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Romance Ek anjani si love story
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ek baat to hai.. gaon mein jo apna pan dekhne ko milte hai wo aur kaha dekhne ko mile..
Btw Every word of the story like the first rain drops. While reading, I started to feel that I am connected with every character. Perhaps it is the magic of your writing. Keep writing like this and keep us entertained through your stylus.
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab
Btw Every word of the story like the first rain drops. While reading, I started to feel that I am connected with every character. Perhaps it is the magic of your writing. Keep writing like this and keep us entertained through your stylus.
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab
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Thanku madam jiek baat to hai.. gaon mein jo apna pan dekhne ko milte hai wo aur kaha dekhne ko mile..
Btw Every word of the story like the first rain drops. While reading, I started to feel that I am connected with every character. Perhaps it is the magic of your writing. Keep writing like this and keep us entertained through your stylus.
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab
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Update 4
Ab aage;
Main us ladki ko dekh raha tha jo prathna karwa rahi thi wo do ladki thi but mera dhyan ek pe gaya ekdum cute golmatol cute si mujhe durr se bahot achi lag rahi thi main use heen dekh raha tha haath jode aur dusra reason ye bhi tha ki mujhe ye prathna yaad bhi nahin tha infect kabhi suna nahin tha isliye main usi ko dekh raha tha aur mujhe acha bhi lag raha tha mera dhyan tuta jab jaikara hua ..phir main khudse jhep gaya phir humlog class mein aaye aur sanyog se wo bhi mere class ki nikli but wo first bench pe bathi thi aur main second last pe phir main socha mann mein chodo padhai karte hain phir teacher aa gayen aur sanyog se first class English ka tha wo sabka hajri bole (attendees) mera jab roll no.aaya mujhe pata nahin tha actually ki kitna hain phir wo khud heen bole koi new ladka aaya hain kya phir main khada hua then sir bole.
Sir- new ho .
Me- ji sir
Sir- kahan se ho ( then main bataya sabkuch )
Sir phir bole baith jao main baith gaya unhone phir sabhi ko book nikalne ke liye bola humsablog nikal liye phir sir padhane lage wo ek poem padha rahe the achanak sir se mistake hua ek word mein main turat utha phir sir ko bola sir ye nahin ye word hain sir mujhe ghurr ke dekhe bole tum jayada jante ho ya main phir main bola sir aap jo sentence padhaye hain wo galat hain usko ye bolte hain sir bole mujhe aage aao.main gaya aage main wahan pe hamesha aage baithta tha isliye mujhe darr nahin laga phir sir bole pura poem padh sakte ho main bola ji haan unhone bola ratta marke to nahin rakhe ho main bola sir aap jo bhi puch lo padh ke bata deta huun uske hijjye ke saath(translate)wo mujhe ghurr ke dekhne lage wo heen nahi pura class dekhne laga jaise main koi alian huun phir tabhi ek ladki uthi aur boli (wo wahan ke mukhiya ki beti thi) thik hain phir ye wala paath padh ke batao main bola thik hain didi .phir main apne bench pe ja raha tha book lane ke liye phir sir bole ye wale book se heen padhao( hamare school mein ladka aur ladki kabhi baat nahin karte the but wo mukhiya ki ladki roll no.first thi isliye unko jalan hua but mujhe acha bhi laga)
main apna dhunn mein suru ho gaya mujhe kya pata tha ki sabko samjhana hain ki tabhi master ji bole ki baua aaram se sabko pata lagna chahiye tum to khud heen padhe ja rahe huun kavita ki tarah tani aaram se main bola sorry sir ,then phir main har ek paragraph ka English aur hindi batate gaya do heen bataya tha ki ghanti baj gayi master sahab mujhse bahot khush hue aur bole principal sir ke office mein aane ke liye lunch tym mein . Phir main apne bench pe gaya sablog mujhse gale mile aur Sonu bola tu to chappad phad diya bhaiba .phir aise heen do class hua . .
phir lunch tym mein gaya principal sir ke office mein sir ka pair chua wo aashirwad diye phir wahin introduction liye phir bole tumahara English acha hain to kyun na tum sir ki jagah apna class ko heen padhao sir sirf hajri leke aa jayenge aur Tum padhana do ghanti English ka lagatar main unko bola sir main kaisa sir bole kar sakte ho tum acha rahega na teacher bhi kam hain ek ka tum dekhlo aur tumko jo book chahiye hoga iske badla mein hum dilwa diya karenge ya aur bhi kucho chahiye hoga phir hum bole thik hain sir padha denge .
unke cabin se aaya tab tak lunch over ho gaya tha class mein ek teacher the wo padha rahe the math main gaya pucha may I come in sir , sir bole kya bola phir main wapas repeat kiya unko English samajh mein nahin aa raha tha phir ajay mujhe ishara kiya phir main hindi mein bola mins apne language mein ghusu sir (andar aaun sir) wo bole ghuso ghuso phir mere se puche wahin sab intro aur kahan gaya tha ye sab aur aakhir mein puche ye tum pehle kya puch raha tha bolo.phir main bola sir andar aane ka ijjajat mang raha tha wo bole ki hindi aata hain hum bole haan phir bole hum jab bhi ho apna bhasha mein baat karoge hum bole thik hain phir wo padhaye then last mein chutti ho gaya phir humlog basta leke nikle paidal raste mein beauty di puchi ki sir kya bole unko sab bata diye ki kya bole phir wo boli aaj se tu to humsabka sir ho gaya phir wo log mujhe chidhane lage aise heen masti karte hum ghar aa gaye...
Aage ka next update mein keep supporting thank you
Ab aage;
Main us ladki ko dekh raha tha jo prathna karwa rahi thi wo do ladki thi but mera dhyan ek pe gaya ekdum cute golmatol cute si mujhe durr se bahot achi lag rahi thi main use heen dekh raha tha haath jode aur dusra reason ye bhi tha ki mujhe ye prathna yaad bhi nahin tha infect kabhi suna nahin tha isliye main usi ko dekh raha tha aur mujhe acha bhi lag raha tha mera dhyan tuta jab jaikara hua ..phir main khudse jhep gaya phir humlog class mein aaye aur sanyog se wo bhi mere class ki nikli but wo first bench pe bathi thi aur main second last pe phir main socha mann mein chodo padhai karte hain phir teacher aa gayen aur sanyog se first class English ka tha wo sabka hajri bole (attendees) mera jab roll no.aaya mujhe pata nahin tha actually ki kitna hain phir wo khud heen bole koi new ladka aaya hain kya phir main khada hua then sir bole.
Sir- new ho .
Me- ji sir
Sir- kahan se ho ( then main bataya sabkuch )
Sir phir bole baith jao main baith gaya unhone phir sabhi ko book nikalne ke liye bola humsablog nikal liye phir sir padhane lage wo ek poem padha rahe the achanak sir se mistake hua ek word mein main turat utha phir sir ko bola sir ye nahin ye word hain sir mujhe ghurr ke dekhe bole tum jayada jante ho ya main phir main bola sir aap jo sentence padhaye hain wo galat hain usko ye bolte hain sir bole mujhe aage aao.main gaya aage main wahan pe hamesha aage baithta tha isliye mujhe darr nahin laga phir sir bole pura poem padh sakte ho main bola ji haan unhone bola ratta marke to nahin rakhe ho main bola sir aap jo bhi puch lo padh ke bata deta huun uske hijjye ke saath(translate)wo mujhe ghurr ke dekhne lage wo heen nahi pura class dekhne laga jaise main koi alian huun phir tabhi ek ladki uthi aur boli (wo wahan ke mukhiya ki beti thi) thik hain phir ye wala paath padh ke batao main bola thik hain didi .phir main apne bench pe ja raha tha book lane ke liye phir sir bole ye wale book se heen padhao( hamare school mein ladka aur ladki kabhi baat nahin karte the but wo mukhiya ki ladki roll no.first thi isliye unko jalan hua but mujhe acha bhi laga)
main apna dhunn mein suru ho gaya mujhe kya pata tha ki sabko samjhana hain ki tabhi master ji bole ki baua aaram se sabko pata lagna chahiye tum to khud heen padhe ja rahe huun kavita ki tarah tani aaram se main bola sorry sir ,then phir main har ek paragraph ka English aur hindi batate gaya do heen bataya tha ki ghanti baj gayi master sahab mujhse bahot khush hue aur bole principal sir ke office mein aane ke liye lunch tym mein . Phir main apne bench pe gaya sablog mujhse gale mile aur Sonu bola tu to chappad phad diya bhaiba .phir aise heen do class hua . .
phir lunch tym mein gaya principal sir ke office mein sir ka pair chua wo aashirwad diye phir wahin introduction liye phir bole tumahara English acha hain to kyun na tum sir ki jagah apna class ko heen padhao sir sirf hajri leke aa jayenge aur Tum padhana do ghanti English ka lagatar main unko bola sir main kaisa sir bole kar sakte ho tum acha rahega na teacher bhi kam hain ek ka tum dekhlo aur tumko jo book chahiye hoga iske badla mein hum dilwa diya karenge ya aur bhi kucho chahiye hoga phir hum bole thik hain sir padha denge .
unke cabin se aaya tab tak lunch over ho gaya tha class mein ek teacher the wo padha rahe the math main gaya pucha may I come in sir , sir bole kya bola phir main wapas repeat kiya unko English samajh mein nahin aa raha tha phir ajay mujhe ishara kiya phir main hindi mein bola mins apne language mein ghusu sir (andar aaun sir) wo bole ghuso ghuso phir mere se puche wahin sab intro aur kahan gaya tha ye sab aur aakhir mein puche ye tum pehle kya puch raha tha bolo.phir main bola sir andar aane ka ijjajat mang raha tha wo bole ki hindi aata hain hum bole haan phir bole hum jab bhi ho apna bhasha mein baat karoge hum bole thik hain phir wo padhaye then last mein chutti ho gaya phir humlog basta leke nikle paidal raste mein beauty di puchi ki sir kya bole unko sab bata diye ki kya bole phir wo boli aaj se tu to humsabka sir ho gaya phir wo log mujhe chidhane lage aise heen masti karte hum ghar aa gaye...
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good updateUpdate 1
Kahani suru karte hain ek aurat abhi room mein bahot jod se tarap rahi hain sabhi teen char aurte usko bahot kas ke pakad ke rakhe hain (ye 95 ke aas paas ka tym hain us time jayadatar bache ghar mein heen paida hote the ) wo aurat kafi jod se chilla rahi hain usi tym ek bache ki kilkari gunj uthti hain ...aur usi tym janm hota hain hamare cute se hero ka jo apni bua ke ghar paida hua hain sabhi log bahot khush the us ghar mein kyunki unke bua ka ghar bana tha uske baad ye pehla ladka th jo us ghar mein janm liya tha ..(aisa nahin hain jo ladka janm nahin liya tha bua ka jo beta tha wo hero se 15 saal bada tha but wo bua ke purane ghar mein paida hua tha ) aate hain kahani ki aur us ghar mein sabhi log bahot khush the ...ladke ka baap us tym bhi nashe mein dhut tha ...aur wo insabse bekhbar sirf itna pata tha ki ek ladka uske ghar janm liya hain ye khabar hero ke nani ghar chithi dwara bheji gayi wahan bhi chithi padke sabhi log bahot khush hue kyunki unke ghar ka us generation ka wo pehla ladka tha hero ke nani ghar mein sabhi ke yaha jelebi banti gayi ...aur usi tym hero ke nani ghar se chithi bheja gaya ki jitna jaldi hosake unke nati ko unke yahan laya jayen...( Yahan se main story ko direct hero ko uske nani ghar bhej raha huun kyunki us tym gaon ye sab mein itna naamkaran ye sab ka jayada kuch nahin tha isliye main direct story ko uske nani ghar le ja raha huun )..
Aise heen 2 mahine beet gayen aur hero ke nana aayen train se hero ko le jane ke liye unhone hero ko apni goad mein liya usko sone ka chain pehnake aur wo log dusre heen din nikal gayen bokaro ke liye ( ye hero ka nani ghar hain) hero ki maa ,hero ,aur uske nana gayen wo log saam ko nikle kyunki train raat ki thi Patna se isliye aur agle heen din wo log pahoch gayen bokaro wahin se dhumdham se hero ki entry hui ek dum baaje waaje ke saath wahan bhi sabhi hero ke saath bahot khush the khash kar hero ke masi ki ladki jo hero se 2 saal badi thi usko to uska khilona mil gaya tha wo dinbhar uske saath rehti wo hero ko apne nanhe haatho se leti aise heen karke hero ek saal ka ho gaya aur hero ab chalne bhi laga tha wo ek bahot heen cute aur masoom sa tha bole to golu molu uske 1 saal hone ke baad hero gaon chala aaya.. aise heen karte karte time nikalta gaya ....hero study ke liye nani ghar chala gaya ...
Aage ki story next part mein wahan se kahani proper tarike se suru hogi ..I know aap logo ko mere lekhni mein maja nahin aayega iske liye main mafi mangta huun but new huun dheere dheere patri pe aa jaunga..
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