Thriller DARK GIRL (Completed)

[The Immortal]

"Nahi kuchh khaas nahi. Main bataya na ke kaafi secretive thi vo. Ek do baar maine jaanna bhi chaha tha. Specially jab vo ye kehti thi that she will get married to that Raghu guy" Maya ne baat jaari rakhi.
"Married? That serious?" Main bola.
"Oh yeah, she was head over heels in love with that guy. Aksar kehti thi ke vo bhi use utna hi chahta hai aur dono shaadi kar lenge. Ek do baar uske yahi kehne par maine puchha ke vo ladka karta kya hai, kahan ka hai vagerah vagerah par vo har baar haskar taal deti thi. Aur tab tak main bhi uska nature samajh gayi thi toh phir main bhi zyada sawal jawab nahi karti thi"
"Kuchh aisa notice kiya ho aapne kabhi uske baare mein which you think was a little weird?"
"You mean related to Raghu?"
"Related to anything"
"Not something particular. Offhand toh mujhe 2 baatein hi yaad aati hain jo mujhe laga tha ke thodi ajeeb thi aur isse kabhi maine uske baare mein puchhna chaha bhi toh nahi puchha. Ek toh vo vaise hi baatein share nahi karti thi and then ye baatein mujhe thoda awkward bhi lagi toh phir main chup hi reh gayi ke kahin vo bura na maan jaaye"
"Kaun si baatein?" Main apne notepad mein saath saath jo baatein mujhe zaroori lag rahi thi likhta bhi ja raha tha.
"Pehli toh ye ke us ladke ka number uske cell mein saved nahi tha" Maya ne bataya.
"Matlab? Raghu ka number?"
"Yep, Raghu ka number"
"Saved nahi tha matlab?"
"Matlab ke kisi naam se saved nahi tha. Callaati thi toh bas number dikhai deta tha, koinaam nahi"
"Hmmm, thats weird" Maine sochte hue kaha.
"Exactly. Uska number ya toh Saanwli ko yaad raha hoga ya phir call list mein se hi nikalkar phone karti hogi."
"Aisa karne ki koi khaas vajah aapko lagi hokabhi koi?"
"I havent got the faintest clue. And ek baar maine usko ek address message kiya tha kahin se, baad mein mujhe us address ki zaroorat padi. Usne mujhe kaha ke main uske cell se le loon. Jab main uske message box mein gayi toh us ladke ke number se kayi saare messages Saanwli ke cell mein the par naam se nahi the, sirf number hi dikhai de raha tha"
"And how do you know ke ye us ladke ka hi number tha?"
"Ek do baar calls receive ki thi maine toh number dikh gaya tha. Uske number ke last3 digits 000 the toh isliye vo alag hi dikhai de jata tha"
"Do you remember that number?"
"No i am sorry. Bas itna yaad hai ke last mein teen zeroes the"
"Ok" Maine diary mein note banate hue kaha "Aur doosri baat?"
"Doosri baat ye ke i think vo kuchh galat logon ke saath mix up ho gayi thi beech mein. Its just a hunch you know, i cant say for sure" Vo thoda jhijhakti hui boli.
"What makes you say that?"
"Ek baar main shopping ke liye market mein ghoom rahi thi, akeli and then i saw Saanwli with a few girls"
"Girls from the hostel?"
"No, not from the hostel. Girls that i didnt know and i have no idea that how she knew them. She never mentioned them to me as well"
"Maybe her friends from work?"
"Oh no not at all" Maya ne fauran jawab diya "Pehli baat toh ye ke vo jahan kaam karti thi vahan main gayi hui thi, aur mera ek dost bhi vahan kaam karta tha so i knewthat those girls are not from there. Aur doosri baat vo ladkiyan thi bhi nahi aisi kahin office mein kaam karne wali lagen"
'Can you elaborate on that a little?" Maine kaha.
"Ab kaise bataoon" VO sochti hui boli "For example mere husband ko dekhiye"
Usne apne husband ki taraf ishara kiya .
"Suit boot mein well dressed, dekhke lagta hai ke padha likha insaan hai aur achhe ghar se hai. He has that civilized sa well behaved aadmi wala look"
"Oh come on" Uska husband embarass hota hua bola.
"I think she is right" Maine haskar jawab diya.
"Ab sochiye ke aap mere husband ko Mumbai ke kuchh mawali type ladkon ke saath dekhte hain, wouldnt that look a little weird to you?"
"Yes it would. So you saw her with some girls that did not fit the criteria of people she usually would hang out with?"
"Yes you are right. You know us type ki ladkiyan like ....."
"Like Bar Dancers? Mumbai Bar Girls?" Main samajh gaya tha ke use relate karne mein pareshani ho rahi thi isliye baat maine poori kar di.
"Yes" Vo fauran boli "Thats it. Bar Dancer type ladkiyan"
"Hmmm. Thats interesting indeed"
"And this was at the time when she was with Raghu?"
"Nahi ye usse pehle ki baat hai, jab vo office se raat ko 12-1 baje ke kareeb vaapisaati thi. And now since you mentioned Bar Dancer, mujhe ek teesri baat aur yaad aayi"
"And what is that?"
"Uske cell mein maine ek baar ek ladki ka number saved dekha tha jiska naam mujhethoda offbeat laga, kinda weird?"
"Ok. What was the name?"
"Soch rahi hoon." Vo dimag par zor daalti hui boli "Champa, pushpa, Basanti ...... "
Vo saare purani filmi style naam ginane lagi jo agar aaj ke zamane mein kisi ladki ke hon toh bechari ka mazak ban jaaye. Achanak vo chutki bajate huye boli.
"Bijli"
"Bijli?" Main chaunk pada.
"Yes, thats it. Bijli. Pehle toh mujhe laga ke shayad electricity office vagerah kahin ka number hai par ek baar maine use phone par us ladki se baat karte huye suna and she clearly said, Haan Bijli bol, tu kitne baje tak aa rahi hai. Thats when i knew ke ye Bijli asal mein kisi ladki ka naam hai"
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[Rahul]

 

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[The Immortal]

"Is Bijli ke baare mein aur kuchh jaanti hainaap?" Maine sochte hue sawal kiya.
"No i am afraid not. I just saw that number once" Vo inkaar mein gardan hilati hui boli.
"And uske baad you said ke Saanwli returned to her usual self?"
"Yes, i think it was sometime after she metthat Raghu Guy. Then everything went normal, she was a woman in love wanting to get
married and thats actually when i got married and moved out"
Maya ke paas se mujhe ummeed thi ke kuchh na kuchh toh aisa milega jo is case mein meri madad kar sake aur mujhe mayusi nahi hui.
Saanwli Sharafat Bhai ke Bar mein kaam karti thi ye baat toh mujhe pehle hi pata chal gayi thi. Bijli Saanwli ko jaanti thi ye bhi baat main janta tha, khud Bijli ne hi batayi thi par Maya se milkar pata chala ke shayad kuchh baatein aisi bhi thi jo Bijli mujhse chhipa gayi thi. Ye mumkin tha ke Saanwli ke paas uska phone number hona ek aam si baat ho. Vo dono Sharafat ke liye kaam karti thi, ek hi Bar se related thi toh ho sakta tha ke number yun bina kisi gehri jaan pehchan ke ek doosre ko diya ho par jaane kyun mujhe lag raha tha ke mamla isse kuchh zyada tha. Bijli se ek baar phir milne ki zaroorat aan padi thi.
Aur jo sabse zaroori baat pata chali thi vo thi Saanwli ke us mystery boyfriend ka naam jiska number bhi ek fake ID par registered tha.
"Very well" Maine apne notepad band karte hue kaha "I think i have taken enough of you kind people's time. I wont keep you any further"
"Not a concern at all" Jawab Maya ke pati Rajesh ne diya "Happy to help"
"Can you do me a favor?" Maya mujhse mukhatib hui.
"Sure"
"You have my number already. Can you please just give me a call whenever you find Saanwli. For peace of my mind?"
"Sure why not. Mujhe kuchh bhi pata chaltehi main aapko phone kar doonga" Maine muskurate hue kaha.
"And can i have your number as well? Agar mujhe aur kuchh yaad aata hai toh aapko phone kar doongi"
Ye ek ajeeb situation ho gayi thi. Jo numberfilhal main use kar raha tha vo main kisi aur ko dena nahi chahta tha. Kuchh sochte hue maine use Nisha ka number diya.
"Actually mere paas filhal koi phone hai nahi. Phone kho gaya tha aur uske baad naya ab tak lene ka time mila nahi. Ek dost ke number se kaam chala raha hoon par aap ye number rakhiye. Ispar call karke agar aap mere baare mein puchhengi toh yahan se aapko mera number mil jaayega"
"All right, thanks" Usne apne cell mein Nisha ka number save karte hue kaha.
"Ek baat aur" Maine uthte uthte sawal kiya"Aakhri baar kab mili thi aap Saanwli se ya aakhri baar baat kab hui thi?"
"Let me think" Maya khadi khadi sochne lagi "Mili toh main aakhri baar usse tab hi thi jab maine apni shaadi se pehle hostel chhoda tha. Uske baad kabhi milne ka mauka mila nahi usse. Aur aakhri baar baatmeri shaadi ke agle din hui thi. Usne mujhe congratulate karne ke liye phone kiya tha. Uske baad phir kabhi baat nahi ho paayi"
"Vo aapki shaadi mein nahi aayi? I mean you guys lived together for sometime"
"Actually vo aane wali thi. Meri shaadi se 2 din pehle usne pune aana tha par aayi nahi.Maine phone kiya toh kehne lagi ke kahin kaam mein phasi hui hai, shaadi ke din aayegi par tab bhi nahi aayi. Phir agle din phone karke maafi maang li"
"Aur uske baad itne lambe waqt tak aap dono ki kabhi baat nahi hui? Usne aapko ya aapne use phone nahi kiya?"
"Maine kiya tha par usne apna number badal liya tha shayad. Kabhi call lagi hi nahi.Aur phir meri nayi nayi shaadi hui thi, i had a million things going on in my life toh maine bhi itna koi khaas dhyaan nahi diya"
"I understand" Maine haste hue kaha"Hamare desh mein shaadiyan vaise bhi ek bahut bada hassle hi ban jaati hain"
Un dono se milkar main vaapis hotel aaya. Ye sach tha ke Saanwli ke case ko lekar mere paas kaafi kuchh information ikatthi ho gayi thi par in sabko main aapas mein jod nahi pa raha tha. Kuchh pieces aise ab bhi missing thi jo saari kadiyon ko aapas mein jodkar paheli ko suljha sakte the. Ab tak jo kahani ka tana bana main bun paya tha vo kuchh is prakar tha.
1. Saanwli Mumbai aayi.
2. Ek ladies hostel mein room lekar vahan rehne lagi.
3. Maya ke contacts ke through ek chhoti si company mein job mila.
4. Chhota sa job yaani ke chhoti si salary jisse Mumbai jaise shehar mein guzara na-mumkin hai.
5. Kharche shayad poore nahi hue isliye usne ek part time job aur kar li, ek Bar dancer ki.
6. Vo ek sidhi saadi ladki se Bar dancer banne tak kaise pahunchi, ye filhal ek sawal hi tha.
7. Padhi likhi thi, nain naksh theek thaak the isliye Sharafat ne use ek high class pub mein as waitress laga diya.
8. Information ke hisab se vo Sharafat par dore daal rahi thi. Ye baat galat thi ya sahi, ye doosra sawal tha.
9. Mauke ka fayda utha kar Sharafat ne ek baar usse zabardasti karni chahi. Usne is baat ki mukhalfat ki.
10. Pub mein maujood koi hero Sharafat ki kanpati par bandook tika kar use vahan se bacha laya. Kya vo Raghu ya Pratap tha? Ek aur sawal.
11. Uske baad Saanwli ne Pub ki naukri chhod di and she fell in love with someone. Kya ye vahi insaan tha jo use Pub se nikal kar laya tha? Phir se sawal.
12. Aur iske baad phir kya hua, ye sabse bada aur eham sawal tha.
Aur phir Saanwli ke case ko apne dimag se hata kar maine ye sochna shuru kiya ke kal Mumbai vaapis kaise jaoonga aur filhal jo mere sar par murder case ki talwar latki hui thi, use kaise hataya jaaye.
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[The Immortal]

Vaapis Mumbai main phir vaise hi pahuncha jaise ke Puna gaya tha. Aate hue phir vahi gareeb mazdoor ka bhes dhara, ek truck wale se lift maange aur Mumbai mein daakhil hua. Phir ek auto kiya aur Dharavi pahuncha.
Hairat ki baat thi ke jaate hue mujhe jitni pareshani ka samna karna pada tha, aate hue uske muqable bade aaram se Dharavi tak pahunch gaya. Shayad policewalo ko yahi lag raha tha ke main shehar se bahar nikalne ki koshish hi karunga, vaapis kyun aana chahunga.
Kismet ki baat thi ke main jaise hi lodge mein daakhil hua, mujhe saamne receptionpar hi Khan khada mil gaya.
"Aa gaya ganja" Mujhe dekhte hi vo mere huliye ke bavajood pal bhar mein pehchan gaya "Kahan mar gaya tha saale?"
Maine uski baat ka jawab dene ke liye munh khola hi tha ke phir khamosh ho gayaaur apne kamre ki taraf chalne ka ishaya kiya.
"Which part of Do not step out was so difficult to understand?" Kamre mein ghuste hi vo mujh par phat pada.
"Arrey yaar ...." Maine bolne ke liye munh khola hi tha ke usne meri baat kaat di.
"Saaf saaf kaha tha maine tujhe ke apne kamre ke bahar jhankna bhi mat. Mumbai police tujhe kutte ki taraf talash karti phir rahi hai aur tu saale sair sapate par nikla hua hai"
"Arrey bhai mujhe bolne ka mauka bhi toh de ....."
"Saale agar nahi jaan pyaari to bata de mujhe, main hi goli maar deta hoon na. Main kyun kutte ki tarah teri jaan bachane ke liye bhaaga phir raha hoon?"
"Mere bhai meri baat sun ....."
"All that you had to do was sit in your room, eat drink and watch TV and let me handle the rest, itna nahi ho raha tujhse?"
"Mujhe bolne dega? Tune kaha tha na ke yahan isi lodge mein mat rehna, badalte rehna chhupne ki jagah toh vahi dekhne gaya tha ke yahan se boriya bistar baandh kar kahan le jakar rakhun" Maine saaf jhooth bol diya.
"Ohhhhh" Meri baat sunkar vo pal ke liye khamosh hua par phir dobara shuru ho gaya "Toh iske liye khud bahar apna noorani chehra lekar nikalne ki kya zaroorat thi. Aur main jo kal se phone par phone mila raha hoon, uthata kyun nahi? Saala mujhe toh fikar ho chali thi ke mar mara toh nahi gaya kahin?"
"Is phone ki halat dekh" Maine apni jeb se vo purana phone nikala jo maine us lodge wale ladke se kharida tha "Marne ki kagar par hai ye. Kal se call receive nahi ho rahi" Maine phir jhooth bola.
"Toh palat kar mujhe call nahi kar sakta thakya?"
"Do you see another phone in this room?" Maine apne haath phela kar kamre ki taraf ishara kiya "Aur tune kaha tha ke bahar mat jana isliye main bahar gaya nahi. Mujhe lag hi raha tha ke tu aa hi jayega milne agar maine call receive nahi ki toh"
Main pata nahi kyun par jhooth par jhooth bole ja raha tha. Vo shayad uske is tarah ekdam naraz hokar mujhpar chillane lag jaane ki vajah se meri himmat nahi pad rahi thi ke use bata sakun ke main Pune tak ka chakkar laga aaya tha.
Jaane se pehle us lodge wale ladke ko mainkeh kar gaya tha ke agar Khan aa jaaye tohuse na bataye ke main kabse gaya hoon. Bas yahi keh de ke main abhi abhi bahar gaya hoon. Isliye main janta tha ke Khan konahi malum ke main kal se gayab tha.
"Hmmmm" Uska gussa thoda thanda pada"Mili koi theharne layak jagah?"
"Nahi yaar. Aas paas kuchh aisa dikha hi nahi jagah ruk sakun 2-3 din" Ye main sach keh raha tha. Dharavo mein badi der tak dhakke khaane ke baad mujhe ye ek lodge dikhai diya tha.
"Koi nahi" Vo table par rakhe jug se ek glass mein pani dalta hua bola "Main karta hoon kuchh intezaam"
"Kuchh pata chala Geetanjali ke case mein?"
"Nahi" Vo pani ke ghoonth bharta hua bola.
"To kya plan hai ab?"
"Plan simple hai bahut. Create an alibi"
"Little more details please" Maine apni jeb mein haath dalkar cigarette ka packet nikala. Khan ne fauran meri taraf ghoor kardekha.
"Bigger picture please. This is the least of our concern right now" Maine fauran shakal banate hue kaha aur cigarette jala li.
'Yeah i guess you are right" Vo hathyaar se daalte hue bola.
"Plan kya hai?"
"Plan ye hai dost ke 2 alibi create karne hain tere liye. Aur thoda post mortem waloko paise khilane hain"
"Abhi bhi samajh nahi aa raha"
"Arrey sidhi si baat hai yaar, 2 log taiyyar karne hain. Ek toh jo ye bole ke khoon ke waqt tu uske saath tha aur doosra jo ye bataye ke tu vahan khoon hone ke baad pahuncha tha"
Actually khoon ke waqt main Bijli ke saath tha par is waqt usse mere liye gawahi dene ki ummeed main kar nahi sakta tha.
"Par is saare jhol jhal mein ek problem hai"Khan ne baat jaari rakhi.
"Kya?"
"Dekh khoon hone aur tere vahan jaane ke beech zyada waqt ka fasla nahi hai toh ye saabit karna mushkil ho jaayega ke tu kahan tha aur vahan kab pahuncha. Toh jis kisi ne bhi post morem report likhni hai usethoda bahut khila pila kar sirf ye karvana hai ke maut ka waqt thoda ek do ghante pichhe kar de aur court mein gawahi de de ke maut ya toh uske bataye waqt par hui thi ya usse pehle. That will increase our time window a bit"
"Hmmmm" Maine sochte hue kaha "Ek chhoti si baat ka dhyaan rakhna bas"
"Kya?"
"Marne se pehle Geetanjali ne mujhe phonekiya tha. Toh maut ka waqt itna pichhe mat khiska dena ke un call records se match na ho paaye"
"That doesnt matter. Koi saboot nahi hai is baat ka ke phone tujhe Geetanjali ne kiya tha. Tune phone uthaya hota toh baat alag thi par uske phone se number toh tera koi bhi dial kar sakta hai"
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[Rahul]

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[Casinar]

"Nahi ghar par nahi. Kaafi log hote hain" Voboli toh mujhe uski baat mein dam laga. Vo ek shaadi shuda aurat thi. Yun kisi police wale ka ghar par aakar usse baat karna utna hi bura mana jata jitna ke uska khud police station jana.
"Ek kaam karte hain" Maine kaha "Na aap police station aaiye aur na main aapke ghar. Kahin bahar mil kar baat kar lete hain. Main aapka zyada waqt nahi loonga"
"Ok. Bataiye kahan aana hai?"
Usne puchha toh maine uske ghar se thoda door ek coffee-house ka address bata diya.
"Ok. Kitni der baad aana hai?"
Is baat ke liye main taiyyar nahi tha. Main ummeed kar raha tha ke vo mujhe kal ya parso milne ka kahegi.
"2 ghante baad?" Maine ghadi ki taraf dekhte hue kaha.
"Sure. I will be there"
Phone rakhne ke baad maine chain ki saans li. Mujhe lag raha tha ke Maya se baat karne mein ya information lene mein shayad khaasi mehnat karni pade. Vaise bhi aaj kal policewalo se aasani se koi baat nahi karta aur main toh vo bhi nahi tha. Jis tarah se maine use munh utha kar phone ghuma diya tha, usse mujhe lag raha tha ke vo shayad baat karte hue bhi sochegi, ulta mujhse sawal karegi par aisa hua nahi.Vo kaafi aasani se maan gayi thi.
Khair, main naha dhokar Lodge se nikla. Daadhi moonchh aur kaan se us key-chain ring ko maine nikal diya tha. Yun asli chehre ke saath khule mein aana khatarnaak tha par mere paas aur koi chara bhi nahi tha.
Ek taxi mein beth kar main us coffee-housepahuncha aur Maya ka intezaar karne laga. Vahan us waqt kaafi chehal pehal thi. Ek table par beth kar maine ek cup coffee mangvayi aur darwaze par nazar gadaye Maya ka intezaar karne laga. 2 ghante takreeban poore ho hi chale the.
Vahan us waqt kaafi log the aur koi na koi darwaze se aa ja raha tha jinmein aadhe se zyada ladkiyan aur auraten thi. Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ke use pehchanunga kaise par Thodi hi der baad ek ladki darwaza khol kar andar aayi aur khadi aas paas ki tables ka jaayza lene lagi.Uske kapdon aur haathon ki kalaiyon mein pade choode ko dekh kar koi bhi bata saktatha ke uski abhi haal filhal mein hi shaadi hui hai. Main fauran samajh gaya ke ho na ho, yahi Maya hai.
Main chair se uth kar khada hua aur haath utha kar usko ishara kiya. Vo fauran muskurati hui meri taraf badhi. Uske saath ek ladka bhi tha.
"Maya ji?" Vo kareeb aayi toh maine apna haath milane ke liye aage badhaya"Inspector Khan"
"Hello" Usne haath milaya aur apne saath aaye aadmi ki taraf palti "My husband Rajesh"
Of course. Koi policewala yun kisi ladki ko phone karke bulaye toh vo akeli toh nahi aane wali thi. Shaadi-shuda thi toh apne husband ko saath laayi.
"Hello Sir" Maine us aadmi se haath milaya aur ham teeno table par beth gaye.
Maya ke bahut hi khobsurat nain-naksh wali ladki thi. Lamba kad, slim body, gora rang, teekhe nain naksh, overall ek pleasant personality. Uske chehre par ek muskurahat jaise har waqt rehti thi. Ek smiling face, jaisa ke kaha jata hai, khuda ne jaise use tohfe mein diya tha.
Usse milte hue sirf ek baat ka mujhe darr tha. Maine chaude mein ye keh toh diya thake main Inspector Khan hoon par agar vo mujhse mera ID card dikhane ko bol deti toh mujhe baglen jhaankni padti. Par aisa hua nahi. Maine kaha ke main policewala hoon aur un dono ne maan liya.
"Kya legen aap log?" Maine puchha.
"Regular?" Vo apne pati ki taraf palti aur usne bhi muskurate hue haan mein sar hiladiya.
"Ham log yahan aksar aate rehte hain" Vo mujhse mukhaatib hui "Yahan ki cappuccino amazing hai. Aapko bhi try karni chahiye"
"All right then, cappuccino it is" Maine muskurate hue kaha aur ek waiter ko order diya.
"Raghu se baat ki aap logon ne?" Maya ne mujhse sawal kiya.
Main is sawal ka jawab kya doon soch hi raha tha ke usne mera chehra padh liya.
"You guys dont know about him yet?"
"No i am afraid not. Who is he?"
"He was Saanwli's boyfriend. Kaafi serious thi vo uske baare mein"
"Mujhe is baare mein koi information nahi mili hai ab tak" Maine apni jeb se ek chhotasa notepad aur pen nikala "I didnt even know she had a boyfriend. Raghu you said his name was?"
"Yeah Raghu but i think vo uska pet name tha. Uska real name shayad Pratap tha. Raghu vo usko pyaar se bulati thi"
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Chalo ye hui na baat. Ab maya kaam ki baat bata gayi. Raghu/ pratab jo sanvli ki bf tha. Ab aega maza. Aguey padhta hoo bhai

 

[Indrajeet]

Kya twist h Bhai Maja AA gaya