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Thanks man!Siti bjane pr majboor kr diye ho or sath hi ansu bahane pr bhi bhaya Mind blowing superb lajvab amazing wonderful update bhai with awesome writing skills
Ava ki tasveere bhale hi 2 nyi thi pr baki sabhi ne jo us situation me impact dala hai vo kabil-e-tarif hai bhai sandar
Ava ka masti karte huye serious ho Jana
Nahi! Wo couple nahi hai. Ek french person hai black. aur ladki yaani Hana Terashima japanese hai. Lekin wo bhi french citizen hai.Joye ki bhi yha Charcha Hui or sath hi hame 2 nye character ke naam pta chle, Chris or Hana terasima, jo Sayad couple hi hai or vo Japan se hai pr idhar France ki nagrikta liye huye hai dono, unhe koi mission diya gya hai jisko unhe kal se hi anjam dena hai, sochne vali baat hai kahi ye Dr ya vha ke koi staf member me se to nhi jaha Ava ki mom hai...
Hum dekhte hai aage kya hone waala hai.WTFya kahe
ya soche
ye Crimson hi pda hua hai apni Ava ke pichhe, Lekin vo aisa kyo bola ki Akhirkar maine tumhe dhundh hi liya Grace Martin. Crimson arc ke suru hone se Pahle Kaera ka bolna Crimson blood, Ava pr kidnapping ka asafal pryash karke use darana Taki vo veer ko bula sake idhar or sabse important ki Ava ke pita ki mrityu ke baad uski ma coma me hote huye bhi Crimson ka use dhundhna usi Samay Ava ka aisa album Jisme Uski ma ke liye pyar tadap Chinta or Dukh ka hona...
Yah sab kuchh indicate karta hai ki ye jo Crimson naam ka ghanta hai use veer bjane ka pryash karne vala hai pr veer uska direct dushman bhi nhi hai vo to Ava ki vajah se raste me aa gya hai or ab fasne vala hai...
Sirf ju hi nahi, mein bhi middle class family se hu.Veer ne apne status me intelligence ko 150 or apperence ko 120 me rakh kar baki sab ko 140 kr diya hai or uske kharch huye points ko lekr jis tarah se veer or pari ke conversation show kiye hai aapne Vo pure middle class mentality ke normal life ke jaise dikhaya hai or ise padh kr maza aaya halki hasi ke sath... (Mai bhi middle class hi hu.)
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Yes! Par unka milna kaafi msuhqil hota hai.Veer ne ek gold tier ki martal art skill bhi kharid li hai sath hi hame pta chla ki dimond skill kharidne se jyada behtar legendry skill pr focus karna hai...
Ava ki maa coma me hai. Ye bataya gaya hai. Head injury ke kaaran.Akhir kya kahani rahi hogi Ava ki MA ki is Crimson ke sath ya fir Ava ke papa ki, sochne pr majboor hu, baar baar vhi dimag ja rha hai...
Dard to tha isme koi do ray nhi, Ava ke gane me, pr us dard me jo tadap jo bebasi dikhai gyi hai sach me ankhe mund kr usme ghulne ka man karta hai dubne ka ji karta hai...
Wo Veer ki baat se emotional ho gayi thi. Isliye woh pause tha waha pe...Pari kuchh der kyo chup ho gyi thi Bolte Bolte, kya vo sach me pad gyi thi ki kya jvab du ya kuchh or hi baat thi jo vo chhupa gyi, pari ne kuchh Ruk kr bola,
You are such a kind Man.
Thanks a lot man! Keep supporting!Sabse spacial moment tha jb Ava ne goli Marne ka isara kiya halka sa mushkura kr veer ki taraf lift le pass or Uspr vo picture, I'm sure Readers ki jaan hi le gyi vo...
Uske baad ka Ava ka gana hi tha Best is update me...
Bilkul! Bilkul!Bhai I love you nhi bola to kya hua, veer ne meri pari to bola hai na... Kyo werewolf bhayaab yah to 2 hi logo ko Bolte hai ya to gf Ya fir khud ki aulad ko...
Bilkul! Aur Ava ukse abhi utna close bhi nahi hai.Veer ko gift me vanity van dene ka kah rhi thi Ava pr veer ne mna kr diya hai yah kahkr ki vo khud kharidega Yadi kabhi jarurat padi to... Sahi hai ab Har chij vo gifts ke taur pe nhi rakh sakta hai, khud ka business chlata hai Vo ab...
Hahaha! Geet mera tha bhaaya. Writing nahi! Woh toh forum ka hi ek font hai. Haan lekin aapko bata deta hu ki meri writing bhi bohut sundar hai.वैनिटी वैन कोई भोग- विलास सम्बंधित आवश्यकता नही थी। एक समय हुआ करता था जब फिल्मी नायिकाओं को शुटिंग के दौरान प्राइवेसी हासिल नही हो पाती थी। कपड़े चेंज करना , बाथरूम जाने की तलब , मेकअप करना , कुछ देर रेस्ट करना इनके लिए बहुत ही मुश्किल काम होता था।
मुझे याद है वैनिटी वैन का प्रयोग सबसे पहले फिल्म अभिनेत्री पूनम ढिल्लों ने किया था। इसके बाद तो हिरोइन क्या हीरो भी इस्तेमाल करने लगे।
नतालिया का कंसर्ट और उसके दर्द भरे गीत सच मे बहुत इमोशनल था। उसका अपनी मां को दर्द भरे गीत द्वारा याद करना अद्भुत था।
कहां से इतना खुबसूरत इंग्लिश लिख दिया आपने वोल्फी भाई ? रेड कलर्स मे लिखा हुआ यह गीत किसी का हैंड राइटिंग लग रहा है। शायद आपकी ही हैंड राइटिंग हो !
Shukriya bhaaya!नतालिया के दोहरे चरित्र की बहुत अच्छी तरह से निखारा है आप ने। कभी मां की याद मे गमगीन तो कभी वीर के साथ किया हुआ उसका बेबाक अंदाज।
तस्वीर का प्रयोग भी परफेक्ट टाइम पर करते है आप।
Uska naam हाना तेराशिमा hai bhaaya.फ्रांस के दो जगहों पर कुछ महत्वपूर्ण घटनाएं घटित हुई।
हना तारासिमा और क्रिस का किसी मिशन को लेकर बातें और अस्पताल मे पड़ी एक महिला ग्रेस मार्टिन की तलाश करता हुआ एक युवक। यह युवक शायद वही है जिसका सामना वीर और सुहानी से बेगास मे हुआ था।
Bohut bohut shukriya bhai. Yu hi saath bane rahiyega!बहुत खुबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई। आउटस्टैंडिंग। और जगमग जगमग भी।
Pahad wali ladki samajh lo... Update 139 me nazar aa jaayegi.Bhai crimson arc main excaitment to bahot hai pata nahi kab hume crimson ka real game dikhega or wo pahadwali ladki kab nazar aayegi??
My god .... Those song lyrics...
Tony kakkar ka poora career dubo do aap to.... Agar do teen aur aise gaane likh diye jaaye...![]()
Ye crimson mujhe bilkul pasand ni aa rha h... Creepy vibes de rha h bahut... Iska kuch karo na Werewolf Sir...![]()
Harr jagah se sundariya aa rahi Veer ke paas.Ava is a strong independent woman but she needs love. A shoulder on which she can put her head to rest. A person on whom she could trust. And Veer is the only person I guess.![]()
Kavya aur Arohi ko dikha diya gaya hai. Nidhi ka dekhta hu. Koi space milti hai toh dikha dunga usse. Wese bhi mushqil hi hai.Kafi time se Kavya, Arohi nd Kritika gayab h. Aur Nidhi mam ki family bhi... Unhe bhi to dikhaiye ...![]()
Ghar me apne.Cutiepie juhi kaha h???![]()
Karan business segment me dikhaayi dega kaafi. Don't worry!Tej nd Bhumika ki chemistry mujhe pasand aa rhi h...wo dono agar real me buddies ban jaaye to dhamal macha dengi.
Karan aur Veer ka interaction bhi aur chahiye mujhe. Veer ka first friend h wo... After golu's unfortunate demise.
Uska maza aa gaya roll khaa keHonestly speaking mujhe wo scenes bahut zyada pasand aate h jaha Veer apne family ki help karta h ... Like wo food truck wala scene. Kitna interesting tha... And my god jis way me aapne wo likha h... Especially Tamanna ka aana aur daud k chale jana... Too good ...
Lekin wo bhaagi kyu? Itna pasand aa gya kya food ki kuch bol na payi?Paise bhi ni diye usne... Loss karwa k chali gyi...
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Yu hi samajh lo!Grace ki bhi koi story h kya? Ava ke father... Jayesh... Unka bhi kuch role ho sakta h kya? Kuch surprise element prepare kar rahe ho aap?![]()
Ek dooje ke liyeVeer and Pari...I love both of them so much. Veer k bina Pari kuch nhi. Aur Pari k bina Veer kuch nhi ... Dono ek dusre se itna jud gaye h ki agar kisi update me Pari ka interaction na aaye to hum readers khud bechenn ho jate h...
Wo tough banda hai!Jaldi se jaldi is crimson ko nikaal k feko ..
Ava ko tang karta h... Uska bhurta bana do veer...![]()
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Abhi ek nayi duniya me dive in karna baaki haiUpdate was superb sir as always. You keep surprising me with your talent. Abundance me bhara h aapke paas... Aur kya dekhne ko milega hame is journey me? I'm curious...
Ads ke liye toh accha browser hi ek option hai ya fir membership lena dear. I cannot help it. And thank you so much. Keep supoorting!Can't wait for the next update. And plz ads ka kuch karwaiye...
Thank you so much for this beautiful update. Waiting for the new one. Keep writing.![]()
Sab pata chalta jayega bhai. Aane waale 4 updates bohut zordaar hone waale hai aur nayi duniya me le jayenge hume. Itne bade bade raaz saamne aayenge ki pucho mat. Bas seat belts baandh ke taiyaar raho ab.Bahot hi behtarin update ...
bahot hi safai ke sath ganne me arad ko dikhya gaya hai .....
veer aa chuka hai ava ko bachane ke liye , ya fir use bulaya gaya hai ava ke jariye ye to waqt hi batayega....
jo naye charecter dikhaye gaye hai unke bare me bhi malum chal pana muskil hai ki dono freinds hai ya foes ye to abhi suspens bana hua hai , par andaja ai ki dono dushman hi hone chahiye .....
ava ki mataji coma me kyu hai? wo admi use kyu dhundh raha hai ? kya koi secret hai iske piche ? ye bhi age dekhne ko milega hi kyuki agar wo admi dhundh raha to hai to kuchna kuchto reson rahega hi .....
ek anfdaja ye lagaya ja sakta hai ke ava ke fevorebility 80 to 90 pahoch jayegi .....
Dhanyavaad bhai!Your story is my favourite story bhai
Thanks!Aakhir Crimson arc chaalu ho hi Gaya. Congrats, bro. Hope you are going to give us exciting & thrilling updates again sooner than later. Eagerly awaiting them![]()
Thanksmarvellous ..
excellent story telling...
keep rocking
Sahi kaha. Crimson ek foreigner launda hai. Pushkar nahi! System me appearance me points kitne hi kyu na invest kar lo wo aapki race change nahi karega. matlab agar aadmi angrez hai toh woh angrez hi dikhega. Aisa nahi ki Indian aadmi appearance me points daal daal ke angrez ki tarah dikhne lage.Ohh but yaha mai ek baat kahna chahunga ki jo readers kah rahe hai ki Crimson pushkar hai to unke liye ju ka ek tark hai ki agar wo pushkar hai chalo maan lete hai lekin uske face ju ne chutiya angrej wali rakhi aur to aur ek direction bhi uska angrezi wali rakhi chalo ab readers ispar kahenge ki ho sakta hai uske face aur body me badalav system ke karan aaya ho but how bc itta hitech chalo koi ni ye point bilkul bekar mano aur chalta mai unke point of view se ki pushkar hi crimson hai nope meko nhi lagta but mai unke tarf se ek tark dunga ki agar wo crimson hai to haa hosakta may be jaisa readers ne kaha ki jaise veer ko system mila tha usi tarah pushkar ko bhi mil sakta hai aur ye baat tab bhi sahi ho sakti hai,aur pushkar ava ke piche isliye pada ho ya uski maa ke piche kyunki wo jab ghar se nikala gaya ho to may be ye uske hi family members ho ya grace martin iski maa. (ye meko kahne me bhi hassi areli haikhair readers bhailogo ki tarf se bhi tark dega apan)
Aur agar mein ye kahu ki Crimson ko aisa koi mission nahi mila toh?Bataya to upar personal reason par ye bhi ek betuka hi tha merliye bhi kyunki crimson pagal thodi hoga ki pagal ki tarah ye sab personal reason ke karan kar raha ho but but system crimson ko mission to de sakta hai n grace martin se related haa obviously dega kyu nhi dega wo system sidha apna raaz thodi na kholega jaise pari nhi kholti hai wo to apne missions ke dwara hi n pari tak pohochna chahega to normal ye simple ye baat bilkul 100percent sahi hai ye baat ki iss sab kand me system ka hath hai ki system ne mission dia hoga grace martin se related so, ye ju ka question clear hogaya Werewolf .
Wo ek hi story padhti hai. Isliye usse adhiktar cheezin yaad rehti hai.My god womentumhe Puri story yaad h kya mai to golu ka bare m bhul hi gya tha....
Btw Nidhi's charector seriously lacking time as well as juhi and some others also.... But hope after crimson arc these will make a good comeback...
Padha bilkul padha. Par sab galat ho.Wolfi tumne humari Crimson ki guessing ko padha ki nahi sach main padhna haske lot pot hojaoge
Wese aapka Harikiran ko Crimson banana bahut jordaar tha hahaha
Thanks!!Behad hi shandar or jabardast update Bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Haan mene bas ek dose hi liya. Zyada nahi. Usme hi araam lag gaya tha. Thaili use ki thi mene. Thanks!Main aapko medications lene se avoid karungi... Ye sab mat lijiye. Kuch gharelu nuskhe try kariye... Medications jab koi option ni ho tab hi lenj chahiye.... Kharab hota h iss se shareer... So plz avoid as much as u can. Oil use kijiye... Wo pani wali thaili bhi try kar sakte ho aap.
Haan shayad wahi hua tha bhaaya.एक करवट और गर्दन को पुरी रात एक ही ओर रखकर सोने से कभी-कभार गर्दन की नस दब जाती है और गर्दन के उस साइड से लेकर पीठ तक दर्द होने लगता है।
इस का उपाय है कि नेक्स्ट कुछ दिनो तक गर्दन को दूसरी तरफ ओर करके करवट के बल सोइए। यही बेस्ट ओप्सन है।
और अधिक दर्द हो तो कोई सिंपल पेन किलर दवा खा सकते है।
Anime se naam liya kyaUska naam हाना तेराशिमा hai bhaaya.B
Tum yaa toh gande waale nashe me ho ya kuch gadbad khaa liye ho. Crimson Pushkar nahi hai. Tumhari pehli baat wahi galat nikal gayi. Woh kaun hai aage pata chalega. System mein develop kar raha hu apni kahani ka. Tumhe kaise pata chalega ki woh kya hai.Slogan ( Sanjeev ) ka character Jo tha woh slogan ( underworld don mafia ya us jaise ) kyu banaa revenge ke wajeh se apni bet ki maut ka badla lekar jisse kishor ji beti kiarra se vaise hi jaise use khayi me chhor diya tha kishor ne apni beti ko bachaane ke liye , har ek ki wajah hoti hai crimson kyu crimson banaa iski bhi wajeh hogi system uska saath hota hai jiske pass usko rakhne ki kaabiliyat ho, yeh Kam se kam 300 years (saal) aage ki technology ke baare me hai , science aur technology ne kaafi pragati kar li hai , magar itni nahi ki koi bhi washiyaat (advance unbiased technology) technology ke baare me bataye, yeh sabhi jaante hai. Itni saari sci- fic movies aati hai jinme sakdo- hazaaro saal aage ki life ke baare me bataya jaata matalab aage ki science-technology aisi ho sakti hai . Aise koi system develop nahi hua hai jo kisi ko kai saari qualities , abilities, intelligence, power, capabilities etc. De . Aise movies sci- fic me aati hai matalab jo science - technology jisme ho aur abhi ke liye kalpnik(fiction). Ho.
Yeh story full of drama, full of emotion several porn par hai , iske sath sath isme action, adventure, drama, tragedy, thriller, suspense, conspiracy, etc.
House of killers concept me jitne bhi killer , criminals the uski wajeh the unka pesha, unki fantacy (shauk) inme se kuchh na kuchh tha
Crimson arc jo ki crimson ki najar Ava ( Nat) ki maa par hai grace Martin par hai, Jo use kidnapped karke Ava se kuchh bhi karwaa sakta hai. Magar crimson ko Ava se jyada jarroori verr par dyaan hai koi use ne uske khilaaf pura trap bhichaaya tha
Yeh story internet short version ke roop me thi mene ise deeply na jaakar 1 hour me 2013 me padh liya tha main main cheej , samjhe