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Tiwari_baba

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#UPDATE 57

Itna sunte hi maine jaldi se uske hriday par apne talwar ka parahar kiya, or talwar ko uske seene me utar diya.

Jokram:- Naaahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii............

Ab Aage.....................

Iske sath hi jokram sharir jal kr rakh ho gaya, or phir sab kuchh shant ho gaya, ye sab dekh kar kuchh logo ko hairani hui to kuchh log khush hue.

Usko khatam karte hi maharani or maharaj sab meri taraf aane lage, kintu ab mere jaane ka samay aa chuka tha iss liye mera sharir adrishy hone laga tha, jise dekh kar sab haisan ho gaye, or jaise mujhse puchh rahe ho kiye kya ho raha hai.

Main:- Ab mere jane ka waqt aa gaya hai, isliye me sharir ab adhrishya ho raha hai.

Ramika:- kya kintu abhi hi kyo kya tum abhi kuchh samay or nahi ruk shakte ho.

Maharaj:- Han chandra agar tum kuchh samay or rukte to haame tumhara shukriya kahne ka waqt milta.

Main:- uski koi awashykta nahi hai, shayad iski mrityu mere hatho hi hona tha isliye mujhe yaha aana pada wo pushtak to ek matra madhyam tha, achha ab alvida agar ishwar ne chaha to phir milenge.

Or main unke samne se gayab ho gaya, maine dekha to ab main wahi khada tha jaha se main kund me kuda tha, jaha mera rakshakon se samna hua tha, abhi main soch me hi tha ki tabhi wahan par wahi rakshak aa gaya.

Rakshak:- Aao chandra kaise ho, akhir apna karya pura kar aaye.

Main:- Han akhir isi liye to main aaya tha or aapke ashirwad se mil hi gaya.

Rakshak:- Mere ashirwad nahi ... tumne chhal kiya tha yuddh me iss karaan tum chale gaye the , kintu ab nahi wo pushtak bhi main tumse lunga or tumhare pran bhi.

Main:- kyaa?? prantu maine aapke sath kya chhal kiya, aapne mere bal or buddhi ka priksha liya, maine dono ka hi istemal kiya, or jahan buddhi kaam na kare wahan maine apne buddhi ka istelm kiya, isme koi chhal to nahi tha.

Meri baat sun kar rakshak thodi soch me pad gaye, lekin phir unhone yuddh ki chunauti de di.

Rakshak:- Kintu main tumhe ek baar phir se yuddh ki chunauti deta hun agar tum yaha se jana chahte ho to mujhe hara kar hi jana hoga.

Main:- Achhi baat hai main bhi yuddh se pichhe nahi hatunga, kyo brahaman ka vachan hi sab kuchh hai. to vachan deta hun aapko hara kar hi yaha se jaunga.

Rakshak apni talwar le kar khade ho gaye, maine bhi apni divy talwar ko yaad kiya wo mere hath me aa gai, maine talwar ko pranam kiya, mere hath me divy talwar ko dekh kar rakshak phir hairan hue, lekin phir unke hontho par mushkan aa gai.

Rakshak:- chalo waar karo pahla avsaar main tumhe deta hun.

Main:- to phir dono ek sath hi karte hai, aap apna prayas kijiye main apna.

Rakshak:- Thik hai aa jao.

Hum dono aage badhe or apne talwaro ko zor se takraya, usse chingari nikali, main bhi pichhe ko hua or rakshak bhi, hum phir se aage badhe iss baar itna force tha ki main pichhe geer gaya.

Rakshak:- kya hua bache tum to geer gaye, khade ho or yuddh karo nahi to haar maan lo.

Main itna sunte jhat se khada ho gaya, or bahut hi forche se rakshak ki taraf badha maine apne talwar ko ubpe waar kiya, unhone rokne ki koshish ki lekin force itna tha ki wo pichhe hote gaye or ant me unka talwar hi toot gaya, or main pichhe hath gaya.

Rakshak:- Waah kya baat hai, ab mujhe yakeen hai ki tun uss pushtak ke haqdar ho, kshama karna kintu main aise hi kisi ko wo pushtak hasil nahi karne de sakta tha.

Main:- isme kshama mangne ki awashyakta nahi hai aapko, to kya ab main jaa sakta hun.

Rakshak:- Han ab tum jaa sakte ho or dhanywad mujhe meri seva se mukt karne ke liye.

Itna kah kar rakshak mere samne se gayab ho gaye or main wahan se age nikal gaya.

Main:- Yaar aise to to mujhe phir se 2-3 din lag gayege aane jane me kya karu, jane baki sab kaise honge maine to pita ji ko btaya bhi nahi tha ki main kahan jaa raha hun naa kisi or ko, idhar to aaye hue hi mujhe 7-8 din gujar gaya hai.

Aise hi main khud se baate karte hue chalta raha or rashte me kuchh khane pine ke liye faal wagarah tod leta tha.

idhar dushri taraf
Prince:- Prity pata nahi bhaiya kahan chale gaye itna din ho gaya unki koi khabar hi nahi aai, kah kar to gaye the 2-3 din me aa jayege.

Prity:- Han bhai main bhi yahi soch rahi thi, pata nahi kahan gaye, kahi kuchh unko ho to nahi gaya n.

Prrince:- kaisi baat kar rahi ho bahan wo jarur thik honge kisi kaam me fans gaye honge, aa jayege.

Rekha :- or dosto kya ho raha hai, tum dono aise kyo baithe ho?

Prity:- Kuchh nahi aise hi hum bhai ke bare me baat kar rahe the.

Chandani:- Achha to kya wo aa gaya, kahan gaya tha.

Prince:- Wo aaye nahi issi baare me baat kar rahe the, itna time pata nahi kahan laga diye.

Rekha:- ohh to aisa bolo naa, waise itna chhuti karega to padhega kya, aise koi bich me jata hai kya, waise bhi ab to bas ek mahina hi baki hai chhutiyan padhne me.

Sunanda:- Han thik kaha didi aapne main to khoob masti karungi holidays me.

Chandani:- Ye lo ise to bas masti karna or khane hi aata hai pata nahi kya hoga tera.

Chandani:- to prity kuchh pata chala tumhare bhaiya kaab aa rahe hai or kahan hain.

Prity:- Nahi abhi koi khabar nahi hai.

Rekha:- kisi ko uska ghar pata hai kya hum sab chal ke pata karte hain.

Prince:- bhaiya ka yaha ghar nahi hai wo to hostel me rahte the.

REkha:_ ohh tab to....

" Bhag gaya wo pandit hum sab se darr ke isiliye to nahi aa raha hai"

Ye sabhi abhi baat kar hi rahe the ki pichhe se karan ki aawaz aai, jise sun ke sab uski taraf dekhne lage.

Karan:- hiii chandani kaisi ho, kuchh khaogi?

Chandani:- Hello karan, nahi mujhe kuchh nahi chahiye main thik hun.

G1L3:- Or chashmis kaisa hai, ye bta tujhe itna door tak dikhta hai bina chashme ke.

Prince chup rahta hai wo kuchh nahi bolta hai.

G1L4:-Abe bol naa tune kya muh me glu laga rakhi hai bol naa.

G1L2:- Oye rahne do warna usko gussa aa jayega, dekh nahi rahe uski bahan ne kaise uska hath pakad rakha hai, hahahahahahahahaha.

Sare ke sare hasne lage, phir bhi prince or prity chup hi rahe un dono ko kuchh na bolta dekh chandani boli.

Chandani:- Tum yaha kyo aaye, kyo paresan kar rahe unko jao yaha se.

Karan:- ye chhod do unko tang maat karo, lekin han wo pandit kaha hai ye to bata de chashmis.

Sunanda:- usko nahi malum naa hame malum hai, aap jaoge yaha se apne chamcho ko lekar yaa main principal se shikayat karu.

Karan:- jao kar do humne to inke sath kuchh nahi kiya hai, To cahndani tu ek cup coffe piyogi mere sang.

Prince or prity waha se uth kar jane lage.

Chandani:- Karan please maine tumko kitni baar kaha mere pichha chhod do, tumko meri baat samajh nahi aati.

Karan:- Aati hai naa lekin maine to sirf ek cofee ke liye kaha haai or to kuchh nahi kiya.

Rekha:- jab wo bol rahi hai use tum pasand nahi to kyo pichhe pade ho jao yaha se.

Karan:- yahi baat main tumse sunna chahta hun chandani, main nahi pasand to kya wo chutiyadhari pandit pasand hai jo usse dosti kar rahi ho.

Chandani:- Main kisi se bhi dosti karu usse tumkoo kya, Chalo dosto hum yaha se chalte hain.

or chandani or uski saheliyan bhi waha se chali jati hain.

Karan:-(Man me) Jao jao lekin tum aogi mere hi paas wo pandit tumhare kareeb kabhi nahi aayega, tum meri nahi hui to dusre ki bhi nahi hogi.

Aaj ke liye itna hi.

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Naughtyrishabh

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#UPDATE 53

Tabhi waha ek bahut hi khaufnak hasee gunj gai.

" Hahahahahahahahahhahahahaha" Maharani Ramika hahahahhaha tum apne pita ko nahi bacha paogi hahahahahahhahahahha"

Ab Aage...................

Jaise hi ye aawaz waha gunja hum sab samajh gaye ki ye kiski aawaz hai.

Main:- Lo yaar isko bhi abhi hi aana tha, ab kaise bachege iss shaitan se?

Rinoma:- main kaha tha naa tum yaha se jao , chandra meri putri ko yaha se le jao.

Main:- Thik hai le jata hun, Maharani aap thik hai hame yaha se jana hoga.

Ramika:- Nahiiiii.. main..... Pita ji.aaahhh...

Jokram:- Ab tum kahi nahi jaa sakte insaani kide.

Ab tak waha jokram kikewal aawaz aa rahi thi, kintu ab wah swayam aa gaya tha hamare samne or usne apni hath aage kiya or bahut sare uske gulam waha pragat ho gaye, gande bhadde shakal wale, hum charo taraf se gher liya.

Main:- Maharani hosh me aao hame jana hoga yaha se, door raho hamse nahi to....

Jokram:- Nahi to kya insaani kide hahahahahhaha kya karega tu, bahut bhag liya tune ab tu bhi marega kide ki bhanti.

Main:- Achha.... Chal phir chhu ke dekh, tere hi gulam the naa jo mujhe dhundhne aaye the, bhul gaya unki kya halat ki thi?

Meri baat sun ke jokram bahut hi gusse me mujhe dekha, jaise abhi kha jayega.

Jokram:- haaaaaaa.... tune mere gulamo ko maar kar achha nahi kiya, ek bazi jeet kar itna maat udh insaani kide, main chahu to abhi tujhe masal ke rakh du, lekin kisi kamzor ko maar kar mera kya hoga.

Main:- Kya kaha ek bazi, hahhahahahhaha Ek bazi nahi, bol char bazi maine jeeti hai or tu hara hai, Tere kaid se main nikal gaya pahla, tere gulamo ko maine mara dusra, maharani ko azaad maine kiya teesra, or ab Rinoma ko bhi chuda lunga chautha.

Jokram:- Achhi baat hai jitna socha tha usse kahi aage hai tu, lekin ab or nahi , jao mere gulamo iss insaani kide ko maar kar maharani ko mere paas le aao.

itna sunte hi sare ke sare gulam hamare taraf aane lage, waise bhi hame charo taraf se gher rakha tha bhag bhi nahi sakte the.

Main:- maharani Kuchh kijiye nahi to hum bachne wale nahi hai, jaldi koi chutki bajao, or inko bhagao.

Maharani ne koshish ki lekin kaam nahi bana, unki shari shakti khatam ho chuki thi.

Jokram:- hahahahhaha kya hua tumhari shakti kaam nahi kar rahi ], hahahahaha karegi bhi nahi kyoki ye jokram ki mayajal hai, ye kholne wale ki sari shakti shokh leti hai.

Tabhi do gulamo ne mujhe pichhe se pakad liya, or do ne maharani ko apni taraf khinch liya, lekin maharani ne ek ke muh par ek ghusa maara or uske paas padi talwar utha li, maine bhi apne sharirik bal se ladne ka faisla kiya or maine bhi do teen laat ghuse dhar diye.

Ab bhai log sharirirk bal se ladne me mere samne koun hai, ek time pe main 3-4 ko ek sath lapet leta tha, lekin ye sale or aa jate, upar se jadu bhi karte the.

Maharani:- Suno tum jao yaha se main inko tab tak rokti hun, tum apni jaan bachao.

Main:- Are lekin aapka kya, itni muskil se aapko bachaya hai, phir se kaid me jane ke liye.

Maharani:- Shayad meri keesmat me yahi hai, tum jao yaha se.

Hum baato me lag gaye the tab tak maharani ko char gulamo ne apni talwaro se gher liya, or mujhe pe kareeb 15-20 gulamo ne ek sath hamla kar diya, main sambhal nahi paya or un sab ne mujhe bahut mara.

Jokram:- Hahahhaha bahut uchhal kud macha liya ab marne ko taiyar ho jaa.

Mujhe un sabne niche apne pairo se daba liya tha, or jokram ab meri taraf badh raha tha, sath me mera gusssa bhi badh raha tha, wo mere bajay Ramika ki taraf chala gaya or unko gala apne hatho se pakad liya, uska gala daba raha tha, jisse ramika ko sans lene me or dard bhi ho raha tha, uske ankho se ansu aane lage the, ye dekh ke mera dimag out ho gaya.

Main:- Hey shaitan ki aulad usko kya kasht de raha hai, aa naa mere paas tab tujhe btata hun.

Jokram:- Rassi jal gai lekin bal nahi gaya,, jayega wo bhi jayega insani kide, kyo maharani kya kahti ho maar du tumhare rakshak ko, han bolo bolo (zor se) Bolti kyo nahi.

Ramika:- Naaaa.... aaahhah ... nahii .. chho... chhod do usse....

Jokram:- Kya kaha? chhod du hahahahahaha.... chalo thik hai chhod deta hun to phir tumko meri shart to yaad hai naa mujhse vivah karna hoga or wo pushtak bhi..

Rinoma:- Nahi beti aisa maat karna.. chhod de meri beti ko shaitan chhod de use...

Jokram:- hahaahahha achha hai phir to usse marna hoga.

Main:- Han aa maar mujhe aa naa namard kahi ke.. ek stree ke upar kya jor azmaish kar raha hai.

Jokram:- Aa araha hun, kya sare insaan tujh jaise hi bad bole hote hai ... le aa gaya kya karegaaaaaaaaaaaa.....

Jaise hi jokram mere kareeb aaya, maine apna takshak( bhediye) wala roop le hiya or ek zordar panja uske seene par , uski chinkh nikal gai or door jaa geera, or jin gulamo ne mujhe pakda tha wo bhi geer gaye.

Mera ye roop dekh ke maharani bhi darr gai, unko jin gulamo ne pakda tha wo bhi darr se chhod ke bhagne lage.

maine ek dahad mari.. woooohhhaaaaaaaaaaaaa" woooohhhhhhhaaaaaaa'

Jokram:- Nahi ye nahi ho sakta.... haaaaa.. mere gulamo jao use khatam kar do.

Uske kahte hi phir se sab gulam mere taraf aane lage, jokram ne ek baar phir se apna hath ghumaya or waha or bhi gulam aa gaye kreeb 50 to honge hi.

Sab mere upar toot pade, maharani ek taraf khadi ho kar dekh rhi thi, jo bhi mere hath aata main unko chherta fadta chaba jata, kisi ko beech se cheer deta to kisi ka dhad sar alag kar deta, charo taraf sirf khoon hi khoon faila tha.

woooooohahaaaaaaaaa Wooooohaaaaaaaaaa.... meri awaaz se kaidkhana gunj raha tha, jab dekha ki uske sab gulam maar rahe hai to usne maharani ko akeli or shakti heen pakar, unko jaakar pakad liya.

Maharani:- Aahhhhhhh nahi chhodo mujhe aahhahahha chandraaaa.

Jaise hi maine maharani ki chinkh suni main unki taraf daud laga di, or main apna roop normal kar kiya daudte daudte, maine apni divya talwar ka awahan kiya jo mujhe gurudev ne diya tha.

Lekn tahi waha ka senapati or sainik aane lage, mere samne jeetne aate gaye maine aapko kat-ta hua sidha maharani ke paas pahunch gaya, maine apni talwar ka muth(jaha se pakadte hai) usko aage kar rakha tha, usse jokram ke seene par mara.

Jisse usko zor ka jhatka laga or wah udhta hua deewar se takra gaya, or wahi par behosh ho gaya, itne me sena pati or sainik aa gaye the, or hame gherne lage the, lekin tabhi maine phir se apna takshak wala roop liya or maharani ko utha kar tang liya or waha se deewar ko todte hue bahar nikal gaya, mera bhayanak roop dekh ke kisi ki bhi mere sameep aane ki himmat nahi hui or ham nikal gaye.

Main maharani ko lekar Lio or miru ke yaha gaya tha, ab main normal tha lekin mere sharir par khoon laga tha.

Maharani ko dekh kar lio or miru ghabra gaye the, unko to yakeen hi nahi hoo raha tha ki unke samne maharani hain, maine unko sab kahani btaya ki kya or kaise sab hua.

Main kafi thak bhi gaya tha or maharani bhi isliye maharani to so gai thi, kyoki unhone apni sari shakti jail ko todne me laga di thi, isliye unko aaram karna jaruri bhi tha, maine naha kar lio ke kapde pahan liye or thoda aaram karne laga.

Wahi dusri taraf jokram ke behosh hote hi senapati or sainiko ne usko utha kar mahal me le gaye or uske uthne ka intezaar karne lage, lekin use hosh nahi aa raha tha, upar se to sab kuchh thik tha kahi koi chot ke nisan tak nahi tha phir bhi wah jane kyo behosh tha.

Sham ko jab maharani uthi tab main uske samne hi baitha tha, mujhe dekhte hi wo hadbada ke uth baithi, mere sath me lio or miru bhi the unko dekh maharani kuchh naa boli, phir wah fresh hokar aai tab boli.

Ramika:- Akhir tum ho kya chiz insaan ho, shaitan ho kya ho, ek taraf kahte ho tumko jadu nahi aata, to ek taraf aise danav ka roop le lete ho, kya aa...

Main:- Shant ramika ji shant mera matlab maharani ji, Main batata hun apne bare me, darasal main yaha ek divya pushtak ke khoj me aaya tha, jiska mujhe ek paheli ke jariye pata laga, main yaha prithavi se aaya hun, or ye sab mere paas kaise hai iske baare me main bhi nahi janta shayad ishwar ne mujhe kuchh achha karne ke liye hi ye sab diya hai.

Main:- Or mujhe uss pushtak ke baare me ek divya shakti se pata chala ha, jisne kaha tha ki wah pushatak mere liye hi hai or shayad wah pushtak bhi apne malik tak pahunchne ke liye mujhe sapne me apne tak pahunchane ka rasta btati aai hai, uss paheli ke anusar wo pushtak shayad aapke paas hai yaa phir aap hi mujhe uss tak pahunchne ka rasta bta sake.

Meri baat sun ke maharani awak hokar mujhe hi dekhti rahi, jaise maine jane kya bol diya ho, unke sath me lio or miru bhi waisi hi sthiti me the.

Main:- main jab yaha aaya to mujhe sainiko ne pakad liya aapse milne nahi diya or phir kaid khane me daal diya, waha aapke pita ji se pata chala ki aap khud kaid me hain, phir main unke kaid se bhag kar aapko bachaya, baki to aap janti hi hain.

Meri puri kahani sun kar maharani ko yakeen hi nahi hua ki jis pushtak ko wo itne samay bachati aai hain uska koi or hi malik hoga, unhone kuchh nahi kaha or waha se uth kar bahar chali gai, mujhe to samajh nahi aaya ki isko kya ho gaya.

Wahi jokram ko hosh me na aata dekh ke senapati ne vaid ko bulaya, usne sab janch karke senapati ko btaya ki shayad maharaj ko koi gahra aghat hua hai, jisse unko andhuni chot lagi ho, usne dawa de di hai, hosh aa jayega.

Aadhi raat ko jokram ke sharir me halchal hua or wah uth baitha,

Jokram:- naaaahhhhhiiiiiiii naahiiiiii aisa nahi ho sakta nahi ho sakta, ye koi mamuli insaan nahi hai, akhir akhir wo mujhe chhu bhi kaise paya , mujhe pata karna hoga, jarur koi gahra raaj hai.

tabhi waha senapati aaya, maharaj ko hosh me aaya dekh ke wo bahut khush hua.

Senapati:- Maharaj aap thik to hain naa, aapko kya ho gaya tha, aap subah se behosh the,

Jokram:- kya main subah se.... (kuchh soch ke) Wo sab kahan hai kya tumne unko pakda.

Senapati:- maaf karna maharaj lekin uss danav ke samne hum kuchh nahi kar paye wo dono waha se nikal gaye the.

Jokram:- (uska gala daba ke) Wo rinoma kya wo bhi hamare hath se nikal gaya bolo nahi to aaj tera akhri din hoga.

Senapati:- nahi nahi maharaj wo .. wo abhi bhi hamare kaid me hai.

Jokram:- To jao or jaa kar waha ki suraksha or badha do sab sainiko ko waha laga do, main kuchh samay baad tumse milta hun.

Itna bol wo waha se gayab ho gaya.

Aaj inta hi.

Thank you.
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aage ka intjaar
 
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