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Veer ki mom nahi hai uske paas lekin kahi na kahi mujhe lage ki jitne din veer nidhi paas raha nidhi ne ek maa ki tarah hi uska khaya la rakhne ki puri koshish ki.... jaise ek maa apni dard ko bhool apne bachho ko khushiyaan deti hai.. ch aahe jitni bhi dukh ya peeda kyun na ho kabhi apne bachho ke saamne prakat hone nahi deti.... Thik ushi tarah hi nidhi ne bhi kiya hai....Then toh aapko subah hi padhna padega lagta bro. Kyuki abhi maatr 2600 words hi complete hue hai. Aur update rehta hai 4000 words ke aas paas ka. Tab se likh raha hu mein.
Pyaar se prairit sambhog rishte ko aur pavitr banate hain ... ganda thode hee karte hain ...Veer ki mom nahi hai uske paas lekin kahi na kahi mujhe lage ki jitne din veer nidhi paas raha nidhi ne ek maa ki tarah hi uska khaya la rakhne ki puri koshish ki.... jaise ek maa apni dard ko bhool apne bachho ko khushiyaan deti hai.. ch aahe jitni bhi dukh ya peeda kyun na ho kabhi apne bachho ke saamne prakat hone nahi deti.... Thik ushi tarah hi nidhi ne bhi kiya hai....
So plz nidhi aur veer ke is pavitra rishte ko kabhi ganda mat kariyega.... Mana ki insects story hai yahan adultery bhi add hone wale hai par ek request hai ju se ki chaahe baaki ke kirdaar aur veer ke bich kuch bhi karwaiye par bas indono ke rishte mein physical relationship laake inke is anokhe pavitra rishte ko barbad mat kijiyega...
Aapne shayad kahani ke flow pe dhyan nahi diya.... Nidhi ek wife ki tarah ya fir ek lover ki tarah veer ke liye feel karti hai... Tabhi to veer ke halke se touch se bhi bechain ho jaati hai....veer bhi kai baar kahani me ye bol chuka hai ki Nidhi ke pyar me gir jayega aur shayad gir chuka hai aur yahan se kahani modna matlab readers ko jhatka dena sad wala.. Naina ji... Nidhi aur veer ke beech romance must hai warna kahani jis tarah se start huii hai uss tarah se rahegi nahi.... Baaki Werewolf bhai jaisa theek samjhe,but.... Aap unko request karke kahani ko flow bigadiye mat ye mera request hai aapse.... Hopefully aap mind nahi karengi mere baat ka:;Veer ki mom nahi hai uske paas lekin kahi na kahi mujhe lage ki jitne din veer nidhi paas raha nidhi ne ek maa ki tarah hi uska khaya la rakhne ki puri koshish ki.... jaise ek maa apni dard ko bhool apne bachho ko khushiyaan deti hai.. ch aahe jitni bhi dukh ya peeda kyun na ho kabhi apne bachho ke saamne prakat hone nahi deti.... Thik ushi tarah hi nidhi ne bhi kiya hai....
So plz nidhi aur veer ke is pavitra rishte ko kabhi ganda mat kariyega.... Mana ki insects story hai yahan adultery bhi add hone wale hai par ek request hai ju se ki chaahe baaki ke kirdaar aur veer ke bich kuch bhi karwaiye par bas indono ke rishte mein physical relationship laake inke is anokhe pavitra rishte ko barbad mat kijiyega...
भाई सुबह कितने बजे अपडेट देंगे आपThen toh aapko subah hi padhna padega lagta bro. Kyuki abhi maatr 2600 words hi complete hue hai. Aur update rehta hai 4000 words ke aas paas ka. Tab se likh raha hu mein.
Bhai,Ab kab update doge bhai aise hi bahana kar karke 1-1 din gol kar dete ho ......
Galat baat bhai subah bhi ho gyi ...
Ab kab padhne ko milega update.....
Is hisap se to brijesh aur ragini bhabhi jodi superhit haiPyaar se prairit sambhog rishte ko aur pavitr banate hain ... ganda thode hee karte hain ...