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Ha ye to h Kaera Mai guhsana to pre ga hi
Kaera is a very complicated character. Usse samajhne ke liye aapko uske character me ekdum ghusna padega.
Apne sound effect wale bhayia ji ke salary barhao wo mann laga ker kaam nahi ker rahe ye Bam ki jo sound di hai takiya darwaze per laga hai ke bomb phata hai kucho samajh nahi aa rahaEk takiya high speed me Veer ki khopdi ki orr udd ke aaya par reflex ke chalte usne forun hi apne sarr ko side me kar liya. Takiya uske kaano ke bagal se nikla aur...
*Bam*
'Wait! Haha~ Shit! She's actually cute... Huh?
[Yes! Like... Kuch log aise hote hai jinki split personality hoti hai. Like... Wo ek personality ko sabke saamne dikhaate hai. Log sochte hai ki yahi unka vyaktitv hai. Par... Ek personality unki aur hoti hai jisse wo dabaaye rakhte hai. Jinhe wo kabhi kisi aur ke saamne nahi aane dete. Kyuki wo personality wo kabhi bhi dikhaana pasand nahi karte. Unhe darr rehta hai ki... Uske chalte na jaane log kese react karenge. Aur Suhana shayad unme se ek hai. She has a split personality disorder. In fact, ye personality aur dusri personality ka mixture hi asli Suhana hai.]
Wo kehte hai na bhalayi ka zamana he nahi raha.....kisi ko seedhi rah dikhao to wo aage se gaali deta hai.....aisa he kuch veer ke saath huwa..... agar ye purana veer hota to paka aisi situation me ukta react karta.....lekin ab us ke saath Pari thi iss liye veer ne Suhana ko beech me he tok dia....Mere papa mujh se ek baat kehte hai ke.... 'Don't be too honest in this world, Because straight trees are always chosen first for Cutting'Suhana : Ye...!? Wait! Ye tumhaare paas!? Kahi tumne...!?
I Think mujhe pata hai ke veer ye job kis ke liye le raha hai.....ye ek bura guess ho sakta hai but phir bhi tukka maarne me kia jata hai....kia veer ye job Nidhi ki behan shreya ke liye job maange ga kia.....look mere paas reason hai iss guess ka kiu ke shreya ne veer se kaha tha ke wo job dhoond rahi hai us ko acha nahi lagta ke wo apni behan per bojh hai.....agar main sahi hu to bata dena kanhi main suspense me mar he na jao agar galat hu to bus ek huh wala reaction dene ka dil nahi torne ka meraSuhana : Huh!? Of-course! I-I am sure. Bolo!? Job chahiye!? Mere husband IT company C.E.O hai. You just need to give interview aur bas. Interview bhi formality ke liye hi hoga yadi mein unse keh du ki tumhaari job lagwaani hai.
Kisi bhi tarha ka Favour allow hai kia[Lifetime favour from Suhana has been achieved.]
Ye ap ki baate uff....itna pyaar ke veer khud se zada nidhi ke liye khusiya chahta hai ye he ek pal Lucifer series me aya tha jab Lucifer ne dua ki thi ke Chloe decker ko bacha lia jaye wo scene aur aj ye scene seedhe dil per Lage haiHey uparwaale! Wese mene kabhi tumpe utna vishwaash nahi kiya. Par Yadi tum meri pukaar sunn rahe ho, aur logo ki kaamnaaye poori karte ho. Toh... Toh... mein aaj tumse yahi maangta hu... Ki... Meri ma'am ki zindagi se kasht dur kar do. Please! Nahi chaahta mein ab unhe aur pareshani me dekhna. Aaj wo bhi aas leke aayi hai tumhaare paas. Chaahe toh unke dard mujhe de do. Mein yuhi peeth peeche unki hifaazat karta rahunga... Par unke paas nahi jaa sakta. Warna wo mujhe apne saath rakh lengi. Aur... Kahi mein koi paap na kar baithu. Wo nahi samajhti hai... Ki yadi wo mere saath itna pyaar se vyavhaar karti rahengi toh... Toh... Mein unka bann ke reh jaunga... Isliye... Jald se jald unke dukh dard dur kar do. Bas yahi kaamna hai meri.'
EK He update me kitni baar dil luto gye zalim.....kuch shikwe shikayat apno se he hote hai iss scene per ek shayari yad ayiNidhi : K-Kyu aaye ho ab Veer!? Ab... Ab tum apni Bhabhi ke ghar rehne lage ho. Mere chote se ghar me ab kaha tumhe wo aisho araam milega...?? Hai na!? M-Mein kaha tumhaari zaroorato ka kharcha uthaa paa rahi thi!? Akhir... Isliye... Isliye toh tum gaye na? Ab bhala kya zaroorat tumhe iss ma'am kii?? Padhaayi bhi chorr dij hai tumne ab shayad hai na? Toh bhala... Ab... Ab mera *sniff* mera matlab kya reh gaya.
AKHIR jis ka dar tha wo he hone wala hai....veer ki wajha se us ke gharwalo per khatra aa gaya hai.....agar us ki wajha se us ke apno ko kuch huwa to na jane veer iss galani ke bhaw se kaise ubhar sake gaPar unhe nahi pata tha...
Ki iss waqt unke peeche kaun aa raha tha.
Allu bhai aap se acha postmartam koi nahi kar sakta kisi bi storie ka.ur the bestjab nidhi mam iske ghar gayee toh kya iske mata pita ke alawa koi na tha... akhir iski parwah karne waali iski chachi ne kyun na khojne kee kosis kari... itne bare pariwar ka hissa thee unke apne bhi jaan pehchan honge... aur iski so called pyari behen kavya kya usse maloom na tha kee veer ka koi dost na hain... kya iske gharwaale iske baare mein kuchh bhi na jante the jo na pasand karte the unki chhor bhi de toh jinhe iski parwah thee kya wo ratti bhar na jante the.... agar aaj tak kisi dost ko iske unhone dekha na tha toh kaise maan liya...
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missions karne par usse points milte hain aur unhi points se wo khud ko improve kar shatka hain... jitne jyada missions utne jyada points utne jyada improvement khud mein laa shakta hain... yeh proportionlly chalte hain ek doosre ke.... system ne apni urja dee veer ko jaise shock waves dete hain marte hue heart ko rejuvenate karne ke liye... its like a parastie just like venom they feed off each other... wo uski shaktiya badhati hain badle mein usse shaktiya leti hain...
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ek taraf uske apne khoon ke riste naate doosri taraf nidhi jisse theek se jaan pehchan bhi na hain uski... usne jaan bachaye aur aaj saath rahne ko keh rahi hain... bhala koi apna rishtedar itna na karta hain wo paraya ho ke... wo dil kee saaf hain lekin saaf dilwaale hi sabse jyada takleef sahte hain duniya mein... khule baal aur naseeli aankhen,,, aisi ankhen le ke chalti road pe chalti hain kisi ko ankhon mein dekhne e nasha ho gaya toh bechara khali fokat mein drunk and drive mein fas jayega... hihihi pg mara maine.. hihihih...
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wakai nidhi ne yeh tak na socha jiske gharwaalo ne hi usse ghar se nikal diya hain kaheen iss ladke ne hi kuchh galat aisa kiya ho jisse wo log nafrat karte ho aur usse apne ghar mein rahne de rahi hain... khud kee maa alag pareshani mein hain aur ek nayi mushibat mol le rahi hain... oopar se divorced mahila hain wo log tarah tarah ke baate banayenge ek anjaane ladke ko dekh ke uske saath... wahee par purush ka sparsh wo bhi ek lambe antaral ke baad kuchh soyee hue anchahe tarang utha rahi hain uske dil mein... kehne ko toh umra ka bara fasla hain lekin yeh dil kahan manta hain wo toh bas mehsoos karna janta hain...
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dekho wo aa gayee dekho na lagta hain wo aa gayee... shreya---- kaheen yeh wo toh nahin mera matlab hain hamari kahani kee heroine ... are ab bol bhi do itna kya sarmana... dak dak karne laga... /// yeh system kee maa kee ankh ek toh khud saali launda hain kee laundiya pata nahin oopar se bechare ka dil tor rahi ahin.. mana kee jahndu hain lekin koi toh dekhegi kee kya pata uske najariya change ho jaye love at first sight se love in the first fight ho jaye... kya bolte ho....
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I am becoming fan of your writing with each and every update... detailing is perfect... loved it...
Lazwaab updateUpdate - 7 ~ Busted
Ab tak...
Shreya : Dekho! Hum tumhe yaha rakh rahe hai kyuki meri dii badi hi bholi hai aur sabki madad karti hai. Aur hum tumhe yaha rakhne ke liye taiyaar hai. Par meri dii ke baare me koi bhi galat khayaal mat laana samjhe? Hmph! I'm watching you...
Aur wo do ungli Veer ki aankho ki taraf karte hue mud ke apni gaand matkaate hue andar chali gayi.
Ab aage...
Ek bade se bunglow me iss waqt ek bade se room me ek behad hi khubsoorat ladki apni comfortable chair par baithi hui thi. Aur kuch zaroori kaagzi kaam kar rahi thi. Ghar itna aalishaan tha ki pucho mat.
Tabhi uske room ka darwaza khula aur andar ek middle aged aadmi ne aakar uske saamne ek file rakhi aur bola,
Aadmi : Madam! Ye rahi file.
Ladki : Jii!
Aadmi : Wo... Madam!
Ladki : Hmm?
Aadmi : Wo... xxxxxxxx company hamaare saath deal karna chaahti hai. Ek bar firse mujhe unka call aaya tha.
Ladki (lambi saas lete hue) : Mene kitni baar aapko kaha hai ki unhe mana kar dijiye par aap ulta unko latka rahe ho? Mujhe nahi karni koi bhi deal unke saath.
Aadmi : Par madam isme galat kya hai? Ek acchi company hai aur ulta hume hi fayda hai. Aap bhala ye deal kyu nahi karna chaahti? Buraayi kya hai?
Ladki : Aap jaante hai na? Mein meeting ke waqt iss company ke maalik se mili thi. And, I can tell he's not trustworthy.
Aadmi : Par mujhe toh unka ravaiyya ekdum pasand aaya. Mujhe nahi lagta ki...
Ladki : Aap nahi jaante. Mein bhala kabhi galat hui hu?
Aadmi : Nahi! Par...
Ladki : Then bharosa rakhiye! Aur uss kaam ka kya jo mene aapko saupa tha!?
Aadmi : Jii... Wo mein... Jald hi details pata lag jaengi madam.
Ladki : Itna sa kaam karne me itna time lag raha hai?
Aadmi : Sheher bada hai madam. Thoda sa time lagega. Aur ab iss kaam ke liye mein CBI me toh nahi jaunga na? Par aap nishchint rahiye. Jald ho jaega.
Ladki : Hmm!
Aur wo aadmi baahar nikal gaya. Idhar wo ladki apne anguthe ko zorr se apne daato tale dabaate hue kisi soch me pad gayi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi wo iss waqt. Par uske chehre par aasha, jigyaasa aur tanaav ke mile jule bhaav utpann ho rahe the.
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Nidhi ka ghar...
Veer ko apne ghar me laate hi sabse pehle Nidhi ne apne kapde badle aur usne apni saree utaar ke ek red night gown daal liya. Wo bhali bhaati jaanti thi ki ab wo akeli nahi hai, ek naujavan ladka bhi uske saath uske ghar me rehne waala hai par iske bawajood usne gown pehna. Jese usse vishvaash tha ki Veer koi bhi utt pataang harqat nahi karega.
Uski choti behan bhi yahi maujood thi. Yadi Nidhi chaahti toh iss waqt safety ke darr se wo Veer ko ye keh ke apne ghar se nikaal sakti thi ki ab uski choti behan aa gayi hai toh jagah nahi hai ghar me theherne ki, ya ye keh sakti thi ki ab uski behan aayi hui hai aur aise me wo Veer ko apne saath nahi rakh sakti. Wo kuch bhi keh sakti thi.
Par Nidhi bilkul bhi peeche na hati. Aur usse itna toh vishwaash tha ki Veer koi bhi galat harqat nahi karega uske saath.
Iss waqt red gown me wo qayaamat lag rahi thi. Poori aag ka shola. Veer toh bas yahi soch raha tha ki kitna bada murkh hoga Nidhi ka pati jo aisi aurat ko apne haath se jaane de raha tha.
Baahar nikalte hue Nidhi ne Veer ko nahaane ke liye kaha, kyuki itne dino se wo hospital me tha aur aise me zaahir sii baat thi ki usse ek bath ki sakht zaroorat thi. Par dikkat thi underwear aur kapdo ki. Veer toh khaali haath ghar se nikla tha. Bhala ab chaddi kaha se lae wo? Na uske paas extra kapde the, na hi wo koi Doraemon tha.
Hospital me jo kapde usse mile the wahi wo iss waqt pehna hua tha. Kyuki uski college ki dress toh khoon se pehle hi kharaab ho chuki thi. Aur abhi wo issi duwidha me tha ki kya kiya jaaye,
Veer : Umm... Ma'am mein naha toh lu but wo...
Kehte waqt uska chehra halka laal pad gaya toh Nidhi ne confused hote hue pucha.
Nidhi : Kya dikkat hai Veer?
Veer : Wo... Mere kapde? Aur underwear!? Mere paas nahi hai...
Bolte hi wo blush karne laga. Akhir usne bol bhi kese diya ye? Mann me wo khud se hi sawaal kar raha tha.
Aur ye sunn Nidhi ke bol bhi thoda ladkhada gaye,
Nidhi : Ohh! Haa! Arre... Wo... Mein bhi na... Mein ek kaam karti hu... Veer! Tum nahao... Mein shopping mart jaati hu... Aur udhar se le aaungi... Kuch kapde bhi le aaungi daily use ke liye.
Uski baat sunn pal bhar ke liye Veer ekdum maun ho gaya.
'Did she really said that? Ma'am mere liye kapde aur underwear lene jaa rahi hai?'
Aur ye sochte hi uske shareer me ek ajeeb si halchal hui andar hi andar.
Veer : Ma'am ye aap kya keh rahi ho? Aap rehne dijiye... Mein manage kar lunga...
Nidhi : Arre kya manage kar loge? Dobaara se wahi pehnoge kya? Tum ye bucket me kapde utaar ke rakh dena, mein washing machine me dho dungi.
Aur itna kehte hi wo mud ke jaane lagti hai ki tabhi usse yaad aata hai ki usne size toh pucha hi nahi.
Nidhi : Wo!! Tumhara size Veer? Kapdo ka?
Veer : Ma'am t shirt mujhe M size ki fit aati hai. Baaki...
Nidhi : Okay! Aur neeche ke liye mein lower le aaungi thik?
Veer : Jiii!
Wo fir se mud ke jaane waali thi ki tabhi usse firse kuch yaad aaya aur wo sochte hi uske gaal ekdum surkh laal pad gaye.
Wo palti aur Veer ko dekh badi hi dheemi awaaz me boli,
Nidhi (blush) : Wo... Wo... Tumhari... Underwear ka size?
Ye sawaal sunte hi Veer khud stabdh sa khada raha.
Ab bataana toh padega hi...
Usne apna thook nigalte hue sharmaate hue bataaya,
Veer (blush) : Ma'am... Wo... Mera... 85 hai...
Nidhi (blush) : 8... 85!?
Veer (blush) : 85 cm.
Nidhi (blush) : O... Okay!
Aur Nidhi tezz kadmo ke saath baahar nikal ke bhaag gayi. Veer ne ek raahat ki saas lete hue bathroom me pravesh kiya. Pehli baar koi ladki uske liye ye sab cheeze khareed rahi thi. Bada hi ajeeb sa lag raha tha usse.
Kuch derr baad...
Nidhi shopping kar ke aa chuki thi aur Veer ke liye wo kuch kapde khareed ke le aayi thi saath hi saath uske undergarments bhi. Poori tarah se jab Veer taiyaar hoke baahar aaya toh dekha ki Nidhi ke haath furti me kitchen ke kaamo me lage hue the.
Nidhi khud iss waqt bada hi sharma rahi thi. Iss se pehle usne apne pati tak ki bhi kabhi underwear na khareedi thi. Aur aaj wo pehli baar kisi mard ke liye underwear khareedne gayi thi aur wo bhi uske apne hi student ki.
Paas aate hue Veer kitchen me hi side ke platform se tik ke khada ho gaya aur Nidhi ko dekhne laga jo iss waqt roti belne me busy thi.
Veer ki aahat paa ke hi usne ek baar Veer ko mud ke dekha uske baad waapas se roti belni lagi aur dheere dheere khud hi baat karne lagi,
Nidhi : Fatafat roti sek deti hu aur Veer mene ye fry daal aur mix veg sabzi bana dii hai. Tum kha loge na? Dekho toh... Aaj pehla din hai aur mein kuch bhi special na bana paayi. Kal pakka kuch special banaungi. Tumhe kya pasand hai Veer? Jo tum bologe kal wahi banega... Aaj na jaldi me thi aur hospital se aate aate kaafi thak gayi... Thoda rest karungi na toh kal ekdum fresh mehsoos karungi... Fir kal hum sabhi eksaath special dinner karenge... Landlady ko bhi inform karna hai ki ab se tum mere saath rahoge... Yadi wo rent badhaati hai toh badha de... Wo dekh lungi mein... Uski tension mat lena tum haa?
Itna sab kuch wo bolti jaa rahi thi, uske haath itni speed me chal rahe the ki jitni baar wo roti belti uski chuudiyo ki khanak utni hi baar aur tezz shor karti. Roti belne ke kaaran uske haath ek rythm me hil rahe the aur ussi rythm se uske kaano me lagi hui baali bhi hil rahi thi.
Nidhi ko jese hi ehsaas hua ki usne itna sab bola par Veer ne koi pratikriya nahi dii toh wo palti aur Veer ko dekhi.
Aur usne dekha ki Veer keval apne haath baandhe platform se tike usse hi nihaar raha tha. Usse apne prati aise dekh uske gaalo par halki laali chhaa gayi.
Nidhi (blush) : Aise... Aise kya dekh rahe ho Veer!?
Veer : Dekh raha hu ki aap kitni mehnat karti ho Ma'am.
Nidhi (smiles) : Mehnat toh karni hi padti hai sabko. Tabhi toh zindagi chalti hai.
Veer (smiles) : Hmm!
Aur wo waapas se apne kaam me lag gayi par kuch derr baad hi uske kaano me Veer ki awaaz padi,
"Aapne itna sab kuch kyu kiya mere liye ma'am?"
Aur ye sawaal sunte hi Nidhi jiske haath abhi roti belne me lage hue the wo achanak hi ruk gaye.
Usne palat ke Veer ko dekha aur bolne hi waali thi ki firse Veer ki awaaz ne usse rok diya.
Veer : Mein jaanta hu ki aap yahi kahengi ki ye aapka ek teacher hone ke naate farz tha. Par aapne mere liye ek farz se kahi zyaada kiya hai Ma'am. Aur abhi bhi kar rahi ho. Ye sab kapde, ye mera yaha rehna, hospital me wo advanced fees, mujhe roz dekhne aana, haalchaal puchna, Kyu???
Veer ki baat sunn Nidhi ne ek gehri saas lii aur boli,
Nidhi : Kyuki mein jaanti hu tum kesa feel kar rahe ho Veer. Mein jaanti hu akelapan kesa hota hai. Kesa hota hai ghar se baahar nikalna. Kesa mehsoos hota hai. Isliye mein ye sab kar rahi hu. Aur... Bhale hi college me hamaari zyaada baat nahi hui Veer. But meri nazar apne harr ek student par rehti hai. Mujhe pata hai ki kon kesa hai. Mein jaanti thi ki tumhara koi dost nahi hai. Aur aise me tum kaha jaate? Mene wahi kiya jo mujhe sahi laga.
Veer : Aur ye jaante hue bhi ki aap ek ladke ko apne ghar laa rahi ho, ye jaante hue bhi ki aapki landlady aur aas pados ke log kya sochenge iss baare me? Ye jaante hue bhi ki aapki behan bhi yahi rehti hai aapke saath aur iske bawajood aap ek anjaan ladke ko yu rehne de rahi hai apne ghar me?
Nidhi (smiles) : Yes! Because I believe you!
Aur itna sunte hi Veer ka shareer sihar utha.
Veer : Kyuuu???
Nidhi : Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer? Tumhe kya lagta hai ki I don't know? Kya mujhe nahi pata ki log mujhe kin nazro se dekhte hai? Ghar se college, college se ghar, itne logo ki nazar mujhpe padti hai. Kuch jaan pehchaan ke toh kuch anjaan. Tumhe kya lagta hai ki mujhe nahi pata wo kin nazro se mujhe ghurte hai? Kya chalta hai unke mann me? Yaha tak ki college ke students jo na jaane kitne saal chote hai umr me...
Kehte waqt uske honth thar thara rahe the aur Veer ne notice kiya ki uski aankhein halki bheeg chuki thi.
Nidhi : I know.... I know everything Veer! I know everything.
Usne zorr se kass ke apne gown ka ek hissa bheench liya aur nazre neeche kar lii. Aaj pehli baar Veer ko khud kisi ke liye itna bura lag raha tha. Uska khud ka dil tadap raha tha Nidhi ki aisi haalat dekh.
Nidhi : But tum...
Usne nazre uthaate hue dubaara bolna shuru kiya. Aur iss waqt Veer bhali bhaati dekh sakta tha unn aasuo ko jo Nidhi ki palko par saje hue the.
Nidhi : Tumhari aankhein kabhi bhi nahi bhatki... And that's why... I believe you!
Nidhi ke bol sunte hi Veer ke shareer ke roye khade ho gaye.
Wo samajh chuka tha Nidhi kya baat bata rahi thi. Yahi ki kese log usse taadte hai aur khaa jaane waali nazro se ghurte hai. Yaha tak ki college ke students bhi jo usse aise ghurte the ki maano kabhi bhi uspe toot padenge. Par Veer ne aajtak kabhi bhi Nidhi ko wesi nazro se nahi dekha tha.
Jab jab Nidhi uss se baat karti, ya toh wo nazre jhuka ke baat karta tha ya fir uske chehre me dekhte hue. Naa ki uske shareer pe nazar maarte hue. Aur ye baat Nidhi bhali bhaati jaanti thi. Logo ki nazro aur unke iraado se wo harr tarah se parichit thi. Yahi kaaran tha ki usse Veer pe vishwaash tha. Uske iraado aur uski aankho par usse vishwaash tha.
"Dekho toh... Mein bhi na... Kya boring baato ko lekar baith gayi. Aur tum ye mat sochna bilkul bhi Veer ki tumhe ab kaam nahi karna padega. Boht kaam karwaungi tumse samjhe!?"
Nidhi ne apne aasu ko halke haath se pochte hue ek smile ke saath mazaakiya dhang me kaha, toh Veer bhi badle me muskura diya,
Veer : Aapka hukum sar aankho par ma'am.
Abhi usne bola hi tha ki tabhi Nidhi ki ungli dhoke se garam garam Daal se bhare pan par lag gayi aur uske muh se ek aah nikal gayi...
"Aaahhhh!!! Ssss.... Ouch!!!"
Aur agle hi pal Veer ne aage badh Nidhi ki jali hui ungli apne muh me bhar lii...
*Sannaata*
Ab bhar toh liii ungli muh me josh josh me...
Par ab Veer ko khayaal aaya ki usne kya kar diya.
Yadi iss waqt koi gaana Veer ki situation ko describe kar sakta tha toh woh tha~
Laude lag gaye...
Idhar Nidhi hakki bakki sii khadi Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Uski aankho me achambhav saaf nazar aa raha tha. Uska muh halka khul chuka tha.
Veer ki zubaan aur andar se muh ka garam taapmaan wo bhali bhaati apni ungli par mehsoos kar paa rahi thi. Jalan aur dard toh jese wo bhul hi chuki thi.
Dono ek dusre ki aankho me aankhe daal dekh rahe the.
Ki tabhi...
"Tururu tururu tururu ruru ruru... Aaah! Ye shaam ko late nahaane me maza hi aa jaata hai."
Shreya fridge me se orange juice ki bottle se juice peete peete kitchen me aa gayi... Aur usne jo saamne dekha...
*Phhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuu*
Saara ka saara juice uske muh se nikal ke neeche zameen par jaa gira. Uski aankhein aisi phaili hui thi maano jese bechaari ne bhoot dekh liya ho. Muh khula ka khula...
Veer uski badi behan ki ungli apne muh me daale hue khada tha. Ab bas teeno ek dusre ko dekh rahe the aur ek khaamoshi sii chhaa gayi.
Veer : ....
Nidhi : ......
Shreya : .....
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Sorry! Iss update se action start hone wala tha story pace pakadti but mujhe laga ek ye update zaroori tha. Ab next update se Veer apne stats badhane niklega. Like zaroor karna pasand aaye toh.
Dhanyavaad!
Behtreen updateMega Update
Update - 8 ~ A New Mission?
Ab tak...
Veer uski badi behan ki ungli apne muh me daale hue khada tha. Ab bas teeno ek dusre ko dekh rahe the aur ek khaamoshi sii chhaa gayi.
Veer : ....
Nidhi : ......
Shreya : .....
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Ab aage...
Iss waqt table ke saamne sofe par Nidhi aur Veer dono hi eksaath baithe hue the aur dono ki hi nazre neeche thi. Wahi unki dusri taraf Shreya single seat sofe par viraajmaan thi.
Uski nazre dono ke hi chehro par tiki hui thi. Khaaskar Veer par. Wo toh usse khaa jaane waali nazro se ghur rahi thi.
Ki tabhi Veer ke mann me ghanti baji...
*Ding*
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'2 points? Ye kisliye?'
[Uplabdhi ke liye!]
'Kesi uplabdhi?'
[Ek shadi shuda khubsoorat aurat ki ungli ko apne muh me bhar bhar ke uska lutf liya. Ye ek uplabdhi se kam hai kya?]
'What the...!?'
[Add karne hai points master?! Changes subah dekhne milenge!]
'Hmm! Add them to my intelligence.'
[Sure!?]
'Yesss!'
*Ding*
[2 points have been added to intelligence.]
[ Stats :
Strength - 10/100
Intelligence -8/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 7/100]
'Good! Yadi sirf ungli muh me bharne se 2 points mile hai toh yadi mein... Fuck! Veer kesi kesi baatein sochne laga tu!?'
Abhi iss se pehle wo aur baatein kar paata system se Shreya ki awaaz usse hosh me laayi,
Shreya : Ab bataoge ki kya tha wo sab?
Nidhi : Shreya... Jesa tu soch rahi hai wesa kuch bhi nahi hai.
Shreya : Aap chup rahiye dii! Mein iss se puch rahi hu. Ohh hello~ bataoge kuch? Ya nahi?
Veer : Wait! I can explain.
Shreya (aage jhuk kar) : Toh bataiye janaab!!!
Veer : Wo... Wo toh... Wo bas... Ma'am ka haath achaanak hi jal gaya toh mene usse wo... Aise achaanak se usse thanda karne ke liye muh me bhar liya... Ek reflex action tha... Bas... Aur kuch nahi!
Shreya : Accha bacchu?? Toh maan lo ki meri ungli bhi yadi jal gayi toh usse bhi muh me bhar loge?
Veer : Haa!
Shreya : Whaaaaaaaatttt??
Veer : No! Mera matlab...
Shreya (ungli dikhaate hue) : My god! Suno! Ekdum kaan khol ke. Meri dii se ekdum dur rehna samjhe? Yadi mene zara bhi dekha na ki tum dii ke paas fattyaa rahe ho toh fir dekhna.
Veer : O... Okay!
Nidhi : Shreya! Kesi baatein kar rahi hai tu? Veer aisa nahi hai.
Shreya : Aap toh boliye hi mat. Bade acche se muh me ungli diye khadi thi aap toh...
Nidhi (blush) : Shreyyyaaaaaa!!!
Shreya : Hmph! Chalo dinner kare!
Aur ye maamla settle hote hi dinner shuru ho gaya.
Veer ne ek baar firse dono ko check kiya toh paaya ki Nidhi ki favourability 5 ank se badh chuki thi aur ab 35 par thi. Wahi Shreya ki jaha zero thi waha ab 5 ank nazar aa raha tha.
Dinner ke waqt uske bagal se Nidhi baithi thi toh wahi uske saamne Shreya aur uski god me Juhi baithi hui thi.
Aur dono hi kuch khuspusaate hue Veer ko ghurte hue baatein kar rahi thi...
'Ye dono... Kya baatein kar rahi hai ye mujhe dekh dekh ke...!?'
Shreya aur Juhi aapas me kisi khusur pusur me lage hue the.
Shreya : Juhi!!
Juhi : Hmm!
Shreya : Ye bhaiya jab bhi tumhari mummy ke paas jae na, mujhe bataana thik!
Juhi : Hmmm Hmmm! Par didi... Ye bhaiya kaun hai?
Shreya : Ye tumhari mummy ke chote bhai hai. Hehe~ Inko Mama kaha karo okay?
Juhi : Hmm! Hmmm!
Tabhi Juhi Shreya ki goad se utar Veer ko dekhne lagi aur boli,
"Mama! Ab se aap yahi rahoge?"
*Cough Cough*
Aisa phanda shayad hi Veer ko khaate time kabhi laga hoga.
'Kya mene sahi suna? Mama?'
[Haa! Mama! Haha~ Abhi boht mehnat karni baaki hai master!]
Nidhi : Arre Veer? Kya hua? Araam se khao...
Bolte hue, Nidhi uski peeth sehlaane lagi.
Shreya : Hahahahahaha~
Nidhi : Hass kyu rahi ho?
Shreya : Juhi ne isse Mama bulaaya toh isko khaasi aa gayi. Hahahaha~
Nidhi : J... Juhi!??
Juhi : Haa mummy! Ab ye Mama apne saath hi rahenge?
Shreya : Hahahaha~ Ek number Juhi...
Nidhi (blush) : Ummm... Haa beta!
Aur inhi sab hassi mazaak me ye dinner samaapt hua.
Veer iss waqt baahar hi sofe par so raha tha toh wahi Shreya ke sang Juhi aur Nidhi teeno andar bedroom me sthit bed par so rahi thi.
Jab sawera hua aur Veer apni neend se baahar aaya toh sabse pehle wo bathroom me gaya fresh hone.
Aur jaate hi uski nazar mirror me apne aap par padi. Kuch seconds toh wo yu hi apne aap ko dekhta raha aur fir ek jhatka laga usse.
'Fuck!!!!'
[You feel different right?]
'Haan! Mein... Strong mehsoos kar raha hu. Chehre me wese kuch samajh nahi aa raha. Mehsoos toh ho raha hai ki kuch badla hai but dikhaayi nahi de raha.'
[Appearance me ek hi point add kiya tha. Kya hi samajh aaega Master?]
'Toh! Kal mujhe Ma'am ki ungli muh me lene se 2 points mile the. Toh yadi mein... Kisi aur ladki ke saath aisa karu toh!?'
[Better quality! Better points!]
'Kya matlab?'
[Matlab jitni acchi ladkiya, jitna zyaada unka status, utne hi acche points.]
'Kya partiality hai.'
[Master! Aapne abhi tak mujhe naam nahi diya. Isliye, please! Name the system.]
'Naam?'
[Haa master!]
'Hmm! Wese... Tumne meri jaan bachaayi hai. Tum jab aayi ho jab mein iss duniya se jaane waala tha. Tumne mujhe sahara diya. Sach kahu toh mein waqai khushkismat hu jo tumhara saath mila. Kabhi kisi ne mujhse itni saari baatein nahi kii hongi. Haa tumhara ravaiyya thoda attitude wala tha shuru me but abhi thik hai. Meri life me tum kisi angel ki tarah aayi ho. Isliye... Aaj se tumhara naam... Pari.'
[System's default name has been changed to Pari!]
'Pari?? Theek hai na naam!?'
[Yes! Master! Ab se aap mujhe Pari kehke hi sambodhit karna.]
'Okay Pari!'
Abhi Veer brush hi kar raha tha ki wahi ghanti uske dimaag me firse baji,
*Ding*
[Mission : Lose your virginity.
Rewards : ?? Points.
Time limit : 18 hours.]
Aur Mission padhte hi Veer ki hawa tight ho gayi. Uske muh se tooth brush chhutak ke basin me hi gir pada.
'What the hell????? Pari??? Keh do ki tum ne prank kiya hai.'
[Master! Koi prank nahi hai. Ye missions randomly generate hote hai. Mera control nahi hai isme kuch.]
'Arre par abhi Nidhi Ma'am ka bhi toh mission mila tha na mujhe? Fir ye alag ekdum se?'
[Zaroori nahi hai ki ek baar me ek hi mission mile master.]
'Really? Fuck! Time limit 18 ghante? What the hell? Are you kidding me? Kaha se lose karu apni virginity? 18 ghante me ladki kaha se dhundu ab mein? Khud ko hi chodunga kya? Aur ye koi choti sii baat nahi hai. Mein kese apni virginity ko yu kho sakta hu?'
[Virginity ka toh nahi pata master, par yadi aapne mission time pe poora nahi kiya toh aap mujhe zaroor kho doge.]
'Damn it!!'
Kheejte hue usne apne haath basin pe patak diye.
[Aapko kese bhi apni virginity khoni hai.]
'No way! Pari!! Arre isme toh rewards bhi nahi dikha raha hai.'
[Mein kuch nahi kar sakti Master!]
'Fuck this!!!'
[Fuck a woman instead Master!]
'Shut upppp!!!'
[I can't help you with this master.]
'Kya mein puch sakta hu meri pyaari Pari ki iss type ka mission mujhe kyu mila hai?'
[Mujhe nahi pata master. But jaha tak mera andaaza hai, ye isliye hai taaki aap maturity ki duniya me kadam rakho. Khud ko mature banao.]
'Waah! Kya baat hai! Adhbhut!'
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Shaam ke 7:30 baj rahe the. Aur Veer Nidhi ke ghar se 5 baje ka nikla hua tha. Ladki chodne ke liye. Yaani ki apni virginity khone. Ek ladke se aadmi bann ne. Dhaayi ghante se wo idhar se udhar bas fattyaa raha tha. Par ladki ko dur dur tak naamo nishaan nahi tha. Usse ek aisi ladki chahiye thi jo sundar bhi ho, khud raazi bhi ho aur sex ke baad koi lafda bhi na ho. Par aisi ladki milna toh jese khet me sui dhundne ke baraabar tha.
Uski kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. Ghar pe wo Shreya ko ye keh ke jaldi nikal gaya ki wo dost ke yaha jaa raha hai. Nidhi uss waqt college se lauti nahi thi. Warna Nidhi toh uss se 100 sawaal karti. Kyuki wo jaanti thi ki uske koi dost nahi hai.
'Hum pichle ek ghante se iss bench pe baithe hue hai.'
[Hmm! Baithe toh hue hai. ]
'Aur mujhe apni virginity lose karni hai.'
[Hmm! Karni toh hai.]
'Aur nahi ki toh mein tumhe kho dunga.'
[Hmm! Kho toh doge.]
Aur wo chillaayaa...
'Fuccckkkkkkk thiiiiiiissssss missionnn...'
[I told you to hire a slut. But aapko karna hi nahi hai uske saath...]
'Of course! Mein apna pehli baar aise kese kho sakta hu?'
[Go to Club then. Waha koi pasand aa jaaye aapko?]
'Hmm? Clubs me milegi mujhe koi? Unko ready kese karaunga?'
[Ye toh aap pe depend karta hai.]
'Fine!!'
Ghumte firte Veer bhaiya pohuch gaye ek club ke baahar. Pub hi tha ek prakaar se but with luxury rooms. Daaru piyo, ladki patao, thoko, aur baahar.
Samay samay aisi jagaaho par raids bhi padti rehti thi. Par insaan toh hote hi haraami hai. Ek baar pakde gaye agli baar se fir wahi kaam.
[Aapke paas paise toh hai na?]
'Hmm? Paise? Nahi! Mere paas toh phooti kaudi bhi nahi hai.'
[What the hell? Toh andar kese jaoge?]
Veer jeb me haath daale Club ke baahar apni pockets tatol raha tha. Tabhi uske kaano me ek madhur awaaz padi,
"You don't have money!?"
Usne jese hi palat ke dekha toh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.
Saamne ek behad hi khubsoorat ladki khadi hui thi. Itni khubsoorat ki usse dekh bechaare Veer ka muh khula ka khula hi reh gaya.
Ek kaali jaangh tak aati one piece dress jo uske gore badan se ekdum kass ke chipki hui thi. Uske stan ke ubhaar ki aakriti wo bhali bhaati dekh paa raha tha.
Uske khule kaale baal jo sirf kandho tak the. Halka make-up, hontho pe wo halki gulaabi lipstick, kaano me lambi stylish baali, harr jagah se wo saundarya ki pratima lag rahi thi.
Veer bechaare ki bolti band ho gayi thi. Wo shayad ab tak ki sabse khubsurat ladki thi jo Veer ne dekhi thi.
Veer : Wo...
Ladki : You don't have money right?
Uski awaaz sunn Veer ne haa me sar hila diya.
Ladki : Then, come with me. I'll pay for you.
Veer : Huh???
Veer ne notice kiya ki uss ladki ke peeche 2 hatte katte bodyguards bhi the jo kaala suit aur kaala chashma lagae hue the.
Aur Veer ko mana karna theek na laga. Wese bhi usse andar toh jaana hi tha. Jese bhi entry mile.
Entry milte hi andar ka nazaara dekhte hi Veer ki aankhein hi chaundhiya gayi.
Ek toh dherr saari disco lights, upar se high volume pe music, stage pe ladkiya aise naach rahi thi ki maano stage hi tod dengi.
Na koi hosh, na koi thikaana bas kahi pe bhi naache jaa rahi thi. Ladke bhi unhi ke saath kamar matkaane me lage hue the toh kuch logo ke toh alag hi scene chal rahe the.
Veer ne dekha ki side me kayi saare luxury sofe lage hue the jinpe baith ke ladka ladki kissing me doobe the. Ye saara nazaara Veer apni zindagi me pehli baar dekh raha tha.
'Damn!!!'
[Welcome to the world of Adults.]
Daaru toh aise pee rahe the log, arre pee kya kuch toh hawa me fek rahe the aur neeche launde laundiya muh khole beer ki boond apne muh me lene ki koshish kar rahe the.
Jese maano wo amrit ho unke liye. Ye sab scene dekh ke Veer ki bauhe sikud gayi. Kya inhi sab me inhe maza aata hai? Wo soch me doob gaya.
Saamne ke side bar tha jaha ladies aur gents dono hi hawa me bottle uchhaalte hue beer whiskey sab kuch serve kar rahe the toh wahi side me kitchen tha jaha se khaane peene ka samaan bhi tables pe serve kiya jaa raha tha.
Veer ne dekha ki jagah jagah hookah ke pipes bhi rakhe hue the jisse ladkiya badi hi chaud aur maze se pee rahi thi. Kuch toh besudh se nashe me doobe idhar udhar pade hue the. Na hi unhe koi uthaane waala tha aur na hi unka saath dene wala.
[Dekha master! Ye hai adults ki duniya. Shayad isliye aapko ye mission mila hai. Taaki aap mature bano.]
'Hmm! Dekh raha hu Pari!! Dekh raha hu...'
Veer chalte chalte uss ladki ke saath saamne bar ki seats par baith gaya.
Par abhi bada hi atpata lag raha tha usse. Uske sar ke peeche do bodyguards aise khade the ki maano yadi Veer ne galti se bhi uss ladki ko touch kiya toh wo dono bodyguard Veer ke ussi waqt do tukde kar denge.
Aur AC chalne ke bawajood usse ye sochte hi paseena aane laga.
Tabhi achanak uss ladki ne unn dono bodyguards ko dekhte hue kaha,
"You both go outside. I need some time alone."
Aur ye sunte hi dono bodyguards duwidha me pad gaye.
Bodyguard 1 : Sorry Miss! Aapko yaha akela chorr hum kahi nahi jaa sakte.
Ladki : I told you na... Go outside!
Bodyguard 1 : I'm sorry Miss!
Ladki (ghurte hue) : Jaate ho ya nahi? Mujhe baar baat kehna pasand nahi. It's an order.
Bodyguard 1 : Miss! I'm sorry! But bade maalik ka kehna hai...
Ladki : Bade maalik ko mein samjha dungi. Ab jao. Don't worry! Yadi koi bhi gadbad hui I will call you. Just go outside.
Bodyguard 1 : But Miss...
Bodyguard 2 : Theek hai Miss! Par aap kisi bhi mushqil me ho, bas ek call kar dijiyega. Hum just baahar hi hai. Chalo Raghu!
Raghu : Par Jassi...
Jassi : Chalo... Miss ko akela rehne do kuch derr...
Ladki : Thanks Jassi...
Jassi : It's okay Miss!
Aur Jassi Raghu ko leke waha se baahar nikal gaya.
Ab keval Veer aur wo ladki hi saath me agal bagal baithe hue the.
Tabhi ek lady bartender unke paas aayi aur unse unka order puchi...
Ladki : One cosmopolitan...
Bartender : Sure Ma'am! And you Sir?
Veer : Huh?
[Order do Master!]
'But mene kabhi sharaab nahi pee Pari! Fuck! Mujhe toh naam bhi nahi aate. Wo side me kya rakha hai... Orange orange sa... Orange juice lag raha hai. Bol du kya?'
[Hahaha~ bol dijiye master!!]
Veer : Umm... Wo... One orange juice...
Bartender bechaari Veer ka order sunn bada hi ajeeb sa muh banaayi aur usse upar se neeche tak dekhi fir peeche chali gayi.
'Fuuuuckkkk! She was laughing... She fucking laughed... I saw her...'
[Of course! Hahahaha~]
'Pari mene kabhi beer nahi pee, yadi abhi piyunga toh nasha toh chadhega hi... Aur tum jaanti ho na. Hum yaha mission pe hai. Tumhe toh meri madad karni chaahiye.'
[Sorry Master! But it was... It was just too funny hahahahaha~]
Iss se pehle ki wo Pari ko daat paata uss ladki ke bol usse sunaayi diye.
Ladki : So? Why are you here?
Veer : Huh!? Mein wo... Kuch kaam tha mujhe...
Ladki : Ohhh!
Veer ko bada hi ajeeb lag raha tha. Ye ladki thi toh ekdum apsara jesi, par uske chehre par koi bhi bhaav nahi the. Ekdum expressionless. Shuru se ant tak Veer ne uske chehre me koi badlaav nahi dekha. Na koi utsaah, na koi josh, na koi khushi, na koi dukh... Kuch bhi nahi!
Tabhi bartender unki drinks laayi aur unhe serve kari. Jaha wo ladki apni drink pee rahi thi wahi Veer orange juice pee raha tha. Ab usse khud ko sharm aa rahi thi.
'Ek na ek din mein bhi beer peene lagunga. Hmph! Usme itni badi baat nahi hai kuch...'
Ladki : Toh?
Veer : Hmm?
Ladki : Can I ask you something?
Veer : Hmm! Sure!
Ladki (Veer ko dekhte hue) : What do you think of life?
Veer : Life?
Ladki : Hmmmm!
Ye sawaal sunte hi Veer ko apne ateet ki yaad aa gayi. Wo lamhe...
Jisme usne dard saha, usse prataadit kiya gaya, usse fassaaya gaya, uska apmaan kiya gaya, na koi pyaar aur na hi koi pyaar karne waala.
Kese usse ghar se baahar nikaala gaya, kese dar badar wo bhatakta raha, wo accident...
Sab kuch ek pal me jese flashback ki tarah uske mann me aaya aur fir agle hi pal gaayab ho gaya.
Usne muskuraate hue apne bagal me uss ladki ko dekha jo uske uttar ka wait kar rahi thi aur fir wo bola,
"Life is merciless. Zindagi ko gam dena bakhubi aata hai. Jitna iss zindagi se dosti karna chaahoge na, ye utna hi dur bhaagti hai. Kuch logo ke paas kaabiliyat hoti hai toh wo apni zindagi badal lete hai. Kuch ke paas kaabiliyat hoti hai par halaat unhe apni zindagi na badalne par majboor kar dete hai. Aur jinke paas kaabiliyat nahi hoti wo bas kismat ke liye baithe rehte hai. Ki kisi na kisi din unki kismat chamkegi."
Wo ladki bade hi gaur se Veer ki baatein sunn rahi thi.
"Ek samay aisa bhi aata hai, jab aapke paas sab kuch hota hai, par jeene ki tamanna hi nahi rehti. Aisa lagta hai maano ki bas ye zindagi apne aap hi tham jaaye. Khud ko maarne ki himmat bhi nahi hoti kabhi. Bas talaash rehti hai toh kuch aisi cheez ki jo sab kuch badal ke rakh de. Aur pata... Baad me wo milta bhi hai. Wo kisi bhi roop me mil sakta hai, ek insaan ke roop me, ya ek jaanvar, ya fir kuch aur... Jo aapko ek raah dikhaata hai, khushiyaa deta hai, ek naya jeevan deta hai. Bas uska intezaar karna padta hai. Aur jab uss se mulaqaat hoti hai, tab pata chalta hai ki Life kya cheez hai."
Veer ne muskuraate hue apne khayalaat rakhe. Uske bol dil se nikle the. Wo bataate bataate kho gaya tha aur bhool gaya tha ki wo khud apna ateet vyakt kar raha tha iss waqt.
Aur indirectly wo Pari ki baat kar raha tha. Kyuki wahi toh aayi thi uske jeevan me ek farishta bann ke. Bhale hi insaan nahi thi par akhir kuch toh thi. Jo uska saath dene taiyaar thi.
[ Idiot! Who told you to get so emotional?]
Pari ki baat sunn Veer kuch na bola bas muskuraata raha.
Jab usne waapas se uss ladki ki orr dekha toh dang reh gaya. Uss ladki ka muh halka khula hua tha aur wo stabdh sii bas Veer ko hi dekhe jaa rahi thi. Pehli baar Veer ne finally uske chehre par koi bhaav dekhe. Achambhav aur hairaani saaf nazar aa rahi thi uske chehre par.
Usne kuch bolna chaaha par shabd nahi nikle unn gulaabi hontho se. Aur wo honth waapas se band ho gaye.
Usne Veer se nazre hataayi aur apne glass jo ki aadha khaali ho chuka tha uss par gaur kiya. Fir ek badi hi dheemi sii awaaz me wo boli,
"Intezaar...... Huh!???"
Veer : Hmm?
Ladki : So... You mean... Yadi uss shaks ka intezaar karo toh wo milega...! Right!?
Veer : Huh? Yeah! Zaroor! Samay aane par...
Ladki : I see!!!
Aur bina kuch dobaara kahe... Wo drink pe drink leti gayi. Veer usse dekh ke dang reh gaya. Na jaane kitna alcohol consume kar chuki thi woh. Aur uski haalat dekh Veer ko ab thoda taras aa raha the uss par.
Veer : Hey!! Are you okay??
Ladki : Yesss!! *Hic* I am...
'Fuck! Ye toh tannn ho gayi!'
Ladki : Heyyy! Come with me...
Usne aage badh ke Veer ki collar pakdi aur usse kheechte hue wo kahi le jaane lagi.
Veer : Heyyyy! Wait! Ruko... Arre....
Par uski baato ko ansuna kar wo bas aage badhti rahi jab unn dono ke kaano me ek awaaz padi,
"Kaha jaa rahi ho chammak chhallo? Idhar toh dekho zara..."
Saamne ki orr dekha toh 2 aadmi unke saamne khade hue the. Boht sharaab pee rakhi thi unn dono hi ne. Shaqal se hi badtameez dikh rahe the.
"Aisa maal toh aaj tak nahi dekha behanchod!!"
Unme se ek ne bola. Toh dusra bhi shaamil ho gaya,
"Sahi kaha. Ayyye ladke! Tum jao aur jaake baahar khelo, yaha hum mardo ka kaam hai bas hahaha~ Aur aisa tanch maal toh keval hum hi sambhal sakte hai."
Kehte hue usne ek seeti maari.
Unn dono ke bol sunte hi Veer ka paara chadh gaya. Wo kuch kehta ki tabhi wo ladki Veer ke peeche aayi aur uss se kass ke lipat gayi. Apni nasheeli awaaz me usne Veer ke kaano me kaha,
"Beat them! See! They are harassing me..."
'Damn it!!!'
Uss ladki ki narm narm chuchhiya Veer ki peeth par dhassi hui thi. Usse toh khud ko khushkismat maan na chaahiye tha ki wo ladki uss se iss kadar yu lipti thi. Na jaane kitne logo ko ye anubhav praapt hua hoga.
Aur zaahir sii baat thi, wo ye sab nashe me kar rahi thi. Poori talli nahi hui thi woh, par kaafi hadd tak nasha chadh chuka tha usme.
Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer ko kisi stree ke urojo ka ehsaas apni peeth par hua tha. Aur usse ye ehsaas behad hi madhosh kar raha tha. Wo garam garam, narm narm, gol gol stan uski peeth par dabe hue the.
'I think now I understand ki kyu ye saare ladke ladkiya ye sab kar rahe hai. Aahh! It feels good!'
[Master! Ye maza baad me lena. Filhaal inn dono ko raaste se hatao.]
Pari kii baat sunn Veer ne haami bhari par tabhi wo aadmi ne aage badh Veer ki chhaathi par lipte uss ladki ke haath ko thaam liya.
Ladki : Look! They even dared to touch me. No man... No man has ever touched me without my permission... Kill them... Kill them now...
Ladki ki baatein sunn Veer ke hosh hi udd gaye. Ye kya bol rahi hai ye? Kill them?
'Shit! Kaha phass gaya mein Pari?'
Uss ladki ki garam garam saasein Veer ko sataaye jaa rahi thi.
Aur Veer se bhi raha na gaya. Usne uss aadmi ka haath thaama aur zorr se usse dhakka diya toh wo peeche ki orr dhadaam se jaa gira.
Dusre ne ye dekhte hi gusse me apna haath uthaaya par uss se pehle hi Veer ne uski kanpati pe ek jhaapad raseed diya aur bas...
Sunnnnnn ki awaaz uss aadmi ke kaan me gunjne lagi.
"Hahahahaha ~ Die you fucker..."
Ladki hasste hue Veer ke haath ko thaam lii.
Mauka dekhte hi Veer uss ladki ko bhaga kar stairs leke upar aaya.
Par upar aate hi usse alag hi drashya dekhne ko mila. Agal bagal bas rooms hi rooms the. Aur kuch rooms ke andar se badi hi tezz tezz siskiyo ki awaaz aa rahi thi.
[Yahi hai mauka! Maar do chauka!]
Ladki : Heyyyy! Let's go there...
Aur wo ladki kheechte hue usse wahi ek counter ke paas le gayi,
Ladki : I want a room!
Aadmi : Jii!
Aur pal bhar me hi Veer uss ladki ke saath room me tha.
Usne Veer ko yu dhakka deke litaaya aur uske upar aake baith gayi,
Ladki : Don't you want me??
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Ab tak...
Ladki : Heyyyy! Let's go there...
Aur wo ladki kheechte hue usse wahi ek counter ke paas le gayi,
Ladki : I want a room!
Aadmi : Jii!
Aur pal bhar me hi Veer uss ladki ke saath room me tha.
Usne Veer ko yu dhakka deke litaaya aur uske upar aake baith gayi,
Ladki : Don't you want me??
Ab aage...
Jab Veer shaam ko Nidhi ke ghar se nikla tha, uske kuch shan baad hi Nidhi ghar aa chuki thi. Wo kaafi thaki hui thi aur thake bhi kyu na? College ki bhaga daudi hi aisi rehti hai ki students kya teachers khud thak jaate hai.
Jab wo lauti toh usse Shreya dwaara pata chala ki Veer kahi gaya hua hai aur wo bata ke bhi nahi gaya ki kaha gaya hai. Bas! Issi baat pe Nidhi bechain ho uthi.
"Arre! Shreya! Tune usse roka kyu nahi? Arre puchna toh chaahiye tha at least. Uska koi friend nahi hai Shreya."
Wo bauhe sikodte hue boli. Uska aisa ravaiyya dekh Shreya bhi hairaan reh gayi. Ye akhir uski behan ko achaanak kya ho gaya? Kyu Veer ke liye wo itna tension le rahi hai?
Shreya : Arre but... Ab usne bola ki usse kuch kaam hai aur jaana hai toh mene zyaada nahi pucha. Ho sakta hai apne ghar gaya ho?
Nidhi : Nahiiiiii!!! Wo apne ghar nahi jaega. Tumhe pata hai na uske gharwalo ne usse ghar se nikaal diya hai. Toh fir kyu jaega wo ghar? Aur aisa kya kaam aa gaya usko ekdum se? Shaam ke 7:30 ho rahe hai Shreya aur abhi tak uska kuch pata nahi hai.
Shreya : Chill Dii! Aap itna kyu tensed ho rahi ho? Gaya hoga kahi. Aa jaega.
Nidhi : Arre uska phone bhi bigda hua hai Shreya. Na hi uske paas koi paise hai aur na hi koi phone, kahi bhatak gaya toh? Mere khayaal se wo bhatak hi gaya hai. Na jaane kaha ghum raha hoga abhi...
Shreya : Shit! Mujhe laga uske paas phone aur paise honge...
Nidhi : Kaha se honge? Kal se wo hamaare saath hai. Mujhe usse kuch paise de dene chaahiye the, emergency ke liye.
Uski baat sunn Shreya usse ghur ke dekhne lagi toh Nidhi ne sawaaliya nazro se uss se pucha,
"Kya hua? Aise kya dekh rahi ho?"
Shreya : Dekh rahi hu ki aap kuch zyaada hi parvaah kar rahi ho uski. Yaha tak ki aap apni life ki problems tak ko neglect kar rahi ho...
Nidhi : I'm... I'm not neglecting my problems Shreya. Mujhe pata hai mein kya kar rahi hu. And rahi baat Veer ki toh... I know how it feels... Bas isliye mein uski madad kar rahi hu. Nothing else. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jesa tum soch rahi ho.
Shreya : Well! If you say so...
Nidhi : Mein gaadi leke dekh ke aati hu usse. Ho sakta hai aas paas hi ho.
Shreya : No way Dii! Aap yahi rahiye, thak gayi ho aap, Juhi ke saath rahiye... Mein jaati hu dekhne.
Aur Shreya Nidhi ki scooty liye Veer ko dhundne nikal padi. Ek taraf jaha Nidhi ke mann me bechaini thi toh wahi dusri taraf Shreya ke mann me keval gaaliya hi nikal rahi thi Veer ke liye.
'Shit! Pata nahi kaha nikal gaya ye bhi bina bataaye. Iske kaaran mujhe ghum ghum ke dhundna pad raha hai. Koi baccha bhi gumta hai toh jaldi mil jaata hai par ye janaab toh... Ye dii bhi boht bholi hai. Aane do usko... Aisa maza chakhaungi na...'
Aur wo yahi sochte sochte aas paas ki galiyon me chakkar lagaane lagi. Par Veer ka koi ata pata na laga.
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Idhar Veer uss kamre me bed pe pasra hua tha aur uske upar wahi ladki baithi hui thi.
Veer uski sundarta itne paas se dekh ke hi mantramugdh ho gaya. Kya hi sundarta thi. Wo haseen chehra, poori uttamta se taraasha gaya wo badan, wo nain naksh jo ek jhalak me kisi ki jaan lele.
Aisi sundar ladki uske upar baithi hui thi. Par ye baat bhi sach thi ki wo iss waqt poore hosh me nahi thi apne. Yadi wo hosh me hoti toh kya wo ladki uske saath aisa vyavhaar karti? Shayad nahi!?
'I think I don't deserve her. She's too beautiful.'
[What the hell? Apni ahamiyat mat bhulo master. You have me inside your body. I mean... Ahem! Mein aapke andar hu. Aapki value ab pehle jese nahi rahi.]
'Really? Damn! But ye hosh me nahi hai. I don't want to take advantage of her.'
'Check'
Veer ne usse check karna hi behtar samjha. Par jese hi usne uss ladki ko check kiya. Saamne window me result dekh usse ek zorrdaar jhatka laga. Hairaani ke maare uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.
Uss ladki ke sar par window khuli toh usme likha tha ~
[System is unable to access this person's identity.]
'What the hell Pari? Mujhe iska status kyu nahi dikh raha?'
[Ahem! Mein apne shabd waapas leti hu. This girl is more than I expected.]
'What do you mean Pari? Mein usse check kyu nahi kar paa raha?'
[Aisa ek hi kaaran se hota hai master.]
'Aur kya hai wo?'
[Wo ye hai ki mera level low hai. Aur ye ladki ka status lagta hai boht high hai. Jab kisi ka pad aur status boht high hota hai aur mera level low toh uss maamle me aap unn logo ki jaankari nahi dekh paoge master. Aur ye ladki kisi boht bade gharaane se lagti hai. Aapki toh lottery lag gayi!]
'Lottery lag gayi? Fuck! Meri gaand marne waali hai. Didn't you see those two bodyguards? Yadi galti se bhi isne bata diya toh mujhe zinda nahi chorrenge wo log. I'm leaving! I cannot do it with her.'
[Nahi! Master! Ye kya keh rahe ho. Aapke paas time kam hai. Aur aisi ladki aapko fir kabhi nahi milegi. Aap usse force nahi kar rahe. See! Wo khud aapke upar baithi hui hai.]
'Pari! You don't understand...'
[System is going in sleep mode. Enjoy your first time master.]
'What the hell?? Pari!? Hey!!! Fucccckkkkk!!'
Veer ko uske haal chorr Pari toh sleep mode me jaa chuki thi. Ab sab kuch Veer ke upar tha ki wo kya karne waala tha.
Tabhi wo ladki neeche jhuki aur Veer ke chehre ke paas apna chehra laayi. Uski garam garam saasein Veer ke chehre par pad rahi thi jo usse kuch galat karne par majboor karti jaa rahi thi.
Usne bade hi pyaar se Veer ke gaal par apna ek angutha firaaya aur uske chehre ko nihaarne lagi,
"You know? No one... No one has ever touched me. You are the first one."
Veer : Huh??
Ladki : Never ever I have kissed anyone.
Veer (blush) : .......
Aur agle hi pal usne jhukte hue Veer ke honth apne gulaabi hontho me bhar liye.
Dono ke honth aapas me milte hi ek zordarr jhatka dono ke hi shareer ko laga. Ye dono ki hi pehli kiss thi.
Veer ko jaha ladkiya dekh ke ignore kar diya karti thi, aaj Veer ko aisi ladki apne neeche litaaye uske honth choom rahi thi.
Ye kisi sapne se kam nahi tha uske liye. Ye adhbhut ehsaas Veer kabhi nahi bhul paega.
Shayad ab usse samajh aa chuka tha ki kyu wo ladke ladkiya neeche aise ek dusre ko choom rahe the. Ye anubhav tha hi aisa ki kisi ko bhi iski latt lag jaaye.
Veer ne jee bhar ke uss ladki ke honth chume. Wo nahi chaahta tha ki wo kabhi bhi iss feeling ko bhule. Kya pata usse aisi ladki dubaara mile bhi ya nahi?
Aaj Veer khud ko boht hi lucky maan raha tha jo aisi khubsoorti ki bala uss se chipak ke uske saath chumban kar rahi thi.
Aur isliye usne jee bhar ke uss ladki ke honth chuse. Jab dono ke honth ek dusre se alag hua toh dono ki saasein ek dum tezz thi. Ladki poori tarah se ab nashe me lag rahi thi.
Usne Veer ka haath pakda aur usse raasta dikhaate hue wo apne stano par le aayi.
"Touch me...!!"
Usne badi hi kaamuk awaaz me bola.
Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer kisi ladki ke doodh ko apne haatho me feel kar raha tha. Aur ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki ladkiyo ke doodh ab uski pasandeeda cheez bann chuke the.
Bina samay gawaaye aur bina hichkichaate hue Veer ne uss ladki ke stano ko dress ke upar se hi zorr se bheenchte hue unhe nichodna shuru kar diya.
"Aahhhhnnn... Mmmmmmmm"
Aur wo ladki lambi lambi siskiyaa lene lagi.
Veer ne usse pakadte hue apne upar se hata ke usse litaaya aur uske upar chadh gaya. Usse sharam bhi boht aa rahi thi kyuki ye sab wo pehli baar kar raha tha aur wo bhi itni sundar ladki ke saath.
Par saath hi saath usse josh bhi utna hi chadha hua tha. Ladka tha aakhir. Javaani me kadam rakh chuka tha aur ab uske andar ke jangli bhediye ko sambhaalne ke liye ek ladki chaahiye thi jo ki theek uske saamne thi.
Neeche sar jhukaate hue usne uss ladki ki gore nange kandho ko chumna shuru kar diya aur dheere dheere upar jaate hue wo uski gardan ko apni chummiyo se geela karne laga.
"Aaaaahhhnnnn!"
Usse pata tha ki ye sahi nahi hai. Kyuki wo ladki nashe me thi par wo zabardasti bhi nahi kar raha tha ek prakaar se. Wo ladki khud usse yaha lekar aayi thi.
'Sorry! But I have to do it.'
Usne mann me hi apne aap se maafi maangi kyuki wo ab iss ladki ke saath sambhog karne jaa raha tha.
Apne haatho ka istemaal karte hue pal bhar me hi Veer ne uss ladki ki wo kaali dress uske badan se alag kar dii. Aur ab uske saamne wo ladki keval ek black panty me thi.
Bra toh usne pehni hi nahi thi jis kaaran uski gori narm chuchhiyo ke darshan Veer ko ho gaye.
Apne gale me thook ka niwaala nigalte hue wo aage badha aur unn narm chuchhiyo ko usne jee bhar ke pehle dekha uske baad unhe dheere se magar pyaar se chhua aur fir agle hi pal usne apna muh khol ek chuchha muh me bhar liya.
"Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!"
Ladki siski lete hue apne haatho ko Veer ke sar ke peeche lapet lii aur uske baalo me apni ungliya ferr usse apni orr kheechte hue apne stano par uska sar rakh dabaav badhaane lagi.
Jese kehna chaah rahi ho ki chuso inhe. Jee bhar ke chuso.
Aur Veer ne bhi jese uske mann ki baat sunn lii thi. Usne theek wahi kiya. Ye adhbhut ehsaas wo kabhi nahi bhul paega. Unn narm narm chuchhiyo ko usne jee bhar ke chusa, unhe nichoda, dabaaya aur nipples ke saath khela.
Kabhi wo unhe kaat'ta toh kabhi unpe jeebh firaata, kabhi muh me bharta toh kabhi daato tale daba ke usse kheechta.
Aur harr prahaar par ladki sihar ke reh jaati. Wo Veer ki gardan aise chus rahi thi maano jese khaa hi jaegi.
Pal bhar me dekhte dekhte hi dono hi nagn ho chuke the. Jab Veer ne uss ladki ki yoni ke darshan kiye toh shan bahr ke liye toh wo stabdh bas dekhta hi raha. Kya adhbhut drashya tha.
Wo chikni patli si gori choot usse uskaa rahi thi. Keh rahi thi ki aao aur chuso isse. Tabaah kar do isse.
Itni patli gulaabi choot usse har pal madhosh karti jaa rahi thi.
Veer ne porn dekhi thi, par asli me wo ek ladki ko yu nagn pehli baar dekh raha tha.
Ladki bhi usse itni nasheeli aankho se dekh rahi thi jo Veer ko bekaabu kar raha tha.
Paseene ke maare uss ladki ke baal bhi bheeg chuke the.
Veer apna chehra uss choot ke paas le gaya aur pehle usne ek baar zorr se uss madak khusboo ko sungha aur fir apna muh khol uss choot ko apne muh me bhar liya.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa..."
Uss ladki ki aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi aur usne apni taangein zorr se Veer ke sar par ird gird kass lii.
Aisa ehsaas usse aaj tak nahi hua tha. Wo toh jese alag hi duniya me jaa chuki thi.
Kuch hi minute ki chusaayi ke baad uski choot rass chorrne lagi aur skhalit hote hue wo ladki jhatke pe jhatke lene lagi.
'This is the time...'
Veer ne sochte hue apna lund uski choot rass se bhigoya aur uski choot ke dwaar par dastak dete huye wo apna lund malne laga. Uska lund taiyaar tha andar ki gufa ko khojne ke liye.
Apna ling choot ke dwaar par set karte hue usne ek zorrdaar dhakka maara aur uska topa jhat se choot me pravesh kar gaya.
Dard ke maare bechaari ladki iske pehle ki zorr se chillaa paati, Veer ne uske muh par haath rakh uski awaaz ko rok diya.
'Shit! Aaarghhhh...'
Halka dard toh usse bhi ho raha tha. Par uss ladki ke dard ke saamne uska dard kuch bhi nahi tha.
Kuch derr baad usne fir do dhakke maare aur Veer ka lund uski choot ki gehraaiyo me jaa chuka tha.
Halke halke aasu uss ladki ki komal palko ko bhigone lage the. Veer ko ab waqai bura lag raha tha. Wo toh iss ladki ka naam tak nahi jaanta tha. Kaha se aayi hai, kis ghar se hai, kya naam hai, kya kaam karti hai, Veer kuch bhi nahi jaanta tha.
Usse bas itna pata tha ki yadi usne abhi ye kaam nahi kiya toh wo Pari ko kho dega aur wo aisa bilkul bhi nahi chaahta tha. Pari inn kuch dino me uski zindagi ka aham hissa banti jaa rahi thi.
Kuch derr yu hi bina hile dule wo apna lund uski yoni ke andar hi rakha raha. Aur jab ladki shaant hui toh Veer ne haule haule hi apne ling ko aage peeche karna shuru kar diya.
"Aahhnnnn...mmmmmm"
"Shit!!!!! Damnnnnn..."
Choot andar se itni garm thi ki aisa lag raha tha maano Veer ka lund ussi waqt andar hi pighal jaega.
Kisi bhatti se kam nahi thi wo. Ye alaukik aur anootha ehsaas wo kabhi nahi bhul paega.
Choot itni tight thi ki uska lund badi hi mushqil se andar baahar ho raha tha.
Chut ke andar ki twacha ki deeware uske lund ko kass ke jakde hue thi aur apne taapmaan se uske lund ko kisi garam lohe ki rod me parivartit kar rahi thi.
*Thap* *Thap*
Ki awaaz kamre me fel gayi aur iss adbhut chudaayi ke baad Veer ab skhalit hone ke nazdeek tha.
'Mein andar nahi gira sakta. Kahi ye pregnant ho gayi toh dikkat ho jaegi. Shit! But I want to cum in her so bad... Noooo! Baahar Veer... Baahar!!'
Aur agle hi pal usne apna lund baahar nikaal apne veerya ki ek tezz pichkaari chorri, jo seedha uss ladki ki nangi chuchhiyo, uski chhaati, aur uske pait par jaake giri.
Apni aankhein band kar Veer iss pal ko apne dil-o-dimaag me utaarne laga. Taaki ye pal usse hamesha yaad rahe.
Jab kuch seconds baad usne neeche dekha toh ek jhatka aur laga usse.
Neeche bedsheet par aur uske lund par khoon laga hua tha. Yaha tak ki ladki ki yoni me bhi khoon laga hua tha.
'Fuck!!! Ye bhi virgin thi????? Gaya... Mein gaya ab! They will kill me.... Pariii?? Are you there?'
Par Pari ka koi jawaab na aaya.
'Shiiitttt!!!'
Usne uthte hue uss ladki ko yuhi nagn apni baaho me leke uthaaya aur forun hi bathroom me le gaya.
Ladki behosh ho chuki thi. Veer ne fatafat uski choot aur apne lund ko acche se saaf kiya. Ladki ke shareer par laga veerya bhi usne saaf kiya.
Aur usse baahar laake dubaara bistar par lita diya.
Usne khud ke kapde pehne aur sabse pehle usne bedsheet ka wo tukda faada jaha khoon laga hua tha aur uss kapde ko apne jeb me rakh liya.
Abhi wo uss ladki ko kapde pehna hi raha tha ki tabhi...
*Bang*
Ek tezz awaaz uske kaano me padi. Aur usse kuch shor bhi sunaayi dene laga.
Ye awaaz neeche se aa rahi thi.
Par Veer ke shareer ke ruye iss waqt khade hue the. Kyuki wo jaanta tha...
Ki jo awaaz usne suni...
Wo kisi aur cheez ki nahi balki...
Ek gunshot ki thi...
Iss maamle me wo kabhi galat nahi ho sakta tha. Usne pehle bhi real life me ye sound suna hua tha aur wo bhali bhaati iss awaaz se parichit tha. Wo awaaz...
Wo galat ho hi nahi sakta tha.
Wo awaaz pakke se ek gunshot ki thi...
Uske baad wo shorgul...
Zaroor neeche kuch hua tha. Aur ye shor zaroor gunshot ke baad machi afra tafri ka tha.
'Ohh! Noooo!!!'
Uske andar ek darr umadna shuru ho chuka tha. Apna thook nigalte hue usne forun hi uss ladki ko kapde pehnaaye aur wo usse dekhne laga. Usse dhyaan aaya ki uske haath me aate waqt ek bag bhi tha.
Veer ne forun hi wo bag khola toh usme bas kuch cash tha aur 2 credit cards. Aur ek choti sii diary jo ki ekdum khaali thi. Saath hi ek pen bhi tha...
Veer ne ek panna faada aur usme apna naam aur mobile number likh uske bag ke andar hi daal diya.
'I know ki jab tum hosh me aaogi tab tum mujhe hate karogi... Shaayad tum mujhe maarna bhi chaaho. Aur mein maanta hu mene tunhaare saath galat kiya hai. Isliye mein apna number chorr raha hu. Baad me tum jo chaahe mere saath karna chaahogi mujhe manzoor rahega...'
Mann me sochte hue wo uss ladki ko uthaake baahar nikalne ke liye taiyaar tha.
'Mujhe ek phone jald hi lena padega.'
Sochte hue usne uss ladki ko apni peeth par utha liya.
Par wo ye nahi jaanta tha ki neeche kya ghatna ghatit hui hai.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!!