Incest Chawla Family Ki Kahani - Adultery, Romance,Eroticism, Incest. EXCLUSIVELY FOR XFORUM (COMPLETED)

[Casinar]

Superb end.
Marvelous story with lots of imaginations for the Readers to think upon at the end.
This is real quality of experienced and intelligent writer like you.
Hats off to you for this voluminous work which looked always real.
Thanks for making us to go through such a good and fantastic writeup.

thanks very much amita. i am happy that you liked it. thanks very much for reading and for all support and encouragement along the story.

 

[Casinar]

Awesome update casi bhai,
Update to shandaar hai lekin aisa lag raha hai jaise end kafi fast tha,
fir bhi ye kahani bahot hi lajawab thi,
Poori kahani sanjana ke saath hi chalti hai,
aur usi ke saath khatm bhi ho jati hai,
Deepti bilkul sanjana ki carbon copy nikli,

bahot shukriya Jitu bhai... haan end fast tha magar eisa hi hona tha.... ziada lamba khinchne se koyi faeda nahin hota... ab agar vivaan aur Sanjana ke beech wohi phir se sexual relationship likhne lagta to khud ko boring mehsoos feel hone laga tha... buss jo main ne ending ke liye socha tha, socha chalo yahin uss end ko dikha deta hoon..... aakhir yahin tak ana tha kahani ko.... Umeed hai in the whole story aap ko passand aya Jitu bhai.
shuru se aap sath bane rahe isske liye dil ki gehraayi se aap ka shukraguzaar hoon.
thanks very much for all your appreciative comments and support all along the story bhai.

 

[Casinar]

Casi bahi, you are great, Now we will be living in a hangover.

Thanks for the awesome story. Keep it up and keep on writing many more stories.

thanks very much brother. I am happy having readers like you around. you were one of my ardent reader from the days of exbii since 2010 and I feel indebted to you for your constant support and encouraging words.

 

[Casinar]

Behtreenn chawala house me new dhamka
Waiting for part 2

shukriya bhai.... i am not sure isska part 2 hoga...... socha hi nahin iss bare mein...khair dekhenge kabhi mood bana to

 

[Casinar]

Waitingfor part 2 bro.. brilliant way 2 end story. Feeling sad for both sanjana n vivaan.

thanks very much dear. glad that you liked the ending.
Not sure part 2 will ever come

 

[Casinar]

What? kahani end bhi ho gaya?
eise keise?
abhi padhta hon

end hona hi tha nah kabhi nah kabhi

 

[Casinar]

Nic update

thank you Tahir

 

[Casinar]

Casi bhai sach mein bahut dukh ho raha hai iss kahani ko end hote dekh kar.
yehi ek thread tha yahan jiss ko main sabse jiada passand karta tha lo ab ho gaya isska... bhai please isska second part bhi banao nah bhai
Raha iss last update ki to main kia kahun aap to magic crate karte ho apne shabdon se aur situations bana kar. buss jado jeisa likhte ho aap yehi bahut hi passand hai mujhe.
main ne bilkool bhi nahin socha tha ke sanjana ki death ho jaegi achanak iss tarah se. yeh bilkol hi khayaal ke baahar tha.
main ne to socha tha yeh 200 upoopdate ke upar tak chalega.
vivaan kitna tadapne laga tha, jab usski bari ayi sex karne ki to sanjana chal bassi, aur sanjana khud tayar thi usske saath sone ko magar hamesha ke liye so gayi wo to.
magar bhai kia end likha hai aap ne yeh bhi soch ke bilkool baahar tha wow. fantastic end likha hai aap ne story ki.
matlab sanjana hi Sanjana hai kahani mein aap ne kayi baar kaha tha ke sanjana iss kahani ki sabse ehem kirdaar hai wo aap ne bilkool saabit karke dikhaya. kahani shuru hui sanjana se aur end hui Sanjana se hi. sanjana nah rehkar bhi kahani mein aap ne ussko zinda rakha woww what an idea bhai....
Aur sach manu to Vivaan ko sanjana mil hi gayi deepti ke roop mein aur wo bhi incestuous relationship mein involved ho hi gayi.
kia ending tha bhai aap apne har kirdaar ho bade ehmiyat dete ho yahan tak ke deepti ka role bhi ehem raha.
shabaash casi shabaash. kamaal ki story likhe hai aap ne issi liye to ap ke diwane hein hum sab.
#bhai agla part jarur likhna bhai.
thanks very much for this lovely story.

tehe dil se shukriya itni achchi comment ke liye dost aur shuru se ant tak saath banne rehne ke liye bahot bahot shukriya

 

[Casinar]

Fabulous update
Superb ending
You are a genius Casi bro
The story have everything like drama emotions thriller Murder love making true love everything
I want to give you an oscar for story writing screenplay and dialogues.
and I also want to give Booker award.
the whole story is playing like a movie in front of me it's just amazing thank you for the such a lovely story.
Thank you very much.
I hope we are going to entertain like this in future also.

thanks you very very much dear James bro.
thanks for staying with me all along al the updates of this thread,
thanks for suport and all comments.
thanks loads my dear.

 

[Rjdon]

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