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Romance BADLA

Dhruv ke saath kiska taanka lagega???

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Mbindas

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Very nice update bhai
 

RAAZ

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HOSPITAL
Karan ki haalat abhi bhi thik nahi thi.

"He requires rest.we still cant say anything Mr dhruv"doctor bola aur chala gaya

Doctor ke jaane ke baad dhruv sharon ki aur muda

"Dhruv koi gehri saazish chal rahi hai yaar,mujhe lagta hai sab kuch kisi ek kadi se related hai"sharon boli

"Sahi kaha sharon.lekin jab tak karan ko hosh nahi a jata tab tak ye paheli ban kar rahega"dhruv bola

"Sahi kaha dhruv,lekin ab chalo kaafi raat ho gayi hai"bol dhruv ka haath pakad sharon ghar ki aur chal di

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LEHMANN HIGHTZ
"Aap ne bulaya madam??"


"Ab haan bulaya tha sharmili,ander aao"nivedita boli

Sharon ander a gayi aur nivedita ke ishare par baith gayi

"Kaam to acha khasa sambhal liya tumne ??"muskurate hue nivedita boli

"Thanks madam"sharon boli

"Waise wo shaadi ki baat chal rahi thi na tumhari cousin ki??"nivedita teerchi nazron se sharon ko dekhte hue boli

"Haan wo to pakka ho gaya"sharon boli

Sunkar ek dhakka sa laga nivedita ko.chup si ho gayi

"Kya hua madam??"sharon ne poochha

"Kuch nahi sharmili,waise shaadi ka date fix hua??"nivedita ne poochha

"7 days baad.mangni to ho gayi"sharon boli

"Mujhe aaj kuch thik nahi lag raha hai sharmili.thoda rest karna chahungi,kuch important ho to phone kar dena"bol.apne seat se uthkar chal di nivedita.lekin apne aankhon se chalate hue aansu na chupa saki sharon se

"Maaf kar dena bhabhi.lekin ye karna zaroori hai,warna aap ko aapka pyar kabhi nahi milega.jhooti ego me do dil aise hi toote hue firte rahenge"man hi man sochne lagi sharon

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Park me avinash baitha hua tha.apni aankhen band kar khud se lad raha tha,ya shayad is duniya se aankhen milakar baat karne ki himmat nahi hai usme

"S sir"ek meethi lekin dheemi Awaz sunai di avinash ko

Avinash ne aankhen kholte hi dekha tanya khadi thi.gussa to avinash ko bohut aya tha.lekin fir ye sochkar tasalli di ki ab to kuch hai hi nahi barbaad karne ki.aur kya barbaad karegi avinash ko

"Maine apne post se resign de diya hai tanya.to ab mere paas kuch bacha nahi hai,sivay jaan ke"muskurate hue bola avinash lekin uske swar teekhe the

"Aur zaleel mat kijiye sir,mai apne aap se us din se nafrat karne lagi hoon khud se,maafi ke layak to nahi hoon lekin ho sake to maaf kar dijiye"nazrein jhukaye uske aankhon se aansu girne lage

"Maafi,maafi se mere bhaiyon ka bharosa mujh par wapas nahi aayega tanya,maafi se mere vishal bhaiyya ko wo apmanit karne wala din wapas nahi aayega,dhruv aur baaki logo ke saath jo rukhe swar me baat karta tha wo wapas nahi aayega"avinash bola

Tanya ke paas bolne ke liye kuch nahi the wo roye ja rahi thi

"Ek free me advice deta hoon tanya,kabhi kisi ke dil se aise nahi khelna,kyunki har koi avinash nahi hota jo itna sabkuch hone ke bawjood bhi seh leta hai"bol bench se uthkar chalne laga avinash.

Lekin fir thoda thahar kar bola
"Oh mai to tumhe mubarak dena hi bhool gaya tumhare bf ke saath nahi zindagi ke liye dher saari shubhkamnaye"bol nikal gaya avinash

Tanya baithkar roti rahi

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Vishal apne room me baithe purane albums dekh raha tha
Aaj bohut din bad apne past ke kuch panno ko palat raha tha

Dhruv ka pehla football goal
Krish ka dance moves
Avinash ka bachhon ki tarah rona

Aur vishal aur nivedita ko shaadi.har subah tie bandh deti thi nivedita
Fir zabardasti movie le jaati thi.
Dhruv ke saath team banakar vishal,avinash aur krish ko hara deti thi antakshari me

Vishal has pada,arsa ho gaya is ghar me koi khushiyan aayi ho.dhruv ne bhi shadi ki to aanan faanan me

"Bhaiyya??"sharon ki awaz aay

"Are sharon??aao aao"vishal bola

"Are??ye albums??"sharon surprise hote hue boli

"Haan dekho ye sab dhruv ke,mere,krish ke,avinash ke,nivedi......"Bolte Bolte ruk gaya vishal.

"Wah bohut khoob.lekin bhaiyya nivedita bhabhi ki to shaadi tay ho gayi mere cousin ke saath"sharon anjan bante hue boli

Ek zordar jhatka laga vishal ko.

"Oh,chalo acha hai.ab akhirkar khushi milegi usko"vishal bola

"Wo to hai,saat din baad shadi hai.aapko aana hoga mere aur dhruv ke saath"bol uthkar chalte bani sharon

"Are mai nahi ja paunga.mai..."vishal.bolta reh gaya

"Aap a rahe hai,mujhe nahi pata lekin aap a rahe hai"Bolte hue room se bahar nikal gayi sharon
Karan ki zindagi se bohat sare sawal judey huai hain aur yaha sharmili aka sharon ne bohat zabardast plan kia hain vishal aur nivideta ke liye dekhna hoga uska plan sucessful hota hain ya nahi. Aur Gurav ab kaisay wapis karta hain kia Dhurv dawara diya gaya mohlat ka faida uthata hain ya phir yuhi apni badley ki aag me apni aur sab ki zindagi ko barbad karne ki koshish karta hai.
 

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Karan ki zindagi se bohat sare sawal judey huai hain aur yaha sharmili aka sharon ne bohat zabardast plan kia hain vishal aur nivideta ke liye dekhna hoga uska plan sucessful hota hain ya nahi. Aur Gurav ab kaisay wapis karta hain kia Dhurv dawara diya gaya mohlat ka faida uthata hain ya phir yuhi apni badley ki aag me apni aur sab ki zindagi ko barbad karne ki koshish karta hai.
Karan ke jaagne ke baad hi pata chalega ki saazishein koun kar raha hai
Abhi to sharon madam ka pehla target nivedita aur vishal ko milana,uske baad avinash bhaiyya ko bhi dukhon se mukt karegi
Gaurav ka kya hota to aane wala pal hi batayega
Lekin sab ko mohrein banakar khelne wala.abhi tak parde ke saamne nahi aaya bro
 
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Gully Boy

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Superb awesome .... Very nice update !!!!

Zabardast suspense hai.... Mazaa as Raha hai.... Kahani har update pe... Interesting hi rahi hai... :claps:
 

Swaraj

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Superb awesome .... Very nice update !!!!

Zabardast suspense hai.... Mazaa as Raha hai.... Kahani har update pe... Interesting hi rahi hai... :claps:
Review ke liye bohut bohut thanks bro.meri first story hai ye xforum pe
Acha lagta hai jab aap jaise readers appreciate karte hai.
Aise hi support karte rahiye bro
 
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idiot1994

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Nice Story
 
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MARRAIGE HALL
"Ye.....ye sahi nahi hai sharmili.mujhe shaadi me nahi aana chahiye tha"nivedita bujhe man se boli

"Chill madam.bas kuch ghante fir mai bhi aapke saath chali jaungi"sharon boli

Sharon nivedita ko zabardasti le aayi thi apne saath vishal ki shaadi me.

"Mai abhi aayi madam"bol sharon nikal gayi.aur chod gayi nivedita ko akele

Saamne vishal bhi khada tha.chehra utra hua.sharon ne invite to kiya tha lekin abhi tak wo khud dikhai nahi de rahi hai

Uff ye kya??samne dhruv ka bachha fir a raha hai.kambakht ko kisne bulaya

"Excuse me??"dhruv ne peeche se sharon ko bulaya.sharon ko laga ki dhruv ko plan me include kiya ja sakta hai.

Sabse pehle to sharon ko wahan dekh shock hua
Fir plan sunkar dhruv ki hawaiyan udne lagi plan sunkar.lekin fir maan bhi gaya

Tabhi vishal samne se aaya.sharon ne apna muh dhak liya tha

"Dhruv shuru ho jao"chupke se sharon boli

"HAAN HAAN KYA UKHAD LIYA TUMHARI MADAM NE ??WO TO VISHAL BHAIYYA KE LAYAK HI NAHI THI"dhruv chillakar bola

"OHHO BADE AAYE LAYAK WALE,WO TO MADAM ACHI THI ISLIYE ITNI DER TAK TIKI WARNA KOI AUR HOTI TO KAB KA CHOD DETI TUMHARE LOOSR BHAIYYA KO"sharon boli

Chillahat sunkar vishal aur nivedita dono a gaye.pehle to ek doosre ko dekh dono ki aankhen chalak gayi.fir dono ki nazrein dhruv aur sharon ki aur gayi

"Dhruv kya badtameezi hai??"vishal ne gusse se kaha

"Bhaiyya ye ladki aapka insult kiye ja rahi thi"dhruv ne sharon ki aur dikhakar kaha.jisne muh dhaka hua tha

""Kya ye sach hai sharmili??"nivedita ne poochha

Sharon chup rahi

"Ye galat hai beta"nivedita ne samjhaya

"Agar ye galat hai bhabhi to kya aap dono galat nahi the??apni ego aur jhooti shaan me grovers vs Rudra karte rahe.aur khud apne aap se ghut ghut kar jeete rahe"dhruv bola

Dhruv kya bakwas kar rahe ho tum..."vishal bole ja raha tha ki nivedita ne rok diya

"Nahi vishal.galti hamari hai.humne ek doosre ko pyaar to kiya lekin hamara pyar itna KAMZOR nikla ki hum divorce par a gaye"nivedita boli

Vishal ne nivedita ki aur dekha,roye ja rahi thi.vishal aansu pochte ke liye jaane laga lekin ruk gaya

"Are jaiye aur bhabhi se gale miliye,itna kya sochana"bol haste hue dhruv vishal ko dhakka dekar nivedita ke paas le aaya aur lagbhag nivedita ke upar gira diya

"Arrrr .....dhruv bevkoof"vishal bolta raha lekin na sambhal paane ki wajah se nivedita ke upar gir pada

Aur sharon aur dhruv thahake maarkar has pade.
Nivedita apne hasi dabaye hue thi

"Thanks a lot sharmili tum na hoti to..."nivedita ke Bolte hi sharon ne apna kapda hata diya muh se

"Sharon???"vishal hairan reh gaya

"Ji haan"dhruv haskar bolalaur fir poora plan bataya gaya dono ko

Nivedita ne sharon ko gale laga liya.

"Chalo sab kuch thik ho gaya"vishal bola

"Na abhi nahi.abhi avinash bhaiyya ki baari hai"sharon boli

Sharon ki aur dhruv dekhe ja raha tha.aaj uski smile aur hasi bohut zyada khubsoorat lag rahti thi

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TOPAZ RESTAURANT
"Pakka palne fail nahi hoga na sharon??"nivedita kaampte hue boli

"Chill bhabhi when Sharon's there,have no fear"Sharon boli

"Yukkk disgusting soup,call the manager"sharon ne waiter se bola

"Manager kyun ??"nivedita hairan hokar poocho

"Kyunki tanya di yahan ki manager hai,Rudra group se hatne ke baad yahi join kiya hai"sharon boli

"Oh god pehchan liya to ??"nivedita darkar boli

"Koi sawal hi paida nahi hota.ab chup rahiye wo a rahi hai"sharon boli

"Can k help you madam??"tanya ne poochha

""Yes you can.avinash bhaiyya ko Rudra group se nikala gaya hai,bechare.soch rahe the ki tumse shaadi kare.lekin bohut sharminda hai isliye hum dono ko bheja"sharon boli

Tanya sabse pehle to shocked ho gayi.
Uske baad sharon ne tanya ko sab samjhaya

"M mai shadi karungi unse.to kya hua ki unke paas kuch nahi hai,mai khud job karungi aur hum dono khush reh sakenge,lekin kya ..kya wo sachmuch mujhse shaadi karenge??"tanya ke dil me ek aas jagi

"Tention mat lo tanya di.hum sab thik kar denge "sharon boli.sunkar tanya chali gayi
Fir chupke se nivedita ke kaan ke paas aakar boli
"Ladki test paas kar gayi.paiso ke liye avinash bhaiyya se pyaar nahi karti.sachmuch pyaar karti hai"

"Sahi kaha.acha mai chalti hoon sharon meeting hai,tu aayegi??"nivedita ne poochha

"Nah soup khatam kar loon.aap jao"sharon boli
Aur nivedita nikal gayi

Tabhi peeche se awaz aayi
"Excuse me??"

Sharon ne mudkar dekha .ek ladki uski age ki,saamne khadi thi

"Aap dhruv ki Mrs hai na??"ladki ne poochha

"Haan...aap??sharon pehchan nahi paayi

"Dhruv ki class mate thi,ek time tha jab dhruv lattoo tha mujhpar ,pata hai??"ladki ne haskar bola

"Acha??"sharon boli

"Haan.jab dekho gifts, restaurant me khana khilana,milne ki koshish karna"ladki haskar boli

"Wow"sharon boli

"Wo alag baat hai ki maine usko reject kiya,mujhe nahi acha lagta tha wo"ladki fir haskar boli

Achanak sharon uthkar us ladki ke gale lag gayi

"Thank you thank you so much,agar aap reject nahi karti to Dhruv mera nahi ho pata"muskutate hue sharon boli

"Use kiya hua saman bohut acha lagta hai shayad aapko"ladki boli

"Hmm only agar wo kaam h ka tukada na hokar heera ho to,wait a second unka call a raha hai"bol sharon phone uthaye haskar baat karne lagi

Fir baatein karne ke baad uth kar jaane lagi

" Thanks a lot ,dhruv ko reject karne ke liye"bol haskar chali gayi sharon

"Dhruv neha ka tha sharon ki bachhi,aur neha chahe to fir se dhruv ko apna sakti hai"neha boli aur gusse se dekhti rahi
 
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