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Hmare liye masala to pahle update se hi suru ho gya tha nidhi ki chhoti Sister Shreya Ghar aa gyi hai nidhi ke yha rahne nidhi ne veer ke bare me sb bta diya hai Shreya ki dhamki bahut hi mazedar thi nidhi ke states me 10 points ki badhat hui hai Jisse veer ke andar unke prati respect or bhi badh gyi hai... Superb jabarjast update bhai sandarUpdate - 6 ~ A New Home
Ab tak...
[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]
Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.
Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!
Ab aage...
Kaafi din yu guzar chuke the. Aur aaj Veer ko hospital se leave milne waali thi. Aisa ek bhi din nahi tha jis din Nidhi usse dekhne na aayi ho. Aur aisa ek bhi din nahi tha jis din galti se bhi uske gharwalo me se koi usse dekhne aaya ho.
Kitni ajeeb baat thi.
Par thi toh sacchi baat.
Ghar me asal me Brijesh ne kuch nahi bataya tha. Veer ke accident ki baat keval Brijesh aur uski sauteli maa Shweta ko hi pata thi.
Jab Manorath ne Veer ke baare me dubaara pucha toh Brijesh ne jhuth bol ye keh diya ki Veer apne dost ke ghar me thehra hua hai.
Par aisa toh bilkul bhi nahi tha. Kyuki uska koi dost hi nahi tha.
Yaha inn kuch dino me Veer ne System ke baare me badi hi bareeki se jaana.
Usse pata chala ki jese jese wo missions complete karega ya uplabdhiya haasil karega ya izzat kamaega, apna fame badhaega wese wese usse Experience milega.
Aur yahi Experience jab ikhatta hota jaega wese wese hi uske System ka level badhta jaega.
System se usse free me 10 points bhi mile the jo System ne usse uske owner bann'ne ke liye gift ke roop me diye the. Aur Veer ab issi soch me tha ki kis stat me wo points add kare.
'Mein strength me add karta hu. Sahi rahega na?'
[Mein tumhe suggest karungi ki pehle tum apna ye bheja sahi karo. Ahem! Yaani ki apna intelligence badhao.]
'Hmph! Toh fir abhi mein add nahi karna chaahta.'
[Are you sure? Dhyaan rahe! Tum jo bhi changes karoge apne stats me wo raat bhar lenge change hone me. Matlab yadi tum apni strength abhi badhaate ho toh wo abhi nahi badhegi. Tumhe uska result agle din dekhne ko milega.]
'I see!! Hmm! Toh ek kaam karo. 7 points meri strength me daalo. 2 mere intelligence me aur 1 mere appearance me.'
[Are you sure!?]
'Haan!'
[Well okay!]
Aur tabhi ek ghanti baji...
*Ding*
[7 points have been added to strength.
2 points have been added to intelligence.
1 point has been added to appearance.]
Aur uske baad hi Veer ke stats badal chuke the. Par uska effect agli subah se usse dekhne ko milne wala tha.
Stats :
Strength - 10/100
Intelligence - 6/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 7/100
'Good!! Wese... System!?'
[Hmm!??]
'Tumne kaha tha ki tumne meri jaan bachaayi? Kya tum ek marre hue vyakti ko bhi zinda kar sakti ho?!'
[Nahi! Mene sirf apni urja ka istemaal kiya tha. Yahi kaaran hai ki mein ek din tak shut down thi. Aur tum khud bhi behosh the isliye tumhe pata nahi chala.]
'Wow! Toh aise me toh tum mujhe harr waqt khatro se bacha sakti ho hai na?'
[Bilkul bhi nahi! Aisa sochna bhi mat. Wo urja keval ek baar hi istemaal karne ke liye praapt thi mujhe.]
'Ohh mujhe aur batao na iss baare me.'
[Pehle mera level badhao. Abhi tumhe inn baato ko jaan'ne ka haq nahi hai.]
'Okay!'
[Aur haa! Mujhse zyaada baatein mat kiya karo. Jab zaroori ho keval tabhi...]
'Kyu?'
[Kyuki bolte waqt mujhe energy chaahiye. Aur ye energy mein tumhaare hi shareer se leti hu.]
'Fuck!!! Aur tum mujhe ye ab bata rahi ho!? Tabhi mein sochu mujhe itni thakaan kyu mehsoos hoti thi.'
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Ab shaam ka time ho chuka tha aur Veer ko hospital se discharge kar diya gaya tha.
Abhi wo wahi ek bench par baitha hua tha ki Nidhi saare kaagzi kaam karte hue uske paas aayi aur bagal se baith gayi.
Nidhi
Nidhi : Veer!? Saari formalities ho chuki hai. Ab tumhe hospital se chhutkaara mila.
Nidhi ne muskuraate hue kaha.
Veer : Thank you Ma'am! Mein zindagi bhar aapka abhaari rahunga.
Nidhi : Ye tum kesi baatein kar rahe ho Veer? Ek teacher hone ke naate ye toh meri duty hai ki mein apne student ki help karu.
Veer : Fir bhi Ma'am! Aaj kal toh ghar ke apne saath nahi dete aur aapne sirf meri teacher hone ke naate itna kiya. Uske liye thanks toh banta hi hai na?
Iss baar Veer ne smile karte hue kaha. Par uski smile dekh ek baar fir Nidhi ki bauhe sikudi aur usse andar hi andar ek ajeeb sa dard hua.
Nidhi : Ab... Ab tum kaha jaoge Veer? Tumhare gharwale toh...
Veer : Hmm? Mujhe nahi pata Ma'am. Dekhta hu. Kuch na kuch kar hi lunga.
Nidhi : Nahi! Par aise kaha jaoge tum? Tumhe abhi bhi rest ki zaroorat hai. Kaha rahoge? Kya khaoge? Aur college ka kya?
Veer : College? Mujhe kuch nahi pata Ma'am. Jo bhi hoega, dekha jaega.
Wo itna keh ke waha se utha hi tha ki Nidhi ne uska haath thaam liya.
Nidhi : Nahi! Mein tumhe aise jaane nahi de sakti. Bilkul bhi nahi! Kaha jaoge aur tum? Kaha bhatkoge aisi haalat me? Tum... Tum mere saath chalo.
Veer (shocked) : Huh?
Nidhi : Haa! Aaj se... Aaj se tum mere saath rahoge.
Kitni hi asaani se keh dii Nidhi ne ye baat.
Aur kitni hi asaani se Brijesh ne wo baat kahi thi ~ "Nikal jao iss ghar se."
Dono me kitna antar tha.
Aur kismat ka khel toh dekho. Ki uske ghar se usse yu nikaal diya gaya tha aur aaj Nidhi jo ki sirf uski teacher thi wo yu usse apne ghar le jaane taiyaar thi.
Aur yahi dekh ke Veer ki aankho me aasu aa gaye. Usne Nidhi ka status dekha tha. Wo jaanta tha ki Nidhi khud kitna kasht bhara jeevan vyateet kar rahi thi.
Par iske bawajood usne Veer ko apne ghar par rehne ke liye keh diya.
Veer (namm aankho se) : Nahi! Ma'am! Ye aap... Ye aap kya keh rahi ho? Mein aapko pehle hi boht kasht de chuka hu, ab aur mujhe mushqil me mat daaliye ma'am.
Nidhi : Chup raho ekdum! Aur chalo mere saath.
Veer : Ma'am...
Nidhi : Mene kaha na chup raho. Aaj se tum mere saath hi rahoge. Aur aage ek shabd nahi kahoge tum.
Usne apna haath Veer ke hontho par rakh diya. Nidhi ke komal haatho ka sparsh apne hontho pe paate hi Veer wahi khada ka khada reh gaya. Jab Nidhi ko bhi dhyaan aaya ki usne ekdum se kya kiya usne forun hi apna haath peeche le liya aur uska haath pakad ke usse le jaane lagi.
Veer ke laakho manaane ke baad bhi Nidhi ne uski ek na suni aur usse laake apni scooty par peeche baitha diya.
Nidhi : Acche se pakad ke baithna okay?
Uske bolte hi Veer ke haath Nidhi ki patli kamar pe lipat gaye. Ek pal ke liye toh Nidhi ko bhi ek jhatka sa laga jese hi Veer ke haath uski kamar par bandhe.
Wo iss waqt navy blue saree aur kaala blouse pehni hui thi. Aur peeche se uske aadhe nagn kandhe saaf nazar aa rahe the jo harr pal Veer ko madhosh kar rahe the. Wo khule baal aur wo nasheeli aankhein jo kisi bhi waqt aadmi ko apna deewana bana de.
Thandi hawao se dono ka shareer thanda zaroor ho raha tha par saath hi saath ek ajeeb sii garmi bhi thi jo dono ke hi shareer me iss waqt kahi dabi hui thi.
'Check' Veer ne mann me Nidhi ko peeche se hi dekhte hue kaha toh forun hi Nidhi ke sar ke upar wahi window firse khul gayi.
Sab kuch same hi tha pehle ki tarah siwae ek cheez ke. Aur wo thi...
[Favourability - 30]
Nidhi ki favourability Veer ke prati 10 points se badh gayi thi. Aur kyu na badhti? Wo roz Veer se milne shaam ke waqt aaya karti thi. Roz roz yadi aap kisi se bhi baat karo, aapko thoda boht interest unme aa hi jaata hai. Aisa hi haal kuch Nidhi ka bhi tha.
Veer uska student tha aur iss se pehle kabhi bhi Nidhi ne aise apne kisi bhi student se mulaqaat nahi ki thi. Na hi itni baatein kari thi. Aur toh aur wo ab Veer ko apne ghar le jaa rahi thi. Toh bhala dono ke beech friendship gehri kese nahi hoti?
Veer ke mann me Nidhi ke prati jo respect thi wo ab kayi guna badh chuki thi.
Kitni hi asaani se usne Veer ko apne ghar rehne ko keh diya. Veer jaanta tha ki wo akeli apni beti ke saath rent se rehti hai uske bawajood Nidhi ne uspar iss hadd tak bharosa kar liya ki wo uske saath reh le. Usne ek baar bhi nahi socha ki Veer ko apne ghar par rakhna theek hai ya nahi? Usne ye nahi socha ki uske ghar ki owner kese react karegi ye dekh ke?
Aur isliye Veer ki nazro me Nidhi kisi devi se kam nahi thi.
Veer kass ke uski patli kamar ko apne dono haatho se thaame hue tha. Aur Nidhi bhi Veer ke haatho ko bhali bhaati feel kar paa rahi thi. Na chaahte hue bhi uski dhadkan normal se thodi tezz ho chuki thi.
Iss se pehle keval uske husband ne hi usse aise touch kiya tha. Aur usse hue bhi 2 saal ho chuke the. Aur aaj wahi feeling wo mehsoos kar rahi thi.
Par farq ye tha ki uski kamar ko thaamne waala iss waqt uska husband nahi balki uska student Veer tha. Jo ki uss se 10 saal chota tha.
Aur yahi baat Nidhi ko sata rahi thi. Wo nahi chaahti thi ki Veer jo ki uske chote bhai jesa hai uske touch se wo aisa mehsoos kare. Par inn sab ke bawajood uski dhadkane slow hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi.
2 saalo se ye pehli baar tha jab usne kisi mard ko itni paas se mehsoos kiya tha. Aur usse nahi pata tha ki ek ajeeb sii anubhooti ne uske andar janm le liya hai.
Kuch hi derr me jab ghar aaya, Nidhi ne usse dhyaan se utarwaaya aur gaadi park kii.
Wo ek flat me rent se rehti thi. Uska flat 2nd floor par tha. Veer ko lift me le jaate hue wo 2nd floor par pohuchi aur jese hi apne flat ke paas aayi toh chaunk gayi.
Flat ka taala khula hua tha. Usne forun hi bell bajaayi toh kuch seconds me hi darwaaza khul gaya.
Aur andar se uski beti jo ki abhi abhi school jaana shuru kii thi wo daudte hue aayi aur uske perro se lipat gayi, "Mummmmmyyyyy... Mummy aa gayi!"
Hairaan hote hue Nidhi soch me pad gayi. Wo toh flat me taala laga ke apni beti Juhi ko bagal waale flat yaani ki pados me chorr ke gayi thi. Fir ye sab kya tha?
Ki tabhi andar se ek aur shaks baahar aaya. Aur usse dekh Nidhi ke chehre pe hairaani, fir confusion, aur fir khushi jhalakne lagi.
Ek sundar sii ladki aage badhte hue uske gale se lag gayi, "Diiii!!"
Nidhi (gale lagte hue) : Shreya tu? Yaha?
Shreya
Shreya : Kyu?! Nahi aa sakti?
Nidhi : Mera matlab wo nahi tha tu jaanti hai.
Shreya : I know! And yes! Mein yaha. Hehe~ Aur ab se mein yahi rahungi aapke saath.
Nidhi (hairaani me) : Kyaaaa?
Shreya : Haa! Itna shocked kyu ho? Aap nahi chaahti kya ki mein yaha rahu?
Nidhi : Nahi! Mein bas ye soch rahi hu ki achanak se tum yaha.
Shreya : Hmm! Kyuki Maa papa ne khud kaha hai.
Veer khade khade itna toh jaan gaya tha ki saamne khadi ladki Nidhi Ma'am ki choti behan thi. Fir bhi usne check karna hi sahi samjha.
Veer (mann me) : Check!
Aur Shreya ke sar ke upar tabhi wahi window khul gayi aur uspe likhe shabd Veer ko nazar aane lage.
[ Name - Shreya
Age - 24
Status - Maiden in search for true love.
Bio - Shreya Nidhi ki sagi choti behan hai. Uska mann padhayi me shuru se hi nahi lagta tha aur isliye aaj wo ek youtuber hai. YouTube pe stream karte hue games khelna aur vlogs banaana usse pasand hai. Abhi zyaada subscribers na hone ke kaaran wo zyaada busy nahi rehti. Apni behan Nidhi se boht zyaada pyaar karti hai. Uska sapna hai ek boht badi youtuber bann'na. Sacche pyaar ki talaash me hai. Par koi mila nahi hai abhi. Shreya love at first sight par believe karti hai.
Favourability - 0
Relationship - Strangers.]
Shreya ke baare me jaante hi Veer thoda hairaan tha. Usse dekh ke koi nahi keh sakta tha ki wo ek youtuber thi.
'Hmm! Interesting... Interesting!'
[Sapne dekhna chorr do master!]
'Huh? Kyu??'
[Nahi degi!]
'What the..!?'
[Master aapne dekha na? Wo love at first sight par believe rakhti hai. Pehli nazar me pyaar. Aur aapko abhi dekh ke koi bhi ladki aapke pyaar me nahi padne waali.]
Iske pehle ki Veer System ko jawaab de paata. Shreya ki awaaz uske kaano me padi.
Shreya : Ye kaun hai?!
Nidhi : Ye hai Veer! Mera student.
Shreya : Ohh! Toh? Tuition shuru kar dii kya aapne?
Nidhi : Nahi! Aaj se ye mere saath hi rahega.
Pal bhar ke liye maano sannaata sa chha gaya aur tabhi Shreya ekdum se chillaayi,
Shreya : Whaaaaaaaatttt??
Nidhi : Haaa!
Shreya : Kya kaha aapne? Ye... Ye aapke saath rahega?
Nidhi : Hmm! Lambi kahani hai.
Shreya : Wait! What? But kyu? Aap aise kese kisi ko bhi apne ghar me...!?
Nidhi : Sshhh! Andar chalo pehle.
Andar le jaate hue Nidhi ne Shreya ko Veer ke baare me sab kuch bata diya, jisse sunn Shreya ka dil bhi thoda paseej gaya aur wo Veer ko rakhne ke liye taiyaar ho gayi. Abhi Nidhi washroom gayi hui thi ki tabhi Shreya uske paas aayi...
Shreya : Dekho! Hum tumhe yaha rakh rahe hai kyuki meri dii badi hi bholi hai aur sabki madad karti hai. Aur hum tumhe yaha rakhne ke liye taiyaar hai. Par meri dii ke baare me koi bhi galat khayaal mat laana samjhe? Hmph! I'm watching you...
Aur wo do ungli Veer ki aankho ki taraf karte hue mud ke apni gaand matkaate hue andar chali gayi.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Like zaroor kijiyega yadi pasand aaye. Next update se story me action aur masala aana shuru hoega.
Aapka pg mast tha or yahjab nidhi mam iske ghar gayee toh kya iske mata pita ke alawa koi na tha... akhir iski parwah karne waali iski chachi ne kyun na khojne kee kosis kari... itne bare pariwar ka hissa thee unke apne bhi jaan pehchan honge... aur iski so called pyari behen kavya kya usse maloom na tha kee veer ka koi dost na hain... kya iske gharwaale iske baare mein kuchh bhi na jante the jo na pasand karte the unki chhor bhi de toh jinhe iski parwah thee kya wo ratti bhar na jante the.... agar aaj tak kisi dost ko iske unhone dekha na tha toh kaise maan liya...
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missions karne par usse points milte hain aur unhi points se wo khud ko improve kar shatka hain... jitne jyada missions utne jyada points utne jyada improvement khud mein laa shakta hain... yeh proportionlly chalte hain ek doosre ke.... system ne apni urja dee veer ko jaise shock waves dete hain marte hue heart ko rejuvenate karne ke liye... its like a parastie just like venom they feed off each other... wo uski shaktiya badhati hain badle mein usse shaktiya leti hain...
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ek taraf uske apne khoon ke riste naate doosri taraf nidhi jisse theek se jaan pehchan bhi na hain uski... usne jaan bachaye aur aaj saath rahne ko keh rahi hain... bhala koi apna rishtedar itna na karta hain wo paraya ho ke... wo dil kee saaf hain lekin saaf dilwaale hi sabse jyada takleef sahte hain duniya mein... khule baal aur naseeli aankhen,,, aisi ankhen le ke chalti road pe chalti hain kisi ko ankhon mein dekhne e nasha ho gaya toh bechara khali fokat mein drunk and drive mein fas jayega... hihihi pg mara maine.. hihihih...
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wakai nidhi ne yeh tak na socha jiske gharwaalo ne hi usse ghar se nikal diya hain kaheen iss ladke ne hi kuchh galat aisa kiya ho jisse wo log nafrat karte ho aur usse apne ghar mein rahne de rahi hain... khud kee maa alag pareshani mein hain aur ek nayi mushibat mol le rahi hain... oopar se divorced mahila hain wo log tarah tarah ke baate banayenge ek anjaane ladke ko dekh ke uske saath... wahee par purush ka sparsh wo bhi ek lambe antaral ke baad kuchh soyee hue anchahe tarang utha rahi hain uske dil mein... kehne ko toh umra ka bara fasla hain lekin yeh dil kahan manta hain wo toh bas mehsoos karna janta hain...
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dekho wo aa gayee dekho na lagta hain wo aa gayee... shreya---- kaheen yeh wo toh nahin mera matlab hain hamari kahani kee heroine ... are ab bol bhi do itna kya sarmana... dak dak karne laga... /// yeh system kee maa kee ankh ek toh khud saali launda hain kee laundiya pata nahin oopar se bechare ka dil tor rahi ahin.. mana kee jahndu hain lekin koi toh dekhegi kee kya pata uske najariya change ho jaye love at first sight se love in the first fight ho jaye... kya bolte ho....
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I am becoming fan of your writing with each and every update... detailing is perfect... loved it...
Super
Nice update
Zabardast update
Mazedaar update bro.Lagta hai Shreya Veer ki mohabbat mein giraftaar ho jaayegi
Amazing story brooo...
Superb...
Awesome....❤
Waiting for next update
Super update hai Bhai
GOOD UPDATE
Awesome update
Nice update bhai do to yehi pe mil gaya veer ko abhi to bahut baki hai
Nice update
Love and romance coming soon.
Very interesting story line up
Keep going on
mast update and sec. Update wait
Awesome update
SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
Shreya n Veer ko warning de di h ki meri bahen door raho
Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai
SHAANDAAR MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
Nice update bro waiting for your next update....
Nice Update bro
Excellent update bhai
Thank you guys!!!Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai...
Nice and awesome update...
Thanks bro (◍•ᴗ•◍)Superb Update
Nidhi ek achhi ladki hai. Jo apne student ke liye itna kar rahi hai. Jo chiz Veer ke ghar walo ko karna chahiye tha woh kaam Nidhi ne kiya.
Nidhi ko Veer ke chuwan se ajeeb sa mehsus hua. 2 saal se mard ke chuwan se durr rehne se usse ajeeb laga.
Shreya Nidhi ki behen jo ab uske saath hi rahegi. Veer ko shayad shreya pasand aayi hai. Par Shreya ko love at first sight mein believe hai jo usko Veer ko dekh ke nhi hua.
Dekhte hai future mein pyaar hota hai yaa Hawas jaagta hai
System bahut tharki hey........[Nahi degi!]
Thanks bunny bro.superb mindblowing fabulous fantastic speechless update...........
keep posting bhai...........
waiting for next update............