A.B.KING
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Story bahut acchi hai
Lekin daily updates aate to bahut accha hota
Lekin daily updates aate to bahut accha hota
Romance BEAUTY AND THE BEAST 2 (COMPLETED)
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Bro aapke is reply ke liye aaj hi ek update aap ke Naam kar deta hoon
Saath rahiye
A.B.KING
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Thank you bro
Maine is story ka pehla part pada hai and wow bahut acchi story hai aap ki wo bhi
I hope ye wali story bhi usse acchi ho
Waiting for next update bro
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"roma tu bhi chal, dekh seth kirtilaal ke Paas bohut paisa hai. Tujhe koi na koi paise wale ke saath rakh denge" kavya boli
"nahi kavya mai ye dhanda majboori ke liye karti hoon, tujhe to pata hai ki aajkal ek aam ladki ko koi sahara nahi deta sirf uski jism ko paane ke liye sab Saath dete hai" roma haste hue boli apni saheli ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue
"sorry roma is room ka bojh nahi utha paungi, tu ek kaam kar na. Mere kisi contact se mil le. Aaj tak ka time to hai" kavya boli
Roma kuch nahi boli.
"OK roma, touch me rehna bye" bol kavya apna suitcase lekar chali gayi
Roma kya kare ab. Achanak use call aaya ek number se
"Haan bol, kaun hai??" roma ne poocha
"hi, mai jai. Yaad hai wahi jisse aap takrayi thi airport me aur fir market me" jai ne yaad dilaya
"oh Haan yaad aaya, phone kyun kiya" roma jald taalna chahti thi is aadmi ko
"ji wo...... Aapne kaha tha na ki aapko bhi room chahiye, mujhe ek room mila hai. Aur roommate chahiye. Agar aapke Paas koi aadmi hai to bataiye" jai bola
"mujhe room chahiye, bol aaun??" roma boli
Ache se pata hai aise ladko ke baare me roma ko
Ye sab hawas ke bhookhe bhediye hai
"Haan..... Lekin...... Haan ho jayega, ek room aur hall room hai. Hall room me mai adjust kar lunga aap room le lijiye. Room ka rent 10,000 hai. Aapko chalega?? 50-50??"jai ne poocha
" mere budget se thoda zyada hai"roma boli
"sorry lekin abhi mai sirf itna hi kar sakta hoon aapke liye" jai bola
"OK mai kal a sakti hoon room me??" roma ko jald se jald room chahiye tha
"OK kal milte hai apna id proof bhi lete ayega plz" jai bola aur phone rakh diya
Ye jai bharose ke kaabil hai bhi?? Aage pata chal hi jayega aur tab tak doosra Rehne ka bandobast kar liya jayega
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"maa itni Saari cheezein nahi chahiye hame, wapas kar dijiye" payal boli
"beta karne gaye the, lekin sarita ji ne lene se mana kar diya, kaha ye Sab shagun ke liye hai" ranjana boli
"lekin maa isse yahi pata chalta hai na ki aap meri shaadi ek ameer gharane se karwa rahe ho" payal boli
"tu kya chahti hai beta" ranjana be poocha
"ye taam jhaam nahi chahiye mummy, please mai is shaadi ko ek simple tarike se karna chahti hoon" payal boli
"lekin beti kya is maa ki koi abhilasha nahi hai?? Kya mai nahi chahti ki meri beti ki shaadi dhoom dhaan se ho??" ranjana boli
"maa please mai ye shaadi sirf karz utarne ke liye kar rahi hoon kyunki agar karz maaf nahi hua to ghar chala jayega, mujhe kya pata tha papa itne Saare karz chor kar jayenge" payal boli
Ranjita apne beti ko kya bataye, kaise bataye ki sab kiya dhara uske mama ka hai
Aaj jo aiso aaram me wo log hai wo Sirf payal ke papa ke kaaran
"thik hai mummy mai ye sirf ek shart par lungi, shaadi Ekdum simple tarike se hogi" payal boli
"thik hai baba teri marzi" ranjana boli aur muskurakar kitchen me chali gayi
Tabhi darwaze par ek knock hua
"koun hai" payal daud kar aayi aur darwaza kholte hi chaunk padi
"tum?????????" payal ko yakeen nahi a raha tha kise dekh rahi thi wo
Saamne harshit khada tha
"ye sab kya hai payal?? Kyun kyun kyun???" Harshit ne payal ka haath pakad kar bola
Payal harshit ko dekhkar itna dang reh gayi ki usse kuch bola nahi ja raha tha
"payal ka haath chod do harshit wo ab vardhan parivar ki bahu banne ja rahi hai" ye awaz dadi ki thi
"dadi aap bhi?? Aap paiso ke chakachaund me itni andhi ho gayi ki ranvijay jaise ladke ko apni poti de rahi hai aap??" harshit bola
"harshit agar ranvijay payal se Shaadi nahi karta to tum kya usse shaadi karte??" palat kar sawal kiya dadi ne
Harshit statue bankar khada raha iska koi jawab nahi tha uske paas
"bolo harshit" dadi boli
"dadi ji payal ki shaadi karwane ki itni bhi kya jaldi hai!?" Harshit je fir poocha
"jaldi to tumhare shaadi ko nahi hai fir kyun kar rahe ho harshit??" dadi fir boli
Harshit ke Paas koi jawab nahi tha uska bhi
"har insan apna bhala bura samajhta hai harshit, payal aur uski family uske baare me soch samajh kar hi ye decision par a pohunchi hai. Khair ab tum jakar apne shaadi ki taiyyari karte raho harshit, hum yahan payal ke shadi ki taiyyari karenge" dadi ke bolte hi harshit gusse se bina kuch aur bole tum wahan se chala gaya
"nahi kavya mai ye dhanda majboori ke liye karti hoon, tujhe to pata hai ki aajkal ek aam ladki ko koi sahara nahi deta sirf uski jism ko paane ke liye sab Saath dete hai" roma haste hue boli apni saheli ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue
"sorry roma is room ka bojh nahi utha paungi, tu ek kaam kar na. Mere kisi contact se mil le. Aaj tak ka time to hai" kavya boli
Roma kuch nahi boli.
"OK roma, touch me rehna bye" bol kavya apna suitcase lekar chali gayi
Roma kya kare ab. Achanak use call aaya ek number se
"Haan bol, kaun hai??" roma ne poocha
"hi, mai jai. Yaad hai wahi jisse aap takrayi thi airport me aur fir market me" jai ne yaad dilaya
"oh Haan yaad aaya, phone kyun kiya" roma jald taalna chahti thi is aadmi ko
"ji wo...... Aapne kaha tha na ki aapko bhi room chahiye, mujhe ek room mila hai. Aur roommate chahiye. Agar aapke Paas koi aadmi hai to bataiye" jai bola
"mujhe room chahiye, bol aaun??" roma boli
Ache se pata hai aise ladko ke baare me roma ko
Ye sab hawas ke bhookhe bhediye hai
"Haan..... Lekin...... Haan ho jayega, ek room aur hall room hai. Hall room me mai adjust kar lunga aap room le lijiye. Room ka rent 10,000 hai. Aapko chalega?? 50-50??"jai ne poocha
" mere budget se thoda zyada hai"roma boli
"sorry lekin abhi mai sirf itna hi kar sakta hoon aapke liye" jai bola
"OK mai kal a sakti hoon room me??" roma ko jald se jald room chahiye tha
"OK kal milte hai apna id proof bhi lete ayega plz" jai bola aur phone rakh diya
Ye jai bharose ke kaabil hai bhi?? Aage pata chal hi jayega aur tab tak doosra Rehne ka bandobast kar liya jayega
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"maa itni Saari cheezein nahi chahiye hame, wapas kar dijiye" payal boli
"beta karne gaye the, lekin sarita ji ne lene se mana kar diya, kaha ye Sab shagun ke liye hai" ranjana boli
"lekin maa isse yahi pata chalta hai na ki aap meri shaadi ek ameer gharane se karwa rahe ho" payal boli
"tu kya chahti hai beta" ranjana be poocha
"ye taam jhaam nahi chahiye mummy, please mai is shaadi ko ek simple tarike se karna chahti hoon" payal boli
"lekin beti kya is maa ki koi abhilasha nahi hai?? Kya mai nahi chahti ki meri beti ki shaadi dhoom dhaan se ho??" ranjana boli
"maa please mai ye shaadi sirf karz utarne ke liye kar rahi hoon kyunki agar karz maaf nahi hua to ghar chala jayega, mujhe kya pata tha papa itne Saare karz chor kar jayenge" payal boli
Ranjita apne beti ko kya bataye, kaise bataye ki sab kiya dhara uske mama ka hai
Aaj jo aiso aaram me wo log hai wo Sirf payal ke papa ke kaaran
"thik hai mummy mai ye sirf ek shart par lungi, shaadi Ekdum simple tarike se hogi" payal boli
"thik hai baba teri marzi" ranjana boli aur muskurakar kitchen me chali gayi
Tabhi darwaze par ek knock hua
"koun hai" payal daud kar aayi aur darwaza kholte hi chaunk padi
"tum?????????" payal ko yakeen nahi a raha tha kise dekh rahi thi wo
Saamne harshit khada tha
"ye sab kya hai payal?? Kyun kyun kyun???" Harshit ne payal ka haath pakad kar bola
Payal harshit ko dekhkar itna dang reh gayi ki usse kuch bola nahi ja raha tha
"payal ka haath chod do harshit wo ab vardhan parivar ki bahu banne ja rahi hai" ye awaz dadi ki thi
"dadi aap bhi?? Aap paiso ke chakachaund me itni andhi ho gayi ki ranvijay jaise ladke ko apni poti de rahi hai aap??" harshit bola
"harshit agar ranvijay payal se Shaadi nahi karta to tum kya usse shaadi karte??" palat kar sawal kiya dadi ne
Harshit statue bankar khada raha iska koi jawab nahi tha uske paas
"bolo harshit" dadi boli
"dadi ji payal ki shaadi karwane ki itni bhi kya jaldi hai!?" Harshit je fir poocha
"jaldi to tumhare shaadi ko nahi hai fir kyun kar rahe ho harshit??" dadi fir boli
Harshit ke Paas koi jawab nahi tha uska bhi
"har insan apna bhala bura samajhta hai harshit, payal aur uski family uske baare me soch samajh kar hi ye decision par a pohunchi hai. Khair ab tum jakar apne shaadi ki taiyyari karte raho harshit, hum yahan payal ke shadi ki taiyyari karenge" dadi ke bolte hi harshit gusse se bina kuch aur bole tum wahan se chala gaya
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2 villain ka jikr is update mein aa gaya
pahla to mama jiski wajah se payal ke papa barbad huye aur aj payal us krje ko utarne ke liye shadi kar rahi hai ranvijay se
dusra harshit........aasteen ka saanp........ jisne khud to payal ko chhod diya....lekin payal ki shadi se pareshani hai ise
dekhte hain abhi age kya hoga
pahla to mama jiski wajah se payal ke papa barbad huye aur aj payal us krje ko utarne ke liye shadi kar rahi hai ranvijay se
dusra harshit........aasteen ka saanp........ jisne khud to payal ko chhod diya....lekin payal ki shadi se pareshani hai ise
dekhte hain abhi age kya hoga
Itna chota update me maja bilkul bhi nahi aata hai.update shuru hote hi khatam ho jata hai.itna accha kahani ka plot leke itna chota update dete ho maja ekdum kirkira jar dete ho aap
Hmm Bhai kiy kahu swal to bahut khade ho gye...kuch jayda gussa v aarha hai ..
Harshit ke reaction SE...bc ko kahne ka kiy mtlb tha Ranvijay jaise ladko SE Sadi krne ka.pehli bar dekha or judge v KR liya..waah bc..khud ka chreactor dekha hai wo kabi .... update Thora bada do.
Harshit ke reaction SE...bc ko kahne ka kiy mtlb tha Ranvijay jaise ladko SE Sadi krne ka.pehli bar dekha or judge v KR liya..waah bc..khud ka chreactor dekha hai wo kabi .... update Thora bada do.
Aag to lag chuki h harshit ke tan badan me ki usse kayi guna ameer aadmi se Payal ki Shaadi ho rahi h.
Ab aage dekhte h kya hota h.
Fantastic update bhai.
Ab aage dekhte h kya hota h.
Fantastic update bhai.
A.B.KING
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Bhai aap ki kahani bahut acchi hai bahut acchi..!
Lekin app acchi chiz kam aur normal chez bahut zyada deteho to har koi pehle normal chez hi na utayega pehle.
App ka theme,likhne ka tarika lajavab hai. Likin aap aise chote update likhenge aur irregular updates denge to padne wale ko aur intezar karne wale ko bhi maza nahi ayega.
Pls is baat per ghour kijiyega aur koi baat buri lage to sorry bhai.
Lekin app acchi chiz kam aur normal chez bahut zyada deteho to har koi pehle normal chez hi na utayega pehle.
App ka theme,likhne ka tarika lajavab hai. Likin aap aise chote update likhenge aur irregular updates denge to padne wale ko aur intezar karne wale ko bhi maza nahi ayega.
Pls is baat per ghour kijiyega aur koi baat buri lage to sorry bhai.