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#UPDATE 54

Jokram:- To jao or jaa kar waha ki suraksha or badha do sab sainiko ko waha laga do, main kuchh samay baad tumse milta hun.

Itna bol wo waha se gayab ho gaya.

Ab Aage................

Ek bahut hi andheri or bhayanak guffa ke andar kisi ke zor zor se mantrocharan ki aawaze aa rahi thi, aaiye hum bhi dekhe ki ye koun hai.

Are baap re hum to andheri guffa soch rahe the lekin yaha to bahut bada hawan kund jal raha hai, wahi samne me ek bahut badi shaitan ki murti hai, or ye koun hai ,,, are ye to jokram hai, jo zor zor se mantrocharan karte hue hawan kund me aahuti de raha hai.

ओम शैतान मम वश्य कुरू कुरू स्वाहा
Om Shaitan mum vashya kooru kooru swaha
ओम भूतेश्वरी नम: स्वाहा
Ok Bhuteshwari namah swaha
क्रीं क्रीं सदात्मने भूताय मम मित्र रूपेण
Krimm krimm sadatmane mum mirtay rupen
सिद्धिम कुरु कुरु क्रीं क्रीं फट् स्वाहा॥
Siddhim kooru kooru krimm krimm phat swaha||

Jokram:- Shaitani mere akka mujhe darshan do, meri prathna suno, makin mere akka darshan do.

Aise hi wah kafi der tak mantrocharan karta raha, tabhi hawan kund ki aag or bhadak gai uski lapte unchi or unchi jaa rahi thi.

Jokram:- hahahahaha shaitan ki jai ho shaitan ki jai ho,,, mere aaka mere malik.

Shaitan:- Hahahahahha hahahhhahahaaha .

Tabhi wahan bhanak hasi gunj gai or un aag li lapto me se ek aakriti nikali kareeb 12-12 foot uncha.

Shaitan:- kaho kis liye mujhe yaad kiya, agar tumhara prayojan mere santosh janak nahi hua to uska dand bhugatne ke liye taiyaar ho jao.

Jokram:- Nahi mere malik mujhe kshama kare meri iss bhul ke liye kitnu mujhe aapki awashyakta th, prabhu mera marg darshan kare, aaj ek ek insaan ne mujhe murchhit kar diya, bhala ye kaise ho sakta hai apka diya ashirwad or shakti aise vifal kaise ho sakta hai.

Shaitan:- Kya kaha, ek insaan ne tumko murchhit kar diya asambhav hai ye.

Phir shaitan ne apni ankhe band kar kuchh padha or usko sab kuchh dikhne laga or jab usne mujhe or mere hath me divya talwar ko dekha to usko samajh aa gaya aisa kyohua tha, phir usne ankhe kholi.

Shaitan:- Tum itne kamzor nikaloge maine socha nahi tha, tum ek insaan se haar gaye.

Jokram:- Mere akka wo koi sadharan insaan nazar nahi aata jarur koi baat hai, meri raksha kare mujhe rashta dikhaye mere maalik.

Shaitan:- (man me) han ye satya hai wo koi sadharan balak nahi hai, wo tumhari mrityu ban kar aaya hai, isme main bhi kuchh nahi kar sakta ab.

Shaitan:- To bolo tum kya chahte ho mujhe, main tumhari kaise sahayta karu.

Jokram:- Mere aaka aap mujhe ajay amar kar de, yaa phir koi aisi shakti pradan kare jisse main us insaani kide or maharani ramika ko apne vash me kar saku.

Shaitan:- Hahahahahaha amar hahahahaha amar to koi bhi nahi hai jokram, han lekin tumhari mrityu ka raaz koi nahi janta isliye ek tarah se tum amar hi ho, or rahi shakti ki baat to main tumko wo de shakta hun kintu uske liye keemat deni padegi tumko.

Jokram:- Mere malik aapke liye maine navjaat shishuo ke rakt ka pyala taiyar kar raha hai ,,, aap uska paan kar sakte hai mere akka.

Shaitan:- hahahahahha swadisht waaahh maza aa gaya, lo maine tumhe ye kawach or talwar deta hun jisse tum haroge nahi.

itna kah kar shaitan gayab ho gaya, usne or kuchh nahi kaha.

Jokram:- hahahahahha ab main tujhe dekhta hun insaani kide tu ab nahi bach payega, aa raha hun main ramika hahahahhaha.

Wahi mere paas se jane ke baad ramika dusre kamre me baithi jane kya soch rahi thi, phir usne kuchh soch kar dhayan me baith gai, Jab dhyaan me baithi to usne kuchh dekha or phir uski dhayan toot gai.

Jab wah mere paas aai to uske haav bhav badle hue the, jo main samajh nahi paa raha tha.

Ramika:- Main tumko wah pushtak de dungi lekin usse pahle meri kuchh sharte hain jise tumko pura karna hoga, bolo tumko manjur hai.

Main:- Maharani ji waise to wah pushtak mere paas aa hi jayegi, Lekin boliye kya hain aapki sharte, main bhi to janu.

Ramika:- Meri pahli shart ye hai ki tumko merepita ji ko jokram ki kaid se chhudana hoga, or dusra tumko jokram ko khatam karna hoga, bolo hai manjur.

Main:- Are wah jaisa baap waisi beti har baar mujhe hi bali ka bakra bna rahe ho, aap khud hi kyo nahi khatam kar deti maharani aap Bhi to sarvshaktiman hain.

Ramika:- Tumne sawayam hi dekha main uska samna karne me samathwan nahi hun.... wah chhal se har baar bach jata hai, agar main usko maar pati to itne samay tak uski kaid me nahi rahti, agar tumko wo pushtak prapt karni hai to usko marna hoga, kyoki wo bhi usi pushtak ke pichhe hai.

Main:- Ohhhhh to ye baat hai isiliye usne mujhe kaid kiya tha aki mere zariye yaa to wo pushtak tak pahunch jaye or jab maine koi jawab nahi diya to usne mujhe marne ki koshish ki.

Ramika:- Han Agar tum usko khatam kar dete ho to ek to wo phir pushtak ke pichhe nahi aa payega or dusra hamara nagar bhi shnnti purwak rah payega.

Ramika:- Agar tum mere liye ye nahi kar sakte to apne in dosto ke liye hi use khatam kar do, kyoki inke mata pita ko marne wala wah jokram hi tha, jo meri or maharaj ki raksha karte hue apne pran tyag diye the.

LIo/Miru:- Kya? Kya Hamare mata pita ko marne wala wah dusht hai, main use nahi chhodunga.

Ramika:- Pagal maat bano wo jab mujhse roka nahi gaya to tum kya ho uske samne, to bolo tumhara kya faisla hai chandra.

Main:- Thik hai main jokram Ko khatam kar dunga kintu usse pahle tumko wo pushtak muhe deni hogi.

ramika:- Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta agar tune hamare sath chhal kiya to.

Main:- Main vachan deta hun main tumko dhokha nahi dunga, ye ek brahan ka vachan hai, tumko wo pushtak mujhe deni hogi kyoki uss pushtak me hi ush dusht ki mrityu ka raaz likha hai, to pahle pushtak.

ramika:- Thik hai chalo mere sath, tum dono koi galti karne ki koshish maat karna hum aate hai.

Itna kah kar ramika or main gayab ho gaye or pahunche ek guffa me, phir hum uske andar jane lage, jaise jaise hum andar jaa rahe the uss guffa me masal jal rahi thi.

Mujhe aage badhte hue aisa lag raha tha ki andar se bachaini or khushi ho kisi se milne ki,or aisa hi uss chi ko bhi ho raha ho.

Hum ek jagah jaa kar ruk gaye or ramika ek asan par baith gai, or dhyan mudra me chali gai main wahi khada dekhta raha, kuchh chhan bite ki waha roshni failne lagi, kuchh der me waha itni roshni ko gai ki puri guffa roushan ho gai.

Jab maine samne dekha to ek bahut sundar sunahri pushtak hawa me prakat ho gai thi, usko dekhte hi bahut shanti or khushi mahsus ho rahi thi.

taabhi ramika ne apni ankhe kholi or us pushtak ke samne jhuk kar naman karne lagi.

Ramika:- Hey divy pushtak hey gyan ki devi main aapko naman karti hun, aapne jo kuchh bhi mujhe gyan swaroop diya hai main uske liye koti koti dhanywad karti hun.

Itna karne ke baad ramika ne mujhe dekha, to main waise hi khada tha jaise pahle tha uss pushtak ko dekh raha tha.

Ramika:- kya tumhare andar ye bhi sishtachar nah ki tum iss divy pushtak ka samman kar sako , isko naman kar sako.

Main abhi kuchh bolta tabhi kahi se aawaz aai, jise sun main to chaunk hi gaya.

Awaaz:- Kya kabhi swami ko apne bhakt yaa sewak ko pranam karte dekha hai tumne ramika.

Main to idhar udhar dekhne laga ki ye kaha se aawaz aai, lekin ramika uss pushtak ko hi dekh rahi thi.

Pushtak:- Han tumne sahi suna, ye meri swami hain isliye naman karne sishtachar mera hai unka nahi, SUSWAGATAM chandra, mere swami, mujhe aapki seva karne ki avsar mila main dhany ho gai.

Main:- Ye... ye aap kya kah rahi hain, main bhala apka sawami kaise hua, main to aapse pahli baar mil raha hun, or waise bhi main ek sadharan sa manav hun.

Pushtak:- Swami ye to aapka badapan hai jo aap khud ko abhi pahchante nhi, Aap mujhe itna samman de rahe hain iska dhanywad, mera naam prashtuti hai jise swayam tripurari hamadev ne aapki seva me bheja hai.

Ramika ye sab sun ke stabhdh ho gai thi , aaj tak jiski aradhya karke jisne us pushtak se shaktiyan arjit kiya, use aaj us pushtak ka naam malul hua tha, or sath hi mere bare me sun kar bhi use yakeen karna mushkil ho raha tha.

Ramika:- Mujhe kshama kare chandra mujhe aapke bare me gyat nahi tha, maine agyanta was jane kya kya bol diya hai.

Main:- Ye kya kar rahi ho maharani, aap yah ki maharani hai or main ek sadharan manav aisa na kare, chaliye ab aapke pita ji ko bachate hain.

Prashtuti:- usse pahle swami aapko mujhe apne andar samahit karna hoga, taki main aapke hriday ka sathan le saku, mera wahi vaas hoga.

Main:- Thik hai jaisa aap kahe, ..... or main aage padh gaya pushtak ki taraf.

Ramika:- Kshama kare devi kintu mera ek prashn hai kya main puchh sakti hun.

Prashtuti:- Main janti hun tum kya kahna chahti ho, yahi naa ki mere jane ke baad kya tumhari shaktiyan raegi yaa nahi.

Ramika:- Ji devi main yahi janna chahti hun.

Prashtuti:- To iska jawab yahi hai ki maine jo gyan or shaktiyan tumko pradan ki hai wo sadaiv tumhare sath hi rahegi, kintu uske atirikt tum swayam shakti ka handar ho, isliye pni shaktiyon ko jagrit karo unko pahchano.

Ramika:- Dhanywad, jaisi aapka agya devi, mera akhri pranam swikar kare.

Prashtuti:- Swami aapko mere upar hath rakh kar ye mantra bolna hai, PRAVITHTAM HRIDAYA STHANAM GRANAM.

Jaise hi maine hath rakh ke ye mantra bola dekhte hi dekhte wah pushtak mere andar samahit ho gai.

Aaj ke liye itna hi.

Thank you.
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

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