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Update 6
Akash’s POV :
Hamare gaon wale ghar ke aangan 2 4 khaat lagaye the aur waha 8-9 family members baithe the aur chai hukke ke sath baate chal rahi thi.
Aur ye baat mere dimag me siren tarah bajne lagi kyonki jabse bada hua hu tabse dekha he ke yaha jitne bhi log mere samne baithe he ye sab khali naam ke rishtedar he ,jo kabhi ek dusre ko dekhte bhi nahi wo aaj khat pe baithe ke gappe lada rahe he !
Matlab yaha daal me kaala kuchh nahi he yaha pura godown he kaala he
To be continued....
Gaon me aana kaafi logo ko pasand hota he par yaha rehna nahi ! yahi baat mere upar bhi laagu hoti he ,muze na kabhi hamare gaon se lagao tha aur na he yaha ke logo se koi hamdardi . Mere liye meri comfortable life he sabse jaruri rahi he na ki gaon ki hardship wali. Sheher me rehne wala banda bhale he average ya below average kama raha ho par usko har facility ,har chij apne samne milti he, hamare gaon ke bare me batane ki jarurat nahi he, bas yu keh lo ke muze gaon se nafrat to nahi he par pyar bhi nahi he. Papa ke muh se gaon ka jikar bhi aise to kam he baar hota he to yaha aake me koi khaas khush hu bhi nahi.
Par yaha jo ghar he na hamara wo bada antique piece he, matlab purane type ka bahar se lekin andar hamare 2 rooms jo papa ne renovate karwaye the 6 saal pehle wo 3 start hotel ke barabar he,usme meri pasand ka western commode toilet he, bathroom me alak tanki aur shower he, WiFi bhi he par speed kam aata he idhar.
Mummy ne car ko park kiya aur humlog bahar aaye to bahar khaat pe baithe Chacha, Fufa ji, bade chacha ke ladke log jo muzse bohot bade he aur in me se kuchh ki shadi bhi hui he sab hamare paas aaye , fir namaste, hi hello kaise he, dikkat to na hui raste me wala program chala
Me bhi jaisa ghar me sikhate he waise he Chacha ji aur Fufa ji ke pair chhu ke andar gaya ,sath me Lavanya bhi aayi.
Lavanya : Akash ,dekh tu muze chhod ke kahi bhi ghumne gaya na, aunty ko bata dungi tere midnight jumping ka !
Me : Ayye me khud mere room me series dekhunga idhar , baki tuze company dene ko milata hu kisi se ..
Andar aake me Chachi aur dadi se mila unke pao chuve ,ashirwad liya. ye dono mere se koi khaas lagaav nahi rakhti ,sab muh pe mitha mitha bolte he khali aur kuchh nahi. Agar Iss ghar me Soni didi aur Tara na hoti to me yaha pair bhi na rakhta bc. Soniya didi mere se 3 saal badi he aur graduation complete kar ke ghar baithi he, govt. jobs ke liye preparation karti he aur muze bhi wahi links aur posts forward karti rehti he
Tara mere jitni he hai par alag stream he uski, fashion design ka course kar ke job dekh rahi he .Soni didi to unke room me nahi thi par Tara mili,
Tara : Oh ho ho akki bhai gf ko leke aa gaye aaj to, kahe to didi ke sath tera bhi band baja bajwa de !
Me : Lavanya ye Tara he, fashion designing karti he aur tuze company bhi degi, aur Tara ye apne Patel uncle ki beti he Lavanya, hamare sath he aayi he aur ab tere sath rahegi , OK ? tum dono baitho baate karo me di se mil ke aata hu .
Me ghar ke upar wali manjil aaya, ghar thoda purana he aur upar wali manjil lakdi ki he bani he to upar jaate time aur utarate time sambhal ke jaana padta he, bachpan me ye lakdi wale stairs se me fisal ke gir bhi gaya tha aur mera sir futa tha. Soni didi shayad upar wale kamre me rehti he ab tabhi unka samaan sab yaha he, Didi khidki ke sat ke lagaye chhote bed pe baith ke kisi se phone pe baat kar rahi thi aur pairo me nail polish bhi laga rahi thi, muze dekh ke unhone apne paas bulaya aur sath me bithaya, unki phone pe baate jaari rahi, isi bich wo mere hath ke anguthe pe nail art banane lagi
Jaise he unki baate ho gayi,
Me : kya didi aap bhi , aise nail polish kon lagata he yaar .
Soni di : Oh ho ho ab to aap bohot bade ban gaye na jo bura maanane lage he ,kyu ?
Me : Nahi di ,aisa nahi he, wo to bass aur aap bhi kya din bhar phone pe lagi rehti ho, hamare liye to time he nahi he na ab to…
Di : Beta mere se shyanpatti karega ab tu ,mere se ? batau kon kisko kitna yaad karta he ,batau ?
Aur mere kaan khinchne lagi
Me : ayyy ddidi jaane do na galti ho gayi meri, aap jao apne husband se baat karo par muze chhodo
Di : matlab sudhrega nahi tu ,kyu ? Lagta he firse teri shadi karani padegi jaise bachpan me kari thi Meena se wo bhi 5 rupaye ke liye
kuchh yaad aaya ?Me : Nahi to
ye kab hua tha diDi : Tu chal niche ,milati hu tuze teri baal-vadhu se aur gauna bhi karati hu ,chal tu …
Me : yaar di sorry galti ho gayi na bhai se, pair pakdu kya ab aapke ?
Di : ha ab aaya na line pe, ab bol kaise he sab ghar pe ? Aur bhaiya sath aaye he ya office office he khel rahe he aaj bhi ?
Me : Ghar se sab aaye he bass bhaiya ko chhod ke, office me kaam jyada he aapki shadi ke liye chhuttiya bacha rahe he wo .
Di : chal khane ka time ho gaya he ,tu bhi fresh hoja fir raat ko baata karte hum ,thik he ? aur teri Meenu ko bhi bula leti hu ,15 saal se taras rahi he na wo patidev ke liye
Me : Didi yaar aap na hadd kar dete ho, chalo niche .
Aise to muze yaad bhi nahi tha ke bachpan me meri shadi hui thi ya kuchh ,par sun ke to maja aa gaya bc.
Raat ka khana ekdam gajab he tha, aise to gaon me gharo me murga vaghera kam he banate he par hamare yaha aisa koi rule nahi he, aur sheher wale boiler murge se gaon ka desi murge ka chicken khane me jo maja he wo kahi nahi
Ab ghar me sab mardo ka khana ho gaya shanti se fir ladies log baithi khana khane, fir khan eke baad sauf chabate hue sab baramde me jama hog aye fir gaon ki panchayat chalu ho gayi . Mummy, chachi ,bua aur dadi log ek taraf baith ke didi ke liye laaye hue jewelleries dekh rahe the, Pappa,chacha aur fufa ji khaat pe baith ke gaon me kaun mara ,kisne kiski jameen ka kya kiya, kiska beta kaha kya job kar raha he uski charcha me leen hog aye.
Tara apne room me Lavanya ko uske designs dikha rahi thi, Ghar me Soni didi bartan dho rahi thi aur me bass mobile me signal dhundh raha tha jo mil nahi raha tha bc .
Soni di : aur majnu mila network ya dedu mera wala ?
Me : Maar lo didi aap bhi yaar, ek to itne saal baad aaya hu aur aap he ke ek minute bhi time nahi deti muze
Di : Oh ho narajgi to dekho laad sahab ki, baat na kari jaan se to gussa hum pe utarenge
Me : Didi yaar batao na network kaha milega ,bas dost ko he call karni he aur kuchh nahi !
Di : upar mere room me khidki ke paas jaiyo ,wahi network milega ,aur jaldi so jana aaj, kal hume market jana he saman lene .
Me aise he jaldi jaldi me di ke room me chala gaya jaha bahar full andhera tha aur andar bhi ek side pe chhota sa bulb chal raha tha jo kaafi nahi tha room me ujala karne ko.
Khidki ke paas pohocha to dekha yaha full network he aur ek ke baad ek msg aate he ja rahe he ,par jiska missed call dekh ke meri dil ki dhadkan badhi wo tha “Inspector Reena bicholiya”.
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Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Thakur bhai....Update 6
Akash’s POV :
Hamare gaon wale ghar ke aangan 2 4 khaat lagaye the aur waha 8-9 family members baithe the aur chai hukke ke sath baate chal rahi thi.
Aur ye baat mere dimag me siren tarah bajne lagi kyonki jabse bada hua hu tabse dekha he ke yaha jitne bhi log mere samne baithe he ye sab khali naam ke rishtedar he ,jo kabhi ek dusre ko dekhte bhi nahi wo aaj khat pe baithe ke gappe lada rahe he !
Matlab yaha daal me kaala kuchh nahi he yaha pura godown he kaala he
To be continued....
Gaon me aana kaafi logo ko pasand hota he par yaha rehna nahi ! yahi baat mere upar bhi laagu hoti he ,muze na kabhi hamare gaon se lagao tha aur na he yaha ke logo se koi hamdardi . Mere liye meri comfortable life he sabse jaruri rahi he na ki gaon ki hardship wali. Sheher me rehne wala banda bhale he average ya below average kama raha ho par usko har facility ,har chij apne samne milti he, hamare gaon ke bare me batane ki jarurat nahi he, bas yu keh lo ke muze gaon se nafrat to nahi he par pyar bhi nahi he. Papa ke muh se gaon ka jikar bhi aise to kam he baar hota he to yaha aake me koi khaas khush hu bhi nahi.
Par yaha jo ghar he na hamara wo bada antique piece he, matlab purane type ka bahar se lekin andar hamare 2 rooms jo papa ne renovate karwaye the 6 saal pehle wo 3 start hotel ke barabar he,usme meri pasand ka western commode toilet he, bathroom me alak tanki aur shower he, WiFi bhi he par speed kam aata he idhar.
Mummy ne car ko park kiya aur humlog bahar aaye to bahar khaat pe baithe Chacha, Fufa ji, bade chacha ke ladke log jo muzse bohot bade he aur in me se kuchh ki shadi bhi hui he sab hamare paas aaye , fir namaste, hi hello kaise he, dikkat to na hui raste me wala program chala
Me bhi jaisa ghar me sikhate he waise he Chacha ji aur Fufa ji ke pair chhu ke andar gaya ,sath me Lavanya bhi aayi.
Lavanya : Akash ,dekh tu muze chhod ke kahi bhi ghumne gaya na, aunty ko bata dungi tere midnight jumping ka !
Me : Ayye me khud mere room me series dekhunga idhar , baki tuze company dene ko milata hu kisi se ..
Andar aake me Chachi aur dadi se mila unke pao chuve ,ashirwad liya. ye dono mere se koi khaas lagaav nahi rakhti ,sab muh pe mitha mitha bolte he khali aur kuchh nahi. Agar Iss ghar me Soni didi aur Tara na hoti to me yaha pair bhi na rakhta bc. Soniya didi mere se 3 saal badi he aur graduation complete kar ke ghar baithi he, govt. jobs ke liye preparation karti he aur muze bhi wahi links aur posts forward karti rehti he
Soni didi to unke room me nahi thi par Tara mili,
Tara : Oh ho ho akki bhai gf ko leke aa gaye aaj to, kahe to didi ke sath tera bhi band baja bajwa de !
Me : Lavanya ye Tara he, fashion designing karti he aur tuze company bhi degi, aur Tara ye apne Patel uncle ki beti he Lavanya, hamare sath he aayi he aur ab tere sath rahegi , OK ? tum dono baitho baate karo me di se mil ke aata hu .
Me ghar ke upar wali manjil aaya, ghar thoda purana he aur upar wali manjil lakdi ki he bani he to upar jaate time aur utarate time sambhal ke jaana padta he, bachpan me ye lakdi wale stairs se me fisal ke gir bhi gaya tha aur mera sir futa tha. Soni didi shayad upar wale kamre me rehti he ab tabhi unka samaan sab yaha he, Didi khidki ke sat ke lagaye chhote bed pe baith ke kisi se phone pe baat kar rahi thi aur pairo me nail polish bhi laga rahi thi, muze dekh ke unhone apne paas bulaya aur sath me bithaya, unki phone pe baate jaari rahi, isi bich wo mere hath ke anguthe pe nail art banane lagi
Jaise he unki baate ho gayi,
Me : kya didi aap bhi , aise nail polish kon lagata he yaar .
Soni di : Oh ho ho ab to aap bohot bade ban gaye na jo bura maanane lage he ,kyu ?
Me : Nahi di ,aisa nahi he, wo to bass aur aap bhi kya din bhar phone pe lagi rehti ho, hamare liye to time he nahi he na ab to…
Di : Beta mere se shyanpatti karega ab tu ,mere se ? batau kon kisko kitna yaad karta he ,batau ?
Aur mere kaan khinchne lagi
Me : ayyy ddidi jaane do na galti ho gayi meri, aap jao apne husband se baat karo par muze chhodo
Di : matlab sudhrega nahi tu ,kyu ? Lagta he firse teri shadi karani padegi jaise bachpan me kari thi Meena se wo bhi 5 rupaye ke liye
Me : Nahi to
Di : Tu chal niche ,milati hu tuze teri baal-vadhu se aur gauna bhi karati hu ,chal tu …
Me : yaar di sorry galti ho gayi na bhai se, pair pakdu kya ab aapke ?
Di : ha ab aaya na line pe, ab bol kaise he sab ghar pe ? Aur bhaiya sath aaye he ya office office he khel rahe he aaj bhi ?
Me : Ghar se sab aaye he bass bhaiya ko chhod ke, office me kaam jyada he aapki shadi ke liye chhuttiya bacha rahe he wo .
Di : chal khane ka time ho gaya he ,tu bhi fresh hoja fir raat ko baata karte hum ,thik he ? aur teri Meenu ko bhi bula leti hu ,15 saal se taras rahi he na wo patidev ke liye
Me : Didi yaar aap na hadd kar dete ho, chalo niche .
Aise to muze yaad bhi nahi tha ke bachpan me meri shadi hui thi ya kuchh ,par sun ke to maja aa gaya bc.
Raat ka khana ekdam gajab he tha, aise to gaon me gharo me murga vaghera kam he banate he par hamare yaha aisa koi rule nahi he, aur sheher wale boiler murge se gaon ka desi murge ka chicken khane me jo maja he wo kahi nahi
Ab ghar me sab mardo ka khana ho gaya shanti se fir ladies log baithi khana khane, fir khan eke baad sauf chabate hue sab baramde me jama hog aye fir gaon ki panchayat chalu ho gayi . Mummy, chachi ,bua aur dadi log ek taraf baith ke didi ke liye laaye hue jewelleries dekh rahe the, Pappa,chacha aur fufa ji khaat pe baith ke gaon me kaun mara ,kisne kiski jameen ka kya kiya, kiska beta kaha kya job kar raha he uski charcha me leen hog aye.
Tara apne room me Lavanya ko uske designs dikha rahi thi, Ghar me Soni didi bartan dho rahi thi aur me bass mobile me signal dhundh raha tha jo mil nahi raha tha bc .
Soni di : aur majnu mila network ya dedu mera wala ?
Me : Maar lo didi aap bhi yaar, ek to itne saal baad aaya hu aur aap he ke ek minute bhi time nahi deti muze
Di : Oh ho narajgi to dekho laad sahab ki, baat na kari jaan se to gussa hum pe utarenge
Me : Didi yaar batao na network kaha milega ,bas dost ko he call karni he aur kuchh nahi !
Di : upar mere room me khidki ke paas jaiyo ,wahi network milega ,aur jaldi so jana aaj, kal hume market jana he saman lene .
Me aise he jaldi jaldi me di ke room me chala gaya jaha bahar full andhera tha aur andar bhi ek side pe chhota sa bulb chal raha tha jo kaafi nahi tha room me ujala karne ko.
Khidki ke paas pohocha to dekha yaha full network he aur ek ke baad ek msg aate he ja rahe he ,par jiska missed call dekh ke meri dil ki dhadkan badhi wo tha “Inspector Reena bicholiya”.
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