Fantasy Devil

[Avir]

Nice

 

[ShivaRam]

Nice going bro waiting for next update

 

[bd sharkar]

Are bhai ek update sey kia hoga...koi change bhi nehi kar rah ho..ey kasif bhai ka story ...ap cha tey pura copy karke ekhi din post kar sakta hey..or bad mey ap likhna suru kar dey apne tarika set...

 

[The rock]

Are bhai ek update sey kia hoga...koi change bhi nehi kar rah ho..ey kasif bhai ka story ...ap cha tey pura copy karke ekhi din post kar sakta hey..or bad mey ap likhna suru kar dey apne tarika set...

Ap ki bat bilkul thek hy ya kashif bhai ki story hy mainy inkar nhi kia per meri kuch personal life bhi hy usy bhi dakhna hota hy us k elawa meri job bhi hy kam bhi dakhna hota hy mujhy jitna timr milt hy us mai cbhi copy paste kar raha hon han kal sunday hy chuti ho gi to kal jahan tak story likhi ja chuki hy wahan tak post kar don ga us k bad jaisy hi wakt mily ga ap sab ko update dy don ga i hope k ap meri bat smajh gaye hon gy

 

[Kane the monster]

Welcome here bro,
Maine ye story padi (read) hai par shayad jahan par ye ruki hai vahan tak nahin, story bahut jandar hai aapse ek vinti hai agar iss story main incest sex dal diya jaye maza aa jayega vaise bhi iss story ko jahan tak Maine pada uss jagah tak iss me pura space hai ki iss me incest sex dala ja sake.
Ye toh tha mera point of view iss story ke liye improve karne ke liye.
Or ye jaruri nahi hai mujhe Jo Axa laga Wo sabhi ya fir aapko Axa lage kyunki mujhe pata hai kahne me or karne me zamin aasman ka farak hai but agar iss me tadka lag jaye toh maza aa jayega.
Or sabse badi baat ye hai iss story ko aap jahan tak copy karenge wahan tak iss me incest relation hona sambhav nahin hai.
Fir agar aap iss me badlav nahin karna change hai toh koi baat nahi hai.
Agar kisi reader ya writer sahab ko meri incest wali baat ka bura laga ho toh ji bhar kar apne mann me mujhe galiyan do. But yahan bakwass na kariyo kyunki bachche bade ho gaye hai, haha haha
Sorry once again

 

[softheart]

continue plz

 

[ShivaRam]

Waiting bro

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Ap ki bat bilkul thek hy ya kashif bhai ki story hy mainy inkar nhi kia per meri kuch personal life bhi hy usy bhi dakhna hota hy us k elawa meri job bhi hy kam bhi dakhna hota hy mujhy jitna timr milt hy us mai cbhi copy paste kar raha hon han kal sunday hy chuti ho gi to kal jahan tak story likhi ja chuki hy wahan tak post kar don ga us k bad jaisy hi wakt mily ga ap sab ko update dy don ga i hope k ap meri bat smajh gaye hon gy

Yaar aaj update aane the par koi pta hi nehi update ka

 

[Nagarjun]

Superb

 

[Damha]

Waiting