Romance EK MUTTHI AASMAN(short story)

[Rush__24]

Bohot badhiya update.......pr thoda bada update diya kro Bhai ho shke to

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Awesome fabulous update
Laga tha isbaar baazi maar le jayega lakin nahi hua wahi abhi aur practice chaiye
Keep posting

 

[Naina]

Koi na ek baar haar gaya to kya phir se try karni chahiye.... kamyabi jarur milegi...
waise yeh pratick kuch zyada hi ajib hain... match ke time gayab raha....
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update Swaraj ji.. Great going

 

[Gillsaab13]

Bhtt sohna update veere

Veer ik suggestion aa mera j ho ske ta 22 phla apni ik story te focus kro te ohnu complete kro

Two stories run krniyn aaukhiyn veer

Mere hisab nl jehri story phla te jldi khtm ho.skdi aa ohnu time de k phla compelete kro te bd ch 2nd te focus kro

Bki veer tuc writr o u knw bettr

Bki waiting for next

Hindi ght aaundi aa likhni so ess lyi punjabi ch likh rhaa

Bki keep it up veere

 

[Mathur]

Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread

Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Xforum Staff..

 

[Mbindas]

Waiting bhai

 

[Swaraj]

Amazing update bhai

Thanks bro

 

[Swaraj]

Lazwab update,

Thanks bro

 

[Swaraj]

Hero haar gaya.... .... lets see the reaction of Patrick.... Bhai iss update ke fight scenes aapne pahle jitne detail mein na likhe ?

Great update bhai ... agle update ka wait rahega

Thanks bro
Sahi kaha aapne gir kar hi koi seekh paata hai Patrick kya karta hai ye aaj hi pata chal jayega
Bro fight scene yahan itni zaroori nahi thi
Lekin ainda detailed scene ddne ki koshish karunga
Saath rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

Bohot badhiya update.......pr thoda bada update diya kro Bhai ho shke to

Thanks bro
Next update bada hoga
Saath rahiye