Fantasy DARD

[Smith_15]

Next update please

 

[Reza]

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next

 

[A.A.G.]

UPDATE - 12

Jaise hi 12 baje mujhe aajebh sa "DARD" hone laga aisa lag raha tha ki kisine mere sharir pe tezab phek diya ho. Mera sharir hawa me uthne laga. Thodi der baad jalan kam ho gyi aur sharir bhi niche aa gya. Jaise hi maine aakhen kholi kii......

Aabb aaggeee...........

Jab maine aakhen kholi meri aakhen pori tarah se kali thi.


Agar mujhe koi aise dekh leta to pakka heart attack se mar jata. Mai dekh pa raha tha aas paas ka andhera mera andar ho raha tha. Mai hil bhi nhi paa rha tha bas sare andhere ko apne andar jata hua dekh pa rha tha. Jab sara andhera andar aa gya meri aakhen band ho gyi aur mai wahi jamin pe behosh ho gya.
Jab savere aankh khuli tab mai wahi jamin pe pada hua tha abhi koi savere ke 5 baje honge aas paas sab sunsan tha. Mai utha aur aas paas dekhne laga. Achanak mujhe raat ki saari baate yaad aa gyi maine apne aap ko hath laga ke sab check kiya aur paya meri t shirt gayab thi aur body bohot sakt ho gyi thi 6 pack abs ke 8 pack ho gye the.


Ander ajeeb si takat mehsus ho rhi thi par kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Tabhi mere kano me ek sard awaj sunayi di.
Awaj : ajeeb mehsus ho rha hai.
Mai idhar udhar dekhne laga
Mai : k.. Kon hai. Aur kaha hai.
Awaj : darne ki jarurat nhi hai.
Mai : par ho kaha.
Awaj : tumhare andar.
Mai : kkkkkyaa?
Awaj : mai tumhara hi ek hissa hu.
Mai : kaise.
Awaj : mai hamesha se tumhare andar tha.
Mai : aaisa nhi ho skta.
Awaj : acha to ye batao jab tumhare pita tumhe pit te to tumhare ghav itne jaldi kyu bhar jate, haa wo mai hi tha jo ye karta tha.
Aur pandit ji ne sirf wo manhoos wali jhut kahi thi par usne ek baat sach kahi thi aur wo ye thi ke "Bachcha hamesha kali shaktiyo ki chatra chaya me rahega.
Mai : (chekhte hue) ye nhi ho skta.
Awaj : kyu nhi ho skta yaad karo jab sabne tumhe chod diya tha tab tumhare sath sirf mai tha! andhera tha!.
Mai : jab itne samay se shant the to ab kyu aae ho.
Awaj : kyuki ab tum 18 ke ho gye mujhe apnane ke yogya ho gye ho to mujhe swikaro kyuki ye takat tumhe abhi nhi mili hai ye to is janm ke pehele bhi tumhare paas thi.
Mai (man me : sahi hi to keh raha hai jab sabne thukra diya to hai hi kon ab parwah karne ke liye. Waise bhi ye mera hissa hai apna leta hu agar kuch ho bhi gya to peche waise bhi koi rone wala nhi hai.)
Mai : mujhe manzur hai.
Awaj : Mujhe apnane se pehele ek baat dhyaan se sun lo tumhara sharir abhi bhi iss takat ko nhi sambhal sakta iss liye tumhe apne aap ko aur taiyaar krna hoga.
Mai : (sard leheje me) mujhe swikaar hai.

Agle hi pal meri aakhen kali ho gyi rang aur safed ho gya sharir kisi lohe ke saman ho gya chehera aur akarshak ho gya . Thodi der baad akhen normal ho gyi par bhaki sab waisa hi raha.
Phir sabse pehele maine apne saman se nyi shirt peheni .ab sochne laga ki aage kya kiya jaaye kyuki shakti istemaak abhi nhi kar skte th kyu ki pehele uspe kabu pana tha. Ab sabse bada sawaal tha paise kaise kamaye jaye ? Kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Par kuch to karna tha hi aur ab kal ke baad ab bina power ke bhi mera sharirik bal aam logo se kayi guna bad chuka tha aur dimaag bhi. Sath hi sath mere chehere ka aur body ka akarshan bhi bad chuka tha ek pal ke liye to mai hi apne aap ko aine me dekh ke pehchan nhi pata. Khair mai nikal pada kuch paise kamane. mai ek gali se guzar hi raha tha ki mujhe ek ladki ki cheekh sunayi di mai samajh gaya kuch gadbad hai iss liye uss disha me badh gaya . Jaise hi mai waha pohocha dekha teen ladke ek ladki ko pakad ke kahi le ja rhe the iss liye mai bina der kiya waha pohoch ek punch ek admi ke pith pe jad diya. Iss karan baki do log mujhe dekh gusse me meri aur bhadhe isse pehele wo kuch kar pate maine ek round kick ghuma ke dono ko gira diya. Wo dono to wapas uth gye par jise mai pith pe punch mara tha wo utha hi nhi ye dekh wo dono dar ke waha se bhaag gye. Phir mai us ladki ki aaur badha wo mujhe hi ghur rahi thi par ye batana mushkil tha ki wo mere looks ki wajah se mujhe ghur rhi thi ya abhi jo hua uske karan. Maine usse pucha.

Mai : kyaa aap thik hai?
Mere puchne ke karan use hosh aya wo boli
Ladki : m..mai thik hu. Aapko kahi chot to nhi lagi.?
Mai : nhi mai thik hu ab mujhe chalna chahiye.

Dekhte hai aagee kya hota hai.......

nice update..!!
reyansh ke zindagi me hamesha se hi andhera tha usne kabhi reyansh sath nahi chhoda..aur ab reyansh ko kali shaktiya mil gayi hai toh uska sahi istemal karna usse sikhna padega kyunki reyansh hamesha se achha insan raha hai toh woh inn shaktiyon ka istemal achhe kamo ke liye hi karega..!! lekin jin logo ne usko dard diya hai ussi dard ka ehsas woh unn logo ko karake rahega..woh aise hi apne maa baap ko maaf nahi kar sakta..reyansh jis dard se gujra hai uss dard se unko bhi gujarna padega jinhone usse woh dard diya hai..!!

 

[A.A.G.]

bhai yeh bahot chhota update tha..waiting for next update..!!

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

UPDATE - 12

Jaise hi 12 baje mujhe aajebh sa "DARD" hone laga aisa lag raha tha ki kisine mere sharir pe tezab phek diya ho. Mera sharir hawa me uthne laga. Thodi der baad jalan kam ho gyi aur sharir bhi niche aa gya. Jaise hi maine aakhen kholi kii......

Aabb aaggeee...........

Jab maine aakhen kholi meri aakhen pori tarah se kali thi.


Agar mujhe koi aise dekh leta to pakka heart attack se mar jata. Mai dekh pa raha tha aas paas ka andhera mera andar ho raha tha. Mai hil bhi nhi paa rha tha bas sare andhere ko apne andar jata hua dekh pa rha tha. Jab sara andhera andar aa gya meri aakhen band ho gyi aur mai wahi jamin pe behosh ho gya.
Jab savere aankh khuli tab mai wahi jamin pe pada hua tha abhi koi savere ke 5 baje honge aas paas sab sunsan tha. Mai utha aur aas paas dekhne laga. Achanak mujhe raat ki saari baate yaad aa gyi maine apne aap ko hath laga ke sab check kiya aur paya meri t shirt gayab thi aur body bohot sakt ho gyi thi 6 pack abs ke 8 pack ho gye the.


Ander ajeeb si takat mehsus ho rhi thi par kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Tabhi mere kano me ek sard awaj sunayi di.
Awaj : ajeeb mehsus ho rha hai.
Mai idhar udhar dekhne laga
Mai : k.. Kon hai. Aur kaha hai.
Awaj : darne ki jarurat nhi hai.
Mai : par ho kaha.
Awaj : tumhare andar.
Mai : kkkkkyaa?
Awaj : mai tumhara hi ek hissa hu.
Mai : kaise.
Awaj : mai hamesha se tumhare andar tha.
Mai : aaisa nhi ho skta.
Awaj : acha to ye batao jab tumhare pita tumhe pit te to tumhare ghav itne jaldi kyu bhar jate, haa wo mai hi tha jo ye karta tha.
Aur pandit ji ne sirf wo manhoos wali jhut kahi thi par usne ek baat sach kahi thi aur wo ye thi ke "Bachcha hamesha kali shaktiyo ki chatra chaya me rahega.
Mai : (chekhte hue) ye nhi ho skta.
Awaj : kyu nhi ho skta yaad karo jab sabne tumhe chod diya tha tab tumhare sath sirf mai tha! andhera tha!.
Mai : jab itne samay se shant the to ab kyu aae ho.
Awaj : kyuki ab tum 18 ke ho gye mujhe apnane ke yogya ho gye ho to mujhe swikaro kyuki ye takat tumhe abhi nhi mili hai ye to is janm ke pehele bhi tumhare paas thi.
Mai (man me : sahi hi to keh raha hai jab sabne thukra diya to hai hi kon ab parwah karne ke liye. Waise bhi ye mera hissa hai apna leta hu agar kuch ho bhi gya to peche waise bhi koi rone wala nhi hai.)
Mai : mujhe manzur hai.
Awaj : Mujhe apnane se pehele ek baat dhyaan se sun lo tumhara sharir abhi bhi iss takat ko nhi sambhal sakta iss liye tumhe apne aap ko aur taiyaar krna hoga.
Mai : (sard leheje me) mujhe swikaar hai.

Agle hi pal meri aakhen kali ho gyi rang aur safed ho gya sharir kisi lohe ke saman ho gya chehera aur akarshak ho gya . Thodi der baad akhen normal ho gyi par bhaki sab waisa hi raha.
Phir sabse pehele maine apne saman se nyi shirt peheni .ab sochne laga ki aage kya kiya jaaye kyuki shakti istemaak abhi nhi kar skte th kyu ki pehele uspe kabu pana tha. Ab sabse bada sawaal tha paise kaise kamaye jaye ? Kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Par kuch to karna tha hi aur ab kal ke baad ab bina power ke bhi mera sharirik bal aam logo se kayi guna bad chuka tha aur dimaag bhi. Sath hi sath mere chehere ka aur body ka akarshan bhi bad chuka tha ek pal ke liye to mai hi apne aap ko aine me dekh ke pehchan nhi pata. Khair mai nikal pada kuch paise kamane. mai ek gali se guzar hi raha tha ki mujhe ek ladki ki cheekh sunayi di mai samajh gaya kuch gadbad hai iss liye uss disha me badh gaya . Jaise hi mai waha pohocha dekha teen ladke ek ladki ko pakad ke kahi le ja rhe the iss liye mai bina der kiya waha pohoch ek punch ek admi ke pith pe jad diya. Iss karan baki do log mujhe dekh gusse me meri aur bhadhe isse pehele wo kuch kar pate maine ek round kick ghuma ke dono ko gira diya. Wo dono to wapas uth gye par jise mai pith pe punch mara tha wo utha hi nhi ye dekh wo dono dar ke waha se bhaag gye. Phir mai us ladki ki aaur badha wo mujhe hi ghur rahi thi par ye batana mushkil tha ki wo mere looks ki wajah se mujhe ghur rhi thi ya abhi jo hua uske karan. Maine usse pucha.

Mai : kyaa aap thik hai?
Mere puchne ke karan use hosh aya wo boli
Ladki : m..mai thik hu. Aapko kahi chot to nhi lagi.?
Mai : nhi mai thik hu ab mujhe chalna chahiye.

Dekhte hai aagee kya hota hai.......

Awesome update

 

[Asif khan]

UPDATE - 10​

Mai nikl gya tha uske baad sab apne apne room me the. Swara ko uske room me band kar diya tha papa ne. Jab saima maa aai to kaam nipta ke jab mere room me aayi to mujhe nahi paya

Abbb aaaggggeeeee.........

Ab kahani 3rd point of view se chalegi.

Jab saima ne Reyansh ko uske room me nhi dekha to. Unka maan vichilit ho gya kyuki reyansh aksar uske room me hi rehta tha. Usne bathroom me bhi check kar liya waha bhi nhi tha kitchen me bhi dekh liya. Ab saima ko dar lagne laga to usne badi himmat juta ke shikha rajput (so called maa) ke kamre me gyi aur boli.
Saima maa : malkin kya apko pta hai reyansh kaha hai sara ghar dekh liya kahi nhi dikh rha hai??
Mummy : mujhe kya pta acha hi ho agar ghar chod ke chala jaye to.

Saima maa chup chap room se nikal jati hai aur phir se ek baar sab ke rooms me check karti hai. Sab ke room me check karne ke karan sab ko pta chal jata hai ki Reyansh mil nhi raha hai. Jab swara ko ye sab pata chala to uski to mano duniya hi ujad gyi. Wo wahi jamin pe baith ke jor jor se rone lagti hai. Jab janvi ko ye pata chala to use bhi dil me tez dardsa ho rha tha aur guilt bhi lag rha tha kyuki usne reyansh ke sath kya nhi kiya tha.
Sara ghar dhundhne ke baad saima ka sabr ka band toot gya aur wo zor zor se rone lagi. Use itne zor se rota sun sab waha jama ho gye tabhi mom boli.
Mummy : kyu us manhoos ke liye aasoon bahati ho wo to tumhara saga beta bhi nhi tha.
Saima maa (gusse me) : bas bohot ho gya ab mere bete reyansh ke liye koi ek shbd bhi nhi kahega. Kaisi maa ho tum dhikkar hai tumhari mamta pe.
Mummy : naukar ho to wo hi raho samjhi.
Saima maa : mai to yaha sirf reyansh ke liye aati thi. Naukri to mujhe kahi aur bhi mil jati.
Ab yaha mera reyansh hi nhi hai to mai yaha reh ke kya karungi. Mai aaj se hi ye naukri chodti hu.
Ye keh kar saima waha se chali gyi. Reyansh ke ghar chod ke jane ki baat se chachi, mummy aur papa kush the. Swara ka to ro ro ke bura haal tha. Janvi bhi bohot udas ho gyi thi aur rone lagi thi apne pashyatap ke karan.

Ab chalte hai Reyansh ki taraf.......
(Reyansh ki point of view se)
Jab subhe meri aaken khuli mai bench par uthkar baith gya. Sochne laga ki aaj kaam doondh na padega nhi to guzara karna mushkil hoga. Phir mai uth kar chal pada market ki aor kaam ki talash me. Mai din bhar ghumta raha kaam to nhi mila lekin logo ki dhutkar aur galiya zaroor mili. Aise hi din nikal gaya raat ke waqt thoda kuch kha liya ab paise bhi khatam hone aaye the. Ab to kaam dhoondna bhot zaroori ho gya tha. Agla din aya paise the nhi nashta karne ke liye to aise hi nikal gaya kaam doondhne ke liye. Dophar tak kaam dhoondhne ke baad kuch log dikhai diye khudayi ka kaam karne jaa rhe the ab koi kaam to mil nhi raha tha to socha yehi kaam sahi. Mai unke paas pahucha air poocha.
Mai : kaka kya mai bhi ye kaam kar sakta hu aapke sath.
Wo admi : are ye kaam koi bachcho ka nhi hai beta tum nhi kar paoge bohot kathin aur mehenat ka kaam hai.
Mai : kaka please karne dijiye mujhe bohot zaroorat hai kaam ki.
Wo admi : aisi bhi kya zaroorat beta ki itna kathin kaam bhi karne ko taiyar ho.
Mai : bas aisa samajh lijiye kaka ki agar aaj kaam nhi mila toh raat ka khana nasib nhi ho payega.
Meri baat sunke us aadmi ke paas kuch kehene ko nhi reh gaya tha isliye usne bhi apne sath kaam pe aane diya.
Hum construction site pe pahuch gye yaha bohot kaam the majdoori ke . Ab tha to ___ saal ka ladka aur itne kathin kaam ki adat bhi nhi thi to jada kaam na kar saka jis karan paise bhi kam mile. Jisse raat ke khane ke samay pura to nhi par adha pet bhar gya. Phir kya wahi apne bech par jake so gya kyuki shareer itna dukh rha tha ki bta nhi sakta tha hath bhi chil gye the .

Aise hi 6 mahine nikal gye iss beech mijhe swara aur saima maa ki bahut yaad aati thi.
In 6 mahino me kaam aur thakan me hi din nikal rahe the kuch paise bhi bacha rha tha mai. Ab mere liye acha din wo hota tha jis din pet bhar khana milta tha jaise koi tyohar ho to ma*ndir me pet bhar kha leta tha, kabhi friday ko masji*d me to kabhi gurudwar*e me.

Aggee dekhte hai kya hota hai........

very awesome

 

[Battu]

Yr update to thk hai but kaafi choti thi bcz itne time baad ayii hai is liye
But 1 request hai ke hero ko please chahe jitna bhi powerful bana fo pr bura mt banaana ke wo koi ghalat kaam naa kre aur kisi ka bura na chahe aur ho sake to apni powers ko control kr ke khud pr se.kaala saaya hata paye aur apni powers ko acha kr sake aur is beech us se koi ghalata kaam na ho , ye bhi dikha sakte ho ke hero apni powers ko acha ke liye use krta hai pr uske under ki burayiii us pr haawi hone ki try krti hai pr wo hamesha usse hara kr acha kaam hi krta hai apni power se aur is me uski himmat aur jazba uske friends,pyar,aur sisters etc brhaate hain aur us ki help krte hain .

Bhai achchha suggestions he par power achchhi aur buri nahi hoti, kali shaktiyon se bhi logo ka bhala ho sakta he depend karta he ki bande ki soch negetive he ya positive. Example k tour par tantrik aur aghori log kali shaktiyon ko hasil karte he but most off logo ki bhalayi k liye hi use karte he. Sari shaktiyo ka kendra Shiv ji hi he so darne ki zarurat nahi he ha yah zaruri h ki vah apni shaktiyon ko Handel karna sikhe, yog aur dhyan k dwara. Hero hamesha burai k khilaf hi ladta achcha lagta he so I think apne writer ne story plot soch kar hi kuch likhne ka prayas kiya h like kali shaktiyon ki chhatra chhaya me rahega. Kher apan log writer ko push nahi kar sakte nahi to wo story line se bhatak sakte he. Ummid karte he ki ek achchhi aur puri story padhne ko mile.

 

[Naik]

UPDATE - 12

Jaise hi 12 baje mujhe aajebh sa "DARD" hone laga aisa lag raha tha ki kisine mere sharir pe tezab phek diya ho. Mera sharir hawa me uthne laga. Thodi der baad jalan kam ho gyi aur sharir bhi niche aa gya. Jaise hi maine aakhen kholi kii......

Aabb aaggeee...........

Jab maine aakhen kholi meri aakhen pori tarah se kali thi.


Agar mujhe koi aise dekh leta to pakka heart attack se mar jata. Mai dekh pa raha tha aas paas ka andhera mera andar ho raha tha. Mai hil bhi nhi paa rha tha bas sare andhere ko apne andar jata hua dekh pa rha tha. Jab sara andhera andar aa gya meri aakhen band ho gyi aur mai wahi jamin pe behosh ho gya.
Jab savere aankh khuli tab mai wahi jamin pe pada hua tha abhi koi savere ke 5 baje honge aas paas sab sunsan tha. Mai utha aur aas paas dekhne laga. Achanak mujhe raat ki saari baate yaad aa gyi maine apne aap ko hath laga ke sab check kiya aur paya meri t shirt gayab thi aur body bohot sakt ho gyi thi 6 pack abs ke 8 pack ho gye the.


Ander ajeeb si takat mehsus ho rhi thi par kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Tabhi mere kano me ek sard awaj sunayi di.
Awaj : ajeeb mehsus ho rha hai.
Mai idhar udhar dekhne laga
Mai : k.. Kon hai. Aur kaha hai.
Awaj : darne ki jarurat nhi hai.
Mai : par ho kaha.
Awaj : tumhare andar.
Mai : kkkkkyaa?
Awaj : mai tumhara hi ek hissa hu.
Mai : kaise.
Awaj : mai hamesha se tumhare andar tha.
Mai : aaisa nhi ho skta.
Awaj : acha to ye batao jab tumhare pita tumhe pit te to tumhare ghav itne jaldi kyu bhar jate, haa wo mai hi tha jo ye karta tha.
Aur pandit ji ne sirf wo manhoos wali jhut kahi thi par usne ek baat sach kahi thi aur wo ye thi ke "Bachcha hamesha kali shaktiyo ki chatra chaya me rahega.
Mai : (chekhte hue) ye nhi ho skta.
Awaj : kyu nhi ho skta yaad karo jab sabne tumhe chod diya tha tab tumhare sath sirf mai tha! andhera tha!.
Mai : jab itne samay se shant the to ab kyu aae ho.
Awaj : kyuki ab tum 18 ke ho gye mujhe apnane ke yogya ho gye ho to mujhe swikaro kyuki ye takat tumhe abhi nhi mili hai ye to is janm ke pehele bhi tumhare paas thi.
Mai (man me : sahi hi to keh raha hai jab sabne thukra diya to hai hi kon ab parwah karne ke liye. Waise bhi ye mera hissa hai apna leta hu agar kuch ho bhi gya to peche waise bhi koi rone wala nhi hai.)
Mai : mujhe manzur hai.
Awaj : Mujhe apnane se pehele ek baat dhyaan se sun lo tumhara sharir abhi bhi iss takat ko nhi sambhal sakta iss liye tumhe apne aap ko aur taiyaar krna hoga.
Mai : (sard leheje me) mujhe swikaar hai.

Agle hi pal meri aakhen kali ho gyi rang aur safed ho gya sharir kisi lohe ke saman ho gya chehera aur akarshak ho gya . Thodi der baad akhen normal ho gyi par bhaki sab waisa hi raha.
Phir sabse pehele maine apne saman se nyi shirt peheni .ab sochne laga ki aage kya kiya jaaye kyuki shakti istemaak abhi nhi kar skte th kyu ki pehele uspe kabu pana tha. Ab sabse bada sawaal tha paise kaise kamaye jaye ? Kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Par kuch to karna tha hi aur ab kal ke baad ab bina power ke bhi mera sharirik bal aam logo se kayi guna bad chuka tha aur dimaag bhi. Sath hi sath mere chehere ka aur body ka akarshan bhi bad chuka tha ek pal ke liye to mai hi apne aap ko aine me dekh ke pehchan nhi pata. Khair mai nikal pada kuch paise kamane. mai ek gali se guzar hi raha tha ki mujhe ek ladki ki cheekh sunayi di mai samajh gaya kuch gadbad hai iss liye uss disha me badh gaya . Jaise hi mai waha pohocha dekha teen ladke ek ladki ko pakad ke kahi le ja rhe the iss liye mai bina der kiya waha pohoch ek punch ek admi ke pith pe jad diya. Iss karan baki do log mujhe dekh gusse me meri aur bhadhe isse pehele wo kuch kar pate maine ek round kick ghuma ke dono ko gira diya. Wo dono to wapas uth gye par jise mai pith pe punch mara tha wo utha hi nhi ye dekh wo dono dar ke waha se bhaag gye. Phir mai us ladki ki aaur badha wo mujhe hi ghur rahi thi par ye batana mushkil tha ki wo mere looks ki wajah se mujhe ghur rhi thi ya abhi jo hua uske karan. Maine usse pucha.

Mai : kyaa aap thik hai?
Mere puchne ke karan use hosh aya wo boli
Ladki : m..mai thik hu. Aapko kahi chot to nhi lagi.?
Mai : nhi mai thik hu ab mujhe chalna chahiye.

Dekhte hai aagee kya hota hai.......

Kali shaktiya mil gayi look or achcha ho gaya
Ladki ko bacha ker achcha kaam kia dekhte h kia yeh ladki Reyansh ki zindagi m koyin badlaw leker aayegi kia
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Shaandaar update bhai

 

[Vk248517]

UPDATE - 12

Jaise hi 12 baje mujhe aajebh sa "DARD" hone laga aisa lag raha tha ki kisine mere sharir pe tezab phek diya ho. Mera sharir hawa me uthne laga. Thodi der baad jalan kam ho gyi aur sharir bhi niche aa gya. Jaise hi maine aakhen kholi kii......

Aabb aaggeee...........

Jab maine aakhen kholi meri aakhen pori tarah se kali thi.


Agar mujhe koi aise dekh leta to pakka heart attack se mar jata. Mai dekh pa raha tha aas paas ka andhera mera andar ho raha tha. Mai hil bhi nhi paa rha tha bas sare andhere ko apne andar jata hua dekh pa rha tha. Jab sara andhera andar aa gya meri aakhen band ho gyi aur mai wahi jamin pe behosh ho gya.
Jab savere aankh khuli tab mai wahi jamin pe pada hua tha abhi koi savere ke 5 baje honge aas paas sab sunsan tha. Mai utha aur aas paas dekhne laga. Achanak mujhe raat ki saari baate yaad aa gyi maine apne aap ko hath laga ke sab check kiya aur paya meri t shirt gayab thi aur body bohot sakt ho gyi thi 6 pack abs ke 8 pack ho gye the.


Ander ajeeb si takat mehsus ho rhi thi par kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Tabhi mere kano me ek sard awaj sunayi di.
Awaj : ajeeb mehsus ho rha hai.
Mai idhar udhar dekhne laga
Mai : k.. Kon hai. Aur kaha hai.
Awaj : darne ki jarurat nhi hai.
Mai : par ho kaha.
Awaj : tumhare andar.
Mai : kkkkkyaa?
Awaj : mai tumhara hi ek hissa hu.
Mai : kaise.
Awaj : mai hamesha se tumhare andar tha.
Mai : aaisa nhi ho skta.
Awaj : acha to ye batao jab tumhare pita tumhe pit te to tumhare ghav itne jaldi kyu bhar jate, haa wo mai hi tha jo ye karta tha.
Aur pandit ji ne sirf wo manhoos wali jhut kahi thi par usne ek baat sach kahi thi aur wo ye thi ke "Bachcha hamesha kali shaktiyo ki chatra chaya me rahega.
Mai : (chekhte hue) ye nhi ho skta.
Awaj : kyu nhi ho skta yaad karo jab sabne tumhe chod diya tha tab tumhare sath sirf mai tha! andhera tha!.
Mai : jab itne samay se shant the to ab kyu aae ho.
Awaj : kyuki ab tum 18 ke ho gye mujhe apnane ke yogya ho gye ho to mujhe swikaro kyuki ye takat tumhe abhi nhi mili hai ye to is janm ke pehele bhi tumhare paas thi.
Mai (man me : sahi hi to keh raha hai jab sabne thukra diya to hai hi kon ab parwah karne ke liye. Waise bhi ye mera hissa hai apna leta hu agar kuch ho bhi gya to peche waise bhi koi rone wala nhi hai.)
Mai : mujhe manzur hai.
Awaj : Mujhe apnane se pehele ek baat dhyaan se sun lo tumhara sharir abhi bhi iss takat ko nhi sambhal sakta iss liye tumhe apne aap ko aur taiyaar krna hoga.
Mai : (sard leheje me) mujhe swikaar hai.

Agle hi pal meri aakhen kali ho gyi rang aur safed ho gya sharir kisi lohe ke saman ho gya chehera aur akarshak ho gya . Thodi der baad akhen normal ho gyi par bhaki sab waisa hi raha.
Phir sabse pehele maine apne saman se nyi shirt peheni .ab sochne laga ki aage kya kiya jaaye kyuki shakti istemaak abhi nhi kar skte th kyu ki pehele uspe kabu pana tha. Ab sabse bada sawaal tha paise kaise kamaye jaye ? Kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Par kuch to karna tha hi aur ab kal ke baad ab bina power ke bhi mera sharirik bal aam logo se kayi guna bad chuka tha aur dimaag bhi. Sath hi sath mere chehere ka aur body ka akarshan bhi bad chuka tha ek pal ke liye to mai hi apne aap ko aine me dekh ke pehchan nhi pata. Khair mai nikal pada kuch paise kamane. mai ek gali se guzar hi raha tha ki mujhe ek ladki ki cheekh sunayi di mai samajh gaya kuch gadbad hai iss liye uss disha me badh gaya . Jaise hi mai waha pohocha dekha teen ladke ek ladki ko pakad ke kahi le ja rhe the iss liye mai bina der kiya waha pohoch ek punch ek admi ke pith pe jad diya. Iss karan baki do log mujhe dekh gusse me meri aur bhadhe isse pehele wo kuch kar pate maine ek round kick ghuma ke dono ko gira diya. Wo dono to wapas uth gye par jise mai pith pe punch mara tha wo utha hi nhi ye dekh wo dono dar ke waha se bhaag gye. Phir mai us ladki ki aaur badha wo mujhe hi ghur rahi thi par ye batana mushkil tha ki wo mere looks ki wajah se mujhe ghur rhi thi ya abhi jo hua uske karan. Maine usse pucha.

Mai : kyaa aap thik hai?
Mere puchne ke karan use hosh aya wo boli
Ladki : m..mai thik hu. Aapko kahi chot to nhi lagi.?
Mai : nhi mai thik hu ab mujhe chalna chahiye.

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