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Romance EK MUTTHI AASMAN(short story)
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"aapne bulaya sir???" amit ne darwaza kholkar poocha
"amit tumhe boxer banna hai na??" Patrick ne poocha
"Haan sir" amit bola
"thik hai, mai tumhe train karunga lekin meri do shart hai" Patrick bola
"boliye sir" amit bola
"pehla ki tum aane wale inter college boxing tournament akele apne dum par jeetoge, kisi se help nahi mangoge" Patrick bola
"j ji" amit bola.
"doosri shart hai ki mai tumhe apne hisab se sikhaunga, mere methods old school method hai. Minimum technology and maximum out doors,ghar me baithe baithe boxer nahi bante log" Patrick bola
Amit ne Haan me sar hilaya
"ab tum ja sakte ho, apni taiyyari poori karo aur is tournament me hissa lo" Patrick bola
"right sir" ek serious look ke Saath nikal gaya amit
Patrick use jaate hue dekhne laga
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Amit ne ghadi dekhi. Rishabh ko aane ke liye bola tha usne
"lekin ye Saare practice session record karke kya karna chahte ho amit??" madhu ne poocha
"apne manzil ki aur Jaana chahta hoon madhu" amit bola
"ye le amit, free me de raha hoon tujhe" rishabh a chuka tha aur usne ek CD amit ki aur badha diya
"thanks rishabh bhaiyya" amit bola aur CD ko apne bag me rakh diya
Ghar aane ke baad usne rishabh ka diya hua CD apne pc me lagaya aur use dekh kar practice karne laga
Uske baad usne ek paper me kuch lika fir practice karne laga
Neend, bhook, pyaas sab kuch bhool chuka tha amit
Madhu ke boxing spar ka video banana aur Baaki boxers ke Saath friendly spar karna
Fark pada aur body change hone laga amit ne jitna ho sake prepare kar liya tha
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"hadh hai Patrick sir ne kaha hai ki koi bhi help nahi karne ke liye" rishabh bola
"sach me" madhu ne gusse se kaha
"koi baat nahi mai sambhal lunga madhu" amit ne haste hue madhu ke gaal ko chu kar boxing ring me utar gaya
FIGHT 1
Opponent amit ke Saamne the
Amit ne apna haath ghumaya
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
THABBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBPPPPP
seedha gloves takraya ja bde par aur opponent zameen par gir gaya
Referee ne amit ko rok diya aur countdown shuru kiya
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10....
amit jeet gaya
FIGHT 2
knock out me quarterfinal tha ye aur amit poori taiyyar I ke saath maidan me utra tha
Opponent ne apna haath chalaya SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
THADDDDD
chehre par ek punch khaya amit ne, damn it too fast hai ye opponent
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
THAPP
seene par ye Vaar tha amit peeche gaya. Apne opponent ko dekhne laga aur uske movement par kaabu pana hai to.... M mihir sir ki coaching??
Jab koi zyada fast hai to use ring ke corner me le jao kaise bhi
Amit ne wahi kiya apna zor laga diya aur
Vaar par Vaar parta raha aur opponent ko ring ke kinare le gaya
DHABBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB
Fir se knock out aur amit semi finals ke liye select ho gaya
"HAAN AISE HI JEET JA MERE SHER, MAAR SABKI BC" madhu excited hokar boli
"mai is Pagal ladki ko nahi jaanta" ghoor rahe logo ko dekhkar rishabh bola
Khair amit ka stamina jawab de raha tha, do do fights jeet to gaya tha lekin lag raha tha bohut thak gaya hai wo
"idhar ao amit, aur tu sarak yahan se" bol madhu ne ek ladke ko chair se utha diya aur amit ko bitha kar massage karne lagi
"kya gf mili tujhe amit" muskurate hue rishabh bola
Lekin tabhi ek opponent ko dekhkar uski hasi ruk gayi
"Ali?? Ye to...." rishabh seedha amit ke Paas gaya
"amit ye ali hai, isse bach ke rehna ye
........" madhu boli
Amit bohut thak chuka tha, doosra tournament tha ye aur sirf apne dum par semi finals tak ja chuka tha wo
Ring ke Ander aaya aur fight shuru hua
THABBBB
DHABBBBB
DHAMMMMMMMNNNNNNNN
Amit ladkhadaya, bohut mushkil tha, uske pair kaamp rahe the
Kisi tarah girne se bacha
DHAMMMMNMNMNNMMMNMMM
is baar nahi ho paaya
DHAPPPPP
knock out ho gaya amit aur Ali finals ke liye select jo gaya
Na chahte hue bhi aansu nikalte ja rahe the uske aankhon se
Madhu uske sar par haath fer use shant kar rahi thi, rishabh bhi use kandhe par haath rakh hate hue tha
Lekin amit toot gaya tha is baar
"amit tumhe boxer banna hai na??" Patrick ne poocha
"Haan sir" amit bola
"thik hai, mai tumhe train karunga lekin meri do shart hai" Patrick bola
"boliye sir" amit bola
"pehla ki tum aane wale inter college boxing tournament akele apne dum par jeetoge, kisi se help nahi mangoge" Patrick bola
"j ji" amit bola.
"doosri shart hai ki mai tumhe apne hisab se sikhaunga, mere methods old school method hai. Minimum technology and maximum out doors,ghar me baithe baithe boxer nahi bante log" Patrick bola
Amit ne Haan me sar hilaya
"ab tum ja sakte ho, apni taiyyari poori karo aur is tournament me hissa lo" Patrick bola
"right sir" ek serious look ke Saath nikal gaya amit
Patrick use jaate hue dekhne laga
----------------------------------------------------------------------
Amit ne ghadi dekhi. Rishabh ko aane ke liye bola tha usne
"lekin ye Saare practice session record karke kya karna chahte ho amit??" madhu ne poocha
"apne manzil ki aur Jaana chahta hoon madhu" amit bola
"ye le amit, free me de raha hoon tujhe" rishabh a chuka tha aur usne ek CD amit ki aur badha diya
"thanks rishabh bhaiyya" amit bola aur CD ko apne bag me rakh diya
Ghar aane ke baad usne rishabh ka diya hua CD apne pc me lagaya aur use dekh kar practice karne laga
Uske baad usne ek paper me kuch lika fir practice karne laga
Neend, bhook, pyaas sab kuch bhool chuka tha amit
Madhu ke boxing spar ka video banana aur Baaki boxers ke Saath friendly spar karna
Fark pada aur body change hone laga amit ne jitna ho sake prepare kar liya tha
----------------------------------------------------------------------
"hadh hai Patrick sir ne kaha hai ki koi bhi help nahi karne ke liye" rishabh bola
"sach me" madhu ne gusse se kaha
"koi baat nahi mai sambhal lunga madhu" amit ne haste hue madhu ke gaal ko chu kar boxing ring me utar gaya
FIGHT 1
Opponent amit ke Saamne the
Amit ne apna haath ghumaya
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
THABBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBPPPPP
seedha gloves takraya ja bde par aur opponent zameen par gir gaya
Referee ne amit ko rok diya aur countdown shuru kiya
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10....
amit jeet gaya
FIGHT 2
knock out me quarterfinal tha ye aur amit poori taiyyar I ke saath maidan me utra tha
Opponent ne apna haath chalaya SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
THADDDDD
chehre par ek punch khaya amit ne, damn it too fast hai ye opponent
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
THAPP
seene par ye Vaar tha amit peeche gaya. Apne opponent ko dekhne laga aur uske movement par kaabu pana hai to.... M mihir sir ki coaching??
Jab koi zyada fast hai to use ring ke corner me le jao kaise bhi
Amit ne wahi kiya apna zor laga diya aur
Vaar par Vaar parta raha aur opponent ko ring ke kinare le gaya
DHABBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB
Fir se knock out aur amit semi finals ke liye select ho gaya
"HAAN AISE HI JEET JA MERE SHER, MAAR SABKI BC" madhu excited hokar boli
"mai is Pagal ladki ko nahi jaanta" ghoor rahe logo ko dekhkar rishabh bola
Khair amit ka stamina jawab de raha tha, do do fights jeet to gaya tha lekin lag raha tha bohut thak gaya hai wo
"idhar ao amit, aur tu sarak yahan se" bol madhu ne ek ladke ko chair se utha diya aur amit ko bitha kar massage karne lagi
"kya gf mili tujhe amit" muskurate hue rishabh bola
Lekin tabhi ek opponent ko dekhkar uski hasi ruk gayi
"Ali?? Ye to...." rishabh seedha amit ke Paas gaya
"amit ye ali hai, isse bach ke rehna ye
........" madhu boli
Amit bohut thak chuka tha, doosra tournament tha ye aur sirf apne dum par semi finals tak ja chuka tha wo
Ring ke Ander aaya aur fight shuru hua
THABBBB
DHABBBBB
DHAMMMMMMMNNNNNNNN
Amit ladkhadaya, bohut mushkil tha, uske pair kaamp rahe the
Kisi tarah girne se bacha
DHAMMMMNMNMNNMMMNMMM
is baar nahi ho paaya
DHAPPPPP
knock out ho gaya amit aur Ali finals ke liye select jo gaya
Na chahte hue bhi aansu nikalte ja rahe the uske aankhon se
Madhu uske sar par haath fer use shant kar rahi thi, rishabh bhi use kandhe par haath rakh hate hue tha
Lekin amit toot gaya tha is baar
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Hero haar gaya.... 
.... lets see the reaction of Patrick.... Bhai iss update ke fight scenes aapne pahle jitne detail mein na likhe ?
Great update bhai
... agle update ka wait rahega
.... lets see the reaction of Patrick.... Bhai iss update ke fight scenes aapne pahle jitne detail mein na likhe ?Great update bhai
... agle update ka wait rahega