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# UPDATE 55

Prashtuti:- Swami aapko mere upar hath rakh kar ye mantra bolna hai, PRAVITHTAM HRIDAYA STHANAM GRANAM.

Jaise hi maine hath rakh ke ye mantra bola dekhte hi dekhte wah pushtak mere andar samahit ho gai.

Ab Aage......................

Main iss waqt dhyan ke mudra me baitha tha or iss waqt main uss pushtak ka adhyayan kar raha tha.

prashtuti:- Pranam swami kahen main aapki kya sahayta kar sakti hun.

Main:- Jab tum mere hriday ke sath par sthit ho to tumko to pata hi hoga ki main kya janna chahta hun.

Prashtuti:- Ji Main janti hun kintu main apne swami ke agya ke bina koi bhi chij nahi kar sakti, isliye aap hame adesh de kya janna hai aaoko.

Main:- Thik hai, to tum mujhe uss dusht jokram ko marne ka raaz btao.

Prashtuti:- wo aise mara jayega ................... .

Main apne dhayan se bahar aaya or ramika ke paas gaya, abhi subah hone wali thi, or ye wahi waqt tha jab jokram shaitan se shaktiyan prapt kar ke khushiyan mana raha tha.

Main:- hame jaldi karna chahiye aapke pita ko khatra ho sakta hai, kahi uss jokram ne unke sath kuchh kar naa diya ho.

Ramika:- To phir kya yojna banai hai aapne pitaji ko chhudane ki.

Main:- Yojna ye hai ki koi yojn nahi hai, bas jana hai or waha se unko chhuda kar lana hai.

Lio/miru/ramika:- Kyaaaaaa????

Teeno ke teeno mujhe ghurne lage, jaise maine jane kya kah diya.

Main:- Kya hua chalo der ho rahi hai.

Ramika:- Pata nahi inke paas itni taqat kaise aai hai, dimag to thoda bhi nahi hai.

Lio:- Bhai aap mujhe bhi apne sath le chalo, main us dudht ko to nahi mar sakta kintu aapki kuchh to madad kar sakta hun.

Main:- Nahi tum nahi jaa sakte, main nhi chahta ki tum log musibat me faso, isliye yahi raho apni bahan ke sath.

Miru:- Mujhe bhi aap logo ke sath hi jana hai, ham bhi chalege.

Main:- Chhalo phir agar tumko chalna hi hai to, maharani ji kijiye udhan chhu.

Or ramika ne chutki bajai or hum log phir wahi tahkhane me pahunch gaye, maine jaldi se sabke sar pe hath rakh kar adrishya kar diya, phir hum andar badh gaye.

Andar ka nazara hi aaj badla hua tha, har taraf sainik hi the maine dekha to waha senapati bhi tha.

Senapati:- sainikon satarak raho jab tak ki maharaj naa aa jaye, kisi ko bhi dekhte hi usko khatam kar do.

Main:- Iski to main, ye tumhara hi senapati hai naa, iske andar koi rajbhakti to nahi dikhti.

Ramika:- Nahi ye hamare senapati nahi hain, kyoki unki mrityu pahle hi ho chuki hai, ye to mujhe jokram ka hi koi gulam lagta hai.

Main:- ohh to aisa hai, to suno main jakar rinoma ko chhudata hun, tum teeno maharani inko talwar pradan kare or aap sab inka dhayan apni taraf khinchiye main aapke pita ko chhudata hun.

Ramika:- Lekin tum pita ji ko chhudaoge kaise wo jail khana to toot-ta hi nahi hai.

Main:- tum apna kaam karo wo main dekh lunga, thik hai.

sab:- thik hai.

Maine un teeno ko dhrishyman kar diya or wo sab sainiko ki taraf badh gaye, unko dekhte hi sainiko ne unko dhamkaya.

sainik:- wahi rook jao nahi to jaan se mare joge.

Senapati:- Aaiye maharani aaiye, aapka swagata hai, ye aap kisko sath liye ghum rahi hai aapki sena to bahut badi hai.

ramika:- Hat jao hamare rashte se, hum kisi se yuddh yaa kisi ko marna nahi chahte, hame apne pita ko chhudana hai.

Ramika ki baat sun ke sab ke sab hasne lage.

Senapati:- To aao le jao aapne pita ko maharani, sainiko inke pita ko lao.

Pichhe se kuchh sainik rinoma ko pakad ke le aaye or unke gale pe talwar rakhi hui thi, ye dekhte hi ramika tadap uthi.

Ramika:- Pita ji,,, chhod do mere pita ko nahi to koi bhi nahi bachega mujhse.

Senapati:- Hahahahahha maine to kaha hai maharani aao or le jao apne pita ko, lekin usse pahle ye bta do ki wo manava kaha hain.

Ramika:- Mujhe nahi pata uske bare me main nahi janti.

Senapati:- Achaa?? to aap nahi janti ki wo manav kaha hai.

Wahi main bhi Sabse chhip kar us kaid khane ke paas pahunch hi gay tha ki uss senapati ki baat sun ruk gaya, mujhe bhi bada ascharya hua ki rinoma bahar hai lekin tabhi.

Ramika:- Maine kaha naa main nahi janti, unko chhodo.

Senapati:- thik hai aap nahi janti to hum bhi aapke pita ko nahi jante.

Tabhi uss sena pati ne rinoma ke gale par talwar chala diya or khoon ka fawara waha foot pada or rinoma zameen me geer pade tadafte hue.

ye dekh ramika ki chikh nikal gai, aisa to maine bhi nahi socha tha ki hoga, mujhe bahut gussa aaya, Lekin phir mujhe ehsaas hua ki jaisa rinoma ne kaha tha ki joram bahut maya rachta hai kahi ye maya to nahi, ek baar jail khane ko dekh lena chahiye, maine apn divy talwar ko yaad kiya or jail ke paas jane laga.

Wahi ramika apne pita ki mrityu dekh hosh kho baithi miru usko sambhal rahi thi.

Senapati:- Hahahahahahah Kya hua maharani ab kise bachaogi, pita to tumhare gaye, sainikon pakad lo sabko.

Sab sainik inke taraf badh gaye sirf lio bacha tha or wo akela kya kar pata.

Miru:- Maharani uthiye nahi to hum mare jayege, hame jana hoga, sainik idhar hi aa rahe hai.

Itna sunte ramika khadi ho gai gusse me or apni full shakti ke sath sabhi sainiko ko bijli ke jhatke diye, wali lio or miru bhi mharani ko ladta dekh maidan me kud gaye, or sainiko ke sath talwar bazi karne lage, wahi maharani senapati ki taraf badhi or use apni shaktiyon se ladne lagi.

Jaisa ki ramika ne kaha tha senapat bhi ek gulam hi tha usne bhi apni shaktiyon se ladna shuru kar diya, maharani par usne apni agni shakti ka prayog kiya kintu maharani ne use ro diya.

Phir ramika ne vayu ki shakti se bavandar bana kar senapati ko usme gher liya, lekin senapati ne uss bavandar me dhool ko shmil kar diya or phirr pani ki shakti se uss bawandar ko khatam kar diya.

Waahi main jaise hi uss jail ke paas pahuncha waise hi mujhe zor ka dhakka laga, main pichhe geer gaya, mujhe aisa laga ki kisi ne mujhe dhakka diya ho. main khada hua to mere samne wahi do saye the jo mujhe dhundhne aaye the.

Saya1:- kya hua manav tum to halke dhakke se geer gaye humne socha tha tumme kuchh to dum hoga lekin tumne mujhe nirash kiya.

Main:- Tumne mera dum dekha hi hai phir bhi agar sandeh hai to phir se ajma lo, aise aksmaat mujhe dhakka de kar tumne koun saa bahaduri ka kaam kiya hai.

Saya2:- achha yaad dilaya hai, hame bhi pichhi baar ka hisab chukta karana hai to aaja.

Main khada hua or apne talwar ko phir gayab kar diya, or hath se yuddh karne ke liye taiyar hua.

Un dono ne mujhe aage pichhe se gher liya or mujhe paar vaar karne lage, ek ne laat mari to wahi dusre ne mukka, Maine laat ka jawab laat se or mukke ka mukke se diya dono hi block.

Hamari ladai ghamasan hoti chali gai, kabhi main marta to kabhi wo, hum teeno hi ap ghayal ho rahe the, mera to takshak ki shakti ki wajah se ghav bhar jate the, kintu unke nahi,

Akhir shaitan ke bhakto ne apni shaitani chhal chal hi di, jab dekha ki aise nahi jeet sakte to mujhe par ab apni shaktiyon se vaar karne lage, ek ne apni kali tarango se mere dono hath or dono pair band diye, wahi dusre ne apnoi kaali tarango se mere gaye ko fande ki tarah fasa kar dabane laga.

Mujhe bahut hi jyada taklif ho rahi thi, Gale me fanda kasta jaa raha tha, tab maine apne takshak ki shakti ka istemal kar te hue apna roop badal kar bhediye me badal gaya, ek jhatke me mere hath chhot gaye, phir maine un dono ko pakad liya or ghuma kar zameen me de mara, or apne pairo se unke sar ko kuchal kuchal ke maar dala.

"wooooooohaaaaaaaaaaa" wooooohaaaaaa" Jaise hi meri dahad suni sabne to sab ghabra gaye, idhar udhar bhagne lage, maine dekha to miru or lio bhi ghayal ho gaye hain, mere rashte me jo bhi aata main apne hatho se chirta fadta aage badha, sabko khatam karne baad main jail ke paas gaya or jaise hi....

Wahi ramika abhi bhi senapati se lad rahi thi, wah jitna prayash karti sab vifal ho jata tha, usne phir se senapati par vayu shakti se bavandar banaya or senapati ko usme fasa diya.

Senapati:- Hahahahahaha maharani tumme kuchh bhi taqat nahi tu phir harogi, ek hi prahar baar baar karke tum mujhe hara nahi paogi hahahahha ye lo.

usne socha iss baar bhi wah pani ki shakti se bavandar ko vifal kar dega, lekin iss baar ramika ne bavandar me hawa ke sath vidhyut ki shakti se bijli bhi samil kar diya, jaise hi senpati ne pani ki shakti ka istemal kiya usko bahut jor ka jhatka laga or bilji uske upar geerne se wah jaal kar maar gaya.

Aaj ke liye itna hi.

Thank you.
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aage ka intjaar
 

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बहुत ही बढ़िया मित्र ।मज़ेदार अपडेट था ।
 

Tiwari_baba

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#UPDATE 59

Mujhse pahle hii prince or prity aa chuke the, or wo dono bhi wahi baithe the, jab main andar gaya to unko dekh ke khush hua.

jab mine jaa ke unke pichhe khada hua to wo dono mujhe hi yaad kar rahe the, isliye main unke samne achanak aa gaya. mujhe dekh ke wo dono shok ho gaye.

Ab Aage....................

Paince/prity:- Bhaaaaaiiiiiiii......

Main:- Hahahahhaha kya hua aise kyo chilla rahe ho dono.

Prity:- Bhai aap bahut gande ho, kitne din baad aa rahe ho, bole the 2-3 din me aa jaoge.

Main:- Han to kya hua aa to gaya naa a, 2-3 din se kuchh din jyada ho gaya hai sorry.

Prince:- KYa kuchh din bhai aap jhuth bol rahe ... aap pure ek mahine baad aa rahe ho,

Main:- Kyaaa?
(Man me) Ye kya bol rahe hain ye sab main ek mahine baad aa raha hun, mujhe itna din lag gaya kya lekin main to 5-6 din pahle hi gaya tha.

Prity:- Kya hua bhaiya, kya spchne lage, aap thik to hain.

Main:- Han main bilkul thik hun gudiya, waise aaj tareekh kitni hai.

Prince:- aapko hu akya hai bhaiya, aaj 20 hai aapko gaye pure 1 mahina ho gaya.

prity:- Waise bhaiii aap gaye kahan the??

Main:- Wo kahi nahi wo chhodo mujhe bahut bhuk lagi hai, prince jao mera nashta le aao. tumko bhi lena ho to le lena.

wo gaya or oreder de aaya, phir hamari baate hone lagi, mujhe bahut hi tez bhuk lagi thi, jaise hi nashta aaya main uspe toot pada, bahut dino se sahi se khaya nahi tha bhai.

Mujhe aise khate dekh prince or prity mera muh dekhne lage, jabki main bas khane me hi laga hua tha, tabhi waha chandani or uske dost aa gaye.

" are ye kya ho raha hai, ye koun hai" tabhi maine upar dekha, us time mere muh me parathe ka niwala tha, upar dekha to main bhi chauk gaya or sab bhi.

Rekha:- are ye aap kaise kha rahe ho janab, thoda dheere khao.

Main:- hichh hichhh hichhhh pa... pani

pani nahi tha waha maine doodh utha ke pi liya, phir jake aaram mila.

Prity:- bhaii aap thik hain, aaram se khaiye aap aise kaise kha rahe ho?

Main:- wo... wo,, wo kshama karna prity mujhe naa bahut zor ki bhuk lagi thi isliye dhayan hi nahi raha, do dino se sahi se kuchh khaya nahi tha, prince jaa do or parathe la.

Wo phir gaya or bol ke aaya, baki sab mujhe muh fade dekh rahe the, jaise pata naa kya dekh liya ho.

sunanda:- Dekho to akele akele khaye jaa rahe hai hame to koi puchh hi nahi raha hai.

Chandani:- ye kya bakwas kar rahi ho tum, tumko khana hai to jao lekar ao.

Main:- Wo maaf karana doston bolo kya khaoge, jaa kar le aao.

rekha:- nahi uski koi jarurat nahi hai aap khao janab lekin dheere khao hahahahaha.

Chandani:- Waise aap gaye kahan the shekhar, aise itne dino tak shool chhodna achhi baat to nahi.

Main:- han janta hun, maaf karna mujhe pradhanacharya se milna hai baad me milta hun claass me.

Aisa kah ke main wahan se chala gaya, main un sab ki baato ka jawab nahi dena chahta tha, deta bhi to kya?

Mare ko jate hue dono group ne dekh liya ki main phir aa gaya hun, rohan ke group ne to chup chap jana hi thik samjha, unlogo ne pichhli baar ke ladai ke baad koi harqat nahi kiya tha.

Lekin karan nahi mana tha wo aaj bhi un sab ke paas chala gaya. Jise sunanda ne dekh liya aata hua.

Sunanda:- Lo ye phir aa gaya, isko problem kya hai.

Karan ne ye sab sun liya tha lekin kaha kuchh nahi, bas mushkura ke waha aa gaya, jabki sunanda ki baat sun sab ne uss taraf dekha, prince/ prity ne jab dekha to wo dono waha se jane lage.

Karan:- Sun be chashmis to tera wo pandit wapas aa gaya, kah dina usko chandani se door rahe nahi to usko bahut mahanga padega samjha, chal jaa yaha se.

wo dono ne kuchh nahi kaha chup chap chale gaye, or karan waha baith gaya.

Rekha:- Ye sab kya bakwas kar rahe the tum, samajh me aata hai yaa nahi.

Karan:- ye chup kar jaa, tujhse kuchh bola kya maine, Chandani tum mere sath ek cofee piyogi.

Chandani:- Main tumhare sath kyo coffee pine jau, mere se door raho samjhe tum.

Karan:- okay too coffee maat piyo, lekin mera ek baat mano lo ki uss pandit se door raho, nahi tooooo...

Sunanda:- Nahi to kya kar lega tu, dhamki kise de raha hai, didi ye bahut bol raha hai aap kuchh kahti kyo nahi, papa se bol kar complent karna padega.

karan:- haahahahahaaha. (Wo hasta hua wahan se uth ke apni ungli sunanda ki taraf point karta hua wahan se chala gaya.

Chandani:- Tujhe kya jarurat thi bhich me bolne ki. tujhe samajh nahi aata wo kitna khatarnak hai.

Sunanda:- han to kya hum usse darr jaye, Usne aapse aise baat kyo kiya, main papa se bolungi iske bare me.

Chandani:- Phir wahi chal chhod chalo yaha se, uske baare me socho maat.

Phir ye sab bhi claass me chali jati hain, main pradhan acharya ke kaksh ke pas pahuch gaya tha,

Main:- Kya main andar aa sakta hun acharya.

P Acharya:- Aa jao. .... Main andar aa gaya.

Main:- pranam acharya, kaise hain aap.

Acharya:- Ohh chandra, aao aao baitho, Bahut din baad dikhe ho kahan chale gaye the?

Main:- Acharya aapko to pata hi hai, mujhe ek pushtak ki talash thi usi ke liye gaya hua tha.

Acharya:- hmmm to phir kya tumko wo pushtak mili yaaa nahi?

Main:- han acharya wo pushtak mil gai hai.

Acarya:- Are ye to bahut hi achhi baat hai, lekin itna samay kaise lag gaya.

Main:- Wo acharya mujhe to aisa hi laga tha ki mujhe 5-7 din hue hain kitnu sabhi kah rahe ki 1 mahina beet gaya hai, par kaise samajh nahi aa raha.

Acharya:- Ohh aisa hai to yaha ke samay or jaha tum gaye the uss jagah se samay me antar hoga, isliye tumko samay ka dhyan nahi raha.

Main:- Shayad yahi karaan ho sakta hai acharya.

Acharya:- Kya main bhi wo pushtak dekha sakta hun, agar tum chaho to.

main:- aisa kyo kahte hain acharya, awashya aap dekh sakte hain.

Main khada hua or hath jod ankhe bandh karke prashtuti ko yaad kiya or usko adesh diya ki hamare samne pragat ho, kuchh hi der me waha charo taraf prakash fail gaya, acharya ne apni ankhe band kar li.

Main:- Acharya aapni ankhe kholiye dekhiye.

Jaise hi acharya ne apni ankhe kholi to usnke samne hawa me prashtuti thi jiska sunahra rang abhi tak chamak raha tha, acharya ne usko pranam kiya or phir prashtuti gayab ho mujhme sama gai.

Acharya:- Ye to adbhut hai chandra beta wakai tumne aambhav kaam sambhav kar diya hai, main bahut prasanna hun.

Main:- Ye to sab aapka ashirwad hai acharya, ab main chalta hun, claass shuru ho gai hogi.

Acharya:- Han han tum jao.

Main waha se nikal ke apni Kaksha ki taraf bhagte hue jaa raha tha ki main.....

Aaj ke liye itna hi.

Thank you.
 

Last benchers

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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai..
Chandra college aagya ..
Karan ke liye kahu ..ek khawat hai binaskale biprit buddi. Yahi Hal Karan ka hai..
Chandni lgta hai apni hero ki herohin hone wali hai ...
 
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