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Nd this...Veer (smiles) : Kya tumhari nigrani bhi rakhne ki zaroorat hai mujhe?
Divya (grins) : Kyu nahi? Agar tum meri rakhoge toh mein tumhari rakhungi.
Veer (smiles) : Toh ye toh achha hai na? Mein taiyaar hu. Bolo?
Woh muskurayi aur unke beech ki doori ko kam kar uske nazdeek aayi.
Divya : Be careful, Veer! Tum ek shadi shuda aurat ko woh ideas de rahe ho jo uske mann me kabhi nahi aane chahiye.
Veer : Jaise ki-!?
It's good. I like it.How's my dp now?? Werewolf
Is it good?is it upto your liking?
Let me know... Nd do tell an expected date for the next update... I want to see Veer Pranjal and Madhuri's interaction before this diwali anyhow... Otherwise... Ghar par aake sutli fod k jaungi...![]()
If that's what you believe... Then so be it...It's good. I like it.
Your av seems like it's trying to seduce me... Heh~![]()
Yes it is!!!Wonderful story with unique concept mr auther
Yes. Next update se heat badh jayegi. Koshish karunga diwali se pehle dene ki.Bro I was expecting a 10k + update
But it's okay
Update acha tha
Abhi arc peak ho jae ga next update se to air mzza aye ga
Family doesn't know much about his work. They know that he's solving this case because his observational skills are required. But they don't know that there's so much more to it. And, they can only watch from afar while handling his businesses and other works. So, they are his assets for supporting his business in his absence but they are his liabilities too if any danger approaches. Because, they won't be able to deal with a system holder. Only Veer can protect them. Thanks btw.Explosive update!
It will be interesting to see what happens next. Veer has been a kind of lone wolf in past, but now needs to get his family onboard in some form in this mission. In someways, it was easy for him to leave - not so much anymore. There was a kind of strength there. In these kind of situations - will family support help veer or become liability?
Waiting for what’s cooked in the next part!!![]()
Wo bhi hai aur upar se mein abhi thoda beemar bhi pad gaya tha.Diwali ka time hai isliye sayad sab busy hai saaf safai mein![]()
Dekhna hoga aage kya hota hai. Agle update me hume Veer aur Pranjal ka Convo dekhne zaroor milega. Thanks btw.Accha update tha bhai.
Jab ladkiyan ek jagah hoti hai toh aisA hi hota hai. Bechara veer ke baal nhi noche gye wahi bhaut hai.![]()
Pranjal ki lagegi iss baar acche se worst senoerio yeh hoga ki uski lover veer ke niche end karegi. Opps.![]()
We will come to know soon.I have a strong feeling that this is 'Pagal Doctor' who escaped from prison when Crimson blew it.
Agla update ka intezar karne kathrilling update... but dil ko sukoon ni aaya ... dil mmaange more![]()
Ghar ke kisse abhi hume kam hi dikhenge. Zyadatar focus humaara baahar hi rahega.Nice update
No case is on
Or shayad ghar mein ab kuch cases hone wale hai Veer pe
Thanks a lot.Dingsuper update werewolf bhai nice conversation between Divya and veer family
pranjal ka kya hoga jab woh dekhega madhuri veer se parichit hai nicely edited best of luck for your new update keep posting.
Exactly! Thanks.Awesome update Bhai
Lagta hai aage ke updates me aur thrill badne wala hai
Air pranjal ki to lagane wali hai