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vj4u bhai aaj update de rahe ho kya
brilliant review brother..saath bane rahiyeAwesome Updatee
Jaisa maine kaha thaa aapki story predict karne ka koi faiyda nhi hotaa. Kyoki jo bhi hum sochenge woh hone wala hai nhiii. Humari soch Sanvy ke Jail aur Veronica ki maut ke andar tak hi simit thi. Par aapne toh uske bahot saal baad ka scene dikha diya.
Dimple ke conversation se aisa laga jaise Sanvy ne Dimple ke kisi bahot hi jyaada khaash bahot hi jyaada apne ko maara hai. Yaa yuh kahu ke Sanvy ke haatho marwaya gaya hai. Shayad woh Dimple ki Maa ho yaa koi aur khaash. Aur isiliye Dimple Sanvy ko maarne wali thi. Aur shayad utne saal mein dono ke beech love express hochuka thaaa.
Idher Present mein Sanvy ne Dimple ko train karna start kardiya hai. Par first day hi Dimple fail hojaati hai jo shayad uski life ka first time failure thaa.
Dekhte hai Dimple kaise Sanvy ki di hui training ko successfully complete karti hai aur kyaa Sanvy Dimple ki mehnat se khush hoga.
beautiful review brother... yunhi saath bane rahiyeFuture scene....jo kisi mission ka pratit hota hu lg rha h...jisme sanvy and dimple dono chup chap ghuspeth krne ke liye itni raat me nikle hue h aur dimple ke aap aap bolne se lgta h sanvy uska senior h ya fir dono me mohabbat ho gyi h sayd shadi bhi ho gyi hotbhi aap aap bol rhi h pr fir achanak se waqt badla aur dimple bhi badal gyi uske jajbaat bhi badal gye...wo ek dm se sanvy ke khoon ki pyaasi ban gyi aur un dono ki conversation aur jis trha ke word usne sanvy ke liye use kiye unse lgta h ki sanvy ne kuchh aisa kiya jisse dimple ka kaleja tak kaanp gya hoga wo is kadar tut gyi ki uske dil me sanvy ke liye nafrat aur badle ki bhavna aagyi...aur sanvy ki baato se lgta h ki sayd dimple itne waqt se sachai se anjaan h sayd use wo kaand jo sanvy ne kiya hoga uske baare me pura sach pta nhi hoga aur aadha gyaan to waise bhi jaanleva hi hota h to dekhte h aage kya hone wala h aur in present sanvy ne jo authority moves ke baare me dimple ko btaya itne lmbe arse baad dimple ne usme kaafi hadd tak maharat hasil kr hi li h bss kuchh waqt aur jb wo isko successfuly achieve kr legi...pr itne me bhi usne sanvy ki thuddi pr ek mukka jma hi diya bahut lmba waqt lgne wala h is kaand ke baare me janne ke liye lgta h aane wale waqt me aur bhi future glimpse dekhne ko milne wale h......
Ab aate h present me to dimple ki training salad katne ke sath shuru hogyi h jisme phle to dimple frustrated ho gyi pr jb usne uska result dekha to wo ise seekhne ko pagal ho gyi h ...ab to jldi hi seeekh kr maanegi..aur mossy hills me hui fight ko bahut paini nigaahon se observe kiya tha dimple ne bakai tarif ke kabil h...
so dekhte h ab aage kya hone wala h waiting for next update brother. Its mindbogglingly update✌
ho hi naa raha tha bold.. thanks brother..saath bane rahiyeइसबार फ़ॉन्ट बोल्ड नहीं किए आपने
सिर्फ़ दो ही जन
तीसरे की जरूरत ही नहीं पड़ी
आने वाले कल और बीते हुए कल में
जजबातों में कहीं अर्श है कहीं फर्श है
फिर भी कितना लाज़वाब है
मैं क्या कहूँ
एकदम निशब्द हूँ
चकित हूँ
अपने आप जुबान कह रहा है
वाव
hahaha.. padhte jaayiye brother..safar lamba hai..yunhi saath bane rahiyeBht lmba wait krwaoge inko solve krne ke liye ap bt i think jo socha ni hoga vo b hoga story me i mean it's really really awsom men apke dimag ki reach to is story ne bta hi di bhai i wish ye story ek pdaw pe b ni punchi hai abhi or abhi to school ch rha hai clg b ayega i think ya to story me tim cross kroge ki sanvy apni maa ki moaut ke bad chup hoke Beth gya phir 9 sal bad shi tim ane pe dushmn ko marne chla bcz vo GOD ko dhund ni paya ya koi plan bna rha tha God ko marne ka mybe aisa kuj ya phir bol skte hai story abhi apne rup me ayi hi ni abhi tk ya agyi hai bt hme pta ni lg rha hai dimple dhokha degi socha to tha bt mjak me socha tha or jha tk main abhi soch rha hu shyd ye b ek dhokha ho sanvy ka bnaya hua jal jisme pta ni kon kon fsega
wow.. brilliant and one of the best reviews for this story...jo points aapne likhe,saaf darshata hai ki kitna closely padh rahe hain aap is kahani ko.. thanks for such appreciation brother...abhi toh safar lamba hai.. bohot si parten khulengi jo i am sure ki thrill badha dengi aap sabka ka..yunhi saath bane rahiyePichhle Do teen Updates mein kahani ne ek naya rukh le liya hai... Dimple Sanvy se lagatar impressed hoti jaa rahi hai... Pehle Arif Reza ke khilaf uski fighting skills dekh kar, then uss Brain Competition mein Sanvy ka words ko exact order mein yaad rakhna aur ab Miss Linda ke saath huyi ghatna sab kuchh kaafi gehra asar chhod gaya Dimple par...
So, laazmi tha ke wo Sanvy se seekhna chahti thi, especially those rare fighting skills... Par thoda sa paison ka ghamand baaki tha usmein jiske chalte galat bol gayi thi wo but baad mein khud hi ye cheez realise bhi ho gayi usse... Especially Veronica ke saath huyi baat cheet se bhi kaafi kuchh samjhi Dimple... Wahin Veronica ne jab usse Rashid Reza se bachaya tha tab wo theek se Veronica ko nahi dekh paayi thi... That's why uska ek clear face nahi balki ek dhundhli si image hi rahi Dimple ke Brain mein...
Khair, chahe pehchan naa paayi ho Dimple usse par Veronica ne bhi apni baaton aur Kitchen mein huyi cheezon se Dimple ko hairaan zaroor kar diya... Wahin Saneel aur Sanveer ke beech ki similarities ko jiss tarah Dimple ne saamne rakha wo saaf dikhata hai ke kitni baareeki se Dimple ne Sanvy ko observe kiya hai... Ab observation skills to of course uske sharp hain hi...
To, Veronica ki baat maante huye Dimple ne Sanvy se seekhne ki apni ichha ko sahi tareeke se saamne rakha aur fir Sanvy bhi maan gaya... Aakhir mana kaise kar de wo, uski life ki Heroine hai wo... Iss beech Dimple ko apna pehla test dena pada joki 1600m ki daud thi... National Record ke itna paas pahunchna wo bhi itni si umra mein saaf dikhata hai ke Sanvy se seekhne ke baad Dimple will turn into a hypersonic Missile... (And Sanvy's capabilities can only be imagined, I mean agar Dimple uss se seekh kar itni dangerous banegi to wo khud kya ban jaayega aage chalkar??)...
Par iss aakhiri update mein Jo future scene dikhaya aapne wo kaafi saare sawaal apne peechhe chhod gaya... Wo 2029 ka scene tha, currently story is running in 2020, matlab uss waqt 23–24 saal ke ho chuke honge ye dono... Sabse pehli baat jo notice ki jaa sakti hai wo Dimple ka Sanvy ko “AAP” kehkar sambodhit karna... It's almost evident ke Dimple bhi wo Organization join karegi jiski currently head shayad Veronica hai aur jinka slogan tha – “Wrong is not wrong if the result is right”... Sanvy of course Veronica ke baad uss organization ko lead karega & Dimple uske under kaam karti hai isiliye usse shayad aap kehkar sambodhit kiya hoga...
Secondly, Dimple ka Sanvy par attack karna with the same knife that Veronica used to save her from Rashid Reza... Ye attack ke do pehlu hain... Pehla to ye ki ye attack original hai, I mean Dimple sach much kisi kaaran se Sanvy ko maarna chahti thi... Ya fir jaise aapki pichhli dono stories mein Main Protagonist Villains ka Chutiya kaat diya karte the khud ko kamzor dikhakar, similarly yahaan Sanvy kar raha hoga Villain ko kisi jaal mein fansans ke liye...
Agar aisa hai to sab sahi hai par agar Dimple sach much usse maarna chahti thi then... Kyunki usne khud kaha ke ek hit mein Sanvy ki jaan jaa sakti thi, which means ke Sanvy satya mein oopar pahunch sakta tha... Khair, “RUTHLESS, HEARTLESS COLD BLOODED MURDERER”... In mahaan shabdon se to mujhe bilkul hairaangi nahi huyi... Definitely yahi ban jaayega Sanvy, iss baat mein koyi shakh nahi... Ye cheez to ussi din saabit ho gayi thi jab Arif ka patta cut hua tha... Those ending Lines by Principal Ranjana Matthews (Wo Ram – Raavan Waali)... Wo padhkar samajh aa gaya tha ke Veronica ki maut ke baad Sanveer will show up his another side, a side that'll turn him into something unimaginable...
Khair, mudde ki baat ye hai ki do cheezen yahaan ho sakti hain... First, Dimple ye apne Moral Values ke chalte kar rahi thi, I mean Maybe Sanvy will end up Hurting some Innocent people in his War against G.O.D. aur ussike chalte Dimple usse maarne ka thaan baithi... Secondly, maybe Sanvy will kill Dimple's Mom or maybe a slight chance her Dad... Maybe un dono mein se koyi ek Jaiden Chaudhary ya fir Directly G.O.D. ke saath connected ho aur uska haath Veronica ki death mein bhi ho...
So, over-all teen speculations hain... Pehli, Sanvy aur Dimple Villain Logis ka Chutiya kaat rahen hain, Secondly, Dimple wants Sanvy dead because he might have Killed or Harmed someone connected very closely to her & Third, For the sake of Saving some Innocent lives... Par ye teeno speculations bhi galat ho sakti hain kyonki VJ bhai aapki estory mein guess lagana matlab... Chhodo comparison tak naa mila mujhko to ...
At last, Dimple has started getting trained from Sanvy... Aur pehle din ka lesson Vegetable chopping ke zariye sikhaya Sanvy ne... Jiss prakaar ke Angles & All ki jaankari di Sanvy ne usse, I think iske baad bhi agar 2029 mein wo Sanvy par sahi mein hamla kar rahi hai to usko ek psychiatrist se consult karna hi chahiye... Wahin jo Oath li Dimple ne uska bhi ek role ho sakta hai inki aage ki journey mein... Wahin jinn Moves – “Authority Moves” ke baare mein currently Sanvy ne Dimple ko bataya unhe nearly Perfect kar chuki hogi wo 2029 mein... Good progress ...
At last, bahut se sawaal hai jinka jawaab shayad aage chalkar mile... Par iss update ka pehla scene ek badi cheez mujhe bata gaya... Wo ye ki ye Story meri umeed se bhi zyada massive hone waali hai... I mean Attitude 2 ko padhne ke baad ek cheez to main samajh gaya tha ke aapki imagination alag hi level ki hai aur iss story se ummedein bhi kaafi badh gayi thi... But the first scene of this update showed up with the fact that this “GALATH” Is going to remain in every readers heart forever...
Baaki VJ bhai aapki lekhni ki tareef ab kya hi karun... Nishabd sa kar diya hai iss update ne mujhe... Wo Brain Challenge mein Vice Principal ke dwara use kiye gaye words hon ya fir Ye Vegetable Training waala scene, ya fir 2029 waale scene mein jinn cheezon aur drishyon ka aapne varnan kiya, aur of course aaj tak jo bhi fight scenes likhen hain aapne iss story mein... You have just shown that you're a Genius... Aapki Imagination ki to koyi seema hai hi nahi baaki aapki knowledge alag alag subjects par, I mean you're not going to see such a deadly combination regularly... Kyonki ab tak ye story ye bhi dikha chuki hai ke aap story likhne se pehle kiss level ki research karte ho...
Iss se ye bhi saaf ho jaata that the hardwork you put in to present this masterpiece in front of us can't even be imagined... Simply ek 4000 words ka update likhne mein hi aadmi ke dimaag ke nut & bolt loose ho jaate hain and writing such skillfully... I just hope ke aap iss forum se kinaara naa kar len... I know ke aap do stories complete kar chuke hain & of course ye bhi karenge... Bas yahi Dua karunga ke aapki life mein Sab kuchh theek rahe aur aap issi tarah se apne dimaag ke jaadu se sabhi readers ko entertain karte rahen...
Really – Really Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
dhanyawad bhai...yunhi saath bane rahiyeDeath king , Rudrathakur aur Jaguar भाई का रिभियू पढ़कर मुझे तो समझ में ही नहीं आ रहा है अब मैं क्या लिखूं ! कुछ प्वाइंट छोड़ा ही नहीं है उन्होंने ।
तीनों ने गजब का प्रिडिक्ट किया है ।
मुझे तो इस बात की खुशी है कि यह स्टोरी अब 2029 तक जारी रहने वाली है । 2020 के समय की स्टोरी फिलहाल रनिंग में है मतलब फ़्लैश बैक चल रहा है । इसके बाद प्रजेंट और फिर अपडेट्स ही अपडेट्स सालों तक ।
वाह ! खुब मजा आने वाला है ।
इसके अलावा अब मैं सलाद काटने की कोशिश भी करने वाला हूं । सनवीर आहार्य की नजरों में , पूर्ण परफेक्ट होने के लिए उस के स्टाइल में सलाद काटना बहुत जरूरी है । वैसे मुझे विश्वास है , वैसा सलाद तो अपने जिंदगी में कटने से रहा ! इतना परफैक्शन लाना सम्भव ही नहीं । पर इसी बहाने भोजन में सलाद की मात्रा तो जरूर बढ़ जायेगी ।
हमेशा की तरह सुपर से भी ऊपर वाला अपडेट था वि जे भाई ।
ब्रिलियंट अपडेट था यह ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।
Super fantastic lajawab update
Excellent superb update
Nice Update
Kamaal Dhamaal Jhakkas update hai vj4u bhai.....
Sanvy ka calculation toh ek dum out of the world can't be better than that lekin aapne future bata ke sala dimag hi ghuma diya hai ki jo dimple sanvy ke pyaar mein honi chahiye woh hi bhala usse kyun marna chahti hai.....
Superb fantastic update waiting for next update
Awesome update bhai
Nice update
very very interesting and mind blowing update bro or future ki jhalak bhi dikha deee
but is jhalak me ye new girl hmaare hero saanvy ki jaan kyu lena chahti he......
aakhir esa kya hua inke beech me.....
I knw it aisa hi hoga bc ek hota h thoda sa Dr jo jb such hota h to ft jati h vhi hua nd now suprise is dimple beshk yha ditch kr rhi h sanvy ko bt isse age pta lgega ki sanvy ki side hi hogi dimple ye to bs ankho ka dhokha h jo dimple ne kiya kuj toj reson h ya to jisne dimple ko bheja h use fsane ka ya anything i don't knw bt yha b sanvy hi jeet rha h bs show aise kiya h ki story ki exitmnt bd gyi do half future bta ke Veronica ki niyat or dimple ka ye rup dikha ke guruuuuuuuu fad diya apne bt Suchi m just predict kr rha hu i wish aisa hi ho
Authority move!! on readers
Waah
Fantastic Update brother.
Marblous update bhai.
Awesome update bro.
Nice updates
fantastic mind-blowing brilliant amazing update bhai maza aa gya
awesome update
Superb update
Superb update
Awesome update
Nice update bro
Mast update
Super update hai Bhai
wow bhai present day ki jo jhalak aapane dikhayi woh kamal ki thi.aur jo sabji katane ka concept hain woh kamal ka hain. main roj sabji katata hu magar yeh sahi radius wala chakkar mujhe kabhi pata nahi tha kamal ka update tha bhai.
waiting for new update bhai
Nice update
Bohat hi bhayankar and bohat confuse karne wali update jo ek genius ke genius mind hone ka saboot deti hain. Jaha hum abhi tak Veronica ki maut and Sanvi ke jail me confuse they wahi aapne usse bhi aage ka dikha diya jis se 2 baat clear Hui ek to shayad kisi ka badla lenay ke liye Dimple Sanvi ke kareeb aayi Hai ya shayad usse shadi kar li coz usko aap aap keh ke bolna doosra woh itna zada nafrat bhi Karti jai ki badla Lena ke liye woh sanvir ko maut ke ghat utaar dey. Matlab Dimple confuse hain apne pyar aur nafrat ke beech me ab dekhte hain Kaun kis pe havi hoga shayad woh badla bhi Veronica ya apne baap ka Lena chahti hogi coz.
Khair future ko future per chorey warna apna dimagh confuse हो jaayega. Magar ab update ko zada zaroorat mehsus हो rahi Hai.
Jabardast update bhai
Awesome Great one update VJbhai
Shandaar update hai bhai maza aa gaya
Great update bro
Dimple sanvy ke saath hai but usko Marne ke liye ??konsa mod araha he story mai ye dakhne layak hoga but fast-forward mat karna bro aramse story ko age barhana awsm update waiting for next
Superb update brother ...
Keep it going ...
jis tarah veronica saneel ki jodi thi ekdam perfect couple ki .
kya sanvy ko waisi koi milegi ??.
agar dimple sachme nafrat karti hai sanvy se to .
abhi tak kahani me sirf ek hi ladki thi jo sanvy jaisi thi ( usse kam hi par perfect )...
Bahot behtareen zaberdast
Shaandaar update bhai
Lajawab
Jab Dimple SANVEER ko marna chahti h tow saath m kyon gaye h mission per yeh sawal bahot ahen rahega aage chal ker
Baherhal dekhte h training m kia seekhti h new girl
Very Good Update
Heroin ki Opponent bana diya Bhai ne Wah
Exiting update
Very nice story
Very nice
Nice update
Wonderful update bhai
Fantastic Update brother.
Bhai update doge aj
Amazing update..but esa kya hogea ki dimple sanvy ko marna chahti hai bhai dil tut gea future seen dekh kr
Awesome update bhai waiting for next update
Good one
Awesome update once again bhai
Waiting for your next update
Bahot hi mast update aapne to future ki jhalak bhi dikha di
Now that is what I called a wonderful start of beautiful story. Keep going and keep updating on time vj4u
Aksar numbaroon ke tarazu mein tola jaata hai virle logo ko,
Verna kabhi koi Einstein kabhi school se bahar nahi hota.
Maza aa gaya iss jabardast update mein. Ek ek scene ka sukshm visleshan bahut hi jabardast tha. Bahut khoob, bahut khoob, bahut khoob.
thanks brothers..be alongZarruri to nahi ki har baar alfaaz kahe jaayen,
Ye chehra ek aaina hai jo sab kuch bata jaata hai.
Alfaaz waakai mein kum pad gaye iss update ke liye. Shukriya vj4u iss behtreen kahani ke liye.