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Thriller Ek daastan....... Pyar ki (Romance, Thriller & Sci-Fiction)

Apko yeh story kaisi lgi?

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aditya

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Amazing update
 

Naughtyrishabh

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Update 19

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kya behtareen dhang se dikhaya h aapne.
Waah mzaaaa aa gya bhai.
Aaryan or uske Dil ki aawaj ke bich ki baatein badi hi kamal ka lagi.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
 
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Naughtyrishabh

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Update 21,22,23

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kahne ko shbd nhi h mere paas.
Kitni badhiya tarike se aapne dikhaya h Aaryan dwara bachana .
Isse or kamal ka ho hi nhi Sakta tha.
E lajwaab that.

Or ab,
Aage ka intjar
 
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harryharsh31

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Update-33

Aryan apne man me..... Bhagwan abhi main tumhare pass nahi aa skta, mujhe kisi ka pyar bula raha hai aur main bhi uske sath apni zindagi jeena chahta hoon, wo zindagi jis ke liye main saloon se tars raha tha, jisme skoon ho, jisme khushiyan aur gum bantne ke liye meri bhi ek family ho aur maine wo sab simi ki ankhon me, uske pyar me dekha hai, janta hoon maine bahut paap kiye hai, jiski koi mafi nahi hogi, lekin abhi tujhe mere liye intzar krna hoga.

Udher simi bhi apni speed se niche ki taraf bad rahi thi aur apne man me sochte hue..... Bhagwan pls aryan ko kuch mt hone dena, unhe bacha lo, main apna pyar khona nahi chahti, abhi to humne thik se baat bhi nahi ki aur na hi jyada mulakat ki hai, main unke sath apni sari zindagi bitana chahti hoon, unki bahoon me humesha rehna chahti hoon, mera pyar mujhse mat cheeno bhagwan, nahi to main bhi jee nahi paungi, tum itne nirdayee to nahi ho skte, wo kitne salon se akele bhatkte rahe, unhe bhi jeene ka pura haq hai, khush rehne ka bhi unhe pura haq hai, main unhe wo zindagi aur unke haq ki sari khushiyan dena chahti hoon, pls bhagwan mere sapno ko mat todo.

Yahi sab sochte hue simi tezi se car chlate hue niche ja rahi thi.

Idher aryan bhi simi ke bare me sochte hue, chapaaaak river me girta hai, wo bahut jor se girta hau jis se wo river ki gehrai tk ander jata hai.

Ab agge....

Simi thodi der baad niche pahunchti hai, wahan ghanna jungle tha, jisme car nahi ja skti thi to simi car wahin rok use lock krti hai aur car se first aid box lekr jungle ke ander jane lgti hai, thodi der me use river dikhai deti hai, wo river ke pass pahunch aryan ko dhudhne lgti hai, jab use aryan kahin nahi dikhta to wo river me kud jati hai aur swim krte hue gehrai tk aryan ko dhundhne lg jati hai, wo swim krte hue kafi aage aa jati, jahan use ek jharna (waterfall) dikhta hai wo jaldi se river se bahr aa ke jharne ke ek kinare khade hi niche dekhne lgti hai, wo jyada bda jharna nahi tha, but uske niche pathar bahut jyada the, simi ko jharne ke kr shuru hone se pehle river ke bich me ek pathar dikhta hai, wo jab dhyan se dekhti hai to use wahan ek adami dikhai deta hai, wo jhat se pehchan leti hai ki wo adami koi aur nahi aryan hai, aryan pet ke bal us pathar pe lata hua tha, wo pathar aryan ke kamar se pet tk tha aur pathar ki ek side se aryan ka sir aur hath niche ko latk rahe the aur pathar ki dusri side se aryan ke kamar ke niche ka hissa latk raha tha.
Simi aryan tk pahunchne ke liye koi tareeka sochne lgti hai, use us ghane jungle ke pedon pe lgi belein dikhai deti hai, simi jaldi se kuch belein tod kr, unhe aaps me jod ke ek lmbi bel ready kr leti hai, us bel ka ke sira wo ek ped se bandh deti hai aur dusra sira apni kamar pr bandh leti hai, wo jhat se river me kud ke swim krte hue aryan ke pass pahunchti hai, simi us pathar ki support se pani me rukti hai aur apne kamar pe bandhi hui bel wo aryan ke kamar pe bandh deti hai, fir wo aryan sahara deti hui swim krti hai, sath me usne us bel ko bhi pkda hua tha, simi ke liye bahut hi mushkil ho rahi thi, ek to river ke end part yani jahan se jharna shuru hota hai wahan ka pani ka bahaav tez tha aur upr se aryan ko bhi support krte hue swim krna tha.
Simi ne kisi tarah adha rasta to paar kr liya, but us se thoda aage jate hi aryan ka pura bhar simi pe aa gya, jis se simi pani ke niche jani lgti hai aur isi hadbdahat me aryan simi se chhut jata hai, simi jhat se pani ke upr aati hai to dekhti hai ki aryan jharne ki taraf nahi balki pani ke niche ja raha tha, yeh simi ki dimag ka kamal tha, kyuki simi ne bel ka jo sira ped se bandha hua tha wo ped jharne se thida piche tha, jiski wajah se bel ka dusra sira jharne tk nahi pahunch skta aur is liye ab simi ko aryan ki jharne se girne ki chinta nahi thi.
Fir simi jhat se swim krte hue kinare pe aati hai aur bel ko pkd kr khichne lgti hai, simi jaisi najuk ladki ek bhari bharkam adami ko khiche yeh itna bhi asan nahi tha, but pta nahi is samay simi me itni takat kahan se aa jati hai ki wo apni parwah kiye bina aryan ko bas bachana chahti thi, bel ko khichne se uske hatho ki halt biri ho gyi thi, but fir bhi apne pyar ke liye wo yeh dard bhi seh leti hai, simi kisi tarah aryan ko kinare tk khich leti hai.
Jab aryan kinare pe aata hai to simi jhat se aryan ke pass pahunch use check krne lgti hai, simi jaldi se aryan ka pet press kr pani nikalti hai fir use mouth to mouth sansein deti hai, thodi mashkat ke baad aryan ki ankhen khulne lgti hai aur wo kahnste hue hosh me aa jata hai.

Simi khush hote hue....... Aryan, aap thik to hain?

Aryan simi ko dekh kr smile krta hua....... Haan, tumhare pyar ne mujhe marne nahi diya.

Simi jo abhi bahuduri se kaam le rahi thi wo ek dum se rote hue aryan ke gale lg jati hai aur uske pure chehre ko chumne lgti hai.
Aryan simi ki yeh harkat dekh muskurane lgta hai aur wo bhi simi ko ks ke apni bahoon me sma leta hai, dono thodi der aise hi apne pyar ko feel krte hue gale lge hue the, fir simi aryan se alg hoti hai aur aryan ke badan pe lge ghawon ko dekhne lgti hai, aryan ki body me char goliyon ke nishan the aur thodi kharochen thi, simi aryan ko sahara de ke uthati hai aur chalte hue use jahan se simi river me kudi thi wahan la kr aryan ko ek ped ke sahare bethati hai aur apna first aid box lati hai, jo wo sath layi thi, fir simi aryan ki kharochon wali jagah pe dressing kr deti hai, but goliyan abhi bhi ander thi to simi ko samjh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya kre, to aryan use kuch kehta hai aur kuch cheezein lane ko kehta hai, simi foran waha se car ki taraf bhagti hai aur thodi der me wo wapas aati hai to uske hath me kuch sman tha.
Simi aryan ke pass aaker wo sman rakh deti hai aur khud aryan ke pass beth jati hai, aryan simi ke sman laye hue sman me se ek nail cutter aur ek bottle jisme petrol hota tha, fir wo simi ko kuch lakdiyan lane ko kehta hai, simi foram kuch lakdiyan lati hai aur aryan ke samne rakh deti hai, aryan pass me se do chote pathar jo thoda sa round shape me the, fir wo petrol ko un lakdiyon pe daal deta hai aur un do pathron ko ragdne lgta hai, jis se jald hi lakdiyon me aag lag jati haj, fir aryan nail cutter se uska knife jo nails saaf krne ke liye use kiya jata hai, use ek choti si lakdi pe bandh aag se garm krne lagta hai, jab knife puri tarah garm ho jata hai to wo ek-2 karke apne sharir me lgi goliyan nikalne lgta hai, simi bahut ghor se aryan ko dekh rahi thi, jab aryan apni goli nikalne ke liye knife ko ander dalta hai to simi ki ankhon se ansoon nikalne lagte hai aur wo apna muh dusri taraf ghuma leti hai, jab aryan ki sar goliyan nikal jati hai to wo simi ko dressing krne ko kehta hai, simi jald hi uski dressing kr deti hai, puri tarah dressing hone ke baad simi sare sman ko ek side kr aryan ko paib killer khilwati hai aur usi ped ke niche aryan ko leta deti hai aur khudh uske bagal me let jati hai, dono ka chahre ek dusre ke samne the, dono ek dusre ki ankhon me dekh najdeek aane lgte hai, dono ke honth ek dusre se kuch inch ki duri pr hi the, jahan aryan ke sanson me simi ke jism ki khushbu ghulne lgti hai, wahi simi ko aryan ki mardana khushboo aati hai jis wajah se simi ki sansen tez hone lgti hai aur honth tharthrane lgte hai, simi ke man me ek taraf yeh batein uth rahi thi ki kab uske honth aryan ke hontho se milenge aur wo apne pehle pyar ki apna pehla kiss krne aur aryan me khone ko betab thi, wahin sime ke man me dusri taraf apne pehle kiss ke bare me soch kr sharmaye aur ghabraye ja rahi thi, jitna honth majdeek aa rahe the uski betabi aur ghabrahat dono bad rahi thi, wahin aryan bhi simi ke pyar ko feel krna chahta tha aur usme dub jana chahta tha, jaise hi dono ke honth jude, simi ke jism me mano hazaron walt ka karant lga ho, aryan softly simi ke honthon ko chusne lgta hai, simi bas use feel kr rahi thi, dono hi apne pyar me itna kho gue ki ek dusre ko kas ke bahoon me bhr liya aur unki kiss wild ho gyi, jaise-2 dono khote ja rahe the waise hi unki kiss aur passionate hoti ja rahi thi, aryan ab simi ke uper tha aur simi ke hath aryan ki nangi peeth pe chal rahe the, simi to jaise kisi aur hi duniya me kho chuki thi, uski ankhen ab madhoshi aur pyar ke nashe se band ho chuki thi, kitni der inka kiss chlta raha, dono hi ek dusre ko chodne ko taiyar nahi the, akhir jab sans fulne lgi to dono alg hue aur aryan simi ki bagal me let gya, simi aryan ke sine me apna chehra chupa kr sharmane lgti hai.
 

harryharsh31

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Nice update bhai keep posting
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harryharsh31

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Update 21,22,23

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kahne ko shbd nhi h mere paas.
Kitni badhiya tarike se aapne dikhaya h Aaryan dwara bachana .
Isse or kamal ka ho hi nhi Sakta tha.
E lajwaab that.

Or ab,
Aage ka intjar
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harryharsh31

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Very very nice update
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Very nice update bro
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