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Thriller Ek daastan....... Pyar ki (Romance, Thriller & Sci-Fiction)

Apko yeh story kaisi lgi?

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  • Story aage bdaun yan yahin khatam kr doon

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harryharsh31

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Aapka ye story maine xossip pe padha h abhi current update tk nhi phucha h
intjaar rhega
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harryharsh31

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Update 18

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Ek or pyara update.
Kya scene dikhate h aap.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
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harryharsh31

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Amazing update
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Zabardast update
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Aryan...... Tumne bahut badi galti kr di poonam, aaj tumne fir is drinde ko jga diya hai, ab tabahi hogi, barbaad kr dunga main tumhe aur tumhare boss ko, tum bhale hi yahan se bhag gyi ho, lekin mujhse nahi bhag paogi aur main janta hoon tum abhi bhi mujhe dekh rahi ho, main aa raha hoon tumhare pass, bhag lo jahan tk bhagna hai, hahahaha hahahahaha hahahaha.

Poonam apni car me bethe apne mobile pe us ghr ke sabhi cams se wahan ka sab haal dekh rahi thi, wo jab aryan ko dekhti hai aur uski dhamki sunti hai to ghbra jati hai, ac car me bhi use pasina aane lgta hai, wo driver ko car tez krne ke bolti hai aur us gher ke ek guard ko call kr ghr udane ko keh deti hai.

Ab aage.....

Aryan apne pure gusse me room ke door ko ek laat marta hai, jis se door tutke udta hua samne ki deewar se takrata hai, aryan room se bahr jhank kr dekhta hai ki her taraf guards the aur unke hathon me guns aur lohe ki rods thi, aryan charo taraf najar ghumata hai to use apne left side ki deewar pe do talwarein latki hui dikhi, jise dekh aryan ke face pe ek evil smile aa jati hai, fir wo us room me hi lgi machino se ek machine ko ghaseet te hue door ke pass lata hai, kajal apni fati ankhon se bs aryan ko dekhe ja rahi thi, jo machine aryan ghseet te hue door ke pass laya tha wo itni bhari thi ki kisi aam adami se to wo machine hile bhi na aur machine ko ghaseet te samay aryan ke hathon, arm , biceps aur sholders ki nasein aise ful rahi thi jaise abhi fat jaygi, kajal ke ankhon ke ansoon sukh chuke the aur wo aryan ki harktein dekhe ja rahi thi.
Aryan machine ko room ke adhi bahr aur adhi andr krke chod deta hai, machine ke jis side batteries thi wo side aryan ne bahr ki hui thi, fir aryan ne room se ek acid ki bottle le kr us machine ke battery wali side fenk kr, jhat se kajal ke pass aa use apne sath lekr room me lge bed ko khda kr uske piche chip jata hai, udher wo acid dheere-2 niche ja raha tha wo machine me lgi batteries ko jaise hi chuta hai, wahan ek dhmaka hota hai, jis se aas pass khade guards ke upr battery ka acid girta hai aur wo dard se tadpne lgte hai, dhmaka jyada bda to nahi tha bt us dhmake se wahan kafi dhuan ho gya tha, aryan jaise hi dhekhta hai dhua fail chuka hai wo kajal ko kapde pehn ne ka bolkr foran door ke pass pahunch pehle to machine side krta hai fr room se bahr aa dhuen ki aad me tezi se apne left side ko jane lgta hai, bich me use jo bhi guard milta uski gardan marod deta, uski speed itni thi ki ass pass ke guards ko jab tk kuch smjh aata wo bhagwan ko pyare ho chuke hote, aryan hall me latki dono talwarein nikal hall ke bichon bich khda ho jata hai, jaise hi dhuan hatne lgta hai to guards ko aryan hall ke bich khda najar aata hai, 4 guards lohe ki rod lekr aryan ki taraf bhagte hai, is se pehle ki wo aryan ke pass pahunchte aryan apni speed se unke samne khada ho dono talwaron ko ghumata hai aur fr apni speed se wapas hall ke bich aa kr khda ho jata hai, baki ke guards yeh sab dekh hairan aur preshan ho jate hai, ki jo guards aryan ki taraf bad rahe the wo adhe raste bhi nahi pahunche ki unki kati hui lashein zameen pe padi hui thi, sab guards aryan ko dekh fire krne hi wale hote hai ki aryan fir apni speed se hall ke ek corner se apni talwarein ghumani shuru krta hai aur ghumate hue apni speed se aage bhi bad raha tha, kisi ko kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha aur na hi kuch dikhai de raha tha, bs sunai de rahi thi to guards ki cheekhen aur sirf guards ki katti hui lashein dikhai deti, baki ke guards jab tk aryan ki position samjh waha goli chlate tb tk aryan apni speed se dodta hua wahan se aage nikal jata, kuch hi der me wahan sirf lashein hi lashein thi, tb tk kajal bhi kapde pehn kr jab bahr aati hai to wo dekhti hai ki charon tarf lashein aur aryan pura khun se bhiga hua hall ke bich me khda tha, kajal jab jab yeh sb dekhti hai to use vomiting aane lgti hai.
Aryan wahan ke hr room me dekhta hai fir use wohi doctor milta hai jo poonam ke sath tha, aryan use bhi mar kajal ka hath pkd ghr se bhr jane lgta hai.

Aryan bahr aake dekhta hai to use bahr 12 guards najar aate hai wo kajal ko ek side chupa kr speed se bahr jakr sbko katt deta hai aur kajal ko lekr use bahr khadi car me betha khud driving seat ki taraf jane lgta hai jab wo door kholta hai tabhi do goliyan aker aryan ko lgti hai, jis se aryan ladkhda jata hai, wo upr dekhta hai jahan chhat pe use 2 snipers dikhai dete hai, wo turant kajal ko car chlake yahan se niklne ko kehta hai aur khud gher ke ander chla jata hai.
Bahr kajal jaldi se car start kr wahan se nikal jati hai, use bas is khun khrabe se dur jana tha.
Aur ander aryan bhagte hue chhat pe jata hai jab wo chhat ka door tod ke chhat pe aata hai to use fir se do goliyan lgti hai, aryan pura jakhmi ho chuka tha, but ab bhi wo apni takkat juta un dono ke pass pahunch ke un dono ko gale se pkd uthata hai, fir niche patk kr chhat pe jo grill lgi thi use ukhad kr dono ke sine me utar deta hai.
Aryan abhi bhi bahut gusse me tha wo pure jor se dahad marta hai aur ladkhdte hue wapas jane lgta hai, wo abhi door ke pass pahuncha bhi nahi tha ki..... Booooooooooom.
 

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Kuch time pehle simi ke gher me......

Simi apne room me rote hue so chuki thi, wo ek dum se darr kr uth gyi aur uske muh se sirf ek hi shabd nikla.

Simi chikh kr uthti hui..... Aryaaan.

Gher me is samay koi nahi tha siwaye aru ke, wo apne kamre me aram kr rahi thi, ki use simi ki chikh sunai deti hai, wo bhag kr simi ke room me jati hai, jahan wo dekhti hai simi puri tarah pasine se bhigi hui thi aur lgatar roye ja rahi thi, aru uske pass jake bed pe beth jati hai.

Aru...... Di.... Di kya hua? Aap aise chilayi kyu aur ro kyu rahi ho aap.

Simi aru ke gale lg jati hai aur fot-2 kr rona shuru kr deti hai, aru use chup krane ki bahut koshish krti hai, but simi shant nahi ho rahi thi.

Aru..... Di apko jiju ki kasam pls shant ho jao aur btao kya baat hai, mera dil ghbra raha hai.

Simi aru ki baat sun thodi si shant hoti hai, but wo abhi bhi ro rahi thi, fir simi aru ko rote hue hospital se ab tk ki sari kahani btati hai.

Aru.... Oh ho di, aap bhi na, ho skta hai jiju ko koi kaam aa gya ho.

Simi..... Nahi aru baat kuch aur hai, mujhe aisa lg raha hai jaise wo bahut badi musibat me hai, abhi sapne me bhi mujhe feel hua ki aryan ko kuch to hua hai.

Aru..... Di jiju ko kuch nahi hoga, yeh aap bhi janti ho ki jiju bhi apse bahut pyar krte hai, wo wapas jrur ayenge aur agr apka dil fir bhi nahi manta to aise room me bethke rone se kuch hasil nahi hoga, apko jiju ko dhundhna chahiye.

Simi..... Tu bilkul thik keh rahi hai, but main kahan dhundhu unko, koi bhi aisa surag nahi hai mere pass.

Aru.... Di aap pyar me pagal ho gyi ho, kahan gyi meri wo di jo ek journalist hai aur wo apne dimag aur mehnat se hr mushkil ko par kr leti hai.

Simi apne ansoon ponchte hue...... Tu thik keh rahi hai, mujhe aise hath pe hath rakh ke nahi bethna chahiye, main unhe dhundh nikalungi.

Aru..... That's like my di, chlo ab fresh hoke lg jao kaam pe.

Simi bed se uth jhat se bathroom me jake fresh ho kr bahr aati hai, wo ready hokr bahr chli jati hai, raste me wo kisi ko call kr aryan ka number trace krne ko bolti hai, thodi der me use call aati hai jis se use ek address milta hai jahan aryan ka mobile switch off hua tha.
Simi foran us address ki taraf jane lagti hai, simi ek sunsan raste pe pahuch jati hai, jiske dono taraf jungle tha, simi car ko aage le ja rahi thi use wahan koi bhi aisa rasta nahi dikh raha tha jahan koi gher ho, achanak jungle ke ek kache raste se use ek car aati hui dikhti hai, jo kajal chla rahi thi, wo car highway pe aa kr left mod jati hai aur aage badne lgti hai, simi apni car us kache raste pe le jati hai jahan se kajal ki car aayi thi, wo abhi thoda aage gyi thi ki use wahan jungle ke bich me ek ghr dikhta hai, simi apni car gher ke right side lge ek bade se ped ke piche rok leti hai, fir wo car se utar kr gher dekhne lgti hai, gher ke teen side jungle aur piche ek khai aur khai ke niche ek river thi, tabhi use goliyon ki awaz sunai deti hai wo ek dum se ghbra jati hai, wo ander jana chahti thi but wo apni wajah se aryan ki jaan khatre me nahi dalna chahti thi, wo ghr se thodi duri pr thi, ek pal wo police ko inform krne ki sochti hai, but agle hi pal use ek dhmake ki awaz sunai deti hai, wo dar jati hai, wo ghr ki taraf daudne lgti hai, tabhi use gher ki chhat se koi kudta hua najar aata hai, jab wo dhyan se dekhti hai to wo jor aryan keh chilati hai, tabhi do aur dhmake hote hai aur pura ghr jalte hue malbe me tabdeel ho jata hai, simi jaldi se khai ki taraf jati hai jahan use aryan girta hua dikhta hai, wo use dekh jor-2 se aryan pukarte hue rone lgti hai.

Simi jld hi khud ko sambhal apni car leke wahan se khai ke niche ki taraf jane wale raste pe jane lgti hai, wo bahut tezi se car chlate hue roye ja rahi thi sath me bhagwan se prarthna bhi kr rahi thi ki aryan ko kuch na ho.

Actually hua yeh tha ki jo pehla bomb blast hua tha wo gher ke front pe hua tha, tb aryan jald hi situation ko smjh kr piche ki taraf daud lga deta hai aur wahan se jump krke kud jata hai, niche jate hue uski ankhen band hone lgi thi, btabhi aryan ko aisa lgta hai jaise koi use pukar raha hai, wo dhyan deta hai to use wo simi ki awaz lgti hai.

Dusri taraf
Poonam apne mobile se aryan ki puri fight scene dekh kr bahut darr gyi thi, lekin jab wo aryan ko chhat ki taraf jata dekh aur thodi der me hue blast ko dekh use lagta hai ki aryan blast me mara gya, to bahut hi khush ho jati hai.

Poonam apne man me...... Akhir tum khatam ho hi gye AK, ab tum kabhi bhi mujh tk nahi pahunch paoge.

Idher aryan bhi niche girte ja raha tha, wo apne inhi palon me apni life ke bare me sochne lgta hai, fir jab use simi ka khyal aata hai to uske chehre pe smile aa jati hai aur apne man me sochne lgta hai.

Aryan apne man me..... Bhagwan abhi main tumhare pass nahi aa skta, mujhe kisi ka pyar bula raha hai aur main bhi uske sath apni zindagi jeena chahta hoon, wo zindagi jis ke liye main saloon se tars raha tha, jisme skoon ho, jisme khushiyan aur gum bantne ke liye meri bhi ek family ho aur maine wo sab simi ki ankhon me, uske pyar me dekha hai, janta hoon maine bahut paap kiye hai, jiski koi mafi nahi hogi, lekin abhi tujhe mere liye intzar krna hoga.

Udher simi bhi apni speed se niche ki taraf bad rahi thi aur apne man me sochte hue..... Bhagwan pls aryan ko kuch mt hone dena, unhe bacha lo, main apna pyar khona nahi chahti, abhi to humne thik se baat bhi nahi ki aur na hi jyada mulakat ki hai, main unke sath apni sari zindagi bitana chahti hoon, unki bahoon me humesha rehna chahti hoon, mera pyar mujhse mat cheeno bhagwan, nahi to main bhi jee nahi paungi, tum itne nirdayee to nahi ho skte, wo kitne salon se akele bhatkte rahe, unhe bhi jeene ka pura haq hai, khush rehne ka bhi unhe pura haq hai, main unhe wo zindagi aur unke haq ki sari khushiyan dena chahti hoon, pls bhagwan mere sapno ko mat todo.

Yahi sab sochte hue simi tezi se car chlate hue niche ja rahi thi.

Idher aryan bhi simi ke bare me sochte hue, chapaaaak river me girta hai, wo bahut jor se girta hau jis se wo river ki gehrai tk ander jata hai.
 

Sanju

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Nice update bhai keep posting
 

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Very very nice update
 
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