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Romance Ek Din Achanak

Mr.X796

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Bhai ye kya hai kuch bhi samajh nahin aa raha hai aapne to kaha kuch aur tha aur yahan ho kuch aur hi raha hai mere to sab sar ke upar se ja raha hai ye raj bap banne wala hai agar aap ye dikhana chahte ho ki raj yahan doston ko bachate huye mara jayega aur tab sonali ka hath jai thamega kyoki tab koi bhi uske ghar main nahin bachega sasur to jail chala jayega lekin kuch baten hain jo thik nahin lag rahin raj ne jo bhi kiya uske liye koi saza nahin bhugti haan pashchatap jaroor kiya lekin usse saza sahne liye insan taitar hota hai wo saza nahin hoti aur jo karm tahan karta hai bhogta bhi yahin hai marne se pahle aap batao ki usne kya saha apni life main
Aur dusri baat ab jab raj ki family main koi nahin rah jayega to sonali ko raj ki yadon ke sahare hi jeewan jine do usne aakhir raj ko apna mana tha sab kuch aur use jai ke pas dobara na layen to hi behtar hoga sonali jo raj aur apne bachhe ko palne do aur raj ke khandan ka naam jo achhai se sab jante hain use sach main achha banane do sonali ke jariye ab ye mat kar dena ki raj aur sonali ki hone wale bachhe ko kuch ho gaya mene jo mujhe laga wesa kah diya matkab apni bat kahi hai
 
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Idhar Raj ne andar jaake ek choti pistol nikali kyunki use pata tha ki iski bahut jarurat padne wali hai. Pistol lene ke baad usne dabe paanv niche tehkhane mein jaana shuru kar diya. Kabhi bhi pakde jaane ka khatra tha lekin in masoom doston ko to bachana hi tha aur shayad isse hi uske kuch paapon ka prayschit ho sake. Sonali ne jab dekha ki Raj kaafi der se kamre mein nahin aaya to wo bhi use dhoondhne ke liye bahar nikal gayi.

Idhar baton baton mein Sanju ko pata chal gaya ki Rider urf Ram ka hi wo bracelet tha jise wo kab se dhoondh raha tha. Pata lagte hi pata nahin usme itni takat kahan se aa gayi ki wo apne aap ko chuda kar bhid gaya Rider se aur us par laat ghunso ki barsaat kar di. Sahi kaha hai kisi ne pyaar insaan ke andar aseem takat bhar deta hai. Pyaar mein insaan achha bura sab bhool jaata hai, yaad rehta hai to bas mehboob aur uska pyaar. Lekin wo akela aur wahan gundo ki bhari tadad. Jaldi hi us par kaboo paa liya aur uski ache se marammat kar di gayi.

Jay ko ye dekhkar gussa aa gaya. Jab kisi khamosh prani ko gussa aata hai to uska gussa behad khatarnak hota hai. Usne lagbhag cheekte huye Sikander se kaha “Haan garibon aur masoomon ko hi tu apna shikhar bana sakta hai. Jaisa tera khoon ganda hai waisa hi tera beta bhi kam nahin hai. Ek hansti khelti ladki ki jindagi kharab kar di. Saare bure kaam karne mein use khushi milti hai. Tum log aadmi nahin rakshash ho” Sikander ko ye sunkar gussa aa gaya. Apne bare mein to wo sun bhi sakta tha lekin is baar sawal uske lakhte jigar, uske bete Raj ka tha. Jise wo itna pyaar karta tha ki kisi bhi jaan chutki mein le le uske liye, uske khilaaf kaise kuch sun sakta tha.

Lekin in baton ka asar Raj par pada. Use apni galti ka ehsaas hone laga. Usne faisla le liya ki chahe uski jaan chali jaaye lekin kaise bhi karke in doston ko bachana hai. Ab tak Raj niche tehkhaane mein pahunch chukka tha. Sikander ne gusse mein revolver nikali aur Jay par fire kar diya lekin ain mauke par Raj beech mein aa gaya. Raj ke gale se ek jordaar cheekh nikli aur uski chati se khoon behne laga. Ladkhada kar wo wahin gir pada. Raj ko aisi halat mein dekhkar Sikander sakte mein aa gaya. Revolver uske haath se choot gayi aur uski halat paaglon jaisi ho gayi. Ho bhi kyun na jis bete ke liye usne ye saare bure kaam kiye the wahi jakhmi halat mein apne baap ki goli ka shikar jameen par pada antim saanse le raha tha.

Sikander ne revolver ek taraf fainki aur bhagte huye Raj ke paas chala gaya. Saare gunde bhi ek dum shocked mein aa gaye aur yahi samay sab doston ko mil gaya apne aap ko chudane aur gundo ko kaboo mein karne ke liye. Iske liye jyada mehnat nahin karni padi. 5-7 ko to akele Sourav ne hi behosh kar diya tha. Baaki logon ko sab doston ne milkar sambhal liya.

Rider urf Ram par to Sanju kehar banker toot pada tha. Itne dino se jo aag uske dil mein jal rahi thi aaj use bhujane ka samay aa gaya tha. Maar maar kar usne Rider ko adhmara kar diya. Lekin jaise hi wo use jaan se maarne laga to sab doston ne use rok diya kyunki wo nahin chahte the ki Sanju khoon karke criminal ban jaye. Idhar Sikander ka ro ro kar bura haal tha. Idhar Sonali bhi goli ki awaaz sunkar tehkaane mein aa gayi thi aur Raj ko aise khoon se lathpat dekhkar behosh ho gayi. Jay ne turant bhagkar use sambhala.

Usi samay Inspector Prem Sagar bhi apne laav lashkar samet wahan pahunch gaya. Bahar Sikander ke gundo ne unhen rokne ki koshish ki lekin Prem ne sabko thikane lagate huye andar pravesh kar liya. Andar aakar usne dekha ki situation to pehle se hi control mein hai. Bas uske liye ab sirf ek kaam hi bacha tha ki sab gundo ko giraftaar kare aur lockup mein daal de.

Idhar Raj ne Sikander se kaha “Papa mujhe pata nahin tha ki meri ragon mein ek gangster, ek criminal ka khoon daud raha hai. Ab to mujhe aapse ghin aane lagi hai. Aapke paap ke saaye mein main bhi ek din criminal ban jaata lekin Sonali ke pyaar ki wajah se maine us raaste se kadam wapas kheench liye. Mujhe nahin pata tha ki aap itni ghinoni harkat karoge ki apni beti jaisi umar ki ladkiyon ko yun jabardasti uthar kar le aayoge. Aap kitne gir gaye hain”

Sikander ki aankhon se aansu beh rahe the. Usne kaha “Bete mujhe maaf kar de. Maine jo kuc bhi kiya sirf tere liye aur teri khushi ke liye kiya. Mera tu hi to ek sahara hai.”

“Mat kaho mujhe beta. Main ek ghunehgaar ka beta nahin ho sakta.” Halanki ye sab bolte huye Raj ki saanse pata nahin kitni baar ukhdi lekin wo bas bolta jaa raha tha. Pata nahin shayad uske dil par koi bhari bojh tha jo use bolne par majboor kar raha tha. Dono ke beech baatein chal rahi thi aur sab khamosh ise dekh rahe the.

“Agar aap ko mere dwara pita kehalwana hai to aapko apne gunahon ka prayschit karna padega. Saare jurm kabool kar lijiye aur ek shareef insaan ki tarah jeevan vyatit kijiye”. Sikander ne marte huye apne bete ki aakhri ichha ko maan liya aur jurm kabool lene ki baat bhi maan li. Itne mein Sonali ko hosh aa gaya aur wo daudkar Raj ke paas aa gayi. “Raj, tum mujhe chod kar nahin jaa sakte. Abhi to hamare jeevan ki nayi shuruat huyi thi. Um mujhe aise beech majhdar mein chod kar nahin ja sakte. Main is paapi samaj ka saamna akele nahin kar sakti. Hamare bachhe ka kya hoga. Use baap ka pyaar kahan se milega”.

Raj ne ek najar Jay ki taraf dekha aur ishare se use apne paas bulaya aur kaha “Jay maine bahut bura salook kiya hai hamesha se tumhare saath. Ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena.”

“Tumne mujhe bachane ke liye apni jaan jokhim mein daal di. Main tumhara ehsaan kaise utarunga”

“Agar tum ehsaan utarna hi chahte ho to mere baad Sonali aur mere bache ka khyaal rakhne ki tumahri jimmedari. Dono ko musibaton se bachane aur inhe sambhalne ke liye tum tayyar ho iska mujhe vachan do”

“Main tumhe vachan deta hoon ki main dono ko koi takleef nahin hone dunga” Aur itna sunne ke baad Raj ke dil ko ek gehri shaanti mil gayi aur uski aankhen hamesha ke liye band ho gayi. Sikander ke to jaise aansu hi such gaye the. Wo rndhe gale se utha aur inspector Prem Sagar ko iqbaale jurm kar diya aur saare sabot de diye. Usne apni saari jaydad apne pote ke naam likhne ka faisla kar liya.

Iske baad Raj aur baaki gundo ke mrit sharer ko post martam ke liye bhej diya aur jaroori enquiry karne ke baad sab doston ko bhi chod diya gaya. Agle din Raj ka sharer hpspital se mil gaya aur uska antim sanskar kar diya gaya. Antim sanskar mein shaamil hone ke liye Siaknder ko special permission mil gayi. Charo taraf ek khamoshi si cha gayi thi. Jaisa waqt ruk gaya hai. Lekin sab khush bhi the ki bura waqt tal gaya hai.

Dheere dheere sabka jeewan wapas patri par aane laga. Jawed ko itne bada gang pakadwane ke inaam swaroop riha kar diya gaya. Uska jeewan bhi ek sundari ke pyaar mein pad kar khushnuma ho gaya tha. Pyaar ke liye khatre mein jo ye dost kood padte the use dekhkar Ravi ko to pyaar naam se nafrat ho gayi thi. Uska manna tha ki chaar din ki jindagi hai, khao piyo aur mast raho. Kal kisne dekha hai. Aaj ko enjoy karo bas. Idhar Pawan aur Riya ka pyaar aur gehra ho gaya thais ghatna ke baad. Jay bhi ab aksar Sonali ki ghar jaane laga tha. Kabhi usko doctor ke paas le jaata to kabhi aur kisi kaam mein uski help karta.


Sanju ka bhi badla poora ho gaya tha. Uski Sanjana ke kaatil ko usne saja dilwa di thi. Jo uske dil par bojh thaw o hat gayatha aur wo bhi Ravi ki tarah masti mein choor tha. Lekin Diya ko ab bhi apne pyaar ko haasil karna tha. Pata nahin wo kar payegi ya nahin lekin uski dosti Ravi ke saath aisi ho gayi thi ki jaise dono do jism ek jaan ho. Kahin bhi jaana ho ya kuch bhi programme ho dono aksar ek doosre ke saath hi rehte the.

Isi tarah 2nd year khatam ho gaya aur sabne usko ache numbers se paas bhi kar liya.

End of Episode 5


To be continued....
 
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chapter 5 end :dazed:
ab lagata hai ab kuch marpit hogi kise ke satha :(
 
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Very nice update. And above all the continuity you maintains is awesome.
Ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai. Kya Ravi aur diya aapas me jugalbandi karte hain ya fir aise hi Din kaatne wale hain. Aage dekhte hain ki jai Sonali ka saath Kahan tak deta hai aur kaise deta hai. Kya wo Sonali Ko apnayegq ya fir aise hi uski dekhbhal karta rahega.
Entjaar rahega agle update ka
 
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DOSTON KE KUCHH PLAN SAFAL HUE TO KUCHH ASAFAL...

SAURABH KO APNI TEAM MAI LENE KA PLAN RIYA NE BAKHOOBI PURA KIYA....RIYA NE YAH SABIT KAR DIYA KI PYAR MAI TAKAT HOTI HAI AUR SAURABH KO TAKAT SE NHI PYARI SE HI JEETA JA SKTA THA..



YE SABHI RAIDER NE TO GAME KHELA THA PAWAN KE SATH OR SABHI KO HO KYA RHA HAI PAHLE JAWED BHI SINHA KE SATH THA OR RAIDER BHI KHAIR JO BHI HO ANT BHALA TO SAB BHALA KYONKI ANT MAI RAIDER PAKDA GYA OR JAWED SUDHAR GYA OR USE RIHAHI BHI MIL GYI...


RAJ KI MAUT USKE HI BAAP KE HATON HUI...JISSE KI SINHA KO APNE KIYE PAR PACHHTAPA HUA OR SARE JULM KUBUL KAR LIYE...

SONALI KI JINDGI MAI JAB BHI KHUSHIYAN AATI HEIN KUCHH NA KUCHH GHATNA GHAT HI JATI HAI....JAB JAY KE SATH PYAR MAI THI TO GHAR WALON NE SHADI TAY KAR DI....

SAMEER SE SHADI HI RHI THI TO JAY OR USKE DOSTON KI VAJAH SE VI TUT GYI....

AB USKE JIVAN MAI EK OR KHUSHI AAYI KI VO MAA BANANE BALI HAI...OR USKA SAMBANDH RAJ KE SATH BHI SUDHAR GYE THE TO RAAJ KI HI MAUT HO GYI...


SANJU KA BDLA BHI PURA HUA....

LEKIN ABHI DIYA KE DIL MAI JO RAVI KE LIYE PYAR HAI USKA IZHAR HONA OR BAKI HAI....


YE EPISODE TO KHATAM HO GYA ...UMMID HAI AGLE EPISODE MAI RAVI KI BHI LOVE STORY PATRI PAR DAUDE.


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Mbindas

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Wah bhai bohot hi achchha update hai. Ab next update ka intazar hai.
 
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Mr.X796

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  • Awesome update bro
aakhir dosti agar sath ho to bade se bade muskilo se ham nikle sakte hai ye ravi n toli ne sidhh kar diya magat is bat ka dukh bhi hua ki raj ke sath yesa ho gaya uske pita jail chale gaye aur isi ke sath chapter 5 end kar diya
Lekin jo baki rah gaya wo hai ravi ka ab bhi akela rahna aur diya ka ek tarfa pyar dekhte hain diya kab ravi ko apne man ka hal bata bati hai ya phir en dono ke bich main koi aa na jaye like jai-sonali ki prem kahani main raj aa gaya tha to phir diya kya karegi
Aur raj ne jai se wada to le liya sonali ka khayal rakhne ko lekin kya sonali phir se jai se itni jaldi ghul mil sakegi aur sabse badi bat samaj ke thekedar is rishe ko achha dekhe ye mushkil hi hai waiting next bro
 
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