Bhai mujhe to abhi bhi samajh nhi aa raha hai ke aap kahani q padh rahey ho.Kabhi kabhi ye kahani mujhe samaj nahi ati...jis collage main raghav apne jija Nageswara ke dam par kisi bhi ladki ka rap kar sakta hay...balke first encounter Sweta ke saath jab use raghav ko Thapar mara uske baad story main likha tha ki usne ek ladki ke sirf takkar lag jane se uska rape kiya woh bhi ghar main Gus kar use family ke samne or koi kuch nahi kar paya...or principal tak kuch uska nahi kar paye...toh yeh Niharika teacher jo backless blouse pahnker bomb ban ke ati hay kaise bachi hay abhi tak? Or bhai main toh taras gaya par aaj tak na Scholl or nahi college main meri koi female teacher backless blouse main nahi dhiki balke poore india main he...kash back less ke saath frontless bhi dhik jati....Or is story mai sabhi saree pahne wali ko sirf backless bluse ka keeda kyun kat khaya hay...or karan ko toh 5 crore mile the Shalini ke yaha se woh paise kaha gaye? Jo isko ghar walon se paise lene par rahe...na toh isne koi credit card banwaya na debit card phir sala itni bari rakam kya is karan ne apni gand main ghusa li?
Mujhe to aisa lagta hai ke kahani ka har kirdaar chahey wo hero ho ya villain,wo din me kya kya karta hai wo sab writer kahani me likhey jaisey ke hero ne konse colour ka shirt pehna hai ya konsi colour ki underwear pehni hai.hero ne debit card konse colour ka banaya hai.bhai itni choti choti baato ko to writer kahani me nhi dikha sakta hai na.abhi hero debit card aur credit card banaye ya nhi wo writer ko apni kahani me batana chahiye kya
Ya phir uske pocket me kitney paisey hai ye bhi batana chahiye kya kahani me.
Bhai ye kahani hai isko kahani ke jaisa hi lo.agar itna hi dhyaan se padhna hai to upsc ki books padh lo aap paas bhi ho jaongey.
Aap ne har comments me bas kahani me choti choti galtiyo ko hi bataya hai.kahani me kuch acchi cheezey bhi to hongi na wo bhi bataya karo na.
Writer ek mahiney ke liye to online nhi aaney waala hai aur jab aa jayenga to shayed aap ke sawalo ka jawaab de ya phir ignore karey aap jaisey readers ko jo sirf kahani me galtiya nikalney ke liye comments kartey hai lekin kabhi bhi positive comments nhi kartey hai.
Kahani acchi chal rahi hai pls isko band mat karao.agar aap ko acchi nhi lag rahi hai to mat padho aur agar padhna hai to manoranjan ke liye padho na ke choti choti galtiya nikaal kar writer ko pareshan karo.writer ko paisey nhi mil rahey hai jo wo apna poora time nikaal kar kahani likh sakey aur jitna time bhi milta hai itney time me wo itni choti choti galtiyo par dhyaan nhi de sakta hai.