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Romance BADLA

Dhruv ke saath kiska taanka lagega???

  • Sharon

    Votes: 64 79.0%
  • Riya

    Votes: 27 33.3%

  • Total voters
    81

Sajid111

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Thanks bro sharon bach gayi lekin gaurav abhi bhi zinda hai
Aur karan ke khilaf koi saazish to nahi???
Sharon aur dhruv pyaar ke nok jhok me aage ja rahe hai gaadi me lekin aage kya hoga next update me hi pata chalega
Review ke liye thanks
Ha. Bro wahi dekhne ka intejar rahega
 
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Mbindas

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Waiting for next update
 

Swaraj

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Karan bataye jagah par pohunch gaya lekin koi mila nahi use
Kya kare???
Kuch samajh me nahi a raha hai

"Sir kyun na kuch der wait kare??"manohar bola

"Sahi keh rahe ho,agar kisi ne phone kiya to aata hi hoga,lekin khabar pakki hai.neha mental hospital me nahi hai,kisi ne kidnap kar liya to??"karan ke man me ek dar baith gaya tha

Tabhi waha ek car aakar rukti hai,aur do aadmi ek ladki ko saamne laate hai,ladki ke haath pair bandhe hue the
Do me se ek aadmi aage aaya aur ek paper le aaya

"Chupchap sign kar de yahan,aur behen ko le ja apni"aadmi bola

"Behen ke liye jaan bhi de sakta hoon"bol karan ne papers liye aur sign kiya

Aadmi wo paper le aaya aur ladki ko khol diya

"Good papers sign ho gaye??"neha ki awaaz aayi

"Neha meri behen a ja"karan bhavuk hokar bola

"Aja??koun a raha hai bhaiyya??mai to property ke kaagaz par sign karwane ki chal chali thi jiske tum fans gaye,koi samar ki mout nahi hui thi,wo to tumhare aur dhruv ki dosti ko todne ka plan tha,mai koi pagal wagal nahi hui thi"bol hasne lagi neha
Aur do log bhi hasne lage

Karan ko kaato to khoon nahi,itna bada dhoka???

"Kyun kiya aisa??agar tu maangti to mai khud apne hisse ki property tere naam kar deta"karan ne neha ke baal pakad kar kheenchte hue kaha

Do aadmi saamne aaye bachane un dono ko bhi maarne laga

Tabhi peeche se

GHACHHHHHH

ek nukili knife peecha se ghansti hui pet ke bahar a gayi

Hairani aur dard se bhare hue nazron se peecha dekha karan ne

Saamne manohar khada tha aur uske haath me chaku tha jisne karan ki peeth par vaar kiya

"M ...a....n.....o....h...a....r k...yun"hi bol paya karan aur neeche gir gaya

Manohar aur vaar karne ja raha tha ki neha ne rok diya

"40-60 kms ke aas pas kuch nahi hai manohar.apne aap marega
Chalo chalte hai"

Sab car me baith gaye aur car dheere dheere nazron se ojhal ho gayi

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I JUST CALLED TO SAY I LOVE YOU

I JUST CALLED TO SAY HOW MUCH I CARE

English music ki dhun par sharon ka mood kaafi had tak thik ho gaya

Dhruv bhi drive karte hue muskurane laga

Achanak dhruv ne dekha ki sharon ka coat khula hua hai aur blouse aur petticoat ke beech ki jagah khali hai.

Uff kya kamar hai sharon ki

Aur wo nabhi me jo choti si ring hai us par bhi nazar gayi dhruv ki

"Kya dekh rahe ho??"sharon ne shararti dhang se poocha

"K kuch bhi to nahi" bol fat se.muh ghuma liya dhruv ne
Dhruv kk ache se pata hai ki haron kitni shaitan hai is maamle me shaadi se pehle bhi ek do baar isi tarike se fasaya tha use

"Well apni wife ki kamar par nazar rakhne me problem ho rahi hai dhruv?"sharon shararti dhang se muskurane lagi

Dhruv bechara aisi baaton ka aadi nahi tha.full ac me bhi audi car uske pasine ko rokne me kamyab nahi ho saki

"Ye lo abhi is coat ko utar deti hoon fir tum jitni der chahe dekho mujhe"bol sharon coat utarne lagi to dhruv ne rok liya

"He bhagwan kya kar rahi ho,tumhe apna coat diya tha dhakne ko aur tum...."dhruv bola

"Apne pati ko hi to dikha rahi ho janeman"bol sharon .dhruv ke gale lag gayi

Dhruv bhi dheere dheere pighalne laga

Tabhi kiss karne ja rahi sharon cheekhi

"DHRUV DEKHO SAAMNE OH GOD"

fatak se brake lagaya dhruv ne

"SAAMNE koi hai dekho"sharon boli

Dhruv gaadi se nikalne laga to sharon ne rok diya

"Kuch nahi hoga tum befikra raho"bol dhruv gaadi se neeche utarkar us lete hue shaks ke paas gaya
Aur cheekha pada

"KARAN"
 

Jitu kumar

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Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
Manohar ne bhi karan ko dhokha de diya hai, aur pichhe se uss par chaku se war kiya hai,
neha ne property lene use road par marne ke liye chhod diya hai,
ab dhruv ka gari bhi vahi pahuch gaya hai, aur usne karan ko dekh liya hai,
ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
 

Swaraj

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Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
Manohar ne bhi karan ko dhokha de diya hai, aur pichhe se uss par chaku se war kiya hai,
neha ne property lene use road par marne ke liye chhod diya hai,
ab dhruv ka gari bhi vahi pahuch gaya hai, aur usne karan ko dekh liya hai,
ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
Sab ke sab plot dheere dheere khulenge bro
Abhi to story ending ki aur ja rahi hai
Aur to aur sharon ghar ke problem bhi thik kar rahi hai
Aur dhruv ke asli mummy papa ka bhi to pata lagana hai
Story aur grip legi
Saath rahiye
 

Sajid111

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Awesome bro

Fantastic update


Akhir karan ko neha ki sachchayi pata chal hi gya.....

Aur Karan bhi sayad bach jaye


Superb update


Nice romantic seen between dhruv and sharon


Gajab bhai

Aise hi likhte raho
 

Swaraj

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Awesome bro

Fantastic update


Akhir karan ko neha ki sachchayi pata chal hi gya.....

Aur Karan bhi sayad bach jaye


Superb update


Nice romantic seen between dhruv and sharon


Gajab bhai

Aise hi likhte raho
Thanks bro is awesome review ke liye
Aap mere regular reader bante ja rahe ho
Aap ko meri doosri stories padm kar apna review zaroor de
Waise ye story ending ki aur jane lagi hai
Aur ab grip pakadne lagi hai
Kai raaz khulenge
Keep supporting
 

Gully Boy

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Very nice update !!!!
 
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