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Incest Destiny: The Last Stand (With AI Images)
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Thanks
THANKS
Shravas ne bahut aage tak plan kar rha tha aur iske taiyari Chapter 19 se hi chalu ho gyi thi. Aapne shaayad padha ho toh latest chapter toh pata lag jayega.
Thanks again. But story ke tags mein romance hai toh woh toh hona hi tha aur... Akashna ke original story bhi yhi thi vaise bhi season ending pe tha yeh karna imperative tha...this was not forced in any way.
Glad that you enjoyed it!
Wise words.
I'll keep it in mind.
Stay tuned for further updates.
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So this update is all about big set ups ....we can see this update as a open gate for path of upcoming events which going to meet at the climax of this session. Each main character heading towards their finale endgame. Update is promising great adventures with some new cool characters and creatures, which definitely going to add some more fantastical elements in this fantasy world and this universe is about to expand. 
As I said...Every main character is heading for their mission....
Kaalarani is finally going to take the revenge, she is craving for all these years and what is her motivations, we also get some tease about it.
Shravas is also heading towards his mission and it's going to be interesting to see why he did not kill Ajay and how will he use Ajay for his mission.
And off course our hero Karan is also on his way for his mission to not only meet Mesaka to build an alliance to stand against evil forces but also on mission to control and understand his powers.
Introduction to new characters and plots are also interesting in this update...now it really feels like that story is scaling up and new adventures with new dangers are about to come. We definitely going to see Mesaka also hopping to see some of the character form the past of kaalarani since we had some name drops in this update and some hint of what actually happen to her mother and father. We already got the entry of Shurbhi from the water world and we do know that she going to be added to haram so it will be exciting to see how karan and her chemistry blooms, specially now when we know that she is not a normal human but a serin. Also thank you for giving the first look of Kalrani Vinashika in this update.
Now lets talk about the two criticisms I have the first one is look of Akansha. I have no problem with Akansha's skin being blue but this blue does not look like her actual skin color it looks like she is under some blue light which not only making her skin blue but also her hair and her cloths blue too. I know it's AI generated but if possible kindly try to give her some really blue skin instead of making her look like she is standing under the blue LED.
Now second criticism is the one which I have mentioned many times before. As a story teller you really have a great vision, ideas, creativity and I have not seen any other story on this forum (NOT TO MENTION I REALLY HAVE NOT FOLLOWED ENOUGH STORIES ON THIS FORUM TO MAKE SUCH CLAIMS so sorry dhal) of this level of well thought out ideas and creativity but when it comes to put those ideas and thought on paper or in our case on screen in words. You struggles a lot...from spelling mistakes to unfinished sentences to missing words to multiple use of same words. All these errors are really kills the mood and disrupts the flow of story telling. I don't know what app or tool you use to write but do have to improve as "Mrxr said kuch kuch sher ke upper se gya" and some other guy said "ye wala thora complicated tha" there is nothing complicated in this update, It's only these errors which are making it difficult to understand.
OVERALL SOLID UPDATE WITH SOME SOLID WORLD BUILDING
As I said...Every main character is heading for their mission....
Kaalarani is finally going to take the revenge, she is craving for all these years and what is her motivations, we also get some tease about it.
Shravas is also heading towards his mission and it's going to be interesting to see why he did not kill Ajay and how will he use Ajay for his mission.
And off course our hero Karan is also on his way for his mission to not only meet Mesaka to build an alliance to stand against evil forces but also on mission to control and understand his powers.
Introduction to new characters and plots are also interesting in this update...now it really feels like that story is scaling up and new adventures with new dangers are about to come. We definitely going to see Mesaka also hopping to see some of the character form the past of kaalarani since we had some name drops in this update and some hint of what actually happen to her mother and father. We already got the entry of Shurbhi from the water world and we do know that she going to be added to haram so it will be exciting to see how karan and her chemistry blooms, specially now when we know that she is not a normal human but a serin. Also thank you for giving the first look of Kalrani Vinashika in this update.
Now lets talk about the two criticisms I have the first one is look of Akansha. I have no problem with Akansha's skin being blue but this blue does not look like her actual skin color it looks like she is under some blue light which not only making her skin blue but also her hair and her cloths blue too. I know it's AI generated but if possible kindly try to give her some really blue skin instead of making her look like she is standing under the blue LED.
Now second criticism is the one which I have mentioned many times before. As a story teller you really have a great vision, ideas, creativity and I have not seen any other story on this forum (NOT TO MENTION I REALLY HAVE NOT FOLLOWED ENOUGH STORIES ON THIS FORUM TO MAKE SUCH CLAIMS so sorry dhal) of this level of well thought out ideas and creativity but when it comes to put those ideas and thought on paper or in our case on screen in words. You struggles a lot...from spelling mistakes to unfinished sentences to missing words to multiple use of same words. All these errors are really kills the mood and disrupts the flow of story telling. I don't know what app or tool you use to write but do have to improve as "Mrxr said kuch kuch sher ke upper se gya" and some other guy said "ye wala thora complicated tha" there is nothing complicated in this update, It's only these errors which are making it difficult to understand.
OVERALL SOLID UPDATE WITH SOME SOLID WORLD BUILDING
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Seriously ToniWaiting for next update
roz ek update likhun ab...kal hi toh diya tha?
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New year me kafi busy tha to story read nahi kiya idhar 2 din se read kar raha hu to dhyan na Diya kab aaya mujhe laga last week me ek hi update aaya haiSeriously Toni
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Yes I said ki sir ke upar se gaya bro,
Just I'm saying, 1st. akansha kiss Karan,...2nd. Karan's handstands 796,797,798, ...3rd. Akshay ka kuch bhi na bolna ushka koi bhi scene hi nahi tha kya..... 4th. Akansha ne ek baar bhi vaani ka nahi pucha ki kya hua ushka.....5th,vo sabhi van rajya me hi the to unko Nandini tak pahuchne me kitni der lagti ,par nahi unko toh mesaka ke rajya Jana tha itni bhi kya jaldi thi unko milke bhi jaa sakte the ,
Ye points the jo mujhe thode strange lage but unka koi itnna importance nahi tha maybe....
And you didn't give answer my comment very bad sis.....Vote 60 plus hai aur aadhon ne bhi like nhi kiya
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Ahhh, I loved the pace of the story. Now it's moving, and how greatly.
Our hero is now getting ready. And Vinashika ko itna attractive bana dia hai, ab nafrat kaise hogi us se?
Let's see where this boat ride takes them. Manzil abhi door si lag rahi hai.
Now, Coming to Shravas. I loved his story till now, and I loved to see his scene in this episode. He is a different vibe altogether.
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No addressing the criticisms, while you can surely improve on spelling but It's not such a big deal that some people are making. You can use Chatgpt to refine it better once you have completed the update. That might solve the issue.
The story is cachy, you have an eye for detail and you are writing it beautifully. Keep going.
Stay happy, healthy and horny. 
I'll eagerly wait for next update.
Our hero is now getting ready. And Vinashika ko itna attractive bana dia hai, ab nafrat kaise hogi us se?
Let's see where this boat ride takes them. Manzil abhi door si lag rahi hai.
Now, Coming to Shravas. I loved his story till now, and I loved to see his scene in this episode. He is a different vibe altogether.
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No addressing the criticisms, while you can surely improve on spelling but It's not such a big deal that some people are making. You can use Chatgpt to refine it better once you have completed the update. That might solve the issue.
The story is cachy, you have an eye for detail and you are writing it beautifully. Keep going.
Stay happy, healthy and horny. I'll eagerly wait for next update.