Romance Ek Din Achanak

[aka3829]

Wah bhai kya mast start ki he story ko. Suru me to college ki mastiyaa dikhayi fir le gaye apne dost ke past me. Sahi he yaar. Lekin bhai mujhe lagta he ki aap ne ek ladki ka intro nahi diya he. Kyuki aapne suru me bataya tha ki wo 3 ladkiya aa rahi he. Jinme se 2 aapki friends thi aur ek nati thi jise dekh kar aapke fuse ud gaye . Hehehe. Ya fir sayad me khuch confuse ho raha hu.
Waiting 4 next update

 

[Ravi]

Nice bro
Dekhte hai ab aage pawan rider se kase bachta h

a lot

Pawan Rider se kaise bachega. Ye to sochna padega

 

[Ravi]

Superb story...
Keep it up

Many Many Baba bhai

Ummeed hai aapko story pasand aa rahi hai

 

[Ravi]

tau

a lot RG bhai

Kuch story par bhi comment kar do

 

[Ravi]

Wah bhai kya mast start ki he story ko. Suru me to college ki mastiyaa dikhayi fir le gaye apne dost ke past me. Sahi he yaar. Lekin bhai mujhe lagta he ki aap ne ek ladki ka intro nahi diya he. Kyuki aapne suru me bataya tha ki wo 3 ladkiya aa rahi he. Jinme se 2 aapki friends thi aur ek nati thi jise dekh kar aapke fuse ud gaye . Hehehe. Ya fir sayad me khuch confuse ho raha hu.
Waiting 4 next update

Bhai aap confuse nahin ho rahe. Teen hi ladkiyan aayi thi tab.

Abhi to hum flashback mein chal rahe hain. Abhi Pawan and Ravi aaye hain story mein, fir Riya aayegi, uski behan aayegi, fir Jay aayega, sanju aayega tab jaake Ravi par meharbaani hogi

Haan us ladki ka intro nahin diya hai. wo story mein apne aap aayega

Bas aise hi pyare pyare comments dete rahiyega

 

[Ravi]

Update 6​

Teacher se to permission mil gayi lekin chaar period katne kitne bhaari pad rahe the ye to Pawan ka dil hi jaanta tha. Uska padhai mein bilkul man nahin lag raha tha. Sab hairan the ki padhai par itna dhyaan dene wala ladka aaj padhne ke mood mein hi nahin hai lekin sab ye sochkar chup ho gaye ki uski tabeeyat shayad jyada hi kharab hai.

Pawan ko ye chaar period jaise chaar saalon ki tarah lag rahe the. Reh reh kar wo kabhi kitabon ki taraf to kabhi Rider ki taraf dekhta. Lekin jab bhi Rider ko dekhta to use apne aapko ghurta hua pata. Usne socha ki kya aisa nahin ho sakta ki mandawali (Samjhota) ho jaye dono ke beech. Lekin ye hoga kaise. kya Rider uski baat manega. Agar nahin maani to uska kya haal karega. Sochte sochte chautha period bhi shuru ho gaya. Period class ka shuru hua lekin tension apne Pawan ko ho gayi hone wali ghatna ke baare mein sochte soochte. Kash ye period kabhi khatam na ho. Bas waqt yahin tham jaye. Kaash kahin se Ravi daudta hua aa jaye uske pass. Lekin insaan jo sochta hai agar wo sab hone lage to bhagwan ke naam se logon ka vishwas hi uth jayega.

Dheere Dheere chautha period bhi khatam ho gaya aur Pawan bijli ki teji ke saath teacher ke bagal mein chalte chalte class se bahar aa gaya. Bahar aate hi wo bhagte bhagte Main gate tak pahuncha lekin gate andar se band tha.

Usne yahan wahan najar daudayi to use chaukidar najar aaya aur usse request karne laga ki wo fauran gate khole taaki wo apne ghar jaa sake. Chaukidar ne usse uske jaane ka kaaran poocha to usne bata diya ki uske pet mein dard hai aur class teacher ki hi permission se jaa raha hai. Chaukidar ne kuch hairat se use dekha kyunki wo itni tezi se bhagkar aaya tha aur shakal soorat se bhi kahin se wo bimmar nahin lag raha tha. Lekin use kya usne socha saale aaj kal ke ladke padhai na karne ke bahane dhoondhte rehte hain. Ye bhi nahain sochte maa-baap khoon paseena ek karke inki fees ka intezam karte hain, inhe achha khane, achha pehnanne ko dete hain, har tarah se inka itna khyaal rakhte hain lekin in ladkon ko jara bhi samajh nahin hai. Inhein bas masti karni hai chahe maa baap ke dil par kuch bhi kyun na gujre inki harkaton se.

Sochte sochte usne gate khol diya lekin tabhi ....

To be continued...

 

[Rk66689]

Bhai mujhe lagta hai k ye story pehle bhi xossip par likhe gaye hai maine pada hai xossip par mujhe story ka naam yaad nahi ara hai

 

[Ravi]

Bhai mujhe lagta hai k ye story pehle bhi xossip par likhe gaye hai maine pada hai xossip par mujhe story ka naam yaad nahi ara hai

Bhai aapne sach kaha ye xossip par pehle likhi ja chuki hai aur isi naam se likhi gayi thi

Ab jabki xossip ek itihaas ban chuka hai to socha kyun na naye aur purane doston ke saath ek baar fir se ise share karun

 

[Cutie pie]

Nice updates

Abhi tak ke updates se to Rider ek bahut hi bura ladka jaan pad raha hai

Aur ab jab Ravi bhi nhi hai to uski himmat aur badh jayegi aur vo kuch na kuch panga to zarur karega Pawan ke sath

Abhi to Pawan ne leave le li hai par dekhna ye hai ki vo sahi salamat ghar jaa pata hai ya nhi

Kuch to hoga par kya ye nhi pata
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

Keep posting
Waiting for next

 

[Night Warrior]

Guard kuch hadd tak sahi soch raha hai