Romance Ek Ajeeb si love story (completed)

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itni delay kyun update dene mein notebok bhai?

Sir thoda busy tha 2 hr me update hajir hoga

 

[Indian001]

Bahut badhya kahani hai bhai.
Saare updates padh daale.
Acha likh rahe ho, eise hi likhte raho.
Cute si love story.

 

[Chinturocky]

Waiting for update

 

[Notebook]

Update # 27




Naqabposh - ek galti tum dono ki jaan le sakti hai .

Naqabposh bol hi raha tha ki peechhe se uske sar par Himansh ne kartik ke bat se jor dar war kiya . Naqab posh cheekha aur uski awaaj sun kar Himansh aur Reveka buri tarah chaunk gaye .


Himansh - tu ??????? Tu to Monty hai bey ?


Monty - hhhhaan (darte huye)


Himansh- tune fir dikha di awkaat , saale jaan se maar doonga ( jordar ghoonsa )


Monty - dekh to le bhai nakli gun ke sath aaya hoon aur mera sir fod diya .

Muh se khoon bahne laga tha .



Himansh - tum jaise logon ka kya bharosa . Utha le jate mera bachcha badla poora karne ke liye.

Gurrate huye .


Monty - kitni baar bolu bhai galti huyi . Bhej de jail lekin abb ye tano se jakhm dena chhod de . Baki ye charo apne dost hi hain jo mere sath aaye hain bhai . Poochh le inse mai sirf tujhse aur Pari ji se mafi mangne aaya hoon .

Charon ne jab naqab utara to wo Himansh ke dost the .



Himansh - Pari ka naam to le na apni gandi juban se baki mai itna mahan nahi hoon jo mai tum jaise aadam khoron ko maaf karoon . Mera wash chale to mai abhi ke abhi faad doon tujhe .

Himansh ka ye roop dekh sabhi stabdh the . Abb tak Pari bhi aa chuki thi aur Kartik ko seene se chipkaye mahaul ko samjhne ki koshish kar rahi thi .


Monty - bhai Reveka ko to mil gayi mafi isi lalach me aa gaya ki shayad mere liye bhi thoda sa koi kona bacha ho teri dosti ka . Abb is apradhbodh ke sath nahi jiya jata hai .



Himansh - mera koi dost nahi hai abb aur Reveka ko Pari ne maaf kiya hai maine nahi . Mere liye wo 5 saal pahle hi mar chuki hai . Reveka meri life ki sabse badi galti thi jise maine paise dekar khareeda tha wo bhi apni jindgi barbad karne ko . Meri har buri lat Reveka ki shohbat ki wajah se thi . Jab bhi mai koi sudhrne wali baat karta to bhatkane ka idea Reveka ka hota tha . Pari ke aane ke baad maine jana ki ladkiyan bin paison ke bhi dosti kar sakti hain . Mujge Pari ne samjhaya ki jeene ka saleeka kya hota hai .




Reveka - sssorryyy Himansh please mujhe maaf kar do please .

Reveka hichkiyan lekar rone lagi .



Monty - ham dono apni galti par behad sharminda hain yaar please ek mauka to de do please .

Himansh gusse me kuchh bolne ja raha tha tabhi uski najar Pari aur Kartik par padi . Sab kuchh to tha aaj uske paas . Upar se Pari ne hi use sikhaya tha ki maafi to har gunaah ki hoti hai .


Himansh - Pari mera sir dukh raha hai mai apne room me ja raha hoon . Sabhi ke liye achha sa chai- nashta organise karwa do aur guest room khulwa dena .


Pal bhar me sara mahaul badal chuka tha . Monty ke chehre par gahra sokoon tha jabki Reveka Pari ke gale lag kar subak rahi thi thi .




Ek baar fir sab kuchh khoobsurat ho gaya tha . Kartik sabhi ke haanthon ka khilauna bana kood raha tha aur Himansh apni bina pankhon wali Pari ke hauslon ki udan se sawara apna ghar nihar raha tha . Use apni Ajeeb si love story par hasi aa rahi thi jo ek jidd se shuru hokar jidd ka sarwnash kar chuki thi .






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Index done :yp:

 

[Notebook]

Last update ke reply start

 

[Hunterrrr69]

A brilliant update Notebook bhai

 

[Notebook]

Nice, socha bhi nahi tha aisa aisa hoga chalo ek baat aachi huyi story kuch din aur chalegi
Rahi baat aur naqabposh ki to shayad himansh aur revika ka ek dost tha na monty shayad wo ho wahan pe nahi to koi new character add hoga, nice update

Naqab posh ke bare me apka guess bilkul sahi nikla sir last update post kar diya hai . Thanks

 

[Notebook]

Zaroor passand aega. Jitna simple utna achcha.

Update posted sir

 

[Notebook]

Noice update

Thanks dear