hostesses ko keh sakte ho. Okay?
Veer : Alright!
Aur wo sone chali gayi. Dekhte hi dekhte inka ye lamba safar bhi jald hi khatam hone ko aa gaya.
*Whoooooosssshhhh*
Plane airstrip par land hua. Las Vegas ki zameen par Veer aur Suhana apne kadam rakh chuke the.
Bahar aate hi unhe alag hi nazaara dekhne ko mila.
Jab wo airport ke exit par pohuche toh waha likha hua tha, Welcome to Las Vegas.
Aur airport se baahar aate hi Suhana aur Veer saamne ek luxury black Rolls Royce Ghost khadi hui thi.
Jese hi woh car ke nazdeek aaye.
*Click*
Car ka darwaaza khula aur ek khubsoorat sii lady ek long dress me baahar aayi. Chehre par halka makeup, hontho par lipstick, patle perr, khubsoorat baal aur pyaara sa mukhda.
Veer ne uss aurat ko dekhte hi...
'Check!!'
*Ding*
[Name : Divya
Age : 35
Bio : Divya, ek India aur Las vegas ki citizen hai. Uska pati Las vegas se hai isliye usse bhi yaha ki citizenship asaani se mil gayi. Divya ek bhaarteeya naari hai par usne shaadi ek videshi ladke se kii hai. Koi santaan nahi hai filhaal. Divya aur uska pati dono hi detectives hai. She loves to read people and toy with them. She also flirts a lot with young men. But she never does it seriously. Just to make fun of them. She likes playing with young men's amateur feelings. Beware!
Favourability : 36
Relationship : Strangers.]
Aur Status padhte hi Veer chaukanna ho gaya.
[This woman.... Tch...!!!]
She was a bad news. Yaha tak ki Pari bhi iss aurat ko dekh ke kuch khaas khush nahi thi.
Aur idhar Divya ne jese hi Suhana ko dekha woh aage aake uske gale se lag gayi,
Divya : Ohhhh my... Beautiful darling~ Muaaah~ muaaahh~ I missed you so much Suhana....!!!!
Kehte hue usne Suhana ka gaal choom liye. A typical foreign greeting way.
Suhana (smiles) : Haa haa pata hai mujhe. Tabhi toh iss tarah mujhe bulaayi ho tum.
Divya : Ohhh Trust me dear. Boht serious issue hai.
Suhana : Alright! I will trust you on this one.
Divya : Ohh you naughty one haahaa~ And heyyyyyyy... Who else we got here? Hmm?
Uski nigaahein fir Veer par padi. Aur usse dekhte hi uski aankho me ajeeb sii chamak aake guzri. Jo Veer ki nazro se chhup ke na gayi.
Divya (smiles) : Welcome Veer!!
Veer (surprised) : You know about me??
Veer ki nazre pal bhar ke liye Divya ko ghoor kar scan kari... Favourability 36 thi. Matlab wo usse jaanti thi. Par kese?
Divya (smiles) : Well! Jab tumhaari itni tareefe sunn'ne ko milengi toh ye toh zaahir sii baat hai na? Haha~
Kehte hue Divya usse upar se neeche tak khaa jaane waali nazro se dekhi. Yaha tak ki usne apna nichla honth bhi daato se daba liya. Aur woh ye sab Veer ko jaan bujh ke dikha kar rahi thi.
Idhar Veer hairaan hote hue Divya ki harqato ko dekhne laga.
'Meri tareefe? Huh?'
Fir uski nigaahe Suhana par gayi jo usse apni orr dekhta paa kar hi apna muh ferr lii. Toh wo sab kuch samajh gaya. Aur dheere se bas muskuraaya.
'Toh ye Suhana madam ko meri tareef karna bhi aata hai haan??'
[Suhana is impressed with you master. And who wouldn't be? You are everything a girl wants hehe~]
'Ohh Pari~ You are too sweet.'
[Awww~ Thank you maaassstteerr!!]
Divya : Welcome!!!! Welcome to Vegas!! Ek aisi city jo gambling, fine dining, entertainment, aur apni nightlife ke liye jaani jaati hai. You name it. Vegas has it all.
Divya apne dono haatho ko hawa me felaate hue gol gol ghoomi, Veer ko iss adhbhut city ke darshan karwa rahi thi woh. Ab woh waqai city ke darshan karwa rahi thi ya 360° ghoom ke revealing kapdo me apne, jism ke darshan karwa rahi thi? Ye kehna thoda mushqil tha.
Divya : Jankaari ke liye bata du ki iss city me 24/7 gambling, drinking aur baaki cheeze allowed hai.
Muskuraate hue woh Veer ki taraf aankh maarte hue boli, fir achanak hi uske kaan ke paas aake dheemi awaaz me usne kaha,
"Including male focused entertainment."
'Wha....!?' Veer uske iss tarah paas aane se thoda hichak utha.
[Master ye aurat kuch zyada hi ucchal rahi hai. Hmph~ I don't like her vibes.]
Divya Veer ko ishaara de rahi thi. Ki Vegas me Veer ko sab kuch mil sakta hai. Sex bhi. Wo bhi ayyaashiyo waala. Threesome, foursome, orgy?? Name it all. Yaha sab asaani se uplabdh tha. Aur Divya ka ishaara ussi orr tha.
Divya : But ye sab meri prescence me nahi.
Lekin usne agli baat rakh ke saari misunderstanding dur kar dii. Ek prakaar se woh Veer ko Suhana ki nazro me test karna chaah rahi thi. Wo dekhna chaah rahi thi ki Suhana ko jab pata lagega ki Veer Vegas me sex dhundh raha hai toh uska kya reaction hoga? In other words, she wanted to catch Veer offguard.
Par sadly, Divya keval Veer ki baato se parichit thi, uss se nahi. Warna aisi harqat nahi kari hoti. Veer bas khamosh tha aur
Divya ye dekh thoda aur curious ho gayi.
Wahi Suhana bhi apni sakha ki chaal samajh chuki thi. Aur yadi sach kaha jaaye toh woh apni dost ke iss ravaiyye se bilkul bhi khush nahi thi. Suhana samajh chuki thi ki Divya Veer ke saath kya karna chaah rahi thi. Usse be-izzat karna. Aur kahi na kahi Suhana ko ye pasand nahi aaya, lekin woh khamosh rahi.
Divya : You do have a nice gigolo Suhana, I must say. Haha~ Anyways, let's go.
Wo haasya taur par kehte hue mudi toh,
Veer : Take back what you just said.
Divya : Huh???
Peeche se Veer ki tezz awaaz ne usse palatne par majboor kar diya.
Veer : Take back what you just said... NOW!!!!
Suhana : DIVYYAAAAA!!!!
Jab Suhana bhi uchi awaaz me chillaayi toh Divya ki curiousity Veer ke prati aur bhi zyaada badh gayi. Uski apni dost ek ladke ke liye uss se uchi awaaz me boli? Okay! Now this was strange.
Divya ne seedhe seedhe Veer ko gigolo ka naam de diya tha. Veer ko gussa nahi aaega toh kya aaega? Gigolo darasal uss shaks ko kaha jaata hai jab ek umr me badi aurat apni umr se chote ek naujavaan ladke ko apne saath rakhti hai, uska kharcha uthaati hai taaki badle me woh uske saath bistar par kuch rang reliya mana sake.
Divya ne yahi anumaan lagaaya tha ki Veer Suhana ka koi gigolo tha, par aisa bilkul bhi nahi tha. Veer toh keval Suhana ka favour poora karne aaya tha. Warna woh aata hi nahi. Aur ye aurat usse ek gigolo ki upaadhi de rahi thi? The nerves!!! The audacity...
Divya : Ohhhh!! Interesting! Interesting! Mujhe laga tum Gaurav se ab tak bore ho gayi hogi Suhana. Haha~ I didn't expect you to be so loyal. Anyways, I do apologize. Let's get moving now.
Aur woh palat ke aage jaane lagi. Divya ke aage jaate hi idhar Suhana Veer ke paas aayi aur usse ahaat karte hue boli,
Suhana : Always keep a distance from her. Tumhaare bhale ke liye hi bol rahi hu.
Veer : Mujhe laga tha aap unki acchi dost hogi. Par dekh ke lagta nahi.
Suhana : Hum acche dost hi hai. Par woh aisi hi hai. Aur lagta hai woh tum me interested hai. Wo koshish karegi tum se harr baat jaan'ne ki but you better stay silent okay?
Veer : Alright!
Suhana : Aur jitna ho sake uss se duri bana ke rakhna.
Veer : Hmm~
Suhana : Let's go now!!
Aur Divya ke hi peeche peeche Suhana sang Veer bhi chal diye. Apne suitcase ko kheechte hue Veer aage badha, uski nazre paini hokar Divya ki peeth par jam gayi.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of more than 5.2k words. This marks the beginning of the House of the Killers arc. Yaha se story ek naya mod legi. Toh, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka guys. Tab tak ke liye,
Dhanyavaad!