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Romance BADLA

Dhruv ke saath kiska taanka lagega???

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Sajid111

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Thanks bro is awesome review ke liye
Aap mere regular reader bante ja rahe ho
Aap ko meri doosri stories padm kar apna review zaroor de
Waise ye story ending ki aur jane lagi hai
Aur ab grip pakadne lagi hai
Kai raaz khulenge
Keep supporting
Bhai dusri story abhi nhi padhna start kiya hu...

Exam chal rahe h to pending me rakha hu

Mera badluck tha jo story par start se sath me nahi tha...

Par jab se ye story padha hu...i am very excited to read your post everyday...

Kuch din bad dusri story dekhunga bhai..
Exam finish hone do


 

RAAZ

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Karan bataye jagah par pohunch gaya lekin koi mila nahi use
Kya kare???
Kuch samajh me nahi a raha hai

"Sir kyun na kuch der wait kare??"manohar bola

"Sahi keh rahe ho,agar kisi ne phone kiya to aata hi hoga,lekin khabar pakki hai.neha mental hospital me nahi hai,kisi ne kidnap kar liya to??"karan ke man me ek dar baith gaya tha

Tabhi waha ek car aakar rukti hai,aur do aadmi ek ladki ko saamne laate hai,ladki ke haath pair bandhe hue the
Do me se ek aadmi aage aaya aur ek paper le aaya

"Chupchap sign kar de yahan,aur behen ko le ja apni"aadmi bola

"Behen ke liye jaan bhi de sakta hoon"bol karan ne papers liye aur sign kiya

Aadmi wo paper le aaya aur ladki ko khol diya

"Good papers sign ho gaye??"neha ki awaaz aayi

"Neha meri behen a ja"karan bhavuk hokar bola

"Aja??koun a raha hai bhaiyya??mai to property ke kaagaz par sign karwane ki chal chali thi jiske tum fans gaye,koi samar ki mout nahi hui thi,wo to tumhare aur dhruv ki dosti ko todne ka plan tha,mai koi pagal wagal nahi hui thi"bol hasne lagi neha
Aur do log bhi hasne lage

Karan ko kaato to khoon nahi,itna bada dhoka???

"Kyun kiya aisa??agar tu maangti to mai khud apne hisse ki property tere naam kar deta"karan ne neha ke baal pakad kar kheenchte hue kaha

Do aadmi saamne aaye bachane un dono ko bhi maarne laga

Tabhi peeche se

GHACHHHHHH

ek nukili knife peecha se ghansti hui pet ke bahar a gayi

Hairani aur dard se bhare hue nazron se peecha dekha karan ne

Saamne manohar khada tha aur uske haath me chaku tha jisne karan ki peeth par vaar kiya

"M ...a....n.....o....h...a....r k...yun"hi bol paya karan aur neeche gir gaya

Manohar aur vaar karne ja raha tha ki neha ne rok diya

"40-60 kms ke aas pas kuch nahi hai manohar.apne aap marega
Chalo chalte hai"

Sab car me baith gaye aur car dheere dheere nazron se ojhal ho gayi

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I JUST CALLED TO SAY I LOVE YOU

I JUST CALLED TO SAY HOW MUCH I CARE

English music ki dhun par sharon ka mood kaafi had tak thik ho gaya

Dhruv bhi drive karte hue muskurane laga

Achanak dhruv ne dekha ki sharon ka coat khula hua hai aur blouse aur petticoat ke beech ki jagah khali hai.

Uff kya kamar hai sharon ki

Aur wo nabhi me jo choti si ring hai us par bhi nazar gayi dhruv ki

"Kya dekh rahe ho??"sharon ne shararti dhang se poocha

"K kuch bhi to nahi" bol fat se.muh ghuma liya dhruv ne
Dhruv kk ache se pata hai ki haron kitni shaitan hai is maamle me shaadi se pehle bhi ek do baar isi tarike se fasaya tha use

"Well apni wife ki kamar par nazar rakhne me problem ho rahi hai dhruv?"sharon shararti dhang se muskurane lagi

Dhruv bechara aisi baaton ka aadi nahi tha.full ac me bhi audi car uske pasine ko rokne me kamyab nahi ho saki

"Ye lo abhi is coat ko utar deti hoon fir tum jitni der chahe dekho mujhe"bol sharon coat utarne lagi to dhruv ne rok liya

"He bhagwan kya kar rahi ho,tumhe apna coat diya tha dhakne ko aur tum...."dhruv bola

"Apne pati ko hi to dikha rahi ho janeman"bol sharon .dhruv ke gale lag gayi

Dhruv bhi dheere dheere pighalne laga

Tabhi kiss karne ja rahi sharon cheekhi

"DHRUV DEKHO SAAMNE OH GOD"

fatak se brake lagaya dhruv ne

"SAAMNE koi hai dekho"sharon boli

Dhruv gaadi se nikalne laga to sharon ne rok diya

"Kuch nahi hoga tum befikra raho"bol dhruv gaadi se neeche utarkar us lete hue shaks ke paas gaya
Aur cheekha pada

"KARAN"
Abey sala gazab!!! Abey in me koi sahi bhi ya nahi sala manohar bhi aakhir kyun kia us ne aisa kyu vaar kia karan per. Aur Neha ko ab bhi ehsaas nahi hua jab tak sahi se dhoka na uthaa legi shayad tab tak usko apni ghalti ka ehsaas nahi hoga. Already jaan ae zada pyaar karne wala dost aur pyaar kho chuki hai aur ab shayad apne bhai ko bhi kho dia usne. Mainay taqat ke tasawur me bharam bhi choda hosh aaya ki jab teer O kaman chut gaya.
 

Swaraj

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Bhai dusri story abhi nhi padhna start kiya hu...

Exam chal rahe h to pending me rakha hu

Mera badluck tha jo story par start se sath me nahi tha...

Par jab se ye story padha hu...i am very excited to read your post everyday...

Kuch din bad dusri story dekhunga bhai..
Exam finish hone do

Zaroor bhai zaroor
 

Swaraj

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Abey sala gazab!!! Abey in me koi sahi bhi ya nahi sala manohar bhi aakhir kyun kia us ne aisa kyu vaar kia karan per. Aur Neha ko ab bhi ehsaas nahi hua jab tak sahi se dhoka na uthaa legi shayad tab tak usko apni ghalti ka ehsaas nahi hoga. Already jaan ae zada pyaar karne wala dost aur pyaar kho chuki hai aur ab shayad apne bhai ko bhi kho dia usne. Mainay taqat ke tasawur me bharam bhi choda hosh aaya ki jab teer O kaman chut gaya.
Review ke liye thanks bhai
Dheere dheere sab raaz khulenge bro
Story ending ki aur jaane lagi hai
Aur story grip bhi pakadne lagi hai
Sabke peeche jo shaitan chupa hai wo SAAMNE aayega aur dhruv ke asli mata pita ka bhi to pata lagana hai
 

Ashu 0000

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Nice update
 
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Harshit1997

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Bhai aaj hi puri story padi h ab tak ke sare update bahut hi mst the aur ab next update ka intjaar h jisme dhuruv & Family ka kuch pta chalega
Waiting for next
 
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Swaraj

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HOSPITAL
Karan ki haalat abhi bhi thik nahi thi.

"He requires rest.we still cant say anything Mr dhruv"doctor bola aur chala gaya

Doctor ke jaane ke baad dhruv sharon ki aur muda

"Dhruv koi gehri saazish chal rahi hai yaar,mujhe lagta hai sab kuch kisi ek kadi se related hai"sharon boli

"Sahi kaha sharon.lekin jab tak karan ko hosh nahi a jata tab tak ye paheli ban kar rahega"dhruv bola

"Sahi kaha dhruv,lekin ab chalo kaafi raat ho gayi hai"bol dhruv ka haath pakad sharon ghar ki aur chal di

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LEHMANN HIGHTZ
"Aap ne bulaya madam??"


"Ab haan bulaya tha sharmili,ander aao"nivedita boli

Sharon ander a gayi aur nivedita ke ishare par baith gayi

"Kaam to acha khasa sambhal liya tumne ??"muskurate hue nivedita boli

"Thanks madam"sharon boli

"Waise wo shaadi ki baat chal rahi thi na tumhari cousin ki??"nivedita teerchi nazron se sharon ko dekhte hue boli

"Haan wo to pakka ho gaya"sharon boli

Sunkar ek dhakka sa laga nivedita ko.chup si ho gayi

"Kya hua madam??"sharon ne poochha

"Kuch nahi sharmili,waise shaadi ka date fix hua??"nivedita ne poochha

"7 days baad.mangni to ho gayi"sharon boli

"Mujhe aaj kuch thik nahi lag raha hai sharmili.thoda rest karna chahungi,kuch important ho to phone kar dena"bol.apne seat se uthkar chal di nivedita.lekin apne aankhon se chalate hue aansu na chupa saki sharon se

"Maaf kar dena bhabhi.lekin ye karna zaroori hai,warna aap ko aapka pyar kabhi nahi milega.jhooti ego me do dil aise hi toote hue firte rahenge"man hi man sochne lagi sharon

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Park me avinash baitha hua tha.apni aankhen band kar khud se lad raha tha,ya shayad is duniya se aankhen milakar baat karne ki himmat nahi hai usme

"S sir"ek meethi lekin dheemi Awaz sunai di avinash ko

Avinash ne aankhen kholte hi dekha tanya khadi thi.gussa to avinash ko bohut aya tha.lekin fir ye sochkar tasalli di ki ab to kuch hai hi nahi barbaad karne ki.aur kya barbaad karegi avinash ko

"Maine apne post se resign de diya hai tanya.to ab mere paas kuch bacha nahi hai,sivay jaan ke"muskurate hue bola avinash lekin uske swar teekhe the

"Aur zaleel mat kijiye sir,mai apne aap se us din se nafrat karne lagi hoon khud se,maafi ke layak to nahi hoon lekin ho sake to maaf kar dijiye"nazrein jhukaye uske aankhon se aansu girne lage

"Maafi,maafi se mere bhaiyon ka bharosa mujh par wapas nahi aayega tanya,maafi se mere vishal bhaiyya ko wo apmanit karne wala din wapas nahi aayega,dhruv aur baaki logo ke saath jo rukhe swar me baat karta tha wo wapas nahi aayega"avinash bola

Tanya ke paas bolne ke liye kuch nahi the wo roye ja rahi thi

"Ek free me advice deta hoon tanya,kabhi kisi ke dil se aise nahi khelna,kyunki har koi avinash nahi hota jo itna sabkuch hone ke bawjood bhi seh leta hai"bol bench se uthkar chalne laga avinash.

Lekin fir thoda thahar kar bola
"Oh mai to tumhe mubarak dena hi bhool gaya tumhare bf ke saath nahi zindagi ke liye dher saari shubhkamnaye"bol nikal gaya avinash

Tanya baithkar roti rahi

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Vishal apne room me baithe purane albums dekh raha tha
Aaj bohut din bad apne past ke kuch panno ko palat raha tha

Dhruv ka pehla football goal
Krish ka dance moves
Avinash ka bachhon ki tarah rona

Aur vishal aur nivedita ko shaadi.har subah tie bandh deti thi nivedita
Fir zabardasti movie le jaati thi.
Dhruv ke saath team banakar vishal,avinash aur krish ko hara deti thi antakshari me

Vishal has pada,arsa ho gaya is ghar me koi khushiyan aayi ho.dhruv ne bhi shadi ki to aanan faanan me

"Bhaiyya??"sharon ki awaz aay

"Are sharon??aao aao"vishal bola

"Are??ye albums??"sharon surprise hote hue boli

"Haan dekho ye sab dhruv ke,mere,krish ke,avinash ke,nivedi......"Bolte Bolte ruk gaya vishal.

"Wah bohut khoob.lekin bhaiyya nivedita bhabhi ki to shaadi tay ho gayi mere cousin ke saath"sharon anjan bante hue boli

Ek zordar jhatka laga vishal ko.

"Oh,chalo acha hai.ab akhirkar khushi milegi usko"vishal bola

"Wo to hai,saat din baad shadi hai.aapko aana hoga mere aur dhruv ke saath"bol uthkar chalte bani sharon

"Are mai nahi ja paunga.mai..."vishal.bolta reh gaya

"Aap a rahe hai,mujhe nahi pata lekin aap a rahe hai"Bolte hue room se bahar nikal gayi sharon
 

Jitu kumar

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Awesome update bhai,
Sharon ne dono ko shadi ka date bhi bata diya hai,
udhar avinash apni hi najron me gir kar akela baitha hai,
aur karan hospital me hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
 
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