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[Shahrukh]

Awesome update bhai keep posting

 

[KDM 1994]

Nice update Bhai..

 

[tpk]

Update - 31​

Janvi : (chillate hue) mummy... Mummy dekho is kutte ne apka favorite flower vase tod diya.

Aaabbbb aaaaggggeeee......
(Flash back continuous )

Reyansh ko ye sunte hi dar sa lagne laga tha. Janvi ki awaj bhi Shikha Rajput (Mom) ke Kanoon Tak pahunch chuki thi aur flower pot tutane Ki Baat sunkar Shikha Rajput bhi jaldi mein hall mein pahuch gyi.
Hall Mein pahunchne ke bad Jaise hi usne flower pot ki or Dekha use Tuta Hua Mila Jise Dekhkar vah gusse mein Lal Pili Hone Lagi aur gusse mein chillake pucha.

Shikha rajput : (gusse me chilla ke) kis ne yah Behuda harkat ki hai??

Reyansh to uski maa ki ye gusse bhari awaz sunkar hi sehem gaya kyuki usko pata tha galti uski ho ya na ho par maar to use hi padegi uper se janvi ka jhut.

Shikha : Maine poochha kisne kiya yah?
Janvi : mom harkat isi kutte ki hai isi Ne aapka favourite flower pot Gira ke Tod Diya.
Shikha : (gusse se daat piste hue) Teri Itni Himmat Ki Tune Mera Itna mahanga flower vase Tod Diya.
Reyansh : nhi m maa maine nhi kiya ye pehele se hi tuta hua hai.
Shikha : yani tu bolna chahta hai ki meri beti jhut bol rahi hai. tujhe pata bhi hai vo flower vase kitne ka tha. Aaj mai batati hu tujhe jhut bolne aur itna mehnga flower vase todne ki kimat kya hoti hai.

Ye bol shikha rajput palti aur apne room me kuch dhoondh ne lagi. Reyansh bechara waise hi dara hua tha aur apni maa ke muh se ye shabd sunkar to dar se kapne hi laga ki ab aage kya hoga. Wo yaha se bhag bhi nhi sakta tha kyuki agar wo bhagta to ye baat aur badh jati kyuki phir ye baat uske baap ko bhi batayi jati jo reyansh ke liye achcha nhi hota is liye majburi me reyansh wahi dar se kap kapate hue khada tha.

Janvi : dekh ab tera kya haal hota hai.
Reyansh : didi ye aapne achcha nhi kiya.

Ye baat chote se reyansh ne akhon me mote mote asoon liye kahi thi. Reyansh aaj bohot hi bebas aur asahay mehsus kar raha tha. Aaj uski akhon me janvi ke liye nafrat jalak rahi thi. Kaisi ladki thi janvi jise apne chote bhai ki aakhon me asun nhi dikhai de rahe the, na hi use reyansh ki masumiyat dikhai de rahi thi.

Tabhi shikha apne hath me chamde ka belt liye room se bahar aayi aur gusse me bolne lagi.

Shikha : aaj ke bad tum yaad rakhoge ki galti karne ki saza kya hoti hai.

Ye kehte hue qo reyansh ke pass aayi aur use ek jor ka chata de mara
Ccchhhhhaaattttaaakkkkk.....
Jisse reyansh jamin par niche gir pada aur subakte hue aasun bahane laga. Par kisiko us bechare ke asoono ka koi mol nhi tha na hi uske dil ke masumiyat ka.
Shikha itne me hi nhi ruki aur jamin pe pade reyansh pe belt ke mar ki bauchar kar di
Sat... Sat... Sattt saattt
Reyansh bas chilla raha tha dard me uski akhon se nirantar asun beh rahe the.
Reyansh : aaahhh.... M maine kuch nhi kiya p plz mat maro aahhh...
Reyansh ab pet ke bal aa chuka tha aur shikha uske pith par belt barsa rahi thi. Anyasa hi reyansh ke muh se nikla.

Reyansh : aaahhhh maaaa.... DARD ho rha hai aaahhh maaaa...

Par bechara wo pukar bhi kise raha tha jo uapar belt barsa rahi thi. jab maa hi ye sab kare to bachcha ummid lagaye bhi to kisse. Janvi aur uske dost ye sab dekh kar enjoy kar rahe the na unhe iss baat ka dukh tha aur na hi pachtava.
Par reyansh ki ma ki pukar kisi aur ne sun li thi aur wo daudte hue awaz ki taraf aayi aur jab pohoch kar dekha reyansh per belt barsaye ja rahe hai to bhagte hue aayi aur reyansh ko cover kar liya aur belt ki maar khud khane lagi. Ye shaks aur koi nhi balki reyansh ki saima maa thi jo uske bachav me aa chuki thi. Shikha ko iss baat se bhi farak nhi pada aur wo saima pe bhi belt barsane lagi.
Jab reyansh ko belt lagni band hui to usne apni asun se bhari aakgen khol ke dekhi to usne paya ki use uski saima maa ne cover kar liya hai aur uske badle ki maar wo kha rahi thi.
Saima : (rote hue) aahh.. Malkin mat mariye reyansh ko aahhh.... Chod dijiye malkin

Par shikha to jaise pathar dil ho gyi thi uspe iska koi asar nhi hua. Par reyansh se ye sab dekha nhi gaya.
Reyansh : ( chikh chikh ke rote hue ) mat maro meri maa ko.
Ye bolte gue reyansh ne saima ko palat diya aur khud uper ki aur ho gaya jis karan uska muh saima ki aur tha aur pith shikha ki aur ab maar reyansh kha raha tha aur bas chup chap asun baha raha tha. Jab saima ne dekha to bol padi.
Saima : nhi betaa...
Shikha bas belt barsa rahi thi reyansh ki puri pith chotil ho gayi thi wo bas apni saima maa ki aur dekte hue shikha ki maar ko jhel raha tha. Reyansh ki halat adhmari ho chali thi. Saima bohot koshish kar rahi thi reyansh ko hatane ki par reyansh use hatane nhi de raha tha kyuki use pata tha agar wo hata to belt uski saimaa maa ko lagegi iss liye reyansh sirf chup chap asun bahate hue mar jhel raha tha .
Reyansh ne itne dard me bhi saima ki tarf dekha aur halka sa dard me muskurate hue bola.
Reyansh : m mere r rehte meri maa ko koi nhi marega..

Saima ye sunke chikh chikh ke rone lagi kyuki reyansh use palatne nhi de raha tha to wo kuch kar bhi nhi sakti thi.

Aaj reyansh ko janm dene wali shikha rajput ko keval flower vase tutne ki awaj sunayi di par aaj kuch aur bhi tuta tha wo use nhi sun payi aur wo tha chote se reyansh ka masum dil kyuki dil tutne ki awaj nhi hoti na. Reayansh aur maar na jhel paya aur saima ke uper hi gir kar apni akhen band karli . Reyansh ke yun akhen band karne se to jaise saima ka dil hi muh me aa gya usne turant reyansh ko palta .
Saima : (rote Hue)ye kya kar diya aap ne mere reyansh ke sath..

Reyansh ke behosh hone ke karan shikha bhi thodi dar gyi kahi mar to nhi gaya to usne marna band kiya aur boli.
Shikha : kuch nhi hua hai ise maar se bachne ke liye natak kar raha hai. Iss bar chood rahi hu agli bar aisa kiya to anjam isse bhi bura hoga ye bol wo waha se chali gayi.
Reyansh ki chachi aur beti bhi ye sab dekh ke muskura rahi thi. Janvi hi unhe yaha bula layi thi ye bol kar ki free ka action show chal raha hai.
Saima ne turant reyansh ka chehra apne god me liya
Saima : (subakte hue) uth na reyansh beta dekh teri maa ko koi nhi marega uthna... Betaaa... Smmm.. Smmm

Saima ko kuch suja nhi to usne reyansh ko godh me utha liye hospital jane ke liye .jaise hi usne reyansh ko godh me uthaya to dekha reyansh ki puri pith khun se sarabor thi puri pith chil aur udhad chuki thi. Sara khun riste hue saima ke pure kapde bhiga raha tha. Saima kisi tarah reyansh ko uthake ghar se bahar nikli aur auto dhudne lagi hospital jane ke liye par use auto nhi mil raha tha unki halat dekh kar. Saima jaise taise padal 8 km chal kar reyansh ko hospital le gyi aur uska ilaj kar waya.

Ek ye maa thi jo reyansh ke liye itna sab kuch kar rahi thi jo uska saga bhi nhi tha aur ek shikha thi jo sirf reyansh se nafrat karna janti thi.

(flashback end)


Baaki badme

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very nice

 

[Aarav540]

Nice update bro......but thoda chota uodate tha...phir bhi bahut acchhxa laga padha kar

 

[Naik]

Update - 31​

Janvi : (chillate hue) mummy... Mummy dekho is kutte ne apka favorite flower vase tod diya.

Aaabbbb aaaaggggeeee......
(Flash back continuous )

Reyansh ko ye sunte hi dar sa lagne laga tha. Janvi ki awaj bhi Shikha Rajput (Mom) ke Kanoon Tak pahunch chuki thi aur flower pot tutane Ki Baat sunkar Shikha Rajput bhi jaldi mein hall mein pahuch gyi.
Hall Mein pahunchne ke bad Jaise hi usne flower pot ki or Dekha use Tuta Hua Mila Jise Dekhkar vah gusse mein Lal Pili Hone Lagi aur gusse mein chillake pucha.

Shikha rajput : (gusse me chilla ke) kis ne yah Behuda harkat ki hai??

Reyansh to uski maa ki ye gusse bhari awaz sunkar hi sehem gaya kyuki usko pata tha galti uski ho ya na ho par maar to use hi padegi uper se janvi ka jhut.

Shikha : Maine poochha kisne kiya yah?
Janvi : mom harkat isi kutte ki hai isi Ne aapka favourite flower pot Gira ke Tod Diya.
Shikha : (gusse se daat piste hue) Teri Itni Himmat Ki Tune Mera Itna mahanga flower vase Tod Diya.
Reyansh : nhi m maa maine nhi kiya ye pehele se hi tuta hua hai.
Shikha : yani tu bolna chahta hai ki meri beti jhut bol rahi hai. tujhe pata bhi hai vo flower vase kitne ka tha. Aaj mai batati hu tujhe jhut bolne aur itna mehnga flower vase todne ki kimat kya hoti hai.

Ye bol shikha rajput palti aur apne room me kuch dhoondh ne lagi. Reyansh bechara waise hi dara hua tha aur apni maa ke muh se ye shabd sunkar to dar se kapne hi laga ki ab aage kya hoga. Wo yaha se bhag bhi nhi sakta tha kyuki agar wo bhagta to ye baat aur badh jati kyuki phir ye baat uske baap ko bhi batayi jati jo reyansh ke liye achcha nhi hota is liye majburi me reyansh wahi dar se kap kapate hue khada tha.

Janvi : dekh ab tera kya haal hota hai.
Reyansh : didi ye aapne achcha nhi kiya.

Ye baat chote se reyansh ne akhon me mote mote asoon liye kahi thi. Reyansh aaj bohot hi bebas aur asahay mehsus kar raha tha. Aaj uski akhon me janvi ke liye nafrat jalak rahi thi. Kaisi ladki thi janvi jise apne chote bhai ki aakhon me asun nhi dikhai de rahe the, na hi use reyansh ki masumiyat dikhai de rahi thi.

Tabhi shikha apne hath me chamde ka belt liye room se bahar aayi aur gusse me bolne lagi.

Shikha : aaj ke bad tum yaad rakhoge ki galti karne ki saza kya hoti hai.

Ye kehte hue qo reyansh ke pass aayi aur use ek jor ka chata de mara
Ccchhhhhaaattttaaakkkkk.....
Jisse reyansh jamin par niche gir pada aur subakte hue aasun bahane laga. Par kisiko us bechare ke asoono ka koi mol nhi tha na hi uske dil ke masumiyat ka.
Shikha itne me hi nhi ruki aur jamin pe pade reyansh pe belt ke mar ki bauchar kar di
Sat... Sat... Sattt saattt
Reyansh bas chilla raha tha dard me uski akhon se nirantar asun beh rahe the.
Reyansh : aaahhh.... M maine kuch nhi kiya p plz mat maro aahhh...
Reyansh ab pet ke bal aa chuka tha aur shikha uske pith par belt barsa rahi thi. Anyasa hi reyansh ke muh se nikla.

Reyansh : aaahhhh maaaa.... DARD ho rha hai aaahhh maaaa...

Par bechara wo pukar bhi kise raha tha jo uapar belt barsa rahi thi. jab maa hi ye sab kare to bachcha ummid lagaye bhi to kisse. Janvi aur uske dost ye sab dekh kar enjoy kar rahe the na unhe iss baat ka dukh tha aur na hi pachtava.
Par reyansh ki ma ki pukar kisi aur ne sun li thi aur wo daudte hue awaz ki taraf aayi aur jab pohoch kar dekha reyansh per belt barsaye ja rahe hai to bhagte hue aayi aur reyansh ko cover kar liya aur belt ki maar khud khane lagi. Ye shaks aur koi nhi balki reyansh ki saima maa thi jo uske bachav me aa chuki thi. Shikha ko iss baat se bhi farak nhi pada aur wo saima pe bhi belt barsane lagi.
Jab reyansh ko belt lagni band hui to usne apni asun se bhari aakgen khol ke dekhi to usne paya ki use uski saima maa ne cover kar liya hai aur uske badle ki maar wo kha rahi thi.
Saima : (rote hue) aahh.. Malkin mat mariye reyansh ko aahhh.... Chod dijiye malkin

Par shikha to jaise pathar dil ho gyi thi uspe iska koi asar nhi hua. Par reyansh se ye sab dekha nhi gaya.
Reyansh : ( chikh chikh ke rote hue ) mat maro meri maa ko.
Ye bolte gue reyansh ne saima ko palat diya aur khud uper ki aur ho gaya jis karan uska muh saima ki aur tha aur pith shikha ki aur ab maar reyansh kha raha tha aur bas chup chap asun baha raha tha. Jab saima ne dekha to bol padi.
Saima : nhi betaa...
Shikha bas belt barsa rahi thi reyansh ki puri pith chotil ho gayi thi wo bas apni saima maa ki aur dekte hue shikha ki maar ko jhel raha tha. Reyansh ki halat adhmari ho chali thi. Saima bohot koshish kar rahi thi reyansh ko hatane ki par reyansh use hatane nhi de raha tha kyuki use pata tha agar wo hata to belt uski saimaa maa ko lagegi iss liye reyansh sirf chup chap asun bahate hue mar jhel raha tha .
Reyansh ne itne dard me bhi saima ki tarf dekha aur halka sa dard me muskurate hue bola.
Reyansh : m mere r rehte meri maa ko koi nhi marega..

Saima ye sunke chikh chikh ke rone lagi kyuki reyansh use palatne nhi de raha tha to wo kuch kar bhi nhi sakti thi.

Aaj reyansh ko janm dene wali shikha rajput ko keval flower vase tutne ki awaj sunayi di par aaj kuch aur bhi tuta tha wo use nhi sun payi aur wo tha chote se reyansh ka masum dil kyuki dil tutne ki awaj nhi hoti na. Reayansh aur maar na jhel paya aur saima ke uper hi gir kar apni akhen band karli . Reyansh ke yun akhen band karne se to jaise saima ka dil hi muh me aa gya usne turant reyansh ko palta .
Saima : (rote Hue)ye kya kar diya aap ne mere reyansh ke sath..

Reyansh ke behosh hone ke karan shikha bhi thodi dar gyi kahi mar to nhi gaya to usne marna band kiya aur boli.
Shikha : kuch nhi hua hai ise maar se bachne ke liye natak kar raha hai. Iss bar chood rahi hu agli bar aisa kiya to anjam isse bhi bura hoga ye bol wo waha se chali gayi.
Reyansh ki chachi aur beti bhi ye sab dekh ke muskura rahi thi. Janvi hi unhe yaha bula layi thi ye bol kar ki free ka action show chal raha hai.
Saima ne turant reyansh ka chehra apne god me liya
Saima : (subakte hue) uth na reyansh beta dekh teri maa ko koi nhi marega uthna... Betaaa... Smmm.. Smmm

Saima ko kuch suja nhi to usne reyansh ko godh me utha liye hospital jane ke liye .jaise hi usne reyansh ko godh me uthaya to dekha reyansh ki puri pith khun se sarabor thi puri pith chil aur udhad chuki thi. Sara khun riste hue saima ke pure kapde bhiga raha tha. Saima kisi tarah reyansh ko uthake ghar se bahar nikli aur auto dhudne lagi hospital jane ke liye par use auto nhi mil raha tha unki halat dekh kar. Saima jaise taise padal 8 km chal kar reyansh ko hospital le gyi aur uska ilaj kar waya.

Ek ye maa thi jo reyansh ke liye itna sab kuch kar rahi thi jo uska saga bhi nhi tha aur ek shikha thi jo sirf reyansh se nafrat karna janti thi.

(flashback end)


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Ek dayen bhi apne bachche ke aisa nahi kerti lanat h aisa maao k ooper
Baherhal dekhte h jab Reyansh k wapas aane k baad in sabka kia hota h

 

[Bilal jan]

Update - 31​

Janvi : (chillate hue) mummy... Mummy dekho is kutte ne apka favorite flower vase tod diya.

Aaabbbb aaaaggggeeee......
(Flash back continuous )

Reyansh ko ye sunte hi dar sa lagne laga tha. Janvi ki awaj bhi Shikha Rajput (Mom) ke Kanoon Tak pahunch chuki thi aur flower pot tutane Ki Baat sunkar Shikha Rajput bhi jaldi mein hall mein pahuch gyi.
Hall Mein pahunchne ke bad Jaise hi usne flower pot ki or Dekha use Tuta Hua Mila Jise Dekhkar vah gusse mein Lal Pili Hone Lagi aur gusse mein chillake pucha.

Shikha rajput : (gusse me chilla ke) kis ne yah Behuda harkat ki hai??

Reyansh to uski maa ki ye gusse bhari awaz sunkar hi sehem gaya kyuki usko pata tha galti uski ho ya na ho par maar to use hi padegi uper se janvi ka jhut.

Shikha : Maine poochha kisne kiya yah?
Janvi : mom harkat isi kutte ki hai isi Ne aapka favourite flower pot Gira ke Tod Diya.
Shikha : (gusse se daat piste hue) Teri Itni Himmat Ki Tune Mera Itna mahanga flower vase Tod Diya.
Reyansh : nhi m maa maine nhi kiya ye pehele se hi tuta hua hai.
Shikha : yani tu bolna chahta hai ki meri beti jhut bol rahi hai. tujhe pata bhi hai vo flower vase kitne ka tha. Aaj mai batati hu tujhe jhut bolne aur itna mehnga flower vase todne ki kimat kya hoti hai.

Ye bol shikha rajput palti aur apne room me kuch dhoondh ne lagi. Reyansh bechara waise hi dara hua tha aur apni maa ke muh se ye shabd sunkar to dar se kapne hi laga ki ab aage kya hoga. Wo yaha se bhag bhi nhi sakta tha kyuki agar wo bhagta to ye baat aur badh jati kyuki phir ye baat uske baap ko bhi batayi jati jo reyansh ke liye achcha nhi hota is liye majburi me reyansh wahi dar se kap kapate hue khada tha.

Janvi : dekh ab tera kya haal hota hai.
Reyansh : didi ye aapne achcha nhi kiya.

Ye baat chote se reyansh ne akhon me mote mote asoon liye kahi thi. Reyansh aaj bohot hi bebas aur asahay mehsus kar raha tha. Aaj uski akhon me janvi ke liye nafrat jalak rahi thi. Kaisi ladki thi janvi jise apne chote bhai ki aakhon me asun nhi dikhai de rahe the, na hi use reyansh ki masumiyat dikhai de rahi thi.

Tabhi shikha apne hath me chamde ka belt liye room se bahar aayi aur gusse me bolne lagi.

Shikha : aaj ke bad tum yaad rakhoge ki galti karne ki saza kya hoti hai.

Ye kehte hue qo reyansh ke pass aayi aur use ek jor ka chata de mara
Ccchhhhhaaattttaaakkkkk.....
Jisse reyansh jamin par niche gir pada aur subakte hue aasun bahane laga. Par kisiko us bechare ke asoono ka koi mol nhi tha na hi uske dil ke masumiyat ka.
Shikha itne me hi nhi ruki aur jamin pe pade reyansh pe belt ke mar ki bauchar kar di
Sat... Sat... Sattt saattt
Reyansh bas chilla raha tha dard me uski akhon se nirantar asun beh rahe the.
Reyansh : aaahhh.... M maine kuch nhi kiya p plz mat maro aahhh...
Reyansh ab pet ke bal aa chuka tha aur shikha uske pith par belt barsa rahi thi. Anyasa hi reyansh ke muh se nikla.

Reyansh : aaahhhh maaaa.... DARD ho rha hai aaahhh maaaa...

Par bechara wo pukar bhi kise raha tha jo uapar belt barsa rahi thi. jab maa hi ye sab kare to bachcha ummid lagaye bhi to kisse. Janvi aur uske dost ye sab dekh kar enjoy kar rahe the na unhe iss baat ka dukh tha aur na hi pachtava.
Par reyansh ki ma ki pukar kisi aur ne sun li thi aur wo daudte hue awaz ki taraf aayi aur jab pohoch kar dekha reyansh per belt barsaye ja rahe hai to bhagte hue aayi aur reyansh ko cover kar liya aur belt ki maar khud khane lagi. Ye shaks aur koi nhi balki reyansh ki saima maa thi jo uske bachav me aa chuki thi. Shikha ko iss baat se bhi farak nhi pada aur wo saima pe bhi belt barsane lagi.
Jab reyansh ko belt lagni band hui to usne apni asun se bhari aakgen khol ke dekhi to usne paya ki use uski saima maa ne cover kar liya hai aur uske badle ki maar wo kha rahi thi.
Saima : (rote hue) aahh.. Malkin mat mariye reyansh ko aahhh.... Chod dijiye malkin

Par shikha to jaise pathar dil ho gyi thi uspe iska koi asar nhi hua. Par reyansh se ye sab dekha nhi gaya.
Reyansh : ( chikh chikh ke rote hue ) mat maro meri maa ko.
Ye bolte gue reyansh ne saima ko palat diya aur khud uper ki aur ho gaya jis karan uska muh saima ki aur tha aur pith shikha ki aur ab maar reyansh kha raha tha aur bas chup chap asun baha raha tha. Jab saima ne dekha to bol padi.
Saima : nhi betaa...
Shikha bas belt barsa rahi thi reyansh ki puri pith chotil ho gayi thi wo bas apni saima maa ki aur dekte hue shikha ki maar ko jhel raha tha. Reyansh ki halat adhmari ho chali thi. Saima bohot koshish kar rahi thi reyansh ko hatane ki par reyansh use hatane nhi de raha tha kyuki use pata tha agar wo hata to belt uski saimaa maa ko lagegi iss liye reyansh sirf chup chap asun bahate hue mar jhel raha tha .
Reyansh ne itne dard me bhi saima ki tarf dekha aur halka sa dard me muskurate hue bola.
Reyansh : m mere r rehte meri maa ko koi nhi marega..

Saima ye sunke chikh chikh ke rone lagi kyuki reyansh use palatne nhi de raha tha to wo kuch kar bhi nhi sakti thi.

Aaj reyansh ko janm dene wali shikha rajput ko keval flower vase tutne ki awaj sunayi di par aaj kuch aur bhi tuta tha wo use nhi sun payi aur wo tha chote se reyansh ka masum dil kyuki dil tutne ki awaj nhi hoti na. Reayansh aur maar na jhel paya aur saima ke uper hi gir kar apni akhen band karli . Reyansh ke yun akhen band karne se to jaise saima ka dil hi muh me aa gya usne turant reyansh ko palta .
Saima : (rote Hue)ye kya kar diya aap ne mere reyansh ke sath..

Reyansh ke behosh hone ke karan shikha bhi thodi dar gyi kahi mar to nhi gaya to usne marna band kiya aur boli.
Shikha : kuch nhi hua hai ise maar se bachne ke liye natak kar raha hai. Iss bar chood rahi hu agli bar aisa kiya to anjam isse bhi bura hoga ye bol wo waha se chali gayi.
Reyansh ki chachi aur beti bhi ye sab dekh ke muskura rahi thi. Janvi hi unhe yaha bula layi thi ye bol kar ki free ka action show chal raha hai.
Saima ne turant reyansh ka chehra apne god me liya
Saima : (subakte hue) uth na reyansh beta dekh teri maa ko koi nhi marega uthna... Betaaa... Smmm.. Smmm

Saima ko kuch suja nhi to usne reyansh ko godh me utha liye hospital jane ke liye .jaise hi usne reyansh ko godh me uthaya to dekha reyansh ki puri pith khun se sarabor thi puri pith chil aur udhad chuki thi. Sara khun riste hue saima ke pure kapde bhiga raha tha. Saima kisi tarah reyansh ko uthake ghar se bahar nikli aur auto dhudne lagi hospital jane ke liye par use auto nhi mil raha tha unki halat dekh kar. Saima jaise taise padal 8 km chal kar reyansh ko hospital le gyi aur uska ilaj kar waya.

Ek ye maa thi jo reyansh ke liye itna sab kuch kar rahi thi jo uska saga bhi nhi tha aur ek shikha thi jo sirf reyansh se nafrat karna janti thi.

(flashback end)


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Update - 32​

Ek ye maa thi jo reyansh ke liye itna sab kuch kar rahi thi jo uska saga bhi nhi tha aur ek shikha thi jo sirf reyansh se nafrat karna janti thi.

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Aaabbb aaagggeee.....

(Present)

isi Tarah Reyansh Apne bite gamo Ko Yad Karta hua Sharab Peete Peete So Gaya. Yeh Raat Na reyansh ke liye acchi thi na Noor ke liye. Jaise Taise raat cut gai aur naya Savera aya Aaj bahut Kuchh Hona Tha Noor ki Jindagi Mein Par Noor ko is baat ki bilkul bhi Chinta Nahin thi Kyunki uska Reyansh uske sath Khada tha.
Khair nyi subah bhi aa gyi sabse pehle noor ki neend khuli .wo angdayi lete hue uthi to paya reyansh uske bed ke niche uske sir ke paas sir tikaye baitha hai. Use ye dekh kar reyansh pe bada pyaar aya ye soch kar ki reyansh uska kitna khayal rakhta hai. Par jaise hi wo bed se utri to dekha reyansh jaha ser tika ke baitha hai waha kafi sharab ki khali bottles padi hai. Pehele noor ko ye dekh ke gussa ata hai ki reyansh ne sharab pi par thodi hi der me use samajh ata hai ki wo to reyansh ka kandha liye ro li par reyansh kya karta. Ye sab sochte hue noor ko khud par hi bohot gussa ane lagta hai. Phir wo uth ke sidha niche kitchwn me chali jati hai aur nibu pani banane lagti hai. Nibu pani banane ke bad noor sidha apne bedroom me reyansh ke pass chali gyi aur use paas baith kar use uthane lagi.

Noor : (reyansh ko hilate hue) Reyansh uthiye naa subah ho gyi hai mehmaan aur hospital wale bho aaate honge.

Noor ke jagane se reyansh bhi kunmunate hue uth gaya aur apni aakhen kholten hi usne paya ki noor nibu paani liye uske paas baithi hai. To reyansh ne glass ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha.

Reyansh : ye kya hai.
Noor : (muh fulate hue) nibu pani hai.
Reyansh : aur wo kis liye.
Noor : (tana marte hue )ye jo maine itni sari sharab ki bottles pi hai kal raat to sir dukh raha hai iss liye apne liye layi hu.
Reyansh : ( sir niche jhuka ke) sorry raat ko control nhi hua.

Noor me jhat se reyansh ka chehra apne hathon me pakad liya aur utha ka uski aakhon me dekhte hue boli.

Noor : sorry bolne ki jarurat nhi hai galti meri hi hai ki mai aap ki tarah aap ka sahara na ban ski aur haa aaj ke baad ye ser kisi ke aage jhukna nhi chahiye mere bhi nhi samaje
Reyansh : (sar ko hilate hue) hmmm..

Phir thodi der me dono fresh ho gue aur nashta kar liya. Noor ye sab reyansh ke liye upri man se kar rahi thi andar se wo poori tarah toot kar bikhar chuki thi. Thodi der me hospital wale noor ke ammi abbu ki dead bodies lekar aaye jise dekhte hi noor ko phir se sadma lag gaya aur wo un bodies ke paas baith kar unhe niharne lagi .reyansh noor ke sath baith kar uska dard batna chahta tha lekin baki ke kaam bhi baki the thodi der me noor ke rishtedar aur mehman bhi aane wale the to reyansh ko uski bhi taiyari karni thi to reyansh akhri widayi ki taiyariya karne laga.

Thodi hi der me mehmaan ane lage aur iss ghatna pe apna shok vaykt karne lage. Aurate noor ke paas baith kar use dilasa dene lagi aur saare admi reyansh ke paas the usse baat kar rahe the aur puch rahe the ki ye accident kaise hua. Kuch hi waqt bacha tha janaza nikal ne ke liye tabhi ghar me entry hui 3 logo ki jo aate hi noor ke paas chal diye.
Inme 2 aadmi the aur ek aurat.

Aurat : (rote hue) beta ye sab kaise ho gaya.
Noor : ( subakte hue) chachi dekho na abbu uth nhi rahe hai... Smm.. Smmm.

Ji haa ye aurat noor ki chachi thi aur do aadmi noor ke chacha aur unka beta tha.

( aima baig (noor ki chachi) : 46 age hai. Dikhne me average gehua rang .nature aur niyat ka aage pata chal hi jayega.

Hafiz baig (noor ke chacha) : 49 age hai. Multi national company me job karte hai. Sidhe sadhe admi hai simple life jite hai.
Nature se bohot helpful hai.

Zafar baig ( noor ke chacha ka beta) : 25 saal age hai ye bhi apne baap ke sath usi company me job karta hai. Niyat se hi harmi hai. Hawas kut kut ke bhari hai. )

N Chachi : beta aise rote nhi himmat rakh.

Zafar uaki chachi ka ladka jo aaj noor ko pehli baar bina nakab ke dekh raha tha wo to jaise noor me kho hi gaya aur bas use ghure ja raha tha wo bola..

Zafar : haa noor chinta mat karo mai hu na.

Noor uske iss baat pe kuch na boli. Aur reyansh ki taraf dekhne lagi.