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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,303 83.2%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 202 12.9%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

  • Total voters
    1,567

dev61901

"Never Lose Your Confidence Before You Get Success
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Badhiya update bhai

Ye wala to veer ke liye bahut bhari raha divya ghar pahunch gayi veer ke or veer ki watt lagwa di

1. Lekin ek bat ha divya veer ke ghar gayi to usne apna sir name dhawan bataya na ki apne husband ka kya uske man me kuchh chal raha ha ya fir lagta ha ki wo apne oati se khafa ho gayi ha kher lekin jis tarah divya veer ke raj kholti jaa rahi thi usi tarah veer ke gharwalon ki sanse atak ti jaa rahi thi ki veer ne itna sab kuchh chipa rakha ha me ye soch raha tha ki veer apne karnamo ke bare me apne gharwalon ko shayd batayega lekin wo kaam Divya ne kar diya lekin diya ka attitude sabhi ko ras nahi aya ha khaskar bhavna ko fir bhi aone bete ke liye wo chup rahi abhi to divya se sab khafa ha but who knows bad me kya ho

2. Tej kisi dusri ladki ko veer ke sath nahi dekh sakti uski possessiveness badhti jaa rahi ha or veer ko tej or suhana ki mulakat ka bhi pata ha jisse tej or kuchh jyada bol nahi payi lekin is bar wo khafa ho gayi ha veer se lagta ha jis tarah se wo veer ki see off karne nahi ayi ab kya kare veer bhi ek to mission mila hua ha or uper mission ki penalty bhi khatarnak ha jisse veer ko na chahte hue bhi apne gharwalon ka dil dukhana padta ha

3. Suman ko dekha kaise veer ke liye age aa gayi thi agar divya kuchh ut patang harkat karti jo ki wo na karti lekin fir bhi man lo wo karti to suman to udhar hi jung ched deti or ragini or veer ke bich bhi conversation hui thodi bahut hi sahi hui to jisme veer ke liye fikra thi to wahi divya ke liye warning bhi thi shayd vaise to ragini ko bhi divya kuchh khas pasand nahi ayi

4. Bhawna ko mana liya tha veer ne or shweta kuchh kahna chhahti thi lekin veer ne moka hi na diya use or veer ne pahli bar use shweta maa kahkar bulaya sabke samne wo to udhar hi chari khane chit ho gayi kuchh bol hi na payi wo jo shabd wo sunna chahti thi veer ke muh se akhirkar uski tamanna jo puri ho gayi

5. Kher ek bat ha is sabke bad veer ke gharwale sochenge jarur ki veer jarur china me bhi kuchh jarur kiya hoga or pura sach nahi bataya to shayd in sabke bad wo veer se puri sachai ki demand bhi kar sakte han ki akhir or kitana raaj chhupa ke betha ha veer unse

6. Idhar ava bhi aa gayi sath me veer ke jo divya ko ras nahi aya ava ko france wale incident ki wajah se tane sunne milte han divya se wo to shukra ha ki abhi suhana ko nahi pata ki ava udhar ha or veer ke sath ha or jab dono aamne samne hongi to pata nahi kya hoga divya se jyada suhana khafa ha ava se lekin divya ko wo nahi pata na jo veer ko pata ha ki ava ke pas system ha jo ki veer ke liye ek helping hand ki tarah hi ha kya pata ane wala dushman kitna takatwar ho

7. Or murder spot per iska milna
[Description : A blood lancet. Not usable now.]
Ye kahin se bhi normal to nahi lagta kyonki is kahani me jo bhi milta ha bad me sense banata ha or kuchh chhoti chhoti chijen bad me aisa dhamaka karti ha ki udhar veer ke or idhar padhne walon ke tote ud jate han but wahi is blood test karne wali sui ka koi jya karega ya jo in sabke pichhe ha ya fir system holder jaisa ki pari ne bhi kaha ki iske pichhe kisi system holder ke hone ke chances bahut jyada ha to kya wo logon ka blood utha raha ha ya fir uske paas koi isse related evil skill ho

8. Last me akhir kar veer ir pranjal amne samne dono ne hi ek dusre ko pahchan liya ha ir dono hi sochenge ki wo yaha kya kar raha ha kher lekin scene to age ka majedar hoga madhuri pranjal ka pyar ha lekin veer ek bar madhuri ki madad kar chuka ha or madhuri bhi veer ko pahchan legi or madhuri ko veer ke karib dekhkar pranjal jal bhun kar rah jayega i like it agar aisa hita ha to waise bhi pranjal ne jitna kiya uske hisab se to use abhi tak bahut kam saja mili ha socho divya ya ava ko pata pad jaye veer ke past ke bare me to pranjal ka kya hoga kber wo to hone se raha magar pranjal ki jalne wali ha bahut buri tarah se

9. Kher ek bat to saf ha in sabke bad veer kisi ko bhi ghar le jane ke bare me 100 bar sochega ava ke liye to or mushkil ha kahan wo veer ke pariwar walon se milna chahti thi or kahan divya ne ye kand kar diya ab veer use ghar le jane se pehle sochega jarur or hamari ye trideviyan ava,sonia or kiara na jane kab apas me milengi inko sath me dekhna ha ek frame me kya bate hoti ha inke bich

10. Ek bat or ha hamesha veer ka naya dushman chahe system holder hi kyon na ho hamesha usse powerful hi hota ha jise veer harakar or takatwar hota jata ha ab ye coincidence ha ya kuchh kyonki jyadatar veer ke dushmano se veer ko us mr.X ne hi ek prakar se samne laya ha veer ka or unko veer ke hathon hi harwaya ha ab ya to uski veer per najar ha ya fir use pata ha ki veer ke pas special system ha kyonki jo veer ki pari kar sakti ha wo koi or system nahi kar paya ha abhi tak age ka pata nahi yar fir uska maksad ho ki veer apne system ko full unlock kar de or veer ko harakar uski sari powers wo le le


 
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Rihanna

Don't get too close dear, you may burn yourself up
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Agle waale me toh aur bhi kam the. :laugh:
Don't worry! I'll fix this soon. But kam time ke chalte I had to do that .. next update will be a bombastic one. (That's for sure.) Aur, maza aana shuru ho jayega agle update se.

Although Kavya is shy typically but she's also the most notorious one. She can be bold too. It's because of her friendly nature that she finds it easier than any other sisters to mingle with Veer.

Thanks a lot. Most of the time goes there only when writing any update. You got to show the readers. Not let them read. But show...! And, I try to do that only. I'm glad you guys like it.

Exactly! This point right here. :declare:
She will appear to be an honest policewoman to you. But she's actually not (Not completely.) Notice when her husband says that he wants her to solve this case? She doesn't gets mad. She just corrects him that they should focus on saving peoples' lives instead. She could have went ham there. She also didn't sue the guy immediately when she obtained the recording from him.

That pretty much explains her character which I think is kind of unique as it sets her apart from falling into the cliche settings like a total honest police officer or a total corrupt one. She's honest. No doubt. But she have her principles too. She works a little differently than others.

We still don't know how it will go. You are free to make guesses though. But the update will tell you later on.

Rihanna toh fir bhi muh dikhaayi kar hi jaati hai updates ke baad, bhale hi late aaye. But Death Kiñg toh eid ka chaand hui gawa hai. :sigh2: Na dikhaayi deta hai na hi koi pratikriya. :sigh2:

Yes. Of course.

Ek toh already de diya hai. I'm planning to give one more as a diwali bonus but I just caught cold today. Fever ruk ruk ke aa raha hai. Let's see. Hopefully, mein kal parso tak recover kar jau. I'm in my hometown so, umeed toh yahi hai ki recover jaldi ho jaunga. But let's see what happens. Uss hisaab se mein inform karunga. I really want to give you guys one update which will be a starting banger for this arc. Thanks btw. Keep supporting. ✨
I always give reviews... Late ho jaati hu lekin humesha deti hu....
 

Samar_Singh

Keep Moving Forward
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Wait... You changed ur dp again??? 😲
Then I'll change too 🤣🤣
10 din me 75 baar dp change ho gayi uski....isliye update late hote hai.😌😌😌
 

Rihanna

Don't get too close dear, you may burn yourself up
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10 din me 75 baar dp change ho gayi uski....isliye update late hote hai.😌😌😌
Wait what? 🤣🤣🤣
I won't blame him though... 4-5 baar to abhi mne khud ne badli tab jaa k satisfaction mila 🤣 wo jab fit hoti h uske baad hi samajh aata h ki sahi lag rhi ya nhi...

Lekin 75 times is insane 🤣🤣
 

Rihanna

Don't get too close dear, you may burn yourself up
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Review time... 💁🏻‍♀️
This update was very normal... We got to see only one scene .. I was not expecting this from u Werewolf :nono:

Poora scene Divya nd Veer par hi focused tha... Divya came to Veer's house after asking him to show her his home. Veer reluctantly agreed of course... Then we saw their convos...

We came to know the full name of Divya... Which is Divya Dhawan... So, where's her family??? If she's Dhawan... An Indian lady... Where are her parents? Is she an orphan too? Nd, why does she chose to say Dhawan instead of saying wilson?? Which is nik's surname...

My guessing is that... Divya is fed up with nik... She never loved him... Ye toh sab jaante h... Both nik nd gaurav married Divya nd Suhana just to satisfy their ego nd lust... Unke paas inn dono ki majbooriya thi aur wo evidence ki pushkar ko Divya ne shoot kia tha... Nd that's why they are suffering till now...

So it makes sense that Divya never loved Nik... Upar se Nik ka itna wahiyat sa attitude... Mujhe to uske scenes padhte hi uska gala dabane ka Mann krta h... 🤬

To shayad Divya apni wo identity sabke saamne ni rakhna chaahti... She wants to be known by her real surname... Which was prior to her wedding... Dhawan. Ab main galat bhi ho sakti hu... But this is the most logical explanation I think... According to me...

Divya ko bade hi saste me nipta dia gharwalo ne 🤣🤣 sirf ek glass paani... Are usne Veer ka kaise swagat kia tha first time... Apni rolls Royce ghost me baitha k ghumaya tha... Itne bade Ghar me kya kuch facilities ni di thi... Veer ne sirf paani pila ke use ghar bhej dia 🤣 very bad... 🤣

Shayad abhi Veer ki family utna khuli ni h uske saamne... Maybe future me hume kuch dekhne ko mile... Kuch interesting...

Aur, fir yahi scene aage continue hua jaha Veer nd Divya Pune k liye nikal gaye... Nd Ava joined them too... She said that she got a mission as well ... Ab mujhe uski baat par na... 50-50 bharosa ho rha h... Maybe she's lying just to spend her time with Veer. But then again... Knowing her personality... Wo Veer ko betray karne k baad uss se jhoot ni bolegi... So she might be correct too... Lekin fir wo uss se pyaar bhi karti h ... To ye step utha bhi sakti h... Aaaaaaa it's so much frustrating... 😩😩

Blood lancet ka milna definitely ek evidence h ki system holder iske peeche h ... Nd mujhe to ye wahi ab pagal prisoner escapee hi lg rha h... Ye wahi h... Definitely....

But ye pagal ye sab kyu kar rha h bas wahi janana h hume... nd ye arc nidhi ko kaise highlight krta h wo bhi dekhna h ... Wahi main highlight hogi iss arc ki I think ... Nd fir aap next arc ka base bhi end Tak rakh hi doge jaisa ki aap har arc k end me karte aaye ho...

Asli fun to blood lancet k milne ke baad se hi shuru hua h .. ab kuch speed pakdi h arc ne .. as u said... Next update se sab fastam fast ho jayega... So I'm waiting for that...

Pranjal nd Veer are face to face... After such a long time.... I want to see their interaction... Ab to madhuri bhi unke beech h... Aur interesting baat ye h ki... Madhuri ko Veer yaad aa jayega... Because Veer ne use apna coat dia tha... Delhi me... So definitely wo use pehchan jayegi ... Aur jab wo ye jaanegi ki yahi woh Veer tha jiske Ghar wo bachpan me jaati thi... Tab uska reaction kaisa hoga...

Aur pranjal ka reaction ye dekhne k baad ki madhuri uss se zyada Veer k itna close kyu h... Haha 🤣🤣 bechara jealous ho jayega... Jal bhun jayega...

Anyways... This update was indeed a little lackluster when compared to your other updates... But I'm not complaining... 😗

I'm just saying ... 😗
Nothing else 😗

Waiting for the next mind blowing update eagerly...
Agla bhi agr thoda lackluster h to please use thoda bada rakhiyega...
Keep writing... Love ur work always... 🩷
 
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