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Incest Chawla Family Ki Kahani - Adultery, Romance,Eroticism, Incest. EXCLUSIVELY FOR XFORUM (COMPLETED)

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wow, Casi bro this story has come to an end already?
just cant believe this.....
well what an end, what a story, what a thread, everything has been just fantastic, overwhelming, breathtaking, fabulous....
I really can't find the right words to qualify the quality and intensity of this story. it's one of the most impressive one.
regarding this last update its just fantastic, and what a way to end it..... the story according to me could have gone many more updates but i don't know why you ended it abruptly or could be you really had planned to end it this way as it sounds very well prepared and balanced the way you made Deepti grow up and replace Sanjana..... that is the most lovely part of the story. i never had even imagined that, you proved again to be a wonderful and intelligent writer by bringing back the incestuous relationship by or by crook you succeeded to keep that alive in the story and let us work out our imagination what now would be going in the Chawla family.... it started with incestuous relationship and ended on an even hotter note.
very intelligent from your part to get Deepti involved in that and you said it in the very few words when Vivaan talks to her asking her either her grandfather or uncle Aarav never seen undergarment which made all readers know that she has affair with the men in the house.....
Casi bro soon i will give a general review about this wonderful sex story, for now, accept this comment of this last update. i have to go through the most beautiful updates i loved in this thread then will give another general review about this story.
Thank you so very very much for entertaining us with this fantastic, mindblowing story for the past 7/8 months.
Thanks again and again casi bro. you are just a marvellous writer.

Thanks very very much for this very beautiful final review Rowdy bro. :love:
 
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kahani end bhi ho gayi bhai?
kia kahun bhai afsos bhi ho raha hai aur khushi bhi.
khushi iss liye ke baaki writers ki tarah aap ne kahani ko bich mein chorra nahin ek ke baad ek update dete gaye aap jab tak kahani end nahin hua, afsos iss liye ho raha ke itni achi kahani padhne ko mila itne mahinon tak, hamara entertainment hota raha magar ab kahan se milega eisi kahani padhne ko.....
bahut acha safar raha casi bhai aap ko follow karte hue is kahani ko padhna aur anjoy karna.
bahut hi badhya kahani hai aur jitne bhi updates diye aap ne sab ek se badhkar ek rahe hein, iss kahani mein sab kuch mila padhne ko. emotion, feelings, pyar, sex, incest, emotional breaks, crimes, suspense, excitement sab kuch tha iss kahani mein jo hona chahiye bhai bahut hi maja aya.....
ab ata hoon iss last update par.....
afsos ke sanjana ne atmahatiya kar liya khud ke car ko uss truck ke niche laakar.....
itne mahinon ke baad jab Vivaan ko mauka mila sanjana ke karib jane ko tabhi ussne ussko kho diya hamesha ke liye...
magar bhai kia situationa banaya aap ne, kia ending kiya aap ne hum sab ko itne majedaar wali end dekar vah bhai vah...bilkool bhi nahin socha tha ke sanjana ke roop mein deepti khadi hogi apne baap ke saamne aur jo thoda sa likha aap ne us se sab bolkol saaf samajh mein agaya ke ab sab deepti ke saat lage hue hein jabke wo 18 saal ki ho gayi hai....sirf chand lines mein aap ne sab kuch samjha diya humko....matla aap ne end ek haseen note par hi kiya kahani ko.
to vivaan ne assal mein wohi kiya jo chawla family mein hota aya hai barson se....
wow casi bhai wooow kamaal ka last update de diya hai aap ne bahut hi jabardast aur majedaar ending kiya hai ap ne iss kahani ka. sach mein adbudh ending hai.
bahut hi badhya......... ab to puchna yehi hai ke kia isska second part aega ya nahin? lagta to eisa hai ke isska second part jarur ban sakta hai, to kia aap hum sab ke liye issko continue karoge bhai?
darkhwast hai bhai issko age badhana zaroor.
issi intezaar mein rahenge bhai
thanks very very much for this wonderful and very beautiful story.

Bahot bahot shukriya itni khubsurat review ke liye Nayan bhai
 
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iss kahani ko end hote hue dekh kar sach mein dukh hua bidu.
yeh bahut mast chal raha tha, iss mein aur bhi bahut kuch ho sakta tha mere khayal se magar aap ne kyun end kiya yeh aap behtar janon.
end dhamakedaar hai, majedaar hai aur bahut ascharya janak bhi hai.
bilkool nahin socha tha ke deepti ka wo roop aega 13 sal baad.
ap ek bahut behtareen writer ho aur aap jaante ho kab kahan aur keise end karna hai. sab kuch aap ne plan kiya hoga pehle se hi eisa hi lagh raha hai iss last update ko padhke. aap ne deepti ka kirdaar banaya iss kahani mein jissko shuru se kissi ne shayad koyi importance hi nahin diya magar ussko aakhir mein sanjana ka jagah lena tha yeh aap jaante the aur koyi nahin. vah maja agaya bhai.
kia isska second part ega bidu? lagta to eisa hi hai magar aap behtar jaanon.
mujhlo ye kahani behad passand aayi shuru se hi. bahut hi enjoy kiya shuru se , issko step by step follow kiya aur khub anand liya issko padhke.
eise majedaar aur hot story ke liye bahut bahut shukriya bidu.
hats off you you you really rocked.
love and respect to you from king my dear.
bahut bahut shukriya itni achi review ke liye kind bro
 
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ab iss ke bare mein main kia kahun casi bhai samajh mein nahin ata.
mujhko bada bada review dena nahin ata buss wohi kehta hoon jo dil kehta hai aur jo lagta hai.
yeh update sirf ap jeisa writer hi likh sakta hai, eisa end aap ke caliber ka writer hi bana sakta hai.
bahut hi jabardast ending likha hai aap ne. hum to sapnon mein bhi eisa end soch bhi nahin sakte the bhai.
kamaal ke jabardast wale writer ho aap.
sad hua main padhke ke sanjana ki death ho gayi balke ussne khudkussi kiya tang aakar, aur jiada afsos yeh jaan kar hua ke vivaan jab sanjana ko bhogne ke liye tayaar hua tabhi sanjana chal bassi.
mujhe inn donon ke sex dekhna matlab padhna tha . bahut maja ata. main ne socha tha ke iss update mein inn donon ke bahut hot encounter hoga.
magar ki idea kia situation banaya aap ne bhai bada maja aya padhke ke deepti bilkol sanjana nikli ghar ke.
wohi hihihihihihih, wohi ada ke khud baap, dada, chacha teenon ussko lene lage.
chand linon mein aap ne sab kuch keh diya aur sab samajh mein agaya ke kia maajra hai.
ekdum jabardast end hai bhai isske liye aap ko badhayan aur mubarakbaad casi shsh khan bhai.
first update se ab tak jiss tarah se bina rukawat ek ke baad ek update aap dete aaye ho isske liye hum aap ke aabhaari hai.
aap ne hum sab reader ko itna khush rakha itne dinon tak isske liye tehe dil se aap ka shukriya.
yeh wo kahani hai jo barson hamare dimaagh mein bassa rahega. aur main to issko baar bar padhta rahunga yeh pakka hai.
bahut bahut shukriya casi bhai itni achchi, mast aur majedaar kahani ke liye.
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:congrats: :flowers:
bahot shukriya bhai itni achi review dene ke liye
 
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iss kahani ki eisa khaatemaa hoga yeh soch se bolkool baahar tha, yeh ek aap hi kar sakte ho bhai.
mubarak ho kahani ko end tak laane ke liye casi shah khan bhai.
bahut hi hot, erotic aur very exciting story rahi hai yeh chawla family ki kahani.
bilkkol mast aur majedaar, shaandaar, lajawwab updates diye hein al along iss pure kahani ke dauraan.
itna enjoy to humne shaayad hi kiya kissi aur kahani padhte waqt jitna iss kahani ko kiya.
aap ke har ek update last wale se jiada jabardast hota tha, har update mein sochna padhta tha ke ab kia hone wala hai. aap ne iss kahani mein kariban sab kuch dala la, sex, incest, love, hatred, crome, aur muhabat. emotion ki to baat hi nah karein % updates mein emotions bhre hue hein.
chalo sanjana ko jaana para achah kiya aap ne kyunke aap ko deepti ko jo laana tha saamne... kia kamaal ka idea hai bhai sanjana ko hata kar deepti ko usske roop dhaaran karne ka, yeh soch se bilkol baahar tha. sirf aap hi eisa soch sakte ho. vah vah vah.
Casi bhai pata nahin aap ka shukriya keise ada karein itni achi kahani ke liye. upar se aap ne non stop sabhi update diye bina ruke, isske liye hum aap ka bahut shukrguzaar hein.
hamein behad khushi hai ke aap ne hum readers logon ka itna khayaal kiya aur shikaayat ka bilkool mauka nahin diya iss kahani likhte waqt.
behad umda kahani thi bhai aur isska following lagta hai banna hi chahiye bhai. aap chaahe to kia nahin ho sakta aap issko jarur aguey badha sakte ho, eisa umeed hai humko.
to issi intezaar mein rahenge bhai ke chawla family ka sequel saamne aaye jald hi.
bahut bahut shukriya casi bhai itni achi kahani ke liye.
bahot bahot shukriya Husein bhai itni badi aur achchi review ke liye
 
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Casi Bro kya jabardast tarike ke saath end Kiya story yar.. it has every thing emotions drama erotica wht not u covered in yr story... Bhai the best part of ur story is u hv few characters n u play with them n tht is amazing... More over readers easily identify it.. Though never wanted u to end so soon, bt then the end was epic...I hope u come back with many more stories....
bahot bahot shukriya jaan bhai, mujhe khushi hui ke tumko passand aya kahani
agle kahani start kar diya hoon bhai zaroor padhna
 
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