Romance Bepanaah Ishq (Completed)

[justfun1567]

Update 2​

Toh yaha Sonal ghar se mandir aati hai. Yaha woh har Tuesday aati hai.

Sonal: Bhagwaan ji. Aaj mera result hai. Maine pure saal bahot mehnat ki hai aur aaj mujhe uss mehnat ka fal milega. Please dekh lena bhagwaan ji.

Pandit: Chinta mat karo Sonal. Tum achhe number se pass hojaogi.

Sonal: Thank You Pandit ji.

Phir Sonal Pandit aashirwaad aur prasad leke college ke liye nikal jaati hai.

Thodi der baad woh college aati hai toh waha Samar pehle se hi khada tha.

Sonal: Kya hua yaha aise kyo khada hai. Result out nhi hua kyaa.

Samar: Result out toh kabka hochuka hai.

Sonal: Hogyaaaaa.

Samar: Haaa.

Sonal: Tera kyaa aaya.

Samar: Mujhe toh distinction ke upar mila hai.

Sonal: Samar ke gale lagte hue. Congrats bhai. Mujhe pata tha tujhe achhe numbers aayenge.

Samar: Thank You Di.

Sonal: Meraa dekhaa.

Samar: Haaa dekha.

Sonal: Kitna aaya.

Samar apna sir jhuka leta hai. Jisse dekh Sonal ko tension hojaati hai.

Sonal: Bata naa. Kitna mila hai. Aur aise sir kyo jhuka liya.

Samar: Wohh dii. Actuallyy aap. Wohhh.

Sonal: Bol naa bhai kyoo mujhee tension de raha hai.
Samar: Wohh di actually aap Failll hogyi hai. Aapko 35% mila hai.

Sonal ke liye yeh news kisi jhatke se kamm nhi thaaa. Uske aankho se aansu nikal gayee thee.

Sonal: Rote hue. Kyaaaaaaaaa. Nhii yehhh sachh nhiii haiii tu tuu mazaak kar raha haii naa.

Samar: I Am Sorry di. Par yeh sach hai.

Sonal toh jaise wahi jamm gayi thi. Usko yakeen hi nhi horaha tha ke woh faill hogyi hai. Woh bhi itni buri tarah se. Woh waha bench pe baith ke rone lagti hai.
Sonal ko aisee rote dekh Samar sochta hai.

Samar(Mann mein): Betaa Samar lagtaa hai tera mazaak jyaada hogyaa.

Samar: Diii. Yeh aap kyaa kar rahii haiii.

Sonal: Toh aur kyaa karuu Samar. Meri itni mehnat ke baad mein main faill hogyi aur woh bhi itni buri tarah. Ab main papa aur mummy ko kaisee facee karungi.

Samar: Areee diii. Aap chupp hojaiyeee. Pleaseee roiyee mattt. Aurrr aisaaa kuchh nhii huaa hai.
Sonal: Matlabbbbb.

Samar: Wohh wohh diii actuallyyy mainn mazaakk kar raha thaa. Aapne pure college meinn topp kiyaa hai.

Sonal: Kyaaaaaaaaaaa. Kyaaaa kahaa tuneee. Phirrr see bolll.

Samar: Aapne puree college mein topp kiya hai. Aur woh faill wali baat mazaak thii. Yeh bol Samar waha se bhagg jaata hai.

Sonal: Samarrrrr. Aaj tujheee mainn nhiii chorungiiii. Yeh bol Sonal bhi uskee pichhe pichhe bhagnee lagti hai.

Samar: Sorry Sorry diii. Galtii hogyiii. Aage se aisaa nhii karungaaa. Sorryyy.

Sonal: Sorryy ke bachhe rukhhh tuuu. Idherrr aaa. Aaj tujhee chorungii nhiii. Teriii wajahh seee merii kyaa halatt hogyii thiii. Tujhee pata haiii. Mainn kehtiii huuu rukhhh.
Thodi der bhagne ke baad Sonal ne Samar ko pakad liyaa.
Sonal: Abb kaha bhagegaaa.

Samar: Sorry Sorry diii. Mujheee nhii pata thaa aapko mere mazaak se itnaa shockk lagegaa.

Sonal: Shockkk. Meri kyaa halat hui thi yeh tujhe pata nhi hai. Mera pata nhi kya kya karne ko dill kar raha tha.

Samar: Sorry Diii. Buttt I am so happy for youu. Congratss diii. Yeh bol uske gale lag jaata hai.

Sonal: Thankk youuu. Mujhe toh abb bhi yakeen nhi horaha ke maine pure college mein top kiya hai.

Samar: Yeh sach hai didi. Chaliye jaldi se jaake marksheet aur certificate lete hai. Aapka toh principal ke paas se hi milega.

Sonal: Haa Chall.

Phir yeh dono principal ke paas aate hai.

Sonal: Main I come in Ma’am.

Principal: Yess yess Sonal come in.

Sonal: Ma’am woh mera marksheet and Certificate.

Principal: First of all congratulations Sonal. Tumne puri college mein top kiya hai. Aisii hi apna aur apne parents ka nam roshan karti raho.

Sonal: Thank you Ma’am. Mujhe toh ab bhi yakeen nhi horaha hai.

Principal: Yeh sab tumhare hardwork ka fal hai. Yeh raha tumhara Marksheet Certificate aur yeh tumhare liye ek gift. .

Sonal: Gift.

Principal: Haaa gift. Tumne puri college mein top kiya hai isiliye tumhe India mein no. 1 interior designing college mein aage padhne ke liye scholorship mili hai. Jo mumbai mein hai.

Sonal yeh sunn ke bahot khush hojaati hai.

Sonal: Sachhh.

Principal: Yess Sonal. Aur yeh tumhara scholorship. Tumhe 1 hafte baad jab marzi join karna hai par 2 weeks ke andar. Once again congrats.

Sonal: Thank you so much Ma’am.

Phir Sonal apna Marksheet Certificate aur scholorship leke bahar aajati hai yaha Samar uska wait kar raha thi.
Sonal bahar aake Samar ke gale lag jaati hai.

Samar: Kya hua di.

Sonal: Mujhe college mein top karne ke liye India ke no. 1 interior designing college mein aage padhne ke scholorship mili hai.

Samar: Kyaaaaaa. Congratssss diiii. I am so happy for youuu.

Sonal: Thank Youuuu. Par woh mumbai mein hai. Shayad mummy papa nhi maanenge.

Samar: Aree main aur didi hai hum mananyenge. Aap chinta naa karee. Ab jaldi chaliye chalke mummy papa di ko yeh news dete hai.

Sonal: Haaa challl.

Abhi yehlog jaa hi rahe the ke tabhi ek ladka waha aata hai.

Ladka: Kyaaa baat hai bhaiii. Ab topper bangayi toh dosto se milne ka bhi time nhi hai. Achha hai.

Sonal: Areeee aisaa kuchhh nhii hai. Waise tumhara kyaa huaa.

Ladka: Hona kya hai. Hum toh ab tumhari tarah topper toh nhi hai. Humhe bas passing marks mil jaaye woh hi bahot hai. Jo mil gaya hai.

Sonal: Congratsss Vicky.

Vicky: Congratulations to you too. Aakhir tumne pure college mein top kiya hai. Yeh bol Sonal ko gale milne aata hai toh Samar beech mein aajata hai.

Samar: Vicky Bhaiya. Hum bhi yaha hai. Humne bhi distinction ke upar laaya hai. Humhe congratulate nhi karenge.

Samar ke aise beech mein aane se Vicky ka muhh utar jaata hai par woh dikhata nhi.

Vicky: Areee aisi baat nhi hai. Tumhe bhi congrats Samar.

Sonal: Achha Vicky. Abhi hum chalte hai. Mummy humara wait kar rahi hongi. Tum ghar aana waha baith ke baat karenge. Chall Samar.

Phir Samar aur Sonal waha se nikal jaate hai aur Vicky unhe jaata hua dekhta rehta hai.

Vicky: Pata nhi aur kitna wait karna hoga iske liye. Yeh bol Vicky bhi apna utra hua muh leke waha se nikal jaata hai.

Vicky Khanna- Sonal ka school and college friend. Sonal ko school time se pyaar karta hai par aaj tak bol nhi paaya. Bigada hua ladka hai. Mann mein kuch chal raha hoga par chehre mein kuch dikhega. Sonal isko koi bhav nhi deti. Bas dost hi maanti hai. Bahot baar yeh Sonal ko touch karne ki koshish karta hai par harbaar muh ki khaata hai.
Idher Samar aur Sonal ghar ki taraf jaate waqt.

Sonal: Thank You Samar.

Samar: Kisliyee di.

Sonal: Woh uss waqt Vicky ke saamne achanak se aane ke liye.

Samar: Come on di. Bhai hu aapka. Bhai ka farz hota hai behen ki raksha karna. Isme kaise Thank You. Par woh aapko pasand karta hai. School se jaante hai hum.

Sonal: Par mujhe woh pasand nhi. Har waqt mujhe chune ki firaak mein rehta hai. Usko pyaar nhi kuch aur bolte hai.

Samar: Toh aapko kaisa ladka pasand hai.

Sonal: Jo mere jism se nhi mere dil se pyaar kare. Jo mujhse mere pyaar se loyal ho. Bado ko respect kare. Choto se pyaar kare. Mujhe respect kare. Mere pyaar ko respect kare. Aur sabse important mujhe itna pyaar kare ke puri zindagi kam padh jaaye.

Samar: How Romantic Di. Toh aapki nazar mein aisa kaun hai jo mera jiju ban sake.

Sonal: Abhi tak toh aisa koi dikha nhi. Par itna pata hai jo bhi hoga bahot khash hogaa. Chal ab baate band kar aur ghar chal.

Phir yeh dono waha se ghar aajaate hai. ​

Looking like a very interesting story ahead but
Meri ek hi sikayat he issi update me writer se ki
EK ACCHE PADHE HUE STUDENT KO PATA HOTA HE KI USNE KITNE SAHI KIE HUE HE EXAM ME..
ATLEAST PASS YA FAIL KA TOH PATA HI HOTA HE AGAR AT THE END WO TOP KARR RAHI HE TOH
but yaha update 2 me heroine ko dikhaya gaya ki usko iske bare me pata hi nahi tha ki wo pass hai ya fail..
ALTHOUGH I ENJOY THE UPDATE.....

 

[SHEERY]

Nice

 

[komaljutt]

Ye incest story ha ya love story plz tell me

 

[LionHeart007]

Ye incest story ha ya love story plz tell me

Its a love story.

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[Hunter Girl]

Ye Sach mein Ek Bahut Acchi Story Hai.

 

[Hunter Girl]

Agar mujhe es story ko no. dene hote
to 10/10 deti

 

[Hunter Girl]

Agar kisi ke pass koi suggestion ho esi kisi aur story ka to please
suggest kariyega

sach feel ho rahi thi ye storie.

 

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[mahaan laura]

A very good story. Ek hi sitting me poori padi hai lekin maza bahut aaya.

 

[ellysperry]

Introduction​

Savitri Kapoor(Dadi)- Yeh hai apne hero ki dadi. Ghar ki sabse senior member. Inki baat ghar mein koi nhi taalta. Ghar mein sab inka samman karte hai. Inke pati ki death kuch saal pehle hochuki hai natural tarike se. Apne sabhi pote potiyon se bahot pyaar karti hai.

Inke 2 bete hai.

Vijay Kapoor(Bade Papa)- Yeh apne hero ke pita ke bade bhai hai. Bahot hi suljhe hue insaan hai. Apne parivaar se bahot pyaar karte hai. Apne bhai ke saath hi business karte hai.

Ragini Kapoor(Badi Mummy)- Yeh apne hero ki badi mummy. Thodi mazakiya kisam ki aurat hai. Apne hero ko apni devrani ka nhi khud ka beta maanti hai. Apna hero bhi apni maa se jyaada inke paas raha hai.
Inka 1 beta hai jiski shaadi hochuki hai.

Karan Kapoor- Yeh ghar ka bada beta. Ek imaandaar IPS officer. Bachpan se hi police banne ka shauk tha. College ke baad usi shauk ko pura kiya. College mein hi ek ladki se pyaar hogya tha. IPS banne ke baad inhone shaadi karli hai. Abhi bas 6 mahine hi hue hai. Apne sabhi bhai behen se bahot pyaar karta hai.

Nandini Kapoor: Karan ki patni. Ghar ki badi bahu. Bahot hi pyaari hai. Ghar mein sabka mann behla ke rakhti hai. Apne se bado ka aadar samaan karti hai. Aur choto se pyaar karti hai. Ek housewife hai. Inko aur Karan ko milane mein Raj ke saath ek shaks ne bahot saath diya tha.

Ashok Kapoor(Papa)- Yeh hai apne hero ke papa. Mumbai ke ek jaane maane businessman. Aise toh yehlog Rajasthan ke Jaipur se belong karte hai. Par pichle 18 saal se yehlog Mumbai mein hi rehte hai.

Smita Kapoor(Mummy)- Yeh apne hero ki mummy hai. Ek housewife hai. Apne sabhi bachho se bahot pyaar karti hai. Hero mein toh inki jaan basti hai. Jab tak woh khaana naa khaale yeh khaana nahi khaati.

Inke 3 bachhe hai.

Shruti Kapoor- Yeh hero ki badi behen hai. Apne hero se 2 saal badi hai. Apne chote bhai beheno se bahot pyaar karti hai. Khaash kar apne hero se. Apni bhabhi se bahot masti karti hai bilkul best friend ke jaise. Shaadi tay hochuki hai inke hi pasand ke ladke se. College love hai. Filhal ghar mein hi jyaada se jyaada time spend karti hai.

Aarav Kapoor- Yeh apne hero ka chota bhai hai. Hero ko apna role model maanta hai. Usi ki tarah banna chahta hai. College complete hochuka hai. Apne dad ki company hi join ki hai but hero abhi isko kaam karne nhi deta. Kehta hai aage chalke sab tumhe hi dekhna hai par abhi life ko enjoy karo. Par yeh bhi kabhi kabhi office jaata hai.

Raj Kapoor(Hero)- Yeh hai apni kahani ka hero. Ghar mein sabka laadla. Ghar ke har member ko ispe naaz hai. Jyaada bolta nhi hai. Bas kaam se hi kaam rakhta hai. Apni mummy se thoda naraz hai isiliye unse filhal baat nhi karta. Reason aage pata chalega. Apne dad aur bade papa ki company sambhalta hai. Ashok aur Vijay ne bhi company ki jimmedaari isko hi de rakhi hai. Isiliye woh bhi jyaada tar ghar mein rehte hai.

Yash Roy- Yeh Raj ka best friend cum bhai hai. Raj ke saath uski company mein hi kaam karta hai. Yeh Raj ko apna saga bhai hi maanta hai. Iske liye kuch bhi karde. Raj and family ke mumbai shift hone ke baad se yeh saath hai. Saath school saath college aur ab saath mein career. Iske bade bhai ke saath hi Shruti ki shaadi horahi hai.

Ishant Roy- Yash ka bada bhai aur Shruti ka hone wala pati. Yeh aur Shruti mumbai mein shift hone ke baad se saath hai par pyaar college mein jaakar hua. Kuch saal pehle inke parents chardhaam ki yatra pe gaye the jaha ek accident mein inki death hogyi. Tabse apne papa ka business yehi sambhalta hai. Yash chahta toh apna family business join kar sakta tha. Par isne Raj ka saath chuna.

Ishita Roy- Ishant aur Yash ki choti behen. Yeh apne bade bhai ki madad karti hai business mein. Padhai khatam hochuki hai. Bahot jyaada chulbuli hai. Par bahot pyaari hai. Yash se jyaada yeh Raj ko maanti hai. Par isse Yash ko koi shikayat nhi hai.

Mumbai sehar. Desh ki mayanagri. Bahot se log alag alag sapne lekar iss sehar mein aate hai. Kuch ke sapne pure hote hai toh kuch ke adhoore reh jaate hai. Aur aise hi ek sapna leke 2 bhai iss sehar mein aaye the aur unhone ek company start ki jo aaj Kapoor Group of Companies mumbai sehar ki jaani maani company ban chuki hai.

Bahot saari companies iss company ke saath tie up karna chahti hai. Iss company ki suruaat ki thi Ashok aur uske bhai Vijay ne milke. Dono ki mehnat ke bal pe aaj yeh company iss mukaam mein hai. Yeh kehna galat nhi hoga iss company ko iss mukaam mein laane ka jyaade se jyaada credit Ashok ke bhai Vijay ko jaata hai par kuch saal baad iss company ko aur aage badhaya Raj ne. Ashok aur Vijay ne bas uske decision ko support kiya aur uska backbone bane. ​

Nice update