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bohut chahal pahal thi aaj ghar me
Vivek se hospital me milne ke baad sabko vishal ne khane par invite kiya
Aur khushi ke maare koi na nahi bol saka
"Koun koun chai piyega???"dadaji ne poochha
"Mujhe maaf kijiye"haath jodkar amitabh bole
"Baaki sabhi ke liye chai mai lekar aati hoon "nivedita boli
"Arey nahi beta,aaj tum sab aaram karo chai mai lekar aata hoon"bol dadaji chale gaye
Sab gappe marne me busy tha.hasi aur thahakon ki awaazein a rahi thi ghar se
"Ye lo sab ke liye garma garam chai"dadaji bole
Dhruv haste hue chai ke pyale ko haath me rakhkar chuski lene hi wala tha ki
"Disturb to nahi kar raha hoon dhruv sahab??"door khade Iyer saamne nazar aaya sabko
"Inspector Iyer,kya baat hai.what a pleasant surprise.aap yahan??"dhruv sofe se uthkar saamne aaya aur haath milaya
"Hmm aur aap sab apni chai ko na piye.sab apna cup table par rakh de"Iyer bola
Sabne wahi kiya
"Lekin baat kya hai sir??"sharon ne is baar apna muh khola
"Baat chai ki nahi badle ki hai sharon"Iyer bola
Sab ek doosre ka muh dekhne lage,kisi ko kuch bhi nahi samajh a raha tha
"Waise brij mohan ji,chai pilakar sabko maar e ka plan ekdum Foolproof tha"dadaji ki aur dekhkar bole Iyer.
"Kya bol rahe hai aap sir??"dadaji hairani ke saath bole.
"To ye chai aap khud pijiye"bol ek cup chai dadaji ki aur badha diya inspector ne
"Mai chai nahi Peeta inspector"dadaji bole
"Are aap har roz chai peete hai dadaji subah Shaam"avinash hairani ke saath bola
"Wahi to"vishal ne support kiya avinash ko
"Ab aap fans gaye hai mr brijmohan ji,ya kahun mr Subhash Kalra"Iyer ne aankh maarkar haste hue kaha
Achanak dadaji ka chehra badal gaya aur khoonkhar ho gaya
"Haan mai wahi hoon jo tune kaha inspector,lekin tu kya sochata hai.tu bacha lega in sabko,mere aadmi abhi bhi basement me hai,abhi bulata hoon"bol ek seeti maari dadaji ne
Koi harkat nahi hui,fir ek baar taali maarkar seeti maari
Lekin koi harkat nahi hui
"Wo aisa hai dadaji mujhe aapke plan ke baare me pata tha,lekin bina saboot aage nahi badh pa raha tha,Iyer ne aate hi sabse pehle mujhse baat ki,sab samjhaya.aur fir yahan aane se pehle hi aapke aadmi ko arrest kar liya gaya,aur mai anjan bankar aapke saath yahan maze kar raha tha"dhruv muskurate hue bola
"You Bastard"bol dadaji ne chalang lagai dhruv ki aur lekin Iyer taiyyar tha apna revolver nikal kar ek goli maari
Aur dadaji chitak kar door ja gire
Kuch policewale aakar le gaye dadaji ko
"Ye sab kya hai beta??"bohut der baad suchitra boli
"Hmm ye janne ke liye sabse pehle hame 25 saal pehle jaana hoga"inspector Iyer bole aur sofa me baith gaye
Sharon sofa se uthkar sabke liye coffee banane lagi
Abhi abhi jo hua chai ki aur filhal koi dekhne nahi wala tha
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------. 25 YEARS BACK
KOLKATA
"ye hai asli rasgulla samjhe kishore"
"Arey ajitabh sir nahi aap bhi na"kishore bola
"Ajitabh ganguly ke ghar aaye ho tum kishore ye sab khatam to karna hi padega"ajitabh bole
"Sir Aapne jo pyaar diya hai is gareeb ko wo mai kabhi nahi bhool sakta,kuch nahi tha mai.lekin mujhe manager banaya aur aaj mera khud ka ghar,car hai to aapke wajah se"kishore bola
"Nahi kishore you deserve it"ajitabh bole
"Abhi ijazat dijiye sir,chalta hoon"kishore chala gaya
Tabhi ek phone aaya ajitabh ko
"Haan bablu bol"ajitabh bola
"Sir,aapko bola tha har kisi par aankh band karke bharosa mat kijiye,kishore ne lagbhag aapke saare aadmiyon ko apne saath mila liya hai,aur aapke bharose ko jeetkar jo documents par sign karwata tha wo sab aapke property,aapke factory ko hathiyane ke liye,rakhta hoon sir,aur haan aapki jaan khatre me hai,kaam chodkar ja raha hoon.abhi aakhri baar namak ka farz ada kar ja raha hoon"bol bina kuch sune bablu ne phone rakh diya
Ajitabh to jaise dhamm se sofe me baith gaye.kuch samajh hi nahi a raha tha kya kare
Unhone apni biwi ko sabkuch bataya
"Lekin Dewar ji ko to batana padega na"ajitabh ki patni rote hue boli
"Bablu ka abhi abhi sms saya,kishore ke aadmi hame maarne ke liye dhoond rahe hai,usko ek chitthi likh kar bhej raha hoon,ab chalo"bol apni patni ke saath rote hue ajitabh apne ghar se nikal gaye
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LUCKNOW
"Hmm to janab kab tak hum aise hi milte rahenge??"suchitra boli
"Jab tak bhaiyya aur bhabhi ko pata na chale"amitabh ganguly bola
"Aur tum unhen kab bataoge??"suchitra boli
"Bohut jald,lekin abhi filhal tumhare mummy papa se to baat kar loon"amitabh ganguly bole
"Soch lo ,guns manufacturing karte hai papa"suchitra haste hue boli
"To kya hua,mai kya darta hoon??"amitabh bola
"Hmmm pata hai"haste hue suchitra amitabh ko chedte
Hue bhaag gayi
"Abhi dikhata hoon kaun darta hai "bol suchitra ke peecha daudne laga amitabh
Tabhi ek ladka daudte hue amitabh ke paas aaya
"Amitabh yaar tere liye ek letter aaya hostel me pada hua tha.important hoga shayad isliye speed post me bheja hai"hammfte hue ladka wo letter amitabh ko de gaya
Amitabh ne wo letter liya aur hairani ki drishti se dekhne laga
Fir faadkar bhagne laga apne hostel ki aur
bohut chahal pahal thi aaj ghar me
Vivek se hospital me milne ke baad sabko vishal ne khane par invite kiya
Aur khushi ke maare koi na nahi bol saka
"Koun koun chai piyega???"dadaji ne poochha
"Mujhe maaf kijiye"haath jodkar amitabh bole
"Baaki sabhi ke liye chai mai lekar aati hoon "nivedita boli
"Arey nahi beta,aaj tum sab aaram karo chai mai lekar aata hoon"bol dadaji chale gaye
Sab gappe marne me busy tha.hasi aur thahakon ki awaazein a rahi thi ghar se
"Ye lo sab ke liye garma garam chai"dadaji bole
Dhruv haste hue chai ke pyale ko haath me rakhkar chuski lene hi wala tha ki
"Disturb to nahi kar raha hoon dhruv sahab??"door khade Iyer saamne nazar aaya sabko
"Inspector Iyer,kya baat hai.what a pleasant surprise.aap yahan??"dhruv sofe se uthkar saamne aaya aur haath milaya
"Hmm aur aap sab apni chai ko na piye.sab apna cup table par rakh de"Iyer bola
Sabne wahi kiya
"Lekin baat kya hai sir??"sharon ne is baar apna muh khola
"Baat chai ki nahi badle ki hai sharon"Iyer bola
Sab ek doosre ka muh dekhne lage,kisi ko kuch bhi nahi samajh a raha tha
"Waise brij mohan ji,chai pilakar sabko maar e ka plan ekdum Foolproof tha"dadaji ki aur dekhkar bole Iyer.
"Kya bol rahe hai aap sir??"dadaji hairani ke saath bole.
"To ye chai aap khud pijiye"bol ek cup chai dadaji ki aur badha diya inspector ne
"Mai chai nahi Peeta inspector"dadaji bole
"Are aap har roz chai peete hai dadaji subah Shaam"avinash hairani ke saath bola
"Wahi to"vishal ne support kiya avinash ko
"Ab aap fans gaye hai mr brijmohan ji,ya kahun mr Subhash Kalra"Iyer ne aankh maarkar haste hue kaha
Achanak dadaji ka chehra badal gaya aur khoonkhar ho gaya
"Haan mai wahi hoon jo tune kaha inspector,lekin tu kya sochata hai.tu bacha lega in sabko,mere aadmi abhi bhi basement me hai,abhi bulata hoon"bol ek seeti maari dadaji ne
Koi harkat nahi hui,fir ek baar taali maarkar seeti maari
Lekin koi harkat nahi hui
"Wo aisa hai dadaji mujhe aapke plan ke baare me pata tha,lekin bina saboot aage nahi badh pa raha tha,Iyer ne aate hi sabse pehle mujhse baat ki,sab samjhaya.aur fir yahan aane se pehle hi aapke aadmi ko arrest kar liya gaya,aur mai anjan bankar aapke saath yahan maze kar raha tha"dhruv muskurate hue bola
"You Bastard"bol dadaji ne chalang lagai dhruv ki aur lekin Iyer taiyyar tha apna revolver nikal kar ek goli maari
Aur dadaji chitak kar door ja gire
Kuch policewale aakar le gaye dadaji ko
"Ye sab kya hai beta??"bohut der baad suchitra boli
"Hmm ye janne ke liye sabse pehle hame 25 saal pehle jaana hoga"inspector Iyer bole aur sofa me baith gaye
Sharon sofa se uthkar sabke liye coffee banane lagi
Abhi abhi jo hua chai ki aur filhal koi dekhne nahi wala tha
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------. 25 YEARS BACK
KOLKATA
"ye hai asli rasgulla samjhe kishore"
"Arey ajitabh sir nahi aap bhi na"kishore bola
"Ajitabh ganguly ke ghar aaye ho tum kishore ye sab khatam to karna hi padega"ajitabh bole
"Sir Aapne jo pyaar diya hai is gareeb ko wo mai kabhi nahi bhool sakta,kuch nahi tha mai.lekin mujhe manager banaya aur aaj mera khud ka ghar,car hai to aapke wajah se"kishore bola
"Nahi kishore you deserve it"ajitabh bole
"Abhi ijazat dijiye sir,chalta hoon"kishore chala gaya
Tabhi ek phone aaya ajitabh ko
"Haan bablu bol"ajitabh bola
"Sir,aapko bola tha har kisi par aankh band karke bharosa mat kijiye,kishore ne lagbhag aapke saare aadmiyon ko apne saath mila liya hai,aur aapke bharose ko jeetkar jo documents par sign karwata tha wo sab aapke property,aapke factory ko hathiyane ke liye,rakhta hoon sir,aur haan aapki jaan khatre me hai,kaam chodkar ja raha hoon.abhi aakhri baar namak ka farz ada kar ja raha hoon"bol bina kuch sune bablu ne phone rakh diya
Ajitabh to jaise dhamm se sofe me baith gaye.kuch samajh hi nahi a raha tha kya kare
Unhone apni biwi ko sabkuch bataya
"Lekin Dewar ji ko to batana padega na"ajitabh ki patni rote hue boli
"Bablu ka abhi abhi sms saya,kishore ke aadmi hame maarne ke liye dhoond rahe hai,usko ek chitthi likh kar bhej raha hoon,ab chalo"bol apni patni ke saath rote hue ajitabh apne ghar se nikal gaye
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
LUCKNOW
"Hmm to janab kab tak hum aise hi milte rahenge??"suchitra boli
"Jab tak bhaiyya aur bhabhi ko pata na chale"amitabh ganguly bola
"Aur tum unhen kab bataoge??"suchitra boli
"Bohut jald,lekin abhi filhal tumhare mummy papa se to baat kar loon"amitabh ganguly bole
"Soch lo ,guns manufacturing karte hai papa"suchitra haste hue boli
"To kya hua,mai kya darta hoon??"amitabh bola
"Hmmm pata hai"haste hue suchitra amitabh ko chedte
Hue bhaag gayi
"Abhi dikhata hoon kaun darta hai "bol suchitra ke peecha daudne laga amitabh
Tabhi ek ladka daudte hue amitabh ke paas aaya
"Amitabh yaar tere liye ek letter aaya hostel me pada hua tha.important hoga shayad isliye speed post me bheja hai"hammfte hue ladka wo letter amitabh ko de gaya
Amitabh ne wo letter liya aur hairani ki drishti se dekhne laga
Fir faadkar bhagne laga apne hostel ki aur
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Review ke liye thanks dost,
Aapne abhi tak update padhi liya hoga ki kaise dhruv ya ye kahoon ki vivek bacha leta hai apni family ko
Aur sabse bade shadyantra kari dadaji hi asli mujrim hai
Aage updates me flashback hoga
Saath rahiye
Johnboy11
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Njce update.
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To iska mtlb India mai jo ladki mari thi ussne dadaji ko baat karte hue suna tha.
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Ab dekhte h aage kya hota h
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Keep posting.
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RAAZ
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Naina
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Ohh to budhe ne sabko, jahar mili hui chai pilake marne wala tha.. bhagwan ka lakh lakh sukra hai ki dhruv ko budhe ke karnamo ke bade me pehle se malum tha . aur sahi waqt par iyar a geya.... ye flashback ek shath ho to padhneki ki maja kuch aur hi hai. yun tukdo me.... boh baat nahi
khair.... joh bhi ho... bohat hi achhe likh rahe hai...
Brilliant update sir...
khair.... joh bhi ho... bohat hi achhe likh rahe hai...
Brilliant update sir...
Naina
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Jaisa ki aapne padha hai ki brijmohan hi main villain hai
Uski dushmani kaise shuru hui amitabh ganguly ke saath aur dhruv kaise bichad gaya apne family ke saath
Sab agle updates me pata chalega
Saath rahiye
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Story lagbhag khatam hone wali hai
To next story koun si likhun???
5 logo kahani jo ek jurm ki saza kaatne india aate hai aur unki like change ho jaati hai-paschatap
Ek aisa ladka jo achanak ek bade audhe par pohunch gaya lekin shadyantra aur soojhboojh ke saath kaise apne aapko ek sachha aur acha raja saabit karega-bholu jab raja bana
Pashchatap ya bholu jab raja bana
Aap suggest karen
To next story koun si likhun???
5 logo kahani jo ek jurm ki saza kaatne india aate hai aur unki like change ho jaati hai-paschatap
Ek aisa ladka jo achanak ek bade audhe par pohunch gaya lekin shadyantra aur soojhboojh ke saath kaise apne aapko ek sachha aur acha raja saabit karega-bholu jab raja bana
Pashchatap ya bholu jab raja bana
Aap suggest karen