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Update - 6 ~ A New Home​

Ab tak...

[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]

Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.

Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!

Ab aage...

Kaafi din yu guzar chuke the. Aur aaj Veer ko hospital se leave milne waali thi. Aisa ek bhi din nahi tha jis din Nidhi usse dekhne na aayi ho. Aur aisa ek bhi din nahi tha jis din galti se bhi uske gharwalo me se koi usse dekhne aaya ho.

Kitni ajeeb baat thi.

Par thi toh sacchi baat.

Ghar me asal me Brijesh ne kuch nahi bataya tha. Veer ke accident ki baat keval Brijesh aur uski sauteli maa Shweta ko hi pata thi.

Jab Manorath ne Veer ke baare me dubaara pucha toh Brijesh ne jhuth bol ye keh diya ki Veer apne dost ke ghar me thehra hua hai.

Par aisa toh bilkul bhi nahi tha. Kyuki uska koi dost hi nahi tha.

Yaha inn kuch dino me Veer ne System ke baare me badi hi bareeki se jaana.

Usse pata chala ki jese jese wo missions complete karega ya uplabdhiya haasil karega ya izzat kamaega, apna fame badhaega wese wese usse Experience milega.

Aur yahi Experience jab ikhatta hota jaega wese wese hi uske System ka level badhta jaega.

System se usse free me 10 points bhi mile the jo System ne usse uske owner bann'ne ke liye gift ke roop me diye the. Aur Veer ab issi soch me tha ki kis stat me wo points add kare.

'Mein strength me add karta hu. Sahi rahega na?'

[Mein tumhe suggest karungi ki pehle tum apna ye bheja sahi karo. Ahem! Yaani ki apna intelligence badhao.]

'Hmph! Toh fir abhi mein add nahi karna chaahta.'

[Are you sure? Dhyaan rahe! Tum jo bhi changes karoge apne stats me wo raat bhar lenge change hone me. Matlab yadi tum apni strength abhi badhaate ho toh wo abhi nahi badhegi. Tumhe uska result agle din dekhne ko milega.]

'I see!! Hmm! Toh ek kaam karo. 7 points meri strength me daalo. 2 mere intelligence me aur 1 mere appearance me.'

[Are you sure!?]

'Haan!'

[Well okay!]

Aur tabhi ek ghanti baji...

*Ding*

[7 points have been added to strength.
2 points have been added to intelligence.
1 point has been added to appearance.]

Aur uske baad hi Veer ke stats badal chuke the. Par uska effect agli subah se usse dekhne ko milne wala tha.

Stats :
Strength - 10/100
Intelligence - 6/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 7/100

'Good!! Wese... System!?'

[Hmm!??]

'Tumne kaha tha ki tumne meri jaan bachaayi? Kya tum ek marre hue vyakti ko bhi zinda kar sakti ho?!'

[Nahi! Mene sirf apni urja ka istemaal kiya tha. Yahi kaaran hai ki mein ek din tak shut down thi. Aur tum khud bhi behosh the isliye tumhe pata nahi chala.]

'Wow! Toh aise me toh tum mujhe harr waqt khatro se bacha sakti ho hai na?'

[Bilkul bhi nahi! Aisa sochna bhi mat. Wo urja keval ek baar hi istemaal karne ke liye praapt thi mujhe.]

'Ohh mujhe aur batao na iss baare me.'

[Pehle mera level badhao. Abhi tumhe inn baato ko jaan'ne ka haq nahi hai.]

'Okay!'

[Aur haa! Mujhse zyaada baatein mat kiya karo. Jab zaroori ho keval tabhi...]

'Kyu?'

[Kyuki bolte waqt mujhe energy chaahiye. Aur ye energy mein tumhaare hi shareer se leti hu.]

'Fuck!!! Aur tum mujhe ye ab bata rahi ho!? Tabhi mein sochu mujhe itni thakaan kyu mehsoos hoti thi.'

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Ab shaam ka time ho chuka tha aur Veer ko hospital se discharge kar diya gaya tha.

Abhi wo wahi ek bench par baitha hua tha ki Nidhi saare kaagzi kaam karte hue uske paas aayi aur bagal se baith gayi.

Nidhi


Nidhi : Veer!? Saari formalities ho chuki hai. Ab tumhe hospital se chhutkaara mila.

Nidhi ne muskuraate hue kaha.

Veer : Thank you Ma'am! Mein zindagi bhar aapka abhaari rahunga.

Nidhi : Ye tum kesi baatein kar rahe ho Veer? Ek teacher hone ke naate ye toh meri duty hai ki mein apne student ki help karu.

Veer : Fir bhi Ma'am! Aaj kal toh ghar ke apne saath nahi dete aur aapne sirf meri teacher hone ke naate itna kiya. Uske liye thanks toh banta hi hai na?

Iss baar Veer ne smile karte hue kaha. Par uski smile dekh ek baar fir Nidhi ki bauhe sikudi aur usse andar hi andar ek ajeeb sa dard hua.

Nidhi : Ab... Ab tum kaha jaoge Veer? Tumhare gharwale toh...

Veer : Hmm? Mujhe nahi pata Ma'am. Dekhta hu. Kuch na kuch kar hi lunga.

Nidhi : Nahi! Par aise kaha jaoge tum? Tumhe abhi bhi rest ki zaroorat hai. Kaha rahoge? Kya khaoge? Aur college ka kya?

Veer : College? Mujhe kuch nahi pata Ma'am. Jo bhi hoega, dekha jaega.

Wo itna keh ke waha se utha hi tha ki Nidhi ne uska haath thaam liya.

Nidhi : Nahi! Mein tumhe aise jaane nahi de sakti. Bilkul bhi nahi! Kaha jaoge aur tum? Kaha bhatkoge aisi haalat me? Tum... Tum mere saath chalo.

Veer (shocked) : Huh?

Nidhi : Haa! Aaj se... Aaj se tum mere saath rahoge.

Kitni hi asaani se keh dii Nidhi ne ye baat.

Aur kitni hi asaani se Brijesh ne wo baat kahi thi ~ "Nikal jao iss ghar se."

Dono me kitna antar tha.

Aur kismat ka khel toh dekho. Ki uske ghar se usse yu nikaal diya gaya tha aur aaj Nidhi jo ki sirf uski teacher thi wo yu usse apne ghar le jaane taiyaar thi.

Aur yahi dekh ke Veer ki aankho me aasu aa gaye. Usne Nidhi ka status dekha tha. Wo jaanta tha ki Nidhi khud kitna kasht bhara jeevan vyateet kar rahi thi.

Par iske bawajood usne Veer ko apne ghar par rehne ke liye keh diya.

Veer (namm aankho se) : Nahi! Ma'am! Ye aap... Ye aap kya keh rahi ho? Mein aapko pehle hi boht kasht de chuka hu, ab aur mujhe mushqil me mat daaliye ma'am.

Nidhi : Chup raho ekdum! Aur chalo mere saath.

Veer : Ma'am...

Nidhi : Mene kaha na chup raho. Aaj se tum mere saath hi rahoge. Aur aage ek shabd nahi kahoge tum.

Usne apna haath Veer ke hontho par rakh diya. Nidhi ke komal haatho ka sparsh apne hontho pe paate hi Veer wahi khada ka khada reh gaya. Jab Nidhi ko bhi dhyaan aaya ki usne ekdum se kya kiya usne forun hi apna haath peeche le liya aur uska haath pakad ke usse le jaane lagi.

Veer ke laakho manaane ke baad bhi Nidhi ne uski ek na suni aur usse laake apni scooty par peeche baitha diya.

Nidhi : Acche se pakad ke baithna okay?

Uske bolte hi Veer ke haath Nidhi ki patli kamar pe lipat gaye. Ek pal ke liye toh Nidhi ko bhi ek jhatka sa laga jese hi Veer ke haath uski kamar par bandhe.

Wo iss waqt navy blue saree aur kaala blouse pehni hui thi. Aur peeche se uske aadhe nagn kandhe saaf nazar aa rahe the jo harr pal Veer ko madhosh kar rahe the. Wo khule baal aur wo nasheeli aankhein jo kisi bhi waqt aadmi ko apna deewana bana de.

Thandi hawao se dono ka shareer thanda zaroor ho raha tha par saath hi saath ek ajeeb sii garmi bhi thi jo dono ke hi shareer me iss waqt kahi dabi hui thi.

'Check' Veer ne mann me Nidhi ko peeche se hi dekhte hue kaha toh forun hi Nidhi ke sar ke upar wahi window firse khul gayi.

Sab kuch same hi tha pehle ki tarah siwae ek cheez ke. Aur wo thi...

[Favourability - 30]

Nidhi ki favourability Veer ke prati 10 points se badh gayi thi. Aur kyu na badhti? Wo roz Veer se milne shaam ke waqt aaya karti thi. Roz roz yadi aap kisi se bhi baat karo, aapko thoda boht interest unme aa hi jaata hai. Aisa hi haal kuch Nidhi ka bhi tha.

Veer uska student tha aur iss se pehle kabhi bhi Nidhi ne aise apne kisi bhi student se mulaqaat nahi ki thi. Na hi itni baatein kari thi. Aur toh aur wo ab Veer ko apne ghar le jaa rahi thi. Toh bhala dono ke beech friendship gehri kese nahi hoti?

Veer ke mann me Nidhi ke prati jo respect thi wo ab kayi guna badh chuki thi.

Kitni hi asaani se usne Veer ko apne ghar rehne ko keh diya. Veer jaanta tha ki wo akeli apni beti ke saath rent se rehti hai uske bawajood Nidhi ne uspar iss hadd tak bharosa kar liya ki wo uske saath reh le. Usne ek baar bhi nahi socha ki Veer ko apne ghar par rakhna theek hai ya nahi? Usne ye nahi socha ki uske ghar ki owner kese react karegi ye dekh ke?

Aur isliye Veer ki nazro me Nidhi kisi devi se kam nahi thi.

Veer kass ke uski patli kamar ko apne dono haatho se thaame hue tha. Aur Nidhi bhi Veer ke haatho ko bhali bhaati feel kar paa rahi thi. Na chaahte hue bhi uski dhadkan normal se thodi tezz ho chuki thi.

Iss se pehle keval uske husband ne hi usse aise touch kiya tha. Aur usse hue bhi 2 saal ho chuke the. Aur aaj wahi feeling wo mehsoos kar rahi thi.

Par farq ye tha ki uski kamar ko thaamne waala iss waqt uska husband nahi balki uska student Veer tha. Jo ki uss se 10 saal chota tha.

Aur yahi baat Nidhi ko sata rahi thi. Wo nahi chaahti thi ki Veer jo ki uske chote bhai jesa hai uske touch se wo aisa mehsoos kare. Par inn sab ke bawajood uski dhadkane slow hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi.

2 saalo se ye pehli baar tha jab usne kisi mard ko itni paas se mehsoos kiya tha. Aur usse nahi pata tha ki ek ajeeb sii anubhooti ne uske andar janm le liya hai.

Kuch hi derr me jab ghar aaya, Nidhi ne usse dhyaan se utarwaaya aur gaadi park kii.

Wo ek flat me rent se rehti thi. Uska flat 2nd floor par tha. Veer ko lift me le jaate hue wo 2nd floor par pohuchi aur jese hi apne flat ke paas aayi toh chaunk gayi.

Flat ka taala khula hua tha. Usne forun hi bell bajaayi toh kuch seconds me hi darwaaza khul gaya.

Aur andar se uski beti jo ki abhi abhi school jaana shuru kii thi wo daudte hue aayi aur uske perro se lipat gayi, "Mummmmmyyyyy... Mummy aa gayi!"

Hairaan hote hue Nidhi soch me pad gayi. Wo toh flat me taala laga ke apni beti Juhi ko bagal waale flat yaani ki pados me chorr ke gayi thi. Fir ye sab kya tha?

Ki tabhi andar se ek aur shaks baahar aaya. Aur usse dekh Nidhi ke chehre pe hairaani, fir confusion, aur fir khushi jhalakne lagi.

Ek sundar sii ladki aage badhte hue uske gale se lag gayi, "Diiii!!"

Nidhi (gale lagte hue) : Shreya tu? Yaha?

Shreya


Shreya : Kyu?! Nahi aa sakti?

Nidhi : Mera matlab wo nahi tha tu jaanti hai.

Shreya : I know! And yes! Mein yaha. Hehe~ Aur ab se mein yahi rahungi aapke saath.

Nidhi (hairaani me) : Kyaaaa?

Shreya : Haa! Itna shocked kyu ho? Aap nahi chaahti kya ki mein yaha rahu?

Nidhi : Nahi! Mein bas ye soch rahi hu ki achanak se tum yaha.

Shreya : Hmm! Kyuki Maa papa ne khud kaha hai.

Veer khade khade itna toh jaan gaya tha ki saamne khadi ladki Nidhi Ma'am ki choti behan thi. Fir bhi usne check karna hi sahi samjha.

Veer (mann me) : Check!

Aur Shreya ke sar ke upar tabhi wahi window khul gayi aur uspe likhe shabd Veer ko nazar aane lage.

[ Name - Shreya
Age - 24
Status - Maiden in search for true love.

Bio - Shreya Nidhi ki sagi choti behan hai. Uska mann padhayi me shuru se hi nahi lagta tha aur isliye aaj wo ek youtuber hai. YouTube pe stream karte hue games khelna aur vlogs banaana usse pasand hai. Abhi zyaada subscribers na hone ke kaaran wo zyaada busy nahi rehti. Apni behan Nidhi se boht zyaada pyaar karti hai. Uska sapna hai ek boht badi youtuber bann'na. Sacche pyaar ki talaash me hai. Par koi mila nahi hai abhi. Shreya love at first sight par believe karti hai.

Favourability - 0
Relationship - Strangers.]

Shreya ke baare me jaante hi Veer thoda hairaan tha. Usse dekh ke koi nahi keh sakta tha ki wo ek youtuber thi.

'Hmm! Interesting... Interesting!'

[Sapne dekhna chorr do master!]

'Huh? Kyu??'

[Nahi degi!]

'What the..!?'

[Master aapne dekha na? Wo love at first sight par believe rakhti hai. Pehli nazar me pyaar. Aur aapko abhi dekh ke koi bhi ladki aapke pyaar me nahi padne waali.]

Iske pehle ki Veer System ko jawaab de paata. Shreya ki awaaz uske kaano me padi.

Shreya : Ye kaun hai?!

Nidhi : Ye hai Veer! Mera student.

Shreya : Ohh! Toh? Tuition shuru kar dii kya aapne?

Nidhi : Nahi! Aaj se ye mere saath hi rahega.

Pal bhar ke liye maano sannaata sa chha gaya aur tabhi Shreya ekdum se chillaayi,

Shreya : Whaaaaaaaatttt??

Nidhi : Haaa!

Shreya : Kya kaha aapne? Ye... Ye aapke saath rahega?

Nidhi : Hmm! Lambi kahani hai.

Shreya : Wait! What? But kyu? Aap aise kese kisi ko bhi apne ghar me...!?

Nidhi : Sshhh! Andar chalo pehle.

Andar le jaate hue Nidhi ne Shreya ko Veer ke baare me sab kuch bata diya, jisse sunn Shreya ka dil bhi thoda paseej gaya aur wo Veer ko rakhne ke liye taiyaar ho gayi. Abhi Nidhi washroom gayi hui thi ki tabhi Shreya uske paas aayi...

Shreya : Dekho! Hum tumhe yaha rakh rahe hai kyuki meri dii badi hi bholi hai aur sabki madad karti hai. Aur hum tumhe yaha rakhne ke liye taiyaar hai. Par meri dii ke baare me koi bhi galat khayaal mat laana samjhe? Hmph! I'm watching you...

Aur wo do ungli Veer ki aankho ki taraf karte hue mud ke apni gaand matkaate hue andar chali gayi.
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Update - 6 ~ A New Home​

Ab tak...

[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]

Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.

Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!

Ab aage...

Kaafi din yu guzar chuke the. Aur aaj Veer ko hospital se leave milne waali thi. Aisa ek bhi din nahi tha jis din Nidhi usse dekhne na aayi ho. Aur aisa ek bhi din nahi tha jis din galti se bhi uske gharwalo me se koi usse dekhne aaya ho.

Kitni ajeeb baat thi.

Par thi toh sacchi baat.

Ghar me asal me Brijesh ne kuch nahi bataya tha. Veer ke accident ki baat keval Brijesh aur uski sauteli maa Shweta ko hi pata thi.

Jab Manorath ne Veer ke baare me dubaara pucha toh Brijesh ne jhuth bol ye keh diya ki Veer apne dost ke ghar me thehra hua hai.

Par aisa toh bilkul bhi nahi tha. Kyuki uska koi dost hi nahi tha.

Yaha inn kuch dino me Veer ne System ke baare me badi hi bareeki se jaana.

Usse pata chala ki jese jese wo missions complete karega ya uplabdhiya haasil karega ya izzat kamaega, apna fame badhaega wese wese usse Experience milega.

Aur yahi Experience jab ikhatta hota jaega wese wese hi uske System ka level badhta jaega.

System se usse free me 10 points bhi mile the jo System ne usse uske owner bann'ne ke liye gift ke roop me diye the. Aur Veer ab issi soch me tha ki kis stat me wo points add kare.

'Mein strength me add karta hu. Sahi rahega na?'

[Mein tumhe suggest karungi ki pehle tum apna ye bheja sahi karo. Ahem! Yaani ki apna intelligence badhao.]

'Hmph! Toh fir abhi mein add nahi karna chaahta.'

[Are you sure? Dhyaan rahe! Tum jo bhi changes karoge apne stats me wo raat bhar lenge change hone me. Matlab yadi tum apni strength abhi badhaate ho toh wo abhi nahi badhegi. Tumhe uska result agle din dekhne ko milega.]

'I see!! Hmm! Toh ek kaam karo. 7 points meri strength me daalo. 2 mere intelligence me aur 1 mere appearance me.'

[Are you sure!?]

'Haan!'

[Well okay!]

Aur tabhi ek ghanti baji...

*Ding*

[7 points have been added to strength.
2 points have been added to intelligence.
1 point has been added to appearance.]

Aur uske baad hi Veer ke stats badal chuke the. Par uska effect agli subah se usse dekhne ko milne wala tha.

Stats :
Strength - 10/100
Intelligence - 6/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 7/100

'Good!! Wese... System!?'

[Hmm!??]

'Tumne kaha tha ki tumne meri jaan bachaayi? Kya tum ek marre hue vyakti ko bhi zinda kar sakti ho?!'

[Nahi! Mene sirf apni urja ka istemaal kiya tha. Yahi kaaran hai ki mein ek din tak shut down thi. Aur tum khud bhi behosh the isliye tumhe pata nahi chala.]

'Wow! Toh aise me toh tum mujhe harr waqt khatro se bacha sakti ho hai na?'

[Bilkul bhi nahi! Aisa sochna bhi mat. Wo urja keval ek baar hi istemaal karne ke liye praapt thi mujhe.]

'Ohh mujhe aur batao na iss baare me.'

[Pehle mera level badhao. Abhi tumhe inn baato ko jaan'ne ka haq nahi hai.]

'Okay!'

[Aur haa! Mujhse zyaada baatein mat kiya karo. Jab zaroori ho keval tabhi...]

'Kyu?'

[Kyuki bolte waqt mujhe energy chaahiye. Aur ye energy mein tumhaare hi shareer se leti hu.]

'Fuck!!! Aur tum mujhe ye ab bata rahi ho!? Tabhi mein sochu mujhe itni thakaan kyu mehsoos hoti thi.'

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Ab shaam ka time ho chuka tha aur Veer ko hospital se discharge kar diya gaya tha.

Abhi wo wahi ek bench par baitha hua tha ki Nidhi saare kaagzi kaam karte hue uske paas aayi aur bagal se baith gayi.

Nidhi


Nidhi : Veer!? Saari formalities ho chuki hai. Ab tumhe hospital se chhutkaara mila.

Nidhi ne muskuraate hue kaha.

Veer : Thank you Ma'am! Mein zindagi bhar aapka abhaari rahunga.

Nidhi : Ye tum kesi baatein kar rahe ho Veer? Ek teacher hone ke naate ye toh meri duty hai ki mein apne student ki help karu.

Veer : Fir bhi Ma'am! Aaj kal toh ghar ke apne saath nahi dete aur aapne sirf meri teacher hone ke naate itna kiya. Uske liye thanks toh banta hi hai na?

Iss baar Veer ne smile karte hue kaha. Par uski smile dekh ek baar fir Nidhi ki bauhe sikudi aur usse andar hi andar ek ajeeb sa dard hua.

Nidhi : Ab... Ab tum kaha jaoge Veer? Tumhare gharwale toh...

Veer : Hmm? Mujhe nahi pata Ma'am. Dekhta hu. Kuch na kuch kar hi lunga.

Nidhi : Nahi! Par aise kaha jaoge tum? Tumhe abhi bhi rest ki zaroorat hai. Kaha rahoge? Kya khaoge? Aur college ka kya?

Veer : College? Mujhe kuch nahi pata Ma'am. Jo bhi hoega, dekha jaega.

Wo itna keh ke waha se utha hi tha ki Nidhi ne uska haath thaam liya.

Nidhi : Nahi! Mein tumhe aise jaane nahi de sakti. Bilkul bhi nahi! Kaha jaoge aur tum? Kaha bhatkoge aisi haalat me? Tum... Tum mere saath chalo.

Veer (shocked) : Huh?

Nidhi : Haa! Aaj se... Aaj se tum mere saath rahoge.

Kitni hi asaani se keh dii Nidhi ne ye baat.

Aur kitni hi asaani se Brijesh ne wo baat kahi thi ~ "Nikal jao iss ghar se."

Dono me kitna antar tha.

Aur kismat ka khel toh dekho. Ki uske ghar se usse yu nikaal diya gaya tha aur aaj Nidhi jo ki sirf uski teacher thi wo yu usse apne ghar le jaane taiyaar thi.

Aur yahi dekh ke Veer ki aankho me aasu aa gaye. Usne Nidhi ka status dekha tha. Wo jaanta tha ki Nidhi khud kitna kasht bhara jeevan vyateet kar rahi thi.

Par iske bawajood usne Veer ko apne ghar par rehne ke liye keh diya.

Veer (namm aankho se) : Nahi! Ma'am! Ye aap... Ye aap kya keh rahi ho? Mein aapko pehle hi boht kasht de chuka hu, ab aur mujhe mushqil me mat daaliye ma'am.

Nidhi : Chup raho ekdum! Aur chalo mere saath.

Veer : Ma'am...

Nidhi : Mene kaha na chup raho. Aaj se tum mere saath hi rahoge. Aur aage ek shabd nahi kahoge tum.

Usne apna haath Veer ke hontho par rakh diya. Nidhi ke komal haatho ka sparsh apne hontho pe paate hi Veer wahi khada ka khada reh gaya. Jab Nidhi ko bhi dhyaan aaya ki usne ekdum se kya kiya usne forun hi apna haath peeche le liya aur uska haath pakad ke usse le jaane lagi.

Veer ke laakho manaane ke baad bhi Nidhi ne uski ek na suni aur usse laake apni scooty par peeche baitha diya.

Nidhi : Acche se pakad ke baithna okay?

Uske bolte hi Veer ke haath Nidhi ki patli kamar pe lipat gaye. Ek pal ke liye toh Nidhi ko bhi ek jhatka sa laga jese hi Veer ke haath uski kamar par bandhe.

Wo iss waqt navy blue saree aur kaala blouse pehni hui thi. Aur peeche se uske aadhe nagn kandhe saaf nazar aa rahe the jo harr pal Veer ko madhosh kar rahe the. Wo khule baal aur wo nasheeli aankhein jo kisi bhi waqt aadmi ko apna deewana bana de.

Thandi hawao se dono ka shareer thanda zaroor ho raha tha par saath hi saath ek ajeeb sii garmi bhi thi jo dono ke hi shareer me iss waqt kahi dabi hui thi.

'Check' Veer ne mann me Nidhi ko peeche se hi dekhte hue kaha toh forun hi Nidhi ke sar ke upar wahi window firse khul gayi.

Sab kuch same hi tha pehle ki tarah siwae ek cheez ke. Aur wo thi...

[Favourability - 30]

Nidhi ki favourability Veer ke prati 10 points se badh gayi thi. Aur kyu na badhti? Wo roz Veer se milne shaam ke waqt aaya karti thi. Roz roz yadi aap kisi se bhi baat karo, aapko thoda boht interest unme aa hi jaata hai. Aisa hi haal kuch Nidhi ka bhi tha.

Veer uska student tha aur iss se pehle kabhi bhi Nidhi ne aise apne kisi bhi student se mulaqaat nahi ki thi. Na hi itni baatein kari thi. Aur toh aur wo ab Veer ko apne ghar le jaa rahi thi. Toh bhala dono ke beech friendship gehri kese nahi hoti?

Veer ke mann me Nidhi ke prati jo respect thi wo ab kayi guna badh chuki thi.

Kitni hi asaani se usne Veer ko apne ghar rehne ko keh diya. Veer jaanta tha ki wo akeli apni beti ke saath rent se rehti hai uske bawajood Nidhi ne uspar iss hadd tak bharosa kar liya ki wo uske saath reh le. Usne ek baar bhi nahi socha ki Veer ko apne ghar par rakhna theek hai ya nahi? Usne ye nahi socha ki uske ghar ki owner kese react karegi ye dekh ke?

Aur isliye Veer ki nazro me Nidhi kisi devi se kam nahi thi.

Veer kass ke uski patli kamar ko apne dono haatho se thaame hue tha. Aur Nidhi bhi Veer ke haatho ko bhali bhaati feel kar paa rahi thi. Na chaahte hue bhi uski dhadkan normal se thodi tezz ho chuki thi.

Iss se pehle keval uske husband ne hi usse aise touch kiya tha. Aur usse hue bhi 2 saal ho chuke the. Aur aaj wahi feeling wo mehsoos kar rahi thi.

Par farq ye tha ki uski kamar ko thaamne waala iss waqt uska husband nahi balki uska student Veer tha. Jo ki uss se 10 saal chota tha.

Aur yahi baat Nidhi ko sata rahi thi. Wo nahi chaahti thi ki Veer jo ki uske chote bhai jesa hai uske touch se wo aisa mehsoos kare. Par inn sab ke bawajood uski dhadkane slow hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi.

2 saalo se ye pehli baar tha jab usne kisi mard ko itni paas se mehsoos kiya tha. Aur usse nahi pata tha ki ek ajeeb sii anubhooti ne uske andar janm le liya hai.

Kuch hi derr me jab ghar aaya, Nidhi ne usse dhyaan se utarwaaya aur gaadi park kii.

Wo ek flat me rent se rehti thi. Uska flat 2nd floor par tha. Veer ko lift me le jaate hue wo 2nd floor par pohuchi aur jese hi apne flat ke paas aayi toh chaunk gayi.

Flat ka taala khula hua tha. Usne forun hi bell bajaayi toh kuch seconds me hi darwaaza khul gaya.

Aur andar se uski beti jo ki abhi abhi school jaana shuru kii thi wo daudte hue aayi aur uske perro se lipat gayi, "Mummmmmyyyyy... Mummy aa gayi!"

Hairaan hote hue Nidhi soch me pad gayi. Wo toh flat me taala laga ke apni beti Juhi ko bagal waale flat yaani ki pados me chorr ke gayi thi. Fir ye sab kya tha?

Ki tabhi andar se ek aur shaks baahar aaya. Aur usse dekh Nidhi ke chehre pe hairaani, fir confusion, aur fir khushi jhalakne lagi.

Ek sundar sii ladki aage badhte hue uske gale se lag gayi, "Diiii!!"

Nidhi (gale lagte hue) : Shreya tu? Yaha?

Shreya


Shreya : Kyu?! Nahi aa sakti?

Nidhi : Mera matlab wo nahi tha tu jaanti hai.

Shreya : I know! And yes! Mein yaha. Hehe~ Aur ab se mein yahi rahungi aapke saath.

Nidhi (hairaani me) : Kyaaaa?

Shreya : Haa! Itna shocked kyu ho? Aap nahi chaahti kya ki mein yaha rahu?

Nidhi : Nahi! Mein bas ye soch rahi hu ki achanak se tum yaha.

Shreya : Hmm! Kyuki Maa papa ne khud kaha hai.

Veer khade khade itna toh jaan gaya tha ki saamne khadi ladki Nidhi Ma'am ki choti behan thi. Fir bhi usne check karna hi sahi samjha.

Veer (mann me) : Check!

Aur Shreya ke sar ke upar tabhi wahi window khul gayi aur uspe likhe shabd Veer ko nazar aane lage.

[ Name - Shreya
Age - 24
Status - Maiden in search for true love.

Bio - Shreya Nidhi ki sagi choti behan hai. Uska mann padhayi me shuru se hi nahi lagta tha aur isliye aaj wo ek youtuber hai. YouTube pe stream karte hue games khelna aur vlogs banaana usse pasand hai. Abhi zyaada subscribers na hone ke kaaran wo zyaada busy nahi rehti. Apni behan Nidhi se boht zyaada pyaar karti hai. Uska sapna hai ek boht badi youtuber bann'na. Sacche pyaar ki talaash me hai. Par koi mila nahi hai abhi. Shreya love at first sight par believe karti hai.

Favourability - 0
Relationship - Strangers.]

Shreya ke baare me jaante hi Veer thoda hairaan tha. Usse dekh ke koi nahi keh sakta tha ki wo ek youtuber thi.

'Hmm! Interesting... Interesting!'

[Sapne dekhna chorr do master!]

'Huh? Kyu??'

[Nahi degi!]

'What the..!?'

[Master aapne dekha na? Wo love at first sight par believe rakhti hai. Pehli nazar me pyaar. Aur aapko abhi dekh ke koi bhi ladki aapke pyaar me nahi padne waali.]

Iske pehle ki Veer System ko jawaab de paata. Shreya ki awaaz uske kaano me padi.

Shreya : Ye kaun hai?!

Nidhi : Ye hai Veer! Mera student.

Shreya : Ohh! Toh? Tuition shuru kar dii kya aapne?

Nidhi : Nahi! Aaj se ye mere saath hi rahega.

Pal bhar ke liye maano sannaata sa chha gaya aur tabhi Shreya ekdum se chillaayi,

Shreya : Whaaaaaaaatttt??

Nidhi : Haaa!

Shreya : Kya kaha aapne? Ye... Ye aapke saath rahega?

Nidhi : Hmm! Lambi kahani hai.

Shreya : Wait! What? But kyu? Aap aise kese kisi ko bhi apne ghar me...!?

Nidhi : Sshhh! Andar chalo pehle.

Andar le jaate hue Nidhi ne Shreya ko Veer ke baare me sab kuch bata diya, jisse sunn Shreya ka dil bhi thoda paseej gaya aur wo Veer ko rakhne ke liye taiyaar ho gayi. Abhi Nidhi washroom gayi hui thi ki tabhi Shreya uske paas aayi...

Shreya : Dekho! Hum tumhe yaha rakh rahe hai kyuki meri dii badi hi bholi hai aur sabki madad karti hai. Aur hum tumhe yaha rakhne ke liye taiyaar hai. Par meri dii ke baare me koi bhi galat khayaal mat laana samjhe? Hmph! I'm watching you...

Aur wo do ungli Veer ki aankho ki taraf karte hue mud ke apni gaand matkaate hue andar chali gayi.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Like zaroor kijiyega yadi pasand aaye. Next update se story me action aur masala aana shuru hoega.

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai...
Nice and awesome update...

 

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Update -1 ~ Unforgetful Incident.​

*Thud*

Ek zorrdaar dhakka Veer ki peeth par pada aur wo saamne ki orr girte girte bacha.

"Hahahahaha!!!"

Aur tabhi peeche se kayi logo ki hassne ki awaazein sunayi dii.

Veer ke haath kaanp rahe the. Dhakke ke kaaran uska mobile phone girte girte bacha tha, usne forun hi usse apne kaapte hue haatho me kass ke thaama aur phone ki screen on karke wo contact list me se kisi ka naam dhund ke usne apna phone kaano ki orr badhaaya hi tha ki tabhi...

*Thud*

Ek aur dhakka zorr se uski peeth par pada, par iss baar wo khud ko sambhaal na saka aur saamne ki orr dhadaam se gir pada. Uska phone haatho se chhutak kar kayi tappa khaate hue zameen par jaa gira. Pata nahi sahi salaamat bacha bhi tha uska phone ya nahi.

Veer ne karaahte hue apni nazre upar kari aur dekha. Kareeb 5 se 6 ladke uske saamne khade hue the. Aur unka leader jiska naam Ajay tha wo apni Duke bike par adab ke saath baithe hue uski iss haalat par mazze le raha tha.

Ajay : Hahaha! Kyu be chuze! Bol!? Karega aisi harqat dubaara?

Apne kaapte hue perro ko Veer ne badi hi mushqil se control kiya aur utha.

Akhir uski galti kya thi? Aaj uske apne college me 2nd year ka pehla din tha aur pehle din hi uske saath ye sab ho raha tha?

Shaam ke 7 baj chuke the aur Veer jisse 2 ghante pehle hi apne ghar pohuch jaana chaahiye tha wo yaha 6 se 7 ladko dwaara bully kiya jaa raha tha.

Veer shuru se hi ek kamzor yuvak tha. Usse dekh ke aisa lagta tha maano uski rachna bhagwaan ne badi hi kathorta se kari ho.

Na wo padhayi me hoshiyaar tha, na dikhne me koi boht handsome tha, shareer se bhi kamzor tha, bol chaal me bhi ekdum peeche aur usme koi bhi talent nahi tha. Kul milaake ek bhondu sa insaan.

Apne naam ka ulta hi tha Veer. Veerta naam ki toh koi cheez hi nahi thi usme. Par bechaare usme uski kya galti thi? Wo toh jesa tha, wesa tha. Kya uski iss baat ka fayda uthaana zaroori tha?

Aaj wo yaha college ke peeche ki sunsaan sadko me maujood tha. Wo aana nahi chaahta tha par usse yaha laaya gaya tha.



Saamne khade uske college ke seniors uspe atyachaar karne ke liye usse yaha sunsaan jagah par lae hue the.

Par isme Veer ki galti kya thi?

Uski galti ye thi ki aaj college ke departure ke waqt wo ek khubsoorat senior ladki ko dekh raha tha jo ki laazmi tha. Wo thi hi itni khubsoorat ki koi bhi usse dekh ke apni nazre na hata paata. Wo patli kamar, teekhe nain, bhaari stan, perfect figure aur wo qaatilaana chehra. Kisi ko bhi madhosh kar de.

Par badqismati se Veer jab uss sundar ladki ko taad raha tha, Ajay ne usse aisa karte dekh pakad liya tha.

Aur bas, yahi Veer ki galti thi.

Wo ladki Ajay ki kaafi acchi dost thi jiske peeche Ajay haath dhoke kaafi samay se pada hua tha. Uss ladki ka naam tha Pragya, jo ki Ajay ki classmate thi.

Veer ki nazar ne hi Ajay ko itna gussa dila diya tha ki uska mann kar raha tha ki wo ussi waqt Veer ki aankhein noch le. Akhir himmat kese hui kisi ladke ki uski hone waali gf ko taktaki laga ke dekhne ki.

College me kisi ne bhi aaj tak uske khilaaf jaane ki himmat nahi kii thi. Toh fir akhir iss Veer ki kese himmat ho gayi?

Yahi baat Ajay ko bilkul na khali.

Veer ko yaha laake aaj wo usse accha sabak sikhaane waala tha. Taaki, bhavishya me koi bhi uski Pragya ko ghurne se pehle 100 baar soche.

Ajay (gurraate hue) : Mene kuch pucha tere se chuze. Bol? Karega aisi harqat firse?

Veer bhale hi kamzor tha par wo apne khud ke prati imaandaar zaroor tha. Usse pata tha usne koi galti nahi kii hai. Akhir ek sundar ladki ko yadi aapne kuch seconds dekh liya toh kya wo aapki galti hai? Bilkul bhi nahi! Veer toh keval Pragya ki sundarta ki prashansha kar raha tha mann hi mann.
Isme pitaayi ki baat kaha se aa gayi?

Aur yahi dhyaan me rakhte hue usne Ajay ke sawaal ka koi uttar nahi diya. Wo bas chup chaap apna nichla honth daanto se dabaaye hue sar jhukae khada raha. Uski mutthi zorr se kassi hui thi.

Ajay : Ye aise nahi maanega. Dose do saale ko.

Uski baat sunn uske saare saathi Veer ki taraf badhne lage. Jese jese Veer peeche jaata, wese wese wo aur kareeb aate.

Aur kuch pal ke andar hi Veer ab 6 logo se ghira hua tha. Iske pehle ki wo kuch keh paata, unn 6 ke 6 laundo ne Veer pe mukke aur laate barsaana shuru kar dii.

"Aaarghhhhhhh"

Veer ki karaahne ki awaaz sunsaan road me gunj rahi thi par na toh koi sunn'ne wala tha aur na hi koi madad karne waala. Wo ladke rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the.

Koi uske pait me maarta toh koi uske gaal pe, koi peeth pe vaar karta toh koi uski pasli pe. Aur harr ek hamle par Veer ke muh se ek dard bhari cheenkh nikal jaati jo uss sunsaan sadak ki shaanti ko jhanjhor kar rakh deti. Dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi palo me wo ab neeche gir chuka tha.

Usne apne haatho se apna sar bachaaya aur perr sikode par ladko ko toh jese farq hi nahi padna tha.
Apni laate uthaate hue unn sabhi ne uspe itne vaar kiye ki uske maathe aur hontho se khoon behne laga.

Jab Ajay ne qareeb aake wo laal khoon dekha toh usse andar hi andar ek sukoon sa mila. Jese uska gussa kuch hadd tak shaant ho gaya tha. Usne forun hi apne pantaro ko rok diya.

Apni laat uthaate hue usne apna joota Veer ke sar par rakh diya.

Ajay : Samajh aaya chuze? Yadi tune itna keh diya hota ki ahinda se tu aisi harqat nahi karega toh tere saath ye sab nahi hota.

Veer ne koi jawaab nahi diya. Wo bas apni jese tese adhkhuli aankho se Ajay ko ghur raha tha.

Ajay : Par tujhe bann'na tha hero. Hai na? Toh lo fir! Ab banke dikha hero. Kaan khol ke sunn le chuze, ahinda se tu yadi mujhe galti se bhi Pragya ke aas paas bhi dikha na toh teri gaand tod ke rakh dunga. Samjha behanchod?

Kehte hue Ajay ne apne perr ka bhaar badhaate hue Veer ka chehra masal diya jiske chalte uski ek aur cheenkh nikal gayi.

Ajay : Aulelelele bacche ko dard ho raha hai? Ruko abhi dard dur kar deta hu. Zara wo lollipop toh laana. Dekho idhar ek baccha ro raha hai.

Aur uski baat sunn sabhi ladke zorr zorr se thahaake lagaane lage.

Unn ladko me se ek ne apna bag khola aur ek lollipop nikaalte hue Ajay ko thama dii.

Ajay ne forun hi lollipop ka wrapper khola aur Veer ki taraf neeche jhuk gaya.

Ajay : Tujhe pata hai mein ye lollipop leke kyu ghumta hu hamesha? Taaki tujh jese bacche jab udham karne lagte hai na toh unki aqal thikaane laga saku.

Itna bol wo lollipop zorr se Veer ke muh me ghusa dii jiske chalte ek aur karaah Veer ke muh se nikli.

Ajay : Par fir bacche rone lag jaate hai toh akhir bade hone ke naate mera farz bhi toh banta hai na? Ki mein unhe chup karwau? Isliye uske liye ye lollipop. Ab acche bacche ki tarah ye lollipop chuso aur apne ghar ki orr nikal lena. Samjha?

Usne Veer ka gaal thap thapaaya aur jaane ke liye uth khada hua par jaane se pehle wo ek baar aur peeche muda aur Veer ko dekha.

Ajay : Police ya ghar me kuch bhi bataane ki koshish karna bhi mat chuze. Baad me tu hi pachtaega nahi toh. Infact, kisi ke saamne bhi muh mat kholna.

Ladka 1 : Ajay bhai halki bunda baandi shuru ho gayi hai, hume nikalna chahiye.

Uske ek dost ne jataaya toh Ajay ne bhi haa me gardan hilaayi.

Aur Ajay samet sabhi ladke apni apni bike par sawaar hue par tabhi Ajay ko kuch sujha aur wo apni bike neeche pade Veer ke ird gird ghumaane laga aur uske dost bhi yahi karne lage.

*Crack*

Veer ne zorr se uss lollipop ka apne daanto se katra. Uski aankhein gusse se laal thi par wo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Ladke uske ird gird bike ko ghuma rahe the aur agle hi pal Ajay ne uski orr thuka jiske chalte wo thook seedha jaate hue Veer ki shirt par gira.

"Hahahahaha"

*Vroom* *Vroom*

Hasste hue Ajay apni toli ke saath, bike par sawaar waha se nikal gaya. Aur uss sunsaan jagah pe ab keval Veer hi akela pada hua tha.

Bijli kadki aur tezz baarish shuru ho gayi. Yahi Veer ki kismat thi. Ab toh uske kapde bhi bheeg jaane the. Par baarish se ek baat acchi hui. Wo ye ki Veer ki shirt me gira Ajay ka thook dhul gaya.

*Thuu*

Lollipop ko zorr se thukte hue Veer khada hua toh wo ladkhada gaya aur girte girte bacha. Harr jagah itna dard tha ki pucho mat. Baarish tezz ho chuki thi aur wo langdaate hue apni scooty ke paas jese tese pohucha aur seat par tik ke baith gaya.

Baarish ke pani se uske maathe se nikal raha khoon bhi saaf hone laga tha. Usne apna phone uthaate hue apne jeb me daal liya. Pata nahi zinda bhi tha uska phone ya nahi, kyuki screen ki light abhi tak jal rahi thi.

Par Veer ko toh jese kuch farq hi nahi padna tha. Wo haafte hue bas baitha sadak ko ghur raha tha jaha abhi wo kuch derr pehle buri tarah laato aur ghuso ka shikaar hua tha.

Ab toh usme apni muthhi kassne tak ke liye dum nahi bacha tha. Kya kismat dii thi bhagwaan ne usse.

Aaj pehla din aur uske saath ye vyavhaar hua. Upar se tab, jab uski koi galti bhi nahi thi. Kya ek khubsoorat ladki ko dekhna gunaah tha? Jab uss ladki ne usse kuch nahi kaha toh bhala ye Ajay kon hota tha uske saath aisa suluk karne waala?

Na chaahte hue bhi Veer ki rulaayi chhuuth padi. Aur wo bina koi awaaz kiye zorr zorr se rone laga. Shareer poora bheeg chuka tha uska. Aur baarish ki boonde jese hi uske ghaavo par padti usse aur zyada dard deti.

Rote rote Veer ne apni scooty uthayi aur ghar ki taraf chal diya. Usse hi pata tha ki wo kitni mushqil se iss waqt scooty ko chala raha tha. Uske jeb me uska phone abhi bhi contact list show kar raha tha.

Shayad girne ke kaaran phone ki screen ek jagah jaa ke atak chuki thi. Uss contact list me uska koi bhi dost nahi tha. School me bhi uske dost nahi the aur aaj bhi college me wo akela hi baitha hua tha. Contact list me keval 3 hi naam the. Ek uske pita Brijesh ka, ek uski chachi Sumitra ka aur ek uski choti behan Kavya ka.

Jinhe call karne ki Veer uss waqt acting kar raha tha. Jii haa! Acting kar raha tha. Kyuki Veer jaanta tha, Brijesh ko pata chalega toh wo ulta aur maarega hi usse. Sumitra aur Kavya isme kuch nahi kar sakti thi. Rahi baat baaki family members ki toh unke numbers the hi nahi uske phone me.

Uske gharwaale uski madad bilkul na karte.

Akhir kyu?

Kyuki yahi toh uska parivaar tha. Keval naam ka parivaar tha baaki uski ghar me kya hi izzat thi wo bhali bhaati jaanta tha.

Ab tak usse ghar se nikaala nahi gaya tha yahi baat kaafi thi.

Usse itna prataadit kiya jaata tha ki pucho mat. Pata nahi kese wo unn sab ke beech itne saal tak jee liya.

Yadi koi aur hota toh gusse me khud hi bhaag gaya hota ya ab tak trast aa chuka hota aur na jaane kya kar liya hota. Par Veer chup chaap sab kuch sehta tha.

Kyuki usse pata tha ki virodh karne ka koi fayda nahi tha. Aur yadi wo jaata bhi toh kaha jaata? Wo 20 saal ka hi tha aur abhi toh usne college ki duniya bhi thik se nahi dekhi thi.

Par aaj jo hua uss se Veer ko itna toh samajh aa gaya tha ki college ki life ke bache hue baaki 3 saal uski school life se kayi guna battar hone waale the.

Veer tezz raftaar me gaadi chalaaye jaa raha tha. Baarish aur aasuo ke kaaran uski aankein dhundhli ho chali thi. Gaadiyo ki headlights ki roshni kisi jugnu ke prakaar uski aankho me aati aur jaati.

Kuch derr pehle hui ghatna uske imaan, uske gaurav, uski izzat ko chhalli kar ke uske dimaag me ghum rahi thi.

Par wo ruka nahi. Yu aasu bahaate hue wo apne ghar ki orr gaadi badhaata raha jo ab bas kuch hi dur tha.

'Badla toh mein lunga. I'll make them pay. Chun chun ke... Ek ek se chun chun ke badla lunga.'
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Kahani shuru ho chuki hai.
Ab se mein aur aap iss kahani ka safar saath me tay karenge aur isse ant tak pohuchaenge.
Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast ek ladki ko dekhne ke karan in senior ladko ne use berahmi se mara or dhamki dekr chale gye family bhi bs naam ki hai jo Apne hero ko Bilkul pasand nhi karti...
Congrats bro for the story

 

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Update - 2 ~ The Family​

Ab tak...

Kuch derr pehle hui ghatna uske imaan, uske gaurav, uski izzat ko chhalli kar ke uske dimaag me ghum rahi thi.

Par wo ruka nahi. Yu aasu bahaate hue wo apne ghar ki orr gaadi badhaata raha jo ab bas kuch hi dur tha.

'Badla toh mein lunga. I'll make them pay. Chun chun ke... Ek ek se chun chun ke badla lunga.'

Ab aage...

Mumbai, jisse Mayanagri ke naam se bhi jaana jaata hai, uss sheher me ek boht hi aalishaan bangle me kuch log badi hi serious hoke ek kamre me dheemi awaaz me baatein kar rahe the.

"Aaj kese bhi karke uska patta saaf kar do. Samjhe?" Ek ladke ne bhaari awaaz me kaha.

Uske peeche khade ek naujavaan ladke ne uski orr dekha aur haa me gardan hilaayi, "Tension mat lo Bhaiya. Aaj uska patta saaf ho jaega. Mene bada hi tagda plan banaya hai hahaha!"

"Kesa plan?"

"Bhaiya! Aap bas dekhte jao. Aaj Dada jii ke decision lete samay hi sab kuch hoega. Mein show grand rakhna chaahta hu hahaha!"

"Shabaash chote! Bas dhyaan rahe koi gadbad na ho. Aur yadi hoye bhi toh tumhara naam bilkul bhi saamne na aaye. Samjhe?"

"Haa Vivek Bhaiya! Don't worry! Ye Pranjal jo bhi karta hai ekdum solid karta hai." Pranjal ne apni chhaati thap thapaate hue kaha.

Vivek : Good!

Muskuraate hue Vivek, Pranjal ka bada bhai uske kamre se nikal gaya.

Abhi wo nikla hi tha ki darwaaze ke baahar hi uski nayi naveli patni, Ragini usse dekhte hi bol padi. "Arre! Tum yaha ho? Chalo jaldi! Kuch derr me Dada jii apna decision dene waale hai. Sabhi hall me ikkhatta ho rahe hai."

Ragini ek boht hi gazab ki stree thi. Uska jism itna perfect tha maano bhagwaan ne badi hi fursat se usse banaaya tha. 27 saal ki Ragini ke stan kasse hue the aur saree me toh wo qayamat hi dhaa deti thi.

Uska gora rang, patle hontho me halki gulaabi lipstick, kamar tak latakte khule kaale baal jo neeche se curled the, uske husn par chaar chaand laga dete the. Ragini ka baap TVS ke 2 showrooms ka maalik tha. Paiso ki toh koi kami hi nahi thi uske paas. Aur Vivek ko aisi patni mili thi, uski kismat ke akhir kya kehne the.

Par Vivek bhi koi aera gerra nahi tha. Jab aisi patni usse mili ho toh andaaza lagaana mushqil nahi tha ki Vivek ka khud ka parivaar kitna ameer tha.

Ragini ki baat sunn Vivek ne kamre me jhaanka.

Vivek (chillaate hue) : Chote! Chal baahar jaldi.

Pranjal : Bhaiya! Aap jao mujhe toh important kaam hai. Haha!

Ragini prashn bhari nazro se Vivek ko dekhi, "Pranjal ko kya kaam bhala iss waqt!?"

Vivek : Tum chalo! Aaj toh behatreen show hone waala hai. Hahaha!

Aur hasste hue Vivek Ragini ko leke waha se chala gaya.

Par Ragini ki toh samajh me hi naa aaya ki akhir chal kya raha tha. Ab jab uske pati ne kaha tha kuch badhiya hone waala hai toh Ragini keval intezaar hi kar sakti thi.

*Click*

Veer ne apne ghar pohuch kar apni scooty se chaavi ghumaate hue gaadi band kari aur usse jeb me rakhte hue wo gaadi se utra.

Wo apne ghar pohuch chuka tha. Keval naam ke liye ghar tha. Ek ghar me ek aadmi khushiya paata hai, apno ka pyaar paata hai, ghar me ekta rehti hai par uske ghar ka ekdum alag hi scene tha.

Jaha aadmi apne ghar pohuch kar sukoon paata hai aur khush hota hai, Veer iss waqt andar jaane se hi katra raha tha aur darr bhi raha tha.

Shaam ke 7:30 baj chuke the. Aur wo paani se bheega, halke khoon se sana hua yaha khada hua tha. Usne apni scooty ke mirror me apni shaqal dekhi toh paaya uski ek aankh poori neel pad chuki thi. Itni buri tarah dhoya tha usse Ajay aur uske saathiyo ne.

"Aaarghhhh!" Karaahte hue usne apna ek haath apni pasli par ferra.

Wo apne qadam aage badhaate hue darwaaze ki orr badha. Uska ghar jo ki nark se kam nahi tha. Wo itna aalishaan tha ki jisse log dekhne ke baad tareefo ke pul baandhne lagte the.

Par unhe kya pata tha ki uss bunglow me andar rehne waale log kese the.

Veer abhi badh ke darwaaze par aaya hi tha ki itne me uske kaano me kisi ki awaaz padi.

"Arre!? Ye mein kya dekh raha hu? Tau jii ka eklauta beta iss haal me? Aur wo bhi aaj apne college ke second year ke pehle din?"

Awaaz sunte hi Veer ke perr wahi tham gaye. Saamne nazar daudaayi toh dekha ki uske chacha ka chota beta, Pranjal saamne khada hua tha.

Jii haa! Wo bungalow Veer ka hi tha.

Pranjal forun aage badh usse sahaara dene ke liye hua toh Veer ne uska haath gusse me jhatak diya aur apne perro par hi khada raha.

Pranjal : Arre!? Arre!? Mein toh bas tumhari madad kar raha tha chote bhai! Tumhari ye haalat kisne kii? Naam batao tum khaali, dekhna tumhara Bhai kya haal karega uss shaks ka.

Par Veer jaanta tha. Jo kuch bhi iss waqt Pranjal ke muh se nikal raha tha, jhooth ke alaawa wo aur kuch nahi ho sakta tha.

Uske jaisa kapti aur sayaana insaan shayad hi Veer ne apni poori life me kabhi dekha hoga.

Pranjal : Chote bhai! Dada jii ka janmdin hai aaj. Gussa thook do bhai. Chalo accha meri madad karwa do.

Par Veer toh jese kuch sunn'na hi nahi chaahta tha. Wo andar jaane laga ki ek baar fir Pranjal ne uska kandha thaam liya.

Pranjal : Bhai! Aaj Dada jii apna decision sunaane waale hai. Unhe kitna accha lagega yadi tum unhe apne haatho se unke janmdin par gift doge. Hai na? Apna gussa apne upar haavi hone mat do chote bhai! Chalo! Andar tumhara sab intezaar kar rahe hai.

Veer bhale hi gusse me tha, par wo apne Dada jii ki badi hi izzat karta tha. Aur unhe maanta bhi tha. Aaj uske Dada jii ka janmdin tha aur usne pehle se hi apne Dada jii ke liye ek gift taiyaar kar ke apne kamre me rakha hua tha. Jese tese Veer ne apna gussa nigla.

Veer : Aap chalo! Mein apne kamre se Dada jii ke liye gift leke aata hu.

Pranjal : Arre kya keh rahe ho Bhai? Dada jii aur baaki sab pehle se hi tumhara intezaar kar rahe hai aur aise me tum unhe aur intezaar karwaoge? Tum apni haalat ke baare me mat socho. Hum sab toh tumhaare apne hi hai hai na? Fir humaare saamne kesi jhijhak? Aao...

Aur Pranjal usse kheechte hue bangle ke andar le gaya. Chaahte hue bhi Veer uska virodh na kar paaya.

Andar ghuste hi ek mini hall tha jaha baahari vyaktiyo ko baithaaya jaata tha. Aur khaas logo ko hi uske andar waale Bade hall me entry allowed thi.

Abhi Pranjal aur Veer dono hi mini hall me the jaha ek khubsoorat sa flower vase maujood tha. Uske ird gird ek laal ribbon lipta hua tha aur Happy Birthday ka ek tag bhi laga hua tha.

Jab Veer ki nazar uspe padi toh woh usse dekhte hi chaunk gaya. Jo ki laazmi tha. Wo flower vase itna mehnga aur itna sundar prateet ho raha tha ki koi bhi usse ek baar dekhne ke baad dubaara zaroor dekhta.

Pranjal (khush hote hue) : Yahi hai wo gift chote bhai. Tau jii yaani ki tumhaare Dad ne khud isse mangwaaya hai. Aur yadi tum Dada jii ko apne haatho se ye gift doge toh woh kitna khush ho jaenge nahi!?

Par Veer jaanta tha ki ye Pranjal jo iss waqt bhed jesa maasoom prateet ho raha tha wo asal me bhed nahi balki bhed ke vesh me ek bhediya tha.

Veer ne naa chaahte hue bhi haa me sar hilaaya aur vase uthaake wo dono hi andar bade hall me pravesh kiye.

Bada hall itna bada tha aur lights se itna jagmaga raha tha ki dekhne waale dekhte hi reh jae. Upar na jaane kitna mehnga ek jhumar latka hua tha jisse dekh ke bas muh se tareef nikalti.

Andar ek single seat luxury waale sofe par Veer ke Dada jii baithe hue the. Aaj unka 80th Birthday tha. Aur unke agal bagal waale sofe par unke do bete baithe hue tha. Bada beta jiska naam tha Brijesh. Aur chota beta jiska naam tha Karunesh.

Karunesh : Papa jii aapko party rakh leni chahiye thi.

Manorath : Hmph! Kabhi bhi ye galti mat karna. Ye sab party jo tum log karte ho na issi ke kaaran tumhaare dushman badhte hai. Jitni raeesi logo ko dikhaoge, utne hi galat iraade logo ke mann me umadte hai.

Veer ke Dada jii ne hidaayat dete hue kaha.

Idhar andar jese hi Veer aur Pranjal aae, sabhi ki nazre un dono par jaa tiki.

Veer ke pita, Brijesh ne jese hi apne ladke ki haalat dekhi toh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Usne sofe ke hatte ko itni zorr se bheencha maano usse ukhaad ke hi fek dega.

Kya Brijesh ka ye gussa apne bete ko iss haalat me dekh ke uska ye haal karne waale ke upar tha?

Bilkul bhi nahi!

Balki Brijesh iss waqt apne bete par gussa tha. Yadi abhi koi aur maujood na hota toh usne khade hoke pehle hi 2-4 jhaapad Veer ko raseed diye hote.

Uska beta wo bhi aise haal me? Veer ka ye roop maano Brijesh ki image par ek chaata tha. Na jaane uske baaki ghar waale kya soch rahe honge ab aise me.

Yahi sochke usse itna gussa aa raha tha par uske pita ka aaj janmdin tha aur wo kuch bhi bakheda khada karna nahi chaahta tha.

Nakli smile dete hue usne apne bete Veer ko dekha.

Brijesh : Aa gaye!? Kaha reh gaye the itni derr tak? Aur ye kya haalat bana rakhi hai apni? Kis se maar kha ke aa rahe ho?

Veer ki maano ye sawaal sunte hi sitti pitti gul ho gayi. Apne Dad ki bhaari bharkam awaaz sunte hi uske andar ka darr jaag utha. Uske haanth kaanpne lage the.

Iske pehle wo kuch jawaab de paata, bagal me khade Pranjal ne tapaak se bola.

Pranjal : Tau jii! Yahi baat mene Veer se baahar abhi puchi thi. Toh Veer kehne laga ki aaj usse ek senior ladki pasand aa gayi thi. Aur Veer uss ladki ko kahi le jaana chaahta tha par ladki ke premi ne virodh kia aur Veer ko ye bilkul bhi pasand na aaya aur wo dono ek dusre se jaa lade. Ye ussi ka parinaam hai Tau jii.

Pranjal ki baat sunte hi Veer ko ek zorrdaar jhatka laga. Usne apni phati aankho se palat ke Pranjal ko ghura toh paaya ki Pranjal bada hi masoom sa chehra banae waha khada hua tha, jese kuch hua hi na ho.

Pranjal : Mene Veer ko samjhaya bhi ki aise maar peet karna bilkul bhi acchi baat nahi hai. Veer ko toh fir bhi kam chot aayi hai. Na jaane Veer ne uss ladke ko kitni buri tarah peeta hoga.

Aisi vaani boliye, mann ka aapa khoye...
Auran ko sheetal kare, aaphu sheetal hoye...

Par Kabir ki ye panktiya iss waqt vyarth thi.

Pranjal ne jo madhur vaani boli thi wo Veer ko sheetal karna toh dur usse itna aag babula kar rahi thi ki yadi uski bas chalti toh wo issi samay Pranjal par toot padta.

Pranjal ki image ghar me ek boht hi sanskaari ladke ki thi, par wo asal me kesa tha ye baat sabhi nahi jaante the.

Brijesh (gusse me) : Tumhari itni himmat Veer!

Manorath : Shaant ho jao! Halla nahi!

Brijesh : Par Papa jii...

Manorath : Ssssshhhhhh!!!

Brijesh : Hmph!

Manorath : Veer! Tumhe pata hai kya kiya hai tumne?

Veer : Nahi! Dada jii... Wo mein...

Manorath : Jo hua so hua. Ab iski charcha koi nahi karega.

Aur sab shaant ho gaye.

Veer ne jab Hall me maujood sabhi logo par nazre firaayi.

Toh uski nazar apne Dada jii ke daayi orr rakhe sofe par gayi jaha uske Dad, Brijesh ke bagal se baithi hui uski sauteli Maa (Step-mom), Shweta usse bauhe sikode hue dekh rahi thi.

Fir uski nazar Shweta ke bagal se baithi hui Shweta ki ekmaatr eklauti beti, Bhumika par gayi. Jo usse dekhte hi apna muh ferr lii.

Jab Veer ne Dada jii ke baayi orr rakhe sofe par nazar daudaayi toh dekha ki uske chacha Karunesh aur unki patni Sumitra yaani ki uski chachi dono hi nazre gadaaye usse hi ghur rahe the.

Sumitra usse bauhe sikode uske chehre ko hi dekh rahi thi.

Unki hi bagal se uske chacha ke bade bete Vivek aur uski patni Ragini bhi baithe hue the. Wo dono bhi usse hi ghur rahe the.

Aur jab Veer ne stairs par nazre daudayi toh dekha ki uske chacha Karunesh ki badi beti Arohi aur choti beti Kavya dono hi saath me cake lete hue neeche aa rahi thi.

Wo dono hi neeche aayi aur cake ko saamne rakhi kaanch ki ek table par rakha aur side wahi sofe par baith gayi.

Jaha Arohi ne usse ek baar dekh ke apni nazre ferr lii, wahi dusri orr Kavya usse aisi haalat me dekh apni bauhe sikode usse badi hi hamdardi se dekh rahi thi par boli kuch nahi.

Kaha ek taraf uske parivaar waale jo naye kapde pehne, sajke baithe hue tha aur kaha wo jo pitne ke baad ekdum geela aur khoon ke nishaan aur ghaavo se bharpoor.

Manorath : Doctor ko dikhwa ke apni dawa karwana mat bhulna.

Veer : J... Jiii

Brijesh (zorr se) : Ab khade khade intezaar kya kar rahe ho? Aage badho aur apne Dada jii ko tohfa do.

Manorath : Aao Veer!

Aur apne Dada jii ki sahuliyat se Veer aage badhte hue apne Dada jii ko gift dene jaane laga.
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Update - 3 ~ A Full Fledged Plan​

Ab tak...

Brijesh (zorr se) : Ab khade khade intezaar kya kar rahe ho? Aage badho aur apne Dada jii ko tohfa do.

Manorath : Aao Veer!

Aur apne Dada jii ki sahuliyat se Veer aage badhte hue apne Dada jii ko gift dene jaane laga.

Ab aage...

Veer ke Dada jii, Manorath uss par kayi hadd tak bharosa karte the. Kyuki jitni bhi shikaayat wo sunte aa rahe the, unhone aaj tak Veer ko kabhi apni aankho se koi galat kaam karte nahi dekha tha. Aur aaj ye pehli baar nahi tha jab Pranjal ke muh se unhone Veer ki ghatna ke baare me suna tha.

Ye toh saalo se chala aa raha tha. Koi na koi aake Manorath ke saamne Veer ke karmo ki shikaayat karta tha aur Veer keval sar jhukae khada rehta tha. Veer virodh kiya karta tha par uske paas apni baat ko sahi saabit karne ka koi proof nahi rehta tha. Aur isliye ab usne virodh karna bhi chorr diya tha.

Aaj bhi kuch aisa hi tha. Veer ke paas koi saboot nahi tha apni begunaahi saabit karne ka. Aur kya kehta woh? Kon uski baato ka yakeen karta?

Pichle kayi saalo se jo image uski ghar me bani hui thi, uske chalte toh koi uss par reham bhi nahi khaata tha.

Jab Veer apne haatho me wo flower vase lete hue aage badha tabhi achaanak se pata nahi kya hua uska perr fisla aur wo buri tarah saamne ki orr jaa gira.

*Crash*

Flower vase uske haatho se chhuth kar gol ghumte hue ek tezz shor karte hue neeche jaa gira aur ek hi jhatke me wo sundar sa vase dherr saare tukdo me bikhar gaya.

"Aaaaaaaaaaa," Waha baithi mahilae aur ladkiyo ke muh se kuch aisi hi hairaani bhari awaaz nikli.

Aur fir ek shaanti sii chhaa gayi.

Sab ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Sabhi Veer ko aise dekh rahe the jese maano usne kisi ka khoon kar diya ho.

Dekhe bhi kyu na, akhir wo flower vase itna keemti jo tha. Manorath ko shuru se hi paudhe aur flower vases ka boht shauk tha, yahi kaaran tha ki unke ghar me ek alag se garden bhi tha.

Iss waqt Veer ki haalat kharab thi. Usne khud apne Dada jii ke liye ek flower vase chunn ke rakha hua tha jisse wo baad me unhe dene waala tha. Iss vase ke saamne uska vase toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Par ab kya? Ab toh wo vase uske haatho toot chuka tha.

Bas! Brijesh jo apna gussa pehle hi badi mushqil se control kiye hue tha wo uth khada hua aur chillaaya.

Brijesh : Haram khor! Tujhe pata hai wo tohfa kitna mehnga tha?

Apne Dad ki garajti awaaz sunn ek baar fir wo sihar utha. Brijesh usse aag babula hoke khaa jaane wali nazro se ghur raha tha.

Manorath : Brijeesshhhh!!!

Brijesh : Papa jii... Aap... Aap jaante hai ye tohfa kitne ka tha? Ye flower vase 3 lakh ka tha. Mene khud import karwaya tha China se isse aapke liye... Aur iss bewakoof ne...

Vase ki keemat sunte hi waha khade logo ko jese ek bada jhatka laga. 3 lakh unn sabke saamne yu barbaad hoke bikhar ke jo pade hue the.

Sabse zyaada haalat toh Veer ki kharaab thi. Uski samajh nahi aa raha tha wo kare kya.

Brijesh se ab raha na gaya, wo wese hi kayi saalo se Veer se pareshaan tha. Veer uski harr umeedo par paani ferr deta tha.

Veer ki taraf tezz kadmo ke saath jaate hue wo usse ek zorrdaar thappad maarne hi wala tha ki...

Manorath : Brijeessshhh!!

Brijesh : Par Papa jii...

Manorath : Aaj mera janmdin hai. Aur mere janmdin ke din tum aisa suluk karoge toh matlab hi kya. Jo hua usse ek galti maan ke aage badho. Vase kitna hi mehnga kyu na ho, wo toh ab toot chuka hai. Ab uske peeche rone ka koi fayda nahi. Rahi baat paiso ki toh iske paise mein de dunga.

Brijesh : Ye aap kesi baatein kar rahe ho Papa jii? Aapka janmdin hai. Mein bhala aap se paise kyu lunga?

Manorath ki baat sunn Brijesh ne apne haath rok liye par uska gussa abhi tak kam nahi hua tha.

Pranjal : Dada jii, mene Veer se kaha tha baahar hi ki apne shoes utaar de kyuki baarish se geele ho chuke hai. Par Veer ne meri suni hi nahi. Bola ki maids toh ghar me lagi hi hai, wo kis kaam aaengi?

Aur uski baat sunn sabhi ki nazre Veer ke perro par gayi jo geele jute pehna hua tha aur farsh ko ganda kar raha tha.

Aur ye dekh Brijesh aur krodhit ho gaya. Tabhi Veer ki stepmom Shweta uth khadi huyi.

Shweta : Veer din ba din laaparwaah hota jaa raha hai.

Pranjal : Veer! Apne jute utaaro, idhar aao ye sleepers pehn lo aur ab galti ho gayi toh ho gayi. Ye dekho bhagwaan ka prasaad rakha hua hai. Dada jii ko ye prasaad do aur unse maafi maang lo.

Pranjal usse haath pakad ke uske jute utarwaata hai aur usse wahi Dada jii ke paas rakhi ek sleepers ko pehna deta hai. Pranjal ne wahi table pe rakhe hue dahi shakkar jo ki bhagwaan ko chadhaaya gaya tha usse katori me laake Veer ko thama diya.

Pranjal : Jao Veer! Dada jii ko prasaad do aur maafi maango.

Veer bechaara itna seham gaya tha aaj ki ghatnao se. Aaj uski zindagi ka sabse manhoos aur bura din tha.

Veer ne prasaad ki katori haath me thaami aur wo aage badha hi tha ki firse uska perr na jaane kese fisla aur prasaad ki katori uske haath se chhatak kar seedhe uske Dada jii ki orr jaa giri.

Aur saara ka saara prasaad uske Dada jii ke kapdo par jaa gira.

Bas! Brijesh ka jo gussa abhi apni limit par tha, wo cross ho gaya. Wo aage badha aur...

*Chataak* *Chataak* *Chataak*

Thappado ki jhadi laga dii aur Veer ke gaalo par raseed raseed ke maarte gaya.

Thappado ki goonj se Kavya sehamte hue sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Usse waqai Veer pe taras aa raha tha. Arohi bhi bauhe sikodti hui saamne ho rahe drashya ko dekh rahi thi.

Wahi Pranjal aur Vivek khushi se fule nahi sama rahe the.

Vivek (khuspusaate hue) : Yahi hai wo grand show... Haha!

Ragini : Ohhh! Toh tum iski baat kar rahe the. Par... Par ye kuch zyaada nahi ho gaya?

Vivek : Hmph! Zyaada kaha ye toh abhi bhi kam hai.

Ragini : Aur ye idea kis ka tha?

Vivek (smiles) : Chote ka...

Ragini (hairaani me) : Pranjal ka??? Devar jii kuch zyaada hi chatur ho rahe hai aaj kal...

Idhar thappado se Veer ke gaal laal ho chale the.

Brijesh (gusse me) : Tu jaanta hai aaj tune kya kiya hai? Haram khor!!! Wo prasaad hamaare kul ki devi ka tha. Aur tune usse zameen pe gira diya? Aur wo bhi Papa jii ke upar? Naye kapde bhi kharaab kar diye tune unke... 3 lakh ke tohfe ka chuna laga diya... Roz roz tere haath se kuch na kuch gadbad hoti hi hai. Beta nahi panauti hai tu... Mein kehta hu nikal jaa... Nikal jaa issi waqt ghar se... Aur ahinda se iss ghar me qadam bhi mat rakhna...

Aur Brijesh usko haatho se pakad ke ghaseet ke baahar le gaya aur zorr se dhakka dete hue usse darwaaze ke baahar fek diya.

Ghar me maujood sabhi log darwaaze ki orr tezz kadmo ke saath aae siwae Manorath ke...

Aaj tak Devi ke prasaad ka aisa apmaan unke kul me kisi ne bhi nahi kiya tha. Manorath khud abhi iss waqt atyant dukh aur gusse me tha. Issi kaaran usne Brijesh ko bhi iss baar nahi toka.

Aur wo wahi baitha hua chup chaap apne hi mann me Devi se shama maangne laga.

Brijesh : Nikal jaa! Nikal jaa iss ghar se... Aaj se tera aur mera koi sambandh nahi. Marr gaya aaj se tu mere liye... Mera koi beta nahi hai. Khabardaar yadi tune iss ghar me dubaara kadam bhi rakha toh...

Veer kaapte hue sab kuch apni aankho se dekh raha tha, ye pal bhar me kya se kya ho gaya. Aaj kyu uske saath ye sab hua?

Veer ki sauteli Maa, Shweta saamne ke nazaare ko badi hi khushi se dekh rahi thi. Uski mann ki muraad poori jo ho gayi thi. Ab uski beti hi jaydaad ki maalkin banegi. Yahi sochte hue wo apni beti ki orr mudi toh dekha ki uski beti, Bhumika ke chehre par koi expression nahi the. Aur ye jaan kar Shweta ko khushi hui. Ki uski beti ke mann me bhi Veer ke prati koi bhaav nahi hai.

Veer ke aasu uski aankho se lagataar bahe jaa rahe the. Par wo kuch nahi bola.

Wo chup chaap utha aur baahar ki orr chal diya. Usne apne jeb me se gaadi ki chaavi nikaali aur wo gaadi on karne hi waala tha ki peeche se Brijesh ki awaaz aayi.

Brijesh : Ye gaadi teri nahi hai...

Aur Veer chaavi ko gaadi me lage hi chorr kar ghar se baahar nikal aaya.

Usne ek jhalak peeche mud ke dekha. Shweta aur Bhumika usse bina koi bhaav ke dekh rahi thi. Brijesh ki aankho me bhayaanak gussa nazar aa raha tha. Wahi uske Karunesh chacha bhi usse bina koi bhaav ke dekh rahe the.

Uski Sumitra chachi thoda chintit zaroor prateet ho rahi thi.

Vivek aur Pranjal ke chehro par halki khushi nazar aa rahi thi. Ragini aur Arohi bauhe sikode jese kisi soch me doobi hui thi. Jab uski nazar Kavya par gayi toh Kavya ne sehamte hue sar jhuka liya.

Bas! Uske baad Veer palat ke ghar se dur jaane laga. Ghar ke security guards bhi Veer ko jaata hua dekh rahe the.

Achanak baadal garje aur baarish firse shuru ho gayi.

Par Veer na ruka. Aur kuch hi palo me wo apne gharwaalo ki nazro se ojhal ho chuka tha.

Iss waqt Veer ko baarish acchi lag rahi thi. Usse apni lag rahi thi. Jab Ajay se maar khaate waqt wo ghar laut raha tha tab bhi baarish ne uska saath diya tha. Aur abhi jaha uske ghar waalo ne usse ghar se nikaal ke usse akela chhorr diya tab bhi baarish uska saath de rahi thi.

Uske saath saath mausam bhi yu ro raha tha. Veer bina koi awaaz kiye rote rote bas chalta jaa raha tha.

Usne apne seene par latka pendant apne haatho me thaam liya. Ek bada hi pyaara sa pendant tha, ekdum alag type ka.

Usse bheenchte hue Veer ke aasu aur tezzi se behne lage. Ye woh pendant tha jo uski asli Maa ne usse pehnaaya tha.

Veer ko apni asli Maa ke baare me kuch bhi nahi pata tha. Bas itna pata tha ki uss Maa ne usse janm diya hai. Jab bhi wo Brijesh se apni Maa ke baare me puchta tha toh Brijesh bas ek hi baat bolta~ "Naam mat lo uss kameeni aurat ka..."

Uski Maa ka naam tha Bhawana. Veer ke janm ke ek saal baad hi dono ke beech talaak ho gaya aur Bhawana ghar se chali gayi thi.

Kaha gayi woh, kis haal me hogi abhi, zinda bhi hai ya nahi uski Maa usse kuch nahi pata tha. Yaha tak ki uski Maa ka naam bhi uske Dada jii ne usse bataya tha. Na hi uss aurat ko lekar ghar me charcha hoti thi na hi koi uske baare me koi topic chedhta tha.

Veer ko toh ye bhi nahi pata tha ki uski Maa kesi dikhti thi. Koi bhi photo album nahi tha, uski Maa se judi koi bhi cheez nahi thi ghar me.

Baarish ke kaaran sadko par abhi gaadiya bhi kam chalti hui nazar aa rahi thi. Usse nahi pata tha wo kaha jaa raha hai. Jab tak uske perr chal rahe the wo bas chalta jaa raha tha. Usse apni sagi Maa ki yaad aane lagi. Yadi wo yaha hoti abhi toh uski Maa uske saath kesa vyavhaar karti? Kya usse pyaar deti? Ya fir Brijesh ki hi tarah wo bhi...!?

Paani se bheega hua Veer main road par aa chuka tha, abhi wo mudne hi waala tha ki ekdum se ek car mod se aayi aur Veer ne palat ke car ko dekha.

Par tab tak boht derr ho chuki thi.

Car ka agla hissa uski pasli se takraaya aur thokar hote hi wo zorr se jaate hue dur gir pada.

"Ohhhh! Noooo...." Car me baithe ek aadmi ke muh se nikla.

Car ko jhatka lagte hi peeche baithi ek ladki forun hi aage ki seat se jaa bhidi, "Aaaahhhh!"

Aadmi : Madam aap theek toh hai na?

Ladki (sar malte hue) : Haa! Mein... Mein thik hu.

Fir jese hi uss ladki ne saamne dekha toh uski maano saasein hi atak gayi. Saamne ek ladka zameen par dala hua tha aur usse samajhne me derr na lagi ki abhi abhi uski car kis se takraayi thi.

Wo ladka waha baarish me car se bhid ke pada bheeg raha tha.

Ladki (ghabraate hue) : Ye... Ye....

Aadmi : Inn sab ka samay nahi hai Madam. Hume jald hi nikalna hoga.

Aur itna bol wo aadmi forun hi gaadi aage badhaane lagta hai.

Ladki (chillaate hue) : Ye kya bol rahe ho aap? Nahi... Hum aise usse chorr kar nahi jaa sakte...

Aadmi : Madam! Baat ko samajhiye... Iss waqt humaara yaha se nikalna boht zaroori hai.

Aur usne car ke accelerator par perr rakh car aage badha dii.

Ladki peeche mud window se uss ladke ko dekh rahi thi, uska nichla honth daato tale zorr se daba hua tha ki maano khoon hi nikal aae. Aankho me halke aasu bhi aa chuke the.

"I'm sorry..." Usne mann me kaha.

Aur wo car palak jhapakte hi logo ki nazro se ojhal ho gayi.

Idhar accident dekh aas paas ke jo bhi log dukaan ke neeche baarish se bachne ke liye khade hue the wo daudte hue aae aur Veer ko uthaane lage.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
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Akhir vhi hua Jiska dar tha prajal ne aisa plan bnaya ki sb Uski chapet me aa gye or veer ko Ghar se nikal diya veer ne sirf apni chhoti bahan Kavya ke chehre pr uske liye kuchh acche bhav dekhe dar se sahmi or fikr se ghiri Kavya vhi veer ko ek gadi ne Thok diya or kisi karan vash uhne jaldi jana tha to veer ko dard me tadafta chhod nikal gye... Jabardast superb update bhai sandar

 

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Update - 4 ~ In the Hospital​

Ab tak...

Ladki peeche mud window se uss ladke ko dekh rahi thi, uska nichla honth daato tale zorr se daba hua tha ki maano khoon hi nikal aae. Aankho me halke aasu bhi aa chuke the.

"I'm sorry..." Usne mann me kaha.

Aur wo car palak jhapakte hi logo ki nazro se ojhal ho gayi.

Idhar accident dekh aas paas ke jo bhi log dukaan ke neeche baarish se bachne ke liye khade hue the wo daudte hue aae aur Veer ko uthaane lage.

Ab aage...

"Arre... Arre... Uthao... Uthao..."
"Jaldi... Jaldi..."
"Car wala madarchod bhaag gaya..."
"Uthwao bhailog..."

Aur waha maujood log forun hi Veer ke paas aake usse uthaane lage. Bina baarish ki parvaah kiye.
Yadi uske parivaar waale hote toh kya woh usse iss waqt uthaate?

Shayad haa? Ya shayad nahi!?

"Arre isse toh boht zyaada chot aayi hai, khoon beh raha hai kaafi, jaldi ambulance ko call karo koi..."

Waha khade ek aadmi ne chillaaya toh agle ne forun hi 108 dial karte hue ambulance bulwa lii.

Abhi wo log savdhaani se Veer ko utha hi rahe the ki itne me ussi mod se ek aur car aayi par bheed ke kaaran uss car ko rukna pada.

Car waale ne jab horn maari toh usse itni gaaliya padi ki usse na chaahte hue bhi rukna pada.

"Dhatttt behanchod!! Iski maa ki aankh..." Car waale ne steering pe zorr se haath maarte hue chillaaya.

Dusra aadmi : Ab kuch nahi ho sakta... Car ghuma lo...

Pehla aadmi : Boss ko pata chala toh woh hamaari gardan na udaa de...

Dusra aadmi : Mein Boss ko samjha dunga... Tum car ghuma lo...

Pehla aadmi : Thik hai.

Aur wo car reverse karke waha se nikal gaye.

Idhar log Veer ko utha ke ek shop ke neeche lita ke uski choto par rumaal ya kapda baandh ke jese tese khoon rokne ki koshish kar rahe the.

Kuch derr me hi ambulance aayi aur Veer ko leke hospital ki orr chali gayi.

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Veer ke ghar me...

Sabhi log iss waqt Manorath ke kamre me maujood the. Manorath apne bistar par baitha hua tha toh wahi baaki sabhi khade hue usse hi dekh rahe the.

Manorath : Aaj tak prasaad ka aisa apmaan hamaare ghar me kisi ne bhi nahi kiya.

Pranjal : Dada jii! Veer ko waqai aisa nahi karna tha.

Kavya : Par... Dada jii! Wo toh... Unhone jaan bujh ke nahi kiya hoga...

Pranjal : Kavya? Ye tum kya keh rahi ho? Pehli baar maante hai ki uska perr fisal gaya aur wo vase toot gaya par dusri baar bhi?

Pranjal ki baat sunn bechaari Kavya kuch virodh hi na kar paayi aur sar jhuka lii.

Sumitra : Jeth jii... Aapko aise... Veer ko ghar se nahi nikaalna tha.

Brijesh : Mene jo bhi kiya hai boht soch samajh ke kiya hai. Mein ye kadam pehle hi uthaane waala tha par hamesha Papa jii ke kaaran ruk jaata tha. Lekin aaj toh usne hadd hi paar kar dii. Akhir uss kameeni ki kokh se jo paida hua hai, aisa hi hona tha... Mere toh ek bhi gud nahi hai usme...

Manorath : Wo jaisa bhi hai iss parivar ka hissa hai. Usse jaake wapas le aao. Abhi zyada dur nahi gaya hoga.

Brijesh : Bilkul bhi nahi Papa jii. Mene aapko pehle bhi bol ke rakha hai. Ki jis din ye apni hadd paar karega uss din mein isse ghar se nikaal dunga. Aur aaj yahi hua hai... Ab mein usse iss ghar me ghusne tak nahi dunga... Aap apna faisla sunaaiye Papa jii...

Manorath : Toh tum log usse wapas nahi laoge?

Brijesh : Bilkul bhi nahi...

Manorath : Toh fir mera bhi yahi faisla hai. Zameen aur jaydaad kisko milegi ye bhi tab hi nirnay hoga jab parivaar ka harr ek sadasya ghar me maujood hoga.

Brijesh : Papa jii!??

Vivek : Dada jii!? Ye aap...!?

Manorath ke faisle se maano sabko ek jhatka sa laga. Jiss pal ke liye wo sabhi bekaraar the ki akhir kisko zameen aur jaydaad dii jaegi wo pal toh aaya hi nahi. Ulta ab jab tak ghar me Veer nahi aa jaata tab tak faisla tal chuka tha.

Manorath ke paas dherr saari zameen thi jiski keemat crores me thi aur jaydaad bhi. Aur ye sab kuch ghar ke ussi sadasya ko milne waala tha jo Manorath ki aankho me iske liye sahi tha.

Uske 2 petrol pump bhi rahe jo usne apne beto ko de diye the. Ek petrol pump ka maalik jaha Brijesh tha toh wahi dusre ka maalik Karunesh.

Karunesh ne dimaag se paisa kamaate hue apne bete Vivek ki upar lagaya aur aaj Vivek ki khud ki ek automobiles ki company thi. Bhale hi worldwide nahi thi abhi par uska business zorro shoro se chal raha tha.

Karunesh ki badi beti Arohi aur choti beti Kavya, Veer ke hi college me thi aur wo dono bhi B.Tech kar rahi thi. Jaha Arohi aur Veer ki branch same thi ~ IT.

Wahi Kavya CS branch se belong karti thi.

Pranjal bhi same college me tha par wo B.com kar raha tha. Uski building alag thi par saari buildings saath me hi thi, jis kaaran wo break ke time Arohi aur Kavya se milne jaata rehta tha.

Karunesh ko apne bete betiyo ki koi chinta nahi thi.

Par Brijesh ka aisa nahi tha. Brijesh ko bhi ek petrol pump diya gaya tha Manorath dwaara. Usne bhi dimaag se apni ek luxury hotel khulwaayi jo sheher me kaafi mashoor thi. Jaha wo petrol pump sambhaalta tha toh wahi uski hotel uski dusri patni Shweta sambhaalti thi.

Shweta ke hi saath uski beti, Bhumika bhi uska saath deti thi.

Aur aaj yahi faisla liya jaane wala tha ki kisko zameen aur jaydaad milegi.

Par sab kuch dhara ka dhara reh gaya.

Manorath : Mera faisla saaf hai. Jao aur mujhe akela chorr do abhi.

Vivek : Par Dada jii...

Manorath : Mene kaha jao... Aur Brijesh... Yadi tum Veer ko wapas nahi laane waale toh mujhe uske baare me harr cheez batao... Iss waqt kaha hai woh... Kiske ghar theher raha hai? Wo mera pota hai. Mein jaan'na chaahta hu wo sahi salaamat hai ya nahi?

Brijesh : Thik...

Aur ghar ke mukhiya ki awaaz sunn sabhi bemann waha se nikal gaye.

Idhar kamre me aate hi Vivek Pranjal pe toot pada.

Vivek : Chote ye kya kar diya tune? Ye daav toh ulta hi pad gaya. Dada jii ne toh faisla hi taal diya. Ab jab tak wo Veer nahi aa jaata tab tak Dada jii koi faisla nahi sunaenge.

Pranjal : Bhaiya! Ab mujhe kya pata tha aisa ho jaega? Mene toh yahi socha tha aaj Veer ko Dada ji ki nazro me gira dunga toh Dada jii uska naam lenge hi nahi. Par mujhe nahi pata tha Tau jii usse ghar se baahar hi nikaal denge.

Ragini : Mene kaha tha ye kuch zyada hi ho gaya hai.

Pranjal : Aap log tension mat lo. Hum log kese bhi karke Dada jii ko mana lenge aur wo jald hi faisla le lenge. Filhaal ek musibat toh gayi.

Vivek : Hmm!! Par chote tune wo sab kiya kese?

Vivek ke sawaal karne par Pranjal ne muskuraate hue jeb se kuch nikaala aur unn dono ko dikhaya.

Pranjal : Haha! Bhaiya! Saara kamaal iska hai.

Vivek (hairaani me) : Ye toh... Ye toh... Ye toh tufoil hai chote...

Pranjal : Haha! Haa bhaiya! Aapke hi yaha se laaya hu.

Tufoil ek aisa slippery oil jisse automobiles me use kiya jaata hai. Na keval ye automobiles ke liye balki ye apni slipness ke liye bhi jaana jaata hai.

Pranjal : Ye mene floor par daal diya tha. Aur mein Veer ko wahi se le gaya jaha ye oil mene daala tha. Bas! Fir kya tha, uska geela joota jese hi uspe pada, Veer fisla aur vase seedha neeche... Hahaha!

Ragini : Par wo prasaad ka kya?

Pranjal : Bhabhi! Wo bhi iska hi kamaal hai. Mene sleepers ke neeche bhi isse laga ke rakha hua tha.

Ragini (smiles) : Waah! Maan gaye tumhe bhi. Par wo chot ka kya jo Veer ko pehle se hi lagi hui thi?

Pranjal : Wo bhi mere kehne par hau tha Bhabhi. Mere kayi chelo me se ek hai wo Ajay. Mene usko keh ke rakha tha ki aaj pehla din hai toh koi bhi bahana bana ke aaj jamm ke thukaayi kar dena uss Veer ki... Aur usne yahi kiya hahahaha!

Vivek : Par chote, wo oil zameen par nazar kyu nahi aaya?

Pranjal : Kese aaega Bhaiya? Mene usse carpet ke ekdum bagal se giraaya tha hahaha!

Aur uske saath hi Vivek bhi hassne laga. Ragini muskuraate hue dono ko dekh rahi thi. Jaha ye jashn mana rahe the toh wahi koi aur tha jo iss waqt apni saaso se ladd raha tha.

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Hospital...

Nurse : Iski haalat boht critical hai Doctor.

Doctor : I know... Humse jo bann padega hum karenge.

Nurse : Jii! But iski family...!? Iska mobile toh kaam hi nahi kar raha hai.

Doctor : Mene ward boy ko bola hai wo iske phone ki SIM apne phone me daalke iske ghar waalo ko call karega.

Nurse : Hmm!!

Aur Veer ka treatment shuru ho chuka tha.

Ward boy ne jab Veer ki SIM daal ke Brijesh ko call kiya toh Brijesh ne ye soch ke call nahi uthaya ki zaroor Veer ne paise maangne ke liye phone kiya hoga aur gusse me usne apna phone hi band kar diya.

Ward boy ne jab Sumitra ko call kiya toh call lag hi nahi raha tha. Kese lagta? Pranjal ne apni maa ke phone me Veer ka number block jo kar ke rakha tha.

Fir usne akhiri number jo ki Kavya ka tha usse call kiya.

Idhar iss waqt Kavya Arohi aur Pranjal ke saath hi baithi hui thi. Number dekhte hi Kavya soch me pad gayi.

'Veer Bhaiya mujhe kyu call kar rahe hai?? Phone utha lu? Thik hai utha leti hu.'

Par iske pehle ki wo phone utha paati, Pranjal ne uska phone chhina liya.

Pranjal : Zara dekho toh... Veer ab hamari Kavya ko phone laga raha hai. Kyu Kavya?

Kavya : Phone dijiye Bhaiya.

Pranjal : Nahi! Zaroor ab apni pyari behan se paise maangne ke liye phone kar raha hoga. Kyuki baahar ab usse paiso ki zaroorat toh padegi hi...

Aur usne forun hi phone kaat ke uska number hi block kar diya.

Pranjal : Ab tumhe disturbance nahi hoga behan hahaha!

Kavya : Hmm?

Pranjal : Accha wo sab chorro, chalo hum sab pizza mangwaate hai.

Kavya : Mera mann nahi hai Bhaiya aap hi khao. Aaj Veer Bhaiya ke saath itna sab kuch ho gaya aur aapko pizza ki padi hai?

Pranjal : Arre ye kya baat hui yaar. Kavya tum ab bhi usse apna bhai maanti ho? Wo bhai kehne laayak nahi hai Kavya. Kherr chorro! Arohi didi aap toh khaogi na?

Arohi : Nahi!

Pranjal : Thik hai toh mein hi mangwa leta hu...

Aur wo waha se chala jaata hai.

Kavya apna phone liye sochti rehti hai ki akhir Veer ne usse kyu call lagaya hoga. Wo sochti hai ki agli baar yadi phone aaya toh woh zaroor uthaegi. Par usse kya pata tha ki Pranjal ne Veer ka number hi block kar diya tha.

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Idhar hospital me ek ward me ek ladki apni Maa ke paas baithi hui thi...

Ladki : Maa! Ab mein chalti hu... Tum dhyaan rakhna theek!

Aurat : Haa beta! Mujhe kya... Tumhaare Papa toh rahenge hi na mere saath. Ab tum jao... Raat ho rahi hai beta. Aur fir, Juhi akeli pados me zyada derr nahi reh paegi. Jaa beta...

Ladki : Jii Maa! Chalti hu. Tum dhyaan rakhna apna haa!? Koi bhi dikkat ho toh...

Aurat : Arre baba! Haa! Pata hai mujhe... Jaa ab tu...

Ladki : Thik!

Aur ladki apni Maa ke ward se baahar nikal aati hai.

Abhi wo aage badh ke nikalne hi wali thi ki usne dekha ki uski Maa ke bagal waale ward ke baahar doctor aur ward boy ke beech behas ho rahi thi jisse dekh wo rukk gayi.

Doctor : Dekho kese bhi karke iske parivaar walo ko inform karo.... Kese bhi karke...

Ward boy : Arre Sir! Kisi ne phone hi nahi uthaaya...

Doctor : Haa toh lagaate raho... Nahi toh fir police ko inform karo kyuki uske shareer pe maar peet ke bhi nishaan hai.

Inn dono ki behas chal rahi thi ki tabhi wo ladki jigyaasa purvak aage badhi aur usne ward me jhaank ke dekha, jab usne patient ka chehra dekha toh ekdum hi chaunk gayi aur uske muh se tezz swar me nikla, "Veeeeeeerr!????"

Doctor (palat'te hue) : Aap? Aap janti hai isse?

Ladki : Huh? Mein... Haa! Wo mera student hai. Mein usse pichle ek saal se jaanti hu.

Doctor : Bhagwaan ka shuqr hai chalo koi toh mila... Aapka shubh naam?

Ladki : Nidhi...

Doctor : Okay toh Nidhi jii... Aap idhar aaiye zara mere saath.

Kuch derr baad...

Nidhi Veer ke college me Maths padhaati thi. Aur iss saal wo Veer ki hi class ki classteacher thi.

Wo Veer ko jaanti bhi thi. Bhale hi Veer padhne me hoshiyaar nahi tha par Veer sabse shaant baccha tha uski class me. Aur ho bhi kyu na? Uske dost hi nahi the.

Aaj Nidhi apni Maa jinhe kal hi achanak minor heart attack aa gaya tha unhe hi dekhne ke liye hospital me aayi hui thi. Par ittefaaq se usse Veer bhi yahi mil gaya.

Veer ke liye saari kaagzi kaam Nidhi ne kiya aur yaha tak ki apne Pita jii se Nidhi ne Veer ke liye medical fees bhi advanced me kuch jama karwane ko keh diya.

Sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki Nidhi ki khud samajh me nahi aaya. Aur iss waqt wo ward ke darwaaze ki window glass se jhaakte hue Veer ko dekh rahi thi aur soch me padi hui thi.

'Ye achanak... Ye Veer haadse me kese...!? Aur iske Maa Baap phone kyu nahi utha rahe hai!? Kese Maa Baap hai? Mujhe kal jaake unse baat karni padegi.'

Nidhi ye soch hospital se nikal gayi.

Par uske jaate Veer ki haalat bigadna shuru ho gayi thi.

Nurse : Doctor...

Doctor : I know...

*Beep Beep Beep*

Uski heart beat bilkul band hone ki kagaar par aa chuki thi.

Ki tabhi achaanak se aisa kuch hua jiske chalte uski heartbeat waapas se normal ho gayi.

Doctor : Phew... He's out of danger now.

Aur kuch derr baad hi Doctors aur nurse Veer ki haalat stable roop me chorr ke baahar aa gaye.

Par kisi ko nahi pata tha...

Ki jab uski saasein jaane hi waali thi...

Tab uske andar ek awaaz gunji thi...

Jo kisi ko sunaayi nahi dii thi...

Aur wo awaaz ke bol the...

[System has been activated.]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

To veer ki math teacher or class teacher nidhi Ji ne uske dva or opration kharch pay kiya veer ki jaan Jane vali hi thi ki andar se aavaj aai system has been activated... Akhir kya hai ye system kb or kaise dala gya veer ke andar... Kavya phone uthana chahti thi pr pranjal ne no hi block kr diya... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

 

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Update - 5 ~ System Activation​

Ab tak...

Par kisi ko nahi pata tha...

Ki jab uski saasein jaane hi waali thi...

Tab uske andar ek awaaz gunji thi...

Jo kisi ko sunaayi nahi dii thi...

Aur wo awaaz ke bol the...

[System has been activated.]

Ab aage...

Veer ke accident ke kuch ghanto baad hi jab Brijesh ka phone baja tha aur screen par Veer naam jab usne dekha tha toh pata nahi kyu Brijesh ne call nahi uthaaya.

Shayad kuch derr pehle usne khud hi apne bete ko dhakke maar ke ghar se baahar nikaala tha iss kaaran vash? Ya fir wo abhi Veer ke muh se koi bhi baat nahi sunn'na chaahta tha. Kuch tha jo usse rok raha tha Veer se baat karne ke liye.

Ki tabhi uske phone par firse call aaya par ye uske khud ke vyakti ka tha.

Brijesh : Hello?

Aadmi : Saahab! Veer jii ka car se accident hua hai. Abhi wo xxxxxxxxxx hospital me bharti hai.

Aur ye sunte hi Brijesh uth khada hua. Aur forun hi hospital ke liye jaane laga.

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Agle din Kavya college me apni soch me ghum thi.

'Veer bhaiya ka call uske baad se aaya hi nahi. Kya karu? Call back karu? Iske pehle unhone kabhi mujhe call nahi kiya fir achanak kal kyu? Kahi koi dikkat toh nahi? Kal unke beech mein call na kar saki thi...'

Aur ye soch wo call lagaati hai par call nahi laga. Kese lagta? Ward boy ne Veer ki SIM waapas se uske phone me jo daal dii thi.

Ant me Kavya uske whatsapp par message daal deti hai ye puchne ki wo theek hai ya nahi?

Idhar Nidhi din me hi Veer ke ghar gayi thi taaki wo jaan sake ki kyu uske Maa Baap ne call nahi uthaaya tha.

Jab wo waha pohuchi aur jesa ravaiyaa usne dekha Brijesh, Shweta aur baaki ghar waalo ka Veer ke prati ye dekh ke usse itna gussa aaya ki wo khud ko control na kar saki.

Nidhi ek Maa bhi thi. Uski khud ki beti abhi choti thi aur aise me wo jaanti thi ki ek parent hona kya hota hai. Aise me jab usne Brijesh aur Shweta ka behaviour dekha toh bas wo bhadak uthi.

Nidhi : Kese Maa Baap ho aap log? Aapka Beta waha apni zindagi se ladd raha hai aur aap logo ko koi chinta hi nahi hai? Yaha tak ki aapne usse apne ghar se baahar hi nikaal diya!?

Brijesh : Dekhiye Madam! Veer ab iss parivaar ka hissa nahi hai. Rahi baat paise ki toh uske medical kharcho ki bharpayi mein kar chuka hu par iske baad ab wo jaane ki wo kaha rahega kese rahega... Aur aap hamare parivaarik maamlo se dur rahe toh hi accha hoga.

Nidhi : Bhul se bhi aise Maa Baap na de bhagwaan kisi ko...

Aur Nidhi apni namm aankhe liye waha se bhaag aayi. Usse Veer ke liye waqai boht bura lag raha tha. Kaha wo khud ko badqismat samajhti thi par ab Veer ko dekh usse mehsoos hua ki kam se kam usse Maa Baap ka pyaar toh mil raha tha par Veer ko toh wo bhi nahi mila...

Na jaane kya kya saha hoga uss bechaare ne ab tak?

Na jaane kese kese din bitaaye honge Veer ne unke beech rehke?

Idhar hospital me abhi shaam ke waqt Veer ko hosh aa chuka tha.

"Arrrghhh!" Ek karaah ke saath uski aankh khuli.

Aankho se dhundhlapan hata, saamne ka nazaara nazar aaya.

Usne dekha ki wo hospital me hai. Aankhein uski jal rahi thi. Usse sab kuch jese yaad aane laga...

Kya hua tha?

Haan! Aur kal ki saari vardaat flashback ki tarah uske dimaag me mandraane lagi.

Aur usne apna sar pakad liya...

Aankho se aasu behne lage...

Abhi wo soch hi raha tha ki itne me uske andar ek awaaz gunji jiske chalte uske raungte khade ho gaye.

[Sytem has been activated. You are now the owner of the system.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Huh? Kaun? Kaun hai?

Awaaz se maano Veer bechaara darr hi gaya. Usne apna sar idhar udhar hilaate hue dekha par wo awaaz kaha se aayi usse kuch bhi pata na chala.

[Name the System!!]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Mein puchta hu kaun hai?

Aur firse ek awaaz uske dimaag me gunji...

[Analyzing Hindi language from owner's mind...

Processing...

Process completed.

Hindi Language has been recognised.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Saamne aao... Kiski awaaz hai ye jo mere sarr me gunj rahi hai...!?

Tabhi wahi awaaz firse uske mann me gunji...

Par iss baar uske bol alag bhaasha me the.

[Shaant! Mein System hu. Aur ab se tum mere master ho.]

Veer (darrte hue) : Kaun bol raha hai? Mujhe tum dikhayi kyu nahi de rahe?

[Mene kaha na Shaant! Mein ek system hu. Meri koi physical body nahi hai. Mein tumhare andar hu.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Me... Mere andar?

[Haa! Kya tumhe yaad hai kal tumhare saath kya hua tha? Tumhara accident hua tha. Aur tum marrte marrte bache ho tumhe pata hai? Yadi mene samay par madad na ki hoti toh tum zinda nahi bachte.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kesi madad? Tum mere andar kese ho? Baahar aao...

[Arre! Itni zorr se mat chillao. Andar mann me hi kaho jo kuch bhi kehna hai. Mein tumhaare mann, dil, dimag sab se judd chuki hu. Aur tumhare mann ki baat sunn sakti hu. Aise chillaoge toh log tumhe pagal samjhenge.]

Aur uss vichitr mann ki awaaz sunn Veer apne mann me hi baat karne laga.

Veer : Meri... Meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai. Ye sab kya chal raha hai?

[I know! Abhi tumhe samajhne me time lagega. Bas itna samajh lo ki mein tumhe koi nuksaan nahi pohuchaane wali. Ulta mein tumhari madad ke liye yaha hu.]

Veer : Meri madad?

Veer ne kaapte hue pucha.

[Haa! Tumhari madad! Mein tumhari madad karungi. Hamesha tum apni kismat ko koste the na? Ab mein tumhara saath dungi aur tum apni kismat palat ke rakh doge.]

Veer : Wo... Wo kaise?

[Yahi toh mera kaam hai. Yadi mera istemaal sahi se kiya. Toh tum duniya par raaj kar sakte ho.]

Veer : Sach!?

[Ekdum sach.]

Veer : Toh kya tum ladki ho? Kyuki tumhari awaaz ladkiyo jesi hai.

[Nahi! Mein na hi ladki hu na hi ladka. Mein kisi bhi gender me apne aap ko dhaal sakti hu. Mene tumhaare mann me jhaank ke dekha toh pata chala tumhe ladkiya zyada pasand hai ladko ke muqaable isliye mene apni awaaz ladki ki rakhi hui hai.]

Veer (blush) : Huh? Obviously Mujhe ladkiya pasand hai. Ladke nahi. I'm not gay...

[Yadi kaho toh awaaz ladke ki rakh lu!?]

Veer : Huh? Nahi! Nahi! Aise hi theek hai.

[Hehehe~]

Veer : ..........

[Accha! Ab apni aankhein band karo aur mann me hi kaho ~ Status]

Veer (aankhein band karte hue) : Status!

Aur Veer ke itna kehte hi uske mann me ek window khul gayi,

[ Name - Veer
Age - 20
Status - Abandoned student.

Stats :
Strength - 3/100
Intelligence - 4/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 6/100

Talents - 0
Points - 0 ]

Ye sab dekh ke Veer ke hosh hi udd gaye.

[Baap re Baap! Tumhara toh boht bura haal hai. Itne bekaar stats mene kabhi nahi dekhe apne life cycle me. Ye kya? Zero talents? Baap re!!! Tum reh kese liye itne din? Hmm? Endurance bas zyada hai tumhara. Arre haa! Itni maar khaoge toh ye toh zaahir si hi baat hai. Hehehe~]

Veer : Udaa lo... Tum bhi mera mazaak uda lo... Ab toh mujhe aadat pad gayi hai.

[Hey! Hey! Sorry! But ab tension mat lo. Mein hu na. Mein tumhe dekhna kaha se kaha pohucha dungi.]

Veer : Aur tum aisa kyu karogi? Kya milega tumhe aisa karke?

[Mera kaam hi yahi hai. Mera kaam hai logo ko sabse sarvashreshth banaana.]

Veer : Toh tumne mujhe hi kyu chuna?

[Mene chuna nahi. Jab mein yaha se guzri toh tum hi paas me the aur mein tumhare shareer me pravesh kar gayi. Apne aap ko Lucky keh sakte ho tum.]

Veer (shocked) : Yaha se guzri matlab?

[Uss baare me mein zyaada baat nahi kar sakti.]

Veer : Toh? Toh Doctor ko pata nahi chala? Ki tum mere andar ho?

[Hahaha~ Doctor kya... Tumhaari Prithvi me rehne waala koi bhi vyakti ye nahi bata sakta ki tumhaare andar mein maujood hu.]

Aur ek aur jhatka Veer ko. Ye kya bala ghuss gayi achanak se uske andar aake?

Veer : Aur tumhe Hindi kese aati hai??

[Arre buddhu abhi toh bataya, mein tumhare mann, dimaag aur dil se jud chuki hu. Aur abhi abhi toh seekhi tumhaare dimaag se hi. Isliye jitni Hindi tumhe aati hai utni hi mujhe bhi.]

Veer : O... Okay!

[Par tumhaare stats boht hi bekaar hai. Mujhe khud taras aa raha hai dekh ke. Tumhe jald se jald apne stats badhaane honge.]

Veer : Ye? Ye stats kya hai?

[Ye tumhari asli shamtaaye hai. Tumhari strength 3 hai yaani ki jo taaqat hai tumhare andar usse yadi number se darshaaya jae toh woh 3 hai. Intelligence matlab tumhari buddhi, agility tumhari furti, endurance tumhari sehan-sheelta aur appearance tumhare physical features yaani ki chehra body haath perr ye sab.]

Veer : Aur mein inhe badha sakta hu? Toh mere asli shareer me badlaav aaenge?

[Haa!]

Veer (shocked) : Baap re! Aise me toh mein fir...

[Tabhi toh kaha ki ab mein tumhari kismat palat ke rakh dungi.]

Veer : Par wo points kese badhenge?

[Missions karke. Samay samay par tumhe missions milenge aur jese jese tum unhe complete karoge tumhe points milenge. Unn points se tum apne stats badha paoge aur saath hi saath nayi skills khareed paoge. Saath hi saath jitni uplabdhiya aur naam kamaoge tumhe points milte rahenge.]

Veer : Mein kuch samjha nahi...

[Hmm! Tumhara intelligence kam hai na isliye abhi sab kuch tumhare bheje ke upar se jaega. Bas itna samajh lo. Jese jese tum missions poore karte jaoge, mera level aur saath hi saath tumhaara level badhta jaega. Jiske chalte aur bhi anokhi skills unlock hoti jaengi. Dhyaan rahe! Yadi mission ko time limit me poora nahi kiya gaya. Toh tum hamesha hamesha ke liye mujhe kho doge.]

Veer : O... Okay!!

[Hmm! Ek aur akhiri baat. Kabhi bhi... Kabhi bhi ghamand mat karna. Jis din tumhe ghamand aana shuru hua, uss din se hi tumhara ant bhi shuru ho jaega.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Apna thook nigalte hue usne firse kaha.

Veer : Mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki duniya me aisi bhi koi cheez hoti hai.

[Duniya me aisi koi cheez nahi hai. Saari duniya me mein hi ek hu jo tumhare andar iss waqt maujood hu. Mein iss planet se nahi hu. Aur planet ke baahar kesi kesi cheeze maujood hai ye tum insaan soch bhi nahi sakte.]

Veer : .........

Iske pehle ki Veer kuch aage keh paata, Nidhi uske ward me aa gayi.

Darwaaze ki aahat se jab Veer ne palat ke dekha toh apni ma'am ko dekh kar chaunk gaya.

Veer : Ma'am!?

Nidhi : Ohh God!! Finally... Tumhe hosh aa gaya.

Aur Nidhi tezz kadmo ke saath aage aayi aur Veer ka haath thaam lii...

Veer (shocked) : Nidhi Ma'am aap yaha!?

Nidhi ne fir saari baat usse bata dii. Jab usse pata chala ki Brijesh ne uska call nahi uthaaya tha toh uske chehre par dard bhari muskuraahat aa gayi. Nidhi usse bechain bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.

Veer : Aapne mere liye medical fees dii!?

Nidhi : Mene toh sirf advance diya tha baad me tumhaare Dad ne saari pay kii.

Kehte hue usne Veer ka haath ek baar fir thaam liya.

Nidhi (bauhe sikodte hue) : Tumhe... Tumhe bura lag raha hoga na? Tumhare Maa Baap tumhe dekhne tak nahi aaye. Jese maano unhe koi parvaah hi nahi hai tumhari.

Veer (smiles) : Isme koi nayi baat nahi hai Ma'am. Ye sab toh roz ka hai. I'm not surprised. Haha~

Uski wo fake hassi dekh pata nahi kyu, par Nidhi ko apne dil me atyant hi dard mehsoos hua. Aur usne Veer ka haath aur zorr se bheench liya.

Tabhi Veer ke andar firse awaaz gunji,

[Apne mann me kaho 'Check' aur fir iss aurat ki taraf dekho.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ne wesa hi kiya aur jese hi usne check kehte hue Nidhi ko dekha toh uske hosh hi udd gaye.

Nidhi ke sar ke upar hawa me ek window mandraa rahi thi jisme kuch shabd likhe hue the ~

[ Name - Nidhi
Age - 30
Status - Divorce pending.

Bio - Nidhi ki ek beti hai jiska naam hai Juhi. Saath hi ek beta hai jisse wo apne saath rakhna chaahti hai par uske Pati Rajat ne usse apne paas rakha hua hai. Rajat se uska rishta kharaab chal raha hai jiske chalte Nidhi akeli apni beti ke saath ek ghar me rent dete hue rehti hai kyuki wo apne mata pita par bojh nahi bann na chaahti. Uski Maa ko do din pehle hi dil ka daura pada tha aur wo bhi issi hospital me bharti hai. Nidhi ki life boht hi dukh aur pareshaniyo se bhari hui hai.

Favourability - 20
Relationship - Student - Teacher ]

Ye sab kuch Veer ko Nidhi ke sar ke upar nazar aa raha tha.

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Ye... Ye aapke sar pe...

Nidhi : Huh? Kya hua? Mere sar pe!?

[Arre Buddhu! Ye sirf tum dekh sakte ho? Baaki koi nahi.]

Veer : Nahi! Ma'am! Wo mein aise hi...

'Itna toh mein ek saal me nahi jaan paaya Ma'am ke baare me jitna abhi jaan gaya. Kya kamaal cheez hai ye.'

Usne mann me socha.

'System? Ye favourability 20 ka kya matlab hai?'

[Iska matlab hai ki wo tumhaare baare me kya sochti hai. Ek prakaar se uske mann me tumhare liye jo bhaav hai usko darshaata hai.]

'Toh ye 20 matlab?'

[Matlab ki abhi wo tumhare liye sirf 20 favourability rakhti hai. Jese jese tumhara aur uska relation accha hoega ye badhta jaega. Yadi ye 80 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe chaahta hai. Yadi ye 90 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe dil se pyaar karta hai. Aur yadi 100 hai matlab ki dil-o-jaan se pyaar karne waala vyakti.]

'Samjha!'

Nidhi : Veer? Kaha kho gaye?

Jab Nidhi ne chutki bajaate hue apna haath uske saamne hilaaya toh Veer jese apne khayaalo se baahar aaya.

Veer : Haa! Wo mein... Ma'am...

Nidhi (haath thaamte hue) : Just forget about everything Veer! Aur kuch mat socho. Bas tumhe jald se jald thik hona hai. Okay? And don't think tumhara koi nahi hai. I'm with you okay? Abhi tum rest karo ab. Mein ab kal shaam ko hi aaungi. Aaj mene wese hi leave lii thi. Roz nahi le sakti.

Veer : Jii ma'am! Thank you!

Nidhi : Thank you kesa isme...?? *Smiles* Take care okay?

Veer : Hmmm!

Aur Nidhi uske ward se chali gayi. Veer keval Nidhi ko jaate hue dekhta raha.

Nidhi 30 saal ki ek aisi husn ki mallika prateet hoti thi ki maano keher hi dhaa de. Par limited paiso aur din bhar ki mehnat aur thakaan ke chalte jaise uska husn poora khil ke nahi jhalak paa raha tha. Kyuki wo dhyaan hi nahi de paati thi apne upar.

Ye dekh Veer ko waqai taras aa raha tha uss par. Uski khud ki Maa yaha admit thi par uske bawajood Nidhi ne uski madad ki aur uske liye advance me paise bhi bharwae. Wahi dusri orr uske gharwale jo saari sampatti se sampann hai unhone ek shan bhi nahi socha ki wo jee raha hai ya marr raha hai.

*Ding*

Aur achaanak hi uske dimaag me ghanti baji aur uske saamne ek window khuli.

[Mission : Solve Nidhi's problem.
Reward : ?? points
Time limit : 1 year ]

'Huh? Mission?'

[Haa! Mission mil chuka hai tumhe.]

'Nidhi Ma'am ki problem? Konsi problem?'

[Ye toh tumhe khud dekhna padega.]

'O... Okay!'

[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]

Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.

Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

Yah Bahut hi jyada kmal ka plot hai bhai superb maza aayega aapke sath safar karke to nidhi mam ki problem solve karke veer ko points Ya revard milega Jisse vo apne ability ko bdha sakta hai... Mind blowing bhai

 

[SS Hans Landa]

Nice update Werewolf bhai.
Ab veer ko bhi hospital se discharge milne wala he. Aur sari formalities bhi Nidhi ne puri kar di he. Nidhi ko bhi pata he ki vaar wapis uske ghar Jane se raha. To Nidhi ne bhi achha kiya ki veer ko apne ghar me rakhne ko bol di. Ab veer uske sath rahega to uske liye bhi achha he. Bahar thokare to nahi khani padegi. Ghar jate samay Nidhi ki kamar pakad ne se Nidhi ko bhi dil me kuch to hua he. Aage chalke veer ke liye feelings badhegi.
Nidhi ke liye bhi achha hi he veer ka uske ghar rehna. Uski beti juhi ko bhi ek father figure mil jayega ya fir ek achha dost. Juhi abhi chhoti he aur usse jarurat he kisi father figure ki uski life me. Veer bhale hi best father figure na bane par usse pata he ki worst kese nahi banna.
Yaha Nidhi ke ghar pe uski chhoti behan rehne aayi he ab. Nidhi ke maa baap ne socha hoga ki Nidhi akeli rehti he aur job, bachhi ka khayal bhi rakhti he sab kaam akeli karti he to bhej diya shreya ko Nidhi ki help ke liye. Shreya ke bhi sapne he ab dekhte he veer ke sath kese rehti he wo. Veer ki halat pe daya to aa gayi he usse par mann me doubt abhi bhi he.
Ab veer ke samne ek mission bhi he ki Nidhi ke problem solve karo. Dekhte he veer kese solve karega.
Vese aapne kaha he ki kahani harem based he to ab Nidhi se hi shuruwat hone wali he.
Waiting for next update .