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Ye sab samay hi batayega. But definitely there are some fixed names. Sonia indeed door hoti jaa rahi hai lekin abhi humne sahi se uske scenes ko cook kiya hi nahi hai. Abhi use aane toh do fir dekho...How will veer's future tie up be ?
Veer-
kaera, sonia, ava ,tej, bhumika, arohi ,kavya and for married or divorcee Nidhi,Divya Suhana ,Ragini .
There are so many girls and womans .
Kya hoga jab tej aur kavya ko pata chalega ki kaera sonia ava jaisi super beautiful and hot girls bhi veer ke peeche hai .
Obvio hai ki heartbreaks hona hi hai .par kuch names fixed honge hi .
Sonia bahut dur hoti jaa rahi hai veer se upar se profit path bhi veer ko suhana kaera aur baki girls se contact mein rakhe hue hai par badluck for sonia.
ExactlySonia bhi apna koi na koi game definitely khelegi jab use Kaera ke bare mein pata chalega.
Thanks man. I appreciate it.Awesome.... outstanding and Great update...!!
Literally, the way you have written...?
Brilliant and Fabulous..!!
SPECIALLY the Part where you defined Kavya-Veer's Meet-up, Definitely......
It Was Superrrrbb...!!![]()
Looks like you enjoyed quite a lotMY fav. Part is when -
1- Kavya was facing unexpected seductive and romantic moments..
2- Her Shyness
3- Her situations where she Struggled to control.
4- Or ye kya Story me bhi PaPa ki Pari
5- Kavya pair kyu Ghaseet rahee hoo sandals ghis jayngi..beaks hain toh..??
6- When She'd imagined his brother'sand controls herself
7- Bhaiyya k Sakht Hath Apni Kamar pe feel kr liye woh bhi Hard Grip k sath
8- Her Soft Soft and Untouched Pom Pomgrabbed by her Elder Bro-Crush
(most fav. In favs...
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9- She pleaded- Yeeee!!,..bhaiyya pleassee...abhi nhi..!!
We'll see. But Kavya ko ye jealousy feel karwaana kaafi bhaari pad sakta hai aage bhi agar woh firse iss baare me sochti hai toh.Toh hamari bholi or cute Kavya Madam chalaak nikli hnn..apne hi Bhai or Lover Veer ko Jealous feel karana chahati thi apne plan se..?
But use kya pta Veer ko to Rebecca tk na fasa paayi fir ye to uski nanhi c behn hai..
Wese she tried very well..
Lekin ye kya khud k bichaye jaal me khud hi fass gyi
Itna to tai hai ab iski Pragya se to nhi banne wali or agr kahee Pragya bhi mohit ho gyi tooo...![]()
Kavya immature hai thodi si. Aur isi immaturity me woh kabhi kabhi thoda bold moves dikha deti hai. Veer was caught off guardBhai ye Kavyaaaaa...
Not only Veer thinks even I'm also thinking ye wahi ladki hai...??
Veer ko khulla offer de dala in front of him...Matlab she's ready to be served by her Beloved Brother
Dono cakes ke aise Darshan kara diye ki bichara experienced Banda bhi Sharma gyaa... played well Cutie
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Lol! Tej is actually pretty shy... Wo bold zaroor hai lekin andar se uski kitni phatati hai ye humne kaafi scenes me dekha hua hai. Like when she kissed Veer... She went back to her room after that and she actually cameGhar ki sabse Chhoti behn Badi behno se jyada Bold ho gyeee...
I thought Tej might be the girl who touch the line of Incest,but Kavya came Out of Syllabus...![]()
Dhanyavad bhaiAb toh aage k scenes or bhi intresting hone wale hain....
If Tejal is Shatabdithen Kavya is Gatimaan
Again broo.... your writing, describing and explaining skills...![]()
I'm glad ki sabhi ko ye part pasand aaya. That means mein safal ho gayaThe way you described Kishor's Antilia,it flashes like I'm in front of that and seeing with my own nude eyes. Your explanations was so wonderful as i felt the auras of every things who were creating arrogance of wealth,i smelled...
Trisha's inner situations...jab aapko waha ki har chhoti se chhoti cheeje ek alg Spclty rkhti hoon or aapko Thappad ki trh lag rhi hooon but manna pdega her Mentality was Lit...she proved herself not even show off wealth but also in front of Kishore
Law and Justice same for Everyone,She'd Proved
HAT'S OFF TO HER![]()
Their friendship is getting strong day by day indeed.Veer ki entry to unexpected or daring thi...ek dost ne waqt padne par sath diya tha to dusra dost bhi kbhi bhoola nhi aa gya usko bachane... Their Growing FrndShip
He came, saved and left like a Kingdoes
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Thanks a lot for this beautiful revo. Yes, next update se dhamake shuru ho jayenge. You just wait and watch. And, keep supporting dude.Finally, he gone...
Ab bichari madhuri or us serial killer k scenes aaynge matlab Dhamaaakaaa....
Baaki the update was soooo beeuutiifuullll
No matter what the length was,i always felt connected to reading
Thanks for giving us Lovely scenes![]()
Thanks a lot. Nidhi's segments are cooking... This arc's end will set the entire tone for Veer and Nidhi's relationship. I have to do things according to my plot. I can't unnecessarily show Nidhi with scenes that make no sense just to satisfy the readers. Because, I know what's about to come next. Yes, Nidhi's scenes are being delayed but you'll love the scenes that are about to come. That's for sure...Best hindi story I have read till now seriously!
But 150+ plus chapters and no scene for Nidhi (ig she's the fmc if I'm not wrong)damn. It was like the longest wait ever...
moment of the story for me
when Veer left Nidhi's home...that was really tense.
Anyway I loved what l've read until now ...so I have to stay till the end. Hoping for some steam in next chapters soon!
Thanks a lot. Nidhi's segments are cooking... This arc's end will set the entire tone for Veer and Nidhi's relationship. I have to do things according to my plot. I can't unnecessarily show Nidhi with scenes that make no sense just to satisfy the readers. Because, I know what's about to come next. Yes, Nidhi's scenes are being delayed but you'll love the scenes that are about to come. That's for sure...![]()
Tysm
He'll find something soon now that he's investigating on this case. Nothing can get past his eyes. Veer is a menace when it comes to deducing the mysteries.
Thanks
Yes. Very soon. Guess karo ki behno me se pehle baazi kaun maarega?
Thanks a lot.
Dhanyavad.
Bas zyada der na ho jaaye.
Dekhte jao man. Ye anxiety se khelegi. Ye mind boggling mystery arc nahi hai. Last me anxiety hoyegi but sab cheezein fir sense banayegi jab reveal hongi.
Filhal toh Slogan waala case hold par hai. Trisha ke upar hai. Abhi dekhna hoga ki iss case ke saath kya hota hai.
Bilkul! Yahi mera uddeshya bhi hai. Lekin, sadly mujhe aaj hi cold ho gaya hai. Kal badalte hue Mausam ko maine lightly le liya tha aur bike se ghoom ghaam ke kaafi late aaya. Thand lag gayi. Ab aaj fever aur sardi ho rakhi hai. But still... I'll try my best ki jald se jald recover ho jau aur ek update is month ke end se pehle toh de hi du. Kind of like a diwali bonus...I'll try my best to recover asap. Thanks btw.
It's a spoiler. I can't disclose it right now.I know it's irrelevant to ask but still there is a question??
Is there any probability for Sonali and Shreya to get married with Veer????