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Superb updateUPDATE - 12
Jaise hi 12 baje mujhe aajebh sa "DARD" hone laga aisa lag raha tha ki kisine mere sharir pe tezab phek diya ho. Mera sharir hawa me uthne laga. Thodi der baad jalan kam ho gyi aur sharir bhi niche aa gya. Jaise hi maine aakhen kholi kii......
Aabb aaggeee...........
Jab maine aakhen kholi meri aakhen pori tarah se kali thi.
Agar mujhe koi aise dekh leta to pakka heart attack se mar jata. Mai dekh pa raha tha aas paas ka andhera mera andar ho raha tha. Mai hil bhi nhi paa rha tha bas sare andhere ko apne andar jata hua dekh pa rha tha. Jab sara andhera andar aa gya meri aakhen band ho gyi aur mai wahi jamin pe behosh ho gya.
Jab savere aankh khuli tab mai wahi jamin pe pada hua tha abhi koi savere ke 5 baje honge aas paas sab sunsan tha. Mai utha aur aas paas dekhne laga. Achanak mujhe raat ki saari baate yaad aa gyi maine apne aap ko hath laga ke sab check kiya aur paya meri t shirt gayab thi aur body bohot sakt ho gyi thi 6 pack abs ke 8 pack ho gye the.
Ander ajeeb si takat mehsus ho rhi thi par kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Tabhi mere kano me ek sard awaj sunayi di.
Awaj : ajeeb mehsus ho rha hai.
Mai idhar udhar dekhne laga
Mai : k.. Kon hai. Aur kaha hai.
Awaj : darne ki jarurat nhi hai.
Mai : par ho kaha.
Awaj : tumhare andar.
Mai : kkkkkyaa?
Awaj : mai tumhara hi ek hissa hu.
Mai : kaise.
Awaj : mai hamesha se tumhare andar tha.
Mai : aaisa nhi ho skta.
Awaj : acha to ye batao jab tumhare pita tumhe pit te to tumhare ghav itne jaldi kyu bhar jate, haa wo mai hi tha jo ye karta tha.
Aur pandit ji ne sirf wo manhoos wali jhut kahi thi par usne ek baat sach kahi thi aur wo ye thi ke "Bachcha hamesha kali shaktiyo ki chatra chaya me rahega.
Mai : (chekhte hue) ye nhi ho skta.
Awaj : kyu nhi ho skta yaad karo jab sabne tumhe chod diya tha tab tumhare sath sirf mai tha! andhera tha!.
Mai : jab itne samay se shant the to ab kyu aae ho.
Awaj : kyuki ab tum 18 ke ho gye mujhe apnane ke yogya ho gye ho to mujhe swikaro kyuki ye takat tumhe abhi nhi mili hai ye to is janm ke pehele bhi tumhare paas thi.
Mai (man me : sahi hi to keh raha hai jab sabne thukra diya to hai hi kon ab parwah karne ke liye. Waise bhi ye mera hissa hai apna leta hu agar kuch ho bhi gya to peche waise bhi koi rone wala nhi hai.)
Mai : mujhe manzur hai.
Awaj : Mujhe apnane se pehele ek baat dhyaan se sun lo tumhara sharir abhi bhi iss takat ko nhi sambhal sakta iss liye tumhe apne aap ko aur taiyaar krna hoga.
Mai : (sard leheje me) mujhe swikaar hai.
Agle hi pal meri aakhen kali ho gyi rang aur safed ho gya sharir kisi lohe ke saman ho gya chehera aur akarshak ho gya . Thodi der baad akhen normal ho gyi par bhaki sab waisa hi raha.
Phir sabse pehele maine apne saman se nyi shirt peheni .ab sochne laga ki aage kya kiya jaaye kyuki shakti istemaak abhi nhi kar skte th kyu ki pehele uspe kabu pana tha. Ab sabse bada sawaal tha paise kaise kamaye jaye ? Kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Par kuch to karna tha hi aur ab kal ke baad ab bina power ke bhi mera sharirik bal aam logo se kayi guna bad chuka tha aur dimaag bhi. Sath hi sath mere chehere ka aur body ka akarshan bhi bad chuka tha ek pal ke liye to mai hi apne aap ko aine me dekh ke pehchan nhi pata. Khair mai nikal pada kuch paise kamane. mai ek gali se guzar hi raha tha ki mujhe ek ladki ki cheekh sunayi di mai samajh gaya kuch gadbad hai iss liye uss disha me badh gaya . Jaise hi mai waha pohocha dekha teen ladke ek ladki ko pakad ke kahi le ja rhe the iss liye mai bina der kiya waha pohoch ek punch ek admi ke pith pe jad diya. Iss karan baki do log mujhe dekh gusse me meri aur bhadhe isse pehele wo kuch kar pate maine ek round kick ghuma ke dono ko gira diya. Wo dono to wapas uth gye par jise mai pith pe punch mara tha wo utha hi nhi ye dekh wo dono dar ke waha se bhaag gye. Phir mai us ladki ki aaur badha wo mujhe hi ghur rahi thi par ye batana mushkil tha ki wo mere looks ki wajah se mujhe ghur rhi thi ya abhi jo hua uske karan. Maine usse pucha.
Mai : kyaa aap thik hai?
Mere puchne ke karan use hosh aya wo boli
Ladki : m..mai thik hu. Aapko kahi chot to nhi lagi.?
Mai : nhi mai thik hu ab mujhe chalna chahiye.
Dekhte hai aagee kya hota hai.......
NiceUPDATE - 12
Jaise hi 12 baje mujhe aajebh sa "DARD" hone laga aisa lag raha tha ki kisine mere sharir pe tezab phek diya ho. Mera sharir hawa me uthne laga. Thodi der baad jalan kam ho gyi aur sharir bhi niche aa gya. Jaise hi maine aakhen kholi kii......
Aabb aaggeee...........
Jab maine aakhen kholi meri aakhen pori tarah se kali thi.
Agar mujhe koi aise dekh leta to pakka heart attack se mar jata. Mai dekh pa raha tha aas paas ka andhera mera andar ho raha tha. Mai hil bhi nhi paa rha tha bas sare andhere ko apne andar jata hua dekh pa rha tha. Jab sara andhera andar aa gya meri aakhen band ho gyi aur mai wahi jamin pe behosh ho gya.
Jab savere aankh khuli tab mai wahi jamin pe pada hua tha abhi koi savere ke 5 baje honge aas paas sab sunsan tha. Mai utha aur aas paas dekhne laga. Achanak mujhe raat ki saari baate yaad aa gyi maine apne aap ko hath laga ke sab check kiya aur paya meri t shirt gayab thi aur body bohot sakt ho gyi thi 6 pack abs ke 8 pack ho gye the.
Ander ajeeb si takat mehsus ho rhi thi par kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Tabhi mere kano me ek sard awaj sunayi di.
Awaj : ajeeb mehsus ho rha hai.
Mai idhar udhar dekhne laga
Mai : k.. Kon hai. Aur kaha hai.
Awaj : darne ki jarurat nhi hai.
Mai : par ho kaha.
Awaj : tumhare andar.
Mai : kkkkkyaa?
Awaj : mai tumhara hi ek hissa hu.
Mai : kaise.
Awaj : mai hamesha se tumhare andar tha.
Mai : aaisa nhi ho skta.
Awaj : acha to ye batao jab tumhare pita tumhe pit te to tumhare ghav itne jaldi kyu bhar jate, haa wo mai hi tha jo ye karta tha.
Aur pandit ji ne sirf wo manhoos wali jhut kahi thi par usne ek baat sach kahi thi aur wo ye thi ke "Bachcha hamesha kali shaktiyo ki chatra chaya me rahega.
Mai : (chekhte hue) ye nhi ho skta.
Awaj : kyu nhi ho skta yaad karo jab sabne tumhe chod diya tha tab tumhare sath sirf mai tha! andhera tha!.
Mai : jab itne samay se shant the to ab kyu aae ho.
Awaj : kyuki ab tum 18 ke ho gye mujhe apnane ke yogya ho gye ho to mujhe swikaro kyuki ye takat tumhe abhi nhi mili hai ye to is janm ke pehele bhi tumhare paas thi.
Mai (man me : sahi hi to keh raha hai jab sabne thukra diya to hai hi kon ab parwah karne ke liye. Waise bhi ye mera hissa hai apna leta hu agar kuch ho bhi gya to peche waise bhi koi rone wala nhi hai.)
Mai : mujhe manzur hai.
Awaj : Mujhe apnane se pehele ek baat dhyaan se sun lo tumhara sharir abhi bhi iss takat ko nhi sambhal sakta iss liye tumhe apne aap ko aur taiyaar krna hoga.
Mai : (sard leheje me) mujhe swikaar hai.
Agle hi pal meri aakhen kali ho gyi rang aur safed ho gya sharir kisi lohe ke saman ho gya chehera aur akarshak ho gya . Thodi der baad akhen normal ho gyi par bhaki sab waisa hi raha.
Phir sabse pehele maine apne saman se nyi shirt peheni .ab sochne laga ki aage kya kiya jaaye kyuki shakti istemaak abhi nhi kar skte th kyu ki pehele uspe kabu pana tha. Ab sabse bada sawaal tha paise kaise kamaye jaye ? Kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Par kuch to karna tha hi aur ab kal ke baad ab bina power ke bhi mera sharirik bal aam logo se kayi guna bad chuka tha aur dimaag bhi. Sath hi sath mere chehere ka aur body ka akarshan bhi bad chuka tha ek pal ke liye to mai hi apne aap ko aine me dekh ke pehchan nhi pata. Khair mai nikal pada kuch paise kamane. mai ek gali se guzar hi raha tha ki mujhe ek ladki ki cheekh sunayi di mai samajh gaya kuch gadbad hai iss liye uss disha me badh gaya . Jaise hi mai waha pohocha dekha teen ladke ek ladki ko pakad ke kahi le ja rhe the iss liye mai bina der kiya waha pohoch ek punch ek admi ke pith pe jad diya. Iss karan baki do log mujhe dekh gusse me meri aur bhadhe isse pehele wo kuch kar pate maine ek round kick ghuma ke dono ko gira diya. Wo dono to wapas uth gye par jise mai pith pe punch mara tha wo utha hi nhi ye dekh wo dono dar ke waha se bhaag gye. Phir mai us ladki ki aaur badha wo mujhe hi ghur rahi thi par ye batana mushkil tha ki wo mere looks ki wajah se mujhe ghur rhi thi ya abhi jo hua uske karan. Maine usse pucha.
Mai : kyaa aap thik hai?
Mere puchne ke karan use hosh aya wo boli
Ladki : m..mai thik hu. Aapko kahi chot to nhi lagi.?
Mai : nhi mai thik hu ab mujhe chalna chahiye.
Dekhte hai aagee kya hota hai.......
Bhai 795 words the ye aur aap 3000 keh rahe ho. Khair, kaafi badhiya update tha. Reyansh ko kaali shaktiyan mil gayin hain. Ab wo nikal pada hai paise kamane. Shayad ye ladki uski madad kar paaye usmein. Dekhna hoga ke Reyansh ke saath aage kya hota hai. Bhai thoda jaldi update dene ka try kiya karo. Kyonki 795 words ka update to 2-3 din ke gap ke baad kaafi chhota hai.UPDATE - 12
Jaise hi 12 baje mujhe aajebh sa "DARD" hone laga aisa lag raha tha ki kisine mere sharir pe tezab phek diya ho. Mera sharir hawa me uthne laga. Thodi der baad jalan kam ho gyi aur sharir bhi niche aa gya. Jaise hi maine aakhen kholi kii......
Aabb aaggeee...........
Jab maine aakhen kholi meri aakhen pori tarah se kali thi.
Agar mujhe koi aise dekh leta to pakka heart attack se mar jata. Mai dekh pa raha tha aas paas ka andhera mera andar ho raha tha. Mai hil bhi nhi paa rha tha bas sare andhere ko apne andar jata hua dekh pa rha tha. Jab sara andhera andar aa gya meri aakhen band ho gyi aur mai wahi jamin pe behosh ho gya.
Jab savere aankh khuli tab mai wahi jamin pe pada hua tha abhi koi savere ke 5 baje honge aas paas sab sunsan tha. Mai utha aur aas paas dekhne laga. Achanak mujhe raat ki saari baate yaad aa gyi maine apne aap ko hath laga ke sab check kiya aur paya meri t shirt gayab thi aur body bohot sakt ho gyi thi 6 pack abs ke 8 pack ho gye the.
Ander ajeeb si takat mehsus ho rhi thi par kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Tabhi mere kano me ek sard awaj sunayi di.
Awaj : ajeeb mehsus ho rha hai.
Mai idhar udhar dekhne laga
Mai : k.. Kon hai. Aur kaha hai.
Awaj : darne ki jarurat nhi hai.
Mai : par ho kaha.
Awaj : tumhare andar.
Mai : kkkkkyaa?
Awaj : mai tumhara hi ek hissa hu.
Mai : kaise.
Awaj : mai hamesha se tumhare andar tha.
Mai : aaisa nhi ho skta.
Awaj : acha to ye batao jab tumhare pita tumhe pit te to tumhare ghav itne jaldi kyu bhar jate, haa wo mai hi tha jo ye karta tha.
Aur pandit ji ne sirf wo manhoos wali jhut kahi thi par usne ek baat sach kahi thi aur wo ye thi ke "Bachcha hamesha kali shaktiyo ki chatra chaya me rahega.
Mai : (chekhte hue) ye nhi ho skta.
Awaj : kyu nhi ho skta yaad karo jab sabne tumhe chod diya tha tab tumhare sath sirf mai tha! andhera tha!.
Mai : jab itne samay se shant the to ab kyu aae ho.
Awaj : kyuki ab tum 18 ke ho gye mujhe apnane ke yogya ho gye ho to mujhe swikaro kyuki ye takat tumhe abhi nhi mili hai ye to is janm ke pehele bhi tumhare paas thi.
Mai (man me : sahi hi to keh raha hai jab sabne thukra diya to hai hi kon ab parwah karne ke liye. Waise bhi ye mera hissa hai apna leta hu agar kuch ho bhi gya to peche waise bhi koi rone wala nhi hai.)
Mai : mujhe manzur hai.
Awaj : Mujhe apnane se pehele ek baat dhyaan se sun lo tumhara sharir abhi bhi iss takat ko nhi sambhal sakta iss liye tumhe apne aap ko aur taiyaar krna hoga.
Mai : (sard leheje me) mujhe swikaar hai.
Agle hi pal meri aakhen kali ho gyi rang aur safed ho gya sharir kisi lohe ke saman ho gya chehera aur akarshak ho gya . Thodi der baad akhen normal ho gyi par bhaki sab waisa hi raha.
Phir sabse pehele maine apne saman se nyi shirt peheni .ab sochne laga ki aage kya kiya jaaye kyuki shakti istemaak abhi nhi kar skte th kyu ki pehele uspe kabu pana tha. Ab sabse bada sawaal tha paise kaise kamaye jaye ? Kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Par kuch to karna tha hi aur ab kal ke baad ab bina power ke bhi mera sharirik bal aam logo se kayi guna bad chuka tha aur dimaag bhi. Sath hi sath mere chehere ka aur body ka akarshan bhi bad chuka tha ek pal ke liye to mai hi apne aap ko aine me dekh ke pehchan nhi pata. Khair mai nikal pada kuch paise kamane. mai ek gali se guzar hi raha tha ki mujhe ek ladki ki cheekh sunayi di mai samajh gaya kuch gadbad hai iss liye uss disha me badh gaya . Jaise hi mai waha pohocha dekha teen ladke ek ladki ko pakad ke kahi le ja rhe the iss liye mai bina der kiya waha pohoch ek punch ek admi ke pith pe jad diya. Iss karan baki do log mujhe dekh gusse me meri aur bhadhe isse pehele wo kuch kar pate maine ek round kick ghuma ke dono ko gira diya. Wo dono to wapas uth gye par jise mai pith pe punch mara tha wo utha hi nhi ye dekh wo dono dar ke waha se bhaag gye. Phir mai us ladki ki aaur badha wo mujhe hi ghur rahi thi par ye batana mushkil tha ki wo mere looks ki wajah se mujhe ghur rhi thi ya abhi jo hua uske karan. Maine usse pucha.
Mai : kyaa aap thik hai?
Mere puchne ke karan use hosh aya wo boli
Ladki : m..mai thik hu. Aapko kahi chot to nhi lagi.?
Mai : nhi mai thik hu ab mujhe chalna chahiye.
Dekhte hai aagee kya hota hai.......