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Romance BADLA

Dhruv ke saath kiska taanka lagega???

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THE FIGHTER

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XP par story padhni start ki thi
Yaha akar story me bahot changes the Jo ki acche the pasand aye
Aise hi likhte jao Bhai bholu wali story bhi mast hai
Aur agent ke to Kya kehne lajawab
 
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FRIDAY

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Superb update bhai.
Gaurav kis boss ki bath kor raha hai.Ankan bhi pakda gya.
Dhruv to aapne purane roop pe dekh ke maza a gya.Inspecter Iyer aisa kia paya hai.
Waiting for some fantastic action...
Great work...
Keep it up...
 
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Swaraj

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XP par story padhni start ki thi
Yaha akar story me bahot changes the Jo ki acche the pasand aye
Aise hi likhte jao Bhai bholu wali story bhi mast hai
Aur agent ke to Kya kehne lajawab
Review ke liye thanks dost
Badla story mere dil ke hamesha kareeb rahegi kyunki meri pehli story hai ye
Uske baad agent aur pagle Shahab ki kabr
Khair dhanyawad ki aap mere story ko xossip se follow kar rahe the
Rahi baat story ki to aaj iska update de dunga
Aur haan bholu jab raja bana is story ke khatam hote hi wapas restart karunga
Saath rahiye
 

Swaraj

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Superb update bhai.
Gaurav kis boss ki bath kor raha hai.Ankan bhi pakda gya.
Dhruv to aapne purane roop pe dekh ke maza a gya.Inspecter Iyer aisa kia paya hai.
Waiting for some fantastic action...
Great work...
Keep it up...
Hmm review ke liye thanks
Ending ki aur ja raha hai story
Ab sab ko mohara banane wala bhi samane aayega
Saath rahiye
 
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Swaraj

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Karan bhi apni gaadi tezi se nikal raha tha
Aaj dosti ka karz utarna hai dhruv ke saath jo galat kiya,aur galat hua sab ka badla lena hai
Aaj ek bhai nahi ek dost apne paapo ka prayashchit karne ja raha tha

Udhar dhruv apni gaadi lekar jab pohunchta hai to ek chote se ladke ko jhaankte hue dekhta hai

"Vivek??"dhruv poochta hai

"Dhruv b bhaiyya??"vivek ki jaan me jaan aayi

Dhruv-thanks gps me location share karne ke liye ,kahan hai??

Vivek-a ander hai,lekin bohut log hai.hathiyar bhi hai .......ankan ander hai bhaiyya

Rone laga vivek,dhruv kandhe par haath rakhkar chup hone ko kehta hai aur ander jaane lagta hai
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"To bol shadi karegi mujhse??"gaurav haste hue kehta hai

"Mar jaungi lekin nahi karungi,dhruv mera pati hai,aur har janm me rahega"sharon boli

"To fir mar"neha ne apni bandook ki nok sharon ke sar par rakhi

Sharon ne aankh bandh har di

Tabhi darwaza todkar dhruv ander a jaata hai ,aur kuch karne se pehle aksharon ki haalat dekhkar chup reh jaata hai
Ankan bhi apne aap ko chudane ki.koshish karta hai lekin safal nahi ho paata hai

Dhruv ko bandi bana liya jaata hai.
Lekin in sab se anjan vivek apne aap ko kosta hai.abhi tak sab ander hi hai aur wo darpok ki tarah kuch kar nahi pa raha tha

Lanat hai bujdili par
Soch us cottage ke peecha chadhe lagta hai.zyada hard nahi tha chadhna ankan ne sikhaya tha chadhna pedo par.

Cottage par chadkar dheere dheere ghutno ke bal par idhar udhar karte hi usko upar kaanch dikhta hai
Ek bade se kaanch ka sunroof tha.neeche ek aadmi sharon bhabhi ke sar ke paas bandook liye khada tha
Sochne ka time nahi tha

"Hari om"bol

CHANAAAAAAKKKKKKKKKK

kaanch ke tukde karte hue vivek seedha gaurav ke upar gira

Ek to achanak hue hamle se sab sakpaka gaye upar se vivek ke girne se gaurav ko kaafi chot aayi

Kaanch ke tukade gad gaye haath me

Dhruv aur ankan toot pade sab par.jabki vivek karahne laga tha

Thodi der ne sab kaabu me a gaye

Lekin neha nahi.usne ek bandook liye goli dagane hi ja rahi thi ki

GHAI GHAI

do goliyan chali aur neha ke haath aur kandhe me ja lagi
Chaunkkar dhruv ne dekha to karan ke haath me bandook thi

"B bhaiyya???"neha boli

"Apni gandi zaban se naam na le chudail"bol karan a gaya cottage ke ander
Sabke bandhan kholkar sabko azaad karaya aur ankan ne
Sab mahila mandal vivek ko sambhalne lagi thi

"Kaafi chot lagi hai bhai ko"tanya boli

"Bol kamine koun hai tera boss ??bol??"dhruv ne collar pakadkar gaurav ko ghasit kar poocha

"Wo wo..."

GHAI

Goli maarkar ek shaks bhag gaya.peeche ankan jaane wala tha dhruv ne rok liya

"Mere.......paapo.....ki....yahi....saza.....hai.....khush r...ehna.......sharon.....i...love....."gardan ludak gayi gaurav ki

Sannata chhaya hua tha cottage me.neha rote hue dekh rahi thi karan ki aur jisne ek baar bhi nahi dekha tha use,bas dhruv ki family ke saath chipk hua tha
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Mr grover khade the ek sunsan jagah par

Tabhi ek car aayi unke saamne

"Aapke kehne par maine sab kuch kiya,lekin ab mujhe aapki madad chahiye"mr grover gidgidate hue bole

"Apni bewkoofiyo ko mere sar na mado,mujhe pata hota ki dhruv anutha ka beta hai to mai khud apne haathon se maar deta,uske bade bhai ne mere baap Ko barbaad kiya tha"shaks bola

"Jo bhi hai.ek mauka dijiye ab koi galti nahi hogi,sab kuch sambhal loonga"mr grover bole

"Nahi Neeraj ab tum kisi kaam ke nahi rahe balki ab tumhare peecha police pad jayegi"shaks bola

"Aap aisa nahi kar sakte aap mere baap hai"mr Neeraj cheekhte hue bole

"Pata hai isliye ek aasan mout doonga"shaks bola
Aur

CYOOM

Mr Neeraj neeche gir gaye aur car chal padi
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Kuch der baad police aur swat team ko lekar khud amitabh a gaye

Sab ko hirasat me le liya gaya,neha ko ambulance me le jaya gaya,baar baar karan ki aur dekh rahi thi karan ne ek baar bhi nahi dekha

Dhruv amitabh ka beta hai
To suchitra aur amitabh dhruv ko gale lagkar dahad dahad kar rone lage
Na hi kisi ne amitabh ko itna rote hue dekha tha,na hi dhruv kabhi itna roya tha

Ankan bhi bhaiya ke gale ga rone laga

Sharon muskura rahi thi,aaj us mandir ki yaad a gayi jahan wo tab gayi thi jab uska sab kuch gaurav lootkar le gaya tha
Man hi man devi ko yaad kar shukriya de rahi thi lekin uske aankhen bhi nam hi thi
Kyun na ho aaj dhruv ko uske hisse ka pyaar mil gaya tha

Sharon ne aage badhkar sabke pair chhuye baaki vishal,avinash bhi agaye the gaadi thik karwakar

Sab khush the sivay vivek ke,jise ambulance le gayi thi

"Bhai aaj to party banti hai,family party"sharon bol uthi

"Haan bhai itni badi achievement,banta to hai"nivedita ne saath diya

"Host mai aur avinash karenge"tanya holi

"No no no aise kaise,party to mai host karunga,wo bhi full drinks wali,kyun dhruv wahi wali??"aankh maarte hue karan bola

"Haye raam hum nahi aayenge,ankan kaan dhak le "sunanda ganguly boli

Aur suchitra ne pehli Baar apne bade bete ke sar par halke se haath rakha

Maa ka haath rakhte hi dhruv ko ek sukoon sa mila
 
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Johnboy11

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Karan bhi apni gaadi tezi se nikal raha tha
Aaj dosti ka karz utarna hai dhruv ke saath jo galat kiya,aur galat hua sab ka badla lena hai
Aaj ek bhai nahi ek dost apne paapo ka prayashchit karne ja raha tha

Udhar dhruv apni gaadi lekar jab pohunchta hai to ek chote se ladke ko jhaankte hue dekhta hai

"Vivek??"dhruv poochta hai

"Dhruv b bhaiyya??"vivek ki jaan me jaan aayi

Dhruv-thanks gps me location share karne ke liye ,kahan hai??

Vivek-a ander hai,lekin bohut log hai.hathiyar bhi hai .......ankan ander hai bhaiyya

Rone laga vivek,dhruv kandhe par haath rakhkar chup hone ko kehta hai aur ander jaane lagta hai
------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"To bol shadi karegi mujhse??"gaurav haste hue kehta hai

"Mar jaungi lekin nahi karungi,dhruv mera pati hai,aur har janm me rahega"sharon boli

"To fir mar"neha ne apni bandook ki nok sharon ke sar par rakhi

Sharon ne aankh bandh har di

Tabhi darwaza todkar dhruv ander a jaata hai ,aur kuch karne se pehle aksharon ki haalat dekhkar chup reh jaata hai
Ankan bhi apne aap ko chudane ki.koshish karta hai lekin safal nahi ho paata hai

Dhruv ko bandi bana liya jaata hai.
Lekin in sab se anjan vivek apne aap ko kosta hai.abhi tak sab ander hi hai aur wo darpok ki tarah kuch kar nahi pa raha tha

Lanat hai bujdili par
Soch us cottage ke peecha chadhe lagta hai.zyada hard nahi tha chadhna ankan ne sikhaya tha chadhna pedo par.

Cottage par chadkar dheere dheere ghutno ke bal par idhar udhar karte hi usko upar kaanch dikhta hai
Ek bade se kaanch ka sunroof tha.neeche ek aadmi sharon bhabhi ke sar ke paas bandook liye khada tha
Sochne ka time nahi tha

"Hari om"bol

CHANAAAAAAKKKKKKKKKK

kaanch ke tukde karte hue vivek seedha gaurav ke upar gira

Ek to achanak hue hamle se sab sakpaka gaye upar se vivek ke girne se gaurav ko kaafi chot aayi

Kaanch ke tukade gad gaye haath me

Dhruv aur ankan toot pade sab par.jabki vivek karahne laga tha

Thodi der ne sab kaabu me a gaye

Lekin neha nahi.usne ek bandook liye goli dagane hi ja rahi thi ki

GHAI GHAI

do goliyan chali aur neha ke haath aur kandhe me ja lagi
Chaunkkar dhruv ne dekha to karan ke haath me bandook thi

"B bhaiyya???"neha boli

"Apni gandi zaban se naam na le chudail"bol karan a gaya cottage ke ander
Sabke bandhan kholkar sabko azaad karaya aur ankan ne
Sab mahila mandal vivek ko sambhalne lagi thi

"Kaafi chot lagi hai bhai ko"tanya boli

"Bol kamine koun hai tera boss ??bol??"dhruv ne collar pakadkar gaurav ko ghasit kar poocha

"Wo wo..."

GHAI

Goli maarkar ek shaks bhag gaya.peeche ankan jaane wala tha dhruv ne rok liya

"Mere.......paapo.....ki....yahi....saza.....hai.....khush r...ehna.......sharon.....i...love....."gardan ludak gayi gaurav ki

Sannata chhaya hua tha cottage me.neha rote hue dekh rahi thi karan ki aur jisne ek baar bhi nahi dekha tha use,bas dhruv ki family ke saath chipk hua tha
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Mr grover khade the ek sunsan jagah par

Tabhi ek car aayi unke saamne

"Aapke kehne par maine sab kuch kiya,lekin ab mujhe aapki madad chahiye"mr grover gidgidate hue bole

"Apni bewkoofiyo ko mere sar na mado,mujhe pata hota ki dhruv anutha ka beta hai to mai khud apne haathon se maar deta,uske bade bhai ne mere baap Ko barbaad kiya tha"shaks bola

"Jo bhi hai.ek mauka dijiye ab koi galti nahi hogi,sab kuch sambhal loonga"mr grover bole

"Nahi Neeraj ab tum kisi kaam ke nahi rahe balki ab tumhare peecha police pad jayegi"shaks bola

"Aap aisa nahi kar sakte aap mere baap hai"mr Neeraj cheekhte hue bole

"Pata hai isliye ek aasan mout doonga"shaks bola
Aur

CYOOM

Mr Neeraj neeche gir gaye aur car chal padi
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Kuch der baad police aur swat team ko lekar khud amitabh a gaye

Sab ko hirasat me le liya gaya,neha ko ambulance me le jaya gaya,baar baar karan ki aur dekh rahi thi karan ne ek baar bhi nahi dekha

Dhruv amitabh ka beta hai
To suchitra aur amitabh dhruv ko gale lagkar dahad dahad kar rone lage
Na hi kisi ne amitabh ko itna rote hue dekha tha,na hi dhruv kabhi itna roya tha

Ankan bhi bhaiya ke gale ga rone laga

Sharon muskura rahi thi,aaj us mandir ki yaad a gayi jahan wo tab gayi thi jab uska sab kuch gaurav lootkar le gaya tha
Man hi man devi ko yaad kar shukriya de rahi thi lekin uske aankhen bhi nam hi thi
Kyun na ho aaj dhruv ko uske hisse ka pyaar mil gaya tha

Sharon ne aage badhkar sabke pair chhuye baaki vishal,avinash bhi agaye the gaadi thik karwakar

Sab khush the sivay vivek ke,jise ambulance le gayi thi

"Bhai aaj to party banti hai,family party"sharon bol uthi

"Haan bhai itni badi achievement,banta to hai"nivedita ne saath diya

"Host mai aur avinash karenge"tanya holi

"No no no aise kaise,party to mai host karunga,wo bhi full drinks wali,kyun dhruv wahi wali??"aankh maarte hue karan bola

"Haye raam hum nahi aayenge,ankan kaan dhak le "sunanda ganguly boli

Aur suchitra ne pehli Baar apne bade bete ke sar par halke se haath rakha

Maa ka haath rakhte hi dhruv ko ek sukoon sa mila
Nice update bro.
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Main villin ki party to abhi baki h..
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Keep posting.
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Indrajeet

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Nice update bhai
 
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