Romance Ek anjani si love story

[Jaguaar]

Sorry bhai 7 ke jagah 9 ho gaya tha usko wapas sahi kiya huun

Okk

 

[Avinashraj]

Update 3

Maa- koi baat nahin chal main tumko sabse milwa deti huun..

Ab aage;

Phir main aur mummy dono Sonu ke ghar pahuche uske ghar mein sabhi the uske didi,bhai,papa,mummy aur badi mummy aur same ghar ajay ka bhi hain.dono chachere bhai hain.main yahan undono ke mummy ko c1 aur C2 karke likhunga...

C2 - are didi aayiye aayiye ( phir dono mere mummy ka pair chuti hain) baithiye are beauty chachi ke liye pidha la ( pidha hamare yahan lakdi ke pette ka baithne ke liye bana hota hain usko bolte hain like chota stool )..
Beauty - lai mummy
Phir wo pidha lake mere mummy ke paas rakhti hain main bhi sabhi ke pair chuta huun main wahan pe laja raha tha kyunki main sabhi ko ache se nahin janta aur main thoda shy type ka bhi tha( sorry ye hero ki jubani)main beauty di ke paas gaya unka pair chua to wo boli main budhi nahin hui huun main sirf 2 saal badi huun main kuch nahin bola sirf sir jhuka liya..
C2 - bahat sarmila hain chotu ( gaon mein sabhi mujhe chotu ,ritu ,aur bhi kai naamo se bulate hain chachi log chotu jayadatar)
Mummy - nahin kisi ko janta nahin hain na isliye sarma raha hain lekin hain bahot sidha..
C1 - haan dikhne mein heen lag rahlatin ha(lag rahe hain .sorry wo flow gaon ka ban jata hain )
Phir sab log hasne lagta hain phir mummy aur chachi ye logo ka suru hota hain ladies talk jo chalte rehta hain aur main wahan bore hote rehta huun phir kijh ke mummy se bolta huun mummy humlog kisi kaam se aaye the na..
Mummy - haa wo to bhul heen gayin ( mummy chachi ko bolti hain) iska bhi school mein naam likhaya hain Sonu aur ajay ke saath kal se le jane ke liye bolne aaye thi.aur dhyan rakhne ke liye aur help kar dega naya hain na aur aadha syllabus khatam hone ke baad aaya hain so tanik madad kar dega.
C1 - didi kaisi baat kar rahi hain chotu bhi to bhai hain upar se sab eke umar ka hain so leke jayega aur help kar dega.
Mummy - kitne baje se school hai.
C2- didi e log saadhe saat baje nikal jata hain jane mein bhi paidal ek ghanta lagta hain..
M- haan u to hain tiffin bhi le jate hain na e sab .
C2 - haan didi le jata hain sab ..
M- thik hain phir ..chalte hain...
Dono chachi boli thik hain phir humdono ghar wapas aa gayen saam bhi ho gaya tha aur hamare area mein light bhi nahin tha ustym so hum sabhi lalten aur diya mein padhte the humare maa logo ne ek naya awiskar kiya tha jo bhi dawai ka jo kaanch ka bottle hota hain hamare yahan usko shishi bolte hain uske dhakkan mein ched (hole) karke cotten ka batti banake aur shishi mein carocin ka oil daal ke diya banati thi padhne ke liye ya Roshni ke liye..main jab ghar aaya to maa saanjh dikhne gayin aur main apne kitab nikal ke baith gaya tha yahan ke hisab se book mummy mere cousin se second hand li di thi wo mera senior tha to uska book mujhe mil gaya tha.paiso se ..main apna kitab nikal ke dekh raha tha ki kya kya padhna padega but jo bhi mila math chodke wo sab main padh chuka tha(u all know bihar ka math kafi tough hota hain)to mujhe acha laga then do ghanta padha aur khana khake so gaya . Phir subah mummy uthai boli tayyar ho jane ke liye school ke liye humare gaon mein ustym kisi ke yahan washroom nahin tha sablog khet mein jate the so main bhi ek lota liya pani bhara chapakal se aur chala gaya fresh hoke aaya nahaya ye sab kiya tab tak sab aa gaye the bulane school ke liye main shoes pehen raha tha to ajay bola .
Ajay- shoes mat pehen re phat jayega itni durr chalte chalte phir mummy mujhe boli ki wo sahi bol raha hain phir main hawai chappal ( sleeper) pehen ke school ke liye sabke saath nikla main dekha ki bahot log the saath 20 se 25 Jan hum sab ladka ladki milake.humlog Masti karte karte school pahuche main bhi unsabme ghul mil gaya tha ustym main thoda helthy tha isliye sabhi mujhe motka bulate the ..hum school pahuche apne class mein gayen main 7 th mein B section mein tha but us tym a aur b eksaath baithte the so humlogo ko last ka bench mila hum ek gaon se 6 ladke ek section ke the aur 2 dusre section ke aur Sonu ki didi bhi same section ki thi aur bhi teen ladki bhi hamari gaon ki...hum sabhi ladke ek bench par baithe 6 log then ghanti baji hum prathna mein gayen prathna hua us tym mera dhyan gaya....

Agla bhaag next update mein thank you all of u saath bane rahiye and keep supporting...

 

[Jaguaar]

Update 3

Maa- koi baat nahin chal main tumko sabse milwa deti huun..

Ab aage;

Phir main aur mummy dono Sonu ke ghar pahuche uske ghar mein sabhi the uske didi,bhai,papa,mummy aur badi mummy aur same ghar ajay ka bhi hain.dono chachere bhai hain.main yahan undono ke mummy ko c1 aur C2 karke likhunga...

C2 - are didi aayiye aayiye ( phir dono mere mummy ka pair chuti hain) baithiye are beauty chachi ke liye pidha la ( pidha hamare yahan lakdi ke pette ka baithne ke liye bana hota hain usko bolte hain like chota stool )..
Beauty - lai mummy
Phir wo pidha lake mere mummy ke paas rakhti hain main bhi sabhi ke pair chuta huun main wahan pe laja raha tha kyunki main sabhi ko ache se nahin janta aur main thoda shy type ka bhi tha( sorry ye hero ki jubani)main beauty di ke paas gaya unka pair chua to wo boli main budhi nahin hui huun main sirf 2 saal badi huun main kuch nahin bola sirf sir jhuka liya..
C2 - bahat sarmila hain chotu ( gaon mein sabhi mujhe chotu ,ritu ,aur bhi kai naamo se bulate hain chachi log chotu jayadatar)
Mummy - nahin kisi ko janta nahin hain na isliye sarma raha hain lekin hain bahot sidha..
C1 - haan dikhne mein heen lag rahlatin ha(lag rahe hain .sorry wo flow gaon ka ban jata hain )
Phir sab log hasne lagta hain phir mummy aur chachi ye logo ka suru hota hain ladies talk jo chalte rehta hain aur main wahan bore hote rehta huun phir kijh ke mummy se bolta huun mummy humlog kisi kaam se aaye the na..
Mummy - haa wo to bhul heen gayin ( mummy chachi ko bolti hain) iska bhi school mein naam likhaya hain Sonu aur ajay ke saath kal se le jane ke liye bolne aaye thi.aur dhyan rakhne ke liye aur help kar dega naya hain na aur aadha syllabus khatam hone ke baad aaya hain so tanik madad kar dega.
C1 - didi kaisi baat kar rahi hain chotu bhi to bhai hain upar se sab eke umar ka hain so leke jayega aur help kar dega.
Mummy - kitne baje se school hai.
C2- didi e log saadhe saat baje nikal jata hain jane mein bhi paidal ek ghanta lagta hain..
M- haan u to hain tiffin bhi le jate hain na e sab .
C2 - haan didi le jata hain sab ..
M- thik hain phir ..chalte hain...
Dono chachi boli thik hain phir humdono ghar wapas aa gayen saam bhi ho gaya tha aur hamare area mein light bhi nahin tha ustym so hum sabhi lalten aur diya mein padhte the humare maa logo ne ek naya awiskar kiya tha jo bhi dawai ka jo kaanch ka bottle hota hain hamare yahan usko shishi bolte hain uske dhakkan mein ched (hole) karke cotten ka batti banake aur shishi mein carocin ka oil daal ke diya banati thi padhne ke liye ya Roshni ke liye..main jab ghar aaya to maa saanjh dikhne gayin aur main apne kitab nikal ke baith gaya tha yahan ke hisab se book mummy mere cousin se second hand li di thi wo mera senior tha to uska book mujhe mil gaya tha.paiso se ..main apna kitab nikal ke dekh raha tha ki kya kya padhna padega but jo bhi mila math chodke wo sab main padh chuka tha(u all know bihar ka math kafi tough hota hain)to mujhe acha laga then do ghanta padha aur khana khake so gaya . Phir subah mummy uthai boli tayyar ho jane ke liye school ke liye humare gaon mein ustym kisi ke yahan washroom nahin tha sablog khet mein jate the so main bhi ek lota liya pani bhara chapakal se aur chala gaya fresh hoke aaya nahaya ye sab kiya tab tak sab aa gaye the bulane school ke liye main shoes pehen raha tha to ajay bola .
Ajay- shoes mat pehen re phat jayega itni durr chalte chalte phir mummy mujhe boli ki wo sahi bol raha hain phir main hawai chappal ( sleeper) pehen ke school ke liye sabke saath nikla main dekha ki bahot log the saath 20 se 25 Jan hum sab ladka ladki milake.humlog Masti karte karte school pahuche main bhi unsabme ghul mil gaya tha ustym main thoda helthy tha isliye sabhi mujhe motka bulate the ..hum school pahuche apne class mein gayen main 7 th mein B section mein tha but us tym a aur b eksaath baithte the so humlogo ko last ka bench mila hum ek gaon se 6 ladke ek section ke the aur 2 dusre section ke aur Sonu ki didi bhi same section ki thi aur bhi teen ladki bhi hamari gaon ki...hum sabhi ladke ek bench par baithe 6 log then ghanti baji hum prathna mein gayen prathna hua us tym mera dhyan gaya....

Agla bhaag next update mein thank you all of u saath bane rahiye and keep supporting...

Superb Updateee


Chalo toh ab hero school jaane laga.

Yeh prathna ke time apne hero kya dhyaan kaha gaya. Kahi humari heroine pe toh nhiii

 

[Avinashraj]

Superb Updateee


Chalo toh ab hero school jaane laga.

Yeh prathna ke time apne hero kya dhyaan kaha gaya. Kahi humari heroine pe toh nhiii

Hope so bhai

 

[Adirshi]

update 2


Hero abhi 12 saal ko ho gaya hain wo abhi ninth mein hain to usi tym hero ki dadi death kar jati hain jiske wajah se hero ko uske nani ghar se aana pad jata hain to hero jab apne gaon aata hain us tym hero atractive ho gaya tha utna acha nahin tha hero but thik thak tha to hero gaon pahocha us tym hero ke papa delhi mein the aur hero ke bade papa ahemdabad mein the to dono kuch karan se nahin aa payen agni dene ke liye so majburan gaon walo ne paute ko aag dene ke liye kaha to hero heen apni dadi ko agni diya .... Hero ke dadi ka pura shraadh tha wo kiya gaya aur uske baad se hero apne gaon mein heen rehne laga .... Uska admission gaon se 4 km durr ke school mein karwaya gaya kyunki unke gaon mein sirf 5 tak ka heen school tha ..ab hero gaon to aa gaya but yahan usko nani ghar jaisa nahin mil pa raha tha kyunki yahan paiso ki tangi kafi thi uske papa kahin bhi kaam par tik nahin rahe the jo bhi jamin thi usme kafi saare unhone bech diya tha ya girwi rakh diya tha...aur khud jahan kamane jate wahan se kuchek rupya bhejte..to aisi uske ghar ki halat thi apna hero ko khet ka kaam bhi nahin karna aata but kehte hain na aadmi kuch bhi kar sakta hain to apna hero bhi karne laga tha waise hero ko uske nani ghar jane ka fayeda mila tha ki uska English kafi achi ho gayin thi kyunki gaon mein 6 th ke baad se English suru hota tha aur apne hero ko English likhna aur bolna bhi aata tha ...ab hero ke admission ke baad school jane ki bari aayi to hero ke paas kuch nahin tha cycle nahin tha aksar wahan ke sabhi ladke ladki paidal school jate the...to apna hero abhi nani ghar se aaya tha to uske jaan pehchan ka koi nahin tha gaon ka to ye chiz apni maa se bolta hain...( Yahan gaon mein gaon ki bhasha ka use hota hain but main usko hindi mein likh raha huun agar aapko gaon ki language mein chahiye to plzz bataiyega..)

Hero - maa main yahan kisi ko janta nahin abhi main kisi se mila bhi nahin huun to jaise jaunga...school utna duur..
Maa- koi baat nahin chal main tumko sabse milwa deti huun..
( Gaon mein hero ke apni Patidar mins jo unke 7 pust wale the sabhi ka ghar ek line mein tha..yahan hero ke dost logo ko entry hogi jisme bahot se honge but 5 ekdum khash hone main sirf unke bare mein bata deta huu .. baki sabka naam aate rahega ..Sonu, Vikki , abhilekh( ajay),jhunjhun ( santosh) isko sabhi jhunjhun bolte hain kyunki gaon mein ek dhaga bandha jata hain ladko ko unke kamar ke paas isme jhunjhun ka dhage mein jhunjhuna tha jo always bajta rehta tha. .isliye sabhi usko jhunjhun bulate the isme Sonu aur abhilekh hero ke saath the aur dono junior the but isme sabhi ek heen age ke the..)
To hero ki mummy hero ko leke uske chachi ghar pahuchi jo Sonu aur abhilekh ka tha dono chachere bhai the..isme hero ki mummy sabse badi thi relation mein but age mein uske sabhi chachi se choti thi but gaon mein age nahin rista ko aage rakha jata hain isliye sabhi log jitni bhi chachi thi ya chacha the sabhi hero ki maa ke paon chute the..

Aage ka next bhaag mein kripya kar ye bataiyega ki aapko mere village ke language mein chahiye ya hindi mein..

to kahani thodi aage badhi aur isike sath hero ki dadi bhi nahi rahi rip dadiji ke liye
to ab ye decide ho chuka hai ke apna hero apne hi ghar rehkar padhega, sahi hai par mushkil hota hai jab aap apni padhiya aur apni life ka ek bada hissa kahi aur bitaye to nayi jagah me adjust hone me samay lagta hai aur ghar ke haalat hi kafi ache nahi hai
khair ab jab dosto ki entry ho hi gayi hai to maja to aayega
badhiya update

 

[Adirshi]

ajji tann mera hijack

 

[Adirshi]

Update 3

Maa- koi baat nahin chal main tumko sabse milwa deti huun..

Ab aage;

Phir main aur mummy dono Sonu ke ghar pahuche uske ghar mein sabhi the uske didi,bhai,papa,mummy aur badi mummy aur same ghar ajay ka bhi hain.dono chachere bhai hain.main yahan undono ke mummy ko c1 aur C2 karke likhunga...

C2 - are didi aayiye aayiye ( phir dono mere mummy ka pair chuti hain) baithiye are beauty chachi ke liye pidha la ( pidha hamare yahan lakdi ke pette ka baithne ke liye bana hota hain usko bolte hain like chota stool )..
Beauty - lai mummy
Phir wo pidha lake mere mummy ke paas rakhti hain main bhi sabhi ke pair chuta huun main wahan pe laja raha tha kyunki main sabhi ko ache se nahin janta aur main thoda shy type ka bhi tha( sorry ye hero ki jubani)main beauty di ke paas gaya unka pair chua to wo boli main budhi nahin hui huun main sirf 2 saal badi huun main kuch nahin bola sirf sir jhuka liya..
C2 - bahat sarmila hain chotu ( gaon mein sabhi mujhe chotu ,ritu ,aur bhi kai naamo se bulate hain chachi log chotu jayadatar)
Mummy - nahin kisi ko janta nahin hain na isliye sarma raha hain lekin hain bahot sidha..
C1 - haan dikhne mein heen lag rahlatin ha(lag rahe hain .sorry wo flow gaon ka ban jata hain )
Phir sab log hasne lagta hain phir mummy aur chachi ye logo ka suru hota hain ladies talk jo chalte rehta hain aur main wahan bore hote rehta huun phir kijh ke mummy se bolta huun mummy humlog kisi kaam se aaye the na..
Mummy - haa wo to bhul heen gayin ( mummy chachi ko bolti hain) iska bhi school mein naam likhaya hain Sonu aur ajay ke saath kal se le jane ke liye bolne aaye thi.aur dhyan rakhne ke liye aur help kar dega naya hain na aur aadha syllabus khatam hone ke baad aaya hain so tanik madad kar dega.
C1 - didi kaisi baat kar rahi hain chotu bhi to bhai hain upar se sab eke umar ka hain so leke jayega aur help kar dega.
Mummy - kitne baje se school hai.
C2- didi e log saadhe saat baje nikal jata hain jane mein bhi paidal ek ghanta lagta hain..
M- haan u to hain tiffin bhi le jate hain na e sab .
C2 - haan didi le jata hain sab ..
M- thik hain phir ..chalte hain...
Dono chachi boli thik hain phir humdono ghar wapas aa gayen saam bhi ho gaya tha aur hamare area mein light bhi nahin tha ustym so hum sabhi lalten aur diya mein padhte the humare maa logo ne ek naya awiskar kiya tha jo bhi dawai ka jo kaanch ka bottle hota hain hamare yahan usko shishi bolte hain uske dhakkan mein ched (hole) karke cotten ka batti banake aur shishi mein carocin ka oil daal ke diya banati thi padhne ke liye ya Roshni ke liye..main jab ghar aaya to maa saanjh dikhne gayin aur main apne kitab nikal ke baith gaya tha yahan ke hisab se book mummy mere cousin se second hand li di thi wo mera senior tha to uska book mujhe mil gaya tha.paiso se ..main apna kitab nikal ke dekh raha tha ki kya kya padhna padega but jo bhi mila math chodke wo sab main padh chuka tha(u all know bihar ka math kafi tough hota hain)to mujhe acha laga then do ghanta padha aur khana khake so gaya . Phir subah mummy uthai boli tayyar ho jane ke liye school ke liye humare gaon mein ustym kisi ke yahan washroom nahin tha sablog khet mein jate the so main bhi ek lota liya pani bhara chapakal se aur chala gaya fresh hoke aaya nahaya ye sab kiya tab tak sab aa gaye the bulane school ke liye main shoes pehen raha tha to ajay bola .
Ajay- shoes mat pehen re phat jayega itni durr chalte chalte phir mummy mujhe boli ki wo sahi bol raha hain phir main hawai chappal ( sleeper) pehen ke school ke liye sabke saath nikla main dekha ki bahot log the saath 20 se 25 Jan hum sab ladka ladki milake.humlog Masti karte karte school pahuche main bhi unsabme ghul mil gaya tha ustym main thoda helthy tha isliye sabhi mujhe motka bulate the ..hum school pahuche apne class mein gayen main 7 th mein B section mein tha but us tym a aur b eksaath baithte the so humlogo ko last ka bench mila hum ek gaon se 6 ladke ek section ke the aur 2 dusre section ke aur Sonu ki didi bhi same section ki thi aur bhi teen ladki bhi hamari gaon ki...hum sabhi ladke ek bench par baithe 6 log then ghanti baji hum prathna mein gayen prathna hua us tym mera dhyan gaya....

Agla bhaag next update mein thank you all of u saath bane rahiye and keep supporting...

nice to story narration ab third person se first person par aa gaya hai, badhiya hai
waise jis avishkar ki baat kari hai aapne hamare taraf temba bolte usko par ab dikhta hi nahi hai
badhiya update hai to ab hero dheere dheere sabhi me ghul mil raha hai noice
waise ye dhyan kis or chala gaya, kahi heroine to nahi
nice one

 

[Avinashraj]

nice to story narration ab third person se first person par aa gaya hai, badhiya hai
waise jis avishkar ki baat kari hai aapne hamare taraf temba bolte usko par ab dikhta hi nahi hai
badhiya update hai to ab hero dheere dheere sabhi me ghul mil raha hai noice
waise ye dhyan kis or chala gaya, kahi heroine to nahi
nice one

Thanks bhai dekhte hain

 

[Avinashraj]

Thanks all of u

 

[Avinashraj]

nice to story narration ab third person se first person par aa gaya hai, badhiya hai
waise jis avishkar ki baat kari hai aapne hamare taraf temba bolte usko par ab dikhta hi nahi hai
badhiya update hai to ab hero dheere dheere sabhi me ghul mil raha hai noice
waise ye dhyan kis or chala gaya, kahi heroine to nahi
nice one

Bhai aapse kuch jankari leni hain mins baat karna hain story se related can I message u