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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai..
Bahut hi sandar majedar update hai..
Aakhir Kar maharani Bach gai .
Jokram pgla gya .use to samjh nhi aarha hai uski Maya ko Kon tod. diya
Last suspense supper
Bahut hi sandar majedar update hai..
Aakhir Kar maharani Bach gai .
Jokram pgla gya .use to samjh nhi aarha hai uski Maya ko Kon tod. diya
Last suspense supper
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Maharani azad ho gayi.Ab to chandra ka kaam bhi asan hi ho gaya bahut shandar update tha.
Bhai tiwari dekh kar bda harsh hua ki tum theek ho
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Tiwari ji update bahut jabardast hai or Suspance to or badhiya ab agle update ka intzar hai please
#UPDATE 52
tabhi mujhe kuchh yaad aaya or main apni jagah se uth kada hua.
Main:- Are yaar gadbad ho gayi ab kya karu?
Maharani:- Kyo kya hua aise paaresan kyo ho rahe ho, kya baat hai?
Ab Aage...................
Main:- Are maharani ji aapke pita shree wo mushibat me fans sakte hai, Jokram aapko wahan naa pakar unko nuksan pahuncha sakta hai hame kuchh karna hoga.
Maharani:- Han to kuchh karte kyo nahi, aise kyo khade ho?
Main:- Main kya karu main wahan tak nahi jaa sakta naa hi mere pass udanchhu hone ka shakti hai.
Maharani:- Kyaaaa?? Tum akhir ho koun, agar tumhare paas shaktiyan nahi hai to yahan tak pahunche kaise, kahan se aaye ho??
Main:- Abhi inn baato ka waqt nahi hai hamare paas hame unko bachana hoga, wo yaha ke kaid khane me jokram ke kaid me hain chalo jaldi karo.
Maharani:- Kyaa kaha? tumko kaise pata ki mere pita ji kahan hai,, tum ho koun jise sab pata hai pahle se, kahi tum uss shaitan se mile hue to nahi ho?
main:- Dekhiye maharani ji agar apne pita ko bachana hai to apna wo jaldi se udanchhu wala jadu karo or hame kaid khane me le chalo.
Maharani:- Thik hai chalo.
Phir ham log jhatpat kaid khane me pahunch gaye, waha par sainiko ne hame dekhte hi hamla kar diya.
Main abhi kuchh karta usse pahle hi maharani aage badh gai, or sabko ek ek kar ke apni shaktiyo se door fenk deti, mere ko kuchh karna hi nahi pada.
Main:- Are bap re ye maharani to badi shaktishali hai, ek chutki me kisi ko bhi maar de, dekho to kaise maar rahi hai sabko, amain kya karu ab sabko to yahi dekh legi, are han main rinoma ke paas jata hun.
Main Adrishya ho kar rinoma ke taraf chal diya, wahan bhi pahra tha or idhar ke shor sharaba deh ke wo bhi satark the main jaise hi uss kaidkhane ke paas pahuncha to usko bahar se kholne ke liye prayas kiya.
Mujhe itne zorr ka jhatka laga ki kya btau, upar se nihe tak pura main jhanjhana gaya or door jaa kara geera, isi ke sath main sabke samne bhi aa gaya.
Mujhe jhatka lagte or geerte dekh ke waha ke sainik hasne lage.
"hahahahahahhaha dekho dekho ye jail ka darwaza kholne aaya tha, apne aap ko bahut bad yoddha samajh raha tha, magar hamare malik isse bhi chalak hain hahahahahahaa"
Sab dant dikha ke sale hans rahe the wahi main niche pada apne aap ko sambhal raha tha, mere ankho ke aage andhera chha gaya tha.
Wo sare sainik jokram ke gulam the, wo maharani ke sainik nahi the, inke paas shaitani takaten thi un sab ne apna roop badal liya or mere taraf badhne lage.
main abhi niche hi leta hua tha ki wo sab mere kareeb aa gaye the, tabhi unlogo ke aage dhamaka hua, wo sab hadbada ke pichhe geer gaye. Ye dhamaka maharani ne kiya tha.
Main:- Ab kya mujhe bhi udha dogi Maharani, dekh ke nahi karti kya?
Maharani:- Maine tumhari jaan bachai hai, shukriya kahne ki jagah shikayat kar rahe ho, ehsaan faramos.
Main:- Kya ye madad thi, aise karte hai madad.
Maharani:- Han aise hi karte hain, Mere pitaji kahan hai btao jaldi.
Main:- Wo samne wale kaidkhane me ha.............
Meri puri baat sune bina hi rinoma jail ki taraf chali gai, or jo galti maine ki thi wahi usne ki, wo bhi jaa kar sidha usko kholne ki koshish karne lagi, usko bhi zorr ka jhatka laga, or usi tarah door geeri.
sare sainik:- hahahahaha jaise ye buddhu hai usi tarah ye maharani hai hahahahahahhaha pakad lo inn dono ko aaj maharaj khush ho jayege.
Wo sab hum dono ki taraf aane lage tab tak maharani bhi uth gai or mujhe ghoor kar dekhne lagi.
Main:- Kyaa... meri puri baat hi nahi suna tumne maharaniii jiiii, mujhe bhi to laga tha.
maharani:- Chup karo apni bakwas, ab inse nipato.
Phir hamari unse sabse yuddh hone laga, maharani to bhai apne jadui shaktiyo se lad rahi thi or main apne hatho se ab mere paas jadui takat to tha nahi, or jo tha bhi to chhota mota se lada nhi jaa sakta naa.
Main:- Maharani kuchh karo naa jaldi se chutki baja ke inko yaha se hata do, abe ruko bhai dekh nahi rahe baat kar raha hun.
Gulam:- Han thik hai, kyaa .... nahi chhodunga tumko insaani kide.
Maine khinch ke ek laat mara door jaa ke geera.
Main:- Bola tha ruk jaa suna hi nahi tune, Maharani suno to wo maharani....... aaahhhh
Maharani:- Kya bakwas kar rahe ho, ye koi mamuli sainik nhi hai jo sabko udha dun, shaitani takate hai inke paas, ladne par dhyan do.
main:- Are rinoma kahan ho aap, aapne mujhse jhuth kyo bola tha ki aapki putri bahut hi shaktishali or divya shaktiyo wali hai, jab ye kuchh kar hi nahi shakti.
Maharani:- Kya kaha, mere pita ji ka naam samman se lo maharaj hain wo yaha ke.
Main:- Han Han thik hai maharani ji, rinomaa, rinomaa kahan ho aap.
Rinoma jo andar the adrishya roop me jab unko meri aawz aai to pahle to wo pahchan nahi paye ki koun awaaz de raha hai, kyoki bhai main to mila bhi to bas ek baar hi tha, kintu kuchh derr me pahchan gaye tab unhone bola.
Rinoma:- han Chandra kya ye tum ho, main yah andar hi hun, Kya tumne meri putriramika ko bacha liya, bolo kya ramika tumko mili yaa nahi.
main:- are yaar jaisi beti hai waisa hi baap hai, mera matlab jaisa baap waisi beti, ruko bhai thak gaya hun, han ab aa, ye le tu bhi le, Han rinoma aapko ramika mere sath hi hai, Are aap bolti kyo nahi maharani.
Maine dekha to maharani ki aankho me ansu the, shayad itne dino baad apne pita ki aawaz sun ke bhavuk ho gai thi.
Rinoma:- Putri ramika kya tum yaha ho, bolo putri kya tum thik ho, tumhari aawaz sune arsa beet gaya.
Lekin maharani ke hmuh se to aawz hi nahi nikal rahi thi, aap log soch rahe honge ki ye log aise kyo baat kar rahe hai, kya rinoma ko humlog dikh nahi rahe hain? han ye sach hai hum sab ek dusre ko dekh nahi paa rahe the isliye aise baat ho rahi thi,
Ramika:- Haannn.... han pita ji main yahi hun pita ji, aap thik to hain naa.
Rinoma:- Han putri main thik hun, kintu tum yaha kyo aai ho, putri yaha se kahi door chali jao nahi to wo dusht tumko phir kaid kar lega, jao meri putri jao.
Ramika:- Nahi pita ji aapko liye bina nahi maina apko. aaaaahhhh
Rinoma :- kya hua putri .... putri....
Maharani ko pichhe se ek gulam ne prahar kiya tha, jis wajah se unke muh se chikh nikal gai, lekin ab wo bahut gusse me thi or pichhe ghum kar unhone apne puri takat se un sab par hamla kiya jisse dekhte hi dekhte sare ke sare khatam ho gaye, bas rah gaya to rakh.
Main:- Are wah ye hui naa baat, yahi kaam pahle kar deti to kya jata tumhara maharani ji.
Lekin iss bar maharani ji kafi gusse me thi, unhone mujhe ghur kar dekha to maine apna muh band rakhne me hi bhalai samjha.
Tab ham dono jail ke taraf chale lekin ab bhi wahi sawal tha ki ye khulega kaise.
Main:- Ab ye kaise khulega chhune par to jhatka lagta hai.
Rinoma:- Chandra tum sab thik ho ramika kahan hai putri.
Ramika:- Main thik hun pita ji, lekin ye kaid se aapko nikale kaise.
Rinoma:- iske baare me mujhe gyat nahi hai putri uss shaitan ne isko shaitani shakti se bandh rakha hai jise todna itna asan nahi,
Ramika:- Pitaji aap pichhe hat jaiye main koshish karti hun.
Itna kah kar maharani ne apni shaktiyo ka waar uss jail par kar diya kintu iska koi parinam nahi nikla.
Rinoma:- Putri tum isko nahi tod paogi yaha se chali jao kahi jokram yaha aa gaya to phir kuchh nahi kar paogi.
Ramika:- Nahi pita ji main aapne bina yaha se nahi jaungi, main sabko to kho chuki hun ab aapko nahi khona chahati, main aapko nikal ke rahungi chahe aaj mujhe apni sari shaktiyo ko hi kyo naa lagana pade.
Phir maharani ne Apni sabhi shaktiyon ko ekatrit kiya or uska upyog us jail ko todne me karne lagi unhone apne sari shakri laga di, jisse wh kamzor lag rahi thi, apni puri shakti lagane ke baad bhi wah uss mayajal ko tod nahi pai, tabhi.
Tabhi waha ek bahut hi khaufnak hasee gunj gai.
" Hahahahahahahahahhahahahaha" Maharani Ramika hahahahhaha tum apne pita ko nahi bacha paogi hahahahahahhahahahha"
Aaj ke liye itna hi.
Thaank you.
tabhi mujhe kuchh yaad aaya or main apni jagah se uth kada hua.
Main:- Are yaar gadbad ho gayi ab kya karu?
Maharani:- Kyo kya hua aise paaresan kyo ho rahe ho, kya baat hai?
Ab Aage...................
Main:- Are maharani ji aapke pita shree wo mushibat me fans sakte hai, Jokram aapko wahan naa pakar unko nuksan pahuncha sakta hai hame kuchh karna hoga.
Maharani:- Han to kuchh karte kyo nahi, aise kyo khade ho?
Main:- Main kya karu main wahan tak nahi jaa sakta naa hi mere pass udanchhu hone ka shakti hai.
Maharani:- Kyaaaa?? Tum akhir ho koun, agar tumhare paas shaktiyan nahi hai to yahan tak pahunche kaise, kahan se aaye ho??
Main:- Abhi inn baato ka waqt nahi hai hamare paas hame unko bachana hoga, wo yaha ke kaid khane me jokram ke kaid me hain chalo jaldi karo.
Maharani:- Kyaa kaha? tumko kaise pata ki mere pita ji kahan hai,, tum ho koun jise sab pata hai pahle se, kahi tum uss shaitan se mile hue to nahi ho?
main:- Dekhiye maharani ji agar apne pita ko bachana hai to apna wo jaldi se udanchhu wala jadu karo or hame kaid khane me le chalo.
Maharani:- Thik hai chalo.
Phir ham log jhatpat kaid khane me pahunch gaye, waha par sainiko ne hame dekhte hi hamla kar diya.
Main abhi kuchh karta usse pahle hi maharani aage badh gai, or sabko ek ek kar ke apni shaktiyo se door fenk deti, mere ko kuchh karna hi nahi pada.
Main:- Are bap re ye maharani to badi shaktishali hai, ek chutki me kisi ko bhi maar de, dekho to kaise maar rahi hai sabko, amain kya karu ab sabko to yahi dekh legi, are han main rinoma ke paas jata hun.
Main Adrishya ho kar rinoma ke taraf chal diya, wahan bhi pahra tha or idhar ke shor sharaba deh ke wo bhi satark the main jaise hi uss kaidkhane ke paas pahuncha to usko bahar se kholne ke liye prayas kiya.
Mujhe itne zorr ka jhatka laga ki kya btau, upar se nihe tak pura main jhanjhana gaya or door jaa kara geera, isi ke sath main sabke samne bhi aa gaya.
Mujhe jhatka lagte or geerte dekh ke waha ke sainik hasne lage.
"hahahahahahhaha dekho dekho ye jail ka darwaza kholne aaya tha, apne aap ko bahut bad yoddha samajh raha tha, magar hamare malik isse bhi chalak hain hahahahahahaa"
Sab dant dikha ke sale hans rahe the wahi main niche pada apne aap ko sambhal raha tha, mere ankho ke aage andhera chha gaya tha.
Wo sare sainik jokram ke gulam the, wo maharani ke sainik nahi the, inke paas shaitani takaten thi un sab ne apna roop badal liya or mere taraf badhne lage.
main abhi niche hi leta hua tha ki wo sab mere kareeb aa gaye the, tabhi unlogo ke aage dhamaka hua, wo sab hadbada ke pichhe geer gaye. Ye dhamaka maharani ne kiya tha.
Main:- Ab kya mujhe bhi udha dogi Maharani, dekh ke nahi karti kya?
Maharani:- Maine tumhari jaan bachai hai, shukriya kahne ki jagah shikayat kar rahe ho, ehsaan faramos.
Main:- Kya ye madad thi, aise karte hai madad.
Maharani:- Han aise hi karte hain, Mere pitaji kahan hai btao jaldi.
Main:- Wo samne wale kaidkhane me ha.............
Meri puri baat sune bina hi rinoma jail ki taraf chali gai, or jo galti maine ki thi wahi usne ki, wo bhi jaa kar sidha usko kholne ki koshish karne lagi, usko bhi zorr ka jhatka laga, or usi tarah door geeri.
sare sainik:- hahahahaha jaise ye buddhu hai usi tarah ye maharani hai hahahahahahhaha pakad lo inn dono ko aaj maharaj khush ho jayege.
Wo sab hum dono ki taraf aane lage tab tak maharani bhi uth gai or mujhe ghoor kar dekhne lagi.
Main:- Kyaa... meri puri baat hi nahi suna tumne maharaniii jiiii, mujhe bhi to laga tha.
maharani:- Chup karo apni bakwas, ab inse nipato.
Phir hamari unse sabse yuddh hone laga, maharani to bhai apne jadui shaktiyo se lad rahi thi or main apne hatho se ab mere paas jadui takat to tha nahi, or jo tha bhi to chhota mota se lada nhi jaa sakta naa.
Main:- Maharani kuchh karo naa jaldi se chutki baja ke inko yaha se hata do, abe ruko bhai dekh nahi rahe baat kar raha hun.
Gulam:- Han thik hai, kyaa .... nahi chhodunga tumko insaani kide.
Maine khinch ke ek laat mara door jaa ke geera.
Main:- Bola tha ruk jaa suna hi nahi tune, Maharani suno to wo maharani....... aaahhhh
Maharani:- Kya bakwas kar rahe ho, ye koi mamuli sainik nhi hai jo sabko udha dun, shaitani takate hai inke paas, ladne par dhyan do.
main:- Are rinoma kahan ho aap, aapne mujhse jhuth kyo bola tha ki aapki putri bahut hi shaktishali or divya shaktiyo wali hai, jab ye kuchh kar hi nahi shakti.
Maharani:- Kya kaha, mere pita ji ka naam samman se lo maharaj hain wo yaha ke.
Main:- Han Han thik hai maharani ji, rinomaa, rinomaa kahan ho aap.
Rinoma jo andar the adrishya roop me jab unko meri aawz aai to pahle to wo pahchan nahi paye ki koun awaaz de raha hai, kyoki bhai main to mila bhi to bas ek baar hi tha, kintu kuchh derr me pahchan gaye tab unhone bola.
Rinoma:- han Chandra kya ye tum ho, main yah andar hi hun, Kya tumne meri putriramika ko bacha liya, bolo kya ramika tumko mili yaa nahi.
main:- are yaar jaisi beti hai waisa hi baap hai, mera matlab jaisa baap waisi beti, ruko bhai thak gaya hun, han ab aa, ye le tu bhi le, Han rinoma aapko ramika mere sath hi hai, Are aap bolti kyo nahi maharani.
Maine dekha to maharani ki aankho me ansu the, shayad itne dino baad apne pita ki aawaz sun ke bhavuk ho gai thi.
Rinoma:- Putri ramika kya tum yaha ho, bolo putri kya tum thik ho, tumhari aawaz sune arsa beet gaya.
Lekin maharani ke hmuh se to aawz hi nahi nikal rahi thi, aap log soch rahe honge ki ye log aise kyo baat kar rahe hai, kya rinoma ko humlog dikh nahi rahe hain? han ye sach hai hum sab ek dusre ko dekh nahi paa rahe the isliye aise baat ho rahi thi,
Ramika:- Haannn.... han pita ji main yahi hun pita ji, aap thik to hain naa.
Rinoma:- Han putri main thik hun, kintu tum yaha kyo aai ho, putri yaha se kahi door chali jao nahi to wo dusht tumko phir kaid kar lega, jao meri putri jao.
Ramika:- Nahi pita ji aapko liye bina nahi maina apko. aaaaahhhh
Rinoma :- kya hua putri .... putri....
Maharani ko pichhe se ek gulam ne prahar kiya tha, jis wajah se unke muh se chikh nikal gai, lekin ab wo bahut gusse me thi or pichhe ghum kar unhone apne puri takat se un sab par hamla kiya jisse dekhte hi dekhte sare ke sare khatam ho gaye, bas rah gaya to rakh.
Main:- Are wah ye hui naa baat, yahi kaam pahle kar deti to kya jata tumhara maharani ji.
Lekin iss bar maharani ji kafi gusse me thi, unhone mujhe ghur kar dekha to maine apna muh band rakhne me hi bhalai samjha.
Tab ham dono jail ke taraf chale lekin ab bhi wahi sawal tha ki ye khulega kaise.
Main:- Ab ye kaise khulega chhune par to jhatka lagta hai.
Rinoma:- Chandra tum sab thik ho ramika kahan hai putri.
Ramika:- Main thik hun pita ji, lekin ye kaid se aapko nikale kaise.
Rinoma:- iske baare me mujhe gyat nahi hai putri uss shaitan ne isko shaitani shakti se bandh rakha hai jise todna itna asan nahi,
Ramika:- Pitaji aap pichhe hat jaiye main koshish karti hun.
Itna kah kar maharani ne apni shaktiyo ka waar uss jail par kar diya kintu iska koi parinam nahi nikla.
Rinoma:- Putri tum isko nahi tod paogi yaha se chali jao kahi jokram yaha aa gaya to phir kuchh nahi kar paogi.
Ramika:- Nahi pita ji main aapne bina yaha se nahi jaungi, main sabko to kho chuki hun ab aapko nahi khona chahati, main aapko nikal ke rahungi chahe aaj mujhe apni sari shaktiyo ko hi kyo naa lagana pade.
Phir maharani ne Apni sabhi shaktiyon ko ekatrit kiya or uska upyog us jail ko todne me karne lagi unhone apne sari shakri laga di, jisse wh kamzor lag rahi thi, apni puri shakti lagane ke baad bhi wah uss mayajal ko tod nahi pai, tabhi.
Tabhi waha ek bahut hi khaufnak hasee gunj gai.
" Hahahahahahahahahhahahahaha" Maharani Ramika hahahahhaha tum apne pita ko nahi bacha paogi hahahahahahhahahahha"
Aaj ke liye itna hi.
Thaank you.
Scorpionking
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